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thepianist

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thepianist 2009-11-11T04:22:05+00:00

Normal
Seems fine.

Hard
00.03.016 (4,5) Maybe move these so it makes a straight line?
01.10.185 (3,4) ^ (I'm just mentioning these since you don't have these bent patterns consistently so it looks a bit weird. Just an IMHO.)

Skin
The eight's a bit chopped off ^^

MP3
Trimmed and attached.

Star

Download: Nintendo_DS_-_PictoChat CUT.mp3

Nakata Yuji

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Nakata Yuji 2009-11-11T15:21:12+00:00

This is a great song. Let's hope the map is too :]

General:
I don't like the skin at all. I get that you're trying to get the messy look, but if you really want to, make the graphics look hand drawn. You can keep the skin, if you want though. Make an easy, too.

Normal:
00:57:003 (3) - Take this out and increase the break time.
The rest is ok.

Hard:
I would make this harder and rename it insane. The streams are pretty intense.
00:03:099 (1) - Consider putting a note here.
The rest is ok.

Nice map, * for you.

jericho2442

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jericho2442 2009-11-12T21:09:26+00:00

very nice maps

[Easy]
fine

[Hard]
on thing i dont like in it is this
01:13:011 (1,2,3,4) - the way this goes with the combo after feels ugly to me

___________________-
great song,great maps star

WyndII

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WyndII 2009-11-16T15:42:03+00:00

um, please put a "Note" on your OP post that we should redownload your map coz of mp3 crop thing.

Kitty McWittles

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Kitty McWittles 2009-11-17T09:44:07+00:00

[Normal]
00:46:016 (4) - Add this with a finish? (maybe whistle)
00:49:064 (4) - ^

[Hard]
00:14:053 (1,2) - Delete
00:14:091 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Fall between ticks, move back so (1) starts on the big white tick
00:31:038 (1) - Extend 1 repeat, add claps on the last repeat and end of slider
01:12:024 (2,3) - Acceptable, but I personally hate spacing like that, maybe move (2) 2-3 squares up?
01:17:002 (2,3,4) - Fix the shape?

Personal bitch below

SPOILER

The majority of the part between breaks seems dull to me, especially near the end when it turns to notes on every beat - maybe you should've mapped to the techno-ish beat in the background instead, to keep up with the upbeatness of the streams and speed of the other parts.

Ignoring my bitch...

nice map overall, have a star~

Hanyuu

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Hanyuu 2009-11-17T09:49:52+00:00

Normal:

01:12:068 (3) - clap

Hard:

00:15:067 (8) - missing here a circle

cool map

Tanmak

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Tanmak 2009-11-17T11:33:09+00:00

Hello~~

[Normal]
Fine.

[Hard]
00:16:381 (9) Move time line(Green vertical line)which was placed 00:16:272, to this tick.
00:31:380 (1,1) Make confuse...I think. And spacing..
01:08:443 (1,2,3,4,5) Undo Stack. Because Background color is similar with circle line color. Or You need to change white color.
01:12:247 (2,3,4,5,6,7) ^

Great~

Starred~

Kytoxid

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Kytoxid 2009-11-18T20:38:48+00:00

[General]

Skin the spinner somehow?
The lighter hitcircle colour blends a bit into the background..

[Normal]

A bit easy for a Normal, I think.

01:13:011 (1,2,1) - Spacing inconsistency.

[Hard]

00:09:042 (2) - Turn off grid snap and place this a bit more evenly between 1,3.
00:12:025 (1,2,3,4) - Too many finishes.
00:15:072 (9) - New combo? Also, perfectly silent notes aren't so great, consider boosting the volume a tiny bit.
01:18:044 (1) - Whistle may be more fitting than a clap.

Star.

Zekira

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Zekira 2009-11-22T04:16:48+00:00

BPM: 138
Offset: 78ms

Essien_old

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Essien_old 2009-11-27T23:49:14+00:00

Easy:
no problems found

Hard:
00:11:164 (1): In my opinion, this jump is kind of crazy, especially after a short deathstream.

