ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Be Back ON! · forum

Nepu

Joined September 2013

Nepu 2014-01-14T12:42:20+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
[Troogle's Easy]
00:22:882- start break time [color=#0040FF0]K[/color]
00:32:574 (1) - I recommend to move to 00:32:728 for beginner, starting from red line after break time is difficult
well I don't think so……imo,since there is a break , the player stop following the white line so that he/she will be able to catch the red line…… changed anyway
00:39:959 (3) - it is better to start at 00:40:113 K
00:50:574 (2) - end at 00:51:036 ? K
01:20:728 (2) - I prefer to end at 01:21:343 ok
01:29:343- star break timeK
01:57:651 (4) - start at 01:57:497K
02:14:882 (1) - I suggest Ctrl+H for smoother cursor movingCtrl+G right? :3
SPOILER
02:53:036- start break timeK
cute song <3
~Good Luck~

Thx for your mod :3

@sjoy

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Artist:ALiCE'S EMOTiON
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Creator:sjoy
Version:Troogle's Easy
Source:Touhou
Tags:t+pazolite Rizna C84 Spirit World Perfect Cherry Blossom 妖々跋扈 th07 Chen Yakumo Ran Troogle Fycho Youkai Domination
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sjoy

1,025 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

sjoy 2014-01-14T12:55:48+00:00

Oracle wrote:
好玩 star~

感谢

Kinomi

1,223 posts

Joined August 2012

Kinomi 2014-01-20T14:47:34+00:00

Troogle's Easy
clap怎么像是随便加的
00:47:497 (1) - blanket
00:49:651 (1) - 改成折返好一点，前面那个最好也改成折返,让人知道你在跟vocal,不然莫名
00:52:420 (1) - blanket
00:53:651 (2) - ^
01:13:343 (3) - ^
01:08:574 (1) - 折什么反，中间的白线根本没finish，改成一个2/1
01:55:190 (2) - 错位了，应该前面的红线起
02:14:882 (1) - 跟前面一样
02:34:574 (2) - 弧度不对，没包好
03:01:805 (1,2) - 并成一个滑条，那个滑条太短把新手吓一跳
03:21:343 (2,3) - 喵在蓝线上，很误导，换个节奏

还有最后应该加个默认的soft clap，或者找个有类似回音的拍手声

Normal
一开始这段可以加clap不然有些地方看不懂节奏
00:27:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 比如这个，x x c xcx c xxc，在c的地方加clap，节奏是不是一下就听出来了
00:30:266 (1,2,3,4) - x CX C XXC C，00:31:497 (3,4) - 折返尾部和note下一样的音效好一点
上面是一些例子，这歌节奏比较蛋疼，所以我感觉可以拿音效来把你下的节奏强化一下，容易听出来。
00:42:574 (1) - 包好
01:21:343 加个note或者滑条比较好吧，节奏连贯一点，考虑01:24:113的停顿这里加个note似乎比较好
01:43:497 (4) - 被前面的2挡了点略难看
02:04:728 (2) - 尾巴放左边吧=。=，和3平行
02:08:420 (4) - 这个删了，前面起个滑条，前面那段声音连续的，而且滑条尾吧压这个音感觉好
02:23:343 (1,2) - 类似这种节奏很难，不太好用间距判断3/2节奏，不如删了换滑条
02:29:497 (5) - 再弄弯一点包好
02:43:036 (1) - 弧度稍微小一点

Fycho's Hard
01:02:728 (2) - 加速了这边和前面那根火腿肠身体的距离拉开一点比较舒服
01:11:497 (3) - kiai这段给人一直流动的感觉比较好啊，折返两次感觉有点影响移动顺畅，改成一次比较好
01:16:420 (3) - 这也是
01:18:113 (5) - 丑啊抬到x447y82
01:48:574 (1,2,3) - 有点难
02:17:959 (4) - 同前面
02:22:882 (3) - ^
03:04:729 (4) - ^
03:09:652 (3) - ^

Lunatic
一开始的散点感觉好乱，我觉得你还是想点梗别这么散点
00:16:882 (1) - 这1/1和前面的1/2距离一样，摆远一点
00:20:420 (1,2,3,4) - 有点难看，分开点比较好
00:26:574 (1,2,3,4) - 不如来回叠
03:36:113 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:31:805 (3) - ctrl g
01:03:497 (1,2,3,4) - 尾巴和另一个的头靠那么近干嘛。。
01:43:497 (4) - ctrl g
01:45:497 (2) - ctrl g 还有能个1 稍微分开点吗。。
02:21:959 (4) - 和3分开。。
02:24:266 (4) - 跟前面的滑条有点叠了，我觉得你做的时候就应该前后看看避免没意义的重叠。。
02:21:036 (1) - 这不是3/4么
02:22:882 (5,6,7,8,9) - 还往左摆。。往下或者往右摆好吧
03:07:651 (1) - 被前面的4压到了
03:26:882 (3,4,5,6) - 为何是这样。。不如交叉摆
03:39:036 (2) - 明显突兀的音我觉得你还是想个梗
03:41:651 (3) - 最后不是还有个1/2么，放两个滑条跳一跳不是挺好
03:40:882 (1) - 空拍有点坑爹，ctrl g或者摆到别的地方0.0，前面的四方感觉也没摆出渐变的感觉

你的图我打着总觉得像喝白开水。。
00:23:805 (4,5,1) - 这种么，flow上要变得好玩，就把4和5ctrl g就行了，也是合音乐的变化的，多想想0.0
00:28:728 (4,5) - 这也是，把5放在4左上就不好玩了，在4左下就好，拉开和6的间距
00:27:190 (5,6) - 这两个么也是ctrl g然后把5拉的和前面的note近一点比较好玩，或者5从右下向左上，6从左下到右上这种flow，比现在的好多=。=
00:34:420 (2) - 这个这么摆是不是打起来比原来有感觉一点

SPOILER

00:41:190 (1,1,1) - 三个直线着实不爽，感觉三角更好
就说这么多把=。=说多了要改的就大了
总之，多想一点flow上的变化，怎么样更好表现音乐。。。:3以后的图可以朝这方向改改

Last edited by Kinomi 2014-01-21T04:51:57+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

sjoy

1,025 posts

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Topic Starter

sjoy 2014-01-20T15:17:39+00:00

Normal
一开始这段可以加clap不然有些地方看不懂节奏
00:27:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 比如这个，x x c xcx c xxc，在c的地方加clap，节奏是不是一下就听出来了
00:30:266 (1,2,3,4) - x CX C XXC C，00:31:497 (3,4) - 折返尾部和note下一样的音效好一点好
上面是一些例子，这歌节奏比较蛋疼，所以我感觉可以拿音效来把你下的节奏强化一下，容易听出来。
00:42:574 (1) - 包好好
01:21:343 加个note或者滑条比较好吧，节奏连贯一点，考虑01:24:113的停顿这里加个note似乎比较好其实我想跟VOCAL的，不想加没VOCAL的地方加物件
01:43:497 (4) - 被前面的2挡了点略难看 fixed
02:04:728 (2) - 尾巴放左边吧=。=，和3平行好
02:08:420 (4) - 这个删了，前面起个滑条，前面那段声音连续的，而且滑条尾吧压这个音感觉好好
02:23:343 (1,2) - 类似这种节奏很难，不太好用间距判断3/2节奏，不如删了换滑条其实前面都是滑条我怕太腻了而已
02:29:497 (5) - 再弄弯一点包好 fixed
02:43:036 (1) - 弧度稍微小一点 fixed

先post防止mod美丽[/quote]
等其他DIFF

sjoy

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Topic Starter

sjoy 2014-01-21T05:23:22+00:00

Lunatic
一开始的三点感觉好乱，我觉得你还是想点梗别散点主要是没梗
00:16:882 (1) - 这1/1和前面的1/2距离一样，摆远一点换地方了
00:20:420 (1,2,3,4) - 有点难看，分开点比较好好
00:26:574 (1,2,3,4) - 不如来回叠好
03:36:113 (1,2,3,4) - ^好
00:31:805 (3) - ctrl g 我觉得超级变扭
01:03:497 (1,2,3,4) - 尾巴和另一个的头靠那么近干嘛。。咦原来不喜欢靠近么？
01:43:497 (4) - ctrl g 好
01:45:497 (2) - ctrl g 还有能个1 稍微分开点吗。。就是那么近才不要CTRL+G的
02:21:959 (4) - 和3分开。。行
02:24:266 (4) - 跟前面的滑条有点叠了，我觉得你做的时候就应该前后看看避免没意义的重叠。。其实我都不看消失厚的重叠的

02:21:036 (1) - 这不是3/4么没感觉
02:22:882 (5,6,7,8,9) - 还往左摆。。往下或者往右摆好吧我觉得还好阿，其实为了保证谱面的完整度
03:07:651 (1) - 被前面的4压到了fixed
03:26:882 (3,4,5,6) - 为何是这样。。不如交叉摆其实我没想要做那么难送点好
03:39:036 (2) - 明显突兀的音我觉得你还是想个梗好
03:41:651 (3) - 最后不是还有个1/2么，放两个滑条跳一跳不是挺好最后多加一个NOTE好了
03:40:882 (1) - 空拍有点坑爹，ctrl g或者摆到别的地方0.0，前面的四方感觉也没摆出渐变的感觉我不想尾杀

你的图我打着总觉得像喝白开水。。其实是这样的我想善良一次，做一次良心图
00:23:805 (4,5,1) - 这种么，flow上要变得好玩，就把4和5ctrl g就行了，也是合音乐的变化的，多想想0.0这有多难
其实是这样的一开始很有多坑爹坑的，自己容易MISS都去了，变成了一个毫无坑爹的善良图
00:28:728 (4,5) - 这也是，把5放在4左上就不好玩了，在4左下就好，拉开和6的间距理由同上
00:27:190 (5,6) - 这两个么也是ctrl g然后把5拉的和前面的note近一点比较好玩，或者5从右下向左上，6从左下到右上这种flow，比现在的好多=。=我想当一次善良麻婆阿，普通送分梗就好

00:34:420 (2) - 这个这么摆是不是打起来比原来有感觉一点
好吧其实我没感觉;w;

SPOILER

00:41:190 (1,1,1) - 三个直线着实不爽，感觉三角更好后面有三角阿，这图的核心我是秉着能FC的原则来做图的
就说这么多把=。=说多了要改的就大了
总之，多想一点flow上的变化，怎么样更好表现音乐。。。:3以后的图可以朝这方向改改[/quote]

LucyS

301 posts

Joined January 2014

LucyS 2014-01-21T18:09:35+00:00

Hii M4M

Eazy
00:47:497 (1) - Move the second node to x: 196 y: 332
01:20:728 (2) - ^ to x: 416 y: 56
01:26:266 (2) - Move to x:192 y:204
02:14:882 (1) - Maybe move this to 02:15:497

Normal
01:47:190 (3) - Move this to x:112 y:96 and the last node to x:148 y:200 for blanket better
i don't found nothing more here ^-^

Hard
01:29:343 (2) - i suggest delete this and end 01:29:036 (1) here 01:29:343
02:13:959 (2) - Move to x:270 y:185
02:14:266 (3) - ^ to x:434 y:198
02:14:574 (4) - ^ to x:432 y:116 and your second node to x:487 y:49
02:28:420 (1) - ^ to x:272 y:148, delete the middle node and move the last for x:181 y:185
02:33:036 (4) - Move to x224 y:152

That's all i found

ArcusCosinus

173 posts

Joined December 2012

ArcusCosinus 2014-01-21T22:47:58+00:00

hi

M4M

Short legend:

Only my thoughts. apply if you want.

