MiddleIsland - Magnetic Shift · forum

Aka

Joined January 2012

Aka 2014-03-03T00:47:47+00:00

ohai pppppppssssssssst

leaving only easy bcz im lazy (:3[______]

capnit'

・i don't really feel like whistles are placed ~kinda naturally or smth like that at the beginning till 00:15:762 - this part. somehow to emphasise a higher piano sounds what about to add whistles there:
00:01:944 (2) - on the beginning
00:02:853 (3) -
00:08:671 (3) -
00:09:944 (1) - and from here is maybe better to remove, a kind of low piano sound, kinda bassss m?
00:14:489 (3) - on the beginning, the sound itself is high and empasized from the melody.. aaah
・00:01:944 (2) - , 00:13:580 (2) - ,01:30:671 (2) - , 01:42:308 (2) - its not like i dont like the shape of these sliders as well as they are perfectly emphasizin a little changing in the melody or how to call this.. I JUST FEEL THAT IT DAMN PERFECTLY SUITS but still.. i dont want to say that it would be hard for beginners and blah blah etc as i am not a beginner myself but look, more than 1/2 of the slider end is placed on a slider's body, who knows if a player would stop holding a ball here because a ball is visually almost at the end? rolf sure it's up to u but maybe indeed better to change the shape or change a bit the ending in a..mmaybe this way like this 00:07:762 (2) - slider ? orz
・00:17:580 (1) - try there a normal sampleset clap, hard beat here, soft whistle is just not suits imo owo
・00:47:035 (2) - whistles on the reverse as well would suit :оо
・00:58:308 (1) - clap
00:28:853 (1) - clap on the reverse lol
00:35:035 (2) - ^
00:40:489 (1) -
・00:46:308 (1) - whistle on the beginning to emphasize the high piano sound~
・00:58:308 (1) - claaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaap again. also yea, why you have no claps on this sound? there you have a hitsound which is perfectly suits to this sound o.o
01:04:126 (5) -
01:12:489 (1) - on the ending
01:15:762 (2) -
・01:31:580 (3) - what about swap whistles there? same as on the beginning part of the song
01:37:399 (3) -
01:43:217 (3) -
and till that part i mentioned on the beginning of the song ovo

love these curve sliders ( /)*^*(\ )

ww also NO KDS BECAUSE I AM LAZY TO MOD REST OF DIFFS OK <3<3<3

/me leaves

UnitedWeSin

889 posts

Joined July 2012

UnitedWeSin 2014-03-03T06:22:58+00:00

rEdo

rEdo wrote:
[UWS's Insane]
00:07:762 (4) - I'd use a new combo here.
Since it's still the same piano verse, I'd like to leave it as is.

00:18:217 (1) - On the other hand, it doesn't seem necessary here.
This one I'd like to keep since it's a new sound in the music. I feel it makes it more natural.

00:28:308 (1) - ^
01:46:944 (1) - ^
Again I feel it's better with these NC's since there is a new sound introduced that these objects are following.

02:10:671 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This doesn't really follow the song, looks like self-made rhythm. There's nothing wrong with it, though, just kinda irked me.
Well the piano is unmappable here. The 1 is extended to represent the piano hold and then the rest is percussion. I didn't see a better option.

Nothing I could complain about on this difficulty. Splendid map with great hitsounding.
Thanks! \:D/

Thanks for modding!

apaffy wrote:
Honestly, after playing the Insane and UWS's diff a couple more times, I think you should rename UWS's diff to UWS's Extra. It's more difficult in aim than the Insane, and given the higher OD a bit harder to acc as well (even though there aren't that many streams).

Doesn't really matter to me. I'll leave it up to Natsu. Personally I find Natsu's diff to be more difficult. /runs But yea your idea is probably better.

captin1

osu! Alumni

2,595 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2014-03-03T07:21:24+00:00

-Bakari- wrote:
Yo.

[captin's Easy]
I recommend you to reduce OD by one tick. Your rhythm is quite difficult for beginners (3/2 are really hard for them). hmmm since natsu didn't change his i'll keep mine for the sake of spread, od2 really is quite low anyways
00:01:944 (2) - if it's possible try to make shapes of the sliders a bit softer. The sudden change of slider's direction may confuse beginners + it doesn't look neat and readable.
Note: same happens with some sliders, so if you agree - fix 'em all! :( oh i guess
02:22:671 (5) and 02:27:035 (2) - maybe you should replace the repeat with a circle. like this. - it sounds much better to me + it'll make your patterns more consistent hmmm I think i like how i have it better, just for the short break in clicks it gives

Pretty nice diff, interesting sliders.
Brilliant mapset! Star! ~
eeezzzeee wrote:
Hi, from modding queue.

captain's EASY don't spell my name wrong ;;
SPOILER
New Combo Changes
01:21:217 (1) - remove new combo
01:22:671 (3) - add new combo
01:24:126 (1) - remove new combo
01:25:580 (4) - add new combo
01:27:035 (3) - remove new combo
01:27:399 (1) - add new combo
02:19:399 (4) - add new combo
02:22:308 (4) - add new combo
02:25:217 (4) - new combo new comboing is all fine as is

Hitsound Changes
00:28:126 (3) - add whistle no thanks
00:31:762 (1) - add whistle 1st hit of slider
00:36:489 (1) - change to soft sampleset this sounds nice as normal though, so actually changed the rest of them like this to normal lol
00:40:489 (1) - add whistle 3rd hit of slider
00:46:308 (1) - add whistle 1st hit of slider
00:59:399 (3) - remove whistle 2nd hit of slider
01:00:853 (1) - add whistle 1st & 3rd hit of slider
01:04:126 (5) - add whistle 1st hit, remove whistle 2nd hit
01:05:217 (1) - remove whistle
01:05:580 (2) - add whistle 1st & 2nd hit of slider did normal claps instead
01:42:308 (2) - remove whistle 1st hit of slider why? it's consistent
01:55:399 (2) - add whistle 1st hit of slider
02:09:580 (1) - remove whistle
02:09:944 (2) - add whistle 1st hit of slider
02:11:035 (3) - remove whistle 1st hit, add whistle 2nd hit hmm no thanks
02:28:126 (3,4,5,6) - I think the custom hitsounds can be replaced with normal sampleset I think they sound alright

Very well done mapset + awesome satori-sama background!
Best of luck to you!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

Aka wrote:
ohai pppppppssssssssst

leaving only easy bcz im lazy (:3[______]

capnit' wow this is a new one

・i don't really feel like whistles are placed ~kinda naturally or smth like that at the beginning till 00:15:762 - this part. somehow to emphasise a higher piano sounds what about to add whistles there:
00:01:944 (2) - on the beginning
00:02:853 (3) -
00:08:671 (3) -
00:09:944 (1) - and from here is maybe better to remove, a kind of low piano sound, kinda bassss m?
00:14:489 (3) - on the beginning, the sound itself is high and empasized from the melody.. aaah
・00:01:944 (2) - , 00:13:580 (2) - ,01:30:671 (2) - , 01:42:308 (2) - its not like i dont like the shape of these sliders as well as they are perfectly emphasizin a little changing in the melody or how to call this.. I JUST FEEL THAT IT DAMN PERFECTLY SUITS but still.. i dont want to say that it would be hard for beginners and blah blah etc as i am not a beginner myself but look, more than 1/2 of the slider end is placed on a slider's body, who knows if a player would stop holding a ball here because a ball is visually almost at the end? rolf sure it's up to u but maybe indeed better to change the shape or change a bit the ending in a..mmaybe this way like this 00:07:762 (2) - slider ? orz they're changed :<
・00:17:580 (1) - try there a normal sampleset clap, hard beat here, soft whistle is just not suits imo owo eh, just added finishes instead hue
・00:47:035 (2) - whistles on the reverse as well would suit :оо
・00:58:308 (1) - clap
00:28:853 (1) - clap on the reverse lol
00:35:035 (2) - ^
00:40:489 (1) -
・00:46:308 (1) - whistle on the beginning to emphasize the high piano sound~
・00:58:308 (1) - claaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaap again. also yea, why you have no claps on this sound? there you have a hitsound which is perfectly suits to this sound o.o
01:04:126 (5) -
01:12:489 (1) - on the ending
01:15:762 (2) -
・01:31:580 (3) - what about swap whistles there? same as on the beginning part of the song
01:37:399 (3) -
01:43:217 (3) - basically all of these done
and till that part i mentioned on the beginning of the song ovo

love these curve sliders ( /)*^*(\ )

ww also NO KDS BECAUSE I AM LAZY TO MOD REST OF DIFFS OK <3<3<3

/me leaves

lesson of the day: hitsound copier is a double edged sword

thanks!

