Marie - Clover Day's · forum

Lecana

253 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Lecana 2014-02-15T06:40:44+00:00

MP3 change

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2014-02-15T07:10:37+00:00

offset check

1606 try this.

Lecana

253 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Lecana 2014-02-15T07:11:53+00:00

Satellite wrote:
offset check

1606 try this.

thnak you.
助かりました！！

litoluna

1,073 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2014-02-15T07:11:54+00:00

ai sinku so- toxu-

Lecana

253 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Lecana 2014-02-15T07:16:17+00:00

litoluna wrote:
ai sinku so- toxu-

yes yes~

Lecana

253 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Lecana 2014-02-15T07:41:28+00:00

sorry miss ;o;

Naryuga

782 posts

Joined October 2010

Naryuga 2014-02-15T15:20:15+00:00

Satellite wrote:
litoluna and Naryuga should get married.

litoluna is my kawaii sweet lady <3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1337825

Normal つくりました！ offset1606になってるはず・・・ちゃんと確かめたはず・・・
http://puu.sh/6X5E5.osu

Lecana

253 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Lecana 2014-02-15T17:00:51+00:00

Naryuga wrote:
Satellite wrote:
litoluna and Naryuga should get married.
litoluna is my kawaii sweet lady <3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1337825

Normal つくりました！ offset1606になってるはず・・・ちゃんと確かめたはず・・・
http://puu.sh/6X5E5.osu

Naryugaさんありがとうございます！！
アップデートしましたー。

litoluna

1,073 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2014-02-16T05:47:47+00:00

Easy diffできました！

http://puu.sh/6XZrU.zip

Lecana

253 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Lecana 2014-02-16T07:03:07+00:00

litoluna wrote:
Easy diffできました！

http://puu.sh/6XZrU.zip

litolunaちゃんありがとう！
アップデートしましたー。

Natteke desu

2,487 posts

Joined August 2012

Natteke desu 2014-02-16T11:47:41+00:00

soz but it's looks like i can't check it right now, so i'll come back tomorrow
star for now.

[Easy]
00:18:658 (3) - try to add softfinish
00:31:290 (3) - check ds here
01:14:869 (1,2) - ^

[Hard]
01:19:921 (1) - softfinish on head?
01:32:869 (2,4) - try to delite claps on second tick
01:52:448 (5) - drumfinish

Well that's all. Pretty cool stuff guys, good luck!

Last edited by Natteke desu 2014-02-17T10:47:41+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Satellite

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Joined June 2012

Satellite 2014-02-16T18:07:32+00:00

>>EvilElvisV2

thanks star ~ :3
okay, thank check

Sylith

722 posts

Joined September 2012

Sylith 2014-02-17T15:59:42+00:00

omg your mapset is done is 2 days?

so pro o.o

I think you should start to gather mods without me!

I'll try to map this one after my trip

sorry ;-;

Lecana

253 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Lecana 2014-02-17T18:00:10+00:00

sKZy wrote:
omg your mapset is done is 2 days?

so pro o.o

I think you should start to gather mods without me!

I'll try to map this one after my trip

sorry ;-;

cute<3
ok ok~
so,my pace~ my pace~:3

litoluna

1,073 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2014-02-18T01:36:41+00:00

@EvilElvisV2

EvilElvisV2 wrote:
soz but it's looks like i can't check it right now, so i'll come back tomorrow
star for now.

[Easy]
00:18:658 (3) - try to add softfinish
I think whistle is better
00:31:290 (3) - check ds here
fixed
01:14:869 (1,2) - ^
fixed
Well that's all. Pretty cool stuff guys, good luck!

thanks! EvilElvisV2~

学校じゃpuush使えなかったTAT

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Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2014-02-18T08:26:37+00:00

EvilElvisV2 wrote:
soz but it's looks like i can't check it right now, so i'll come back tomorrow
star for now.

[Hard]
01:19:921 (1) - softfinish on head? Fix
01:32:869 (2,4) - try to delite claps on second tick Fix
01:52:448 (5) - drumfinish sorry kept ;w;

Well that's all. Pretty cool stuff guys, good luck!

thanks for modding and star :3

http://puu.sh/70IW5.zip

CakiP

384 posts

Joined February 2012

CakiP 2014-02-22T21:50:41+00:00

hey! M4M (๑•﹏•)

[General]
Guestさんの名前をtagに追加してあげましょう!!

[Easy]
00:32:553 (1,1) - 時間差はありますが、Easy diffでのこの重ね方はあんまりよろしくないように思えます。
01:26:079 (2) - Easy diffでのこの音取りは少し難しいように感じます。音があるのは分かりますが、もう少し簡単な音取りにしてあげたほうが初心者にも優しくなると思います~
01:33:500 - add note? 01:34:763 (3) - ここで同じ音をとっているので、こちらも音をとったほうが自然なように感じます!
01:51:500 (3) - スライダーのあとにスピンがあるので、もう少し内側に配置してあげると、初心者がスムーズにスピンに入ることができると思います。
00:21:816 (1) - ~00:40:763 (2) - ここまで音がさびしいなとおもったので曲に合わせてWhistleを追加してあげても良いかなと思いました。またボリュームを低くして強い音にfinishを追加してあげてもいいかもです。ここのパートはさてらいとさんのHard diffがすごくうまく音付けしていたので、それを参考にしてみるといいかも!

全体的に強いピアノの音があるところにWhistleを追加してもいいと思いました。それによりほかのdiffと比べたらちょっとwhistleが少ないように感じました。
ですがそれぞれスタイルがあると思うので、すこしでも合わないと思ったら今のままでも大丈夫だと思います･･･!
(Modしてるときにpuushが使えなくて、画像がひとつもありません。文章だけの伝わりにくいmodになってしまい、申し訳ないデス・・・

)

[Normal]
HP-1?

