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Xinely

Joined April 2012

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Xinely 2014-02-01T00:51:36+00:00

Dark Fang wrote:
Digimon EVOLUTION!!! *me become Greymon /slapped*

[General]

first offset -7 from current state (3286)
in all of diffs, the Finish sound like 01:00:758 - here. please reduce volume a little bit, current volume is loud IMO - (01:49:772 (1) - this volume is good) okay for all
[Easy]

01:11:744 (2) - I heard the drum snare sound at end point of this slider. you can hear that too. why don't you add a Clap sound at end point of slider?
02:13:011 (5) - remove the Whistle hitsound please. it is awkward for here and is not consistent from previous.
03:03:292 (1) - remove the Whistle at end point of slider. I can't hear any drum sound at here. nanimo kikoe nai
03:39:630 (4,5) - as we can see at this pattern. on (4) circle, distance of (3) slider and (5) circle is different. spacing please. (no need for increase the map's quality) fixed all
[Normal]

Yeah, good diff except several points. like 00:42:166 (1,2) - this pattern, that rhythm causes noob players be confuse and rove route. need more reduce difficult from current state. why don't you use circle instead of slider? or add circle 00:43:011 - here? i recommend use circle instead slider. well.. good diff sorry for can't find problem. aa trying following vocal so let me keep this first

[Hard]

00:29:913 - why don't you use 1/2 slider at here? like 00:26:532 - this? i think this section is good for slider instead of that circles from that down and up melody.if you hard to put slider at this section, why don't you try like this? i guess circles are fine here ~
SPOILER
good map

m1223961117 wrote:
From My queue~

Few Problem ...Sorry I can't help so much.

Hard
01:17:659 (1) - blanket slider's tail yap

Normal
00:16:814 (4) - blanket next slider i tried it Q_Q
00:48:927 (1) - ^ ^
02:38:574 (2) - move to (252, 120), look better hao a

Easy
00:10:054 (1,2) - make like Normal, reverse slider+a circle broke my pattern ;-;

damn...God map...
It's my childhood, my love song me too xD
So...when my queue 2nd open and I saw this 4 mins map, ~~fxxk my rule~~
Star for you and I wait for this RANK

Good luck

Natsu wrote:
Hi from my Queue

[General]
Inconsistency in Tags, I was looking for the problem but maybe is just a spacing, just copy and past them. checked all and consistency, i calculated the space and all of them consisten.
[Hard]
OD -1 (6) for better diff spread, since you have: Easy: 2-3-2 Normal:4-5-4 Hard: 6-7-7, so yeah is better if you reduce the OD in hard, to have a 2 difference in every setting between the diffs. i forgot to change it become AR 8 since much of people prefer see this diff with AR8 so AR8 OD-1
00:04:138 (2,3,4) - I don't like this broken flow, it play not natural if you want to improve this, try:
SPOILER
00:10:899 (3,4) - try to blanket this better, I know you are not good with blankets but just use the approach circle of 00:11:321 (4) - to improve is easy, I'm sure you can.
00:12:589 (5,6,1) - use an equal distance between them.
00:14:701 (4,1) - another blanket issue, check I'll explain you:
SPOILER
this is the actually one:

How it should be:
00:15:758 (2,3) - same as above cause fix the blanket, blanket of this pattern become broken and lazy to make blanket
00:17:659 (2) - bad rhythm, there is nothing in the music here 00:17:976 but yes in 00:17:870 . it have. listen it 25%. music is increasing in blue tick
00:32:870 (4) - again this extended slider is not following nothing, the vocals clearly end in 00:33:082. little bit vocal in blue tick. also i learned it from Sekai o3o *runs
00:37:941 (4) - this should have one more repeat, the stream continue here 00:38:258 there is not reason to ignore it, since you map all the other 1/4.
00:39:208 (2) - another extended slider issue, you are using them in place than doesn't fit the song, the music clearly is 1/2 singer's breath. also i love 3/4 here :3
00:41:321 (3,4,5,1) - mmm this broken flow is really bothering me, the (1) is breaking the flow of 00:41:321 (3,4,5) - , If you want to improve this part, try:
SPOILER
00:44:701 (4) - ctrl J and move it to x:332 y:32 for better flow
00:46:392 (3,4,1) - Use the same distance between them jump for stanza
00:55:265 (6,1) - same as 00:14:701
00:55:687 (1,2,3) - use the same distance between them, this variations doesn't play comfortable gomene break pattern ;-;
00:57:166 (4,2) - can you avoid the overlap?
00:59:596 you need to add a circle here, since you map the previous 00:59:385 (2,3) - if you leave this 00:59:596 without nothing, you're breaking the rhythm. remove instead
01:00:758 (1,2,3) - as I explain before use an equal distance between them. jump for a little energetic vocal
01:04:138 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:09:208 (1) - same as 00:39:208 love 3/4 here <3
01:15:124 (3) - ^ ^<3
01:16:708 Should be a triplet here, since you map the other ones. no need imo
01:16:814 (3,1) - same as 00:14:701
no comment = fixed
[Normal]
00:33:716 (3) - this slider is starting with nothing in the music, It will sound better if you move this slider 1/2 early in 00:33:504 and add a circle in 00:34:138, like:
SPOILER
00:35:194 add a circle here for similar reason as above, also take in consideration do you use alot of jumps and 1/4 in hard diff, adding more 1/2 circles will help you with the spread.
00:41:955 same as above
00:48:927 (1,2) - you can do a better blanket, just follow the way I explain you in hard.
00:53:152 (3) - that offbeat in the repeat, is kinda weird imo, follow the drums better or add a clap tick sound in 00:53:575 will change it if someone tell about this again
01:14:279 (1,2) - broken flow, the transition is not natural there, try to place the circle following the curve of the slider so the cursor movement can be natural. For example check the one in hard 00:04:138
01:23:152 (4,5) - ^
01:44:279 (3,5) - Same as 00:48:927
01:47:659 (3,4) - ^
02:08:364 (2) - maybe do you want to make this slider curved, to improve the flow with previous and next beat?
SPOILER
02:22:729 (1,2) - same as 01:14:279
no comment = fixed

