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Jenny Rom - The Game of Love

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anonymous_old
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Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
LS's Easy
SPOILER

00:25:011 (5) : (nazi) Put it on the left side of 4, not the right side, that way, it'll have a "stair-case" shape.
01:40:049 (4) : New combo.

Ouran's Normal
SPOILER

00:58:052 (5) : Spacing.

There are few errors here, but it's just boring to play. (probably since these diffs are too easy)
This map shows potential.
Gens
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Gens
Sorry, looks like I was in drugs last time I tried to time this. Here are the newest results:

  1. 1. BPM: 170.00 - Offset: 90
  2. 2. BPM: 172.35 - Offset: 11,396
I am now sure this is correct.
PLEASE do not ask me again to time while I'm tired unless you want that kind of results again. :(
And please, do NOT give me kudosu until I actually mod this map.
Ex Boy
191 posts
Joined March 2009
Ex Boy
Good BG! :D

Lucky Star's Easy
too many clap \o/ remove someone will be better

Ouran's Normal
...1/8 ? maybe you can double the bpm and use 1/4...
Hikato
444 posts
Joined August 2008
Hikato
[Easy]
02:05:546 - inherit previous timing settings and resnap notes.
02:27:514 (1) - end kiai
Nice map.

[Normal]
wow.. why is there so many timing sections? (are they supposed to be green ones cause they are red for me :\)
Use 1/4. This doesn't need 1/8.
00:36:034 (1) - Start on the white instead of the blue.
I'll presume it's not finished but not bad so far.

I made a diffi. Use if you want. BG here

Download: Jenny Rom - The Game of Love (FuukoLover) [Hikato's Insane].osu
Froslass
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Froslass
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Kytoxid
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Kytoxid
[General]

You have 2 .osb files; one is an old one from a typo (lol Jenny Room) and the other one has a reference to a file that does not exist. Delete?

Source? Tags? (make sure to include the guest names)

Consider changing background colours to match backgrounds.

[Easy]

00:00:009 - Unused timing section; delete it.

Combos are kinda weird here; on an Easy, I'd break it into smaller combos for each phrase. For example, I'd add a new combo here 00:19:075 (4) to split up the combo.

01:41:021 (3,1) - This might be a bit tough for easy; to hold there and react when it ends.
02:05:052 - This timing section is making your timing worse, not better. Remove it, and resnap.

Map this to the end?

[Normal]

Looks alright so far.

[Insane]

Overall Difficulty feels a little high. Maybe bump that down a tick, and bump drain up a tick?

00:40:063 (8) - Line this up with the endpoint?
02:04:018 (5,7) - Uuuugly. XD
02:22:081 (2) - New combo.
02:36:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Sort this out, keep direction constant please. This is pretty much a guarenteed miss on your first try.

I don't really star WiPs, so give me a call when it's done. :)
Azure_Kite
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Azure_Kite
Yay for IRC mod :D
Hikato
444 posts
Joined August 2008
Hikato
Change it to this or remove the diff I made. Some of your edits I don't approve of.

Download: Jenny Rom - The Game of Love (FuukoLover) [Hikato's Insane].osu
Alice
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Joined October 2008
Alice
I think forcing default is ok for the overlay :3 (but if you want a custom one just ask)
BTW You'll maybe have to lighten your combo colours

+Awesome song ;_;


EDIT

It works well, except with blue combo colour.


Fuuko
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Topic Starter
Fuuko
Thanks to everyone that helped me till now.
Also, Hikato, I fixed it. I pretty much like your map now, so I will use it. Thank you.
deadbeat
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deadbeat
y does the normal have a beat snap divisor of 1/8th......it should work fine with 1/4
Sleep Powder
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Sleep Powder
Will Mod Later~

Also I played Hikato's...
it was hard to read visually
01:18:075 (12) - Add a note here instead then the next should be a slider...I got messed up here

Make sure all difficulties have the same correct offset and BPM.


Can I make a a difficulty for this? <3 I've always liked this song ever since I saw an awesome AMV with it.
Hikato
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Hikato
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Fuuko
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Topic Starter
Fuuko
Yeah. Also, Alex got it right just now, he did that last part in his first go. osuplayer11, too.

