lesjuh wrote:

Sorry I'm late with this ;___;

Easy:

00:28:95 (5,6,1,2,3) - I can't figure the spacing here. Use 0,8x just like in the rest of the map. Because this is easy, spacing changes on 1/2 would rape the minds of noob players ;D Fixed
01:42:50 (6,1) - Slightly off pattern I don't get what you mean n_nU

Lizbeth's Normal:
01:48:69 (1,2) - You forgot to put finish sounds on these Fixed

Insane:
Good job with the jumps and high velocity sliders. An outstanding beatmap :O n///n thanks!!
01:12:69 (1,2,3,4) - Try Normal finish sounds on these Yeah, sounds better

Everything plays fine and I don't see any reason why not to rank this. Nice map

Takuma wrote:

This map is so cool. XD The only thing I can complain about is the x2 sliders are kind of unpredictable. Please add an SB warning for them. Other than that, this looks ready for a bubble (to me at least)! Buuuttt, this is still in help so, haha. I'll star this for now though, hehe.

Doomsday93 wrote:

i don't like those mini jumps you've put in. seem too random to me. other people seem to be fine with it so i guess you can keep them.

also, the speedup warning isn't eyecatching enough imo. all i noticed was a flashing red light. i'd make the Speed x2 bigger so its easier to notice.

Breeze wrote:

00:26:242 timing section - set it 1/4 or 1/2 forward : if someone hit the circle when he is hit earlier, sound would be the sound of front timing section

LuigiHann wrote:

Why isn't the title capitalized? Should be "Break the Sword of Justice" unless you have a good reason why it isn't

Armin wrote:

[Easy]

00:12:306 Remove whistle?
00:13:081 Whistle
00:34:758 (3,1) Finish
00:37:081 Whistle
00:42:500 (1,3) Whistles
00:56:629 Finish
01:28:952 ^
01:31:274 ^
01:38:242 ^

Lizbeth's Normal

No problems found. >_>

[Insane]

00:12:306 Stack with (1)
00:27:984 Remove the whistle in the middle of the slider
00:36:887 ^

Sorry, I can't find other problems. Starred!

Zekira wrote:

Did someone tell you that you crossed my deathline? o_o

Offset: 673 (-21 from current)

Sorry, suspending mod.

WyndII wrote:

[M0D]

Set a preview point.

[Insane]
This map has so much power...with h<s>a</s>it<s>e</>sound.

[Lizbeth's Normal]
00:13:066 (5,6) - I suggest make this symmetrical with 00:13:027 (3,4) -
00:22:056 (1,2,3,4) - ^
Are you twin sisters o.o?

[Easy]
no more.


have a star~

RemmyX25 wrote:

Need to make a slight bubble pop for a quick important fixing.

Insane:
00:29:511 (1) - The "Speed x2" that shows up with this slider... while it may not seem like it in editor (and you probably dont with the public build BUT trust me on this one) in test mode, the slider covers the "Speed x2"

EDIT: Screenshot (the sliderball circle covers the rest of it)

Also while im at it, slider ticks would sound good.

Overall, very nicely done!

whymeman wrote:

Almost..... but there's a problem.

Your current BG is too Large. 1024 x 768 Is the Max BG size. Also "chronicle" doesn't have a capital C, which it is supposed to.

[Insane]

00:20:608 (3,4) - Uneven spacing (Flip (4) and you'll see it).
00:39:382 (6,7) - Slightly misaligned stack?
00:40:931 (6,7) - ^

whymeman wrote:

[Insane]

00:20:608 (3,4) - Uneven spacing (Flip (4) horizontally and you'll see it). <- Forgot this one.