[Easy]
00:33:716 (4) - same as normal there is nothing in the music but yes in 00:33:504, I know you don't like tou use 1/2 in easy diff mmm try this fit better the song: use 1/2 instead since this Easy is quite Easy, nice catch
SPOILER
01:21:039 (1) - mmm the sound in 01:21:462 is more important than 01:21:673 that's why the slider sound not nicely. Try: sure
SPOILER
01:15:969 (4) - same asabove yap
02:08:363 (4) - ^ let me keep since vocal of red tick more energetic than vocal of whitetick
01:28:645 (2) - NC bug. fixed ;-;
02:15:124 (3,4) - try a better blanked like the one you did in 02:13:011 (5,1) - done
02:47:236 (2) - NC bug yap
02:21:039 (3) - same as 01:21:039 ye
02:39:630 (1,2,3) - similar as the other one try to follow the drum better your rhythm is not new player friendly here also I'm confused lol i guess no since it's just a 3/4 and quite easy and i used it in previous kiai
02:47:236 (1,2) - this doesn't play natural try this instead: hao
SPOILER
03:52:306 (2,1) - this blanket can be alot better. QAQ

GL! nice song

thanks 4 mod all >w<
updated with Hinsvar and waiting Oyatsu

Last edited by Xinely 2014-02-01T01:37:46+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Hinsvar

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Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2014-02-01T01:19:29+00:00

Tsukuyomi wrote:
Hard
01:48:821 (3) - remove it, it make rhythm kinda weird Uh, but the problem is, there IS something here, and it feels weird NOT to follow it.
02:01:392 (1) - fix the blanket Yes.
02:15:969 (3) - use a repeat slider to replace it I think the rhythm that I have now already represents the music nicely.
02:54:736 (2) - remove it, i think triplet here is painful ;w; What do you mean by painful? Anyway, I think this flows with the song pretty well, and it isn't that hard...
03:02:025 (2) - don't stack, than 03:02:236, make a triplet here I'd like to emphasize the instrument at 01:59:490 (2).

Ethercastle wrote:
-Hinsvar-
01:56:532 (1,2,1) - spacing Huh? What's wrong with this?
02:00:758 (4,1) - fix blanket Tweaked a bit.
02:15:969 (3) - 3 drums so maybe a repeating slider instead? No; see my reply to Tsukuyomi's mod about this.
02:26:109 (1,2) - blanket I never intended a blanket pattern here.
02:50:405 (3,4,5) - tiny tiny spacing issue Also tweaked.
02:59:067 (5,6,1) - I know you probably want to keep the solo simple as it's a hard... but I it's getting too simple here.. The rhythm is as intense as I could get here without making things too hard orz

Dark Fang wrote:
Digimon EVOLUTION!!!

[General]

first offset -7 from current state (3286)
in all of diffs, the Finish sound like 01:00:758 - here. please reduce volume a little bit, current volume is loud IMO - (01:49:772 (1) - this volume is good)
[Easy]

01:11:744 (2) - I heard the drum snare sound at end point of this slider. you can hear that too. why don't you add a Clap sound at end point of slider?
02:13:011 (5) - remove the Whistle hitsound please. it is awkward for here and is not consistent from previous.
03:03:292 (1) - remove the Whistle at end point of slider. I can't hear any drum sound at here. nanimo kikoe nai
03:39:630 (4,5) - as we can see at this pattern. on (4) circle, distance of (3) slider and (5) circle is different. spacing please. (no need for increase the map's quality)
[Normal]

Yeah, good diff except several points. like 00:42:166 (1,2) - this pattern, that rhythm causes noob players be confuse and rove route. need more reduce difficult from current state. why don't you use circle instead of slider? or add circle 00:43:011 - here? i recommend use circle instead slider. well.. good diff sorry for can't find problem.

