This map is so cool. XD The only thing I can complain about is the x2 sliders are kind of unpredictable. Please add an SB warning for them. Other than that, this looks ready for a bubble (to me at least)! Buuuttt, this is still in help so, haha. I'll star this for now though, hehe.
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Kajiura Yuki - Break the Sword of Justice
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Topic Starter
Glad you like itTakuma wrote:
This map is so cool. XD The only thing I can complain about is the x2 sliders are kind of unpredictable. Please add an SB warning for them. Other than that, this looks ready for a bubble (to me at least)! Buuuttt, this is still in help so, haha. I'll star this for now though, hehe.
And about the SB warning, I really don't know how to work with SB n_nU but I was thinking i'ts going to look a bit weird cuz there are just three x2 sliders and are separated, what do you think?
Thanks a lot for the Star and your time!
EDIT: Fixed a lil' volume problem, and moved to pending.
[Easy]
01:42:50 (6) - Move a bit to the right
[Normal]
01:39:21 (1) - Maybe you shouldn't stack this under the slider
Tested it and I didn't seem to get many 100's but there were some areas that I got over 20 ms off.
Could be just me.
Don't forget to add Lizbeth to the tags
The hitsounds are great and I can't seem to find much wrong with it
01:42:50 (6) - Move a bit to the right
[Normal]
01:39:21 (1) - Maybe you shouldn't stack this under the slider
Tested it and I didn't seem to get many 100's but there were some areas that I got over 20 ms off.
Could be just me.
Don't forget to add Lizbeth to the tags
The hitsounds are great and I can't seem to find much wrong with it
eeemod GO!!!
[Easy]
00:28:95 (5) - new combo
00:30:50 (1) - remove new combo
00:30:88 (2) - ADD NEW COMBO XD (only if above is done)
00:43:27 (2) - I'd like this 1/2 back, goes more to that wind instrument thingy (space accordingly if done)
01:27:79 (x) - note here would make it symmetrical to the combo before and after :/
01:52:56 (1) - ends two whole beats further than the other difficulties, either make the others end where this spinner does, or make this like the others.
[Lizbeth]
eh, I like it, hitsounds are very orchestral, imo
[Insane]
00:28:56 (6) - new combo
00:28:95 (1) - remove new combo
00:49:08 (1) - remove new combo
00:49:46 (3) - add new combo here
01:34:17 (3) - i don' like this jump
01:36:50 (10) - ^
I'm not going to attack the spacing too much here, it played well after I've played a couple of times, guess it works sooo.
I also agree with Takuma, 2x sliders were kinda unpredictable, but meh
yeah, map is pretty nice
Insane and Normal were fun at times,
you got a nice map, good job
[Easy]
00:28:95 (5) - new combo
00:30:50 (1) - remove new combo
00:30:88 (2) - ADD NEW COMBO XD (only if above is done)
00:43:27 (2) - I'd like this 1/2 back, goes more to that wind instrument thingy (space accordingly if done)
01:27:79 (x) - note here would make it symmetrical to the combo before and after :/
01:52:56 (1) - ends two whole beats further than the other difficulties, either make the others end where this spinner does, or make this like the others.
[Lizbeth]
eh, I like it, hitsounds are very orchestral, imo
[Insane]
00:28:56 (6) - new combo
00:28:95 (1) - remove new combo
00:49:08 (1) - remove new combo
00:49:46 (3) - add new combo here
01:34:17 (3) - i don' like this jump
01:36:50 (10) - ^
I'm not going to attack the spacing too much here, it played well after I've played a couple of times, guess it works sooo.
I also agree with Takuma, 2x sliders were kinda unpredictable, but meh
yeah, map is pretty nice
Insane and Normal were fun at times,
you got a nice map, good job
[Easy]
00:25:85 (1) - Normal hitsounds on slider end.
01:01:46 (1) - A note nearly a spinner on easy maps , is a NONO.
[Lizbeth's Normal]
Love the hitsounds. No problems.
[Insane]
00:29:91 (2) - You need a SB warning for that.
00:51:79 (1) - ^ etc.
01:51:01 (1,2,3,4) - This sudden change of spacing is hard to read.
Like it. Star.
00:25:85 (1) - Normal hitsounds on slider end.
01:01:46 (1) - A note nearly a spinner on easy maps , is a NONO.
[Lizbeth's Normal]
Love the hitsounds. No problems.
[Insane]
00:29:91 (2) - You need a SB warning for that.
00:51:79 (1) - ^ etc.
01:51:01 (1,2,3,4) - This sudden change of spacing is hard to read.
Like it. Star.