Things i like

Let's Go:

Troogle's Easy

SPOILER

01:21:959 (1,2,3) - this rhythm http://puu.sh/6tgw2
01:42:266 (1) - move to 01:42:420, move slider tail to 01:43:190 and fix distance with 2

01:44:113 (1) - move to 01:43:959 and move slider tail to 01:44:728 and fix distance after \/
01:45:343 (2) - move to 01:45:190 (these two are only suggestions. im not good with modding easy ,_,)

01:55:190 (2) - move to 01:55:036
01:56:113 - add circle

Normal

SPOILER

00:23:805 (3) - circle instead 1/2 slider
00:28:728 (4) - ^
00:29:036 (5) - extend slider to 00:29:497
00:29:651 (6) - delete and add circle at 00:29:805
00:50:882 (4) - delete repeat and add 1/2 slider at 00:51:651

01:08:882 (1) - i think it is too small break after slider in normal. maybe this rhythm http://puu.sh/6tier.jpg ?

01:25:497 (3) - this slider is really ugly

try to make it more beautiful or whatever
01:28:113 (1) - end this spinner at 01:29:036 and change break offset to 1 beat after (01:29:343)
01:49:036 (1,2) - delete 2 and extend 1 to 2 position
01:57:343 (4) - like 00:50:882 (4)

02:13:651 (1) - same thing like 01:08:882 (1)

02:29:497 (5) - delete repeat and add 1 beat slider at 02:30:266 (http://puu.sh/6tj5P.jpg)
02:47:651 (3) - delete

Fycho's Hard

SPOILER

:?: Generally i would change sv to 1,3 or even 1,2. it is a bit too fast now for me.

00:18:266 (2) - end this slider on the red tick
00:22:574 (1) - change to circle (it will be nice flow drop here)
00:24:728 (3) - change it to 2 circles (1st white tick, 2nd red tick)

00:26:574 (1,2,3,4,5) - very nice part

00:32:728 (5) - this circle is unnecessary but if you want you can keep it
01:05:343 (3) - end it on the red tick
01:15:805 (1,2,3,4) - this rhythm http://puu.sh/6tkme.jpg
01:26:574 (4,2) - try to stack it properly
01:29:036 (1) - end it on red tick
01:42:882 (1,2) - this rhythm http://puu.sh/6tkAc.jpg
01:49:959 (3,1) - try to avoid this kind of overlap. it isn't bad if you want to rank it but it is ugly

02:07:497 (1) - end this slider at 02:08:113 and delete all thing on the way
03:08:113 (2) - blanket this slider with previous one
03:12:728 (1,3) - overlap
03:22:266 (1) - change it to circle (like 00:22:574 (1))

Lunatic

SPOILER

00:24:574 (3,4) - this jump is too far.
00:37:036 (3) - ctrl+g
00:55:190 (1) - ^
00:58:266 (4,5,6,1) - i dont like this kind of triplets. on hidden it is very hard to read. place slider anywhere but no under triplet
01:29:036 (6) - ctrl+g
01:42:728 (4) - place it not under slider tail. such flowdrops can be confused on hidden.
01:55:651 (2) - ctrl+g
01:57:343 (4) - move to x: 320 y: 44
02:08:113 (3,4,5,6) - i dont hear this stream in music. try to rework.

02:11:190 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - nice :O

02:39:190 (1) - place it further. kinda confused.

02:53:036 to 03:01:805 - favourite part of song and well mapped

03:13:190 (2) - like 01:42:728 (4)
03:40:420 (5,6,7,8,9) - make it like a snake, not like a turtle ;_;

And done
Very nice song and nice diffs
Hope youll get it ranked

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-01-21T22:53:18+00:00

Artist should be: REDALiCE like all the others beatmaps are using now for consistency thought

no kds

Oh I see since I change the one on my map some time ago too x.x not sure how this is working now

Last edited by Natsu 2014-01-22T05:11:46+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

sjoy

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Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

sjoy 2014-01-22T04:30:56+00:00

Natsu wrote:
Artist should be: REDALiCE like all the others beatmaps are using now for consistency thought

no kds

in fact ALiCE'S EMOTION is a group
you can see it

I'm not sure if it's suitable for rizna

sjoy

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Topic Starter

sjoy 2014-01-22T06:05:58+00:00

SPOILER

00:23:805 (3) - circle instead 1/2 slider keep
00:28:728 (4) - ^ ^
00:29:036 (5) - extend slider to 00:29:497 ^
00:29:651 (6) - delete and add circle at 00:29:805 changed it
00:50:882 (4) - delete repeat and add 1/2 slider at 00:51:651ok

01:08:882 (1) - i think it is too small break after slider in normal. maybe this rhythm http://puu.sh/6tier.jpg ?

I think it's ok because 01:08:882 (1) - is in 256,192.It's easy to hit it
01:25:497 (3) - this slider is really ugly

try to make it more beautiful or whatever

ok
01:28:113 (1) - end this spinner at 01:29:036 and change break offset to 1 beat after (01:29:343) ok
01:49:036 (1,2) - delete 2 and extend 1 to 2 positionok
01:57:343 (4) - like 00:50:882 (4)ok

02:13:651 (1) - same thing like 01:08:882 (1)

the same

02:29:497 (5) - delete repeat and add 1 beat slider at 02:30:266 (http://puu.sh/6tj5P.jpg)
02:47:651 (3) - deletechanged it

Lunatic
[spoilerbox]00:24:574 (3,4) - this jump is too far.ok.reduced it
00:37:036 (3) - ctrl+g keep
00:55:190 (1) - ^ ^
00:58:266 (4,5,6,1) - i dont like this kind of triplets. on hidden it is very hard to read. place slider anywhere but no under triplet I think it's ok because there is 2 different color
01:29:036 (6) - ctrl+g keep
01:42:728 (4) - place it not under slider tail. such flowdrops can be confused on hidden.ok changed it
01:55:651 (2) - ctrl+g keep
01:57:343 (4) - move to x: 320 y: 44 I don't like overlap
02:08:113 (3,4,5,6) - i dont hear this stream in music. try to rework.I suggest you use 25% speed to hear

02:11:190 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - nice :O

02:39:190 (1) - place it further. kinda confused.ok

02:53:036 to 03:01:805 - favourite part of song and well mapped

thanks

03:13:190 (2) - like 01:42:728 (4)I think it's ok here
03:40:420 (5,6,7,8,9) - make it like a snake, not like a turtle ;_;

I'm noob to make a slider/spoilerbox]

And done
Very nice song and nice diffs
Hope youll get it ranked

thanks modding

Last edited by sjoy 2014-01-22T12:19:28+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

[ Raphael ]

[ Raphael ] 2014-01-22T12:08:47+00:00

Hi~ :3 M4M!

[Troogle's Easy]

00:04:420 (2,3) - better blanket
00:47:497 (1,2) - ^
01:55:190 (2,3) - ^
01:58:882 - add circle
02:14:882 (1) - start on 02:15:036 - and end on 02:15:959 -. i can hear vocal

[Normal]
- 00:29:805 (6) - start on 00:29:497 -
  00:41:497 (1,1) - remove NC. i think that there is no particular need on this part
  01:06:882 (1) - start on 01:07:190 - here. and add circle on 01:06:882 -
  01:17:651 (2,3) - better blanket
  01:23:036 (3,1) - try blanket
  01:47:959 (1,1) - remove NC
  01:58:113 (5,1) - remove that overlap lightly
  02:13:343 - add circle
  02:43:036 (1,2) - better blanket
  
  [Fycho's Hard]
  - 00:12:113 (2) - move to (348,36) for better flow
    01:29:343 (2) - move to (343,237) for accurate overlap
    03:02:266 (1) - remove NC
    
    [Lunatic]
    - 00:09:497 (1,2) - distance.
      00:16:574 (5) - move to (181,190) for accurate overlap
      00:22:574 (4) - move to (90,163)
      00:41:190 (1,1,1) - a little awkward. end on white tick
      00:47:805 (2,3) - remove that overlap lightly
      01:47:651 (1,1,1) - same as above
      02:25:036 (1) - move to (170,339)
      03:01:805 (1) - end on white tick
      03:13:190 (2) - move to (298,243)
      
      Hope this helps :3

Fycho

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Fycho 2014-01-22T12:33:33+00:00

Tsukuyomi wrote:
Fycho's Hard
01:02:728 (2) - 加速了这边和前面那根火腿肠身体的距离拉开一点比较舒服好
01:11:497 (3) - kiai这段给人一直流动的感觉比较好啊，折返两次感觉有点影响移动顺畅，改成一次比较好这个不改，后面的类似
01:16:420 (3) - 这也是
01:18:113 (5) - 丑啊抬到x447y82好
01:48:574 (1,2,3) - 有点难我觉得还好
02:17:959 (4) - 同前面
02:22:882 (3) - ^
03:04:729 (4) - ^
03:09:652 (3) - ^

LucyS wrote:
Hard
01:29:343 (2) - i suggest delete this and end 01:29:036 (1) here 01:29:343 wait for others' advice
02:13:959 (2) - Move to x:270 y:185all fixed these
02:14:266 (3) - ^ to x:434 y:198
02:14:574 (4) - ^ to x:432 y:116 and your second node to x:487 y:49
02:28:420 (1) - ^ to x:272 y:148, delete the middle node and move the last for x:181 y:185 no,spacing is wrong
02:33:036 (4) - Move to x224 y:152^

