Needs a louder mp3.
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Shogo Sakai - PictoChat
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Normal
Seems fine.
Hard
00.03.016 (4,5) Maybe move these so it makes a straight line?
01.10.185 (3,4) ^ (I'm just mentioning these since you don't have these bent patterns consistently so it looks a bit weird. Just an IMHO.)
Skin
The eight's a bit chopped off ^^
MP3
Trimmed and attached.
Star
Download: Nintendo_DS_-_PictoChat CUT.mp3
Seems fine.
Hard
00.03.016 (4,5) Maybe move these so it makes a straight line?
01.10.185 (3,4) ^ (I'm just mentioning these since you don't have these bent patterns consistently so it looks a bit weird. Just an IMHO.)
Skin
The eight's a bit chopped off ^^
MP3
Trimmed and attached.
StarDownload: Nintendo_DS_-_PictoChat CUT.mp3
This is a great song. Let's hope the map is too :]
General:
I don't like the skin at all. I get that you're trying to get the messy look, but if you really want to, make the graphics look hand drawn. You can keep the skin, if you want though. Make an easy, too.
Normal:
00:57:003 (3) - Take this out and increase the break time.
The rest is ok.
Hard:
I would make this harder and rename it insane. The streams are pretty intense.
00:03:099 (1) - Consider putting a note here.
The rest is ok.
Nice map, * for you.
General:
I don't like the skin at all. I get that you're trying to get the messy look, but if you really want to, make the graphics look hand drawn. You can keep the skin, if you want though. Make an easy, too.
Normal:
00:57:003 (3) - Take this out and increase the break time.
The rest is ok.
Hard:
I would make this harder and rename it insane. The streams are pretty intense.
00:03:099 (1) - Consider putting a note here.
The rest is ok.
Nice map, * for you.
very nice maps
[Easy]
fine
[Hard]
on thing i dont like in it is this
01:13:011 (1,2,3,4) - the way this goes with the combo after feels ugly to me
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great song,great maps star
[Easy]
fine
[Hard]
on thing i dont like in it is this
01:13:011 (1,2,3,4) - the way this goes with the combo after feels ugly to me
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great song,great maps star
um, please put a "Note" on your OP post that we should redownload your map coz of mp3 crop thing.
[Normal]
00:46:016 (4) - Add this with a finish? (maybe whistle)
00:49:064 (4) - ^
[Hard]
00:14:053 (1,2) - Delete
00:14:091 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Fall between ticks, move back so (1) starts on the big white tick
00:31:038 (1) - Extend 1 repeat, add claps on the last repeat and end of slider
01:12:024 (2,3) - Acceptable, but I personally hate spacing like that, maybe move (2) 2-3 squares up?
01:17:002 (2,3,4) - Fix the shape?
Personal bitch below
Ignoring my bitch...
nice map overall, have a star~
00:46:016 (4) - Add this with a finish? (maybe whistle)
00:49:064 (4) - ^
[Hard]
00:14:053 (1,2) - Delete
00:14:091 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Fall between ticks, move back so (1) starts on the big white tick
00:31:038 (1) - Extend 1 repeat, add claps on the last repeat and end of slider
01:12:024 (2,3) - Acceptable, but I personally hate spacing like that, maybe move (2) 2-3 squares up?
01:17:002 (2,3,4) - Fix the shape?
Personal bitch below
SPOILER
The majority of the part between breaks seems dull to me, especially near the end when it turns to notes on every beat - maybe you should've mapped to the techno-ish beat in the background instead, to keep up with the upbeatness of the streams and speed of the other parts.
Ignoring my bitch...
nice map overall, have a star~Normal:
01:12:068 (3) - clap
Hard:
00:15:067 (8) - missing here a circle
cool map
01:12:068 (3) - clap
Hard:
00:15:067 (8) - missing here a circle
cool map
Hello~~
[Normal]
Fine.
[Hard]
00:16:381 (9) Move time line(Green vertical line)which was placed 00:16:272, to this tick.
00:31:380 (1,1) Make confuse...I think. And spacing..