[Hard]

01:49:455 (5) - please use two circles. that pattern is quite confused. IMO I'd like to make a variety in object usage so it won't be too repetitive. Also, this is perfectly readable...
02:19:131 (1) - give loud sound than current please. how-to-hit-aaaaaaah. and sv 0.75 -> 1.00x is too awkward for play. it's too rude for players! 60%'d.
02:28:433 ~ 02:30:334 - too many 3 hit stream. reduce stream quantity please Umm, there are only three here... Are they that hard for a Hard diff? o.o

m1223961117 wrote:
Hard
02:57:165 (1,2,3) - make better triangle Huh? I think this triangle looks perfect, already.

Natsu wrote:
[Hard]
01:43:011 (1,2) - I prefer if you use a properly distance here the jump doesn't fit here IMO Yeah, you're right. Fixed.
02:10:899 (3) - the music is clearly 1/2, this extended sliders play really bad cuz them doesn't follow the song properly, I know you are ending it with a vocal, but yeah the sound at 02:11:110 is more important, what do you think of adding 1/2 slider and then a circle? More important? Nope, they are just as noticeable as each other; this rhythm should be fine. In addition, I'd like to create a variety in rhythm so this map won't be boring.
02:16:814 (1) - remove the slider and start the spinner in that position, fit the song better But it means we'll leave 02:17:237 unmapped... Which feels really awkward.
02:18:927 you should map this beats too.. It's too close to the spinner before this...
02:23:574 (3) - same as 02:10:899 Same as that too.
02:25:898 (4,1,2) - this look like the same distance in the playfield but they have a different distance in the timeline, try to adjust the distance there so the player can notice the difference Uh, the approach circles here (and just the approach rate in general) already helped to make the objects here readable, so I think there's no need to fix it. When I tried it, I can read them perfectly.

Thanks for the mod, everyone!

hue

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jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2014-02-03T04:38:16+00:00

alright lets see

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
I think you forgot to shift the second offset
the current bg has some artifacts and a watermark on the bottom left corner, here is a clean version without these stuff:

SPOILER

[Easy]
00:25:258 (1) - think you forgot a finish on this
00:38:356 (4) - make a blanket here?

SPOILER

01:15:962 (4) - blanket here can look better
01:21:032 (1) - forgot a whistle on the start
01:44:694 (2) - move the end a bit down so it forms a straight flow onto 01:45:539 (3)
02:25:264 (5) - yeah the blanket here can look a lot better
02:29:489 (1) - instead of having this partially blocked due to the low AR, you can try to curve 02:28:644 (4) in a way that 02:29:489 (1) will be placed on top of 02:28:222 (3)
02:51:461 (4) - i would start this slider at 02:51:250 since thats the heavier beat, you can stack it like 00:33:286 (3,4)
02:52:729 (5,1) - same thing here, 02:57:377 (1,2) from here you can keep what you have since after this point you follow the white beat rhythm consistently
03:47:236 (1,2) - some improvements on the blankets would be nice

[Normal]
00:25:047 (8) - should have a clap here to follow the drum roll (maybe drum clap like 00:38:356 (5))
00:43:638 (3) - clap on end instead of whistle
01:28:427 (1,2) - try centering this for a cool effect
01:49:554 - add a note here, or like how you handled 00:30:962 (4,5)
02:26:532 (2) - move this a bit right, then stack 02:27:799 (3) on the end of 02:25:264 (5)
02:37:940 (1) - extra NC here
02:51:461 (3) - starting here im a bit confused about what you are trying to follow, 02:51:250, 02:52:940, 02:54:630 these down beats are skipped but you start following them all of a sudden at 02:56:320 (1), then it gets even more confusing afterwards. As a Normal diff I would recommend you to follow a specific layer of music consistently, whether its the rhythm on red or on white.
03:32:870 (3) - i would NC here instead of 03:33:715 (1) to follow the vocals on this one
03:47:025 (6) - clap

[Hard]
Check AImod for unsnapped stuff, probably result of offset shifting
Also I would name this "Hard Collab" to at least show its a collab diff without having to look it up/play it
00:10:469 (2) - i would remove this clap since the drums are not introduced to the song yet
00:24:835 (4) - clap end
00:32:863 (4) - i would avoid extending this slider since the vocals clearly lands on the red tick
00:38:568 (7) - add clap here, and of possible make this stream flow more smoothly:

SPOILER

01:13:004 (2) - this place sounds like a build up, so i would make this a 1/2 slider covering for 01:13:216 and use it to form a jump pattern
01:29:272 (6) - add a clap
02:01:392 (1) - blanket this pattern properly
02:09:208 (4) - forgot whistle on start
02:17:448 (1) - end this at 02:18:709 to catch the ending sound of the guitar
02:52:306 (4) - break this up into a 1/2 slider and circle so 02:52:518 can be covered
03:18:292 (1) - end this at 03:19:630 (1/3 snap), there is no sound at 03:19:771 so no point ending it there
03:29:912 (3) - a bit nazi but would look better if you aligned it properly with 03:29:489 (2)
03:33:503 - make a triplet here stacked on 03:33:715 (1)
03:44:912 (4) - whistle here or at the end of 03:45:123 (5) to cover the loud piano
03:51:250 (2) - whistle on start for similar reason
03:52:940 (3,4,5,6) - form it like this will make the flow a bit better:

