Hi, request from Alpaca
monyetGeneral1. Check AiMod. There are some inconsitencies in Uninherited Timing Points in Hard diff, Taiko diffs, Challenging diff, and Normal diff
2. You should make Muzukashii taiko diff
3. Remove "メギツネ" from Tags, it's already in Title. And remove "japanese" from Tags, it will be added in Song Genre later
Easy00:04:328 (1) - a bit random placing, my suggestion
00:07:708 (1,2,3,4,5) - the rhythm is quite hard to read
00:11:088 (1,1) - the circle starts too soon after a spinner. beginners can immediately miss this circle
00:17:004 (3) - nc, i suggest to make shorter combo in easy diff
00:19:539 (5) - ^
00:23:764 (4) - ^
00:26:300 (7) - ^
00:27:990 (1,1) - same like 00:11:088 (1,1) -
00:33:060 (3) - nc
00:39:821 (5) - ^
00:42:990 - i suggest to adjust the break points so it will start at 00:43:201 -
SPOILERprevious
move your cursor toward the ''Break" words, and there will be a double-arrow cursor. then adjust to 00:43:201 -
01:00:102 (4) - nc
01:01:581 (6,7,8) - 01:04:962 (3,4,5) - these will confuse beginners
01:06:863 (6) - nc
01:11:933 (1,2) - please use distance snap
01:15:314 (3) - nc
01:22:074 (1,1) - same like 00:11:088 (1,1) -
01:25:455 (1,2) - please use distance snap
01:28:835 (3) - nc
01:35:595 (6) - ^
02:00:911 (5) - ^
03:19:861 (4) - ^
03:26:622 (5) - ^
03:40:143 (5) - ^
03:57:045 (5) - ^
04:01:270 (9) - ^
04:03:383 (12) - this will also confuse beginners
needs more work on placement
Moshiri's Normalcheck
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Normal , maximum AR and OD for Normal is 5, while your diff has OD7 and AR6. Please change it
00:02:005 (3) - nc
00:04:329 (7) - i prefer if you make it like 00:00:949 (1,2) -
00:07:709 (1) - stack this with 00:06:019 (2) - 's head, after that rearrange the ds 00:08:554 (2,3,4,5) -
00:12:568 - add a circle
00:29:681 (3) - nc
00:31:371 (5) - ^
00:36:653 - useless timing points
00:38:132 (1) - remove nc
00:40:244 (4,5) - the rhythm doesn't fit. i suggest
00:46:160 (4) - 00:47:850 (6) - stack properly with 00:44:470 (2) -
01:03:061 (4) - nc
01:06:019 (1,3) - switch nc
01:22:075 (1) - this can be confusing. Please change the combo color other than red
01:42:357 (5) - rhythm doesn't fit
01:45:103 - start a slider from 01:45:103 - end it at 01:45:737 -
02:27:462 - add a circle
02:44:364 (5) - nc
02:50:702 (4) - ^
02:57:885 (6,1) - switch nc
still need more works and you should make the slider more symmetrical. You should add more hitsounds
Alpaca's Hard01:22:708 (2) - make it like this
01:37:074 (1,2) - better to unstack
02:49:439 (2,3,4,5) - space them out more
BluOxy's Challengingcan't even play this x.x the ds in streams is too spaced out, i suggest to lower the ds there
Unexpected00:12:990 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - streams should start at 00:12:778 -
good luck