01:08:443 (1,2,3,4,5) Undo Stack. Because Background color is similar with circle line color. Or You need to change white color.
01:12:247 (2,3,4,5,6,7) ^
Great~
Starred~
[Normal]
Fine.
[Hard]
00:16:381 (9) Move time line(Green vertical line)which was placed 00:16:272, to this tick.
00:31:380 (1,1) Make confuse...I think. And spacing..
01:08:443 (1,2,3,4,5) Undo Stack. Because Background color is similar with circle line color. Or You need to change white color.
01:12:247 (2,3,4,5,6,7) ^
Great~
Starred~
[General]
Skin the spinner somehow?
The lighter hitcircle colour blends a bit into the background..
[Normal]
A bit easy for a Normal, I think.
01:13:011 (1,2,1) - Spacing inconsistency.
[Hard]
00:09:042 (2) - Turn off grid snap and place this a bit more evenly between 1,3.
00:12:025 (1,2,3,4) - Too many finishes.
00:15:072 (9) - New combo? Also, perfectly silent notes aren't so great, consider boosting the volume a tiny bit.
01:18:044 (1) - Whistle may be more fitting than a clap.
Star.
Skin the spinner somehow?
The lighter hitcircle colour blends a bit into the background..
[Normal]
A bit easy for a Normal, I think.
01:13:011 (1,2,1) - Spacing inconsistency.
[Hard]
00:09:042 (2) - Turn off grid snap and place this a bit more evenly between 1,3.
00:12:025 (1,2,3,4) - Too many finishes.
00:15:072 (9) - New combo? Also, perfectly silent notes aren't so great, consider boosting the volume a tiny bit.
01:18:044 (1) - Whistle may be more fitting than a clap.
Star.
BPM: 138
Offset: 78ms
Offset: 78ms
Easy:
no problems found
Hard:
00:11:164 (1): In my opinion, this jump is kind of crazy, especially after a short deathstream.
These are just suggestions ~
star
no problems found
Hard:
00:11:164 (1): In my opinion, this jump is kind of crazy, especially after a short deathstream.
These are just suggestions ~
star
hey ^^
normal:
00:24:425 [2]two tiny squares to the right, i think it's abit to far away from eacher compared to the preiouc one which are the same.
00:32:251 [4] why don't you just link it up with [1]?
01:13:121 [1]two tiny squares to the right. make it right in btween the before and after note.
01:15:730 [1] i think 2 tiny squares to the left.
hard:
01:06:164 [1]one tiny square to the right?
lol cool map ^^
star star for you you ^^
normal:
00:24:425 [2]two tiny squares to the right, i think it's abit to far away from eacher compared to the preiouc one which are the same.
00:32:251 [4] why don't you just link it up with [1]?
01:13:121 [1]two tiny squares to the right. make it right in btween the before and after note.
01:15:730 [1] i think 2 tiny squares to the left.
hard:
01:06:164 [1]one tiny square to the right?
lol cool map ^^
star star for you you ^^
Mod Infos:
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Start Suggestions:
All seems ok.
[Normal]
It's ok
[Hard]
00:33:099 (6) - New combo
Starred~
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Start Suggestions:
All seems ok.
[Normal]
It's ok
[Hard]
00:33:099 (6) - New combo
Starred~
BPM should be 276
Then resnap everything with 1/3 BSD
Call me via in-game after you fix them
Then resnap everything with 1/3 BSD
Call me via in-game after you fix them
Topic Starter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Listen while using 50% or 25% speed.NoHItter wrote:
Hmmm, not quite sure about that...DJPop wrote:
BPM should be 276
Then resnap everything with 1/3 BSD
Call me via in-game after you fix them
It sounds the same.
All I can do is starring your map because I don't see any mistake on your map. I love the music! Notice me when this map's ranked.