00:16:448 (4) - 00:15:184 (2) - このスライダーをつかってblanketさせると見た目がよくなります!
00:37:606 (2) - スライダーの最初がどこの音をフォローしているのか分かりませんでした。もし後ろのピアノの音をフォローしているのであれば、こんな音取りにしてみはどうでしょう~?

img

00:41:395 (2) - スライダーの始点にピアノの音があるので、終点ではなく始点にwhistleを追加してみてはどうでしょう？
00:47:079 (1) - スライダーの角度を変えたほうがAIMがスムーズになると思います。00:48:184 (6) - をコピーして使い、こんな風にしてみては？

img

01:21:027 (2,3) - good

01:27:816 (1,2) - スライダーひとつにして音をまとめちゃってもいいかもです。
01:41:237 - add noteしてもいいかも! 01:41:395 (3) - このスライダーの始点にあるfinishも際立つと思います!
01:52:448 (4,1) - Normal diffですし、もう少し内側において最後のスピナーに入りやすくしてあげるといいかもです。

[Hard]
01:21:816 (3) - ひとつのスライダーに音をまとめないで、スライダーとnote1つに分けて音取りしたほうが、たたいていて気持ちがよかったです!　一度試してみてください~
01:32:237 - ボリューム90%のfinishはちょっとうるさいかも・・・。ここは音が目立ちすぎてるように思えました。

(こちらもmod中にpuushが使えなくて画像がないです。ごめんなさい

)

[Insane]
00:51:816 (4) - 強いジャンプの音ではないと思うけど、すこし飛びすぎかな・・・？
01:05:395 (3,4,1,2) - ボーカルに合わせて音をとってるのだと思うのですが、声の伸びている01:05:632 - ここまでしっかりとりたいとおもいました。ひとつの音取りの例ですが、こんな風にしてみはどうでしょう？

img

01:11:079 (3,4) - ピアノの音をフォローしてると思うのですが、前の01:11:079 (3) - のスライダーではピアノの音が始点にきてるのに対し、01:11:395 (4) - のスライダーでは終点で音をとっているのが気になりました。統一性を出すためにも音をとる箇所を統一させてみてはどうでしょう？
01:18:027 (3) - 初見のときにここのnoteがすごく見づらかったです。特にこだわりがなければ01:17:395 (1) - のスライダーの始点ではなく終点においてみてください。
01:24:579 - ここにそこまで強い音がないと思うので、三連打じゃなくてもいい気がします。最初にプレイしたときに詰まっちゃいましたT^T
01:25:763 (3,4) - ここだけ、いきなりスペーシングが1.0になっており窮屈に感じました。ほかのところと同じように1.2~1.3あたりで置いてみてはどうでしょう？ジャンプから気持ちよくAIMができると思います。
01:44:869 (7) - ここも01:44:079 (4,6) - これとおなじように始点を01:44:395 (5) - ここにあわせてみてはどうでしょう？統一感が出ると思います。

That's all~.
Good luck! (･◡‹ )/

(すこし駆け足でmodしたのでミスがたくさんあるかもです・・・。分からないことがあれば聞いてください。)

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2014-02-23T18:08:39+00:00

CakiP wrote:
hey! M4M (๑•﹏•)

[General]
Guestさんの名前をtagに追加してあげましょう!!
Lecanaさんにお任せします

[Hard]
01:21:816 (3) - ひとつのスライダーに音をまとめないで、スライダーとnote1つに分けて音取りしたほうが、たたいていて気持ちがよかったです!　一度試してみてください~
確かに一理あります・・・が、ちょっと難しくなっちゃうのでkeepさせてもらいます！
01:32:237 - ボリューム90%のfinishはちょっとうるさいかも・・・。ここは音が目立ちすぎてるように思えました。
もう数回指摘いただくと変更を考えて見ます・・・私的にはちょうどいい感じ・・・！

(こちらもmod中にpuushが使えなくて画像がないです。ごめんなさい )

That's all~.
Good luck! (･◡‹ )/

(すこし駆け足でmodしたのでミスがたくさんあるかもです・・・。分からないことがあれば聞いてください。)

thanks for modding~

litoluna

1,073 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2014-02-24T05:04:06+00:00

@CakiP

CakiP wrote:
hey! M4M (๑•﹏•)

[General]
Guestさんの名前をtagに追加してあげましょう!!

[Easy]
00:32:553 (1,1) - 時間差はありますが、Easy diffでのこの重ね方はあんまりよろしくないように思えます。
変えました~
01:26:079 (2) - Easy diffでのこの音取りは少し難しいように感じます。音があるのは分かりますが、もう少し簡単な音取りにしてあげたほうが初心者にも優しくなると思います~
他にfitする音取りが思いつかなかったのでここは保留で。
01:33:500 - add note? 01:34:763 (3) - ここで同じ音をとっているので、こちらも音をとったほうが自然なように感じます!
ok
01:51:500 (3) - スライダーのあとにスピンがあるので、もう少し内側に配置してあげると、初心者がスムーズにスピンに入ることができると思います。
今のままでも十分真ん中よりだとおもうのでここはこのままで！
00:21:816 (1) - ~00:40:763 (2) - ここまで音がさびしいなとおもったので曲に合わせてWhistleを追加してあげても良いかなと思いました。またボリュームを低くして強い音にfinishを追加してあげてもいいかもです。ここのパートはさてらいとさんのHard diffがすごくうまく音付けしていたので、それを参考にしてみるといいかも!
Whistle追加しました！

全体的に強いピアノの音があるところにWhistleを追加してもいいと思いました。それによりほかのdiffと比べたらちょっとwhistleが少ないように感じました。
ですがそれぞれスタイルがあると思うので、すこしでも合わないと思ったら今のままでも大丈夫だと思います･･･!
(Modしてるときにpuushが使えなくて、画像がひとつもありません。文章だけの伝わりにくいmodになってしまい、申し訳ないデス・・・ )

