FGSky wrote:

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[General]
Check AiMod on all diffs for some problems (Crtl+Shift+A to open it)

[5K EZ]

This diff needs hitsounds

00:04:141 (4141|3) - move to 5

00:10:141 (10141|3) - move to 3

00:10:569 (10569|4) - move to 4

00:24:282 - add a note in 4

00:33:282 (33282|1,33710|1) - move one of these notes in any columns because chords with LN at the same time is considered autoconvert

00:40:996 (40996|0,41424|0) - ^

01:01:030 (61030|1,61137|4) - this pattern starts in Blue Line, this pattern must be starts in 01:00:923 -

01:28:778 (88778|2) - move to 5 ?

[5K NM]

this diff is pretty fine but there are some issues

00:40:996 (40996|3,41424|3) - move one of these in any columns because chords with LN at the same time is considered autoconvert too...

01:36:920 (96920|1) - move this to 3

[5K HD]

look in this diff is fine too

that's all

sorry for lazy mod xD

Good luck !

All fixed
Thank you for mod and star
Thank you very much!! FGSky

路過

Hello~
Mod by your request,Column:1 2 3 4 5
[General]
如果一张谱子中只有一个K数的话 是不需要加上5K的
OD和HP..其实有潜规则(.)最少要5以上吧
要rank的话 每个Diff都需要Hitsound
[5K EZ]
实际难度大于EZ 无限接近NM
HP6 OD6
00:18:711 (18711|4,19140|3,19568|2,19997|1,20426|0) - Ctrl+J
00:20:854 (20854|4) - Move to 3
00:30:068 - ~ 00:32:853 - 不推荐跟Vocal 跟前面一样的鼓点就行了
00:33:068 (33068|4) - Remove
00:37:567 - ~ 00:43:353 - 这种程度是NM了 建议简化 还有不推荐用超短条 例如 00:41:745 (41745|2) -
00:52:888 (52888|1) - 音略轻 在EZ里就删掉吧
01:02:208 - 我推荐这种情况还是把条子粘起来比较好 比较影响手感
01:03:065 - 同上
01:36:706 - Add a Note at 3
01:41:420 - Add a Note at 5
01:59:633 (119633|4,119740|3,120276|0) - 简化难度 只抓最明显的节奏就好 Remove
02:27:702 - 条子和Note粘起来
02:28:345 - 同上
02:29:202 - 同上
02:29:631 (149631|1) - 变成Note就行
02:46:558 (166558|2) - Move to 5

[5K NM]
HP7 OD7
00:01:891 (1891|0) - Remove
00:01:570 (1570|3) - End at 00:01:998 -
00:07:355 - 有点违和感 我的建议是这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1290425
00:08:426 - Add 2 Notes at 2 and 5
00:21:283 - 感觉这边用2个Note一排就够了,排列方面 我的想法是这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1290433
00:22:997 - 不太好 Try this---> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1290438
00:48:495 - 这里的长音要抓应该是这样子的--> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1290442
00:54:173 (54173|4) - Move to 00:54:066 -
00:54:387 - Add a Note at 4
00:57:923 (57923|2) - End at 00:58:137 - 并加一个Note
01:01:458 - 在2或者4加一个Note
01:01:458 (61458|2) - 然后这个条子从 01:01:565 - 开始
01:20:207 - 长音应该这样抓---> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1290454
01:22:778 - 这里直接变成Note
01:31:778 (91778|1) - Move to 1
01:31:992 (91992|0,92099|1) - 对NM来说太难.Remove
01:32:313 (92313|3) - 移到 01:32:206 - 时间点的第三轨道
01:32:528 - ~ 01:33:706 - 跟鼓点 咚咚咚的音
01:42:920 - 条子粘起来
02:01:026 - Remove one of them
02:06:489 - 条子粘起来
02:07:882 - ~ 02:08:204 - 都变成1个Note
02:08:418 - Add a Note at 5
02:34:987 - 变成Note
02:35:309 - 同上

[5K HD]
HP8 OD7
00:01:570 - Add a Hold,end at 00:01:784 -
00:16:354 - ~ 00:16:783 - 感觉没有那么重的音 全都1个Note吧
00:42:710 - 建议全都变成Note 或者只留1个还是原状
00:42:924 - 这里加1~2个Note
00:50:423 (50423|3) - Move to 1
00:50:852 (50852|1) - Move to 5
01:31:135 - Remove 1个
01:31:778 - 01:31:992 - 各删1个
01:47:419 (107419|0) - 变成Hold,end at 01:47:634 -
HD做的不错哦 Good Luck~

Spy wrote:

路過

你好

Simple_Star wrote:

Hello~
Mod by your request,Column:1 2 3 4 5
[General]
如果一张谱子中只有一个K数的话 是不需要加上5K的
OD和HP..其实有潜规则(.)最少要5以上吧
要rank的话 每个Diff都需要Hitsound
[5K EZ]
实际难度大于EZ 无限接近NM
HP6 OD6
00:18:711 (18711|4,19140|3,19568|2,19997|1,20426|0) - Ctrl+J
00:20:854 (20854|4) - Move to 3
00:30:068 - ~ 00:32:853 - 不推荐跟Vocal 跟前面一样的鼓点就行了
00:33:068 (33068|4) - Remove
00:37:567 - ~ 00:43:353 - 这种程度是NM了 建议简化 还有不推荐用超短条 例如 00:41:745 (41745|2) -
00:52:888 (52888|1) - 音略轻 在EZ里就删掉吧
01:02:208 - 我推荐这种情况还是把条子粘起来比较好 比较影响手感
01:03:065 - 同上
01:36:706 - Add a Note at 3
01:41:420 - Add a Note at 5
01:59:633 (119633|4,119740|3,120276|0) - 简化难度 只抓最明显的节奏就好 Remove
02:27:702 - 条子和Note粘起来
02:28:345 - 同上
02:29:202 - 同上
02:29:631 (149631|1) - 变成Note就行
02:46:558 (166558|2) - Move to 5