Topic Starter
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Good map. I think this map is ready for ranked. Especially I like this map's hitsounds.
[Insane]
0:42:30(Blank)-> Add a note?
Star.
[Insane]
0:42:30(Blank)-> Add a note?
Star.
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these
timing seems fine enough
i like what you've done with the hitsounds
[EASY]
all good
[LIZBETH'S NORMAL]
looks good
[INSANE]
i don't like those mini jumps you've put in. seem too random to me. other people seem to be fine with it so i guess you can keep them.
also, the speedup warning isn't eyecatching enough imo. all i noticed was a flashing red light. i'd make the Speed x2 bigger so its easier to notice.
apart from that, all seems fine.
nice map. not too keen on the jumps but thats all i can rag on. good job
star'd
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these
timing seems fine enough
i like what you've done with the hitsounds
[EASY]
all good
[LIZBETH'S NORMAL]
looks good
[INSANE]
i don't like those mini jumps you've put in. seem too random to me. other people seem to be fine with it so i guess you can keep them.
also, the speedup warning isn't eyecatching enough imo. all i noticed was a flashing red light. i'd make the Speed x2 bigger so its easier to notice.
apart from that, all seems fine.
nice map. not too keen on the jumps but thats all i can rag on. good job
star'd
Topic Starter
Fixed the SB warning, i guess is big enough nowDoomsday93 wrote:
i don't like those mini jumps you've put in. seem too random to me. other people seem to be fine with it so i guess you can keep them.
also, the speedup warning isn't eyecatching enough imo. all i noticed was a flashing red light. i'd make the Speed x2 bigger so its easier to notice.
Thanks for your time
hi Lissette
great map
here's some suggestion:
[Easy]
00:24:500 (5) - normal hit sound with finish
00:26:242 timing section - set it 1/4 or 1/2 forward : if someone hit the circle when he is hit earlier, sound would be the sound of front timing section
00:26:629 (2,3,4) - add finish at all slider end with normal hit sound, it's better to loud them gradually
other seems great
[Lizbeth's Normal]
all timing section - 1/4 or 1/2 forward : if someone hit the circle when he is hit earlier, sound would be the sound of front timing section
00:32:823 (1) - the "radian" doesn't the same to the front slider, make them in alignment
01:32:629 (3,4) - be covered, seem to be a little confused
[Insane]
I have no complains, it's awesome
I'd like to give you some SB suggestion later
great map
star and anoher kudosu star for you!
great map
here's some suggestion:
[Easy]
00:24:500 (5) - normal hit sound with finish
00:26:242 timing section - set it 1/4 or 1/2 forward : if someone hit the circle when he is hit earlier, sound would be the sound of front timing section
00:26:629 (2,3,4) - add finish at all slider end with normal hit sound, it's better to loud them gradually
other seems great
[Lizbeth's Normal]
all timing section - 1/4 or 1/2 forward : if someone hit the circle when he is hit earlier, sound would be the sound of front timing section
00:32:823 (1) - the "radian" doesn't the same to the front slider, make them in alignment
01:32:629 (3,4) - be covered, seem to be a little confused
[Insane]
I have no complains, it's awesome
I'd like to give you some SB suggestion later
great map
star and anoher kudosu star for you!
Topic Starter
Glad you like it Breeze, thanks a lot for the stars!! n___n
Fixed
thnx for your time!!
Fixed
I don't think this apply for end point of a slider -_-a, cuz' is impossible to hit earlier, anyway waiting for what a BAT have to say :pBreeze wrote:
00:26:242 timing section - set it 1/4 or 1/2 forward : if someone hit the circle when he is hit earlier, sound would be the sound of front timing section
thnx for your time!!
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Mystearica
Solid map! And yet again just myself looking through this.
[Easy]
No problems here.
[Normal]
Just one part that tripped me up and I failed to read properly on my first try:
01:30:88 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Maybe re-arrange this part, I could just be too tired but I think newer players might complain a little here.
Just a suggestion, if you feel that it's fine then of course keep it as it is. Like I said I could just be a bit tired orz
Nothing else was found.
[Insane]
Fun difficulty @@
00:41:72 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - In my opinion moving 6 back by 1/4 onto the red tick sounds better.
That's all.
☆
[Easy]
No problems here.
[Normal]
Just one part that tripped me up and I failed to read properly on my first try:
01:30:88 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Maybe re-arrange this part, I could just be too tired but I think newer players might complain a little here.
Just a suggestion, if you feel that it's fine then of course keep it as it is. Like I said I could just be a bit tired orz
Nothing else was found.