That's all~.
Good luck! (･◡‹ )/

(すこし駆け足でmodしたのでミスがたくさんあるかもです・・・。分からないことがあれば聞いてください。)

CakiPさんありがとうございました!

http://puu.sh/78qTd.zip

Naryuga

782 posts

Joined October 2010

Naryuga 2014-02-26T03:39:39+00:00

CakiP wrote:
hey! M4M (๑•﹏•)

[General]
Guestさんの名前をtagに追加してあげましょう!!
- Lecanaさんに丸投げします

[Normal]
HP-1? - ok

00:16:448 (4) - 00:15:184 (2) - このスライダーをつかってblanketさせると見た目がよくなります! - もう少しそれ意識して置きなおしました
00:37:606 (2) - スライダーの最初がどこの音をフォローしているのか分かりませんでした。もし後ろのピアノの音をフォローしているのであれば、こんな音取りにしてみはどうでしょう~?　- o nice!!
img
00:41:395 (2) - スライダーの始点にピアノの音があるので、終点ではなく始点にwhistleを追加してみてはどうでしょう？ - 始点につけました、後ろも合ってると思うので両方につけてみます
00:47:079 (1) - スライダーの角度を変えたほうがAIMがスムーズになると思います。00:48:184 (6) - をコピーして使い、こんな風にしてみては？　- その発想はなかった... 採用します!
img
01:21:027 (2,3) - good - yey >w<
01:27:816 (1,2) - スライダーひとつにして音をまとめちゃってもいいかもです。 - ok
01:41:237 - add noteしてもいいかも! 01:41:395 (3) - このスライダーの始点にあるfinishも際立つと思います!　- 長いスライダーの間にnotesを詰めたくないのと、ボーカルをフォローできてるのでじゅうぶんだとおもいます
01:52:448 (4,1) - Normal diffですし、もう少し内側において最後のスピナーに入りやすくしてあげるといいかもです。 - いったん保留で... スピンの長さが十分にあるので特に問題があるようには感じません、次指摘されたら変えるかもですが

That's all~.
Good luck! (･◡‹ )/

(すこし駆け足でmodしたのでミスがたくさんあるかもです・・・。分からないことがあれば聞いてください。)

thanks!!
http://puu.sh/7aMdo.osu

Lecana

253 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Lecana 2014-02-27T06:08:38+00:00

CakiP wrote:
hey! M4M (๑•﹏•)

[General]
Guestさんの名前をtagに追加してあげましょう!!
yea!

[Insane]
00:51:816 (4) - 強いジャンプの音ではないと思うけど、すこし飛びすぎかな・・・？
すいません、キープで...
01:05:395 (3,4,1,2) - ボーカルに合わせて音をとってるのだと思うのですが、声の伸びている01:05:632 - ここまでしっかりとりたいとおもいました。ひとつの音取りの例ですが、こんな風にしてみはどうでしょう？
okです :3
img
01:11:079 (3,4) - ピアノの音をフォローしてると思うのですが、前の01:11:079 (3) - のスライダーではピアノの音が始点にきてるのに対し、01:11:395 (4) - のスライダーでは終点で音をとっているのが気になりました。統一性を出すためにも音をとる箇所を統一させてみてはどうでしょう？
ここから変えてるので(T^T)すいません
01:18:027 (3) - 初見のときにここのnoteがすごく見づらかったです。特にこだわりがなければ01:17:395 (1) - のスライダーの始点ではなく終点においてみてください。
了解です:3
01:24:579 - ここにそこまで強い音がないと思うので、三連打じゃなくてもいい気がします。最初にプレイしたときに詰まっちゃいましたT^T
はい :3
01:25:763 (3,4) - ここだけ、いきなりスペーシングが1.0になっており窮屈に感じました。ほかのところと同じように1.2~1.3あたりで置いてみてはどうでしょう？ジャンプから気持ちよくAIMができると思います。
変更しました
01:44:869 (7) - ここも01:44:079 (4,6) - これとおなじように始点を01:44:395 (5) - ここにあわせてみてはどうでしょう？統一感が出ると思います。
01:44:869 (7) - ここの終点を01:45:184 (1) - ここの終点に合わせているのでkeepで...

That's all~.
Good luck! (･◡‹ )/

(すこし駆け足でmodしたのでミスがたくさんあるかもです・・・。分からないことがあれば聞いてください。)

modありがとうございました :3
いろいろ修正させていただきました\( o.o)/

kintyan

150 posts

Joined September 2010

kintyan 2014-03-03T01:28:50+00:00

hi~
[General]
BG sizeを1024*768に
mp3の日本語のプロパティ情報を削除
widescreen supportを全てのdiffで外して下さい
tagにALcot 10th Anniversary visual novel これらを追加してください

offsetですが、1606ではなくて1590じゃないですか？
1606じゃ遅すぎると思います

Lecana

253 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Lecana 2014-03-04T08:24:39+00:00

Sheryl wrote:
hi~
[General]
BG sizeを1024*768に
mp3の日本語のプロパティ情報を削除
widescreen supportを全てのdiffで外して下さい
tagにALcot 10th Anniversary visual novel これらを追加してください

offsetですが、1606ではなくて1590じゃないですか？
1606じゃ遅すぎると思います
了解しました!

ありがとうございました。変更させていただきました。

terametis

1,140 posts

Joined April 2009

terametis 2014-03-07T17:37:10+00:00

request by satellite

Black = suggestion.　 Blue = suggetion, but important thing for me. Red = Error Element.
These are all suggestions. so you can reject them without reason.