SPOILER

well thats about all, let me know once you are done with this

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,789 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2014-02-03T06:57:43+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
[Hard]
02:01:392 (1) - blanket this pattern properly Wow, this one's pretty hard. Fixed.
02:09:208 (4) - forgot whistle on start Whoops.
02:17:448 (1) - end this at 02:18:709 to catch the ending sound of the guitar Done.
02:52:306 (4) - break this up into a 1/2 slider and circle so 02:52:518 can be covered ^

Thanks!

lawl

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Xinely

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Topic Starter

Xinely 2014-02-03T07:00:55+00:00

yap fixed all :3 (include change of BG)

thanks Jonathan :3

Edit : fixed~

Edit again : thanks Jonathan

waiting for taiko BAT now

Last edited by Xinely 2014-02-05T02:28:51+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

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jonathanlfj 2014-02-05T00:07:50+00:00

quick recheck no kd

[Normal]
02:57:370 (2,3,4) - try a rhythm like this:

SPOILER

That should be all

EDIT: Looks fine now, good luck in ranking!

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OnosakiHito

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Joined March 2010

OnosakiHito 2014-02-13T01:36:29+00:00

You requested a mod due to your osu-iconed project. Here I am.

[

Hins' Muzukashii]

SPOILER

General

- I know that the diff name "Muzu" is used by some mappers, but it would be better to call it "Muzukashii", since the word "Muzu" has no meaning at all in diff-naming.
- Some parts in the Muzukashii are harder than the Oni one, for example the beginning. Please consider this and think about, making it maybe easier as well.

Notes

00:08:356 (13,15) - You could change both to kat and move (13) to 00:08:145 and (15) to 00:08:568. Might fit better to the high pitch. But it's not a must.
00:31:173 (79) - You could move this note to 00:31:385 and change the ddd to kkk since at 00:30:962 we have a streched sound, so you could emphasized it in this way. The kkk might fit a little better to the sound in the background.
00:35:187 (94) - You could delete this note and add at 00:36:032 a kat instead. Additional to this, change 00:36:244 (97,98) - to d k . I'm sure this would fit better to the vocal and its beats.
00:37:934 (102) - This is not a must, just self preference. But I belive having this a finisher as well would emphasize the end of this stanza really well.
00:38:568 (104) - changing this to kat would sound and alternate pretty nice with the finisher.
00:40:258 (109) - Using a K instead might be smart at this point, so the previous emphasized part doesn't get overhelmed by the upcoming D. A K has less power, hence might fit better here. Also, the vocal supports this move.
00:41:948 (115) - kat? Due to vocal.
00:42:582 (117,118,119,120) - k d d k sounds nice when following the vocal.
00:40:680 (110,111,112,113) - So, considering the k d d k you might have changed, having a d k k d here would connect these two patterns in a nice way.
00:44:694 (125) - K ? Might be nice to alternate. Not a must.
00:45:539 (129,130) - Recommending to change (129) to K and delete (130). So far you mapped the muzukashi constantly on 1/2 and 1/1 beats. Having some longer gaps which give the player some kind of break would be nice and emphasize the up-coming part. Also, it does fit nice at this point.
00:48:920 (141,142) - ^ ( 00:48:920 and 00:49:342 )
00:51:666~01:00:751 - dkkD xkd k dk d kkd K x D xkD kkD K D - How about you try this pattern constelation? I think it would work with the song really nice and the break between this part and the kiai would emphasize the kiai even more.

01:12:370 - Actually you can keep the kiai here. There is no real need to cut it. In Taiko we use such cuts only if it fits really well to the song.

Hm, if you don't mind I will keep my explanations from now on short. All I suggest now is following the vocals or is trying to help you with the structure of your Muzukashii. Also here in there some finish suggestions due to song-wise reasons.

01:06:244 - move to 01:06:455 and delete the note at 01:06:878.
01:07:511 - finisher
01:14:694 - delete and change thw two notes at 01:14:906 to k d.
01:15:539~01:17:652 - Upcoming patterns I suggest as following one:

01:18:075 - not a must, but might be better to delete this note as well.
01:19:765 - move to 01:19:976
01:21:032~01:26:103 - I would rather recommend to map more to the vocal again by having 3/4 notes or have at 01:23:145 a similar patterns as you had at 01:21:455 because, it changes too abrupt.
01:29:483~01:43:004 - Hm, too be honest I don't think these pattern constelation at its current state works well. I would recommend you to map to the song's main sounds here, which are the high pitches. At 01:44:061 and up you did it well.
01:48:920 - Same as at 00:31:173.

I will stop at this point since further suggestions would be just similar to the above said words.

