This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, May 10, 2014 at 11:46:52 AM

Artist: fripSide
Title: eternal reality -TV size-
Source: Toaru Kagaku no Railgun S
BPM: 145
Filesize: 3406kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4.86 stars, 251 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 272 notes)
3. MX Mania - 7Key (4.73 stars, 285 notes)
4. Normal (4.08 stars, 165 notes)

Download: fripSide - eternal reality -TV size-
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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ready for modding
- insane 100%
- hard 100%
- normal 100%
- MX Mania 47%
GD are welcome
modder list:
Snaggletooth
Franc[e]sco

And here is my part on M4M~

[Insane]

General

1. I think it's a good idea to reduce OD and AR by 1.
2. You have a lot of spacing issues which make the map awkward to play. I will point out the major issues.

[Hard]

General

1. It is very important to use distnace snap on Hard. I suggest you remap this diff with DS.

[Normal]

General

1. I suggest a remap on this too with distance snap. Normal and Easy always go with distance snap.
2. You also need an Easy with 2,5 Stars or less or make the Normal Easier so it has 2,5 Stars.

I think I am done here. There isn't much point in modding Hard and Normal like I did on insane because I really
think that now they can'T be ranked. But I also want to tell you, eventho my mod might me discouraging, that you shouldn't give
up on this. (:

Good luck~

My M4M~
Some of the spacing issues are serious, especially in normal. Everything else is just suggestions~

[General]
The background looks kinda stretched. But it seems that the original image was also like this so it's okay if you want to keep it. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1331886
I'm seeing lots of spacing issues. Be consistent with spacing! It's okay to use non-constant spacing in some patterns but it has to look and nicely flow with the song's beat. Even if you don't use distance snap, spacing has to be consistent.
The spacing between the tail or the head of a slider and the next beat should be the same as the spacing for normal beats.
Don't be afraid of using small or even tiny grids to make spacing perfect (you can toggle it with G)!
And don't worry, the map is fixable. Just be careful with spacing.

[Normal]
00:01:625 (1,2) - The spacing between the tail of that slider and the next circle is supposed to be the same as the spacing between 00:02:245 (2,3). Like this: http://puu.sh/6UsJu.jpg
00:03:693 (2,3) - Spacing is a little bigger than 1,2. This should look more symmetrical: http://puu.sh/6UsPX.jpg
00:05:969 (1) - I would overlap this with the previous beat like this: http://puu.sh/6Ut0s.jpg. Don't forget to fix the spacing of 2 and 3.
00:07:004 (1,2) - The spacing between the tail of 1 and 2 shoudl be the same as the spacing between 00:08:245 (2,1)
00:09:073 (2,1) - same spacing issue as above
00:11:349 (5) - Move this a bit closer to 6 for perfect spacing: http://puu.sh/6UtcE.jpg
00:14:038 (3) - this should be slightly closer to 2 http://puu.sh/6UteB.jpg
00:15:073 (2) - move this one tiny grid cell to the left for even spacing: http://puu.sh/6Uth7.jpg
00:16:107 (2,1,2) - according to the rhythm, spacing should be half of the spacing between 00:15:693 (1,2) . Fix it like this maybe? http://puu.sh/6UtoM.jpg
00:16:728 (3,4,5) - These should be a little closer together, same spacing as 2,1,2 in the above screenshot.
00:17:762 (6,1) - spacing between these two should be the same as the spacing between 00:18:176 (1,2)
00:19:418 (4,5) - same as above
00:28:935 (5,6) - spacing should be the same as 00:28:521 (4,5)
00:31:418 (4,5) - spacing should be the same as 00:30:590 (2,3)
00:32:866 (2,3) - these should be closer to 1, like this: http://puu.sh/6UtCz.jpg
00:40:107 (2) - this should be closer to green 1 for even spacing http://puu.sh/6UtFj.jpg
00:41:142 (2,3) - move these a little closer to 1: http://puu.sh/6UtGS.jpg
00:41:762 (1,2,1) - spacing between the slider tail and 2 is too much
00:44:452 (1,2,3,4) - spacing between the tail of 1 and 2 is too much. spacing between 3 and 4 is also too big. they should all have the same spacing
00:49:418 (1,2,3,4) - spacing between the tail of 2, 3 and 4 should be the same as the spacing between 1 and 2 or vice-versa
00:54:176 (1,2,3) - spacing between the tail of 1 and 2 should be the same as the spacing between 2 and 3
00:57:487 (3,4,5) - move them closer together or move 00:57:073 (2,1) further away
00:59:969 (2,3,1,2) - double the spacing
01:00:797 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - wrong spacing, should be the same as 01:08:659 (2,3,4)
01:09:487 (4,1) - as above
01:15:900 (1,2,3,4,5) - make these a little closer together, like 01:14:452 (1,2)
01:17:762 (1,2,3) - 1, 2 should have the same spacing as 2, 3
01:19:831 (3) - move this a little closer to 4 for even spacing