[Insane]

Hitsound

00:14:695 (2) - パターン的にリバースアローじゃなくてスライダーの終わりのとこにwhistleです。

General

00:20:221 (5) - なんかこう、パートの節目の最後のfinishだから、00:19:274 (1) - と00:19:747 (3) - 00:20:221 (5) - のfinishついてる3つ全部飛ばしたいです
具体的にいうとx256,y316あたりとかどうですか！！！

00:36:168 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - ここらへんちょっと綺麗さよりもフローの悪さが目立つような感じがしたので、適当に変えてみたらどうでしょうか。

順番かえたり。10は6にstackする感じ

がっつりかえたり

188,108,36168,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,36326,6,0,P|132:200|176:200,1,63.7500024318696,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,48,36642,2,0,P|288:49|257:57,1,63.7500024318696,0|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,220,36958,6,0,P|412:157|400:95,1,127.500004863739,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,304,37432,2,0,P|362:327|426:326,1,127.500004863739,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,176,37905,1,2,0:1:0:0:

00:39:642 (2) - おそらく00:39:800 (3,4,5,6,7) - がこだわりの配置だとおもうのですが、ならいっそのことこのnote消しちゃったらどうでしょう。引き立つと思います！
00:47:063 (1,2) - このnoteをクルって感じにしたらクルクルッてかんじになって気持ちよさそう(あいまい)
SPOILER
00:52:432 (2,3,4,5) - フロー悪いと思います。
01:08:537 (1,2) - 　01:07:747 (2,3)のhitsoundでとどくってvocalを強調しちゃってるので、この音取りだと01:09:011 (2) - これがすっごい浮いて聞こえます。

01:25:747 (2,3,1,2) - 完全に好みですがこんなのどうですか！！　このままでもぜんぜん問題ないと思います

SPOILER

344,168,85274,1,8,0:0:0:0:
191,28,85432,6,0,L|214:124,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,260,85747,1,8,3:0:0:0:
344,168,85905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,260,86063,6,0,P|109:227|106:153,1,170,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,168,86537,2,0,L|428:177,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

stackとか見た目の綺麗さにこだわって(私にとって)flowが若干悪い場所がいくつかあるように感じます。
上の指摘には書きませんでしたが、ン・・・？って思ったところだけあげておきます。

01:10:116 (6,7,1) -
01:20:221 (2,3,4,5,6) -
01:21:800 (3,4,5,6,1) -
01:30:958 (4,1,2,3,4) -

[Hard]

Hitsound

00:19:590 (2) - パターン的にはwhistle
00:20:063 (4) - ^
01:16:432 (1) - 後ろの音的には終わりにclap追加のようなきがするけどはたしてどっちのほうがプレイしやすいのどろうか
01:20:853 (3) - clap
01:45:484 (2) - 01:42:958 (2) - とか01:48:011 (2) - はclapになってるけど好み

General

00:23:379 (5) - 音取りちょっと余計かなあってかんじます。00:32:537 (2,3,1) - みたいにボーカルでバシッてとめたほうがカッコいいきがする
01:47:063 (4) - 後ろの連打が1/3だからちょっと変に聞こえるかなあ・・・　いろいろ音取り検討してみてほしいです。　配置も音取りもこのままにするんであったら、01:47:379 (5) - のtickのclap削除したほうがもうちょっとマトモにきこえる気はする

[Normal]

General

00:18:642 (3) - 音取りもフローも曲にあっていますが、Normalという難易度として許容できる音取りではないと感じます。修正するかはもちろんmapperの裁量ですが、おそらく今後も同じ指摘が出てくると思うので、一意見として、修正を押したということを覚えておいてもらいたいです。
00:37:432 (2,3) - ピアノの音をフォローしているのだと思いますが、全体的に1/1のリズムか、vocalに従って配置しているので、ここでピアノの音に従った1/2の配置をするのは低難易度としてオススメしません。
01:47:063 (4) - 00:18:642 (3)と同じ指摘

[Easy]
awesome diff
Hitsound

00:52:116 (1) - リバースアローの音外れてます

good luck<3

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2014-03-07T18:55:16+00:00

terametis wrote:
request by satellite

Black = suggestion.　 Blue = suggetion, but important thing for me. Red = Error Element.
These are all suggestions. so you can reject them without reason.

[Hard]

Hitsound
00:19:590 (2) - パターン的にはwhistle
00:20:063 (4) - ^
01:16:432 (1) - 後ろの音的には終わりにclap追加のようなきがするけどはたしてどっちのほうがプレイしやすいのどろうか
01:20:853 (3) - clap
01:45:484 (2) - 01:42:958 (2) - とか01:48:011 (2) - はclapになってるけど好み
All Fixed

General
00:23:379 (5) - 音取りちょっと余計かなあってかんじます。00:32:537 (2,3,1) - みたいにボーカルでバシッてとめたほうがカッコいいきがする
たしかに、次指摘頂いたら変えます！
01:47:063 (4) - 後ろの連打が1/3だからちょっと変に聞こえるかなあ・・・　いろいろ音取り検討してみてほしいです。　配置も音取りもこのままにするんであったら、01:47:379 (5) - のtickのclap削除したほうがもうちょっとマトモにきこえる気はする
上と同じです！
good luck<3

thanks for modding~~

litoluna

1,073 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2014-03-08T02:54:16+00:00

@terametis

terametis wrote:
request by satellite

Black = suggestion.　 Blue = suggetion, but important thing for me. Red = Error Element.
These are all suggestions. so you can reject them without reason.

[Easy]
awesome diff
Hitsound
00:52:116 (1) - リバースアローの音外れてます
付けました!

good luck<3

terametisさんありがとうございました!

Lecana

253 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Lecana 2014-03-09T08:09:31+00:00

terametis wrote:
request by satellite

Black = suggestion.　 Blue = suggetion, but important thing for me. Red = Error Element.
These are all suggestions. so you can reject them without reason.