That's all i found

Tagre wrote:
Fycho's Hard
Generally i would change sv to 1,3 or even 1,2. it is a bit too fast now for me.
00:18:266 (2) - end this slider on the red tick
00:22:574 (1) - change to circle (it will be nice flow drop here)
00:24:728 (3) - change it to 2 circles (1st white tick, 2nd red tick)
00:26:574 (1,2,3,4,5) - very nice part
00:32:728 (5) - this circle is unnecessary but if you want you can keep it
01:05:343 (3) - end it on the red tick
01:15:805 (1,2,3,4) - this rhythm http://puu.sh/6tkme.jpg
01:26:574 (4,2) - try to stack it properly
01:29:036 (1) - end it on red tick
01:42:882 (1,2) - this rhythm http://puu.sh/6tkAc.jpg
01:49:959 (3,1) - try to avoid this kind of overlap. it isn't bad if you want to rank it but it is ugly
02:07:497 (1) - end this slider at 02:08:113 and delete all thing on the way
03:08:113 (2) - blanket this slider with previous one
03:12:728 (1,3) - overlap
03:22:266 (1) - change it to circle (like 00:22:574 (1))
sorry I looked through your mod and no fixed anything.

to [ Raphael ],no fixed from your mod sorry.

thanks everyone for modding

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 04 - Be Back ON!.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 69343
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Be Back ON!
TitleUnicode:Be Back ON!
Artist:ALiCE'S EMOTiON
ArtistUnicode:ALiCE'S EMOTiON
Creator:sjoy
Version:Fycho's Hard
Source:Touhou
Tags:t+pazolite Rizna C84 Spirit World Perfect Cherry Blossom 妖々跋扈 th07 Chen Yakumo Ran Troogle Fycho Youkai Domination
BeatmapID:352698
BeatmapSetID:135778

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,32928,40440
2,89543,98440
2,173236,181055
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
3190,307.692307692308,4,2,10,70,1,0
22574,-83.3333333333333,4,2,10,70,0,0
22882,-100,4,2,10,80,0,0
32574,-100,4,2,10,80,0,0
52420,-133.333333333333,4,2,10,60,0,0
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Nepu

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Joined September 2013

Nepu 2014-01-22T19:41:50+00:00

Tsukuyomi wrote:
Troogle's Easy
clap怎么像是随便加的
00:47:497 (1) - blanket 没看出来问题。。。
00:49:651 (1) - 改成折返好一点，前面那个最好也改成折返,让人知道你在跟vocal,不然莫名就是会很丑。。
00:52:420 (1) - blanket OK
00:53:651 (2) - ^ ^
01:13:343 (3) - ^没看出来问题。。。
01:08:574 (1) - 折什么反，中间的白线根本没finish，改成一个2/1改了
01:55:190 (2) - 错位了，应该前面的红线起 ok
02:14:882 (1) - 跟前面一样ok
02:34:574 (2) - 弧度不对，没包好 OK
03:01:805 (1,2) - 并成一个滑条，那个滑条太短把新手吓一跳还好吧
03:21:343 (2,3) - 喵在蓝线上，很误导，换个节奏OK

还有最后应该加个默认的soft clap，或者找个有类似回音的拍手声这个看sjoy吧/.\

谢mod

LucyS wrote:
Eazy
00:47:497 (1) - Move the second node to x: 196 y: 332
01:20:728 (2) - ^ to x: 416 y: 56
01:26:266 (2) - Move to x:192 y:204
02:14:882 (1) - Maybe move this to 02:15:497
That's all i found

No fix sorry ><Thx for mod~

Tagre wrote:
Troogle's Easy
SPOILER
01:21:959 (1,2,3) - this rhythm http://puu.sh/6tgw2><nope
01:42:266 (1) - move to 01:42:420, move slider tail to 01:43:190 and fix distance with 2
01:44:113 (1) - move to 01:43:959 and move slider tail to 01:44:728 and fix distance after \/
01:45:343 (2) - move to 01:45:190 (these two are only suggestions. im not good with modding easy ,_,) changed to another way :3
01:55:190 (2) - move to 01:55:036ok~
01:56:113 - add circleok

Thx a lot~

[ Raphael ] wrote:
[Troogle's Easy]
00:04:420 (2,3) - better blanket K
00:47:497 (1,2) - ^
01:55:190 (2,3) - ^
01:58:882 - add circle ok~
02:14:882 (1) - start on 02:15:036 - and end on 02:15:959 -. i can hear vocal changed to another way

Thx :3

@sjoy

osu file format v12

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axschiming

63 posts

Joined December 2009

axschiming 2014-01-24T03:38:40+00:00

HELLO,m4m

[Easy]
00:35:805 (1) - 可以到后面的红线
00:42:574 (1) - 这后面一小段节奏可以改成这样
00:48:574 (2) - 试着包一下？
00:52:420 (1) - 没包齐
00:54:882 (3,4,5,6) - 能拼成正方形0.0
01:02:266 (1) - 没包齐
01:42:266 (1) - ^
01:45:343 (2) - ^
01:56:420 (3) - ^
01:08:420 (1) - 可以走下这个节奏03:01:805 (1,2)，纯建议
02:14:882 (1) - ^
01:18:266 (3) - 可以移到前面的红线
01:28:113 (2) - ^
01:47:651 (3) - 方向向上一下跟flow？
02:00:113 (1) - 放前面的红线跟人声？我是喜欢在EN跟Vocal拉;w;
02:09:959 (2,3,4) - 拼个三角形哦;w;
02:16:113 (1,3) - 可以放一条竖线上。。。纯建议
02:21:036 (1) - 感觉可以随下flow向下移些？
02:40:113 (4,1) - 可以放在一条直线上
02:48:113 (1) - 延长到前面的红线？
03:07:805 (1) - 没叠齐
02:33:343 (1) - 包下1？
03:10:266 (1) - ^
03:11:497 (2) - ^……
03:13:959 (3) - 这个和之前的2差了0.05= =，叠一下？

[Normal]
00:24:728 (2) - 挂红线上？我感觉红线上的音乐明显些
00:32:728 (1) - 还是想跟人声;w;
00:38:728 (3) - 感觉能拆开缩到前面的红线，再在红线加个一派的滑条
00:59:651 (1) - 包
01:04:728 (1) - 最后面加个Finish？或者给01:06:882 (1)加个？
01:23:036 (3) - 我还是建议包一包
01:40:882 (4) - 包下，虽说飞球说不用可以去包，但是我觉得EN还是要包下，因为note不多，显示时间还很长，注意力主要集中在那几个note，美观还是很重要
01:41:651 (1) - 包
01:57:343 (4) - 包歪了一点点。。。
02:13:651 (1) - 这个转盘明显比之前同一节奏的短，统一一下
02:21:651 (2,3) - 放一条直线上？
03:16:266 (5) - 包……

[Hard]
00:24:113 (1) - 没音效……不知是特殊节奏还是忘了
00:25:343 (1) - 这个也是……
00:27:190 (3) - Finish？
00:29:497 (2) - 尾巴向上翘一点跟flow？
00:51:036 (1,2,3) - 这一部分我建议跟下红线，比较明显嘛;w;
01:43:959 (4) - 感觉不用折返
02:14:574 (4) - 你看看这个位置猴不猴，虽然感觉你会说不猴

SPOILER

[Lunatic]
00:20:420 (1,2,3,4) - 再排齐点？
00:35:651 (2,3,4) - 突然就远了起来。。。
00:45:651 (6,7) - 柑橘可以Ctrl+G
01:04:728 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 前半段和后半段的梗交换下？纯建议
01:29:036 (6) - 我觉得可以NC啊;w;,顺便变下速度
01:57:497 (1,2,3) - 太远了些。。怎么说呢，切指太远有点反应不过来
03:20:113 (1,2,3) - 间距不同，不太好看
03:25:036 (1) - 没叠齐
03:28:728 (1) - 可以拆成半拍+一个单点
03:33:651 (1) - 没什么必要的话就包下吧
03:41:651 (3) - ^

好萌哦-w-，废话有点多，实在找不出啥问题就狂艹包了XD
祝早日rank哦

[Mahua]

702 posts

Joined November 2010

[Mahua] 2014-01-24T09:38:36+00:00

有跟vocal的嫌疑啊

sjoy

1,025 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

sjoy 2014-01-24T13:31:13+00:00

axschiming wrote:
HELLO,m4m

[Normal]
00:24:728 (2) - 挂红线上？我感觉红线上的音乐明显些还好现在
00:32:728 (1) - 还是想跟人声;w; 这样FIN加不了
00:38:728 (3) - 感觉能拆开缩到前面的红线，再在红线加个一派的滑条懒了。
00:59:651 (1) - 包我觉得现在很好了
01:04:728 (1) - 最后面加个Finish？或者给01:06:882 (1)加个？
01:23:036 (3) - 我还是建议包一包太长了懒包
01:40:882 (4) - 包下，虽说飞球说不用可以去包，但是我觉得EN还是要包下，因为note不多，显示时间还很长，注意力主要集中在那几个note，美观还是很重要好吧
01:41:651 (1) - 包好
01:57:343 (4) - 包歪了一点点。。。好
02:13:651 (1) - 这个转盘明显比之前同一节奏的短，统一一下好
02:21:651 (2,3) - 放一条直线上？故意有个小弧度的
03:16:266 (5) - 包……

[Lunatic]
00:20:420 (1,2,3,4) - 再排齐点？好
00:35:651 (2,3,4) - 突然就远了起来。。。改近了
00:45:651 (6,7) - 柑橘可以Ctrl+G 好
01:04:728 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 前半段和后半段的梗交换下？纯建议懒。
01:29:036 (6) - 我觉得可以NC啊;w;,顺便变下速度懒。
01:57:497 (1,2,3) - 太远了些。。怎么说呢，切指太远有点反应不过来改近了
03:20:113 (1,2,3) - 间距不同，不太好看 DS上看是一样阿
03:25:036 (1) - 没叠齐改了
03:28:728 (1) - 可以拆成半拍+一个单点用个长条比较舒缓
03:33:651 (1) - 没什么必要的话就包下吧好吧。
03:41:651 (3) - ^ 。

好萌哦-w-，废话有点多，实在找不出啥问题就狂艹包了XD
祝早日rank哦

感谢MOD

Azure

771 posts

Joined November 2010

Azure 2014-01-25T12:39:19+00:00

M4M from 泡泡's Queue :-)
能用中文mod全部我真的太感動了555

[Troogle's Easy]
這個Easy我不知道該從哪摸起呀，因為是跟著vocal做的吧，雖然開著DS，不過可能是因為跟vocal的關係，
我覺得有些地方不怎麼好讀 ._.