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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kisata

521 posts

Joined September 2012

kisata 2014-03-04T07:54:26+00:00

mods

-Bakari- wrote:
[apaffy's Hard]
Why don't you try to use HP Drain 6? I feel like it plays much better and it really makes the diff more challenging, which is awesome for a Hard diff! Come on, try it! b-but it is hp6 ;w;
00:06:671 (4) - I'd recommend you to use something like this to emphasize the music. It actually plays much better than the slider. Second=reverse arrow is really unexpected and hard to notice and I feel uncomfortable playing it.
Note: same applies for every similar slider. the biggest problem i have is that there are already two 1/4 sliders preceding this and i worry the spacing there would make it too confusing to read, no change sorry orz

Everything is fine but I'm unsure about 02:17:580 (9,10,11,12,1) - patterns like this one. They may be a bit too hard, triplets are fine, but this.. There're two Insane diffs, so this diff should be a bit easier than average Hard diff, I think. i'm confused now, you wanted hp6 because it's harder but now a 5 note stack is too difficult? personally, i think it fits in fine with the difficulty set

eeezzzeee wrote:
apaffy's HARD
No Kiai Time!
This can be rather difficult at times, might be a bit over-mapped for a hard (rapid 1/4 sliders + 5 note streams) again, i feel it fits in with the difficult set ;w;

Note Changes
00:36:671 (3,4,5) - The 1/4 slider makes this section difficult. I suggest replacing with a circle at 00:37:035 people have been complaining about this forever, sure why not
00:48:671 (7) - replace with a circle this already is a circle ;w;
01:00:126 (7) - change slider to 3 hits (ends at 01:00:308) this was already changed in a previous version
01:06:035 (8) - replace with circle sure why not
01:17:671 (7) - replace with circle did the same
01:30:853 (4) - change reverse slider to 1/4 slider (ends at 01:30:944) preceding 1/4 slider became a note instead
01:42:308 (3,4) - change both of these to 1/4 sliders for consistency with the rest of the song that wouldn't be consistent at all
01:57:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part seems to be tough, consider reworking i think it's fine
01:59:762 (3) - change slider to 3 hits (ends at 01:59:944) this got fixed somewhere else i think but yeah ;w;
02:04:853 (1) - change slider to 3 hits (ends at 02:05:035) no sure why not
02:05:217 (2) - replace with two circles on 02:05:217 and 02:05:399 no
02:05:580 (3) - change slider to 3 hits (ends at 02:05:762) sure

Hitsound Changes
Once again, I suggested a lot of changes to notes so just some general feedback
Imo the custom hitsounds used in this song is too strong, doesn't fit with the song, I like the soft sampleset better fits fine for me, as such no change
00:05:580 (1,2,3,4) - change to soft sampleset
00:11:399 (1,2,3,4) - soft sampleset
01:34:308 (1,2,3,4) - soft sampleset
01:40:126 (5,6,7,8) - soft sampleset[/spoilerbox]

thanks for mods~!

http://puu.sh/7irEy.osu

Erina

114 posts

Joined August 2012

Erina 2014-03-04T18:59:40+00:00

From my mod for voice queue! Sorry for how late this is

Nice map, everything I list below are just suggestions (like with every single mod I've done because I keep modding maps that are already good)

[UWS's Insane]

General: I feel as if there are a lot of new combo's that aren't necessary. But, if this is your style, I wouldn't change it.

00:58:853 (6) - Consider moving down to overlap the start of this slider with 00:57:580 (6)
01:00:489 (5) - Consider ctrl+g
01:06:308 (1) - Consider removing NC

[Insane]
00:27:944 (3,4) - Move these notes down a bit, I think it looks better (x:192 y:312 and x:108 y:256)
00:45:944 (1) - Consider removing NC
01:30:671 (3) - Consider adding NC for consistency with 00:01:944 (1)
01:32:126 (3) - ^

[apaffy's Hard]
00:02:671 (1) - Consider changing to triplet
00:03:035 (2) - I feel like this note doesn't belong

00:59:399 (5) - Maybe stack with the beginning of this slider 00:57:944 (1)
02:32:126 (4) - Consider NC here

[Normal]
I like the map,~~but it might be too hard for a normal~~ I guess it's fine, the first half felt too hard for a normal in my opinion because of all the repeat sliders though hehe

00:42:489 (4) - Maybe extend its length to the next white tick
00:57:217 (2) - There are several repeat sliders like this one that I think would be better if repeated twice rather than once, but that might make the map too hard for a normal

01:05:217 (1) - Remove NC
01:06:671 (2) - If you followed ^, add NC

[captin's Easy]
~~oh no another captin map~~

01:09:762 (1) - Feels weird on a red tick, maybe change into a slider (start at same position (red tick), end at next white tick)
02:08:489 (4) - This doesn't seem to fit in with the rhythm

Nice song and nice map! Contact me later about what you're going to sing hehe

Tari

osu! Alumni

1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Tari 2014-03-04T20:52:43+00:00

Maybe i will mod it when i am not so busy :>

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Natsu 2014-03-04T21:47:01+00:00

Erina wrote:
From my mod for voice queue! Sorry for how late this is

[Insane]
00:27:944 (3,4) - Move these notes down a bit, I think it looks better (x:192 y:312 and x:108 y:256) just moved (3)
00:45:944 (1) - Consider removing NC
01:30:671 (3) - Consider adding NC for consistency with 00:01:944 (1)
01:32:126 (3) - ^
all done ^

[Normal]
I like the map,~~but it might be too hard for a normal~~ I guess it's fine, the first half felt too hard for a normal in my opinion because of all the repeat sliders though hehe It's ok for a normal

00:42:489 (4) - Maybe extend its length to the next white tick folowing piano sowwy
00:57:217 (2) - There are several repeat sliders like this one that I think would be better if repeated twice rather than once, but that might make the map too hard for a normal yeah also 1 repeat fit the music better imo
01:05:217 (1) - Remove NC no this will broke my consistency
01:06:671 (2) - If you followed ^, add NC ^

Nice song and nice map! Contact me later about what you're going to sing hehe im scared QQ

thanks for mod :3

Tari wrote:
Maybe i will mod it when i am not so busy :>

yes pls

kisata

521 posts

Joined September 2012

kisata 2014-03-04T22:08:07+00:00

Erina wrote:
[apaffy's Hard]
00:02:671 (1) - Consider changing to triplet wouldn't really fit with the music
00:03:035 (2) - I feel like this note doesn't belong it's a little hard to hear but there's a piano note/pitch shift in the background that's mapped to
00:59:399 (5) - Maybe stack with the beginning of this slider 00:57:944 (1) sure, why not
02:32:126 (4) - Consider NC here b-but that already is a NC

thanks for mod~!

http://puu.sh/7j8wN.osu

captin1

osu! Alumni

2,595 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2014-03-04T22:49:01+00:00

Erina wrote:
From my mod for voice queue! Sorry for how late this is

[captin's Easy]
~~oh no another captin map~~ ~~oh no another erina mod~~

01:09:762 (1) - Feels weird on a red tick, maybe change into a slider (start at same position (red tick), end at next white tick) hmmm not too sure, don't think a 1/2 slider would be fitting in an easy
02:08:489 (4) - This doesn't seem to fit in with the rhythm it does though, eh

Nice song and nice map! Contact me later about what you're going to sing hehe

didn't take anything from your mod but fixed a couple things myself, thanks for checking though!