[5K NM]
HP7 OD7
00:01:891 (1891|0) - Remove
00:01:570 (1570|3) - End at 00:01:998 -
00:07:355 - 有点违和感 我的建议是这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1290425
00:08:426 - Add 2 Notes at 2 and 5
00:21:283 - 感觉这边用2个Note一排就够了,排列方面 我的想法是这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1290433
00:22:997 - 不太好 Try this---> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1290438
00:48:495 - 这里的长音要抓应该是这样子的--> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1290442
00:54:173 (54173|4) - Move to 00:54:066 -
00:54:387 - Add a Note at 4
00:57:923 (57923|2) - End at 00:58:137 - 并加一个Note
01:01:458 - 在2或者4加一个Note
01:01:458 (61458|2) - 然后这个条子从 01:01:565 - 开始
01:20:207 - 长音应该这样抓---> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1290454
01:22:778 - 这里直接变成Note
01:31:778 (91778|1) - Move to 1
01:31:992 (91992|0,92099|1) - 对NM来说太难.Remove
01:32:313 (92313|3) - 移到 01:32:206 - 时间点的第三轨道
01:32:528 - ~ 01:33:706 - 跟鼓点 咚咚咚的音
01:42:920 - 条子粘起来
02:01:026 - Remove one of them
02:06:489 - 条子粘起来
02:07:882 - ~ 02:08:204 - 都变成1个Note
02:08:418 - Add a Note at 5
02:34:987 - 变成Note
02:35:309 - 同上

[5K HD]
HP8 OD7
00:01:570 - Add a Hold,end at 00:01:784 -
00:16:354 - ~ 00:16:783 - 感觉没有那么重的音 全都1个Note吧
00:42:710 - 建议全都变成Note 或者只留1个还是原状
00:42:924 - 这里加1~2个Note
00:50:423 (50423|3) - Move to 1
00:50:852 (50852|1) - Move to 5
01:31:135 - Remove 1个
01:31:778 - 01:31:992 - 各删1个
01:47:419 (107419|0) - 变成Hold,end at 01:47:634 -
HD做的不错哦 Good Luck~

All fixed
謝謝你的幫忙 Thank you for mod !!
關於EZ方面 我根據你的意見我再進行了一些簡化 不過可能還需要再簡化一點
至於Hitsound 方面 我還是有點一頭霧水 不知道是不是這樣弄

From Zenx' Mod Queue

Just going for a overall feedback mod

Wrong offset: 1356 - > 1570

I'm just going to give some comments about this mapset, it is going to take a big list of mods to fix some errors

Remove the first Kiai time 00:24:469 -, this section of the music is just an intro not the chorus

Move the start of the 2nd Kiai time to 01:10:136 -, the chorus starts here, end the Kiai time at 01:42:491

Move the start of the 3rd Kiai time to 02:16:989 -, the 2nd chorus starts here, end the Kiai time at 02:52:772 - ( Since the chorus drags on )

Pretty amazing SV usage on the dubstep portion, however, I don't really see anything else very unique and exciting about this map other than that in my opinion

I suggest to add hitsound before asking me to re-check this, it's better to just mod both the hitsound and chart in one go

Is there a higher quality BG? If not, it's okay to leave it as it is

You don't have to add "5K" in-front of the Difficulty names if every difficulty is 5K

Going to be very honest here, your map is NOT standing out much from the rest of the ranked maps, you need something special in this mapset to make it more worth playing than the other maps. For example, you can create hammers and inverse LNs to emphasize certain parts of the music.

Good luck! Your mapset is pretty great for starters, just try to add some unique patterns

支持!
will mod if I have time \:D/

閒著沒事隨便看了一下你的圖。。

[General]
單純一個Key的圖不用在難度名標示幾K

[5K EZ]
既然是EZ難度嘛，顧名思義是要給新手玩的
所以我建議你用1/2去做圖就行了，你的圖有用到1/4，感覺比較沒這麼簡單
00:01:356 (1356|0,1356|4) - 像這2個，跟你後面抓的音不太一樣，我個人建議你把這2個改成在00:01:570加上Note
還有Note記得對準音高，音也不要混著抓，適時加上LN
00:09:712 (9712|1) - 其實可以刪除
我只點了一個地方，不過實際上很多地方都該處理
還有就是重音方面，重音最好以2個Note以上表示
都是1個Note有一種沒特別強調的感覺
可以追人聲，也可以追背景音
不過要分段，不能一次同一段就抓這又抓那的，會有點混亂
這難度偏難了，事實上應該叫做NM

[5K NM]
同上難度方面，這個應該叫做HD
我在上一個難度忘記點出一個很重要的問題就是，不要原創節奏
00:02:963 (2963|1) - 這個地方沒音，理所當然這個Note應該移除
大概沒什麼大問題

[5K HD]
問題大概都是犯前2個難度所犯的錯，所以我就不多說了

加油~比我當初第一個圖好很多~

lZenxl wrote:

From Zenx' Mod Queue

Just going for a overall feedback mod

Wrong offset: 1356 - > 1570

I'm just going to give some comments about this mapset, it is going to take a big list of mods to fix some errors

Remove the first Kiai time 00:24:469 -, this section of the music is just an intro not the chorus

Move the start of the 2nd Kiai time to 01:10:136 -, the chorus starts here, end the Kiai time at 01:42:491

Move the start of the 3rd Kiai time to 02:16:989 -, the 2nd chorus starts here, end the Kiai time at 02:52:772 - ( Since the chorus drags on )

Pretty amazing SV usage on the dubstep portion, however, I don't really see anything else very unique and exciting about this map other than that in my opinion

I suggest to add hitsound before asking me to re-check this, it's better to just mod both the hitsound and chart in one go

Is there a higher quality BG? If not, it's okay to leave it as it is

You don't have to add "5K" in-front of the Difficulty names if every difficulty is 5K

Going to be very honest here, your map is NOT standing out much from the rest of the ranked maps, you need something special in this mapset to make it more worth playing than the other maps. For example, you can create hammers and inverse LNs to emphasize certain parts of the music.

Good luck! Your mapset is pretty great for starters, just try to add some unique patterns

haha
This is my 1ST beatmap.
so that some parts maybe not doing well.
I will learn more about mapping.
I'm busy recently, so I will make the hisounds later.
Anyway
thank you for mod.

Spy wrote:

閒著沒事隨便看了一下你的圖。。

[General]
單純一個Key的圖不用在難度名標示幾K

[5K EZ]
既然是EZ難度嘛，顧名思義是要給新手玩的
所以我建議你用1/2去做圖就行了，你的圖有用到1/4，感覺比較沒這麼簡單
00:01:356 (1356|0,1356|4) - 像這2個，跟你後面抓的音不太一樣，我個人建議你把這2個改成在00:01:570加上Note
還有Note記得對準音高，音也不要混著抓，適時加上LN
00:09:712 (9712|1) - 其實可以刪除
我只點了一個地方，不過實際上很多地方都該處理
還有就是重音方面，重音最好以2個Note以上表示
都是1個Note有一種沒特別強調的感覺
可以追人聲，也可以追背景音
不過要分段，不能一次同一段就抓這又抓那的，會有點混亂
這難度偏難了，事實上應該叫做NM

[5K NM]
同上難度方面，這個應該叫做HD
我在上一個難度忘記點出一個很重要的問題就是，不要原創節奏
00:02:963 (2963|1) - 這個地方沒音，理所當然這個Note應該移除
大概沒什麼大問題