[Insane]

Hitsound
00:14:695 (2) - パターン的にリバースアローじゃなくてスライダーの終わりのとこにwhistleです。
了解です｡
General
00:20:221 (5) - なんかこう、パートの節目の最後のfinishだから、00:19:274 (1) - と00:19:747 (3) - 00:20:221 (5) - のfinishついてる3つ全部飛ばしたいです
具体的にいうとx256,y316あたりとかどうですか！！！
了解です｡
00:36:168 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - ここらへんちょっと綺麗さよりもフローの悪さが目立つような感じがしたので、適当に変えてみたらどうでしょうか。

順番かえたり。10は6にstackする感じ
おお！ぜひ！
がっつりかえたり
188,108,36168,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,36326,6,0,P|132:200|176:200,1,63.7500024318696,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,48,36642,2,0,P|288:49|257:57,1,63.7500024318696,0|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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codeまで用意していただいて申し訳ないですが
順番変えのほうの配置がとても気に入ったのでそちらを使わせていただきました。
00:39:642 (2) - おそらく00:39:800 (3,4,5,6,7) - がこだわりの配置だとおもうのですが、ならいっそのことこのnote消しちゃったらどうでしょう。引き立つと思います！
了解です。
00:47:063 (1,2) - このnoteをクルって感じにしたらクルクルッてかんじになって気持ちよさそう(あいまい)
SPOILER
了解です。
00:52:432 (2,3,4,5) - フロー悪いと思います。
変更しました。
01:08:537 (1,2) - 　01:07:747 (2,3)のhitsoundでとどくってvocalを強調しちゃってるので、この音取りだと01:09:011 (2) - これがすっごい浮いて聞こえます。
変更しました。
01:25:747 (2,3,1,2) - 完全に好みですがこんなのどうですか！！　このままでもぜんぜん問題ないと思います
SPOILER
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344,168,85905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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344,168,86537,2,0,L|428:177,1,85,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
提案を元にいろいろ修正させていただきました！
ありがとうございます。

stackとか見た目の綺麗さにこだわって(私にとって)flowが若干悪い場所がいくつかあるように感じます。
上の指摘には書きませんでしたが、ン・・・？って思ったところだけあげておきます。
01:10:116 (6,7,1) -
keepで..
01:20:221 (2,3,4,5,6) -
01:21:800 (3,4,5,6,1) -
上記2つは全体的に修正しました。
01:30:958 (4,1,2,3,4) -
keepで..

good luck<3

modありがとうございました！
改善点が多く見つかって
よりよくできたように感じます。

Erisan

375 posts

Joined August 2011

Erisan 2014-03-09T18:55:18+00:00

神譜面！
支援！

目指せRanked!

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2014-03-09T22:38:42+00:00

eLy wrote:
神譜面！
支援！

目指せRanked!

thanks for star support :3

Lecana

253 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Lecana 2014-03-10T00:10:47+00:00

eLy wrote:
神譜面！
支援！

目指せRanked!

thanks~

Sylith

722 posts

Joined September 2012

Sylith 2014-03-10T00:53:02+00:00

done!

sorry I'm realllllllllllly late ;-;

~~http://puu.sh/7pAC5.zip~~ http://puu.sh/7q27E.zip

I'll modify some hitsounds on weekends... no time to do it now

sry

Last edited by Sylith 2014-03-10T11:29:47+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Naryuga

782 posts

Joined October 2010

Naryuga 2014-03-10T01:37:15+00:00

terametis wrote:
request by satellite

Black = suggestion.　 Blue = suggetion, but important thing for me. Red = Error Element.
These are all suggestions. so you can reject them without reason.

[Normal]

General
00:18:642 (3) - 音取りもフローも曲にあっていますが、Normalという難易度として許容できる音取りではないと感じます。修正するかはもちろんmapperの裁量ですが、おそらく今後も同じ指摘が出てくると思うので、一意見として、修正を押したということを覚えておいてもらいたいです。 - やはりリズムを重視させたいので、今後ほかの人に同じことを言われるまでいったんそのままにさせていただきます。
00:37:432 (2,3) - ピアノの音をフォローしているのだと思いますが、全体的に1/1のリズムか、vocalに従って配置しているので、ここでピアノの音に従った1/2の配置をするのは低難易度としてオススメしません。　- なるほど... もっと単純にremapしました
01:47:063 (4) - 00:18:642 (3)と同じ指摘

good luck<3

Thanks <3
http://puu.sh/7pDmH.osu

11t

Elite Storyboarder

299 posts

Joined November 2012

11t 2014-03-11T07:34:48+00:00

[Insane]

Hitsounds: I think they're too loud, especially from 00:21:800 to 01:17:379. The soft-hitnormal really sounds too loud here, compared to the softness of the music. Try reducing hitsound volume by 10% in these sections.

00:18:642 (4) - Increase hitsound volume by 10% on the slider start. The drum-hitclap isn't very noticeable at the moment.
00:20:300 (1) - Having just a loud soft-hitnormal on the end of this spinner sounds really weird. A regular soft-hitnormal isn't really a good hitsound to use to close out a section. Either reduce volume to 5% here, or add a Finish. I think this will work better.
00:41:695 (3) - drum-hitfinish fits the bass here, I think. Also consider drum-hitwhistle for the open hihat.
00:42:011 - Even though you're using a custom soft-hitwhistle, I think that you should continue to use default soft-hitwhistles in this section to emphasize the vocals, like in the previous sections. I think this would work especially well for the last notes of your triples. Default soft-hitwhistles would sound great on things like 00:50:853 (1) and 00:51:326 (2) and 00:56:853 (6) and 00:57:484 (2) etc.
01:18:326 (5,1) - This is okay, but there is a really really strong accent at 01:18:484 that a slider end doesn't properly emphasize, I think. How about something like this?

This skips over 01:18:642 which is fine because there's really nothing going on in the music at that time anyway. I think that this could work extremely well if you exaggerate the spacing between (5) and (6) in the image, and then stack pink (1) on top of manila (6).
Possible arrangement
01:22:432 (1,2) - I'm not sure I like this. The gap at 01:22:432 (1,2) feels out-of-place, mostly because the music at 01:23:063 (2) isn't strong enough for the end of a 1/1 gap. How about changing 01:22:432 (1) to 3/4, and adding a 1/2 slider afterwards, like this?