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Kyubey

osu! Alumni

3,097 posts

Joined December 2012

Kyubey 2014-03-05T07:15:21+00:00

Mod due my m4m req, my map -> http://osu.ppy.sh/s/151445.
[captin's Easy]
00:01:944 (2) - this blanket looks bad for me, too sharp, try to make it smoother
00:25:944 (1,2) - how about blanket like this?

SPOILER

01:11:035 (3) - maybe change one point to red like this?

SPOILER

01:27:035 (1,2,3) - maybe triangle like this?

SPOILER

02:15:399 (1) - make it smoother pls
[Normal]
00:38:308 (2,3,4) - this looks hard for normal i think
01:07:399 (3,1,2,3) - isn't it too hard?
[apaffy's Hard]
00:37:035 (4,5,1) - you can a perfect triangle here
01:47:035 (4,1) - make blanket better
01:58:551 (5,1) - and here too
02:13:944 (5,6,7) - triangle isn't perfect
[UWS's Insane]
Maybe rename to UWS' Insane? Isn't it right in english? Or better too UWS' Extra.
00:07:217 (1) - there's no bit in music
00:13:035 (1) - there's too
you can say "nah, who cares about 2 notes" but for me it's playing strange
02:07:035 (3,4) - this overlap doesn't looks good
[Insane]
00:31:399 (8,9) - this reads bad, try to separate it, like this

SPOILER

00:32:671 (8,2) - delete NCs, because 00:32:671 (8,1) - can confuse, people can think it's 1/4 jump
01:42:489 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - try to make blanket sharper
02:29:944 (1,2,1,2) - are you sure with normal hits? i think, soft sampleset+normal additions will be better

Good luck with rank! ☆ミ＼(^ω^＼)

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Natsu 2014-03-05T21:20:07+00:00

Kyubey wrote:
Mod due my m4m req, my map -> http://osu.ppy.sh/s/151445.

[Normal]
00:38:308 (2,3,4) - this looks hard for normal i think It play fine for a normal IMO, also there is a easy and I don't find a better way to represent this part orz
01:07:399 (3,1,2,3) - isn't it too hard? ^

[Insane]
00:31:399 (8,9) - this reads bad, try to separate it, like this
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mmm keeped for now due to some stacks there D:
00:32:671 (8,2) - delete NCs, because 00:32:671 (8,1) - can confuse, people can think it's 1/4 jump sure
01:42:489 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - try to make blanket sharper k
02:29:944 (1,2,1,2) - are you sure with normal hits? i think, soft sampleset+normal additions will be better let me get more opinions about this

Good luck with rank! ☆ミ＼(^ω^＼)

thanks for mod

captin1

osu! Alumni

2,595 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2014-03-06T03:36:18+00:00

nice, everything done

thanks!

SPOILER

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Artist:MiddleIsland
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Creator:Natsu
Version:captin's Easy
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Tags:captin1 UnitedWeSin apaffy Nakajima misaki 弦奏無彩色
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Chewin

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Chewin 2014-03-06T19:33:47+00:00

General

Is the kiai in the easy diff really needed? You didn't use it on other diffs. I suggest you to remove it even if it's a guest.

Easy

00:34:671 (1,2) - 2 claps here would fit nicely
00:47:035 (2) - Add whistles on head and reverse arrow to emphasize the piano sound
01:30:671 (2) - Whistle on the tail. It emphasizes the piano sound that's similar to the sound you can hear on this slider's head and next one's. Same is for 01:42:308 (2)
02:32:853 (1) - You could start this spinner 1/2 earlier. Much better IMO.

Normal

00:01:580 (2,3,4) - I really don't like how you used hitsounds here lol. I suggest you to use whistles only on: 00:01:580 (2)'s head and tail, 00:02:126 (3)'s tail and on 00:02:671 (4)'s tail as well. About these other 00:03:399 (6,1) two I would add it on (6)'s tail removing it from (1) instead
00:08:489 (3) - Remove whistle on the head and add it on the tail. I guess you got why i'm suggesting you to apply all these changes. This is a classic song. You should use hitsounds to fill better the piano melody. Same for 00:14:308 (3). I won't mention other whistles hitsounds. I think you can fix them by yourself or this mod won't finish anymore lol
00:47:035 (2) - What about to curve less this slider's body? I think that it breaks the flow actually. You could curve it in this way: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1393392
01:05:035 (6,1) - This new combo stack is bad. Remove it from (6) and add it on the actual (1) instead.
01:09:217 (3) - Whistle on the tail (still for the same reason)
01:15:035 (3,4,5) - I don't like how this pattern flow. What about to change the two circles with 1/2 slider? Obviously you need to fix next elements too. This is what I mean: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1393401
01:33:580 (3) - I don't see a reason to place that finish on this slider's head. I can't hear clash in the cymbals in the music.
02:16:489 (4) - New combo? You are using new hitsounds here and new melody section is starting here.

Hard

00:03:035 (2,3) - Why this bad inconsistent spacing? I suggest you something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1393413
01:47:944 (2) - x: 224 y:96 to get a consistent spacing
01:56:126 (5,6,7,8) - Nop.. this is just confusing. The white tick has more necessity to be mapped (keeping consistency with the others parts you mapped. Always mapped that tick and didn't care of the sound on the blue one). According to this you have to use this rhythm, instead. More enjoyable to hear and play: http://puu.sh/7lhiM.jpg
02:31:762 (3) - If you listen the music you can notice the stream should start here. What about chanjing the rhythm with this other one? http://puu.sh/7lhrK.jpg
02:32:580 (1) - Ehm.. silence this spinner's end

UWS's Insane

00:03:399 (2,3) - How you placed this sliders it looks that the (2) has just a repeat and not two. I think this pattern could confuse players a lot. What about instead to reduce the first slider by removing a repeat and adding a circle on the empty blue tick? I mean: http://puu.sh/7lhEr.jpg You really have to fix this because if you notice the spacing between 00:03:762 (4,5) that it's still 1/4 is very different from the huge one between 00:03:399 (2,3).
00:11:762 (2,3,4) - lol I like this
00:38:580 (4,5) - Move this pattern some grid down to blanket it with the same spacing of the previous one: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1393450
01:47:399 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - wow looks awesome moving the mouse in the editor :3 Nice flowing jumps
01:56:853 (1,2) and 01:59:762 (1,2) - Same of 00:03:399 (2,3)

Insane

02:11:762 (7,8,9,10) - Why normal sampleset here? You didn't use it on the other parts like 02:14:489 (5,6,7) for example

That's it. Good luck with it Natsu (:

kisata

521 posts

Joined September 2012

kisata 2014-03-06T20:26:32+00:00

Kyubey wrote:
[apaffy's Hard]
00:37:035 (4,5,1) - you can a perfect triangle here sure
01:47:035 (4,1) - make blanket better ok
01:58:551 (5,1) - and here too redesigning this part entirely
02:13:944 (5,6,7) - triangle isn't perfect edited