[5K HD]
問題大概都是犯前2個難度所犯的錯，所以我就不多說了

加油~比我當初第一個圖好很多~

你所點出的問題
之後我有好好地檢查及修改了一下
不過我不排除我會漏看了
所以我會再之後有空的日子再RE-CHECK一次
而且可能某地方依然會做得不太好

而難度方面的問題 老早就有人向我指明了
但一直沒修改w
這次我修改了
原EZ→NM
原NM→HD
原HD→MX

謝謝你的意見
THANK YOU FOR MOD

richardfeder wrote:

支持!
will mod if I have time \:D/

謝謝你

i see previous modder already show issue that i no need to show you again

[General]

i see you stolen image from google image search. "maxresdefault" usually from youtube

- delete "5K" since all difficult have same key setting
- highly recommend you to change image to better quality
- if you want this map to be ranked you need hitsound first

[Easy]

From Beginning to 00:37:567 - pattern too monotone, streaming left to right is making player boring to do it

- 00:14:105 (14105|3) - move to 4th

- 00:40:031 (40031|3,40138|0) - if you following guitar i suggest you to add note 00:40:246 - but i not recommend you to use 1/4 in Easy

- 02:46:558 (166558|4,166665|3) - change this pattern, doesn't fit

[Normal]

- 00:10:891 (10891|3) - change this to note, well doesn't fit through the beat

- 00:13:033 (13033|0) - ^

- 00:25:782 (25782|4,26211|3) - bit hard to press, change the pattern position

- 00:29:211 (29211|2) - move to 2nd

- 00:30:925 (30925|3,31353|3) - move to 4th

- 00:38:317 (38317|4,38531|0) - this kind hold note position doesn't good after all, so if you want to make 1/4 pattern make sure that's "normal note" not "hold note" because weird, or move those LN to 1/2 or 1/1 beat

- 00:39:710 (39710|4,40031|3,40246|1) - ^ and fix all same issue like this

- 00:42:710 (42710|3,42710|1,43138|2,43138|4) - overmapped, change to note

- 01:01:030 (61030|1,61030|0,61137|2,61137|3) - what are you doing with this kind double note ? remove one each other

- 01:35:313 (95313|0,95313|1,95634|0,95634|1) - ^ and fix all same issue like this

[Hard]

- just start with comment since i believe this still doesn't good after all, first this double 00:03:284 (3284|0,3284|1,3605|2,3605|4) - you can't use for streaming because this is hard and have less sound which doesn't needed double note. then 00:10:891 (10891|0) - which unnecessary pattern, use normal note instead. and hold note 1/4 streaming like this 02:46:344 (166344|4,166451|3,166558|2,166665|1,166772|0) - is not good for this kind song. hold note is not reason for make it harder , hold note supposed to place if there's reverb sound such like trance - drumstep - electro and other that have this kind sound too.

Reikosaka wrote:

i see previous modder already show issue that i no need to show you again

[General]

i see you stolen image from google image search. "maxresdefault" usually from youtube

- delete "5K" since all difficult have same key setting
- highly recommend you to change image to better quality
- if you want this map to be ranked you need hitsound first

[Easy]

From Beginning to 00:37:567 - pattern too monotone, streaming left to right is making player boring to do it

- 00:14:105 (14105|3) - move to 4th

- 00:40:031 (40031|3,40138|0) - if you following guitar i suggest you to add note 00:40:246 - but i not recommend you to use 1/4 in Easy

- 02:46:558 (166558|4,166665|3) - change this pattern, doesn't fit

[Normal]

- 00:10:891 (10891|3) - change this to note, well doesn't fit through the beat

- 00:13:033 (13033|0) - ^

- 00:25:782 (25782|4,26211|3) - bit hard to press, change the pattern position

- 00:29:211 (29211|2) - move to 2nd

- 00:30:925 (30925|3,31353|3) - move to 4th

- 00:38:317 (38317|4,38531|0) - this kind hold note position doesn't good after all, so if you want to make 1/4 pattern make sure that's "normal note" not "hold note" because weird, or move those LN to 1/2 or 1/1 beat

- 00:39:710 (39710|4,40031|3,40246|1) - ^ and fix all same issue like this

- 00:42:710 (42710|3,42710|1,43138|2,43138|4) - overmapped, change to note

- 01:01:030 (61030|1,61030|0,61137|2,61137|3) - what are you doing with this kind double note ? remove one each other

- 01:35:313 (95313|0,95313|1,95634|0,95634|1) - ^ and fix all same issue like this

[Hard]

- just start with comment since i believe this still doesn't good after all, first this double 00:03:284 (3284|0,3284|1,3605|2,3605|4) - you can't use for streaming because this is hard and have less sound which doesn't needed double note. then 00:10:891 (10891|0) - which unnecessary pattern, use normal note instead. and hold note 1/4 streaming like this 02:46:344 (166344|4,166451|3,166558|2,166665|1,166772|0) - is not good for this kind song. hold note is not reason for make it harder , hold note supposed to place if there's reverb sound such like trance - drumstep - electro and other that have this kind sound too.

all fix
Thank you for mod.
and i changed the diff's name yesterday and i need a time to find high quality image.
EZ→NM
NM→ HD
HD→MX

Spy wrote:

別忘了我的kud

我忘了
抱歉

Hi~! I believe i have somehow marked this for a mod
Nice song btw!

NM
00:01:356 - 00:01:570 add a ln here since the sound was very long till it comes on the note.
00:04:784 (4784|1) - move this instead in the 4th column so the pattern can be pressed comfortably.
00:10:569 (10569|3,10998|3) - move to 2 and 3 i feel its the best way to place those notes.
00:13:140 (13140|3) - move to 5 cause the stack for it was a bit bad.
00:14:426 (14426|1,14855|2) - move to 1 and 2. the pattern in here was a bit awkward because the stack does fit imo.
00:16:140 (16140|1,16569|0) - move to 3 and 3, the chord for 00:16:997 (16997|2,16997|0) - is open and its a perfect opportunity to place the note on the open chord.
00:17:854 (17854|3,17854|1,18283|1,18283|2) - delete whistle on those and add clap on 1 note per red line.
00:26:854 (26854|2,27282|1) - move this notes on 4 and 3 it fits very well to be mirrored.
00:39:710 (39710|1,40031|0) - ctrl j those cause the pattern is very unbalanced.
00:42:710 (42710|0,42710|1,43138|2,43138|3) - you placed 2 claps here. it doesnt really fit and the clap was very loud.
00:53:637 (53637|1) - move to 5 cause the upcoming note doesnt give meaning to the pattern or else it s just an broke pattern.
01:51:705 - 01:52:133 add doubles in this timing. it fit very well in the music
01:56:633 - 01:56:847 ^
01:58:133 (118133|3) - move to 5, very bad placement cause of the stack didnt look good on this note.
02:11:418 (131418|2) - move to 4 cause the pattern 02:11:632 (131632|4,132060|3,132382|4) - is not yet done and there are an open chord 02:10:775 (130775|2,130775|4) - so it fits well perfectly.
02:26:417 (146417|1) - move to 1 to make the flow much ok.
02:30:059 (150059|3) - delete clap here its not very nessesary cause its loud and it wasnt needed.
02:47:415 (167415|1) - place it on the open chord 3 its very neat to look at this way.