[Hard]
00:02:659 (4,5,6) - use the same spacing as 00:01:625 (1,2,3) or vice-versa
00:08:659 (2,3) - use the same spacing as 00:08:038 (6,1)
00:09:693 (1,2) - use the same spacing as 00:10:107 (2,3)
00:10:521 (4,5) - as above
00:11:556 (7,1) - as above
00:12:176 (2,1) - as above
00:14:659 (1,2,3,4,5) - these should be evenly spaced between eachother
00:16:314 (1,2,1) - as above
00:17:349 (2,3,1) - as above
00:21:693 - replace this break with a spinner maybe?
00:24:383 (1,2,3) - use the same spacing as 00:25:004 (3,4) or vice versa
00:28:728 (5,6) - use the same spacing as 00:28:521 (4,5)
00:31:625 (2,3,4,5) - make this a perfect square with even spacing maybe?
00:32:659 (1,2,3) - should be evenly spaced
00:33:487 (3,4,5,6,1) - as above
00:35:349 (4,5) - move 4 closer to 5
00:41:762 (5,6,7) - should be evenly spaced
00:42:590 (1,2,3,1) - as above
00:44:245 (1,2,3,4,5) - as above
00:51:487 (1,2,3,4,5) - as above
00:54:176 (1,2,3) - as above
01:02:866 (3,4,5) - as above
01:05:969 (1,2,3) - as above
01:07:418 (1,2,3) - as above
01:08:245 (4,5,1) - as above
01:12:590 (1,2,3) - as above
01:13:211 (3,4,1) - as above
01:13:831 (1,2,3) - as above
01:18:383 (5,6,7,8) - as above

[Insane]
00:14:245 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - should be evenly spaced (the slider is too far from the stream)
00:20:038 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I'd put a stream here, you decide
00:25:004 (3,4,5) - should be evenly spaced
00:32:659 (1,2,3,4) - as above
00:35:556 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - should be evenly spaced
00:43:004 (2,3,4) - should be evenly spaced, also too much spacing IMO
00:46:935 (2,3,1,2) - should be evenly spaced
00:52:728 (5,6,1) - as above
00:53:142 (1,2,3,4) - as above
01:10:107 (4,5,6,1,2) - as above


Good luck with your map!~

Snaggletooth wrote:

And here is my part on M4M~

[Insane]

General

1. I think it's a good idea to reduce OD and AR by 1.
2. You have a lot of spacing issues which make the map awkward to play. I will point out the major issues.

1. 00:02:142 (3) - There is no beat, no vocal on this tick. Remove this circle to fit the beat.
2. 00:03:280 (1,2,3) - Spacing is too far apart
3. 00:04:935 (2) - Spacing? I belive you wanted to set it on the blue tick right after
   the slider.
4. 00:14:245 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - The spacing is inconsistent which isn't a great thing when you use streams. Use distance snap for this
5. 00:35:556 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing is messed up?
6. 00:39:176 (2,3) - ^
7. 00:43:004 (2,3,4) - I think for streams like this you can use patterns like this very well
   
   Example

   
   I stacked (3) ontop of (4)
8. 00:47:762 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing is messed up
9. 00:50:866 (6,7) - This might be unrankable as the burst from (6) can cover the revers arrow. Fix this!
10. 01:00:176 (3,4) - A slider would fit the vocals much better and close the little gap you have there.
    
    Example

    
11. 01:24:383 (1) - Remove finish

[Hard]

General

1. It is very important to use distnace snap on Hard. I suggest you remap this diff with DS.

1. 00:23:762 (4) - remove Finish

[Normal]

General

1. I suggest a remap on this too with distance snap. Normal and Easy always go with distance snap.
2. You also need an Easy with 2,5 Stars or less or make the Normal Easier so it has 2,5 Stars.

I think I am done here. There isn't much point in modding Hard and Normal like I did on insane because I really
think that now they can'T be ranked. But I also want to tell you, eventho my mod might me discouraging, that you shouldn't give
up on this. (:

Good luck~

fix

Franc[e]sco wrote:

My M4M~
Some of the spacing issues are serious, especially in normal. Everything else is just suggestions~

[General]
The background looks kinda stretched. But it seems that the original image was also like this so it's okay if you want to keep it. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1331886
I'm seeing lots of spacing issues. Be consistent with spacing! It's okay to use non-constant spacing in some patterns but it has to look and nicely flow with the song's beat. Even if you don't use distance snap, spacing has to be consistent.
The spacing between the tail or the head of a slider and the next beat should be the same as the spacing for normal beats.
Don't be afraid of using small or even tiny grids to make spacing perfect (you can toggle it with G)!
And don't worry, the map is fixable. Just be careful with spacing.