[Normal]
沒甚麼問題了~

[Fycho's Hard]

00:27:497 (4,5) +whistle
01:03:497 (1,2,3,4) slider's head ^
01:40:882 (2) 調整一下位置x48 y92
01:46:113 (4,6) 加上whistle
03:36:728 (3,4) 用意跟上面一樣 ^
飛球真是嚇人，感覺有一定的風格存在了，這個難度感覺已經沒甚麼問題了，就一些nazi而已

[Lunatic]

00:27:190 - 00:27:728 我覺得可以放一串長連打，感覺更好玩
01:18:728 這裡弄成，跟音樂 ?
01:29:036 (6) 這個既然slider都弄了形狀，那直接加速x1.5感覺更過癮
02:46:113 (2) 折返?
03:22:266 (6) 同上面那個~
03:36:728 換成4個短slider，然後擺成類似這樣的感覺
SPOILER
03:39:343 (5) 雖然很有特色但感覺不適合這裡，而且前面也沒有，搭配音樂有種便秘的感覺233
整張圖的跳躍感還不錯，但還可以在更多，因為BPM夠高、旋律也很歡樂活潑，感覺增加1/4短slider的使用會有幫助，江連打的部分間距加大也是不錯的選擇 :-) 音效弄得滿好的，我覺得很搭音樂~

加油咯

sjoy

1,025 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

sjoy 2014-01-25T15:33:42+00:00

Azure wrote:
M4M from 泡泡's Queue :-)
能用中文mod全部我真的太感動了555

[Lunatic]
00:27:190 - 00:27:728 我覺得可以放一串長連打，感覺更好玩其实我想善良一次的。我试试1/4滑条吧
01:18:728 這裡弄成，跟音樂 ?
我觉得还是跟VOCAL 好了。
01:29:036 (6) 這個既然slider都弄了形狀，那直接加速x1.5感覺更過癮好
02:46:113 (2) 折返?好
03:22:266 (6) 同上面那個~好
03:36:728 換成4個短slider，然後擺成類似這樣的感覺嗯改了
SPOILER
03:39:343 (5) 雖然很有特色但感覺不適合這裡，而且前面也沒有，搭配音樂有種便秘的感覺233。改了。
整張圖的跳躍感還不錯，但還可以在更多，因為BPM夠高、旋律也很歡樂活潑，感覺增加1/4短slider的使用會有幫助，江連打的部分間距加大也是不錯的選擇 :-) 音效弄得滿好的，我覺得很搭音樂~
感谢MOD
加油咯

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-01-29T17:51:47+00:00

axschiming wrote:
HELLO,m4m
[Hard]
00:24:113 (1) - 没音效……不知是特殊节奏还是忘了只不需要音效啊，前后都没加
00:25:343 (1) - 这个也是……^
00:27:190 (3) - Finish？对啊是finish，突出以下这个音
00:29:497 (2) - 尾巴向上翘一点跟flow？我觉得现在flow还好，既然说到了那就稍微翘点啦
00:51:036 (1,2,3) - 这一部分我建议跟下红线，比较明显嘛;w;可是downbeat在白线，突然下红线滑条玩起来不舒服
01:43:959 (4) - 感觉不用折返稍微自创了折返觉得还行
02:14:574 (4) - 你看看这个位置猴不猴，虽然感觉你会说不猴那就不猴了
SPOILER

Azure wrote:
[Fycho's Hard]
00:27:497 (4,5) +whistle这块音效和最后一段那里全改了而且统一了
01:03:497 (1,2,3,4) slider's head ^^
01:40:882 (2) 調整一下位置x48 y92稍微变了个位置
01:46:113 (4,6) 加上whistle虽然加着听着略吵不过听着也不错
03:36:728 (3,4) 用意跟上面一樣 ^^
飛球真是嚇人，感覺有一定的風格存在了，這個難度感覺已經沒甚麼問題了，就一些nazi而已

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kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

kamisamaaa 2014-02-02T05:05:07+00:00

from my queue~
[谷歌的easy]
00:47:497 (1,2) - 没包好
00:57:343 (1) - ctrl+G 更舒服
01:28:113 (2,3) - 这两个转一点角度做成这样漂亮些
01:42:420 (1) - 这样子超级难受啊感觉不如在白线开始呢就相当于这里跟鼓点感觉舒服得多如果要改最好前面那个滑条一起
02:00:113 (1) - 建议ctrl+G 然后包02:01:343 (2) - 而不是之前那个
03:12:728 (1,2) - ctrl+G
[normal]
喂喂你前面怎么不map 你的normal又不是GD 时间做成一样吧别这样偷懒啊
00:29:651 (6) - 我感觉把这个滑条往前到白线比你这样舒服得多因为前面都是这样的节奏
00:44:266 (3) - 这个上凸吧感觉无论是前后流畅度还是和曲子的符合程度都比你这样好
[飞球hard]
00:04:113 (2) - 这个强烈建议和后面那个头叠而不是折返的尾巴真的很难并且还不舒服
00:13:497 (2) - 这里鼓点和00:13:343这里比较的话弱了太多白线用滑条尾带过红线反而用note感觉很违和建议删掉或者你把00:13:036 (1) - 这个变成2个1/2的滑条也好
00:15:036 (3) - 这个感觉和上面一样
00:49:805 (5,1) - 虽然明白你这里是想做个跳但是感觉4 5那个方向玩起来很难受所以建议吧5叠到3的尾巴上这里就不放跳了算了用个遮挡额
01:29:036 (1) - 感觉这个滑条直接拖到白线比较合适就是一个niang的音配合一个弯曲程度比较大的滑条直接结束舒服得多最后那个kiai里面的niang是因为后面进跟着节奏可是你这里后面就是break了额
01:48:266这里到01:58:882节奏有点太满了额。。又不是kiai 感觉稍微空出一点点节奏来好一些
02:14:882 (1,1) - 感觉最好拉远一点以为你之前比较跳这里恢复正常距离但是感觉像是一个1/2时间跳
[lunatic]
感觉开始这一段的note像是乱放的感觉好乱。。。再想想有啥梗？
00:04:113 (4,5,1,2) - 比如说这四个 [url=puu.sh/6FWvj.png]这样[/url]摆的话感觉就能好一些不会感觉这么乱额
00:30:420 (2,3) - 这两个ctrl+G能舒服一些你这里后面感觉有点别扭
00:39:343 (3,4) - 这个间距有点微妙额
01:00:113 (2,3) - 还有这个。。
01:05:343 (1,2,3,4) - 扩大一点吧感觉这么多note都堆在一起感觉好拘束不用做的多跳就是扩大一圈让人有个方四周舒展的感觉就足够了
01:10:882 (1,2,3,4) - 你就不能做的整齐一点么。。比如像[url=puu.sh/6FWTg.png]这样[/url]
01:23:343 (2,6) - 没叠好顺便如果不是故意相叠的话就建议吧2拉远点感觉这位置不好看
01:29:036 (1) - 跟飞球hard建议一样不如直接一个弯曲的滑条拖到白线结束因为后面是break了
02:11:190 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 建议别四个都用一样loop 前两个用这样的旋转后两个最好换个样子再来另一种loop比较有意思而且也能舒展一些不是挤在这一堆
02:15:036 (1,2,3) - 间距不好重新处理一下吧 1 2之间要么更大一些要么用极小间距
03:05:959 (3,4) - ctrl+G吧你这样难受死了

就这样吧~别忘了我的KD！！
昨天就写好了结果网断了。。到现在才好

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-02-02T07:35:49+00:00

kamisamaaa wrote:
[飞球hard]
00:04:113 (2) - 这个强烈建议和后面那个头叠而不是折返的尾巴真的很难并且还不舒服叠后面的头上间距拙计啊，这个仔细读图的话没问题的
00:13:497 (2) - 这里鼓点和00:13:343这里比较的话弱了太多白线用滑条尾带过红线反而用note感觉很违和建议删掉或者你把00:13:036 (1) - 这个变成2个1/2的滑条也好这个鼓点弱强什么的太牵强了啊，这个note只是填补节奏的空白而已，没什么特别的意义跟节奏强弱什么的
00:15:036 (3) - 这个感觉和上面一样^
00:49:805 (5,1) - 虽然明白你这里是想做个跳但是感觉4 5那个方向玩起来很难受所以建议吧5叠到3的尾巴上这里就不放跳了算了用个遮挡额我觉得这个跳很好啊，方向上flow上也不绕手，打打就好了
01:29:036 (1) - 感觉这个滑条直接拖到白线比较合适就是一个niang的音配合一个弯曲程度比较大的滑条直接结束舒服得多最后那个kiai里面的niang是因为后面进跟着节奏可是你这里后面就是break了额这个待定，本来想改但是滑条又太长，弄起来难看，等以后看有人说就用绿线减慢再改
01:48:266这里到01:58:882节奏有点太满了额。。又不是kiai 感觉稍微空出一点点节奏来好一些就算不是KIAI节奏满也没问题吧
02:14:882 (1,1) - 感觉最好拉远一点以为你之前比较跳这里恢复正常距离但是感觉像是一个1/2时间跳加了NC读图没什么问题的，这要改起来比较麻烦

sjoy

1,025 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

sjoy 2014-02-02T14:08:35+00:00

kamisamaaa wrote:
from my queue~
[Normal]
喂喂你前面怎么不map 你的normal又不是GD 时间做成一样吧别这样偷懒啊懒，想补的时候补吧
00:29:651 (6) - 我感觉把这个滑条往前到白线比你这样舒服得多因为前面都是这样的节奏估计手滑了
00:44:266 (3) - 这个上凸吧感觉无论是前后流畅度还是和曲子的符合程度都比你这样好好

[lunatic]
感觉开始这一段的note像是乱放的感觉好乱。。。再想想有啥梗？懒，有空的时候再想把
00:04:113 (4,5,1,2) - 比如说这四个 [url=puu.sh/6FWvj.png]这样[/url]摆的话感觉就能好一些不会感觉这么乱额我就是乱摆的这样可以占满全屏
00:30:420 (2,3) - 这两个ctrl+G能舒服一些你这里后面感觉有点别扭我觉得挺好的阿现在
00:39:343 (3,4) - 这个间距有点微妙额改了
01:00:113 (2,3) - 还有这个。。改了
01:05:343 (1,2,3,4) - 扩大一点吧感觉这么多note都堆在一起感觉好拘束不用做的多跳就是扩大一圈让人有个方四周舒展的感觉就足够了好，第2圈扩大了
01:10:882 (1,2,3,4) - 你就不能做的整齐一点么。。比如像[url=puu.sh/6FWTg.png]这样[/url]这里我是根据间距来摆的，我比较喜欢注重DS摆法
01:23:343 (2,6) - 没叠好顺便如果不是故意相叠的话就建议吧2拉远点感觉这位置不好看还是叠起来吧
01:29:036 (1) - 跟飞球hard建议一样不如直接一个弯曲的滑条拖到白线结束因为后面是break了2个音用1个滑条感觉不好
02:11:190 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 建议别四个都用一样loop 前两个用这样的旋转后两个最好换个样子再来另一种loop比较有意思而且也能舒展一些不是挤在这一堆让我思考一下
02:15:036 (1,2,3) - 间距不好重新处理一下吧 1 2之间要么更大一些要么用极小间距那我就叠起来吧简单点
03:05:959 (3,4) - ctrl+G吧你这样难受死了已改梗