You haven't resnap all notes yet = ="
Topic Starter
Oh shoot; forgot to upload with the resnapped notes.DJPop wrote:
You haven't resnap all notes yet = ="
I'll just put it in a different diff.
uh offset -4
wtf is Hard Test difficulty
Great map. No problems in either of the difficulties and I would definitely like to see this map ranked.
wtf is Hard Test difficulty
Great map. No problems in either of the difficulties and I would definitely like to see this map ranked.
I don't really have anything to say besides it screams 'Storyboard me!' As-is the song is a little boring, so you should put on a show atop that BG.
I dunno what the skin you were using looked like, but I don't think a hitcircle would be a bad idea.
BPM should be 138, not 276. I don't know why DJPop suggested that, that just created work for nothing, and caused the osu! pulse to be doubled. 138 with 1/6 would've worked. Don't bother changing it back unless a BAT complains though.
Anyways, starred.
I believe these should be all the points in the song that should be 1/3 snapped. Both difficulties. Forgive me if the timestamp is inconsistent, I might've moved them 1/3 before Ctrl+V'ing, but you get the idea.
00:02:017 (2) -
00:05:072 (2) -
01:10:000 (2) -
01:16:095 (2) -
If anything should be said, I didn't even notice they were 1/3 off until careful examination in 50%, and it plays fine as-is. Also, feel free to disregard this entire post. Modding this song made me a sadpanda.
I dunno what the skin you were using looked like, but I don't think a hitcircle would be a bad idea.
BPM should be 138, not 276. I don't know why DJPop suggested that, that just created work for nothing, and caused the osu! pulse to be doubled. 138 with 1/6 would've worked. Don't bother changing it back unless a BAT complains though.
Anyways, starred.
I believe these should be all the points in the song that should be 1/3 snapped. Both difficulties. Forgive me if the timestamp is inconsistent, I might've moved them 1/3 before Ctrl+V'ing, but you get the idea.
00:02:017 (2) -
00:05:072 (2) -
01:10:000 (2) -
01:16:095 (2) -
If anything should be said, I didn't even notice they were 1/3 off until careful examination in 50%, and it plays fine as-is. Also, feel free to disregard this entire post. Modding this song made me a sadpanda.
[Normal] (Feels more like a easy to me 
)
0:00:93 (1,1) - This sounds so much better if the slider has one less reverse arrow and move the circle to 0:01:813
0:05:291 (1) - Make this slider end on a white tick
[Hard]
I suggest you add more beats to the slow part or have a bit less beats on the fast part :/
It's stupid how much the difficulty changes in this diff.
(Also if you don't add more beats on the slow part, lower the HP drain)
This is one of the songs in brawl that i doubted would be a good map but this map was pretty good
*star*
)0:00:93 (1,1) - This sounds so much better if the slider has one less reverse arrow and move the circle to 0:01:813
0:05:291 (1) - Make this slider end on a white tick
[Hard]
I suggest you add more beats to the slow part or have a bit less beats on the fast part :/
It's stupid how much the difficulty changes in this diff.
(Also if you don't add more beats on the slow part, lower the HP drain)
This is one of the songs in brawl that i doubted would be a good map but this map was pretty good
*star*
NoHItter, i'm only suggesting these modifications. If you do not wish to use them, then dont.
Overall:
Artist: ~
Title: ~
Diff: It's not really hard, but i also aint normal.. Maybe Hard -
Source: ~
Tags: ~
Normal:
01:09:063 (1,2,3) - I really think noobs are gonna have a hard time on ticks like this, but he! it's not called normal for nothing!
Hard:
01:15:072 (2,3,4,5,6) - 1 ( lvl 3 grid ) up
01:17:003 (2) - put on a white beatline
01:17:003 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - re-distance snap these 5, they look a bit messy
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I really like it, i do. Maybe you might like these custom hitsounds:
Download: Custom Hitsounds.zip
Overall:
Artist: ~
Title: ~
Diff: It's not really hard, but i also aint normal.. Maybe Hard -
Source: ~
Tags: ~
Normal:
01:09:063 (1,2,3) - I really think noobs are gonna have a hard time on ticks like this, but he! it's not called normal for nothing!
