M4M
[General]
Uncheck "Widescreen Support" on Easy and Normal since there is no SB.
[Easy]
Placement
00:05:900(1,3) 見栄えの問題ですが、ここはスタックさせてみては?十分な間隔が開いているので、初心者でもこの重なりは十分見えると思います。
00:30:147(3) 終点を少し下側に曲げてやると次のnoteへの流れが良くなると思います。
00:38:982(2) ここも、同じような提案です。
00:47:818(4) 252:236あたりに置いてやると、(3)からの流れがスムーズで今よりもより打ちやすいと思います。
[Normal]
Placement
00:12:475(3) Maybe it's fine but move down this slider a bit better since the end of slider placed too upward.
00:37:133(5,6) You can make a nice blanket here, current looks a bit odd.
Rhythm
00:37:133 Unnecessary green line
00:29:736(5,1) Swap these notes better to follow the vocal properly.At 00:30:558, the vocal is independent so circle is better.
Hit Sound
00:48:229(1,2) Turn down volume better, I just hear loudly on here.
[Hard]
Placement
00:14:325(3,4) I just suppose this liner placement looks a bit odd, so to make a natural flow to next note, it would be more better.
00:21:516(2) The spacing looks a bit large and suddunly changed, so you can change this spacing smaller better.
00:24:804(3) Bent this slider, and the pflow (2) to (3) looks nice.
00:39:599(4,5,6,7,8) This stream looks a bit odd since the movement of playnig looks forced, so here is a code. feel free to use it.
Rhythm
00:40:421(1) I highly suggest that the end of slider is at 00:40:626 better. 00:40:832 is beginning of KIAI TIME, so I suppose you can put notes on here. Also put NC at the beginning of KIAI. e.g.)
00:45:455 Why did you stop to put notes? The music has lasted so add notes here to make stream better.
Good Luck.
[General]
Uncheck "Widescreen Support" on Easy and Normal since there is no SB.
[Easy]
Placement
00:05:900(1,3) 見栄えの問題ですが、ここはスタックさせてみては?十分な間隔が開いているので、初心者でもこの重なりは十分見えると思います。
00:30:147(3) 終点を少し下側に曲げてやると次のnoteへの流れが良くなると思います。
00:38:982(2) ここも、同じような提案です。
00:47:818(4) 252:236あたりに置いてやると、(3)からの流れがスムーズで今よりもより打ちやすいと思います。
[Normal]
Placement
00:12:475(3) Maybe it's fine but move down this slider a bit better since the end of slider placed too upward.
00:37:133(5,6) You can make a nice blanket here, current looks a bit odd.
Rhythm
00:37:133 Unnecessary green line
00:29:736(5,1) Swap these notes better to follow the vocal properly.At 00:30:558, the vocal is independent so circle is better.
Hit Sound
00:48:229(1,2) Turn down volume better, I just hear loudly on here.
[Hard]
Placement
00:14:325(3,4) I just suppose this liner placement looks a bit odd, so to make a natural flow to next note, it would be more better.
00:21:516(2) The spacing looks a bit large and suddunly changed, so you can change this spacing smaller better.
00:24:804(3) Bent this slider, and the pflow (2) to (3) looks nice.
00:39:599(4,5,6,7,8) This stream looks a bit odd since the movement of playnig looks forced, so here is a code. feel free to use it.
SPOILER
00:56:859(4) Nazi, move this note at 76:156, and the line from (3) to (5) looks consistence.304,124,39599,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,156,39702,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,192,39804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,224,39907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,252,40010,2,0,L|352:288,3,45
Rhythm
00:40:421(1) I highly suggest that the end of slider is at 00:40:626 better. 00:40:832 is beginning of KIAI TIME, so I suppose you can put notes on here. Also put NC at the beginning of KIAI. e.g.)
00:45:455 Why did you stop to put notes? The music has lasted so add notes here to make stream better.
Good Luck.