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Kajiura Yuki - Break the Sword of Justice

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Shinxyn
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Shinxyn
Hmm, the song (not map) is very hard to follow... so I'm not too certain about the timing, oh well, I guess I won't go against what a BAT said
This might be troublesome to ask.. but could you please lower all the full volumed Normal hitsounds by 1-2 ticks?

Easy-
Nazi-
00:16:95 - maybe add a note here to follow the same flow as the last combo
01:27:79 - ^
01:42:50 (6,1,2) - right a tick to have (6) spaced the same as rest of combo :P (then check the next few notes too)
It's probably the 1/2 beats that make this "hard to follow"... but can't do anything about it~

Lizbeth-
Hmmm, no grid snap, eh.. guess I shouldn't be picky then... since there is a lot of places grid snap could probably clean up
^ well, due to that, I can't say anything about placement, and hitsounds are fine, they bring out a nice strong effect to the song

Insane-
@_@ the song/music makes this hard to play~! I see lots of retries.... haha
and no grid snap either~
00:11:53 (7) - new combo for jump? (better yet, swap new combos between 00:11:53 (7,1)
00:12:30 (3) - new combo for jump?
00:13:85 (4,8) - new combos for more jumps!
00:16:17 (4) - new combo, etc etc...
00:23:14 (4,4) - ^
00:28:56 (6) - ^ (swap 00:28:56 (6,1))
00:30:50 (1) - ^
00:33:40 (4) - ^
00:34:75 (9) - ^
00:39:40 (6) - ^ (maybe)
Okay... I'm not ganna bother mentioning them all... just please add new combo in better indicate sudden jumps that happens when the beats are following the same pace?
01:24:88 (2) - do a horizontal flip for (1)
Takuma
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Takuma
This map is so cool. XD The only thing I can complain about is the x2 sliders are kind of unpredictable. Please add an SB warning for them. Other than that, this looks ready for a bubble (to me at least)! Buuuttt, this is still in help so, haha. I'll star this for now though, hehe.
Lissette
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Lissette

Takuma wrote:

This map is so cool. XD The only thing I can complain about is the x2 sliders are kind of unpredictable. Please add an SB warning for them. Other than that, this looks ready for a bubble (to me at least)! Buuuttt, this is still in help so, haha. I'll star this for now though, hehe.
Glad you like it :)

And about the SB warning, I really don't know how to work with SB n_nU but I was thinking i'ts going to look a bit weird cuz there are just three x2 sliders and are separated, what do you think?

Thanks a lot for the Star and your time! :)

EDIT: Fixed a lil' volume problem, and moved to pending.
Sleep Powder
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Sleep Powder
[Easy]
01:42:50 (6) - Move a bit to the right

[Normal]
01:39:21 (1) - Maybe you shouldn't stack this under the slider



Tested it and I didn't seem to get many 100's but there were some areas that I got over 20 ms off.
Could be just me.
Don't forget to add Lizbeth to the tags

The hitsounds are great and I can't seem to find much wrong with it
eee
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Joined January 2008
eee
eeemod GO!!!

[Easy]
00:28:95 (5) - new combo
00:30:50 (1) - remove new combo
00:30:88 (2) - ADD NEW COMBO XD (only if above is done)
00:43:27 (2) - I'd like this 1/2 back, goes more to that wind instrument thingy (space accordingly if done)
01:27:79 (x) - note here would make it symmetrical to the combo before and after :/

01:52:56 (1) - ends two whole beats further than the other difficulties, either make the others end where this spinner does, or make this like the others.

[Lizbeth]
eh, I like it, hitsounds are very orchestral, imo

[Insane]
00:28:56 (6) - new combo
00:28:95 (1) - remove new combo
00:49:08 (1) - remove new combo
00:49:46 (3) - add new combo here
01:34:17 (3) - i don' like this jump :(
01:36:50 (10) - ^
I'm not going to attack the spacing too much here, it played well after I've played a couple of times, guess it works sooo.
I also agree with Takuma, 2x sliders were kinda unpredictable, but meh
yeah, map is pretty nice

Insane and Normal were fun at times,
you got a nice map, good job
Andrea
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Andrea
[Easy]

00:25:85 (1) - Normal hitsounds on slider end.
01:01:46 (1) - A note nearly a spinner on easy maps , is a NONO.