Hard:
01:15:072 (2,3,4,5,6) - 1 ( lvl 3 grid ) up
01:17:003 (2) - put on a white beatline
01:17:003 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - re-distance snap these 5, they look a bit messy
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I really like it, i do. Maybe you might like these custom hitsounds:
Download: Custom Hitsounds.zip
Seriously, snap everything to 1/3.
Believe me ;__;
Believe me ;__;
Topic Starter
Can you give a point in the song where it needs 1/3 snap besides the ones we put in?
Whole song.NoHItter wrote:
Can you give a point in the song where it needs 1/3 snap besides the ones we put in?
Topic Starter
Did you redownload the new .mp3?
Oh oh battle of BPM and 1/3 or 1/4 from the previous modders. xD
HARD
00:15:072 (9) - Finish at the end of slider ?
00:29:063 (1,1) - Remove the clap from the start of both sliders, put them at the end instead, to correspondent with the "clap" in the music.
00:31:813 - Clap at this point of slider ?
00:32:068 (3) - Clap
00:40:007 (1) - Remove clap here, put them on 00:40:050 (2) instead ?
00:53:098 (1) - Remove clap here and put it on 2 ?
01:18:044 (1) - Finish at the end of spinner.
NORMAL
00:10:050 (1,1) - Remove both claps here ? ;_;
00:51:037 (2) - Hitsound this so that it sounds exactly like this 00:47:090 (2) ?
00:52:024 (3) - Finish
01:16:059 (1) - Finish
Hitsounds sound a bit random at some part, but I guess it's fine for me. ^.^
What a cute map. Star~
HARD
00:15:072 (9) - Finish at the end of slider ?
00:29:063 (1,1) - Remove the clap from the start of both sliders, put them at the end instead, to correspondent with the "clap" in the music.
00:31:813 - Clap at this point of slider ?
00:32:068 (3) - Clap
00:40:007 (1) - Remove clap here, put them on 00:40:050 (2) instead ?
00:53:098 (1) - Remove clap here and put it on 2 ?
01:18:044 (1) - Finish at the end of spinner.
NORMAL
00:10:050 (1,1) - Remove both claps here ? ;_;
00:51:037 (2) - Hitsound this so that it sounds exactly like this 00:47:090 (2) ?
00:52:024 (3) - Finish
01:16:059 (1) - Finish
Hitsounds sound a bit random at some part, but I guess it's fine for me. ^.^
What a cute map. Star~
I think djpop is right, it should be snaped to 1/3
Bonus
this is why i think it should be snaped at 1/3 00:14:085 - try this with beat snap 1/3: note at: 00:14:085 - 00:14:099 - 00:15:006 - 00:15:021 - 00:15:028 - 00:15:043 - 00:15:050 - 00:15:064 - 00:15:072 and listen to it with playback rate 25%
00:33:098 (1) - reverse arrows at: 00:34:085 - 00:35:072, and finish : 00:36:059
i didnt find any spacing problems. though you should fix the beat snaping
cya good luck
btw... nice skin!
Bonus
this is why i think it should be snaped at 1/3 00:14:085 - try this with beat snap 1/3: note at: 00:14:085 - 00:14:099 - 00:15:006 - 00:15:021 - 00:15:028 - 00:15:043 - 00:15:050 - 00:15:064 - 00:15:072 and listen to it with playback rate 25%
00:33:098 (1) - reverse arrows at: 00:34:085 - 00:35:072, and finish : 00:36:059
i didnt find any spacing problems. though you should fix the beat snaping
cya good luck
btw... nice skin!
Topic Starter
It does but it doubt it would affect gameplay much.
IT WOULD. >_> I should've foreseen that... no wonder I felt that the notes weren't on-beat... it's a 1/3 song >_>NoHItter wrote:
It does but it doubt it would affect gameplay much.
YOU try playing with those notes not snapped to 1/3. Even if you suck you must at least notice the immense number of slider ends that will sound off
Topic Starter
This is gonna take a while to fix...