Well, overall the Muzukashii is actually okay, but there are still many patterns which can be refined by following the vocal in a more strict way. Sometimes I'm not even sure if you mapped to the vocal or rather the beat of the song. Finisher usage is so far nice, there is no overuse or "bad" once. I mostly just suggested more at some parts to be able to emphasize certain parts in a better way.
Speaking of emphasizing certain parts: I recommend you to have some more 3/4 or if possible, 4/4 gaps to give the Muzukashii player some rest moment. Right now you mapped constantly to 1/1 and 1/2 without too many breaks/gaps. The explanation for this you can find here:
t/152263

Maybe having one or two more mods from some experienced Taiko modders would help you before calling me back. I think you can improve the quality a little more. But don't worry. As I said, the map is so far okay. And the mod only looks so big due to single note placements.

[

Heat's Oni]

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{
03:44:165 (420) - delete
03:44:799 (424) - movte to 03:44:694
} Reason for the suggestion is that the dublets appear out of the sudden in an odd number of stanza (3). For some it might sound okay. For some not. You can keep it, but it is not a must at all. I think having 2x stanza with dublets and 2x stanza with triplets would sound better.

Well, that's actually all about the Oni. The structure is clear, so I don't have anything else to add here. Nice.

No worries about the Muzukashii. Just need some adjustment and it should be fine. Recall me after one more mod from an experienced Taiko modder, and recall me afterwads!

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2014-02-13T09:40:59+00:00

OnosakiHito wrote:
You requested a mod due to your osu-iconed project. Here I am.

[ Hins' Muzukashii]
SPOILER
General

- I know that the diff name "Muzu" is used by some mappers, but it would be better to call it "Muzukashii", since the word "Muzu" has no meaning at all in diff-naming. Sure...
- Some parts in the Muzukashii are harder than the Oni one, for example the beginning. Please consider this and think about, making it maybe easier as well. Made the note density at the beginning considerably lower, at least.

Notes

00:08:356 (13,15) - You could change both to kat and move (13) to 00:08:145 and (15) to 00:08:568. Might fit better to the high pitch. But it's not a must. Reworked the density here before, actually, so...
00:31:173 (79) - You could move this note to 00:31:385 and change the ddd to kkk since at 00:30:962 we have a streched sound, so you could emphasized it in this way. The kkk might fit a little better to the sound in the background. Done.
00:35:187 (94) - You could delete this note and add at 00:36:032 a kat instead. Additional to this, change 00:36:244 (97,98) - to d k . I'm sure this would fit better to the vocal and its beats. ^
00:37:934 (102) - This is not a must, just self preference. But I belive having this a finisher as well would emphasize the end of this stanza really well. I'm sure it isn't the end... And the music here isn't that heavy, anyway, so I don't really think it'll work.
00:38:568 (104) - changing this to kat would sound and alternate pretty nice with the finisher. Done.
00:40:258 (109) - Using a K instead might be smart at this point, so the previous emphasized part doesn't get overhelmed by the upcoming D. A K has less power, hence might fit better here. Also, the vocal supports this move.
00:41:948 (115) - kat? Due to vocal. ^
00:42:582 (117,118,119,120) - k d d k sounds nice when following the vocal. ^
00:40:680 (110,111,112,113) - So, considering the k d d k you might have changed, having a d k k d here would connect these two patterns in a nice way. ^
00:44:694 (125) - K ? Might be nice to alternate. Not a must. ^
00:45:539 (129,130) - Recommending to change (129) to K and delete (130). So far you mapped the muzukashi constantly on 1/2 and 1/1 beats. Having some longer gaps which give the player some kind of break would be nice and emphasize the up-coming part. Also, it does fit nice at this point. ^
00:48:920 (141,142) - ^ ( 00:48:920 and 00:49:342 ) ^
00:51:666~01:00:751 - dkkD xkd k dk d kkd K x D xkD kkD K D - How about you try this pattern constelation? I think it would work with the song really nice and the break between this part and the kiai would emphasize the kiai even more. Made it kinda similar to this I think...

01:12:370 - Actually you can keep the kiai here. There is no real need to cut it. In Taiko we use such cuts only if it fits really well to the song. I personally think this cut does fit the song nicely...

Hm, if you don't mind I will keep my explanations from now on short. All I suggest now is following the vocals or is trying to help you with the structure of your Muzukashii. Also here in there some finish suggestions due to song-wise reasons.

01:06:244 - move to 01:06:455 and delete the note at 01:06:878.
01:07:511 - finisher
01:14:694 - delete and change thw two notes at 01:14:906 to k d.
01:15:539~01:17:652 - Upcoming patterns I suggest as following one:

01:18:075 - not a must, but might be better to delete this note as well.
01:19:765 - move to 01:19:976
01:21:032~01:26:103 - I would rather recommend to map more to the vocal again by having 3/4 notes or have at 01:23:145 a similar patterns as you had at 01:21:455 because, it changes too abrupt.
01:29:483~01:43:004 - Hm, too be honest I don't think these pattern constelation at its current state works well. I would recommend you to map to the song's main sounds here, which are the high pitches. At 01:44:061 and up you did it well. The weird pattern here is intentional; I made this part less dense as some sort of pseudo-break for the players.
01:48:920 - Same as at 00:31:173.
Fixed everything else.