HD
00:14:855 (14855|3) - move to 2 much better.
00:36:924 (36924|1) - move to 1st due to the stair 1/4.
01:29:421 (89421|0) - move to 4 instead to balance the pattern look at it closer its much more neat.
02:18:060 (138060|1) - move this note to 5 instead? much more better for the patterns.

MX
00:02:641 (2641|2) - move it to 4 to balance the pattern better cause you suddenly used close double with the pattern going on.
00:37:032 (37032|4) - i clearly hear that this isnt even needed.
00:47:102 (47102|2) - move to 4 much better for the flow cause the previous pattern was kinda a stair one.
01:04:565 (64565|2) - move it on 2 instead? cause the doubles will be coming after this pattern.
01:27:921 (87921|2) - move to 4 much good for the flow because 01:28:135 (88135|0,88349|0) - you used stack here.
01:59:847 (119847|1) - move to 3 to continue the flow of the pattern cause the main pattern will be 02:00:061 (120061|1,120168|4,120168|3,120276|0,120276|1,120383|4,120490|1,120490|2) -


i was said that i should not shove for suggestion in you
GOODLUCK!

YunoFanatic wrote:

Hi~! I believe i have somehow marked this for a mod
Nice song btw!

NM
00:01:356 - 00:01:570 add a ln here since the sound was very long till it comes on the note.
00:04:784 (4784|1) - move this instead in the 4th column so the pattern can be pressed comfortably.
00:10:569 (10569|3,10998|3) - move to 2 and 3 i feel its the best way to place those notes.
00:13:140 (13140|3) - move to 5 cause the stack for it was a bit bad.
00:14:426 (14426|1,14855|2) - move to 1 and 2. the pattern in here was a bit awkward because the stack does fit imo.
00:16:140 (16140|1,16569|0) - move to 3 and 3, the chord for 00:16:997 (16997|2,16997|0) - is open and its a perfect opportunity to place the note on the open chord.
00:17:854 (17854|3,17854|1,18283|1,18283|2) - delete whistle on those and add clap on 1 note per red line.
00:26:854 (26854|2,27282|1) - move this notes on 4 and 3 it fits very well to be mirrored.
00:39:710 (39710|1,40031|0) - ctrl j those cause the pattern is very unbalanced.
00:42:710 (42710|0,42710|1,43138|2,43138|3) - you placed 2 claps here. it doesnt really fit and the clap was very loud.
00:53:637 (53637|1) - move to 5 cause the upcoming note doesnt give meaning to the pattern or else it s just an broke pattern.
01:51:705 - 01:52:133 add doubles in this timing. it fit very well in the music
01:56:633 - 01:56:847 ^
01:58:133 (118133|3) - move to 5, very bad placement cause of the stack didnt look good on this note.
02:11:418 (131418|2) - move to 4 cause the pattern 02:11:632 (131632|4,132060|3,132382|4) - is not yet done and there are an open chord 02:10:775 (130775|2,130775|4) - so it fits well perfectly.
02:26:417 (146417|1) - move to 1 to make the flow much ok.
02:30:059 (150059|3) - delete clap here its not very nessesary cause its loud and it wasnt needed.
02:47:415 (167415|1) - place it on the open chord 3 its very neat to look at this way.

HD
00:14:855 (14855|3) - move to 2 much better.
00:36:924 (36924|1) - move to 1st due to the stair 1/4.
01:29:421 (89421|0) - move to 4 instead to balance the pattern look at it closer its much more neat.
02:18:060 (138060|1) - move this note to 5 instead? much more better for the patterns.

MX
00:02:641 (2641|2) - move it to 4 to balance the pattern better cause you suddenly used close double with the pattern going on.
00:37:032 (37032|4) - i clearly hear that this isnt even needed.
00:47:102 (47102|2) - move to 4 much better for the flow cause the previous pattern was kinda a stair one.
01:04:565 (64565|2) - move it on 2 instead? cause the doubles will be coming after this pattern.
01:27:921 (87921|2) - move to 4 much good for the flow because 01:28:135 (88135|0,88349|0) - you used stack here.
01:59:847 (119847|1) - move to 3 to continue the flow of the pattern cause the main pattern will be 02:00:061 (120061|1,120168|4,120168|3,120276|0,120276|1,120383|4,120490|1,120490|2) -


i was said that i should not shove for suggestion in you
GOODLUCK!

All fixed
Thank you for mod

等我有空了再来看一次这张谱子

Simple_Star wrote:

等我有空了再来看一次这张谱子

謝謝你
不過這張譜可能依然做得不太好 很多奇怪的地方
所以請見諒

From NaxelCL And FGSky's osu!mania Modding Queue


Hi You second XD
HITSOUNDS IS VERY NICE XD



mm in my opinion is very nice map of mapper 1st map congratulations gume for the late mod:c plz undermapping more notes is requerid