[Lizbeth's Normal]

Love the hitsounds. No problems.

[Insane]

00:29:91 (2) - You need a SB warning for that.
00:51:79 (1) - ^ etc.
01:51:01 (1,2,3,4) - This sudden change of spacing is hard to read.

Like it. Star.
Lissette
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Lissette
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minyeob
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minyeob
Good map. I think this map is ready for ranked. Especially I like this map's hitsounds.

[Insane]
0:42:30(Blank)-> Add a note?


Star.
Doomsday
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Doomsday
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

timing seems fine enough

i like what you've done with the hitsounds :)

[EASY]

all good

[LIZBETH'S NORMAL]

looks good

[INSANE]

i don't like those mini jumps you've put in. seem too random to me. other people seem to be fine with it so i guess you can keep them.

also, the speedup warning isn't eyecatching enough imo. all i noticed was a flashing red light. i'd make the Speed x2 bigger so its easier to notice.

apart from that, all seems fine.

nice map. not too keen on the jumps but thats all i can rag on. good job

star'd
Lissette
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Doomsday93 wrote:

i don't like those mini jumps you've put in. seem too random to me. other people seem to be fine with it so i guess you can keep them.

also, the speedup warning isn't eyecatching enough imo. all i noticed was a flashing red light. i'd make the Speed x2 bigger so its easier to notice.
Fixed the SB warning, i guess is big enough now

Thanks for your time :D
Breeze
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Breeze
hi Lissette
great map

here's some suggestion:

[Easy]

00:24:500 (5) - normal hit sound with finish
00:26:242 timing section - set it 1/4 or 1/2 forward : if someone hit the circle when he is hit earlier, sound would be the sound of front timing section
00:26:629 (2,3,4) - add finish at all slider end with normal hit sound, it's better to loud them gradually
other seems great

[Lizbeth's Normal]

all timing section - 1/4 or 1/2 forward : if someone hit the circle when he is hit earlier, sound would be the sound of front timing section
00:32:823 (1) - the "radian" doesn't the same to the front slider, make them in alignment

01:32:629 (3,4) - be covered, seem to be a little confused

[Insane]

I have no complains, it's awesome

I'd like to give you some SB suggestion later
great map
star and anoher kudosu star for you!
Lissette
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Glad you like it Breeze, thanks a lot for the stars!! n___n

Fixed

Breeze wrote:

00:26:242 timing section - set it 1/4 or 1/2 forward : if someone hit the circle when he is hit earlier, sound would be the sound of front timing section
I don't think this apply for end point of a slider -_-a, cuz' is impossible to hit earlier, anyway waiting for what a BAT have to say :p

thnx for your time!! :)
mrtn
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Mystearica
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Solid map! And yet again just myself looking through this.

[Easy]

No problems here.

[Normal]

Just one part that tripped me up and I failed to read properly on my first try:

01:30:88 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Maybe re-arrange this part, I could just be too tired but I think newer players might complain a little here.

Just a suggestion, if you feel that it's fine then of course keep it as it is. Like I said I could just be a bit tired orz

Nothing else was found.

[Insane]

Fun difficulty @@

00:41:72 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - In my opinion moving 6 back by 1/4 onto the red tick sounds better.

That's all.

☆
Lissette
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Thanks for helping mrtn and Mystearica
kds given :)
fartownik
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fartownik
I haven't seen anything wrong :) ~Starry
Alace
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Alace
Easy normal is just fine for me

<Insane>
I don`t know why you set jumps like this
i don`t know why no one points it out
I don`t know if it is oj in a insane diff

well i find 4 test players (3 TOP50 1TOP70 and me) we are confused during playing
00:13:66 (3,4,5) - OMG
00:15:98 (3,4,5) - ^
00:21:21 (1,2,3) - ^
Really bad spacing here

01:42:88 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part is good (easy to read and fun)
01:49:66 (1,2,3,4) - but here is bad
Think about those stuffs or look at some jumpy maps
If you need help you can just PM me online

anyway star~
Alace
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Alace
A test file for you
well don`t copy it wwwwwwwwwww

Download: Kajiura Yuki - Break the Sword of Justice (Lissette) [TEST].osu
dkey
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dkey
I like this music :)
Alace
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Alace
Hi again
yeah~
i saw a great improvement you realized how to set jumps now

<Insane>
00:09:98 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I will add new combo on (4)
00:14:24 (5) - new combo
01:36:30 (9) - new combo
01:39:21 (10) - ^
That`s all
It`s much better now
you should ask BATs to mod this ^^
Lissette
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Lissette
Fixed all that ^

Thanks for the recheck Alace, You've helped me a lot ^^
kds 4 ya!