I will stop at this point since further suggestions would be just similar to the above said words.

Well, overall the Muzukashii is actually okay, but there are still many patterns which can be refined by following the vocal in a more strict way. Sometimes I'm not even sure if you mapped to the vocal or rather the beat of the song. Finisher usage is so far nice, there is no overuse or "bad" once. I mostly just suggested more at some parts to be able to emphasize certain parts in a better way.
Speaking of emphasizing certain parts: I recommend you to have some more 3/4 or if possible, 4/4 gaps to give the Muzukashii player some rest moment. Right now you mapped constantly to 1/1 and 1/2 without too many breaks/gaps. The explanation for this you can find here:
t/152263

Maybe having one or two more mods from some experienced Taiko modders would help you before calling me back. I think you can improve the quality a little more. But don't worry. As I said, the map is so far okay. And the mod only looks so big due to single note placements.

Thanks! I'll try to make this diff even better than before~

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taiko_maniac1811

1,060 posts

Joined December 2010

taiko_maniac1811 2014-02-13T10:45:26+00:00

Hihi :3
Taiko mod as req by Xinely ww

Mod

[Hins' Muzukashii]

- the beginning is kinda have too many notes lol, make it a bit simpler o3o?

>some pattern suggestion for the beginning part (although almost the same as Oni part lol)<

00:04:554 (3,4) - delete (3) and change (4) to don
00:06:244 (6,7) - do the same as above ^
00:07:511 (8) - move this to 00:07:723 plays better here
00:07:934 - add kat here if above is done
00:08:145 - add spinner here, delete the notes until 00:11:314

>the rest of the song<
00:12:159 (16) - delete? have a little break here is nice
00:14:694 (21) - same as above ^
00:35:399 (90) - move this to 00:35:187 plays better with the vocals here
00:35:610 - add don if above is done
00:36:032 - and delete this if above is done for better flow
00:53:356 (149) - change this to don
00:53:779 (150) - ^ move this to 00:53:568 and change it to kat, it plays better with the vocals
01:34:342 - add don?
01:34:976 (266) - move this to 01:35:399 instead and delete 01:35:821 (267) plays better imo
01:43:427 - add don? too empty here for me lol
02:50:609 - add don? ^
03:18:074 (161) - move this to 03:18:285 plays better here
03:18:708 (162,163,164,164) - these 4 notes is placed wrongly... use Beat Snap 1/3 and place them like this, hope can understand .w."
03:32:229 - why no big Don here ;w; it needs it lol

[Heat's Oni]
00:08:145 (8) - change to spinner instead? it's kinda empty here lol, end the spiner at 00:10:680 if added
01:00:539 (236) - swap this with 01:00:645 (237) to be dk, OR just make it a don, current pattern plays abit weird lol
02:50:926 - add don? plays better with guitar part
02:54:306 - add don? ^
03:18:637 (281,282,283,284) - these 4 notes is placed wrongly... use Beat Snap 1/3 and place them like this
03:23:778 (309) - move this to 03:23:884 plays better and flows nice with the previous pattern o3o
03:24:623 (314) - move this to 03:24:729 ^

That's all from me, hope it helps :3
gud luck ww

qoot8123

1,500 posts

Joined March 2011

qoot8123 2014-02-13T13:14:29+00:00

Hi~
Taiko mod request via PM~:3
Here we go~

[

Muzukashii]

The pattern you used seems not follow the music well especially the guitar solo ,about this part i recommend you use 02:55:680 (112,113,114) - this kind of pattern would be better

i prefer move 00:14:694 (21) - to 00:15:751 - due to the end on 00:12:582 (17) - has a strong instrument's sound and 00:14:272 (20) - is also have similar sound
00:34:976 (88,89,90,91,92,93) - this pattern you follow drum, but it is a bit unconsistent with 00:32:863 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87) - ,i suggest you move 00:36:032 (91,92,93) - to 00:36:244 - to follow 00:33:920 (84,85,86,87) - and 00:34:976 (88,89,90) - try to follow 00:36:878 (94,95,96) - this kind of pattern
00:53:145 - add d and 00:53:356 (149) - move to 00:53:568 - as you mapped on kiai 01:01:596 (171,172,173,174,175,176,177) -
i suggest you move 00:56:737 (160) - to 00:57:159 - because the vocal is more powerful on 00:56:525 (159) - than 00:56:525 (159) -
01:17:018 (219,220) - try move to 01:17:230 - as 01:03:709 (178,179,180) -
01:38:990 (272) - move to 01:39:413 - as i said that 01:38:779 (271) - is more powerful than 01:39:201 -
01:53:145 (319,322) - move 1/2 behind to follow the previous pattern you use on 01:52:300 (315,316,317,318) -
02:10:469 (374,375,376,377,378,379) - try to follow the pattern as previous part?
02:32:229 (44) - move to 02:32:651 - ?it is better to me
02:41:525 (72) - move to 02:41:947 - ? also better to me
02:42:370 (75) - move to 02:42:792 - if you fixed the above one
02:50:398 (97) - move to 02:50:609 -
02:54:201 (108) - move to 02:54:412 - as 01:53:145 (319,322) -
02:59:271 (123) - ^
03:02:651 (133) - move to 03:02:863 - or add note on 03:02:863 -
03:06:032 (143) - move to 03:06:243 -
03:22:933 (175) - move to 03:23:144 - sounds better to me
03:19:658 (165,166) - i suggest you reverse these two note to make the rhythm easier to play
i think 03:40:891 (230,231,232,233,234,235) - this pattern is not suitable on this part try to follow 03:35:398 (213,214,215) -