Here is Mod~这次的Mod更加深入些哦
Column:1 2 3 4 5
[NM]
既然是NM的话~ OD7 or HP7
00:04:355 - 漏音哟 Add a Note at 2
00:14:855 (14855|1) - Change to Hold,end at 00:15:283 -
00:38:317 (38317|0,38531|3) - 下移一格 移完之后一个在白线 一格在红线
00:40:031 (40031|1,40246|3) - 下移一格
00:41:745 (41745|1,41960|2) - 继续下移一格 NM主要还是要抓最清晰地节奏比较好哟
00:42:174 (42174|0) - 上移一格 并在5 Add a Note
00:43:781 - Add a Hold at 3,end at 00:43:995 -
01:08:422 (68422|3) - Remove
01:09:279 (69279|1) - Remove
01:09:708 - Add a Hold at 5,end at 01:10:136 -
01:23:850 (83850|3) - Move to 5
01:23:850 (83850|2) - 这个Remove
01:24:278 - ~01:27:706 - 这里重音和轻音反了 把1个Note的地方改成2个,2个Note的改成1个
01:29:206 - Sugger you to try this---> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1321667
01:32:956 - Add a Note at 3
01:33:492 - Add a Note at 4
01:33:706 - Add a Note at 5
01:36:063 - 嗯..建议你用这个---> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1321676
01:38:206 - Add a Note at 3
01:45:062 - Add a Note at 4
01:45:062 (105062|1) - 这个Hold 应该在01:45:277 - 开始
01:45:919 - Add a Note at 5
01:46:134 (106134|3,106134|4,106562|1,106562|0) - 推荐你删掉
01:46:991 - Add a Note at 1
01:47:848 (107848|3,108276|4) - 删去
01:48:705 - Add a Note at 5
01:49:348 - Add a Note
01:49:562 (109562|2,109991|0) - 删去
01:50:419 - Add a Note at 1
01:51:276 (111276|3) - 删去
01:51:276 (111276|4) - Change to Hold,end at 01:51:919 -
01:51:919 (111919|3) - 删了
01:52:133 - Add 2 Notes at 1 and 3
01:52:776 - Add a Note at 3
01:52:990 (112990|3,112990|2,113419|0,113419|4) - 建议删去
01:53:847 (113847|2) - Move to 1 and Add a Note at 5
01:55:990 (115990|4) - Move to 01:55:562 -
01:56:633 - Add a Note at 4
01:56:847 - Add a Note at 5
02:27:916 (147916|0,148345|1) - 位置交换
最后一个Kiai 还是一样的 重音和轻音问题 你可以看看修改
抱歉我因为是EZ/NM打手..所以底难度Mod的最多啦 并不是做的不好 而是改进而已~

Other Diffculty will come soon

NaxelCL wrote:

From NaxelCL And FGSky's osu!mania Modding Queue


Hi You second XD
HITSOUNDS IS VERY NICE XD

General

Background Like it Background XD nice
Kia Time kia times can not be more than 15 seconds long
Preview pointnice point:3

HD

plz changed the names of all diffs for 5K HD 5K MX AND 5K NM
NotesVery nice diff of 1st mapXD and you need undermapping agreged more notes
- 00:01:356 eliminated this LN
00:01:677 this ln is terminated in 00:01:891
01:24:278 agreged ln this
01:29:849 agreged ln this in 3 column

mm in my opinion is very nice map of mapper 1st map congratulations gume for the late mod:c plz undermapping more notes is requerid

Really? Thank you very much and thank for mod

I have some problem because my English is not good
so I don't know what does agreged mean? Sorry
and I can't search this word in the internet

Simple_Star wrote:

Here is Mod~这次的Mod更加深入些哦
Column:1 2 3 4 5
[NM]
既然是NM的话~ OD7 or HP7
00:04:355 - 漏音哟 Add a Note at 2
00:14:855 (14855|1) - Change to Hold,end at 00:15:283 -
00:38:317 (38317|0,38531|3) - 下移一格 移完之后一个在白线 一格在红线
00:40:031 (40031|1,40246|3) - 下移一格
00:41:745 (41745|1,41960|2) - 继续下移一格 NM主要还是要抓最清晰地节奏比较好哟
00:42:174 (42174|0) - 上移一格 并在5 Add a Note
00:43:781 - Add a Hold at 3,end at 00:43:995 -
01:08:422 (68422|3) - Remove
01:09:279 (69279|1) - Remove
01:09:708 - Add a Hold at 5,end at 01:10:136 -
01:23:850 (83850|3) - Move to 5
01:23:850 (83850|2) - 这个Remove
01:24:278 - ~01:27:706 - 这里重音和轻音反了 把1个Note的地方改成2个,2个Note的改成1个
01:29:206 - Sugger you to try this---> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1321667
01:32:956 - Add a Note at 3
01:33:492 - Add a Note at 4
01:33:706 - Add a Note at 5
01:36:063 - 嗯..建议你用这个---> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1321676
01:38:206 - Add a Note at 3
01:45:062 - Add a Note at 4
01:45:062 (105062|1) - 这个Hold 应该在01:45:277 - 开始
01:45:919 - Add a Note at 5
01:46:134 (106134|3,106134|4,106562|1,106562|0) - 推荐你删掉
01:46:991 - Add a Note at 1
01:47:848 (107848|3,108276|4) - 删去
01:48:705 - Add a Note at 5
01:49:348 - Add a Note
01:49:562 (109562|2,109991|0) - 删去
01:50:419 - Add a Note at 1
01:51:276 (111276|3) - 删去
01:51:276 (111276|4) - Change to Hold,end at 01:51:919 -
01:51:919 (111919|3) - 删了
01:52:133 - Add 2 Notes at 1 and 3
01:52:776 - Add a Note at 3
01:52:990 (112990|3,112990|2,113419|0,113419|4) - 建议删去
01:53:847 (113847|2) - Move to 1 and Add a Note at 5
01:55:990 (115990|4) - Move to 01:55:562 -
01:56:633 - Add a Note at 4
01:56:847 - Add a Note at 5
02:27:916 (147916|0,148345|1) - 位置交换
最后一个Kiai 还是一样的 重音和轻音问题 你可以看看修改
抱歉我因为是EZ/NM打手..所以底难度Mod的最多啦 并不是做的不好 而是改进而已~

Other Diffculty will come soon

我明白的
始終我對做圖還不太熟練
有問題是很正常的
而已有你這種打手幫我MOD 我感到非常榮幸w
所以thank you for mod

lil_yumika_lil wrote:

Amazing 5kmap!
I will totally support your map, please call me anytime.

Really? thank you for your support!!
If you have free time ,please try this map and give me some advice ,because I want to get some advice to make the beatmap perfectly.

hokin1995 wrote:

I have some problem because my English is not good
so I don't know what does agreged mean? Sorry
and I can't search this word in the internet

It means "agregue (Spanish)"="add",
He recommended that add LN to 3rd column but I don't know how long it'll end.

Maybe..,
01:29:849 - add LN to 3rd column end at 01:30:278 -
01:24:278 - remap this LN start from 01:23:850 - end at 01:24:707 -

Okay then, I will come back to advise your map.
Good Luck

不要好意再占一层楼因为我老是忘记mod 唔我觉得第一次能做的这么好已经很不错了,加油!



Good luck！

lil_yumika_lil wrote:

hokin1995 wrote:

I have some problem because my English is not good
so I don't know what does agreged mean? Sorry
and I can't search this word in the internet

It means "agregue (Spanish)"="add",
He recommended that add LN to 3rd column but I don't know how long it'll end.

Maybe..,
01:29:849 - add LN to 3rd column end at 01:30:278 -
01:24:278 - remap this LN start from 01:23:850 - end at 01:24:707 -

Okay then, I will come back to advise your map.
Good Luck

OH
Thank for help
haha, I will waiting your advise

richardfeder wrote:

不要好意再占一层楼因为我老是忘记mod 唔我觉得第一次能做的这么好已经很不错了,加油!