I think that this arrangement of sliders here fits the strings notes at 01:22:432 and 01:22:747 in the music.
01:52:905 (1) - Use default soft-hitwhistle for the end of this spinner (your custom normal-hitwhistle).

Overall, this is a fun map! It reminds me a bit of cRyo's maps~

[Sylith's Insane]

Sylithhhhhhhhh hi~

01:14:537 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - wow ♥
01:22:432 (1,2,3) - Sort of like with Lecana's Insane, I don't like how the 1/1 gap feels here. See my mod of Insane above (second to last bullet point) for a possible suggestion.
01:32:221 (1,2) - Consider adding Claps on the starts of these two sliders. Better feedback for the player, I think.
01:37:432 (3) - drum-hitfinish might fit better here, instead of the custom soft-hitwhistle.
01:38:063 - I think this would work better if there was a note here. The vocals start here and the gap sort of feels weird because of that.
01:51:484 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - You totally knew modders would get angry about this w
It's sort of... a bit hard to read, isn't it? Why not just space this out as usual?
01:52:826 (1) - Geez, (:3[_____]
Silence the spinner end properly! 5% volume, and use a default soft-hitwhistle for it too.

This is a great map. How do you make maps like this, and then have no ranked maps? ;_;

[Gazel's Hard]

omg these greenlines

00:16:116 (5,6,1) - Wow, you don't see this every day in a Hard. This is risky, but I think it's really amazing here.
00:42:011 - I love your pause stacks throughout this section. They really help to keep the rhythm interesting.
00:48:800 (3) - Whistle on slider start. This gives better audio feedback to the player (which is important because of the jump), and it does fit the bass note here.
01:52:826 (1) - Default soft-hitwhistle works well on the end of this spinner.

I so wish I could make Hards like this ;_;

A lot of Hard difficulties nowadays are just distance-snapped versions of Insanes, but this one doesn't feel like that at all. You use jumps in a way that keep the patterns interesting to play through, but still fit the difficulty. Somehow you've made this map as fun as an Insane, while keeping the overall difficulty of the map appropriate for the Hard level. This is just an amazing map, great job!

[Naryuga's Normal]

01:16:432 (3) - New combo?
01:52:905 (1) - Yay you used a whistle. Though maybe you should also decrease the volume here to 5% as well?

No real issues here; this looks like a solid Normal, good job!

[litoluna's Easy]

Tick Rate: Decrease to 1. Right now every slider has like, 3 ticks and it's sort of weird. Plus the slidertick sounds become a bit distracting.

00:09:168 (1) - Decrease the volume on the spinner end. It's too loud at the moment.
00:56:221 (1,2) - Maybe fix this blanket? I can't tell if this is on purpose though, since you were so neat with your other blankets before.
01:51:168 (2,3) - eeeeeeeee
After all of those neat blankets in this map, this sort of feels... disturbing. Just slightly. It's probably just me though.

No real issues here; this Easy plays fine and without problems, good job!

[Closing]
Nice set! You had a guest mapper for every difficulty so there's a lot of diversity in style here. Every map is well-designed and there aren't any major flaws with anything. Overall they're all playable and fun.

Naryuga

782 posts

Joined October 2010

Naryuga 2014-03-11T07:47:50+00:00

11t wrote:

[Naryuga's Normal]
01:16:432 (3) - New combo? - ok!
01:52:905 (1) - Yay you used a whistle. Though maybe you should also decrease the volume here to 5% as well? - nice idea, adjusted volume for this spinner.
No real issues here; this looks like a solid Normal, good job! - >w< I managed to make this diff solid, so I am happy to hear that

[Closing]
Nice set! You had a guest mapper for every difficulty so there's a lot of diversity in style here. Every map is well-designed and there aren't any major flaws with anything. Overall they're all playable and fun.

Thanks a lot

Update: http://puu.sh/7r8VS.osu

Leorda

4,416 posts

Joined June 2009

Leorda 2014-03-11T08:24:01+00:00

今日は～ゲイマッパー

[General]
* End kiai at 01:37:590.... because the chrous is end here?

[litoluna's Easy]
01:16:432 - I was expecting note here since the next slider was following vocal...

[Naryuga's Normal]
00:50:853 (3) - Remove whistle at tail slider? Finish+clap is loud enough imo
01:51:800 (3) - Because there a snare sound at music itself, add 2 repeating slider and snap the tail slider to blue tick? Like you do at 00:18:642 (3)?

[Gazel's Hard]
* More like Insane diff, but maybe just me....

01:30:958 (5,1,2) - Arrange the pattern like this to make circular flow? Your current one seems uncomfortable due to flow broken, but maybe just me.... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1407043
01:32:221 (1) - Why new combo? Just question?
01:48:168 (3) - Remove whistle at repeating slider?

[Sylith's Insane]
00:18:326 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat)
00:18:642 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat)
00:18:958 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat)
00:40:116 (3) - Remove whistle at sliderbody? It feels useless to me
01:52:826 (1) - Silence this spinner or do cresendo sound (high volume -> low volume) for this spinner? This spinner isn't good if the sound is too loud for ending....

頑張って！

Sylith

722 posts

Joined September 2012

Sylith 2014-03-11T10:16:55+00:00

11t wrote:

[Sylith's Insane]
Sylithhhhhhhhh hi~ - hey \o/
01:14:537 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - wow ♥ - <3 one of my favorite pattern in this map!

01:22:432 (1,2,3) - Sort of like with Lecana's Insane, I don't like how the 1/1 gap feels here. See my mod of Insane above (second to last bullet point) for a possible suggestion. - um I'll consider this during weekdays ;-; too hard to fix and I don't have enough time to do it now

01:32:221 (1,2) - Consider adding Claps on the starts of these two sliders. Better feedback for the player, I think. - <3

01:37:432 (3) - drum-hitfinish might fit better here, instead of the custom soft-hitwhistle. - great!