[

Oni]

02:47:018 (135) - how about add k here, to follow the vocal also good here
01:28:427 (373) - ^
01:04:131 (255) - i think this note could change to k to make the difference with 01:07:300 (270,271,272) -
02:22:722 (20) - ^
01:08:990 (279) - this note is a bit superfluous for me ,remove it ?

That's all I can find
GL~

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,789 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2014-02-13T14:14:37+00:00

taiko_maniac1811 wrote:
[Hins' Muzukashii]
00:08:145 - add spinner here, delete the notes until 00:11:314 Uh, it just doesn't fit the song at all, what with those instruments rolling around... It feels really awkward IMO orz

qoot8123 wrote:
[ Muzukashii]
02:50:398 (97) - move to 02:50:609 - There's already a don too there...

I think I fixed everything else, although there's a few things that I already changed from 1811's mod, that makes some of qoot's suggestions invalid, so yeah lol

Thanks guys!

8)

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Also fixed everything on Heat's diff.

OnosakiHito

osu!taiko Paragon

6,813 posts

Joined March 2010

OnosakiHito 2014-02-22T21:27:35+00:00

Recheck time.

Muzukashii
Oh, please tick "widescreen support" in the song setup under "Design".

01:34:554 (263) - moving this to 01:34:342 and change as don would probably fit better here. Reason should be known I think. If you feel inconsistent with this pattern, you can just keep it as it is and add at 01:34:342 an additional don to have a dkdk pattern.
02:26:947 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36) - how about this: ddk d kkd d k k ?
03:04:764 (142,143,144,145) - Probably better to move these to 03:04:553 and add at 03:05:187 another don. Should follow in this way the song better.
03:06:032 (x) - After that, you can add another kat here.
03:45:539 - Moving this note to 03:45:750 as kat fits probably better when considering how the song is build up. We also have an higher sound here.

Here and there I would have some more points, but that should be enough if you ask me. The map improved a lot which I'm really happy about. Good job Hinsvar!

Oni is fine.

After that recall me a last time, and we should be ready to go for a bubble.

(yes, you may kudosu me, it took me some time to mod lol)

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,789 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2014-02-23T01:21:05+00:00

OnosakiHito wrote:
Muzukashii
Oh, please tick "widescreen support" in the song setup under "Design". Okay.

01:34:554 (263) - moving this to 01:34:342 and change as don would probably fit better here. Reason should be known I think. If you feel inconsistent with this pattern, you can just keep it as it is and add at 01:34:342 an additional don to have a dkdk pattern. dkdk'd instead. Feels more comfortable that way.
02:26:947 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36) - how about this: ddk d kkd d k k ? Sure!
03:04:764 (142,143,144,145) - Probably better to move these to 03:04:553 and add at 03:05:187 another don. Should follow in this way the song better. ^
03:06:032 (x) - After that, you can add another kat here. ^
03:45:539 - Moving this note to 03:45:750 as kat fits probably better when considering how the song is build up. We also have an higher sound here.

Here and there I would have some more points, but that should be enough if you ask me. The map improved a lot which I'm really happy about. Good job Hinsvar! Glad to hear that~

Thanks for the check!

Let's get this done, shall we?

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OnosakiHito

osu!taiko Paragon

6,813 posts

Joined March 2010

OnosakiHito 2014-02-23T01:50:53+00:00

Taikos are fine for the ranking, so giving a bubble at this point should be justified. Good luck!

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Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,789 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2014-02-23T01:53:04+00:00

I already said thanks in-game, but... thanks again!

Xinely also told me to express her gratefulness too

(She's away right now.)

mingmichael

1,720 posts

Joined May 2012

mingmichael 2014-02-23T08:23:18+00:00

yoshh!!! go rank~! /o/

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Oyatsu 2014-02-23T08:56:13+00:00

Finally, Xinely ^^
Go! Go!

HeatKai

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HeatKai 2014-02-28T09:50:34+00:00

KSHR SENPAI NOTICE THIS MAP ONEGAI
edit: BEATOFIKE SENPAI NOTICE THIS MAP ONEGAI

BeatofIke

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Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2014-03-02T07:08:49+00:00

HeatKai wrote:
BEATOFIKE SENPAI NOTICE THIS MAP ONEGAI

uguu ;w

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2014-03-02T07:32:01+00:00

HeatKai wrote:
BEATOFIKE SENPAI NOTICE THIS MAP ONEGAI

~~...I must be so bored lol~~

KSHR

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Joined July 2010

KSHR 2014-03-02T16:38:49+00:00

HeatKai wrote:
KSHR SENPAI NOTICE THIS MAP ONEGAI

uguu ;w

happy623

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happy623 2014-03-03T18:08:17+00:00

\o/ go rank

moonlightleaf

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moonlightleaf 2014-03-12T05:38:20+00:00

童年啊好怀念（

star~

go rank ^^/

Kytoxid

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Kytoxid 2014-03-20T01:35:43+00:00

Clearin' out those old bubbles...yep, there's another Xinely map in the pile.

