Hello~ you asked me for a mod via PM, so here it is
[General]
The size of your BG is weird http://puu.sh/3TzO6.jpg try this one! It's 1024x768.
[Rainbow's Insane]
This diff Looks really nice! Just some small suggestions to make it even better.
HP 9? Do you want to kill the Players?! Q__Q HP 8, please.
00:10:998 (7,8,9,10) - Try align this in a better line? Currently it's a bit curvy, which Looks bad in combination with the straight slider.
00:13:592 (7,1,2) - Something is wrong with this DS. Between 7 and 1 there should definetly be a bigger distance, because of the Little gap between the rhythm, otherwise it's quite hard to guess when you have to click. Try something like this? http://puu.sh/3TzXX.jpg (00:14:156 (2) - Ctrl + G)
00:21:825 (5) - x: 124 y: 200, to get a nicer flow, otherwise it doesn't look like a nice curve.
00:23:066 (1) - Same Problem as above, try another spacing please.
00:31:863 (6) - Either make NC here, or 00:32:201 (7) - , because she Begins a new sentence. This also would avoid making the Combo so big.
00:34:344 - Add a circle here, stacked 00:34:569 (3) - on the slider start of this, it fits the lyrics perfectly, or is there a specific reason you didn't add one?
00:36:148 - same here! ^ stacked 00:36:374 (3) - on the slider start of this one.
00:40:096 (5) - This slider is technically wrong, if you listen to it on 25% you'll figure out. 00:39:983 (4,5) - click on this and press CTRL + G, and shorten the slider - to 00:40:209 - , then it's perfect.
00:54:194 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/3TA9s.jpg Just a small Suggestion how it would look a bit neater.
01:05:133 (4,1) - this spacing is not readable. I would either delete 01:05:133 - or move 01:05:133 (4) - to 320 32.
01:10:434 (2,3,4,5,6) - the rhythm here sounds wrong again, if you listen to it closely, i'm sure you'll find a better way to place the rhythm.
01:12:239 (5) - Wrong again. It doesn't follow the lyrics, nor the instruments. Shorten it 01:12:464 - to this spot, and 01:12:577 - place a circle here, to fix it.
01:13:366 (1,2,3,4) - I really like this! good Job
[Normal]
Is it mapped? Because it's empty here.
[Easy]
00:04:344 (2) - Try to move it exactly into the middle of 00:02:990 (1,3) - . Just aesthetics.
00:06:600 (5) - Blanket again, move the first White Point to 64 344, it'll fix the things.
00:12:013 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This part is very hidden and frustrating for newbie Players, i suggest to make it new, but it's a bit hard too explain, so let me just quickly give you an example.
But please, try it yourself, this is just an example to explain what I mean, and to give you some further ideas. Try to avoid hidden things, very confusing for beginners!
00:34:569 (2) - Watch out that you use DS properly.
00:34:569 (2,3,4) - This part Looks really bad. Try replacing it, using ideas from above! Using the curve another direction can sometimes help very much.
01:04:795 (2,3) - too hidden again, try replacing!
01:20:133 (1,2) - The NC should be on 2, not on 1. The reason is, that she starts singing again on 2, not on the current 1! (a Little hint, if you feel you're not good in NC'ing, look on the BIG White ticks, MOST OF THE TIME (not always!!!) they are there, try to get some Feeling for it! (this also doesn't mean you have to put NC every 4 circles, if you use 1/1 rhythm!)
Go over your diff again, try to improve it with the ideas from above, but you're on a good way!
[Hard]
Well, the Hard is more like an Insane, remember that it just follows the Normal. It might be the difficulty before Insane aswell, but you should mind what a Normal expert player may think when he sees that Hard. You use quite many streams, and the spacing is also pretty difficult for a hard Player. I got an idea, try to look at some other hard maps! It'll really help you improving it, it's a bit nosense to Point everything out, try to reduce the difficiulty with removing things.
Well, sorry for that mod in hard, but I hope it can help you improving it, don't hesitate to ask me for help, if you Need some further suggestions! And don't give up! >w<
[General]
The size of your BG is weird http://puu.sh/3TzO6.jpg try this one! It's 1024x768.
[Rainbow's Insane]
This diff Looks really nice! Just some small suggestions to make it even better.