These are just suggestions ~
star

Kerensa

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Kerensa 2009-11-28T11:05:36+00:00

hey ^^

normal:
00:24:425 [2]two tiny squares to the right, i think it's abit to far away from eacher compared to the preiouc one which are the same.
00:32:251 [4] why don't you just link it up with [1]?
01:13:121 [1]two tiny squares to the right. make it right in btween the before and after note.
01:15:730 [1] i think 2 tiny squares to the left.

hard:
01:06:164 [1]one tiny square to the right?

lol cool map ^^

star star for you you ^^

Diasios

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Diasios 2009-12-04T20:03:32+00:00

Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Normal]

It's ok

[Hard]

00:33:099 (6) - New combo

Starred~

DJPop

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DJPop 2009-12-05T02:35:15+00:00

BPM should be 276
Then resnap everything with 1/3 BSD

Call me via in-game after you fix them

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2009-12-05T09:32:12+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

DJPop

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DJPop 2009-12-05T10:41:09+00:00

NoHItter wrote:
DJPop wrote:
BPM should be 276
Then resnap everything with 1/3 BSD

Call me via in-game after you fix them
Hmmm, not quite sure about that...

It sounds the same.

Listen while using 50% or 25% speed.

Vanmonky

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Vanmonky 2009-12-05T23:07:09+00:00

All I can do is starring your map because I don't see any mistake on your map. I love the music! Notice me when this map's ranked.

DJPop

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DJPop 2009-12-06T02:10:21+00:00

You haven't resnap all notes yet = ="

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2009-12-06T05:01:37+00:00

DJPop wrote:
You haven't resnap all notes yet = ="

Oh shoot; forgot to upload with the resnapped notes.

I'll just put it in a different diff.

Mashley

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Mashley 2009-12-06T13:08:10+00:00

uh offset -4
wtf is Hard Test difficulty

Great map. No problems in either of the difficulties and I would definitely like to see this map ranked.

Shinde

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Shinde 2009-12-07T10:28:49+00:00

I don't really have anything to say besides it screams 'Storyboard me!' As-is the song is a little boring, so you should put on a show atop that BG.

I dunno what the skin you were using looked like, but I don't think a hitcircle would be a bad idea.

BPM should be 138, not 276. I don't know why DJPop suggested that, that just created work for nothing, and caused the osu! pulse to be doubled. 138 with 1/6 would've worked. Don't bother changing it back unless a BAT complains though.

Anyways, starred.

I believe these should be all the points in the song that should be 1/3 snapped. Both difficulties. Forgive me if the timestamp is inconsistent, I might've moved them 1/3 before Ctrl+V'ing, but you get the idea.

00:02:017 (2) -
00:05:072 (2) -
01:10:000 (2) -
01:16:095 (2) -

If anything should be said, I didn't even notice they were 1/3 off until careful examination in 50%, and it plays fine as-is. Also, feel free to disregard this entire post. Modding this song made me a sadpanda.

Xgor

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Xgor 2009-12-08T11:14:04+00:00

[Normal] (Feels more like a easy to me

)
0:00:93 (1,1) - This sounds so much better if the slider has one less reverse arrow and move the circle to 0:01:813
0:05:291 (1) - Make this slider end on a white tick

[Hard]
I suggest you add more beats to the slow part or have a bit less beats on the fast part :/
It's stupid how much the difficulty changes in this diff.
(Also if you don't add more beats on the slow part, lower the HP drain)

This is one of the songs in brawl that i doubted would be a good map but this map was pretty good

*star*

Ultimate

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Ultimate 2009-12-15T14:25:28+00:00

NoHItter, i'm only suggesting these modifications. If you do not wish to use them, then dont.

Overall:

Artist: ~
Title: ~
Diff: It's not really hard, but i also aint normal.. Maybe Hard -
Source: ~
Tags: ~

Normal:

01:09:063 (1,2,3) - I really think noobs are gonna have a hard time on ticks like this, but he! it's not called normal for nothing!