Also, Azure will map the hard diff, so it's full already. @_@
Last edited by Fuuko , edited 1 time in total.
Andrea
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Andrea
New "Detailed" modding style for help maps <3

You don't have to follow my post, remember there are not directions, but suggestions!

[File Checking...]

Background: Yes.
Source: No. (Find some source if possible.)
Tags: No. (Add some tags like "Lucky Star".)
File Size: 19,0MB/24,00MB Too big, consider to reduce the size please.)

[Overall]

- You have to set a preview point on all difficulties.

First timing is fine.
Timing: BPM: 172,35 - Offset: 11.390 (Remember to resnap all notes.)
Timing: BPM: 172,35 - Offset: 125.410 (Remember to resnap all notes.)

[Difficulties]

[Lucky Star's Easy]

Some objects are unsnapped. Resnap all notes.

You forgot to add the 2nd offset here.

All the notes are placed 1/8 backward than the normal. Move all the notes 1/8 forward.

02:05:053 (1) - Unsnapped.
02:06:092 (3) - ^
02:08:032 (4) - ^
02:09:002 (5) - ^
02:09:071 (6) - ^
02:11:011 (1) - ^
02:11:081 (2) - ^
02:12:050 (3) - ^
02:13:090 (1) - ^
02:14:060 (2) - ^
02:15:025 (3) - ^
02:16:069 (1) - ^
02:17:039 (2) - ^
02:18:009 (3) - ^
02:18:081 (4) - ^
02:19:044 (5) - ^
02:22:023 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:27:085 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ^

[Ouran's Normal]

Why a background of another anime? Doesn't fit the song. Change it.

You forgot 2nd offset here too.

Use 1/4 beat snap divisor. and adjust all the notes.

The map end is weird.

00:17:061 (3) - An example. Use 1/4 and adjust it.
00:18:031 (4) - ^
00:20:040 (7) - ^
00:23:088 (5) - ^ Etc.

[Hikato's Insane]

02:19:085 (3,4) - Spacing.
Last edited by Andrea , edited 1 time in total.
XepherX3
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Joined September 2008
XepherX3
alright

timings i got that sounded perfect:

BPM: 172,35
offset 1: 11.483
offset 2: 125.408

awesome map :lol: 8-) :lol:

star
Alice
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Alice
MY USERNAME HAS NO UNDERSCOOOOREEE ;_;
KIA
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Joined February 2009
KIA
Overall:
Offset: ~11398 fine to me.
"A preview point for this map is not set. Consider setting one from the Timing menu."
Add warnings on x2 sections.
[Konata]
wth 2x bpm sections in easy?
00:53:085 (4) - end on 00:54:027
02:18:079 (4) - move to 02:18:044 and make 4 loops length.
[Tamaki]
01:40:032 (3) - move to 01:40:502 (end on 01:40:851)
01:41:002 (4) - delete(?)
[Hikato's...]
What purpose of the 1st timing section? :?
00:27:058 (7) - clap?

Star :)
F10W_old_1
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F10W_old_1
I'm not a fan of any of these anime, but I have to admit, the song is quite catchy...

Easy and Normal both seem to be good, no glaring issues that I can see that detracted from the play experience.

Hard is so short compared to all the others. Is that a mistake, or did I get a wrong version? It's pretty difficult, but Insane's twice as long-ish, and is even harder.

And I can't even play enough of insane to give opinions either way...

So, yeah, as I said, not very critical, but I dug the map, so here's a shiny blue star!
PhaseMetal
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PhaseMetal
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
DoubleDango
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DoubleDango


Lalala.

Star for you.

Download: Fuuko's Spinner [-DD].rar
GabrielRKF
992 posts
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GabrielRKF
Muito kawai! :3
Pena que tem duas Haruhis, ai tem que botar o Tamaki no meio xD

Eu vou fazer o mod mais tarde mas por enquanto ta ótimo \o/

Star~
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
Modding out of order...

[Tamaki]
00:36:027 (1) - Shorten by 1 white tick?
00:44:045 (6) - I don't think this finish fits. Move it to the end of (5) or something?
00:53:015 (5) - It's easier to make Bezier sliders in grid snap mode
00:55:059 (1) - Shorten by 1 tick?
00:58:072 (5,6) - Odd looking, especially since they're not symmetric.
01:01:033 (1) - Shorten by 1 tick?
01:09:051 (4,8) - Claps here sound funny. Move to (3,7)? Or add claps to (2,6) like in the next combo?
01:21:000 (5) - Remove claps from red ticks?
01:49:090 (1) - Ends awkwardly.
01:58:095 (3,4,5) - The angle it makes is weird-looking.
02:38:098 (1) - Tripped me up. :(

[Hikato's Insane]
Found nothing.