01:38:063 - I think this would work better if there was a note here. The vocals start here and the gap sort of feels weird because of that. - Done!

01:51:484 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - You totally knew modders would get angry about this w
It's sort of... a bit hard to read, isn't it? Why not just space this out as usual? ~~wanna kill 'em all duhuhuhuhu ヾ(´∀`*)ノ~~ ;-; I tried to make suitable pattern on here, but I failed ><; looking for better suggestion for here

01:52:826 (1) - Geez, (:3[_____]
Silence the spinner end properly! 5% volume, and use a default soft-hitwhistle for it too. - lazy (:3[_____] sorry lol
This is a great map. How do you make maps like this, and then have no ranked maps? ;_; - ;_; I am a troll mapper(super lazy yay)

[Closing]
Nice set! You had a guest mapper for every difficulty so there's a lot of diversity in style here. Every map is well-designed and there aren't any major flaws with anything. Overall they're all playable and fun.

thanks for your mod! :>

Leorda wrote:
今日は～ゲイマッパー

[Sylith's Insane]
00:18:326 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat)
00:18:642 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat)
00:18:958 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat)
00:40:116 (3) - Remove whistle at sliderbody? It feels useless to me - very nice! done :>
01:52:826 (1) - Silence this spinner or do cresendo sound (high volume -> low volume) for this spinner? This spinner isn't good if the sound is too loud for ending.... - Dx fixed

頑張って！

thanks for your mod! : ' )

SPOILER

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@lecana : plz add sylith on tag plz ><

iyasine

1,135 posts

Joined January 2012

iyasine 2014-03-11T13:31:39+00:00

れかなさん、guestのみなさんこんにちは～！mod requestありがとうございます

[litoluna's Easy]
■ 00:31:274 - 手前の赤線でピアノが鳴っているので、ここはwhistleからclapにしてRightから聴こえるスネアのリムショットに合わせたほうがいいと思います。
パターンも統一できるかと！

■ 00:56:221 (1) - ここもちょっとしたブランケットを作ってみてはいかがでしょうか？

img & code

300,140,56221,6,0,P|299:99|276:66,2,80,0|8|2,0:0|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:

■ 01:11:063 - ピアノ音強いのでsoftのwhistleが欲しいです！
良いリズム！良いデザイン！

[Naryuga's Normal]
■ 00:21:800 - slider中間のジーっていう音が気になるので、S → S:C3にしてみてはいかがでしょう？
■ 00:39:484 - ^
■ 01:52:905 (1) - BGMに合わせてVolumeをデクレッシェンドしてみませんか？Easy , Hard , Insaneを参考に！
素晴らしいhit sound =ω=

[Gazel's Hard]
■ 00:09:168 - ここの S を S:3に変えて、00:09:958 (3) - と00:10:274 (4) - のsliderのジーっていう音を消してみてはいかがでしょう？
■ 00:18:011 - クラッシュっぽい音に合わせてadd finish ?
■ 00:43:905 - add whistle ? 00:23:695 - ここと合わせる感じです。Drum sample set + whistleとかで表情を変えてあげてもいいかもしれませんね

■ 00:54:011 - ここもS:3 whistle (Vol50%くらい) 追加？
難しいけど表現豊かで楽しい新感覚Hard

[Insane]
■ 01:08:853 - Normal sample set をAutoに変えて、additionのほうをNormalにチェンジ？おそらくミスだと思われます！
■ 01:38:537 (3) - ピアノに合わせて addition Normal + whistle を追加？
■ 01:39:168 - ^
■ 01:51:642 (1) - ^
■ 01:39:642 - add whistle ?
良いアレンジ!!

[Sylith's Insane]
■ 01:39:484 - remove whistle
■ 01:39:642 - add whistle
■ 01:39:800 (4) - add clap
■ 01:41:063 (4) - whistle →　clap ?
■ 01:41:221 (5) - add Drum sample set + finish ?
■ 01:48:958 - add clap
■ 01:49:590 - ^
■ 01:50:537 - ^
■ 01:51:011 - add whistle
nice work Sylith ! o3o

以上です。全diff通してプレイしてみて目立ってなぞりにくかったり叩きにくかったりといった箇所がなかったので配置にはあまり触れませんでした！
これいい曲ですね、これからの季節にぴったりだと思います！桜が咲く頃くらいにrankedできるといいですね、応援しています！good luck ₍₍ (ง ˘ω˘ )ว ⁾⁾

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2014-03-11T14:41:20+00:00

11t wrote:

[Gazel's Hard]
omg these greenlines
00:16:116 (5,6,1) - Wow, you don't see this every day in a Hard. This is risky, but I think it's really amazing here.

00:42:011 - I love your pause stacks throughout this section. They really help to keep the rhythm interesting.

00:48:800 (3) - Whistle on slider start. This gives better audio feedback to the player (which is important because of the jump), and it does fit the bass note here. Nice idea fixed

01:52:826 (1) - Default soft-hitwhistle works well on the end of this spinner.
I so wish I could make Hards like this ;_; OK add~

A lot of Hard difficulties nowadays are just distance-snapped versions of Insanes, but this one doesn't feel like that at all. You use jumps in a way that keep the patterns interesting to play through, but still fit the difficulty. Somehow you've made this map as fun as an Insane, while keeping the overall difficulty of the map appropriate for the Hard level. This is just an amazing map, great job!

[Closing]
Nice set! You had a guest mapper for every difficulty so there's a lot of diversity in style here. Every map is well-designed and there aren't any major flaws with anything. Overall they're all playable and fun.

Leorda wrote:
今日は～ゲイマッパー

[General]
* End kiai at 01:37:590.... because the chrous is end here?

[Gazel's Hard]
* More like Insane diff, but maybe just me....

01:30:958 (5,1,2) - Arrange the pattern like this to make circular flow? Your current one seems uncomfortable due to flow broken, but maybe just me.... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1407043
01:32:221 (1) - Why new combo? Just question? For recovery
01:48:168 (3) - Remove whistle at repeating slider?