就这样吧~别忘了我的KD！！
昨天就写好了结果网断了。。到现在才好

感谢MOD

Kise--Ryota

17 posts

Joined October 2012

Kise--Ryota 2014-02-07T07:06:31+00:00

你一定是专业mapper！
超新手modder被击败，无话可说，建议怎么给，啊啊啊啊啊
比我做的好多了。。。

Leorda

4,416 posts

Joined June 2009

Leorda 2014-02-12T08:53:34+00:00

Hi there

[Troogle's Easy]
* Please map the beginning and last part, like Hard and Insane diff
* The hitsound feels random, btw. Please rearrange the hitsound for this diff

01:08:882 (2) - Short slider can confuse for beginner because they thought this is a 2 circle instead one slider. Consider to remove 01:08:574 (1,2) and replace it with slider
01:27:805 - Feels empty without it. Add note here?
01:56:420 (4) - Add new combo for following your combo pattern
01:58:882 (6,1) - Swap new combo for following your combo pattern
02:15:036 (1,2) - Same issue as 01:08:882 (2)
02:48:113 (1,1) - Having 2 spinners in two row can confuse beginners because they thought that if complete the spinner, slider/circle will appear after the spinner. Consider to remove the first spinner and replace it with a circles and sliders
03:01:805 (1,2) - Same issue as 01:08:882 (2)

[Normal]
* Please map the beginning and last part, like Hard and Insane diff

00:41:190 (1,1,1) - This combo spam is makes no sense. If you make it for intentional, I think it's not good idea for normal diff. Consider to remove this combo
00:45:036 (4,1) - Swap new combo for following your combo pattern
01:14:574 (1) - Since this pattern is following vocal, how about move backward to red tick and extend it to white tick?
01:28:113 (1) - Due to fast BPM and short spinner, beginner/average player are unable to complete this spinner. Please extend it or replace it with slider
01:47:651 (1,1,1) - Same issue as 00:41:190 (1,1,1)

[Fycho's Hard]
01:39:805 (3) - For perfect timing in next object, remove one repeating slider?
01:41:343 (3) - ^
01:48:728 (2) - Clap here doesn't fit since it's silence part, IMO
02:14:882 (1) - Why new combo in single note? It is intentional or smth?
03:02:574 (1) - ^

Good luck~

sjoy

1,025 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

sjoy 2014-02-13T15:00:54+00:00

Leorda wrote:
Hi there
[Normal]
* Please map the beginning and last part, like Hard and Insane diff it is unrankable ?I'm lazy to map it

00:41:190 (1,1,1) - This combo spam is makes no sense. If you make it for intentional, I think it's not good idea for normal diff. Consider to remove this combook fixed
00:45:036 (4,1) - Swap new combo for following your combo patternfixed
01:14:574 (1) - Since this pattern is following vocal, how about move backward to red tick and extend it to white tick?I want to add fin on 01:14:574.if I start on red tick .I can't add fin
01:28:113 (1) - Due to fast BPM and short spinner, beginner/average player are unable to complete this spinner. Please extend it or replace it with sliderI think it's ok
01:47:651 (1,1,1) - Same issue as 00:41:190 (1,1,1)fixed

Good luck~

thanks for modding~

[Twinkle]

179 posts

Joined October 2012

[Twinkle] 2014-02-13T16:19:09+00:00

[Troogle's Easy]
03:21:959 (3) - nc?

[Normal]
01:04:728 (1) - 最好不要折返两次吧
02:11:190 (1) - ^
01:26:574 (4) - nc
01:26:882 (1) - 取消nc
02:28:420 (1) - DS变小了，这里应该要用1.0把

[Fycho's Hard]
~~1.6的SV是不是太快了~~

[Lunatic]
开始note太多了把一些换成滑条?
没找到什么问题~

Flower

1,723 posts

Joined August 2011

Flower 2014-02-24T12:59:59+00:00

m4m

[Lunatic]
有点S.S的感觉不过还是有点地方细节不够……下次试着学S.S加点左右对称会不错
00:14:420 (1,2) - 减少距离，同时正确地stack 00:13:343 (2,2) - （先对00:14:574 (2) - ctrl+G然后重新对齐，然后给2转一点角度，然后再ctrl+G回来）

SPOILER

00:32:574 (1,2,3) - 三连向左下flow看着比较舒服，可以顺便和00:31:651 (2) - 对齐

SPOILER

00:41:190 (1,1,1) - 有微小的角度偏移，请使用ctrl+shit+s缩放
00:48:113 (3) - 这个玩着就是粘在一起的，有带坏小孩的嫌疑。可以向下移动一格，或者放到x:288,y:292以使用日本流blanket（不对
00:51:805 (9) - 还是有点微奇怪。试试这样？

SPOILER

128,40,51805,2,0,B|104:64|104:64|72:64|72:64|76:128|16:156,1,180,4|8,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:

00:53:420 (5) - 不如放到00:53:266 - ，个人意见
01:11:190 (3) - 放到x:244 y:248？没特别的理由，只是我觉得放到这里比较爽
01:26:420 (3,4,5) - 这个三连在游戏里实际上会跟2重叠，很不好看，所以应当向下移动两格（同时要调整后面的note）
01:47:651 (1,1,1) - 做一个全屏对称的正三角形会更好
01:49:036 (1,4,1) - 仅仅是个人喜好，把这三个的头稍微摆开一点不要碰到（同时注意调整01:51:190 (4) - ，不过好像这个本来也要重新对齐，有一些微小的不对齐）
01:55:036 (5,1) - 交换NC，歌词很明显的分段，同时把间距拉大，这里歌词多么欢快，是我的话这肯定放一个全屏跳
01:59:420 (3) - 不是很喜欢这个三连，虽然歌曲里有音，也不是在正好1/4的位置，倒是01:59:805 (5,6) - 可以放一个
02:19:805 (1,2,3) - 向右下移动，因为这里有auto-stack导致02:19:651 (5,1) - 距离变小，既不美观也容易读错
02:23:805 (2,4) - 不要粘在一起
02:27:497 (3,4,5) - 这里的排列最好是让它们的头不要互相粘连，这样既能保证重叠的效果也不会显得太过草率

SPOILER

02:45:036 (1,2,3) - 这里还是之前的间距很容易让人把3读成1/2，更何况本来音乐里就是1/2，不如不要减速直接加个1/2
03:04:113 (1,8,1) - 这两个也是，最好不要粘连
03:20:113 (1,2,3) - ^
03:21:959 (5,1) - ^
03:35:805 (4,1,3) - 这里由于auto stack会粘连，所以同上
03:40:882 (1) - 呃，现在的傻逼规定不给用这种滑条了

[Hard]
00:08:728 (2,3) - 没对齐，嘛这只是强迫症的事情
00:18:266 (2) - 这里背景也是明显的1/2，不如和前面一样使用1/2
00:42:113 (4,5,6) - 不如改成一个折返滑条，易读错
00:52:113 (4,5,1) - auto stack造成距离变化，向右下移动两格
01:05:343 (3) - 同上面，建议1/2
01:27:497 (3,4,5,6) - 02:33:959 (3,4,5,6) - 如果我的话可能会使用4356来提示跳跃（因为滑条到点的跳相对比较简单，又能给人警示）
01:39:805 (3) - 完全莫名，不如改成01:39:959 - 的一个点
02:12:420 (1) - 向左移动两格，和02:12:112 (4) - 不要粘在一起
02:35:343 (3,4,5,1) - 真是新人杀手……02:35:651 (5,1) - 交换NC会好一点？
02:47:805 (4) - 改成1/2

[Normal]
00:29:651 (6,1) - 分开
00:35:190 (1) - 改成一个3/2的滑条，踩音会更好
实际上00:32:574 - 00:41:190 - 其实这一段你踩的音很难让新手看懂，比较好的是要么跟死vocal要么完全跟伴奏，忽这忽那容易恶俗
01:13:651 - 加个note？
01:45:036 - ^
02:48:420 (1,2,3,4,5) - 突然横平竖直，不是很搭调，个人认为
03:01:805 - 没用的绿线
03:05:036 - 加一个1/2滑条会比较好？
03:10:113 (1) - ^
03:16:266 (5) - 这个滑条也不太压音，建议重做
后面不做完？

[Easy]
00:05:651 (3) - 这是哪一年的滑条了……拉也给我拉漂亮点喂

仅供参考

00:21:651 (2) - 加一个折返怎么样？
00:35:805 (1,2,3) - 这个跟normal一样也是莫名，我觉得干脆不要做这段，把00:22:882 - 00:32:728 - 这段做了
01:39:190 - 01:47:651 - 这段提议重做，又是白线又是红线的新手绝对只能乱点。改成整段跟大鼓的音，也就是24白线，会简易不少，何况他也是最强最明显的音轨
03:02:882 - 这边复制粘贴就不太好，这里是全曲最high的地方你用第二段弱不拉叽的氛围代入进去就一点让人体会不到打图的快感

That's as far I could help. Good luck~!

sjoy

1,025 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

sjoy 2014-03-03T14:40:57+00:00

Flower wrote:
m4m

[Lunatic]
有点S.S的感觉不过还是有点地方细节不够……下次试着学S.S加点左右对称会不错我去看看先
00:14:420 (1,2) - 减少距离，同时正确地stack 00:13:343 (2,2) - （先对00:14:574 (2) - ctrl+G然后重新对齐，然后给2转一点角度，然后再ctrl+G回来）好
SPOILER
00:32:574 (1,2,3) - 三连向左下flow看着比较舒服，可以顺便和00:31:651 (2) - 对齐好
SPOILER
00:41:190 (1,1,1) - 有微小的角度偏移，请使用ctrl+shit+s缩放好
00:48:113 (3) - 这个玩着就是粘在一起的，有带坏小孩的嫌疑。可以向下移动一格，或者放到x:288,y:292以使用日本流blanket（不对不明觉厉
00:51:805 (9) - 还是有点微奇怪。试试这样？
SPOILER
看起来不错
128,40,51805,2,0,B|104:64|104:64|72:64|72:64|76:128|16:156,1,180,4|8,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
00:53:420 (5) - 不如放到00:53:266 - ，个人意见虽然白线起的3连但是这个音比较重我还是倾向跟
01:11:190 (3) - 放到x:244 y:248？没特别的理由，只是我觉得放到这里比较爽好
01:26:420 (3,4,5) - 这个三连在游戏里实际上会跟2重叠，很不好看，所以应当向下移动两格（同时要调整后面的note）奇怪我的打的时候怎么没发现
01:47:651 (1,1,1) - 做一个全屏对称的正三角形会更好我觉得现在还行
01:49:036 (1,4,1) - 仅仅是个人喜好，把这三个的头稍微摆开一点不要碰到（同时注意调整01:51:190 (4) - ，不过好像这个本来也要重新对齐，有一些微小的不对齐）好
01:55:036 (5,1) - 交换NC，歌词很明显的分段，同时把间距拉大，这里歌词多么欢快，是我的话这肯定放一个全屏跳网盘改改
01:59:420 (3) - 不是很喜欢这个三连，虽然歌曲里有音，也不是在正好1/4的位置，倒是01:59:805 (5,6) - 可以放一个
02:19:805 (1,2,3) - 向右下移动，因为这里有auto-stack导致02:19:651 (5,1) - 距离变小，既不美观也容易读错好
02:23:805 (2,4) - 不要粘在一起好
02:27:497 (3,4,5) - 这里的排列最好是让它们的头不要互相粘连，这样既能保证重叠的效果也不会显得太过草率好
SPOILER
02:45:036 (1,2,3) - 这里还是之前的间距很容易让人把3读成1/2，更何况本来音乐里就是1/2，不如不要减速直接加个1/2行
03:04:113 (1,8,1) - 这两个也是，最好不要粘连好
03:20:113 (1,2,3) - ^
03:21:959 (5,1) - ^
03:35:805 (4,1,3) - 这里由于auto stack会粘连，所以同上
03:40:882 (1) - 呃，现在的傻逼规定不给用这种滑条了咦这样吗