Edit: in which I'm finished
Edit: in which I'm finished
[Normal]
00:03:117 (3) - remove finish from tail
00:06:595 (3) - ^
00:08:769 (1,2) - remove whistle from heads
00:13:987 (2) - remove finish?
(IMO Finishes don't fit this part of the song)
00:19:204 (1) - whistle on tail or remove the whistle from 2
00:22:682 (1) - ^
00:26:160 (1) - ^
00:52:247 (3) - err...
01:06:160 (1) - ^
01:07:030 (3) - remove finish from tail
01:08:552 (1,2,3) - uneven stack a bit blargh-ish for Normal
01:09:639 (1,2,3) - ^
01:12:030 (1,2,3) - ^
01:14:856 (1,1) - remove whistle from first head and tail
[Hard]
00:01:813 (1) - really these finishes sound a bit too noisy lol
00:03:552 (6) - ^
EDIT: wait a minute right now aside from my pricking about the number of Finish hitsounds used here, I don't really have much a of a problem with this map anymore. Maybe consider going through the hitsounds again or something, but other than that it's really fine except for the issues I pointed in Normal above.
00:03:117 (3) - remove finish from tail
00:06:595 (3) - ^
00:08:769 (1,2) - remove whistle from heads
00:13:987 (2) - remove finish?
(IMO Finishes don't fit this part of the song)
00:19:204 (1) - whistle on tail or remove the whistle from 2
00:22:682 (1) - ^
00:26:160 (1) - ^
00:52:247 (3) - err...
01:06:160 (1) - ^
01:07:030 (3) - remove finish from tail
01:08:552 (1,2,3) - uneven stack a bit blargh-ish for Normal
01:09:639 (1,2,3) - ^
01:12:030 (1,2,3) - ^
01:14:856 (1,1) - remove whistle from first head and tail
[Hard]
00:01:813 (1) - really these finishes sound a bit too noisy lol
00:03:552 (6) - ^
EDIT: wait a minute right now aside from my pricking about the number of Finish hitsounds used here, I don't really have much a of a problem with this map anymore. Maybe consider going through the hitsounds again or something, but other than that it's really fine except for the issues I pointed in Normal above.
Topic Starter
Done
[Normal]
00:11:37(1,2) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?
[Hard]
Overall difficulty - [Suggestion] +1~2 seems better
00:12:24(1,2,3) - [Suggestion] Distance seems little different. But it isn't major issue. I prefer to check these notes :3
00:48:33(4) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?
[Bonus]
00:51:37(3,4,5) - [Suggestion] Distance seems little different. But it isn't major issue. I prefer to check these notes :3
00:52:24(5,6,7) - ^
Umm???
Epic skin seems good XD
Anyway good song but...?
I don't think that this song is pubble-able(As now)...
Anyway good luck XD
Here's my star :3
00:11:37(1,2) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?
[Hard]
Overall difficulty - [Suggestion] +1~2 seems better
00:12:24(1,2,3) - [Suggestion] Distance seems little different. But it isn't major issue. I prefer to check these notes :3
00:48:33(4) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?
[Bonus]
00:51:37(3,4,5) - [Suggestion] Distance seems little different. But it isn't major issue. I prefer to check these notes :3
00:52:24(5,6,7) - ^
Umm???
Epic skin seems good XD
Anyway good song but...?
I don't think that this song is pubble-able(As now)...
Anyway good luck XD
Here's my star :3
I'm leaving a p-bubble here but a bit shaky on my decision though since I can't really anticipate the song too much... In any case, good luck.
Popping Pubble.
Timing:
BPM: 138.00 - That way the metronome and the pulsating osu! cookie on the main menu won't go insane. You of course have to double all slider velocities, then.
Hard:
Increase the Overall Difficulty by 1 or 2 ticks please.
00:00:943 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This is hard to play, even though it's snapped correctly. I suggest you turn some of that stuff into sliders. it would definitely make it more playable. If you want to know what I mean...
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1780
Sort of like this.
00:09:276 (1) - Move onto the white tick? It's a bit weird right now.
00:14:856 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same as for the last stream.