頑張って！

iyasine wrote:
れかなさん、guestのみなさんこんにちは～！mod requestありがとうございます

[Gazel's Hard]
■ 00:09:168 - ここの S を S:3に変えて、00:09:958 (3) - と00:10:274 (4) - のsliderのジーっていう音を消してみてはいかがでしょう？
■ 00:18:011 - クラッシュっぽい音に合わせてadd finish ?
■ 00:43:905 - add whistle ? 00:23:695 - ここと合わせる感じです。Drum sample set + whistleとかで表情を変えてあげてもいいかもしれませんね
■ 00:54:011 - ここもS:3 whistle (Vol50%くらい) 追加？
難しいけど表現豊かで楽しい新感覚Hard
All fixed

以上です。全diff通してプレイしてみて目立ってなぞりにくかったり叩きにくかったりといった箇所がなかったので配置にはあまり触れませんでした！
これいい曲ですね、これからの季節にぴったりだと思います！桜が咲く頃くらいにrankedできるといいですね、応援しています！good luck ₍₍ (ง ˘ω˘ )ว ⁾⁾

thanks for modding ! really helpful <3

code

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Marie.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 76271
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 8850,62376,67113
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Clover Day's
TitleUnicode:Clover Day's
Artist:Marie
ArtistUnicode:真理絵
Creator:Lecana
Version:Gazel's Hard
Source:Clover Days
Tags:Sylith Satellite Naryuga Dagger-Gazel litoluna sKZy eroge ALcot 10th Anniversary visual novel
BeatmapID:371175
BeatmapSetID:150422

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:2

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2,62421,66524
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litoluna

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Joined April 2011

litoluna 2014-03-11T15:43:25+00:00

@11t

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11t wrote:

[litoluna's Easy]
Tick Rate: Decrease to 1. Right now every slider has like, 3 ticks and it's sort of weird. Plus the slidertick sounds become a bit distracting.
keep it
00:09:168 (1) - Decrease the volume on the spinner end. It's too loud at the moment.
nice!fixed
00:56:221 (1,2) - Maybe fix this blanket? I can't tell if this is on purpose though, since you were so neat with your other blankets before.
ok!
01:51:168 (2,3) - eeeeeeeee
After all of those neat blankets in this map, this sort of feels... disturbing. Just slightly. It's probably just me though.
keep it.
No real issues here; this Easy plays fine and without problems, good job!
[Closing]
Nice set! You had a guest mapper for every difficulty so there's a lot of diversity in style here. Every map is well-designed and there aren't any major flaws with anything. Overall they're all playable and fun.

@Leorda

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Leorda wrote:
今日は～ゲイマッパー
~~Gay~~~~~

[General]
* End kiai at 01:37:590.... because the chrous is end here?

[litoluna's Easy]
01:16:432 - I was expecting note here since the next slider was following vocal...
I want to blank here

頑張って！

@iyasine

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iyasine wrote:
れかなさん、guestのみなさんこんにちは～！mod requestありがとうございます

[litoluna's Easy]
■ 00:31:274 - 手前の赤線でピアノが鳴っているので、ここはwhistleからclapにしてRightから聴こえるスネアのリムショットに合わせたほうがいいと思います。
パターンも統一できるかと！
確かに!!fixed!

■ 00:56:221 (1) - ここもちょっとしたブランケットを作ってみてはいかがでしょうか？
img & code
300,140,56221,6,0,P|299:99|276:66,2,80,0|8|2,0:0|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
codeありがとととととなおしました！
■ 01:11:063 - ピアノ音強いのでsoftのwhistleが欲しいです！
いれました！
良いリズム！良いデザイン！

以上です。全diff通してプレイしてみて目立ってなぞりにくかったり叩きにくかったりといった箇所がなかったので配置にはあまり触れませんでした！
これいい曲ですね、これからの季節にぴったりだと思います！桜が咲く頃くらいにrankedできるといいですね、応援しています！good luck ₍₍ (ง ˘ω˘ )ว ⁾⁾

thanks modding!!!!!!!
i was helpful

http://puu.sh/7rpxQ.zip

Rare

1,118 posts

Joined August 2010

Rare 2014-03-11T21:41:53+00:00

m4m with satellite. he was request your map.

[Easy]
00:16:747 (1) - you can blanket here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1408916
00:20:537 (3) - 344/172

[Normal]
01:09:168 (4,1,2) - you can more clean triangle

[Hard]
00:11:379 (5) - 1/6 is fit to music imo. you can try it.
00:34:432 (3) - try to end at 00:34:905 and 00:35:063 (4) - this slider end at 00:35:537
01:16:432 (1,2,3) - i like triplets. but you don't have to fix it.
01:24:326 (3,4) - i want to increase spacing. 420/60 is looks like good imo.
01:36:011 (4,1) - ^
01:41:853 i want triplets !! ex http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1408995
01:44:853 (4) - finish and clap are noisy a little. remove finish imo.
01:48:642 (4,1) - same as 01:24:326 (3,4) -
01:49:905 (5,1) - ^
01:52:432 (1) - hard to see lol i like it.

[insane]
00:11:379 (1) - same as 00:11:379 (5) - in Hard. 1/6 is fit to music imo~
00:13:905 - why did you use 1/2 slider? 00:16:432 (8,9,10,11,1) - is five stream. you can try set to stream ~
00:22:432 (1) - don't need NC
00:35:695 (5) - add NC because here is downbeat.
01:01:432 (2) - i want to follow the drum~ http://puu.sh/7rMOy.jpg
01:08:537 (1) - i don't need sample-set normal. is sounds like weird.
01:47:063 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - why don't follow 1/3 rhythm?

[Sylith]
00:17:221 (1) - remove NC
00:22:747 (3) - sounds like good that remove whistle.
00:28:590 (1) - remove NC

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