[Normal]
00:01:625 (1,2) - The spacing between the tail of that slider and the next circle is supposed to be the same as the spacing between 00:02:245 (2,3). Like this: http://puu.sh/6UsJu.jpg fix
00:03:693 (2,3) - Spacing is a little bigger than 1,2. This should look more symmetrical: http://puu.sh/6UsPX.jpg ok
00:05:969 (1) - I would overlap this with the previous beat like this: http://puu.sh/6Ut0s.jpg. Don't forget to fix the spacing of 2 and 3.fix
00:07:004 (1,2) - The spacing between the tail of 1 and 2 shoudl be the same as the spacing between 00:08:245 (2,1) fix
00:09:073 (2,1) - same spacing issue as above fix
00:11:349 (5) - Move this a bit closer to 6 for perfect spacing: http://puu.sh/6UtcE.jpg fix
00:14:038 (3) - this should be slightly closer to 2 http://puu.sh/6UteB.jpg fix
00:15:073 (2) - move this one tiny grid cell to the left for even spacing: http://puu.sh/6Uth7.jpg fix fix
00:16:107 (2,1,2) - according to the rhythm, spacing should be half of the spacing between 00:15:693 (1,2) . Fix it like this maybe? ok http://puu.sh/6UtoM.jpg
00:16:728 (3,4,5) - These should be a little closer together, same spacing as 2,1,2 in the above screenshot. ok
00:17:762 (6,1) - spacing between these two should be the same as the spacing between 00:18:176 (1,2)ok
00:19:418 (4,5) - same as above
00:28:935 (5,6) - spacing should be the same as 00:28:521 (4,5) fix
00:31:418 (4,5) - spacing should be the same as 00:30:590 (2,3) fix
00:32:866 (2,3) - these should be closer to 1, like this: http://puu.sh/6UtCz.jpg fix
00:40:107 (2) - this should be closer to green 1 for even spacing http://puu.sh/6UtFj.jpg fix
00:41:142 (2,3) - move these a little closer to 1: http://puu.sh/6UtGS.jpg fix
00:41:762 (1,2,1) - spacing between the slider tail and 2 is too much fix
00:44:452 (1,2,3,4) - spacing between the tail of 1 and 2 is too much. spacing between 3 and 4 is also too big. they should all have the same spacing fix
00:49:418 (1,2,3,4) - spacing between the tail of 2, 3 and 4 should be the same as the spacing between 1 and 2 or vice-versa fix
00:54:176 (1,2,3) - spacing between the tail of 1 and 2 should be the same as the spacing between 2 and 3 fix
00:57:487 (3,4,5) - move them closer together or move 00:57:073 (2,1) further away fix
00:59:969 (2,3,1,2) - double the spacing fix
01:00:797 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - wrong spacing, should be the same as 01:08:659 (2,3,4) fix
01:09:487 (4,1) - as above fix
01:15:900 (1,2,3,4,5) - make these a little closer together, like 01:14:452 (1,2) fix
01:17:762 (1,2,3) - 1, 2 should have the same spacing as 2, 3 fix
01:19:831 (3) - move this a little closer to 4 for even spacing fix

[Hard]
00:02:659 (4,5,6) - use the same spacing as 00:01:625 (1,2,3) or vice-versa fix
00:08:659 (2,3) - use the same spacing as 00:08:038 (6,1) fix
00:09:693 (1,2) - use the same spacing as 00:10:107 (2,3) fix
00:10:521 (4,5) - as above fix
00:11:556 (7,1) - as above fix
00:12:176 (2,1) - as above fix
00:14:659 (1,2,3,4,5) - these should be evenly spaced between eachother fix
00:16:314 (1,2,1) - as above fix
00:17:349 (2,3,1) - as above fix
00:21:693 - replace this break with a spinner maybe? i think not
00:24:383 (1,2,3) - use the same spacing as 00:25:004 (3,4) or vice versa fix
00:28:728 (5,6) - use the same spacing as 00:28:521 (4,5) fix
00:31:625 (2,3,4,5) - make this a perfect square with even spacing maybe? ok
00:32:659 (1,2,3) - should be evenly spaced fix
00:33:487 (3,4,5,6,1) - as above fix
00:35:349 (4,5) - move 4 closer to 5 fix
00:41:762 (5,6,7) - should be evenly spaced
00:42:590 (1,2,3,1) - as above
00:44:245 (1,2,3,4,5) - as above
00:51:487 (1,2,3,4,5) - as above
00:54:176 (1,2,3) - as above
01:02:866 (3,4,5) - as above
01:05:969 (1,2,3) - as above
01:07:418 (1,2,3) - as above
01:08:245 (4,5,1) - as above
01:12:590 (1,2,3) - as above
01:13:211 (3,4,1) - as above
01:13:831 (1,2,3) - as above
01:18:383 (5,6,7,8) - as above fix all

[Insane]
00:14:245 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - should be evenly spaced (the slider is too far from the stream) fix
00:20:038 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I'd put a stream here, you decide
00:25:004 (3,4,5) - should be evenly spaced fix
00:32:659 (1,2,3,4) - as above fix
00:35:556 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - should be evenly spaced fix
00:43:004 (2,3,4) - should be evenly spaced, also too much spacing IMO fix
00:46:935 (2,3,1,2) - should be evenly spaced
00:52:728 (5,6,1) - as above
00:53:142 (1,2,3,4) - as above
01:10:107 (4,5,6,1,2) - as above all fix


Good luck with your map!~

thank you for modding

IRC mod

Forgot to save chat log T_T

Ignore kds if u want

Rakuen wrote:

IRC mod

Forgot to save chat log T_T

Ignore kds if u want

is my fault to :3
i already fix the diff while you modding yesterday
your modding is helping~

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