Chewin wrote:
Hard

00:03:035 (2,3) - Why this bad inconsistent spacing? I suggest you something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1393413 oky
01:47:944 (2) - x: 224 y:96 to get a consistent spacing i moved some thing in here and now it is
01:56:126 (5,6,7,8) - Nop.. this is just confusing. The white tick has more necessity to be mapped (keeping consistency with the others parts you mapped. Always mapped that tick and didn't care of the sound on the blue one). According to this you have to use this rhythm, instead. More enjoyable to hear and play: http://puu.sh/7lhiM.jpg okay, so what I did was change it now so everything was on a white tick, however 01:57:217 - became a triplet instead because i remapped the 1/3 part after that to be only repeat sliders (easier to get the rhythm/play properly) and I didn't want a stream of continuous repeat sliders; it keeps the rhythm consistent even if breaking with other conventions of the map slightly - in short this is the best way I feel I can map this without needlessly remapping the entire section
02:31:762 (3) - If you listen the music you can notice the stream should start here. What about chanjing the rhythm with this other one? http://puu.sh/7lhrK.jpgi see what you mean, but a 9 note stream would just be a bit too difficult i think, no other stream in the diff is longer than five notes and while i think the hard is somewhat above-average in terms of difficulty i think this would just be way too much; there's a slight pitch change at 02:31:944 - which the slider catches and the five note stream finishes it off okay - in short i see where you're coming from but as it is now it's not too confusing but does an adequate job catching the rhythm cues and as such no change orz
02:32:580 (1) - Ehm.. silence this spinner's end ok

thanks for mods~!

edit: okay some hitsounds got messed up, here they are fixed

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Last edited by kisata 2014-03-07T02:23:09+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Natsu 2014-03-06T21:07:38+00:00

Chewin wrote:
General

Is the kiai in the easy diff really needed? You didn't use it on other diffs. I suggest you to remove it even if it's a guest. I'll talk with him about it

Normal

00:01:580 (2,3,4) - I really don't like how you used hitsounds here lol. I suggest you to use whistles only on: 00:01:580 (2)'s head and tail, 00:02:126 (3)'s tail and on 00:02:671 (4)'s tail as well. About these other 00:03:399 (6,1) two I would add it on (6)'s tail removing it from (1) instead
00:08:489 (3) - Remove whistle on the head and add it on the tail. I guess you got why i'm suggesting you to apply all these changes. This is a classic song. You should use hitsounds to fill better the piano melody. Same for 00:14:308 (3). I won't mention other whistles hitsounds. I think you can fix them by yourself or this mod won't finish anymore lol yeah I was using first and third downbeat pattern for whistle, but you right male more sense follow the piano fixed in both diffs
00:47:035 (2) - What about to curve less this slider's body? I think that it breaks the flow actually. You could curve it in this way: surehttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1393392
01:05:035 (6,1) - This new combo stack is bad. Remove it from (6) and add it on the actual (1) instead. okay
01:09:217 (3) - Whistle on the tail (still for the same reason) k
01:15:035 (3,4,5) - I don't like how this pattern flow. What about to change the two circles with 1/2 slider? Obviously you need to fix next elements too. done but in a small different way This is what I mean: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1393401
01:33:580 (3) - I don't see a reason to place that finish on this slider's head. I can't hear clash in the cymbals in the music. ah, music hace a high pitch there, that's why I used soft finish for these place and my custom one for the crash
02:16:489 (4) - New combo? You are using new hitsounds here and new melody section is starting here. mmm okis
Insane

02:11:762 (7,8,9,10) - Why normal sampleset here? You didn't use it on the other parts like 02:14:489 (5,6,7) for example Fixed
That's it. Good luck with it Natsu (: thanks Chewin

Aka

1,777 posts

Joined January 2012

Aka 2014-03-07T00:14:46+00:00

Kyubey wrote:
Maybe rename to UWS' Insane? Isn't it right in english? Or better too UWS' Extra.

a few days ago i had a lesson in english exactly on this topic and both ' UWS' ' and ' UWS's ' are right btw k

captin1

osu! Alumni

2,595 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2014-03-07T02:05:02+00:00

Chewin wrote:
General

Is the kiai in the easy diff really needed? You didn't use it on other diffs. I suggest you to remove it even if it's a guest. rip kiai
Easy

00:34:671 (1,2) - 2 claps here would fit nicely okay
00:47:035 (2) - Add whistles on head and reverse arrow to emphasize the piano sound ah yeah
01:30:671 (2) - Whistle on the tail. It emphasizes the piano sound that's similar to the sound you can hear on this slider's head and next one's. Same is for 01:42:308 (2) and a lot of other places haha, like the beginning
02:32:853 (1) - You could start this spinner 1/2 earlier. Much better IMO. sure

That's it. Good luck with it Natsu (:

thanks!

wow natsu can you actually update my diff this time, seeing as you haven't for the past like three mods

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AllStar12

488 posts

Joined January 2013

AllStar12 2014-03-08T05:45:55+00:00

Hey, sorry for the late mod >< Forgive me! Orz
Note:
• Not sure if the changes I made actually affects the hitsounds, if it does then remember where you placed those hitsounds
• Update captin's Easy difficulty that was recently posted so the mod can be proceed as planned

[captin's Easy]

00:17:580 (4) - add whistle on head? I believe the whistle helps bring that part more deeply to emphasize it better.
01:46:308 (4) - add whistle on head?
00:14:489 (3) - Blanket this slider?
01:05:580 (2) - believe it's better to have it like this for better flow path when approaching to this slider and then the next slider.
Picture

Suggestions and Ideas

None

Test play for captin's Easy Difficulty
Result

[apaffy's Hard]

00:40:489 (2,3,4) - This part is missing hitsounds?
02:23:762 (1) - intentionally set the additions to auto or suppose to be set to soft for the tail?
02:36:671 - Set the last inherited point to Soft (Custom or not) so the hitnormal will sound better for the spinner right at the end

Suggestions and Ideas

None

Test play for apaffy's Hard Difficulty
Result
1st attempt:

2nd attempt:

[Insane]

00:02:216 (4) - Add whistle to empathize the piano key that is played in this part
00:03:671 (4) - Add whistle to empathize the piano key that is played in this part as well
00:08:034 (6) - ^
00:09:489 (4) - ^
00:15:308 (6) - ^
01:30:943 (4) - ^
01:32:398 (4) - ^
01:36:761 (6) - ^
01:38:216 (4) - ^
01:44:034 (6) - ^
02:09:580 (2) - Add clap here?
02:11:762 (7) - Add clap
02:14:671 (7) - Add clap here to go along with the rhythm of the claps?
02:15:399 (2) - Add clap on the head to continue with the rhythm of the claps?
02:16:126 (4) - ^
00:03:217 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Set the distance snap for circle note two( red) to 1.30x for the previous and try having the stream rotated by a bit and have the circle note 7 be covered by the slider like this, before the stream didn't seem to lead into the circle note that good. This will repeat the way you had set up the distance snap like the other streams in the beginning.(The picture that I showed you could be better to.. :/)
Picture
02:13:580 (1) - Nazi here but was the slider's tail meant to completely overlap the circle note?

Suggestions and Ideas
00:07:035 (1) - have this slider curved like this to spice it up a bit?
Picture

00:07:762 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Made them curve bit better if you want, provided the code and picture of it:

Picture and Code

202,138,7762,1,2,0:0:0:0:
179,140,7852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,136,7943,1,0,0:0:0:0:
135,127,8034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,113,8125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
101,95,8216,1,0,0:0:0:0:
91,74,8308,1,2,0:0:0:0:

Starting at 02:18:671 (2) - I have an idea of a clap pattern but you can also have this part without clap at all if you like:
• 02:18:671 (2) - On the head
• 02:19:399 (1) -
• 02:20:126 (2) - On the head
• 02:20:853 (1) -
• 02:21:580 (2) - On the head
• 02:22:308 (1) -
• 02:23:035 (2) - On the head
Pretty sure you know where I'm going for at this point

Test play for Insane Difficulty
Result
1st attempt:

2nd attempt:

3rd attempt: I am bad hue

[UWS's Insane]

Sorry I can't find any thing that is a serious issue in my perspective and during the gameplay Orz

Suggestions and Ideas

None

Test play for UWS's Insane Difficulty
Result
1st attempt:

2nd attempt:

3rd attempt:

Comment: Sorry that I was a bit late on this and didn't touch much on the note placements on higher maps. I believe there weren't any serious issues in my point of view and should be handled by more experienced players. Overall, Definitely enjoyed playing the harder difficulties the mapset and hope for this to get ranked soon.