[Insane]
Fun difficulty @@
00:41:72 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - In my opinion moving 6 back by 1/4 onto the red tick sounds better.
That's all.
☆
Topic Starter
Thanks for helping mrtn and Mystearica
kds given
kds given
I haven't seen anything wrong ~Starry
~StarryEasy normal is just fine for me
<Insane>
I don`t know why you set jumps like this
i don`t know why no one points it out
I don`t know if it is oj in a insane diff
well i find 4 test players (3 TOP50 1TOP70 and me) we are confused during playing
00:13:66 (3,4,5) - OMG
00:15:98 (3,4,5) - ^
00:21:21 (1,2,3) - ^
Really bad spacing here
01:42:88 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part is good (easy to read and fun)
01:49:66 (1,2,3,4) - but here is bad
Think about those stuffs or look at some jumpy maps
If you need help you can just PM me online
anyway star~
<Insane>
I don`t know why you set jumps like this
i don`t know why no one points it out
I don`t know if it is oj in a insane diff
well i find 4 test players (3 TOP50 1TOP70 and me) we are confused during playing
00:13:66 (3,4,5) - OMG
00:15:98 (3,4,5) - ^
00:21:21 (1,2,3) - ^
Really bad spacing here
01:42:88 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part is good (easy to read and fun)
01:49:66 (1,2,3,4) - but here is bad
Think about those stuffs or look at some jumpy maps
If you need help you can just PM me online
anyway star~
A test file for you
well don`t copy it wwwwwwwwwww
Download: Kajiura Yuki - Break the Sword of Justice (Lissette) [TEST].osu
well don`t copy it wwwwwwwwwww
Download: Kajiura Yuki - Break the Sword of Justice (Lissette) [TEST].osu
I like this music
Hi again
yeah~
i saw a great improvement you realized how to set jumps now
<Insane>
00:09:98 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I will add new combo on (4)
00:14:24 (5) - new combo
01:36:30 (9) - new combo
01:39:21 (10) - ^
That`s all
It`s much better now
you should ask BATs to mod this ^^
yeah~
i saw a great improvement you realized how to set jumps now
<Insane>
00:09:98 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I will add new combo on (4)
00:14:24 (5) - new combo
01:36:30 (9) - new combo
01:39:21 (10) - ^
That`s all
It`s much better now
you should ask BATs to mod this ^^
Topic Starter
Fixed all that ^
Thanks for the recheck Alace, You've helped me a lot ^^
kds 4 ya!
Cya!
Thanks for the recheck Alace, You've helped me a lot ^^
kds 4 ya!
Cya!
normal
00:51:21 (10,11,12) - a little hard to read,seperate 10 with 11,12
also,I think offset should -25,but I'm not sure
star
00:51:21 (10,11,12) - a little hard to read,seperate 10 with 11,12
also,I think offset should -25,but I'm not sure
star
Hello. This'll be my first timing-only mod. Everything else seems to be in tip-top shape...
Timing
-------
[Easy]
I believe this is better off having 1/4 Timing instead of 1/8. This is just a suggestion, so you don't have to change it.
[Lizbeth's Normal]
No errors here.
[Insane]
No errors here.
-----
Overall:
Pretty neat map. Good luck with your Project! Star~
Timing
-------
[Easy]
I believe this is better off having 1/4 Timing instead of 1/8. This is just a suggestion, so you don't have to change it.
[Lizbeth's Normal]
No errors here.
[Insane]
No errors here.
-----
Overall:
Pretty neat map. Good luck with your Project! Star~
Kind of nazi-ish =_="
~Easy~
Fine.
~Normal~
00:10:56 (2,3,4) - not snapped
00:12:88 (2) - ^
00:13:27 (3,4,5,6) - not symmetric
00:15:59 (4) - offscreen
00:20:24 (3) - ^
00:22:56 (1,2,3,4) - not symmetric
01:19:66 (1) - not on the same level with (2,3,4)
01:35:53 (3) - offscreen
~Insane~
00:15:59 (1,2,3,4) - not symmetric
00:38:82 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:49:08 (1,2,3) - ^
00:54:30 (4) - silence the sliderticks
00:59:04 (1) - on white tick
01:01:661 - add note here
+Star
~Easy~
Fine.