Cya!
v2b
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v2b
normal
00:51:21 (10,11,12) - a little hard to read,seperate 10 with 11,12

also,I think offset should -25,but I'm not sure

star :)
ccbp
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ccbp
This beatmap should not be here any longer >_>
Agnes
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Agnes
Hello. This'll be my first timing-only mod. Everything else seems to be in tip-top shape...

Timing
-------

[Easy]

I believe this is better off having 1/4 Timing instead of 1/8. This is just a suggestion, so you don't have to change it.

[Lizbeth's Normal]

No errors here.

[Insane]

No errors here.

-----

Overall:
Pretty neat map. Good luck with your Project! Star~
DJPop
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DJPop
Kind of nazi-ish =_="

~Easy~
Fine.

~Normal~
00:10:56 (2,3,4) - not snapped
00:12:88 (2) - ^
00:13:27 (3,4,5,6) - not symmetric
00:15:59 (4) - offscreen
00:20:24 (3) - ^
00:22:56 (1,2,3,4) - not symmetric
01:19:66 (1) - not on the same level with (2,3,4)
01:35:53 (3) - offscreen

~Insane~
00:15:59 (1,2,3,4) - not symmetric
00:38:82 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:49:08 (1,2,3) - ^
00:54:30 (4) - silence the sliderticks
00:59:04 (1) - on white tick
01:01:661 - add note here


+Star
abalee
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abalee
i have a bit different offset but... hmm maybe my fault :?

easy & normal:
nothing serious found. :o

insane:
01:39:079 (4,1) - move a bit farther between these two note, so that the spacing doesn't look like 01:39:021 (1,2,3,4) - but i doubt that does someone ask you to move them closer? :cry:

+
LuigiHann
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LuigiHann
Why isn't the title capitalized? Should be "Break the Sword of Justice" unless you have a good reason why it isn't
Lissette
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Lissette

LuigiHann wrote:

Why isn't the title capitalized? Should be "Break the Sword of Justice" unless you have a good reason why it isn't
Fixed
Armin
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Armin
[Easy]

00:12:306 Remove whistle?
00:13:081 Whistle
00:34:758 (3,1) Finish
00:37:081 Whistle
00:42:500 (1,3) Whistles
00:56:629 Finish
01:28:952 ^
01:31:274 ^
01:38:242 ^

Lizbeth's Normal

No problems found. >_>

[Insane]

00:12:306 Stack with (1)
00:27:984 Remove the whistle in the middle of the slider
00:36:887 ^

Sorry, I can't find other problems. Starred!
Zekira
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Zekira
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kino77
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kino77
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Tanmak
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Tanmak
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WyndII
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WyndII
[M0D]

Set a preview point.

[Insane]
This map has so much power...with h<s>a</s>it<s>e</>sound.

[Lizbeth's Normal]
00:13:066 (5,6) - I suggest make this symmetrical with 00:13:027 (3,4) -
00:22:056 (1,2,3,4) - ^
Are you twin sisters o.o?

[Easy]
no more.


have a star~
Lissette
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Armin wrote:

[Easy]

00:12:306 Remove whistle?
00:13:081 Whistle
00:34:758 (3,1) Finish
00:37:081 Whistle
00:42:500 (1,3) Whistles
00:56:629 Finish
01:28:952 ^
01:31:274 ^
01:38:242 ^

Lizbeth's Normal

No problems found. >_>

[Insane]

00:12:306 Stack with (1)
00:27:984 Remove the whistle in the middle of the slider
00:36:887 ^

Sorry, I can't find other problems. Starred!
Thanks for modding fixed ^^

Zekira wrote:

Did someone tell you that you crossed my deathline? o_o

Offset: 673 (-21 from current)

Sorry, suspending mod.
Don't understant @.@ but anyway, kds for the offset ^^

WyndII wrote:

[M0D]

Set a preview point.