[Haruhi]
(WIP?)
00:23:091 (7,8) - Slider nazi
00:32:026 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Flip (2,4) to be on the opposite side of (6)?

[Konata]
01:32:084 (4,4) - Just a suggestion; rapid slider repeats make Taiko harder, so don't use them in easies.
Kerensa
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Kerensa
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alvisto
881 posts
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alvisto
Offset : 11395ms ( + 13ms )

TAMAKI
00:19:073 (5) - new combo
I like the map design, but somehow I don't like how you place claps. IMHO, claps on every 4 white ticks sounds better than suddenly a whole load of random clap throwing out here and there.
For example : 01:08:047 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Doesn't this sound good ?
Example of cluster of claps : 01:21:000 (5,6) - Doesn;t this sound random to you ? xD
01:32:084 (6) - ^
01:59:099 (6) - Suggestion, this would make more sense if you flip it horizontally ? (Ctrl + H)
02:13:057 (8) - Finish here

KONATA
You sure you wanna do 2x timing sections for EASY ? Other than that, a solid easy.

HIKATO'S INSANE
This diff is FUN FUN FUN ! Nothing wrong techinically, just that I want to point out a few things here...
00:35:006 (5) - Intended weird spacing ? I suggest don't do mini tiny jump here as your map is already very fast.
00:35:059 (7) - Hard to read, hidden. ;_;
00:37:050 (8) - Hard to read. Move this somewhere else ?
01:00:065 (5,6,7) - Idk whether it's just me, but it's kinda hard to read... ;_;
01:42:060 (3) - Hard to read
01:46:060 (2) - ^
02:04:001 (4) - Confusing and hard to read. ;_;
02:37:061 (1,2,3,4,5) - lol, idk about this, but I guess this would make some people mad ? quite harsh.

Wow, good map and catchy song. Enjoy modding this map. Star.
Kytoxid
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Kytoxid
IRC modding, yawn.
XepherX3
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XepherX3
really like this :lol: :lol: :lol:

made a little change on the spinner tough (u decide if u wanna use this)

Download: spinnerimages.zip
jericho2442
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jericho2442
EDIT: 100% done, enjoy :)

EDIT another update
Download: Jenny Rom - The Game of Love (FuukoLover) [Jericho2442's groove].osu
Lokamp
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Lokamp
Lucky Star
02:27:848 (1) - remove kiai time from the last timing section

Ouran
00:54:898 (8) - start it with clap and end it with finish
01:00:990 (8) - maybe mote it to 01:01:164

jericho2442's groove
Sounds fine.

Haruhi
00:53:505 (3) - clap here
00:59:075 (3) - ^
01:25:185 (1,2) - add clap on the 2nd repeat of these sliders

Hikato's X-mas
01:21:718 (5) - no claps on this slider's start
02:18:811 (6) - ^

Even if the modes haven't a similar lenght, this song is well-packed. Have your star, guys ;3
jericho2442
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jericho2442
small fix :P

Download: Jenny Rom - The Game of Love (FuukoLover) [Jericho2442's groove].osu
Gens
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Gens
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Teara
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Teara
IRC mod~

Good job :)

Love all the diffs
Rokodo
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Rokodo
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
jericho2442
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jericho2442
Right now, [Jericho2442's groove] difficulty has a slightly different Kiai Time interval
thats because i 100% refuse to put kiai in stupid places where it does not match -_-

02:27:848 - Kiai time should end here, to evade kiai-hater users from raging.
..................really..............you really think thats a good place to end it O_o........oh my its horrid ending there, because the beat is still within the same power, its best to end kiai when the beat becomes a little more softer which is at 02:38:988 - imo

00:28:092 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I feel these jumps are pulled out of nowhere just to make it hard... the rhythm is basically the same as the next/previous combos so spacing shouldn't change that much. At least in my opinion.
the jump is there because i like it, im not gonna copy/phaste the pattern before >_> its rankable so for now i will leave this as it is

Capitalize the word "groove" please.
oooops my bad hahahaha, fixed
Download: Jenny Rom - The Game of Love (FuukoLover) [Jericho2442's Groove].osu
konan-yoshi999
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konan-yoshi999
[Ouran]
00:54:898 (Beginning of 8)- add clap
00:55:246 (End of 8)- remove clap

I don't see anything else wrong
I enjoy this map :)
~star~
Gens
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Gens

jericho2442 wrote:

Right now, [Jericho2442's groove] difficulty has a slightly different Kiai Time interval
thats because i 100% refuse to put kiai in stupid places where it does not match -_-
I was talking about consistency so... talk with Fuuko about that.