01:05:291 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^
01:12:610 (4,5,6,7) - ^
01:17:247 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Weird/Ugly spacing.
Normal:
Good
Bonus:
00:02:175 (3) - Move onto the white tick. Would be way more fun to play.
00:04:131 (1,2,3,4) - Oh god. Well... keep it.
00:14:856 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - On this difficulty, you can keep the weird streams if you want to. The map is overall pretty hard, after all.
00:33:987 (1) - This sounds extremely weird. Remap? The repeats just don't work.
01:06:523 (3) - Move onto the white tick. Would be way more fun to play.
Timing:
BPM: 138.00 - That way the metronome and the pulsating osu! cookie on the main menu won't go insane. You of course have to double all slider velocities, then.
Hard:
Increase the Overall Difficulty by 1 or 2 ticks please.
00:00:943 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This is hard to play, even though it's snapped correctly. I suggest you turn some of that stuff into sliders. it would definitely make it more playable. If you want to know what I mean...
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1780
Sort of like this.
00:09:276 (1) - Move onto the white tick? It's a bit weird right now.
00:14:856 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same as for the last stream.
01:05:291 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^
01:12:610 (4,5,6,7) - ^
01:17:247 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Weird/Ugly spacing.
Normal:
Good
Bonus:
00:02:175 (3) - Move onto the white tick. Would be way more fun to play.
00:04:131 (1,2,3,4) - Oh god. Well... keep it.
00:14:856 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - On this difficulty, you can keep the weird streams if you want to. The map is overall pretty hard, after all.
00:33:987 (1) - This sounds extremely weird. Remap? The repeats just don't work.
01:06:523 (3) - Move onto the white tick. Would be way more fun to play.
Topic Starter
Done
[Hard]
00:02:030 - add a beat here
00:02:175 (1) - move this to 00:02:247
01:06:378 - add a beat here
01:06:523 (1) - move this to 01:06:595
[Bonus]
01:18:914 (2) - This note doesn't make sense to me
00:02:030 - add a beat here
00:02:175 (1) - move this to 00:02:247
01:06:378 - add a beat here
01:06:523 (1) - move this to 01:06:595
[Bonus]
01:18:914 (2) - This note doesn't make sense to me
Why not.
Topic Starter
Thanks for the bubble
Very bad colours for widescreen, score and combo are completely unreadable. Please fix.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1932
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1932
Hard
00:00:943(1,2,3,4,5) - this should be a 1/4 divisor part like in the Bonus diff
01:05:291 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
EDIT : there are 1/4 streams when its supposed to be 1/6 and vice versa
00:00:943(1,2,3,4,5) - this should be a 1/4 divisor part like in the Bonus diff
01:05:291 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
EDIT : there are 1/4 streams when its supposed to be 1/6 and vice versa
Topic Starter
Kytoxid wrote:
Very bad colours for widescreen, score and combo are completely unreadable. Please fix.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1932
Sadly I don't know how to fix this. Unless I remove the custom score numbers and comboburst
Listen in 25%.ouranhshc wrote:
Hard
00:00:943(1,2,3,4,5) - this should be a 1/4 divisor part like in the Bonus diff
01:05:291 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
EDIT : there are 1/4 streams when its supposed to be 1/6 and vice versa
And you can hardly hear the difference in Bonus.
Moved to WIp first
Topic Starter
SB is by strager
That damn strager.
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
Thanks Dusty.
Uploaded
Uploaded
Just wondering, did you keep the score numbers around somewhere? Those could be fixed in the same way.
Topic Starter
I have to check if I saved it somewhere else
Sorry but......
[Bonus]
01:12:248 (2,3) - Too far apart.
01:14:639 (2,3) - ^
Edit: Alright then, bubbled.
[Bonus]
01:12:248 (2,3) - Too far apart.
01:14:639 (2,3) - ^
Edit: Alright then, bubbled.
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okie dokie
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Thanks
Great job, NoHItter XD
Anyway, good luck for your next map :3
Anyway, good luck for your next map :3