If you have any complaints, questions, comments, etc. or found any errors in my work, ✉ in-game or on the osu website!

(ﾉ´ヮ´)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧❀ Wish you best of luck!~ ❀

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Natsu 2014-03-08T06:36:36+00:00

AllStar12 wrote:
[Insane]
00:02:216 (4) - Add whistle to empathize the piano key that is played in this part nah the sound is not really different from the rest of the stream, also I don't like to spam hitsounds orz
00:03:671 (4) - Add whistle to empathize the piano key that is played in this part as well ^
00:08:034 (6) - ^ ^
00:09:489 (4) - ^ ^
00:15:308 (6) - ^ ^
01:30:943 (4) - ^ ^
01:32:398 (4) - ^ ^
01:36:761 (6) - ^ ^
01:38:216 (4) - ^ ^
01:44:034 (6) - ^ ^
02:09:580 (2) - Add clap here? okay
02:11:762 (7) - Add clap k
02:14:671 (7) - Add clap here to go along with the rhythm of the claps? but there is not clap sound in the music
02:15:399 (2) - Add clap on the head to continue with the rhythm of the claps? ^
02:16:126 (4) - ^ ^
00:03:217 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Set the distance snap for circle note two( red) to 1.30x for the previous and try having the stream rotated by a bit and have the circle note 7 be covered by the slider like this, before the stream didn't seem to lead into the circle note that good. This will repeat the way you had set up the distance snap like the other streams in the beginning.(The picture that I showed you could be better to.. :/) done but in different way
02:13:580 (1) - Nazi here but was the slider's tail meant to completely overlap the circle note? ok
Suggestions and Ideas
00:07:035 (1) - have this slider curved like this to spice it up a bit? nah straight slider represent the music better for me
00:07:762 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Made them curve bit better if you want, provided the code and picture of it: I move the slider instead
Starting at 02:18:671 (2) - I have an idea of a clap pattern but you can also have this part without clap at all if you like:
• 02:18:671 (2) - On the head but whistle sound better with the piano
• 02:19:399 (1) - ^
• 02:20:126 (2) - On the head ^
• 02:20:853 (1) - ^
• 02:21:580 (2) - On the head ^
• 02:22:308 (1) - ^
• 02:23:035 (2) - On the head ^
Pretty sure you know where I'm going for at this point
yeah, but I told in you in game, I prefer to keep only whistles in the end due to the piano :l

thans for mod

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 2014-03-08T20:53:06+00:00

Ello, mod from queue

2~ 3 minutes = 4 Diffs
[Insane]
00:10:671 (3) - Try using a drum finish on this sliders head. Sounds better imo.
02:12:853 (4,5) - Looks a bit crowded here, so try moving them more apart (Unless you still want to use DS here?)
02:26:308 (3) - New rhythm suggestion:

Because this slider seems to overrun the piano notes at 02:26:399 and 02:26:444.

[apaffy's Hard]
00:17:217 (1,4) - Try to model these sliders so that 00:18:126 (4) - 's head is see-able.

Will this do?

284,120,17217,6,0,P|332:164|430:136,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,104,17762,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,20,17944,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,80,18126,2,0,P|368:136|332:224,1,150

01:06:671 (5) - NC instead of 01:06:308 (1) -
01:12:489 (5) - NC instead of 01:12:126 (1) -
01:54:671 (1,2) - Fix overlap please.
02:13:126 (3,4) - ^
02:20:853 (1) - move a little more to the left so that it doesn't look too close to 02:20:489 (3) - .

[Normal]
00:10:671 (3) - Try using a drum finish on the head?
00:36:126 (3) - Use a whistle on the head, instead of a clap. There's no cymbal crash heard in this part of the music.
00:39:762 (4) - Sonuds a bit off. Try this rhythm suggestion:

I'm guessing that you didn't want to make the slider run to 00:40:308, because then you'd have to attach 00:40:489 (1) - to it, and that spot already looks overused (?)
00:57:217 (2) - ^Same suggestion as above.
01:13:944 (1) - Change finish to whistle. No cymbal crash heard here.
01:33:580 (3) - ^ On the head. It kind of spoils the surprise 'crash' on 01:34:308 (4) - 's head.
01:39:399 (3) - ^ On the head.
01:45:216 (3) - ^ On the head.

[captin's Easy]
00:53:944 (2) - Move a little more to the left, so it makes the flow look straight. Right now, it looks sort of jagged.
01:13:217 (2) - Consider modeling the last few anchor points of this slider so it isn't touching 01:11:035 (3) - .

Nice mapset. Good luck!

kisata

521 posts

Joined September 2012

kisata 2014-03-09T01:52:28+00:00

AllStar12 wrote:
[apaffy's Hard]
00:40:489 (2,3,4) - This part is missing hitsounds? oops
02:23:762 (1) - intentionally set the additions to auto or suppose to be set to soft for the tail? yes, that is intentional
02:36:671 - Set the last inherited point to Soft (Custom or not) so the hitnormal will sound better for the spinner right at the end o, yeah meant to do that fixed

10crystalmask01 wrote:
[apaffy's Hard]
00:17:217 (1,4) - Try to model these sliders so that 00:18:126 (4) - 's head is see-able. oooo, yeah I like this better
Will this do?
284,120,17217,6,0,P|332:164|430:136,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,104,17762,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,20,17944,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,80,18126,2,0,P|368:136|332:224,1,150
01:06:671 (5) - NC instead of 01:06:308 (1) - i liked both of these the way the were originally, but aren't people going to yell at me for a 12 note combo in a hard orz
01:12:489 (5) - NC instead of 01:12:126 (1) - changed per above
01:54:671 (1,2) - Fix overlap please. no, both are intentional
02:13:126 (3,4) - ^
02:20:853 (1) - move a little more to the left so that it doesn't look too close to 02:20:489 (3) - no it's fine

thanks for mods~!

code

osu file format v12

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captin1

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captin1 2014-03-11T03:07:21+00:00

AllStar12 wrote:
Hey, sorry for the late mod >< Forgive me! Orz
Note:
• Not sure if the changes I made actually affects the hitsounds, if it does then remember where you placed those hitsounds
• Update captin's Easy difficulty that was recently posted so the mod can be proceed as planned

[captin's Easy]
00:17:580 (4) - add whistle on head? I believe the whistle helps bring that part more deeply to emphasize it better. mm no thanks, i'd like the emphasis to be on the beat after
01:46:308 (4) - add whistle on head? ^
00:14:489 (3) - Blanket this slider? doesn't really have anything good to blanket :<
01:05:580 (2) - believe it's better to have it like this for better flow path when approaching to this slider and then the next slider. these sliders are like this for a reason, this sound is mapped similarly throughout the map so changing just one wouldn't make sense.
Picture

Suggestions and Ideas

None

Test play for captin's Easy Difficulty
Result

(ﾉ´ヮ´)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧❀ Wish you best of luck!~ ❀

10crystalmask01 wrote:
Ello, mod from queue

[captin's Easy]
00:53:944 (2) - Move a little more to the left, so it makes the flow look straight. Right now, it looks sort of jagged. I think it looking jagged like this fits well
01:13:217 (2) - Consider modeling the last few anchor points of this slider so it isn't touching 01:11:035 (3) - . but it doesn't...
Nice mapset. Good luck!