02:27:848 - Kiai time should end here, to evade kiai-hater users from raging.
..................really..............you really think thats a good place to end it O_o........oh my its horrid ending there, because the beat is still within the same power, its best to end kiai when the beat becomes a little more softer which is at 02:38:988 - imo
I see what you're saying, but the "chorus" ends there, so that's why I say it.

00:28:092 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I feel these jumps are pulled out of nowhere just to make it hard... the rhythm is basically the same as the next/previous combos so spacing shouldn't change that much. At least in my opinion.
the jump is there because i like it, im not gonna copy/phaste the pattern before >_> its rankable so for now i will leave this as it is
Yes, it's rankable, but not fun. Would make the map a bit more enjoyable, at least in my opinion.
[Haruhi]

02:26:107 (8,1) - Uh-uh, having two objects at the same time is unrankable, even if they're spinners.

Some things aren't fixed yet, but some are. You should know what things still need to be fixed and all, since I told you in IRC. ;)
btw, offset is still not the same in [Hikato's X-mas].
Fuuko
486 posts
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Topic Starter
Fuuko
Fixed everything, Gens~
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
It's too catchy...

[Tags]
Jericho's diff doesn't have him in tags
Jericho's diff has "colourful" spelled wrong in tags
If you have colourful in tags, you might as well have colorful
Chiikaboom doesn't need to be in both Tags and Source
Dangaard
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Dangaard

Dusty wrote:

Jericho's diff doesn't have him in tags
Yeah, please add his name to the tags.

As well you should use the offset suggested by osuplayer111 (11.390ms), remember you have to fix this on every diff separately. Together with the basic offset you should change all other timing sections (be careful though with moving all sections at once, right now hikato's diff got a different offset than the others!). Don't forget to resnap notes to the timing.

About Kiai sections: Haruhi's Kiai is ending before the end of chorus (in contrast to the other diffs), Hikato's is not ending at all. You should make them end on 02:38 on all diffs (don't forget to snap to the new offset).

Nice map, I hope this doesn't need much more mod-posts ;)
fumoffu star :3
jericho2442
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jericho2442

Dusty wrote:

It's too catchy...

[Tags]
Jericho's diff doesn't have him in tags
ive asked many times for fuuko to add me in the tags ;_;
added them myself this time

Dangaard wrote:

As well you should use the offset suggested by osuplayer111 (11.390ms), fixed ;)

About Kiai sections: Haruhi's Kiai is ending before the end of chorus (in contrast to the other diffs), Hikato's is not ending at all. You should make them end on 02:38 on all diffs (don't forget to snap to the new offset). yes, as i was saying, the best place to end kiai XD

Nice map, I hope this doesn't need much more mod-posts ;)
fumoffu star :3
thanks

Download: Jenny Rom - The Game of Love (FuukoLover) [Jericho2442's Groove].osu
vytalibus
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vytalibus
What's with the BG pics? You can probably find more-related ones, 'coz it's not Christmas anymore.

Otherwise, great map.
Lesjuh
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Lesjuh
Ok let's discuss first things first ~_~

+ It'd be better to map with grid enabled, it isn't bound but just easier to map/mod/make you map look good.

+ Ourans BG doesn't seem to have anything to do with lucky star/haruhi, only christmas and some other anime. I think it should be lucky star/haruhi related :3 The merry christmas stuff seems a little odd too since it's too late for that but that doesn't really matter xD

Haruhi:
Resnap all notes
This is incredibly good for a first map xD

Hikato:
01:46:593 (2) - No! > under a slider in it's ugliest way possible
02:20:013 (4) - No! > spacing
Resnap all notes
Offset 11.390

Sorry for the Oh-man-I'm-so-tired-I-might-miss-things-mod but you're definitley close to getting this ranked. I'd suggest to let another MAT check after you've fixed this, he/she might pubble ;)
whymeman
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whymeman
Lets see.....

