Hi~
( =`・ω・´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)
[General]
01:01:914 - Preview point should be here
[Normal]
00:20:818 - I suggest to extend the beak until 00:33:969 -
00:53:284 (1) - This should start at 00:53:489 - to fit the vocal
00:54:106 (2) - Same as ^ , move 1 red point forward
01:16:708 (3) - Make it same shape with 01:15:886 (2) -
01:26:571 (1,2,3,4) - This is hard to play, suggest to change it to sliders
01:41:366 - Let the break until here
02:34:174 (3,4,5) - Hard to play here
02:45:475 (1,2,3) - Don't suggest 1/4, try 1/2
03:25:133 - You should map here since the song is about to finish
[Normal+]
Don't suggest for diffs with + , recommend you to remove it and map an Easy diff
One of the reason is both Normal and Normal+ have 4 stars and they didn't seem having big diff spread
For Normal+ spacing could try with 1.2x
00:11:571 (2,3) - The flow is folded
00:13:421 (2) - Rotate this 45* anti clockwise
00:14:653 (1) - Rotate this 180*
00:33:969 - Let the break until here
00:36:434 (3) - Make this shape same with 00:35:407 (1) -
00:58:626 (1) - Spinner to short, extend it to 01:01:503 -
01:11:777 (1) - Flow it's not connected to 01:10:955 (2,3,4) - , try Ctrl+G with 01:11:777 (1) -
01:41:366 - Let break until here
02:21:229 (1,2) - (1) and (2) are not in a straight line, fix it
02:24:722 (2) - Put at right side of 02:24:516 (1) -
02:28:626 (5) - Unrankable, you're hiding the slider
02:56:777 (3) - It touched the slider path of 02:56:160 (2) -
02:56:982 (4) - Rotate 180* for better flow
03:14:653 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+J
03:18:146 (4) - Remove this and put circle here 03:18:352 -
03:25:133 - You should map here since the song is about to finish
[Hard]
Looks ok
[Insane]
00:08:787 (5) - 6.0x jump is quite big and easy to break combo with that slider vel
00:20:808 - Suggest to use claps to cover drums only and let it break until 00:33:959 - cuz Insane is quite draining to be played
01:00:877 - SV increased too much
01:00:877 - Please use 1.2x DS (distance snap) , 1.0x is kinda hugging each other and awful looking
01:01:904 - You can try 1.1 Slider velocity in KIAI times, the slider speed is too fast for 1.2
01:41:356 - Let break until here
01:45:260 (4) - This is hidden, hard to place. Try putting it a little more to right
01:46:082 (7) - Players won't notice this is the jump due to the arrangements, stick closer to previous note
01:48:753 (4,5,6) - This too ^
02:10:123 (4) - Hard to read, flow stopped
02:20:603 (4) - Unrankable, hidden + flow break
02:45:466 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Like previous diff, suddenly goes the electronical cover (not vocal) sounds disgusting
03:25:740 (4) - NC (new combo)
03:29:027 (4) - ^