[Insane]
This map has so much power...with h<s>a</s>it<s>e</>sound.

[Lizbeth's Normal]
00:13:066 (5,6) - I suggest make this symmetrical with 00:13:027 (3,4) -
00:22:056 (1,2,3,4) - ^
Are you twin sisters o.o?

[Easy]
no more.


have a star~
Thanks for modding ^^
and yes, we are twin sis n.n
Diasios
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Diasios
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Easy]

00:44:080 (5) - I don't like this slider

[Normal]

It's ok

[Insane]

00:51:076 (1) - Crazy slider O_O

Starred~
Shulin
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Shulin
Easy:

Perfect!

Lizbeth's Normal

00:15:018 (3) - Grid snap this note its slightly off the slider during gameplay.
00:50:041 (6) - New combo?

Insane:

00:18:086 - Maybe add a note?
00:19:006 - ^
00:29:089 (2) - Straighten this slider, you might have to redraw it.
01:12:067 (1,2,3,4) - The Hp drain is pretty harsh on this part, you could lower the Hp drain by one or make each beat into a new combo?

That's all, this is an excellent map, hitsounds are perfect, lovely jumps, well laid out... I love it! Needs a star :D
jericho2442
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jericho2442
[Easy]
perfect

[Normal]
srry it nazi, but this map is that good its all whats wrong with it XD
01:51:076 (3) - line this up with (2)

[Insane]
wow, great and perfect map XD

____
very very nice, enjoy a star :)
Lissette
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Lissette
Thanks for modding you guys!
Takuma
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Takuma
Bubbled.
Lissette
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Lissette
Thnx for the recheck ^^
RemmyX25
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Need to make a slight bubble pop for a quick important fixing.

Insane:
00:29:511 (1) - The "Speed x2" that shows up with this slider... while it may not seem like it in editor (and you probably dont with the public build BUT trust me on this one) in test mode, the slider covers the "Speed x2"

EDIT: Screenshot (the sliderball circle covers the rest of it)

Also while im at it, slider ticks would sound good.

Overall, very nicely done!
Takuma
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Takuma
It can be clearly seen to me, so whatever.
Lissette
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RemmyX25 wrote:

Need to make a slight bubble pop for a quick important fixing.

Insane:
00:29:511 (1) - The "Speed x2" that shows up with this slider... while it may not seem like it in editor (and you probably dont with the public build BUT trust me on this one) in test mode, the slider covers the "Speed x2"

EDIT: Screenshot (the sliderball circle covers the rest of it)

Also while im at it, slider ticks would sound good.

Overall, very nicely done!
i guess is fine now ^^

RemmyX25
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WyndII
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WyndII
I love this map =3
whymeman
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whymeman
Almost..... but there's a problem.

Your current BG is too Large. 1024 x 768 Is the Max BG size. Also "chronicle" doesn't have a capital C, which it is supposed to.

[Insane]

00:20:608 (3,4) - Uneven spacing (Flip (4) and you'll see it).
00:39:382 (6,7) - Slightly misaligned stack?
00:40:931 (6,7) - ^
Lissette
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whymeman wrote:

Almost..... but there's a problem.

Your current BG is too Large. 1024 x 768 Is the Max BG size. Also "chronicle" doesn't have a capital C, which it is supposed to.

[Insane]

00:20:608 (3,4) - Uneven spacing (Flip (4) and you'll see it).
00:39:382 (6,7) - Slightly misaligned stack?
00:40:931 (6,7) - ^
Fixed all ^^
whymeman
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[Insane]

00:20:608 (3,4) - Uneven spacing (Flip (4) horizontally and you'll see it). <- Forgot this one.
00:39:382 (6,7) - Slightly misaligned stack?
00:40:931 (6,7) - ^

(No need to kudosu this post)
Lissette
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Lissette

whymeman wrote:

[Insane]

00:20:608 (3,4) - Uneven spacing (Flip (4) horizontally and you'll see it). <- Forgot this one.
Fixed
whymeman
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whymeman
Alright then. Sorry for the delay and here's your bubble.
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star ~ :)
Andrea
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Ranked.
Lissette
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Thanks you guys! :)
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