[Hard Collab]

- I like the styling on the mapper names, thought that was cute. xD
- The name fade-out into the break occurs a bit early; wouldn't it be better to start the fade-out when the last note is hit?

00:37:934 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - Thought the transition from the slider to the stream was a bit hard to catch for a Hard diff; it might be better the other way around, a stream that leads into a kick slider, so the player doesn't have to start the stream on the awkward finger (for single-tappers, at least).
01:57:370 (1,2,3,1) - I think it would be better to regularly space 1-2-3 since it's not really that strong in that section, and it would add emphasis to the 3-1 jump.
02:48:074 (1) - I wish you did something more exciting in the guitar solo, but I guess it's only a Hard.

03:20:187 - How about putting Oyatsu's name entrance here instead? It's blocked by the spinner right now, so putting in here would have more impact in the animation.
03:29:482 (2,3,1) - I'd separate 3-1 a bit more, otherwise the spacing is a bit dodgy considering the gaps in time aren't consistent. I would maybe even consider a jump here.
03:53:356 (5,6,7,8,1) - I liked your creative use of rhythms throughout your entire part. Had a lot of fun on them. xD

[Normal]

00:09:201 (4,5,1,2) - There isn't really anything here to map; maybe replace with a spinner ending 00:11:314?
01:53:990 (2) - I felt like this played better extended 1/2. YMMV.

Fun rhythms.

[Easy]

00:09:201 (3,4,1,2) - Same as Normal.

[Taiko Diffs]

Not an expert on this, but Muzu feels a bit easier than a typical Muzu? Oni was a bit easier too, but not by as much. Maybe I'm just getting better at Taiko despite not playing it in forever.

Pretty good overall. Give me a shout after you've looked at this.

Xinely

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Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

Xinely 2014-03-20T05:06:54+00:00

Kytoxid wrote:
Clearin' out those old bubbles...yep, there's another Xinely map in the pile. kytoxid again desu www

[Hard Collab]

- I like the styling on the mapper names, thought that was cute. xD xD
- The name fade-out into the break occurs a bit early; wouldn't it be better to start the fade-out when the last note is hit? sure, fixed. and added little pulse on each last kiai times to make it become "moe" xD

00:37:934 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - Thought the transition from the slider to the stream was a bit hard to catch for a Hard diff; it might be better the other way around, a stream that leads into a kick slider, so the player doesn't have to start the stream on the awkward finger (for single-tappers, at least).
03:20:187 - How about putting Oyatsu's name entrance here instead? It's blocked by the spinner right now, so putting in here would have more impact in the animation. for this, i would to keep first since this diff can be played on taiko and ctb too which able to see Oyatsu's name here

[Normal]

00:09:201 (4,5,1,2) - There isn't really anything here to map; maybe replace with a spinner ending 00:11:314? sure, nice catch
01:53:990 (2) - I felt like this played better extended 1/2. YMMV.

Fun rhythms.

[Easy]

00:09:201 (3,4,1,2) - Same as Normal. fixed too but finish on 00:11:737 - since i prefer to avoid 1/1 space between spinner ending and next object after spin

[Taiko Diffs]

Not an expert on this, but Muzu feels a bit easier than a typical Muzu? Oni was a bit easier too, but not by as much. Maybe I'm just getting better at Taiko despite not playing it in forever. made muzu a bit easier because Heat made a relax Oni too. just want to make a good spread

Pretty good overall. Give me a shout after you've looked at this.

Thank you 4 mod Kytoxid >w<
~~waiting hinsvar and Oyatsu now~~
Updated

Last edited by Xinely 2014-03-20T10:58:27+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2014-03-20T10:46:59+00:00

Kytoxid wrote:
[Hard Collab]
01:57:370 (1,2,3,1) - I think it would be better to regularly space 1-2-3 since it's not really that strong in that section, and it would add emphasis to the 3-1 jump. Done.
02:48:074 (1) - I wish you did something more exciting in the guitar solo, but I guess it's only a Hard. ):

Thanks for modding!

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Oyatsu

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Joined December 2012

Oyatsu 2014-03-20T10:54:33+00:00

Kytoxid wrote:
03:29:482 (2,3,1) - I'd separate 3-1 a bit more, otherwise the spacing is a bit dodgy considering the gaps in time aren't consistent. I would maybe even consider a jump here. fixed
03:53:356 (5,6,7,8,1) - I liked your creative use of rhythms throughout your entire part. Had a lot of fun on them. xD So this is a comment? =w=

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