so thanks, but no changes :<

kisata

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kisata 2014-03-11T08:04:55+00:00

someone slap UWS orz

Natsu

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Topic Starter

Natsu 2014-03-11T20:50:26+00:00

10crystalmask01 wrote:
Ello, mod from queue
[notice]2~ 3 minutes = 4 Diffs
[Insane]
00:10:671 (3) - Try using a drum finish on this sliders head. Sounds better imo. nah I prefer the default one
02:12:853 (4,5) - Looks a bit crowded here, so try moving them more apart (Unless you still want to use DS here?) It's on purpose
02:26:308 (3) - New rhythm suggestion:

Because this slider seems to overrun the piano notes at 02:26:399 and 02:26:444.you're right but since mapping 1/8 beats will be to hard to play, that's why I ignore them

[Normal]
00:10:671 (3) - Try using a drum finish on the head? same as insane
00:36:126 (3) - Use a whistle on the head, instead of a clap. There's no cymbal crash heard in this part of the music. sound is strong there and thge prebious beat have whstle, that's why I like it, also if you notice I'm using custom finish for the crash
00:39:762 (4) - Sonuds a bit off. Try this rhythm suggestion:

I'm guessing that you didn't want to make the slider run to 00:40:308, because then you'd have to attach 00:40:489 (1) - to it, and that spot already looks overused (?) some like it, I believe ending it on the offbeat will be really hard for a normal QAQ
00:57:217 (2) - ^Same suggestion as above. ^
01:13:944 (1) - Change finish to whistle. No cymbal crash heard here. Same as the other one
01:33:580 (3) - ^ On the head. It kind of spoils the surprise 'crash' on 01:34:308 (4) - 's head. you can check what im doing for example check this 01:39:399 (3,4) - the first finish is the default one and the second is the one for the crash, this song have parts that doesn't sound good with just whistle for me orz
01:39:399 (3) - ^ On the head.
01:45:216 (3) - ^ On the head.

Nice mapset. Good luck!

thanks for mod

captin1

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captin1 2014-03-18T00:51:20+00:00

uws broke his computer or something lol

Natsu

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Natsu 2014-03-18T03:25:34+00:00

captin1 wrote:
uws broke his computer or something lol

Oh I see is ok, no need to rush :3

UnitedWeSin

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UnitedWeSin 2014-03-27T06:46:59+00:00

Really really sorry about this.

Erina

Erina wrote:
[UWS's Insane]

General: I feel as if there are a lot of new combo's that aren't necessary. But, if this is your style, I wouldn't change it.
Hm I tried to add them to fit with the music. :\

00:58:853 (6) - Consider moving down to overlap the start of this slider with 00:57:580 (6)
I'd like to leave it, I didn't want to have a jump there.

01:00:489 (5) - Consider ctrl+g
I think it makes the section very jumpy and difficult, I was going for just a straight down flow.

01:06:308 (1) - Consider removing NC
It's a pattern used elsewhere as well, I think I'll leave it.

Kyubey

Kyubey wrote:
[UWS's Insane]
Maybe rename to UWS' Insane? Isn't it right in english? Or better too UWS' Extra.
UWS's is proper I'm pretty sure. UWS is an acronym which follows standard possessive form.

00:07:217 (1) - there's no bit in music
I see the point but I feel it's better than a slider here. There is a piano note there that's important in the melody after all.

00:13:035 (1) - there's too
you can say "nah, who cares about 2 notes" but for me it's playing strange
ya

02:07:035 (3,4) - this overlap doesn't looks good
centered it \o/
/quote]

Chewin

Chewin wrote:
UWS's Insane

00:03:399 (2,3) - How you placed this sliders it looks that the (2) has just a repeat and not two. I think this pattern could confuse players a lot. What about instead to reduce the first slider by removing a repeat and adding a circle on the empty blue tick? I mean: http://puu.sh/7lhEr.jpg You really have to fix this because if you notice the spacing between 00:03:762 (4,5) that it's still 1/4 is very different from the huge one between 00:03:399 (2,3).
I changed the placement it should be more obvious now with the AR. I don't want to change the rhythm because I'd like the rhythm to be unique for each repeat of this pattern in the music. Also I feel adding a circle there in 1/4 isn't so comfortable.
00:11:762 (2,3,4) - lol I like this
:>
00:38:580 (4,5) - Move this pattern some grid down to blanket it with the same spacing of the previous one: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1393450
k
01:47:399 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - wow looks awesome moving the mouse in the editor :3 Nice flowing jumps
:>!
01:56:853 (1,2) and 01:59:762 (1,2) - Same of 00:03:399 (2,3)
Did ctrl+G on 01:56:853 (1) and I changed the rhythm on the other.

Thanks a lot for the mods!!

Here is my update:
http://puu.sh/7LdgX.rar

Natsu

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Natsu 2014-03-27T10:09:25+00:00

Updated~

Natsu

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Natsu 2014-04-24T10:52:07+00:00

post anti-graveyard

Lissette

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Lissette 2014-04-30T19:49:48+00:00

Hi~

[UWS's Insane]
00:03:399 (2,3) - Would be easier to read if these two have one repeat both http://puu.sh/8ru7e.jpg
00:03:671 (3) - feels like is missing a note here
00:28:762 (1,2,3,4) - spacing here is really misleading because the 1/4 objects has larger spacing that 00:28:853 (2,3) - in the same combo
00:30:671 (2,3) - I think fits better if you use 1/4 slider for these too, to highlight the music, atm feels like something is missing
00:47:762 (1,2) - I really thing this could work with 1/4 slider, no need to use 1/8, feels kinda overloaded
01:16:853 (1,2) - Same as above
01:37:944 (2,3) - Same as 00:03:399 (2,3) -
02:15:399 (2,3) - If I'm not wrong this should be snapped 1/4
02:24:853 (5) - I like it better without one repeat on this one, like here 02:21:944 (3) -
02:28:671 (4) - To be honest that jump doesn't fit to me

[Insane]
02:01:944 (1,2) - Try removing 2 and adding a repeat to 1
02:25:035 (5) - Fits better with a single note instead of the slider

[apaffy's Hard]
00:13:853 (4,5) - Don't understand why the inconsistence with the spacing here, looks odd
00:17:944 (3,4) - This doesn't follow the rhythm bery well, try this http://puu.sh/8t5Mu.jpg
02:07:762 (1,2) - This doesn't follow the rhythm very well, try this http://puu.sh/8tLHw.jpg
There was something in particular that bugged me about this diff which was this type of spacing: 00:13:853 (4,5) - 00:36:489 (2,3) - 00:39:035 (5,6) - 00:42:853 (4,5) - 00:48:126 (5,6) - 01:05:580 (6,7,8,9) - etc etc. So, I noticed you are trying to make a patter with all of them, but the thing that I don't understand is what are you following with the change of spacing there, For example, this combo 00:36:126 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would understand if you make the jump from 1 to 2 instead from 3 to 4, because the rhythm calls for it, my opinion.

