1. 00:03:275 (1,1) - Not a really big thing, though using a couple of opposed 1/2 sliders that start instead 1/2 before would be really great. They play really good and they also follow the rhythm well! I don't really think they are too hard for this diff Here's what I have done, see if you like it!
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   356,128,3275,6,0,L|368:68,1,45
   106,259,4823,6,0,L|116:304,1,45,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:13:533 (x) - I would personally add a note here to emphatize of the kicks which start right here! It's not a really important thing though I believe it would work really better there also to cover the gap between the spinner and the actual pattern which is being played next!
3. 00:23:597 (1,2) - Using just two 2/1 sliders there feels quite boring... I would have expected something else to vary the rhythm there and to make the diff also better to play. I have been thinking about using a 3/2 repeated pattern, a 1/1 slider and a 3/4 repeated slider there to follow the instruments, considering that there is just a spinner after the 3/4 slider. Here's what I mean:
   

1. 00:03:275 (x) - Just a personal preference there, though a note here wouldn't hurt at all, seeing how the drums actually play in this place I think it could make a pretty good rhythmical variation!
2. 00:15:855 (4) - I'm totally nitpicking here, though by seeing that 00:16:630 (5) - is a curved slider I would make this slider curved as well, as it would definitely make a pretty good to follow oval flow that imho plays really well! Not a big deal, though >_< Here's an example of what I mean!
3. 00:18:565 (2) - While I usually like stacks if they are well used, I don't totally agree with this one, considering that it's way too sudden and it also stops the flow not in a really great way. I would at least make it a bit spaced out from the slider to make the flow smoother there!
4. 00:19:726 (5) - What would you think about making this slider longer by 1/4? I would rather follow the synthesizer there instead of the drums, as it is the dominant instrument here. I am sure it would really be great to vary the rhythm up and also to follow the pattern in a really good way there!
   For the two points above, here's a pattern that can be used:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   204,28,18565,2,0,P|233:28|263:36,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   292,88,18952,2,0,P|300:148|280:208,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   236,240,19533,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   256,296,19726,2,0,P|231:340|184:360,2,90,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

1. 00:11:210 (3) - I would totally see a New Combo well here both rhythm-wise and pattern-wise, by seeing how a new phrase (with the drum stream) starts here, and by seeing also how it is a totally different pattern from your symmetric patterns there! Not a really big thing, though I think it would be pretty good there :p
2. 00:17:597 (2,3) - Hmm... I actually think that using the DS here doesen't work really good, by seeing how the whole pattern there seems a bit strange, and not well balanced. I'd rather make the spacing between the 1/4 sliders and the 1/2 ones similar between them... Here's an example of what I mean here, see if you like it!
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   24,242,17210,6,0,L|11:324,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   96,348,17597,2,0,L|89:384,1,37.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   176,312,17888,2,0,L|182:270,1,37.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   242,370,18178,2,0,P|279:377|318:372,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:25:146 (4) - Considering the switch between the rhythmical patterns there I believe that a New Combo on this pattern would work really great, and I think it would also make a good transition there

1. 00:10:436 (1,2) - I really can't understand why using a doublet here... I would have really seen better instead a 1/2 slider with a triplet there, as it follows quite better the instruments there >_< Here's what I mean exactly:
   
2. 00:16:436 (3,4,5,6) - The simply curved slider imho do not play that well with your 1/2 slider there, seeing how the oval flow there gets broken... I would instead use some linear sliders and some other curved ones that are instead opposed, so that they follow better the pattern. Here's what I have done here: see if you like it!
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   244,84,16436,2,0,L|316:75,1,72.0000027465821,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   172,44,16630,2,0,L|100:35,1,72.0000027465821,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   24,72,16823,2,0,P|18:37|28:0,1,72.0000027465821,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   148,144,17017,2,0,P|154:179|144:216,1,72.0000027465821,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

1. 00:11:984 (9) - What about adding a New Combo here? It's a really small thing, though I think it fits particularly well considering the instruments progressing there, and also it would prevent the combo chain from being too long there!
2. 00:20:307 (7) - CTRL+G? This is a personal preference instead, though I feel this slider plays a bit smoother thanks to its flow going upwards in this way! Though it is a really optional thing, so just avoid this if you don't like how it plays instead!

1. 00:15:371 (2,3) - What would you think about using a CTRL+G on both the sliders there? I personally like more how the jump with the next slider goes on in this way!
2. 00:17:113 (1,2,3) - The reduced spacing there really breaks the flow there, and it is quite annoying to play... orz I would at least move 00:16:823 (2,3) - a bit down (maybe at x:408 y:380?) to make the spacing higher and making it smoother here
3. 00:18:759 - I really didn't like how you didn't cover the sound this time, to be honest... Why don't you cover it at least here by using a 1/4 slider like 00:17:984 (3) - ? I really think it is quite better rhythm-wise!

-kevincela- wrote:

[AngelHoney's ExtrA]

1. 00:11:984 (9) - What about adding a New Combo here? It's a really small thing, though I think it fits particularly well considering the instruments progressing there, and also it would prevent the combo chain from being too long there!
2. 00:20:307 (7) - CTRL+G? This is a personal preference instead, though I feel this slider plays a bit smoother thanks to its flow going upwards in this way! Though it is a really optional thing, so just avoid this if you don't like how it plays instead!

hmm... sorry , i dont want to change them w

thx for the mod !!

And that's all! As you can see it's a really short map, the map's pretty much ready to go. Call me when you're done fixing!

-kevincela- wrote:

[fanzhen's Extra]

1. 00:15:371 (2,3) - What would you think about using a CTRL+G on both the sliders there? I personally like more how the jump with the next slider goes on in this way! Okay
2. 00:17:113 (1,2,3) - The reduced spacing there really breaks the flow there, and it is quite annoying to play... orz I would at least move 00:16:823 (2,3) - a bit down (maybe at x:408 y:380?) to make the spacing higher and making it smoother here Converted 2 and 3 into a slider
3. 00:18:759 - I really didn't like how you didn't cover the sound this time, to be honest... Why don't you cover it at least here by using a 1/4 slider like 00:17:984 (3) - ? I really think it is quite better rhythm-wise! Added a circle

Light_Yagami12 wrote:

Congrats ^^

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

nice congrats~