[Normal]
00:29:651 (6,1) - 分开
00:35:190 (1) - 改成一个3/2的滑条，踩音会更好
实际上00:32:574 - 00:41:190 - 其实这一段你踩的音很难让新手看懂，比较好的是要么跟死vocal要么完全跟伴奏，忽这忽那容易恶俗我看看
01:13:651 - 加个note？算了纯跟VOCAL好了
01:45:036 - ^ ^
02:48:420 (1,2,3,4,5) - 突然横平竖直，不是很搭调，个人认为确实
03:01:805 - 没用的绿线删
03:05:036 - 加一个1/2滑条会比较好？
03:10:113 (1) - ^
03:16:266 (5) - 这个滑条也不太压音，建议重做改了
后面不做完？懒

That's as far I could help. Good luck~!

给你32个赞

sjoy

1,025 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

sjoy 2014-03-07T14:46:35+00:00

[Twinkle] wrote:
[Troogle's Easy]

[Normal]
01:04:728 (1) - 最好不要折返两次吧我觉得还行
02:11:190 (1) - ^
01:26:574 (4) - nc
01:26:882 (1) - 取消nc
02:28:420 (1) - DS变小了，这里应该要用1.0把嗯改了

[Lunatic]
开始note太多了把一些换成滑条? 我想想看
没找到什么问题~

感谢MOD了

Fushimi Rio

Fushimi Rio 2014-03-09T10:41:40+00:00

吓死了送分都3.25 Hana才3.7不到

wcx19911123

3,862 posts

Joined June 2010

wcx19911123 2014-03-09T17:19:03+00:00

m4m here

[Easy]
00:05:651 (3) - 这个可以blanket好点
00:32:574 - 想更合曲的话，这个note应该放在这里，可惜这样的话节奏有点难
01:08:574 (1,2) - 根据整体diff难度来看的话，这节奏明显太难
01:40:882 (3,1) - 这里开始又开始狂跟vocal了。。之前的地方都是狂跟drum，这样不太好。如果想同时跟两条音轨的话，最好是不断合理的切换所跟音轨，一大段跟A一大段跟B，显得没有整体感。当然Easy要处理好这一点，还是需要不少功底的，加油吧
02:15:343 - same

[Normal]
HD+1
00:29:651 (6,1) - 像这种地方，就不比死跟spacing了，让spacing看上去一样（实际上不一样）即可，这样一不影响读图（即使是低难度），二更加美观
01:08:882 (1) - 这个slider最好不要放在中间，因为spinner跟这个slider的approach circle都重叠在一起，而且他们收缩的速度是不同的，这样对读节奏来说非常困难（尤其这里只间隔了1/1）
01:14:420 - slider从这里开始？节奏好点
01:24:420 (1,3) - 可以blanket好点
03:29:959 - same
03:31:190 (3,4) - 这两个slider完全没对在节奏上，建议往前挪1/2然后03:32:113 - 这里加点什么
03:41:959 - 加点什么么

[Fycho's Hard]
01:11:497 (3) - 感觉小点声好点
01:16:420 (3) - ^，同梗后略。。
01:18:420 (1,2) - 建议改改节奏，现在头都没在重音上
01:28:266 (1,2,3) - ^
01:45:959 - 建议在这里加个NC为了读stack，然后其他地方去掉点NC
01:47:190 (2) - 这slider前后的spacing几乎差了2倍，导致下一个note很容易读成在01:47:805 - ，建议调整下spacing使之平衡点

[Lunatic]
没啥草甸，这diff节奏挺好的，让人怀疑不是一个人。。可是其他方面还是太不行了。。
可以去扒点类似的歌，看看spacing跟跳

good luck

sjoy

1,025 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

sjoy 2014-03-11T08:25:02+00:00

wcx19911123 wrote:
m4m here

[Normal]
HD+1
00:29:651 (6,1) - 像这种地方，就不比死跟spacing了，让spacing看上去一样（实际上不一样）即可，这样一不影响读图（即使是低难度），二更加美观然后呢？
01:08:882 (1) - 这个slider最好不要放在中间，因为spinner跟这个slider的approach circle都重叠在一起，而且他们收缩的速度是不同的，这样对读节奏来说非常困难（尤其这里只间隔了1/1）好
01:14:420 - slider从这里开始？节奏好点那FIN就美丽
01:24:420 (1,3) - 可以blanket好点
03:29:959 - same
03:31:190 (3,4) - 这两个slider完全没对在节奏上，建议往前挪1/2然后03:32:113 - 这里加点什么已改
03:41:959 - 加点什么么好，加个NOTE

[Lunatic]
没啥草甸，这diff节奏挺好的，让人怀疑不是一个人。。可是其他方面还是太不行了。。
可以去扒点类似的歌，看看spacing跟跳
这让我很纠结
good luck

~~能不能泡阿~~

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-03-11T13:17:38+00:00

Leorda wrote:
[Fycho's Hard]
01:39:805 (3) - For perfect timing in next object, remove one repeating slider? changed a rhythm
01:41:343 (3) - ^ right
01:48:728 (2) - Clap here doesn't fit since it's silence part, IMO yep, removed
02:14:882 (1) - Why new combo in single note? It is intentional or smth?on purpose
03:02:574 (1) - ^

Good luck~

Flower wrote:
m4m

[Hard]
00:08:728 (2,3) - 没对齐，嘛这只是强迫症的事情懒改
00:18:266 (2) - 这里背景也是明显的1/2，不如和前面一样使用1/2 fixed
00:42:113 (4,5,6) - 不如改成一个折返滑条，易读错我觉得还可以
00:52:113 (4,5,1) - auto stack造成距离变化，向右下移动两格好，fixed
01:05:343 (3) - 同上面，建议1/2fixed
01:27:497 (3,4,5,6) - 02:33:959 (3,4,5,6) - 如果我的话可能会使用4356来提示跳跃（因为滑条到点的跳相对比较简单，又能给人警示）我喜欢现在在这样
01:39:805 (3) - 完全莫名，不如改成01:39:959 - 的一个点ok
02:12:420 (1) - 向左移动两格，和02:12:112 (4) - 不要粘在一起 fixed
02:35:343 (3,4,5,1) - 真是新人杀手……02:35:651 (5,1) - 交换NC会好一点？这不改了
02:47:805 (4) - 改成1/2 fixed

wcx19911123 wrote:
[Fycho's Hard]
01:11:497 (3) - 感觉小点声好点 fixed
01:16:420 (3) - ^，同梗后略。。^
01:18:420 (1,2) - 建议改改节奏，现在头都没在重音上这里我觉得可以，鼓点也不是在白线上的
01:28:266 (1,2,3) - ^这里乐器音都一样，不跟鼓点，现在打着蛮顺的
01:45:959 - 建议在这里加个NC为了读stack，然后其他地方去掉点NC没加NC简化读图的习惯...
01:47:190 (2) - 这slider前后的spacing几乎差了2倍，导致下一个note很容易读成在01:47:805 - ，建议调整下spacing使之平衡点fixed

good luck

thanks for modding.

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 04 - Be Back ON!.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 69343
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Be Back ON!
TitleUnicode:Be Back ON!
Artist:ALiCE'S EMOTiON
ArtistUnicode:ALiCE'S EMOTiON
Creator:sjoy
Version:Fycho's Hard
Source:Touhou
Tags:t+pazolite Rizna C84 Spirit World Perfect Cherry Blossom 妖々跋扈 th07 Chen Yakumo Ran Troogle Fycho Youkai Domination
BeatmapID:352698
BeatmapSetID:135778

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CircleSize:4
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Nepu

211 posts

Joined September 2013

Nepu 2014-03-15T10:58:02+00:00

wcx19911123 wrote:
m4m here

[Easy]
00:05:651 (3) - 这个可以blanket好点改了
00:32:574 - 想更合曲的话，这个note应该放在这里，可惜这样的话节奏有点难删了
01:08:574 (1,2) - 根据整体diff难度来看的话，这节奏明显太难删了
01:40:882 (3,1) - 这里开始又开始狂跟vocal了。。之前的地方都是狂跟drum，这样不太好。如果想同时跟两条音轨的话，最好是不断合理的切换所跟音轨，一大段跟A一大段跟B，显得没有整体感。当然Easy要处理好这一点，还是需要不少功底的，加油吧 remap了点。。。谢谢鼓励
02:15:343 - same 删了

good luck

axschiming wrote:
HELLO,m4m
[Easy]
00:35:805 (1) - 可以到后面的红线这块remap了，美丽
00:42:574 (1) - 这后面一小段节奏可以改成这样怎样= =
00:48:574 (2) - 试着包一下？o.o这个太短了，，包起来不好看
00:52:420 (1) - 没包齐K
00:54:882 (3,4,5,6) - 能拼成正方形0.0改了，虽然我觉得直角弯不怎么好。。。
01:02:266 (1) - 没包齐没看出来QvQ
01:42:266 (1) - ^这块remap了，美丽
01:45:343 (2) - ^^
01:56:420 (3) - ^没包
01:08:420 (1) - 可以走下这个节奏03:01:805 (1,2)，纯建议刻意三段kiai不同的
02:14:882 (1) - ^^
01:18:266 (3) - 可以移到前面的红线没觉得。。
01:28:113 (2) - ^^
01:47:651 (3) - 方向向上一下跟flow？容易遮住折返
02:00:113 (1) - 放前面的红线跟人声？我是喜欢在EN跟Vocal拉;w;EN跟vocal节奏容易把持不住啦;w;
02:09:959 (2,3,4) - 拼个三角形哦;w;K
02:16:113 (1,3) - 可以放一条竖线上。。。纯建议比较喜欢现在的
02:21:036 (1) - 感觉可以随下flow向下移些？^
02:40:113 (4,1) - 可以放在一条直线上这个是一个blanket
02:48:113 (1) - 延长到前面的红线？这块remap了，美丽
03:07:805 (1) - 没叠齐还好。。吧
02:33:343 (1) - 包下1？ ^
03:10:266 (1) - ^ ^
03:11:497 (2) - ^…… ^
03:13:959 (3) - 这个和之前的2差了0.05= =，叠一下？好。。。
好萌哦-w-，废话有点多，实在找不出啥问题就狂艹包了XD
祝早日rank哦

kamisamaaa wrote:
from my queue~
[谷歌的easy]
00:47:497 (1,2) - 没包好 K
00:57:343 (1) - ctrl+G 更舒服 K
01:28:113 (2,3) - 这两个转一点角度做成这样漂亮些 K
01:42:420 (1) - 这样子超级难受啊感觉不如在白线开始呢就相当于这里跟鼓点感觉舒服得多如果要改最好前面那个滑条一起这里remap了
02:00:113 (1) - 建议ctrl+G 然后包02:01:343 (2) - 而不是之前那个换了一下
03:12:728 (1,2) - ctrl+G K