~Normal~
00:10:56 (2,3,4) - not snapped
00:12:88 (2) - ^
00:13:27 (3,4,5,6) - not symmetric
00:15:59 (4) - offscreen
00:20:24 (3) - ^
00:22:56 (1,2,3,4) - not symmetric
01:19:66 (1) - not on the same level with (2,3,4)
01:35:53 (3) - offscreen
~Insane~
00:15:59 (1,2,3,4) - not symmetric
00:38:82 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:49:08 (1,2,3) - ^
00:54:30 (4) - silence the sliderticks
00:59:04 (1) - on white tick
01:01:661 - add note here
+Star
i have a bit different offset but... hmm maybe my fault 
easy & normal:
nothing serious found.
insane:
01:39:079 (4,1) - move a bit farther between these two note, so that the spacing doesn't look like 01:39:021 (1,2,3,4) - but i doubt that does someone ask you to move them closer?
+
easy & normal:
nothing serious found.
insane:
01:39:079 (4,1) - move a bit farther between these two note, so that the spacing doesn't look like 01:39:021 (1,2,3,4) - but i doubt that does someone ask you to move them closer?
+
Why isn't the title capitalized? Should be "Break the Sword of Justice" unless you have a good reason why it isn't
Topic Starter
FixedLuigiHann wrote:
Why isn't the title capitalized? Should be "Break the Sword of Justice" unless you have a good reason why it isn't
[Easy]
00:12:306 Remove whistle?
00:13:081 Whistle
00:34:758 (3,1) Finish
00:37:081 Whistle
00:42:500 (1,3) Whistles
00:56:629 Finish
01:28:952 ^
01:31:274 ^
01:38:242 ^
Lizbeth's Normal
No problems found. >_>
[Insane]
00:12:306 Stack with (1)
00:27:984 Remove the whistle in the middle of the slider
00:36:887 ^
Sorry, I can't find other problems. Starred!
00:12:306 Remove whistle?
00:13:081 Whistle
00:34:758 (3,1) Finish
00:37:081 Whistle
00:42:500 (1,3) Whistles
00:56:629 Finish
01:28:952 ^
01:31:274 ^
01:38:242 ^
Lizbeth's Normal
No problems found. >_>
[Insane]
00:12:306 Stack with (1)
00:27:984 Remove the whistle in the middle of the slider
00:36:887 ^
Sorry, I can't find other problems. Starred!
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
[M0D]
Set a preview point.
[Insane]
This map has so much power...with h<s>a</s>it<s>e</>sound.
[Lizbeth's Normal]
00:13:066 (5,6) - I suggest make this symmetrical with 00:13:027 (3,4) -
00:22:056 (1,2,3,4) - ^
Are you twin sisters o.o?
[Easy]
no more.
have a star~
Set a preview point.
[Insane]
This map has so much power...with h<s>a</s>it<s>e</>sound.
[Lizbeth's Normal]
00:13:066 (5,6) - I suggest make this symmetrical with 00:13:027 (3,4) -
00:22:056 (1,2,3,4) - ^
Are you twin sisters o.o?
[Easy]
no more.
have a star~
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding fixed ^^Armin wrote:
[Easy]
00:12:306 Remove whistle?
00:13:081 Whistle
00:34:758 (3,1) Finish
00:37:081 Whistle
00:42:500 (1,3) Whistles
00:56:629 Finish
01:28:952 ^
01:31:274 ^
01:38:242 ^
Lizbeth's Normal
No problems found. >_>
[Insane]
00:12:306 Stack with (1)
00:27:984 Remove the whistle in the middle of the slider
00:36:887 ^
Sorry, I can't find other problems. Starred!
Don't understant @.@ but anyway, kds for the offset ^^Zekira wrote:
Did someone tell you that you crossed my deathline? o_o
Offset: 673 (-21 from current)
Sorry, suspending mod.
Thanks for modding ^^WyndII wrote:
[M0D]
Set a preview point.
[Insane]
This map has so much power...with h<s>a</s>it<s>e</>sound.
[Lizbeth's Normal]
00:13:066 (5,6) - I suggest make this symmetrical with 00:13:027 (3,4) -
00:22:056 (1,2,3,4) - ^
Are you twin sisters o.o?
[Easy]
no more.
have a star~
and yes, we are twin sis n.n
Mod Info's:
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Starts Suggestions:
All seems ok.
[Easy]
00:44:080 (5) - I don't like this slider
[Normal]
It's ok
[Insane]
00:51:076 (1) - Crazy slider O_O
Starred~
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Starts Suggestions:
All seems ok.
[Easy]
00:44:080 (5) - I don't like this slider
[Normal]
It's ok
[Insane]
00:51:076 (1) - Crazy slider O_O
Starred~
Easy:
Perfect!
Lizbeth's Normal
00:15:018 (3) - Grid snap this note its slightly off the slider during gameplay.
00:50:041 (6) - New combo?
Insane:
00:18:086 - Maybe add a note?