HP 9? Do you want to kill the Players?! Q__Q HP 8, please.
00:10:998 (7,8,9,10) - Try align this in a better line? Currently it's a bit curvy, which Looks bad in combination with the straight slider.
00:13:592 (7,1,2) - Something is wrong with this DS. Between 7 and 1 there should definetly be a bigger distance, because of the Little gap between the rhythm, otherwise it's quite hard to guess when you have to click. Try something like this? http://puu.sh/3TzXX.jpg (00:14:156 (2) - Ctrl + G)
00:21:825 (5) - x: 124 y: 200, to get a nicer flow, otherwise it doesn't look like a nice curve.
00:23:066 (1) - Same Problem as above, try another spacing please.
00:31:863 (6) - Either make NC here, or 00:32:201 (7) - , because she Begins a new sentence. This also would avoid making the Combo so big.
00:34:344 - Add a circle here, stacked 00:34:569 (3) - on the slider start of this, it fits the lyrics perfectly, or is there a specific reason you didn't add one?
00:36:148 - same here! ^ stacked 00:36:374 (3) - on the slider start of this one.
00:40:096 (5) - This slider is technically wrong, if you listen to it on 25% you'll figure out. 00:39:983 (4,5) - click on this and press CTRL + G, and shorten the slider - to 00:40:209 - , then it's perfect.
00:54:194 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/3TA9s.jpg Just a small Suggestion how it would look a bit neater.
01:05:133 (4,1) - this spacing is not readable. I would either delete 01:05:133 - or move 01:05:133 (4) - to 320 32.
01:10:434 (2,3,4,5,6) - the rhythm here sounds wrong again, if you listen to it closely, i'm sure you'll find a better way to place the rhythm.
01:12:239 (5) - Wrong again. It doesn't follow the lyrics, nor the instruments. Shorten it 01:12:464 - to this spot, and 01:12:577 - place a circle here, to fix it.
01:13:366 (1,2,3,4) - I really like this! good Job
[Normal]
Is it mapped? Because it's empty here.
[Easy]
00:04:344 (2) - Try to move it exactly into the middle of 00:02:990 (1,3) - . Just aesthetics.
00:06:600 (5) - Blanket again, move the first White Point to 64 344, it'll fix the things.
00:12:013 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This part is very hidden and frustrating for newbie Players, i suggest to make it new, but it's a bit hard too explain, so let me just quickly give you an example.
suggestion
280,164,12013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,84,12464,2,0,P|204:112|196:176,1,99.9999999999999
252,212,13366,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,268,13818,6,8,P|288:292|336:212,1,200
268,176,15171,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,96,15622,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,96,16073,5,8,0:0:0:0:
188,176,16524,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,176,16975,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,96,17427,2,2,P|356:168|320:248,1,200
240,264,18780,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,180,19231,2,8,P|148:248|200:340,1,200
240,264,20584,1,2,0:0:0:0:
But please, try it yourself, this is just an example to explain what I mean, and to give you some further ideas. Try to avoid hidden things, very confusing for beginners!
00:34:569 (2) - Watch out that you use DS properly.
00:34:569 (2,3,4) - This part Looks really bad. Try replacing it, using ideas from above! Using the curve another direction can sometimes help very much.
01:04:795 (2,3) - too hidden again, try replacing!
01:20:133 (1,2) - The NC should be on 2, not on 1. The reason is, that she starts singing again on 2, not on the current 1! (a Little hint, if you feel you're not good in NC'ing, look on the BIG White ticks, MOST OF THE TIME (not always!!!) they are there, try to get some Feeling for it! (this also doesn't mean you have to put NC every 4 circles, if you use 1/1 rhythm!)
Go over your diff again, try to improve it with the ideas from above, but you're on a good way!
[Hard]
Well, the Hard is more like an Insane, remember that it just follows the Normal. It might be the difficulty before Insane aswell, but you should mind what a Normal expert player may think when he sees that Hard. You use quite many streams, and the spacing is also pretty difficult for a hard Player. I got an idea, try to look at some other hard maps! It'll really help you improving it, it's a bit nosense to Point everything out, try to reduce the difficiulty with removing things.
Well, sorry for that mod in hard, but I hope it can help you improving it, don't hesitate to ask me for help, if you Need some further suggestions! And don't give up! >w<