[Haruhi]

00:38:013 (1) - Not snapped in the timeline.
00:38:100 (2) - ^
00:38:361 (4) - ^
00:38:449 (5) - ^
01:27:622 (1) - ^
01:27:709 (2) - ^
01:27:796 (3) - ^
01:27:883 (4) - ^
01:32:844 (3) - ^
01:32:931 (4) - ^
01:33:018 (5) - ^
01:33:105 (6) - ^
01:35:629 (3) - ^
01:35:716 (4) - ^
01:35:803 (5) - ^
01:35:890 (6) - ^

That's 16 notes not snapped.

[Hikato's X-mas]

00:18:619 (3) - Not snapped in the timeline.
00:18:706 (4) - ^
00:21:752 (5) - ^
00:21:839 (6) - ^
00:24:885 (2) - ^
00:24:972 (3) - ^
00:29:759 (3) - ^
00:29:846 (4) - ^
00:51:517 (2) - ^
00:51:604 (3) - ^
00:51:691 (4) - ^
00:51:778 (5) - ^
00:59:002 (3) - ^
00:59:089 (4) - ^
01:00:395 (3) - ^
01:00:482 (4) - ^
01:27:723 (5) - ^
01:27:810 (6) - ^
01:27:897 (7) - ^
01:27:984 (1) - ^
01:32:945 (4) - ^
01:33:032 (5) - ^
01:35:730 (6) - ^
01:35:817 (7) - ^
01:41:648 (8) - ^
01:41:735 (9) - ^
01:41:822 (10) - ^
01:41:909 (1) - ^ (Slider)
01:43:737 (4) - ^
01:43:824 (5) - ^
02:08:628 (3) - ^
02:08:715 (4) - ^
02:12:805 (3) - ^
02:12:892 (4) - ^
02:18:375 (3) - ^
02:18:463 (4) - ^
02:23:946 (3) - ^
02:24:033 (4) - ^
02:25:338 (2) - ^
02:25:425 (3) - ^

That's about 40 notes not snapped.

Other stuff

Normal+'s background x3.jpeg is too large. 1228 x 767 compared to the max 1024 x 768. Same issue for Hard's background x3.jpeg being 1280 x 800.
Kytoxid
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Kytoxid
Protobubbling after 2 hours of IRC mod~
jericho2442
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jericho2442
.......O_O OMG, why have you made a part of my diff HORRIDLY UGLY


pubble or no pubble that (7) to (1) needs to be fixed, in all the ways you could of fixed it, you fixed it the worst way............

the overlapping and out of position of (7) is really getting to me, if you really HAD to change that part, then you should of lined it up with the (1) in the combo before, >_>

EDIT: ok in this change i have found 1) huge spacing problem, and a nazi problem, so im fixing this
Download: Jenny Rom - The Game of Love (FuukoLover) [Jericho2442's Groove].osu

please dont make my map worse again ;_;
Dangaard
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Dangaard
[Ouran]
You missplaced the timing section for the first Kiai section.The Kiai starts shortly before the first chorus and ends when the chorus starts.

[Haruhi]
There are multiple objects placed on the same time value at the following points (you have to remove the multiple ones):
00:38:457
01:33:113
01:35:637 (x2)
01:35:811
01:35:898

[Hikato]
01:46:603 (2) - The way this is hidden under the slider... I don't know if this is rankable or not, but I suggest to make this beat more visible.

[general]
Your time-sections are not snapped to the new offset, at least at the Kiai parts you should have them on spot.

popping the proto-bubble :<
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Last edited by blissfulyoshi , edited 2 times in total.
Larto
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Larto
IRC modding.

Starrodkirby86
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Here since the beginning
Starrodkirby86
Resizing some things in the skin prompts my rebubble. :3
Larto
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Larto
orz

anonymous_old
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Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
You didn't let me finish my taiko diff. D:

Then again, I was banned for a long time...
Fuuko
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Topic Starter
Fuuko

Loogiesquared wrote:

You didn't let me finish my taiko diff. D:

Then again, I was banned for a long time...
That's the only reason. ;_;
larry102030
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BEST SONG EVER
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