Hard:

01:15:072 (2,3,4,5,6) - 1 ( lvl 3 grid ) up
01:17:003 (2) - put on a white beatline
01:17:003 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - re-distance snap these 5, they look a bit messy

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I really like it, i do. Maybe you might like these custom hitsounds:

Download: Custom Hitsounds.zip

DJPop

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DJPop 2009-12-16T12:03:49+00:00

Seriously, snap everything to 1/3.
Believe me ;__;

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2009-12-16T13:16:54+00:00

Can you give a point in the song where it needs 1/3 snap besides the ones we put in?

DJPop

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DJPop 2009-12-16T15:11:02+00:00

NoHItter wrote:
Can you give a point in the song where it needs 1/3 snap besides the ones we put in?

Whole song.

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2009-12-17T07:11:44+00:00

Did you redownload the new .mp3?

alvisto

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alvisto 2009-12-17T18:12:01+00:00

Oh oh battle of BPM and 1/3 or 1/4 from the previous modders. xD

HARD
00:15:072 (9) - Finish at the end of slider ?
00:29:063 (1,1) - Remove the clap from the start of both sliders, put them at the end instead, to correspondent with the "clap" in the music.
00:31:813 - Clap at this point of slider ?
00:32:068 (3) - Clap
00:40:007 (1) - Remove clap here, put them on 00:40:050 (2) instead ?
00:53:098 (1) - Remove clap here and put it on 2 ?
01:18:044 (1) - Finish at the end of spinner.

NORMAL
00:10:050 (1,1) - Remove both claps here ? ;_;
00:51:037 (2) - Hitsound this so that it sounds exactly like this 00:47:090 (2) ?
00:52:024 (3) - Finish
01:16:059 (1) - Finish

Hitsounds sound a bit random at some part, but I guess it's fine for me. ^.^

What a cute map. Star~

Lizbeth

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Lizbeth 2009-12-18T22:33:41+00:00

I think djpop is right, it should be snaped to 1/3

Bonus
this is why i think it should be snaped at 1/3 00:14:085 - try this with beat snap 1/3: note at: 00:14:085 - 00:14:099 - 00:15:006 - 00:15:021 - 00:15:028 - 00:15:043 - 00:15:050 - 00:15:064 - 00:15:072 and listen to it with playback rate 25%
00:33:098 (1) - reverse arrows at: 00:34:085 - 00:35:072, and finish : 00:36:059

i didnt find any spacing problems. though you should fix the beat snaping

cya good luck
btw... nice skin!

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2009-12-19T13:54:52+00:00

It does but it doubt it would affect gameplay much.

Zekira

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Zekira 2009-12-19T14:51:00+00:00

NoHItter wrote:
It does but it doubt it would affect gameplay much.

IT WOULD. >_> I should've foreseen that... no wonder I felt that the notes weren't on-beat... it's a 1/3 song >_>

YOU try playing with those notes not snapped to 1/3. Even if you suck you must at least notice the immense number of slider ends that will sound off

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2009-12-23T02:20:37+00:00

This is gonna take a while to fix...

Edit: in which I'm finished

Zekira

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Zekira 2009-12-29T03:32:45+00:00

[Normal]
00:03:117 (3) - remove finish from tail
00:06:595 (3) - ^
00:08:769 (1,2) - remove whistle from heads
00:13:987 (2) - remove finish?
(IMO Finishes don't fit this part of the song)
00:19:204 (1) - whistle on tail or remove the whistle from 2
00:22:682 (1) - ^
00:26:160 (1) - ^
00:52:247 (3) - err...
01:06:160 (1) - ^
01:07:030 (3) - remove finish from tail
01:08:552 (1,2,3) - uneven stack a bit blargh-ish for Normal
01:09:639 (1,2,3) - ^
01:12:030 (1,2,3) - ^
01:14:856 (1,1) - remove whistle from first head and tail

[Hard]
00:01:813 (1) - really these finishes sound a bit too noisy lol
00:03:552 (6) - ^

EDIT: wait a minute right now aside from my pricking about the number of Finish hitsounds used here, I don't really have much a of a problem with this map anymore. Maybe consider going through the hitsounds again or something, but other than that it's really fine except for the issues I pointed in Normal above.