NM

00:10:569 (10569|3) - add

00:23:854 - 这里开始原则上来说是没有问题的,但是很单调:全程打次洞次. 可以考虑在取音上有所变化,比如：00:30:068 - 开始的几段萨克斯完全可以用面条写进去而不是继续1-2-1-2-1-...这样谱面会丰富很多. 第一个kiai段同样.

02:07:882 (127882|3) - add?

02:10:775 (130775|2) - 这个完全可以变成到02:11:203 - 的面条:写人声或者萨克斯都可以.

02:16:560 (136560|3) - add

02:37:987 (157987|0) - delete. 并不是一个重拍
唔总的来说很不错! 就是缺乏一些变化w

HD

00:10:355 (10355|2) - 我不是很确定这个需不需要

00:10:891 (10891|2) - add 旋律的话HD还是不要漏了好 xD

00:13:033 (13033|0) - ^

00:14:105 (14105|3) - ^

00:14:426 (14426|4) - 重拍. 除了旋律一个长条之外还要再加一个note来表示重音

00:15:283 (15283|2) - 停在00:15:497 -

00:15:712 (15712|3) - add

00:16:354 (16354|1) - 唔这个是什么;w;

00:17:426 (17426|2,17640|4,17854|3,17854|1) - 感觉还是有一点奇怪QAQ

00:18:390 (18390|2) - add

00:43:353 (43353|0) - 延长到00:43:781 - 然后00:43:781 (43781|1) - 加一个note

00:47:424 (47424|0) - add

01:08:636 (68636|2) - delete?

01:09:922 (69922|2) - 去掉然后把01:09:708 (69708|0) - 长度double...感觉分成两个面条完全没有必要啊,一个直接写萨克斯可能会好一些;w;

01:27:706 (87706|1) - add

01:31:135 - http://puu.sh/6QXNO.jpg 条子末尾加了一个clap的note,然后重新整理了一下供参考>~<

01:33:920 (93920|1) - 我觉得去掉好一些

01:40:348 (100348|1,100456|2,100563|1) - 这有点绝了w 音不是很清楚而且HD的话这个梗还是去掉吧

01:58:776 (118776|2,119204|2,119633|2) - 我觉得可以去掉 01:59:311 (119311|2) - 和01:59:418 (119418|0) - 加

02:05:204 (125204|2) - add 这里萨克斯也有一个短促的音可以用note表示

02:11:632 (131632|0,131846|2) - 其实应该是一根...02:11:846 (131846|2) - 应该用note写一个重音而不是拉一个面条w

02:13:346 (133346|2) - add

02:15:275 (135275|0) - add

02:16:560 (136560|2,136774|4) - 我推荐这样放供参考>< 底下的那个条子和点也动了一下 http://puu.sh/6QYsd.jpg

02:37:987 (157987|3,157987|1) - 我建议只写一个note放到中间(因为这个比后面那个beat轻一些)

02:40:344 (160344|2,160451|3) - ctrl+j

02:43:237 (163237|3) - add

02:43:987 (163987|2) - add

MX

;w;原谅我脱稿(其实我mx mod不是很好

Good luck！

謝謝你
基本上全都Fixed了
至於在NM裡那些單調的NOTES 我遲一點再整理一下
Thank for mod

ok 我拖了太久 现在发现改的不错啊。。。图挺好的
12345
MX我就不mod了。。打起来挺好的。。 （Pia!(ｏ ‵-′)ノ”(ノ﹏<。) 其实是我比较懒

victorica_db wrote:

ok 我拖了太久 现在发现改的不错啊。。。图挺好的
12345

NM

00:18:283 - 加一个好了
00:42:710 - 00:44:210 - - 取个人声看看
00:43:567 (43567|3) - 这个drum 上面没取 这里就删了好了
00:45:709 (45709|1,46138|3,46138|4,46567|1,46995|3,46995|4,47424|0,47852|4,47852|1,48281|0) - 重音应该反了 我觉的
01:01:565 (61565|2) - 结束在上面红线
01:02:208 (62208|0) - 结束在上面白线
01:04:780 (64780|0) - 结束在上面白线 然后在那个白线加一个note
01:08:851 (68851|2) - move to 01:08:744 -
01:22:564 (82564|2) - 这个删了
01:23:207 (83207|2,83207|3) - 变成一个条子
01:33:278 (93278|3) - 挪到01:33:492 - 1轨道
01:29:206 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1328679
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1328681
01:35:313 (95313|1) - 挪到红线
01:37:991 - 加一个在5
01:38:420 (98420|1) - 这里变成12轨道的双note
01:38:849 - 加一个note
01:39:491 (99491|4,99706|3,99920|2,100134|1,100348|0,100563|2) - 这段抓的有点奇怪。建议换掉。。就取人声吧
01:45:277 (105277|1) - 在白线停
02:15:275 (135275|0,135275|1) - 去掉一个
02:15:275 (135275|1,135275|0,172772|4,172772|0) - 停这02:53:200 -

HD

00:38:424 - 00:42:495 - 这儿的音写出来 就是叮的那个音
00:56:637 - +1 note
00:56:744 - ^
00:56:852 - +一个短条
00:57:066 - ^
01:02:208 - +一个条子
01:03:065 - 01:03:065 - 这部分+上鼓点
01:07:243 - +1note
01:08:744 - ^
01:10:136 - ^
02:05:204 - 加个note在3
02:08:418 - 加个条子 上面红线结束
02:38:628 - 加个note 在3
02:38:951 - 加一个note
02:42:058 - ^
02:42:273 - ^
02:42:380 - ^
02:46:451 - ^
02:46:772 - 加个短条在5
02:47:311 - 加一个note 稍微调整下pattern 让他变的顺手一些
02:52:772 (172772|4,172772|2,172772|0) - 和NM一样

MX我就不mod了。。打起来挺好的。。 （Pia!(ｏ ‵-′)ノ”(ノ﹏<。) 其实是我比较懒

Thank you db大哥
Thank for mod
太懶是不對的w

Hi everyone, I came here to review by request. (Column:1,2,3,4,5)
>>不好意思回信晚了...

[General]
No problems.