[Normal]
I found this diff a bit hard to follow at first, maybe because you mapped following to specific instrument, not sure. I will give you some rhythm suggestions that will help the map be more easy to follow, you could take them as an example of what I mean.
00:01:580 (2,3,4) - Try this: http://puu.sh/8tN4k.jpg
00:04:126 (1) - move this to 00:04:308 -
00:05:580 (4) - add a repeat maybe, because sounds and feels empty there
00:08:489 (3) - move 1/2 earlier and make it end at 00:09:035 (4,5) -
00:11:399 (4) - same as 00:05:580 (4) -
00:14:308 (3) - move 1/2 earlier and make it end at 00:14:489 -
00:15:762 (1) - move 1/2 later

[captin's Easy]
01:00:853 (1,2,3,4,5) - The change from white tick to red tick here with notes can be confusing for begginers, i suggest using slider for this part
01:09:762 (1) - move 1/2 later, will be easier to follow for begginers for the same reason as above, you could also use slider if you want to keep the object in that point, for example http://puu.sh/8tOeH.jpg
01:30:671 (2) - Try to keep the spacing even on Easy difficulties

Natsu

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Natsu 2014-04-30T20:24:11+00:00

Lissette wrote:
Hi~ Hello

[Insane]
02:01:944 (1,2) - Try removing 2 and adding a repeat to 1 I need to fit the drum in 02:02:308 - that's why
02:25:035 (5) - Fits better with a single note instead of the slider the piano melody is still in 02:25:126 -, I agree it sound really low, but I feel that I have to map it

[Normal]
I found this diff a bit hard to follow at first, maybe because you mapped following to specific instrument, not sure. I will give you some rhythm suggestions that will help the map be more easy to follow, you could take them as an example of what I mean.
00:01:580 (2,3,4) - Try this: http://puu.sh/8tN4k.jpg cool
00:04:126 (1) - move this to 00:04:308 - okis
00:05:580 (4) - add a repeat maybe, because sounds and feels empty there yes, but I feel the pause follow the piano better
00:08:489 (3) - move 1/2 earlier and make it end at 00:09:035 (4,5) - done, but a 1/1 slider + circle
00:11:399 (4) - same as 00:05:580 (4) - same as the other one
00:14:308 (3) - move 1/2 earlier and make it end at 00:14:489 - yes
00:15:762 (1) - move 1/2 later done

thanks

captin1

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captin1 2014-04-30T21:01:18+00:00

Lissette wrote:
Hi~

[captin's Easy]
01:00:853 (1,2,3,4,5) - The change from white tick to red tick here with notes can be confusing for begginers, i suggest using slider for this part I would really like to keep this, I feel that since the 3/2 rhythm is introduced with 01:00:853 (1) - and then continues consistently with the melody that they will be able to understand it
01:09:762 (1) - move 1/2 later, will be easier to follow for begginers for the same reason as above, you could also use slider if you want to keep the object in that point, for example http://puu.sh/8tOeH.jpg did the second suggestion
01:30:671 (2) - Try to keep the spacing even on Easy difficulties lol 1 got moved way off to the corner for some reason, damn editor

thanks!

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UnitedWeSin

889 posts

Joined July 2012

UnitedWeSin 2014-05-06T04:01:28+00:00

Hope you can forgive me for being slow with this. :c

Lissette

Lissette wrote:
Hi~

[UWS's Insane]
00:03:399 (2,3) - Would be easier to read if these two have one repeat both http://puu.sh/8ru7e.jpg
Understandable, but the problem is hitting the 3 on the blue tick feels terrible and doesn't follow the music imo since at 00:03:762 on the white tick the piano returns to the lowest note in the triplet. I think that's why I feel like this rhythm fits the music much better.

00:03:671 (3) - feels like is missing a note here
Hm I'm just not sure. :\ It seems there is no space for a note even with your suggested rhythm so I'm confused.

00:28:762 (1,2,3,4) - spacing here is really misleading because the 1/4 objects has larger spacing that 00:28:853 (2,3) - in the same combo
kk I arranged this pattern differently

00:30:671 (2,3) - I think fits better if you use 1/4 slider for these too, to highlight the music, atm feels like something is missing
Can't really agree there, listening to the music I don't hear the 1/4 starting until 00:31:126 which is expressed with the current rhythm.

00:47:762 (1,2) - I really thing this could work with 1/4 slider, no need to use 1/8, feels kinda overloaded
If possible here I'd like to keep the 1/8 since I feel they fit with the tremolo in the strings and the switch to 1/4 at 00:48:489 is fitting with the drums imo. As 1/4 the pattern doesn't feel very fast to me.

01:16:853 (1,2) - Same as above
Here I think it's especially important to transition from1/8 to 1/4 since the tremolo breaks quite strongly.

01:37:944 (2,3) - Same as 00:03:399 (2,3) -
I just wanted to use a different rhythm for each appearance of this pattern and I fell this rhythm is best. I don't think it's hard to read in this placement with AR9.

02:15:399 (2,3) - If I'm not wrong this should be snapped 1/4
Hmm maybe but honestly I think it plays better as 1/3 and feels much more smooth with the next two sliders. The piano here can easily be heard as 1/3 and it's expected since 02:03:762 (2) was 1/3.

02:24:853 (5) - I like it better without one repeat on this one, like here 02:21:944 (3) -
ok lets try

02:28:671 (4) - To be honest that jump doesn't fit to me
Hmm I just don't really have a problem with it personally and in a design sense I'd really like to keep it since I think it fits great.

Thanks very much for your mod Lissette.

I also slightly adjusted patterns at:
00:39:035 -
00:20:126 -
00:16:308 -
00:31:217 (1) -

I changed the name to Extra since everyone said I should. If it's not ok change it to whatever. \:D/

http://puu.sh/8B6IW.rar

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Natsu 2014-05-06T04:21:29+00:00

Is oke not need to rush <3 waiting for apaffy

kisata

521 posts

Joined September 2012

kisata 2014-05-06T04:48:25+00:00

Lissette wrote:
[apaffy's Hard]
00:13:853 (4,5) - Don't understand why the inconsistence with the spacing here, looks odd ok
00:17:944 (3,4) - This doesn't follow the rhythm bery well, try this http://puu.sh/8t5Mu.jpg agreed
02:07:762 (1,2) - This doesn't follow the rhythm very well, try this http://puu.sh/8tLHw.jpg agreed

Lissette wrote:
There was something in particular that bugged me about this diff which was this type of spacing: 00:13:853 (4,5) - 00:36:489 (2,3) - 00:39:035 (5,6) - 00:42:853 (4,5) - 00:48:126 (5,6) - 01:05:580 (6,7,8,9) - etc etc. So, I noticed you are trying to make a patter with all of them, but the thing that I don't understand is what are you following with the change of spacing there, For example, this combo 00:36:126 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would understand if you make the jump from 1 to 2 instead from 3 to 4, because the rhythm calls for it, my opinion.

let's address these one at a time
00:13:853 (4,5) - normal 1/2 gap with spacing consistent with the DS in the rest of the map
00:36:489 (2,3) - as above, this uses the exact same spacing i used for most of the map
00:39:035 (5,6) - i don't know what happened here but yeah, agreed
00:42:853 (4,5) - there's the 1/4 drum stuff on 00:43:035 (5,6,7,8,1) - and i feel like a somewhat larger jump gives a bit more feeling to it
00:48:126 (5,6) - again, i want there to be a jump before the 1/4 in the drums; i really feel like this helps accentuate the rhythm at 00:48:853 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:05:580 (6,7,8,9) - as above

as far as i'm aware the jump before the 1/4 patterns is handled fairly consistently throughout the map and as such no change to stuff i didn't mention