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2009-12-29T05:03:00+00:00

Done

arien666

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arien666 2009-12-30T07:29:30+00:00

[Normal]
00:11:37(1,2) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?

[Hard]
Overall difficulty - [Suggestion] +1~2 seems better
00:12:24(1,2,3) - [Suggestion] Distance seems little different. But it isn't major issue. I prefer to check these notes :3
00:48:33(4) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?

[Bonus]
00:51:37(3,4,5) - [Suggestion] Distance seems little different. But it isn't major issue. I prefer to check these notes :3
00:52:24(5,6,7) - ^

Umm???
Epic skin seems good XD
Anyway good song but...?
I don't think that this song is pubble-able(As now)...
Anyway good luck XD

Here's my star :3

Zekira

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Zekira 2009-12-30T12:10:07+00:00

I'm leaving a p-bubble here but a bit shaky on my decision though since I can't really anticipate the song too much... In any case, good luck.

Larto

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Larto 2009-12-30T21:42:57+00:00

Popping Pubble.

Timing:
BPM: 138.00 - That way the metronome and the pulsating osu! cookie on the main menu won't go insane. You of course have to double all slider velocities, then.

Hard:
Increase the Overall Difficulty by 1 or 2 ticks please.
00:00:943 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This is hard to play, even though it's snapped correctly. I suggest you turn some of that stuff into sliders. it would definitely make it more playable. If you want to know what I mean...
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1780
Sort of like this.
00:09:276 (1) - Move onto the white tick? It's a bit weird right now.
00:14:856 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same as for the last stream.
01:05:291 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^
01:12:610 (4,5,6,7) - ^
01:17:247 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Weird/Ugly spacing.

Normal:
Good

Bonus:
00:02:175 (3) - Move onto the white tick. Would be way more fun to play.
00:04:131 (1,2,3,4) - Oh god. Well... keep it.
00:14:856 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - On this difficulty, you can keep the weird streams if you want to. The map is overall pretty hard, after all.
00:33:987 (1) - This sounds extremely weird. Remap? The repeats just don't work.
01:06:523 (3) - Move onto the white tick. Would be way more fun to play.

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2009-12-31T04:25:02+00:00

Done

Skyripper

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Skyripper 2009-12-31T20:01:19+00:00

[Hard]
00:02:030 - add a beat here
00:02:175 (1) - move this to 00:02:247
01:06:378 - add a beat here
01:06:523 (1) - move this to 01:06:595

[Bonus]
01:18:914 (2) - This note doesn't make sense to me

Larto

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Larto 2010-01-02T21:03:38+00:00

Why not.

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2010-01-03T01:53:40+00:00

Thanks for the bubble

Kytoxid

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Kytoxid 2010-01-04T21:03:44+00:00

Very bad colours for widescreen, score and combo are completely unreadable. Please fix.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1932

ouranhshc

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ouranhshc 2010-01-04T21:13:16+00:00

Hard
00:00:943(1,2,3,4,5) - this should be a 1/4 divisor part like in the Bonus diff
01:05:291 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

EDIT : there are 1/4 streams when its supposed to be 1/6 and vice versa

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2010-01-05T08:15:56+00:00

Kytoxid wrote:
Very bad colours for widescreen, score and combo are completely unreadable. Please fix.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1932

Sadly I don't know how to fix this. Unless I remove the custom score numbers and comboburst

ouranhshc wrote:
Hard
00:00:943(1,2,3,4,5) - this should be a 1/4 divisor part like in the Bonus diff
01:05:291 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

EDIT : there are 1/4 streams when its supposed to be 1/6 and vice versa

Listen in 25%.
And you can hardly hear the difference in Bonus.

Moved to WIp first

anonymous_old

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anonymous_old 2010-01-05T10:21:45+00:00

lol

Download: Shogo Sakai - PictoChat (NoHItter) [Hard].osu

anonymous_old

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anonymous_old 2010-01-05T10:37:11+00:00

Why hello there.

Download: Shogo Sakai - PictoChat (NoHItter) [Bonus].osu

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