[Patterns of NM]
*Unsuitable pattern as most easy diff --
00:05:427 (5427|3) - move to 3
00:05:641 (5641|4) - move to 4
00:06:069 (6069|1) - move to 3
00:06:284 (6284|0) - move to 2
--

00:22:997 (22997|2,23425|2) - remove
00:22:783 - add a LN to 3, end at 00:22:997 -
00:22:997 - add a note to 4
00:23:211 - add a note to 2
00:23:425 - add a note to 5
00:23:640 - add a note to 3
00:23:854 (23854|1) - move to 1
00:24:282 (24282|3) - move to 5
00:24:711 (24711|0) - move to 4
00:28:139 (28139|3) - move to 1
00:28:996 (28996|0) - move to 2
00:29:425 (29425|1) - move to 1
00:33:925 (33925|2) - move to 2
00:34:353 - add a LN to 3, end at 00:34:567 -
00:34:567 (34567|1) - move to 1
00:34:996 (34996|0) - move to 2
00:35:853 (35853|2) - move to 4
00:38:853 (38853|2) - move to 5
00:39:281 (39281|1) - move to 3
00:40:138 (40138|3) - move to 3
00:40:567 (40567|0) - move to 5
00:40:567 (40567|0,40567|2) - move to 4 & 5
00:40:996 (40996|3) - move to 3

*The below pattern has a bit difficult problem, I suggest "II" --
I. 00:42:495 - add a note to 3
or,
II. 00:42:067 (42067|1) - remove
--

*If you like to follow the beat sounds perfectly, I suggest the below mod --
00:43:138 (43138|0) - extend this LN to 00:43:567 -
--

*If you wanna emphasize 00:45:709 (45709|1,46567|0,47424|0,48281|0) - --
I. 00:45:281 (45281|3) - remove
or,
II. 00:46:138 - / 00:46:995 - / 00:47:852 - add notes to each line as you like.
--

00:47:424 (47424|0,47424|3) - Crtl+H
00:48:709 (48709|1) - move to 3
00:54:173 (54173|0) - move to 2
00:57:923 (57923|3) - move to 2
01:02:637 (62637|3) - move to 3
01:06:494 (66494|3) - move to 5
01:08:744 (68744|2) - remove, then add a LN to 3, end at 01:09:279 -
01:09:065 - add a note to 4
01:11:422 (71422|4,71422|1) - Crtl+H
01:13:565 (73565|3) - move to 3
01:14:850 (74850|0) - move to 2
01:16:136 (76136|4) - move to 3
01:16:993 (76993|0) - move to 2
01:17:850 (77850|1) - move to 4
01:22:350 (82350|4) - move to 4
01:23:207 (83207|0) - move to 2
01:23:850 (83850|4) - move to 3
01:24:278 (84278|2) - move to 5
01:29:635 (89635|4) - move to 3
01:33:278 (93278|0) - move to 2
01:38:206 (98206|2) - move to 2
01:38:420 (98420|1) - move to 3
01:38:849 (98849|4) - move to 2
01:50:848 - add a note to 3
01:52:776 (112776|2) - move to 4
01:59:418 (119418|1) - move to 1
02:00:490 (120490|3) - move to 5
02:12:060 (132060|3) - move to 3
02:12:382 (132382|4) - move to 1
02:15:917 (135917|4) - move to 2
02:16:132 (136132|2,136560|2) - remove
02:16:132 (136132|1) - move to 1
02:16:132 - add a LN to 3, end at 02:16:560 -
02:16:560 - add notes to 2 & 5
02:20:846 (140846|2) - move to 2
02:22:131 (142131|3) - move to 3
02:23:845 (143845|3) - move to 3
02:35:309 (155309|3) - move to 2
02:43:772 (163772|0) - move to 2
02:45:701 (165701|1) - move to 02:45:594 -
02:47:844 - add a note to 1
02:48:058 - to 02:52:772 - remap like this.

[EX. Hitsounding of NM]
*Please replay both section, I suggest you to fix either hitsound --
I. 01:10:136 - to 01:19:993 -
II. 02:16:989 - to 02:26:845 -

[Comment]
Overall patterns of NM don't have any critical issues which also include your way,
however, the patterns of some sections aren't perfect certainly.
Actually I have found many small issues as I pointed out.
It's not critical, but novice~middle players would desire more comfortable patterns.
and I recommend you to enrich the varieties of sound, then this map will be very cool
okay that's all for me, it seems like I have fallen in love to this map.., here is
I'll be back again to think about the others, 加油~♥

lil_yumika_lil wrote:

Hi everyone, I came here to review by request. (Column:1,2,3,4,5)
>>不好意思回信晚了...

[General]
No problems.

[Patterns of NM]
*Unsuitable pattern as most easy diff --
00:05:427 (5427|3) - move to 3
00:05:641 (5641|4) - move to 4
00:06:069 (6069|1) - move to 3
00:06:284 (6284|0) - move to 2
--

00:22:997 (22997|2,23425|2) - remove
00:22:783 - add a LN to 3, end at 00:22:997 -
00:22:997 - add a note to 4
00:23:211 - add a note to 2
00:23:425 - add a note to 5
00:23:640 - add a note to 3
00:23:854 (23854|1) - move to 1
00:24:282 (24282|3) - move to 5
00:24:711 (24711|0) - move to 4
00:28:139 (28139|3) - move to 1
00:28:996 (28996|0) - move to 2
00:29:425 (29425|1) - move to 1
00:33:925 (33925|2) - move to 2
00:34:353 - add a LN to 3, end at 00:34:567 -
00:34:567 (34567|1) - move to 1
00:34:996 (34996|0) - move to 2
00:35:853 (35853|2) - move to 4
00:38:853 (38853|2) - move to 5
00:39:281 (39281|1) - move to 3
00:40:138 (40138|3) - move to 3
00:40:567 (40567|0) - move to 5
00:40:567 (40567|0,40567|2) - move to 4 & 5
00:40:996 (40996|3) - move to 3

*The below pattern has a bit difficult problem, I suggest "II" --
I. 00:42:495 - add a note to 3
or,
II. 00:42:067 (42067|1) - remove
--

*If you like to follow the beat sounds perfectly, I suggest the below mod --
00:43:138 (43138|0) - extend this LN to 00:43:567 -
--

*If you wanna emphasize 00:45:709 (45709|1,46567|0,47424|0,48281|0) - --
I. 00:45:281 (45281|3) - remove
or,
II. 00:46:138 - / 00:46:995 - / 00:47:852 - add notes to each line as you like.
--