00:19:006 - ^
00:29:089 (2) - Straighten this slider, you might have to redraw it.
01:12:067 (1,2,3,4) - The Hp drain is pretty harsh on this part, you could lower the Hp drain by one or make each beat into a new combo?
That's all, this is an excellent map, hitsounds are perfect, lovely jumps, well laid out... I love it! Needs a star
Perfect!
Lizbeth's Normal
00:15:018 (3) - Grid snap this note its slightly off the slider during gameplay.
00:50:041 (6) - New combo?
Insane:
00:18:086 - Maybe add a note?
00:19:006 - ^
00:29:089 (2) - Straighten this slider, you might have to redraw it.
01:12:067 (1,2,3,4) - The Hp drain is pretty harsh on this part, you could lower the Hp drain by one or make each beat into a new combo?
That's all, this is an excellent map, hitsounds are perfect, lovely jumps, well laid out... I love it! Needs a star
[Easy]
perfect
[Normal]
srry it nazi, but this map is that good its all whats wrong with it XD
01:51:076 (3) - line this up with (2)
[Insane]
wow, great and perfect map XD
____
very very nice, enjoy a star
perfect
[Normal]
srry it nazi, but this map is that good its all whats wrong with it XD
01:51:076 (3) - line this up with (2)
[Insane]
wow, great and perfect map XD
____
very very nice, enjoy a star
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding you guys!
Bubbled.
Topic Starter
Thnx for the recheck ^^
Need to make a slight bubble pop for a quick important fixing.
Insane:
00:29:511 (1) - The "Speed x2" that shows up with this slider... while it may not seem like it in editor (and you probably dont with the public build BUT trust me on this one) in test mode, the slider covers the "Speed x2"
EDIT: Screenshot (the sliderball circle covers the rest of it)
Also while im at it, slider ticks would sound good.
Overall, very nicely done!
Insane:
00:29:511 (1) - The "Speed x2" that shows up with this slider... while it may not seem like it in editor (and you probably dont with the public build BUT trust me on this one) in test mode, the slider covers the "Speed x2"
EDIT: Screenshot (the sliderball circle covers the rest of it)
Also while im at it, slider ticks would sound good.
Overall, very nicely done!
It can be clearly seen to me, so whatever.
Topic Starter
i guess is fine now ^^RemmyX25 wrote:
Need to make a slight bubble pop for a quick important fixing.
Insane:
00:29:511 (1) - The "Speed x2" that shows up with this slider... while it may not seem like it in editor (and you probably dont with the public build BUT trust me on this one) in test mode, the slider covers the "Speed x2"
EDIT: Screenshot (the sliderball circle covers the rest of it)
Also while im at it, slider ticks would sound good.
Overall, very nicely done!
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Almost..... but there's a problem.
Your current BG is too Large. 1024 x 768 Is the Max BG size. Also "chronicle" doesn't have a capital C, which it is supposed to.
[Insane]
00:20:608 (3,4) - Uneven spacing (Flip (4) and you'll see it).
00:39:382 (6,7) - Slightly misaligned stack?
00:40:931 (6,7) - ^
Your current BG is too Large. 1024 x 768 Is the Max BG size. Also "chronicle" doesn't have a capital C, which it is supposed to.
[Insane]
00:20:608 (3,4) - Uneven spacing (Flip (4) and you'll see it).
00:39:382 (6,7) - Slightly misaligned stack?
00:40:931 (6,7) - ^
Topic Starter
Fixed all ^^whymeman wrote:
Almost..... but there's a problem.
Your current BG is too Large. 1024 x 768 Is the Max BG size. Also "chronicle" doesn't have a capital C, which it is supposed to.
[Insane]
00:20:608 (3,4) - Uneven spacing (Flip (4) and you'll see it).
00:39:382 (6,7) - Slightly misaligned stack?
00:40:931 (6,7) - ^
[Insane]
00:20:608 (3,4) - Uneven spacing (Flip (4) horizontally and you'll see it). <- Forgot this one.
00:39:382 (6,7) - Slightly misaligned stack?
00:40:931 (6,7) - ^
(No need to kudosu this post)
00:20:608 (3,4) - Uneven spacing (Flip (4) horizontally and you'll see it). <- Forgot this one.
00:40:931 (6,7) - ^
(No need to kudosu this post)
Topic Starter
Fixedwhymeman wrote:
[Insane]
00:20:608 (3,4) - Uneven spacing (Flip (4) horizontally and you'll see it). <- Forgot this one.
Alright then. Sorry for the delay and here's your bubble.
Ranked.
Topic Starter
Thanks you guys!