hrad

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299,92,116853,2,0,L|263:32,2,37.5,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,88,117217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,80,117308,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,72,117399,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,192,117580,6,0,P|444:248|448:276,2,50
352,232,117944,2,0,P|296:240|284:236,2,50
188,180,118308,2,0,P|244:172|256:176,2,50
88,208,118671,2,0,P|68:156|72:124,2,50
64,64,119035,6,0,P|112:40|216:80,1,150,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,124,119580,1,4,0:3:0:0:
328,80,119762,2,0,L|348:32,2,37.5
407,116,120126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,120,120217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,124,120308,1,4,0:3:0:0:
420,128,120399,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,132,120489,6,0,P|412:196|456:284,1,150,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,328,121035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,292,121217,2,0,L|288:224,2,37.5
218,280,121580,2,0,L|198:212,2,37.5
124,257,121944,2,0,P|72:260|24:284,2,100,4|8|8,0:3|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,172,122671,2,0,P|220:108|260:76,2,100,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,200,123399,6,0,L|404:192,1,75,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,152,123762,2,0,P|448:100|436:80,2,50,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,232,124126,2,0,P|456:276|484:312,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,304,124489,2,0,L|313:309,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,280,124853,6,0,L|212:232,2,37.5
288,200,125217,2,0,L|264:152,2,37.5
189,152,125580,2,0,L|165:104,2,37.5
236,64,125944,1,4,0:3:0:0:
240,56,126035,1,4,0:3:0:0:
244,48,126126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,40,126217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,32,126308,6,0,P|308:60|400:32,1,150,4|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,72,126853,1,4,0:3:0:0:
428,144,127035,2,0,L|420:204,2,37.5
483,239,127399,2,0,L|475:299,2,37.5
396,274,127762,6,0,P|336:288|296:272,1,75,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,274,128035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,260,128126,2,0,L|180:276,1,75,8|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
112,244,128489,2,0,L|52:256,1,37.5
28,184,128762,2,0,P|56:144|40:72,1,112.5
124,48,129217,6,0,P|192:64|232:140,1,150,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,208,129762,1,4,0:3:0:0:
308,276,129944,2,0,P|356:288|436:272,2,112.5
232,304,130671,2,0,L|144:312,1,75,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
76,312,131035,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,312,131217,1,4,0:3:0:0:
48,232,131399,2,0,L|64:144,1,75
156,68,131762,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,131853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,60,131944,1,4,0:3:0:0:
168,56,132035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,52,132126,6,0,P|228:72|320:44,1,150,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,92,132671,2,0,P|415:145|415:179,1,75,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,256,133126,2,0,P|336:311|377:365,1,112.5
288,328,133580,2,0,P|200:328|180:332,1,75,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
132,336,133944,1,8,0:0:0:0:
46,341,134126,1,4,0:3:0:0:
80,260,134308,2,0,P|88:212|60:136,2,112.5
164,256,135035,6,0,P|224:264|296:196,1,150,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,160,135580,1,4,0:3:0:0:
440,168,135762,2,0,P|472:216|456:284,1,112.5
436,296,136126,2,0,L|428:368,2,50
372,248,136489,6,0,L|288:260,1,75,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
216,240,136853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,168,137035,1,4,0:3:0:0:
192,88,137217,2,0,P|248:64|284:84,1,75,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,132,137580,1,4,0:3:0:0:
372,140,137671,1,4,0:3:0:0:
376,148,137762,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,156,137853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,164,137944,6,0,P|316:188|268:260,1,150,0|4,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
132,336,138671,2,0,L|56:324,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
30,199,139035,2,0,L|104:210,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,196,139399,6,0,P|252:152|260:56,1,150,0|4,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
428,116,140126,2,0,L|384:208,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,305,140489,2,0,L|468:237,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,256,140853,6,0,P|312:272|224:236,1,150,0|4,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
88,172,141580,2,0,L|44:80,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,83,141944,2,0,L|196:8,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,60,142308,6,0,P|360:84|432:64,1,150,0|4,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
408,240,143035,2,0,P|348:252|316:240,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,186,143399,2,0,P|259:173|296:176,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,264,143762,6,0,P|184:280|96:248,1,150,0|4,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
48,104,144489,2,0,P|84:152|124:164,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,155,144853,2,0,P|255:133|273:100,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,44,145217,6,0,L|484:68,1,150,0|4,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
352,168,145944,2,0,L|324:244,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,291,146308,2,0,L|456:372,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,340,146671,6,0,P|308:324|208:340,1,150,0|4,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
68,284,147399,2,0,L|156:284,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,192,147762,2,0,L|320:192,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,160,148126,6,0,P|436:132|452:92,1,75,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,36,148489,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,32,148671,1,4,0:3:0:0:
300,80,148853,2,0,P|220:88|136:52,1,150,4|4,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
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340,136,150308,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,172,150489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,240,150671,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,304,150853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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156,333,151762,2,0,P|96:341|64:329,1,75
43,208,152126,5,0,0:0:0:0:
41,200,152216,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,193,152307,1,0,0:0:0:0:
39,185,152398,1,0,0:0:0:0:
38,178,152489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,152580,12,0,156853,0:0:0:0:

apologies for being so slow

Natsu

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Natsu 2014-05-06T04:53:07+00:00

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Scorpiour

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Scorpiour 2014-05-13T11:41:55+00:00

marked for 400 kds award

Scorpiour

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Scorpiour 2014-05-31T10:16:49+00:00

Sorry for my late

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[UWS's Extra]

00:12:671 (2) - ctrl+g for better flow?
00:33:217 (3,4,5,6) - Feel weird a little around here that i suppose the beat like this is better:
00:37:399 (2) - About the flow here:
SPOILER
00:44:853 (1,2,3,4) - similar to prev one, repeat + triplet is better imo
01:05:217 (1,2) - 1/3 repeat miss the sense here! notes are highly recommended
01:11:399 (2,3,4,5) - the semi-triplet make no sense i suppose, i may make here like this:
SPOILER
01:17:944 (3,4,1) - not strong enough ~
01:46:308 (2,3,4) - stagger them slightly
SPOILER
01:48:126 (1,2,3,4) - spacing could be larger use overlap but not stack
01:50:853 (4,1) - swap them for better flow?
01:53:944 (3,4) - the shape is pretty odd event straight slider is better than current
01:57:580 (1,2,3,4,5) - Also notes is highly recommended, it is extra not common insane
02:00:308 (5) - ctrl+r? also this one if you applied.
02:15:399 (2,3) - also 1/3 , notes is recommended

[Insane]

00:52:853 (1) - use soft?
01:37:580 (2) - remove it, leave a note at 01:37:762 - , 38:57
02:05:580 (1,2) - too noisy
02:12:853 (4,5) - too close looks bad
02:29:944 (1,2) - still too noisy, also 02:31:762 (1,2) -

too prudent & constrained

[apaffy's Hard]

02:01:944 (5,6) - continuous claps heard weird a little, also 02:03:762 (2,3) -

[Normal]

Too many overlaps i may choose to remake this by 1.3 overall ds despite the current is rankable, only rankable.

[captin's Easy]

02:17:944 (1,2,3) - NC around this part, i may choose put NC on the heavy beats like 02:18:308 (2) -

That's all~

Natsu

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Natsu 2014-05-31T11:08:03+00:00

Scorpiour wrote:
Sorry for my late

[Insane]
00:52:853 (1) - use soft? yes
01:37:580 (2) - remove it, leave a note at 01:37:762 - , 38:57 sure
02:05:580 (1,2) - too noisy changed to soft
02:12:853 (4,5) - too close looks bad added more spacing
02:29:944 (1,2) - still too noisy, also 02:31:762 (1,2) - changed to soft
too prudent & constrained yes, but is on purpose I always like to have a calm Insane diff in my maps and one a bit more crazy, since some players like to play calm maps and others like to play crazy stuff, that's why I added 2 insanes in this mapset x.x, hope you understand

[Normal]
Too many overlaps i may choose to remake this by 1.3 overall ds despite the current is rankable, only rankable. Indeed, changed all to 1.30
That's all~

thanks for mod :3/

Edit: yes already askedfor some more mods, thanks Scorpiour

Last edited by Natsu 2014-05-31T20:14:48+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Scorpiour

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Scorpiour 2014-05-31T13:06:37+00:00

that's reasonable

seems you make a big change on Normal already so try to find several more mods (2-3) to make it perfect.

and then, call me back to recheck when you're ready

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