00:47:424 (47424|0,47424|3) - Crtl+H
00:48:709 (48709|1) - move to 3
00:54:173 (54173|0) - move to 2
00:57:923 (57923|3) - move to 2
01:02:637 (62637|3) - move to 3
01:06:494 (66494|3) - move to 5
01:08:744 (68744|2) - remove, then add a LN to 3, end at 01:09:279 -
01:09:065 - add a note to 4
01:11:422 (71422|4,71422|1) - Crtl+H
01:13:565 (73565|3) - move to 3
01:14:850 (74850|0) - move to 2
01:16:136 (76136|4) - move to 3
01:16:993 (76993|0) - move to 2
01:17:850 (77850|1) - move to 4
01:22:350 (82350|4) - move to 4
01:23:207 (83207|0) - move to 2
01:23:850 (83850|4) - move to 3
01:24:278 (84278|2) - move to 5
01:29:635 (89635|4) - move to 3
01:33:278 (93278|0) - move to 2
01:38:206 (98206|2) - move to 2
01:38:420 (98420|1) - move to 3
01:38:849 (98849|4) - move to 2
01:50:848 - add a note to 3
01:52:776 (112776|2) - move to 4
01:59:418 (119418|1) - move to 1
02:00:490 (120490|3) - move to 5
02:12:060 (132060|3) - move to 3
02:12:382 (132382|4) - move to 1
02:15:917 (135917|4) - move to 2
02:16:132 (136132|2,136560|2) - remove
02:16:132 (136132|1) - move to 1
02:16:132 - add a LN to 3, end at 02:16:560 -
02:16:560 - add notes to 2 & 5
02:20:846 (140846|2) - move to 2
02:22:131 (142131|3) - move to 3
02:23:845 (143845|3) - move to 3
02:35:309 (155309|3) - move to 2
02:43:772 (163772|0) - move to 2
02:45:701 (165701|1) - move to 02:45:594 -
02:47:844 - add a note to 1
02:48:058 - to 02:52:772 - remap like this.

[EX. Hitsounding of NM]
*Please replay both section, I suggest you to fix either hitsound --
I. 01:10:136 - to 01:19:993 -
II. 02:16:989 - to 02:26:845 -

[Comment]
Overall patterns of NM don't have any critical issues which also include your way,
however, the patterns of some sections aren't perfect certainly.
Actually I have found many small issues as I pointed out.
It's not critical, but novice~middle players would desire more comfortable patterns.
and I recommend you to enrich the varieties of sound, then this map will be very cool
okay that's all for me, it seems like I have fallen in love to this map.., here is
I'll be back again to think about the others, 加油~♥

All fixed thank for mod
不過有些地方依然不太明白
EX. Hitsounding of NM 裡 我應該把hitsounds 全換掉 還是把不協調的hitsounds改一改?
其實我也想豐富這張譜的hitsounds
但是一直找不到我想要的hitsounds
而且我也不太知名哪裡可以找到我想要的hitsounds

原來你會中文 那就比較好辦事w

hokin1995 wrote:

不過有些地方依然不太明白
EX. Hitsounding of NM 裡 我應該把hitsounds 全換掉 還是把不協調的hitsounds改一改?
其實我也想豐富這張譜的hitsounds
但是一直找不到我想要的hitsounds
而且我也不太知名哪裡可以找到我想要的hitsounds

原來你會中文 那就比較好辦事w

我寻找hitsounds如果我有时间

lil_yumika_lil wrote:

hokin1995 wrote:

不過有些地方依然不太明白
EX. Hitsounding of NM 裡 我應該把hitsounds 全換掉 還是把不協調的hitsounds改一改?
其實我也想豐富這張譜的hitsounds
但是一直找不到我想要的hitsounds
而且我也不太知名哪裡可以找到我想要的hitsounds

原來你會中文 那就比較好辦事w

我寻找hitsounds如果我有时间

yumika
Thank you so much

hi from modding queue :3
sorry for late ;w;


[NM]
00:01:356 (1356|4) - i think this song start at 00:01:570 there's no sound remove until 570
00:07:998 (7998|2,8212|1) - i think this should be normal note. not LN
00:08:855 (8855|3,8855|4) - move left
00:52:995 (52995|2) - move to 0 column
00:57:601 (57601|3) - move to 4 column

[HD]
01:05:529 (65529|3) - change to normal note. not LN

[MX]
00:01:356 (1356|4,1356|0) - i think this song start at 00:01:570 there's no sound remove until 570
00:42:710 (42710|1) - convert to normal note

WhiteAries wrote:

hi from modding queue :3
sorry for late ;w;


[NM]
00:01:356 (1356|4) - i think this song start at 00:01:570 there's no sound remove until 570
00:07:998 (7998|2,8212|1) - i think this should be normal note. not LN
00:08:855 (8855|3,8855|4) - move left
00:52:995 (52995|2) - move to 0 column
00:57:601 (57601|3) - move to 4 column

[HD]
01:05:529 (65529|3) - change to normal note. not LN

[MX]
00:01:356 (1356|4,1356|0) - i think this song start at 00:01:570 there's no sound remove until 570
00:42:710 (42710|1) - convert to normal note

All fixed
Thank for mod

HI~ from my Modding Queue
All modding is my suggestion

[General]

1. offset is 01:570 recheck plz

[NM]

1. 00:22:783 (22783|2,22997|3) - remove 4 column
2. 00:30:068 (30068|4) to 00:34:353 (34353|2) - there's too many LN
3. 01:39:063 (99063|2,99491|4,99706|0,99920|3,100134|1,100348|4,100563|0) - ^
   OK NICE MAP

[HD]

1. There's too many LN without space try to fix it
   
   There's not many problems actually but just try what i said and i love your Note Spacing

[MX]

1. There's too many LN without space try to fix it
2. 00:03:284 (3284|0,3284|1,3391|2,3498|0,3605|4,3605|2,3712|0) - too complicated for beat
3. 02:13:775 (133775|1,133775|2) to 02:14:846 (134846|2,134846|3) - better tap this
4. 00:09:498 (9498|4,9605|3,9712|1,9712|0,9819|4,9926|2,9926|0) - ^

GOOD LUCK

Neta wrote:

HI~ from my Modding Queue
All modding is my suggestion

[General]

1. offset is 01:570 recheck plz

[NM]

1. 00:22:783 (22783|2,22997|3) - remove 4 column
2. 00:30:068 (30068|4) to 00:34:353 (34353|2) - there's too many LN
3. 01:39:063 (99063|2,99491|4,99706|0,99920|3,100134|1,100348|4,100563|0) - ^
   OK NICE MAP

[HD]

1. There's too many LN without space try to fix it
   
   There's not many problems actually but just try what i said and i love your Note Spacing

[MX]

1. There's too many LN without space try to fix it
2. 00:03:284 (3284|0,3284|1,3391|2,3498|0,3605|4,3605|2,3712|0) - too complicated for beat
3. 02:13:775 (133775|1,133775|2) to 02:14:846 (134846|2,134846|3) - better tap this
4. 00:09:498 (9498|4,9605|3,9712|1,9712|0,9819|4,9926|2,9926|0) - ^

GOOD LUCK

All fixed
Thank for mod

Nice map

Hanyuu wrote:

Nice map

Thank you