就这样吧~别忘了我的KD！！
昨天就写好了结果网断了。。到现在才好

Leorda wrote:
Hi there

[Troogle's Easy]
* Please map the beginning and last part, like Hard and Insane diff K

01:08:882 (2) - Short slider can confuse for beginner because they thought this is a 2 circle instead one slider. Consider to remove 01:08:574 (1,2) and replace it with slider just removed
01:27:805 - Feels empty without it. Add note here? K
01:56:420 (4) - Add new combo for following your combo pattern K
01:58:882 (6,1) - Swap new combo for following your combo pattern
02:15:036 (1,2) - Same issue as 01:08:882 (2) removed as well
02:48:113 (1,1) - Having 2 spinners in two row can confuse beginners because they thought that if complete the spinner, slider/circle will appear after the spinner. Consider to remove the first spinner and replace it with a circles and sliders sorry but I think 2 spinner is fine
03:01:805 (1,2) - Same issue as 01:08:882 (2) removed as well

Good luck~

Flower wrote:
m4m
[Easy]
00:05:651 (3) - 这是哪一年的滑条了……拉也给我拉漂亮点喂换了一种滑条
仅供参考
00:21:651 (2) - 加一个折返怎么样？不好加啊。。。
00:35:805 (1,2,3) - 这个跟normal一样也是莫名，我觉得干脆不要做这段，把00:22:882 - 00:32:728 - 这段做了赞同，已经remap
01:39:190 - 01:47:651 - 这段提议重做，又是白线又是红线的新手绝对只能乱点。改成整段跟大鼓的音，也就是24白线，会简易不少，何况他也是最强最明显的音轨赞同，已经remap,但是个人觉得这里人声更突出点
03:02:882 - 这边复制粘贴就不太好，这里是全曲最high的地方你用第二段弱不拉叽的氛围代入进去就一点让人体会不到打图的快感没有复制粘贴啊=。=这难度毕竟是easy要把持住嘛

That's as far I could help. Good luck~!

很抱歉回的这么慢><
谢谢mod~

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ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-04-08T11:43:55+00:00

[Lun]
00:33:959 (1,2) - make same
00:58:574 (1) - 360,244
01:15:959 (2,3) - swap
01:16:420 (5,6,7,8,9) - 弧度太大
01:29:036 (1,2) - 没flow
01:39:036 (1) - 1/2 shorter
02:49:420 (4,8) - del or move to 02:50:036 -
03:18:420 (6) - 没flow
03:19:190 (3,4) - ^
03:41:651 (3) - 加一个reverse
[Fycho]
我个人给与这张图高评价以及hyper的难度称谓,Nothing found:3
[Normal]
Call Hard then I needn't mod:3
有的地方舍得用1/2有的地方又不舍得用闹哪出！
[Troogle's Easy]
00:32:728 - break start
01:27:959 - slider start > 01:27:805 (2) - del
02:50:574 (1) - end 02:52:882 -

sjoy

1,025 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

sjoy 2014-04-10T03:54:15+00:00

[quote="ts8zs"][Lun]
00:33:959 (1,2) - make same 改了
00:58:574 (1) - 360,244 好
01:15:959 (2,3) - swap 不改了
01:16:420 (5,6,7,8,9) - 弧度太大我觉得还行
01:29:036 (1,2) - 没flow 还好
01:39:036 (1) - 1/2 shorter 感觉有点奇怪
02:49:420 (4,8) - del or move to 02:50:036 - 不改了
03:18:420 (6) - 没flow 还好
03:19:190 (3,4) - ^ 换地方了
03:41:651 (3) - 加一个reverse 就这样吧

[Normal]
Call Hard then I needn't mod:3
有的地方舍得用1/2有的地方又不舍得用闹哪出！为了控星。
谢摸

Nepu

211 posts

Joined September 2013

Nepu 2014-04-11T10:00:05+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
[Troogle's Easy]
00:32:728 - break start K
01:27:959 - slider start > 01:27:805 (2) - del
02:50:574 (1) - end 02:52:882 -K

Thx for mod

update

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192,252,128113,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,368,128728,6,0,P|107:339|78:288,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,172,129959,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,100,130574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,216,131190,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,131343,12,2,134882,0:0:0:0:
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300,192,137036,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,248,137343,2,0,P|272:287|214:299,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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104,172,139805,2,0,P|112:231|149:277,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,320,141036,6,0,L|316:352,2,59.9999999999999,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,276,141959,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,224,142266,2,0,P|287:176|342:153,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,272,143497,6,0,P|414:249|450:201,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
342,153,144728,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,164,145343,6,0,P|232:105|269:59,2,120,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,280,147190,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,200,147805,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,80,148420,6,0,L|76:56,2,59.9999999999999,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,48,149343,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,80,149651,2,0,P|293:66|350:84,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,188,150882,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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200,112,153343,6,0,P|247:75|306:69,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,188,154574,2,0,P|327:298|437:331,1,240,2|4,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
408,216,156420,1,2,0:1:0:0:
292,188,157036,6,0,P|284:129|247:83,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
172,176,158266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,216,158882,2,0,P|87:265|141:292,1,120,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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288,188,160728,5,4,0:0:0:0:
404,220,161343,2,0,P|376:272|325:303,1,120,2|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,288,162574,1,2,0:1:0:0:
168,176,163190,2,0,P|176:117|213:71,2,120,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,288,165036,1,2,0:1:0:0:
288,200,165651,6,0,P|336:166|361:112,2,120,6|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,176,167497,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,168113,12,0,170266,0:0:0:0:
256,192,170574,12,0,172882,0:0:0:0:
364,184,182882,5,6,0:0:0:0:
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232,184,185343,5,2,0:0:0:0:
120,140,185959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,20,186574,2,0,P|178:32|227:91,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,192,187805,5,0,0:0:0:0:
268,240,188113,2,0,L|304:296,2,59.9999999999999,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,244,189036,2,0,P|172:291|97:310,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,192,190266,6,0,P|108:133|164:80,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,188,191497,2,0,P|274:180|319:141,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,22,192728,5,2,0:0:0:0:
224,68,193343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,141,193959,2,0,P|311:200|255:253,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,148,195190,5,2,0:0:0:0:
152,112,195498,2,0,L|96:76,2,59.9999999999999,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,172,196421,2,0,P|101:208|82:283,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,284,197651,6,0,P|259:276|312:220,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,164,198882,2,0,P|216:105|272:52,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,156,200113,6,0,L|400:156,2,59.9999999999999,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,220,201343,2,0,L|180:264,1,59.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
208,316,201959,2,0,L|280:316,1,59.9999999999999,2|4,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
328,303,202574,6,0,P|377:271|400:216,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,188,203805,2,0,P|307:133|356:100,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,120,205036,1,2,0:0:0:0:
504,236,205651,2,0,P|478:289|427:319,2,120,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
388,203,207497,6,0,P|380:145|341:100,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,196,208728,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,292,209343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,192,209959,2,0,P|73:184|20:128,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,104,211036,2,0,L|144:52,2,59.9999999999999,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,164,212420,6,0,P|276:113|349:89,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,208,213651,2,0,P|323:258|250:282,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,308,214882,1,2,0:0:0:0:
72,216,215497,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,167,216113,2,0,P|191:109|230:64,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
304,160,217343,6,0,P|348:198|407:206,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,272,218574,2,0,P|467:315|391:327,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,324,219805,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,268,220420,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,152,221036,6,0,L|92:184,2,59.9999999999999,2|8|10,0:0|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
200,120,221959,1,6,2:0:0:0:

ly4236

24 posts

Joined May 2011

ly4236 2014-05-02T10:04:57+00:00

16:48 sjoy: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/135778 来试试我看看怎么改容易
16:49 ly4236: en
16:49 sjoy: 还是感觉有点难
16:54 ly4236: 。。。
16:54 ly4236: 我去看看。。貌似不是很难啊
16:54 sjoy: FC难度如何
16:54 ly4236: 感觉没你的特色了。。。
16:55 ly4236: 啊
16:55 sjoy: 哎别说这图有GD不能坑了
16:55 ly4236: 手感好2PC
16:55 ly4236: 有的太萌了。。
16:55 ly4236: bushiying
16:55 ly4236: 不适应
16:55 sjoy: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/170913 来试试劲爆的
16:56 ly4236: 看BPM就有点虚。
16:56 sjoy: 这个FC 牛B
16:56 ly4236: 对了。。。
16:56 ly4236: 我做了个半兽人
16:56 ly4236: 没做完
16:56 ly4236: 帮我随便看看咋样
17:00 ly4236: 手疼。。。
17:00 sjoy: 1发现个BUG
17:00 ly4236: 上218就打不过了
17:00 ly4236: ？
17:00 ly4236: bug？
17:00 sjoy: 对少了一个物件
17:00 sjoy: 等下
17:01 ly4236: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/166704
17:01 ly4236: 帮我看看这图，凑合能看了么。。。
17:02 ly4236: 这图是218BPM么。。
17:02 ly4236: 感觉有点轻松啊。。打折
17:02 ly4236: 打着
17:02 sjoy: 就是要松
17:03 sjoy: 更新好了
17:03 ly4236: 嗯
17:06 ly4236: 手速欠一筹
17:06 sjoy: 已经不算难了
17:06 ly4236: 而且打起来好累
17:07 sjoy: 对BPM高
17:07 sjoy: 节奏紧密
17:07 sjoy: 没BREAK
17:07 ly4236: 没break是关键。。
17:07 sjoy: 要BREAK也是3分钟以后
17:07 ly4236: 一点也不想OD8 啊
17:08 sjoy: 因为滑条多
17:09 ly4236: 有几个地方比较狗。。
17:09 ly4236: 还没改。
17:10 ly4236: 高潮最后
17:10 *ly4236 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/339959 ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Be Back ON! [Lunatic]]
17:10 sjoy: 我看看
17:10 ly4236: 我看看这个咋简单点
17:12 sjoy: 为何没GB
17:12 ly4236: 哪个？
17:12 ly4236: 我那个？
17:12 sjoy: 对阿
17:12 ly4236: 话说GB是啥
17:13 ly4236: 其他难度么
17:13 sjoy: BG
17:13 ly4236: 、、、、、
17:13 ly4236: 还没放。。。
17:13 ly4236: 在没网的状态下放的。。
17:13 ly4236: 做的
17:14 sjoy: 挺好的
17:14 ly4236: \o/
17:14 ly4236: 有个音效该删了也忘了删。。。
17:14 ly4236: 做完了试试看能不能RANK 。。。
17:15 sjoy: 至少3个
17:15 sjoy: 难度
17:15 ly4236: 嗯
17:15 sjoy: 有个人很喜欢周杰伦
17:15 sjoy: 你可以找他要简单难度来着
17:15 ly4236: banana？
17:16 sjoy: https://osu.ppy.sh/u/2554967
17:17 ly4236: OK
17:17 ly4236: 不过我还是先做完吧。。。
17:18 sjoy: 需要帮你找音效么
17:18 ly4236: 01:10:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
17:18 ly4236: 这种梗貌似很简单啊
17:18 ly4236: /w\
17:18 ly4236: 有什么推荐的么
17:18 sjoy: 有CLAP
17:18 sjoy: 和WHIS
17:19 ly4236: 刚开始那间距小店？
17:19 ly4236: 点
17:20 sjoy: 好
17:20 ly4236: 行，求个连接/w\
17:23 ly4236: 00:52:420 (1) -
17:23 ly4236: 这个往后的间距改成普遍1.0?
17:24 sjoy: 1.4
17:24 sjoy: 这里减速了
17:26 ly4236: 00:57:805 (2) - 这个向右移？
17:26 ly4236: 1包起来他？
17:26 sjoy: 感觉挺别扭的
17:27 ly4236: 00:52:420 (1,2,3) - 同样的音，你前面没有这么跳。。。
17:27 sjoy: 改小了
17:28 ly4236: 01:07:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 这个本身没有这个音吧
17:29 sjoy: 是没音
17:29 sjoy: 感觉还行
17:29 sjoy: 就9下
17:30 ly4236: 前面已经单戳了16下了。。。
17:30 ly4236: 这肯定是难点啊
17:30 sjoy: 01:52:113 (6,7,8,9,1,2) - 00:45:651 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3) -
17:30 sjoy: 这个会不会难
17:30 sjoy: 我自己打的时候感觉有点难
17:32 ly4236: 怎么说呢。。。和竹取那个三角差不多一个难度吧。。。
17:32 ly4236: 01:53:036 (3) -
17:32 ly4236: 大概是这个比较难
17:32 sjoy: 我感觉这图和竹取飞翔一个级别难度了。。
17:33 sjoy: 就是串少了点
17:33 sjoy: 其他都差不多了
17:33 ly4236: 。。。。
17:33 ly4236: 比竹取简单很多。。。
17:33 ly4236: 从FC上来将
17:33 ly4236: 没有大跳
17:34 ly4236: ·我操。。
17:34 ly4236: 这个梗我看错了。。
17:34 ly4236: 不行。。
17:35 ly4236: 这个有点难受。
17:35 sjoy: 哪个
17:35 ly4236: 你说的那个
17:35 ly4236: 小三角变大三角
17:36 sjoy: 间距继续缩小号了
17:42 ly4236: 03:30:882 (5,1,1,1,1,2,1,2,3) -
17:42 ly4236: 这块MISS了。。
17:42 ly4236: 具体哪忘了
17:45 ly4236: 03:31:959 (1,2,1) -
17:46 ly4236: 我的那时候大的感觉是间距应该在大点。。
17:47 ly4236: 03:40:420 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - 这个虽然不会错。。。但是会吓出冷汗大概。
17:48 sjoy: 恩改了
17:48 sjoy: 感觉你可以骗KD
17:48 ly4236: 我还是感觉安静的地方可以间距小一些。。。
17:48 sjoy: '/savelog' POST
17:48 ly4236: KD是啥。
17:48 sjoy: 好
17:49 ly4236: 这个是干啥de
17:49 ly4236: 这个命令
17:49 sjoy: 存聊天记录
17:49 ly4236: 存到哪啊。。。
17:51 sjoy: OSU文件下
17:51 sjoy: 有个CHAT文件
17:51 sjoy: TXT文本保持
17:51 sjoy: 不出意外一周内能泡
17:51 sjoy: 我就想再善良点
17:51 sjoy: 哎我还是做纯音乐合适
17:52 ly4236: 。。
17:53 ly4236: 感觉这种就是美观美观萌。。。
17:53 ly4236: 夸张了不好
17:54 sjoy: 我也这么觉得
17:54 sjoy: 为什么会195呢
17:57 ly4236: 聊天记录保存到哪了。。。
17:58 sjoy: CHART
17:58 sjoy: 文件
17:58 ly4236: 没有啊。。

总之。。。。

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2014-05-18T05:17:35+00:00

ok lets see

[General]
delete the osb if you are not making a storyboard

[Troogle's Easy]
00:31:497 (1) - lower it a bit to fix the blanket
00:47:497 (1,2,3,4) - this combo looks and plays a bit confusing, 00:47:497 (1,2) - make a better blanket here and 00:48:574 (2,3) - give these more room:

SPOILER

01:53:959 (1,2,3) - similar problem as 00:47:497 (1,2,3,4), make a better blanket and have 01:56:113 (3) stack under the start of 01:53:959 (1)
01:57:497 (2) - this slider...was the shape intentional?
02:00:113 (1) - NC here is a bit messed; remove NC on this
02:01:343 (2) - add
02:03:190 (1) - remove
02:04:420 (2) - add
02:05:036 (1) - and remove
02:40:113 (4) - missing normal whistle
03:00:266 - snap the break here
03:21:343 (2) - i feel that the rhythm plays better if you moved it to 03:21:036, up to you
pay attention to your blankets when you switch from white line to red line rhythms, most of them don't look very well

[Normal]
00:31:497 (3) - clap on end
00:35:190 (1,2) - this may cause some reading confusing for some newbies, try something like this:

SPOILER

00:44:266 (3,1) - the blanket
01:14:420 - you might want to add a note here, since you have been following vocals (or start the next slider here)
01:44:113 (1,2) - forgot claps
02:29:343 (4) - shorten the slider to 02:29:497 or use a 1/2 repeat slider to cover the vocals at 02:29:497
02:38:882 (2) - clap here
02:41:036 (1) - ^
02:49:343 (4,5) - i think having these parallel gives a better effect:

SPOILER

03:01:805 - start mapping here? thats what you did with previous sections
03:07:651 - same as 01:14:420
03:35:343 (4) - clap on end
there are some sections with missing claps dunno if it was intentional

[Fycho's Hard]
00:22:574 (1) - silence the end on this?
00:53:651 (1) - oh god the slight overlaps are very annoying to look at, try adjusting this section with 1.2x spacing? applies to later sections as well
01:48:574 (1,2,3) - this is a bit OP for a hard diff, either swap 01:48:728 (2,3) - for a repeat slider, or swap 01:48:266 (3) for a circle so 01:48:574 (1) is easier to initiate
02:08:420 (4) - i think you forgot a NC here (refer to 01:01:959 (1))
03:22:190 - add a note here? the "nyan" actually begins here so you can cover for that
03:37:343 (1) - missing a finish

[Lunatic]
i played it again and got 1 miss fffffffffffffffff
00:17:036 (2) - missing clap; same goes to 00:19:497 (2)
00:26:113 (6) - clap on repeat
01:00:420 (3) - i think curving this downwards gives a better flow
01:04:728 (1,2,3,4) - why not a perfect square xD
02:02:266 (3,4,5) - missing a whistle somewhere here
02:22:574 (3,4,5) - the angle of this jump is not very comfortabke to play, a solution would be to make 02:22:882 (5,6,7,8,9) - a stream that curves upwards
03:02:113 (2) - move this a bit further from 03:01:805 (1), its tempting to read it as 1/2 spacing
03:04:805 (5,6,7,8) - you probably curve this more upwards to improve flow
03:40:882 (1) - oh no...this slider changes speed in the middle so by current ranking criteria its unrankable, you can try something like this instead:

SPOILER

ok let me know afterwards

sjoy

1,025 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

sjoy 2014-05-18T06:54:02+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
ok lets see

[General]
delete the osb if you are not making a storyboard deleted

[Normal]
00:31:497 (3) - clap on end added
00:35:190 (1,2) - this may cause some reading confusing for some newbies, try something like this:
SPOILER
good idea
00:44:266 (3,1) - the blanket fixed
01:14:420 - you might want to add a note here, since you have been following vocals (or start the next slider here)ok,changed
01:44:113 (1,2) - forgot claps fixed
02:29:343 (4) - shorten the slider to 02:29:497 or use a 1/2 repeat slider to cover the vocals at 02:29:497fine for me
02:38:882 (2) - clap here ok
02:41:036 (1) - ^ ok
02:49:343 (4,5) - i think having these parallel gives a better effect:
SPOILER
ok
03:01:805 - start mapping here? thats what you did with previous sections ok
03:07:651 - same as 01:14:420changed
03:35:343 (4) - clap on end fixed
there are some sections with missing claps dunno if it was intentional I'm so careless
[Lunatic]
i played it again and got 1 miss fffffffffffffffff
00:17:036 (2) - missing clap; same goes to 00:19:497 (2)fixed
00:26:113 (6) - clap on repeatok
01:00:420 (3) - i think curving this downwards gives a better flow changed
01:04:728 (1,2,3,4) - why not a perfect square xD
02:02:266 (3,4,5) - missing a whistle somewhere here fixed
02:22:574 (3,4,5) - the angle of this jump is not very comfortabke to play, a solution would be to make 02:22:882 (5,6,7,8,9) - a stream that curves upwards changed this part
03:02:113 (2) - move this a bit further from 03:01:805 (1), its tempting to read it as 1/2 spacing ok
03:04:805 (5,6,7,8) - you probably curve this more upwards to improve flow changed this part
03:40:882 (1) - oh no...this slider changes speed in the middle so by current ranking criteria its unrankable, you can try something like this instead:
SPOILER

changed.my poor slider skill
ok let me know afterwards

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