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Starving Trancer feat. Maki - Give a Reason (Trance Remix)

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WyndII
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WyndII
[mod]

[Easy]
00:20:001 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this section's pattern is messy, rearrange?
00:28:348 - + note
00:28:765 - add note
00:29:181 - ^
00:41:068 (1,2) - add whistle
01:28:034 (3) - recheck spacing also since editor is... u know. just copy the time and look at the timeline then try to click the note in that timeline then click on the slider, it will snap or something.
01:29:181 (4) - recheck spacing ^
01:35:084 (4,1,2,3,4) - messy
02:17:098 - this section is so boring, add notes please.
03:02:931 - remove timeline section thing.

[Hard]
Beginning of this map is messy.
01:31:047 (6,7) - omg look at your spacing here
03:02:030 (7) - spacing
00:44:080 (5) - ^
01:13:034 (2) - finish
01:16:068 (2) - ^
01:20:001 (2) - ^
03:02:931 - remove kiai timing section.
Do a Timing => resnap all notes.

[Al2e' Dif]
00:27:306 remove break
00:28:348 - 00:41:056 whistles on this section is random. try doing a pattern
00:59:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - stream feels not so complete. try adding two notes at the end of stream without changing the spacing with the next combo ;)
01:13:034 (4) - new combo
01:14:049 (1) - remove new combo
nice~

[Insane]
Do a Timing => resnap all notes.
02:42:093 (3) - check spacing
00:13:348 - increase volume
no other probs found~

Give a reason why i should star this :D
aesopl19193
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aesopl19193
Thanks !
(also waiting for al2e to mod his diff)
aesopl19193
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jericho2442
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jericho2442
ok soft modding is go

[Easy]
first off just to let you kno for if you want, theres is alot of small problems in spacing and lining up notes within each combo, i guess its classed as nazi'ng so insted of being mean i thought id just let you kno that they are there for if you wanna fix them

the following mods are thing i think really need sorting out
00:33:034 (1,2) - the way these 2 sliders cross each other at the end looks ugly, try to map these a bit better
01:33:034 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - the placing of these notes could be much better
03:02:093 - get rid of this kai time

[Hard]
ok again in this there is some lining up probs,best to go through the map and fix any small things you find, once you have ppl will find the map more fun to play

00:43:055 (2,3) - the way the end of these 2 sliders join is ugly
02:15:001 (1,2) - the way these join looks ugly too
02:46:005 (11) - this not i have to point out, the way its lined up is horrid, please fix it, theres a few more like this too

[Al2e' Diff]

01:02:009 (6) - ew instantly saw this and its horrid, make it so its not overlapped as much by the slider before
02:50:000 - end kai time

under soft modding this is a pretty solid map, nice job :)

[Insane]
00:52:009 (1,2) - eww bad placing
01:40:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this rythem could be done much better, the first half timing if fine but the second half feels bad, this really needs fixing to make the map fun, once you have fixed it here, also fix the rest of the song what uses this same rythem which is upto 01:52:093 -
02:15:043 (1,2) - ugly again

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you still have a fair way to go untill its rankable but its a nice map, anyway thats soft modding done, if you ever want it hard modded just post in my topic again, but please wait till this is a lil ferther on before you do ;)

will star once you have applied the changes what need to be :)
aesopl19193
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aesopl19193
Thanks for you mod ^^

Almost mods are fixed , but i still want some comment from you =],
also there is something i don't undestand what's you means and how can i improve it:

01:40:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this rythem could be done much better, the first half timing if fine but the second half feels bad, this really needs fixing to make the map fun, once you have fixed it here, also fix the rest of the song what uses this same rythem which is upto 01:52:093 -
jericho2442
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jericho2442

aesopl19193 wrote:

01:40:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this rythem could be done much better, the first half timing if fine but the second half feels bad, this really needs fixing to make the map fun, once you have fixed it here, also fix the rest of the song what uses this same rythem which is upto 01:52:093 -
the first part of the combo follows the lead keyboard, but then by the end you are kinda creating your own line with it, this does not sound as good as maybe following the keyboard line fully at that point is what i mean ;)

also i'll star now :)
aesopl19193
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aesopl19193
Thanks !

It is fixed ~
Diasios
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Diasios
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Easy]

It's ok

[Hard]

It's ok

[Al2e's diff]

It's ok

[Insane]

I love it *w*

Nice song and nice map, grats <3
Starred~
Takuma
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Takuma
The title bothers me. D: If it's okay, i'd like you to rename to "Give A Reason (Remix)", exactly like that.

Insane:
03:02:827 ~ kiai time doesn't fit imo.

Al2e' difficulty:
01:14:181 (3,4) - Eh, spacing is inconsistent.
01:20:848 (3,4) - ^
02:31:994 (6) - Move this away from (5).
02:33:973 ~ I don't really understand why you made this volume change; please remove.

Anyway, while I do think this mapset is great, please add more breaks next time! Players also need a rest. :P
aesopl19193
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al2e10
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al2e10
My Dif.s

Take it ~~~

Download: EXIT TRANCE - Give A Reason(remix) (aesopl19193) [Al2e' Dif].osu
aesopl19193
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aesopl19193

al2e10 wrote:

My Dif.s

Take it ~~~
updated =]
wmfchris
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wmfchris
played, nice.
maybe after I have a cup of tea I can try to mod this (but it's no doubt that it's already nearly flawness :D)

star!
aesopl19193
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aesopl19193

wmfchris wrote:

played, nice.
maybe after I have a cup of tea I can try to mod this (but it's no doubt that it's already nearly flawness :D)

star!
Thanks for your star~ =]
wmfchris
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wmfchris
[insane]
nothing wrong, but Auto plays 16m.
Is it supposed to be approved, or you can turn down the difficulty?
(I really have no relavent experience about this)

al's diff:
trust on al =]

in taiko mode:
comfortable fc in 1 play, well done lol
aesopl19193
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Leorda
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Leorda
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aesopl19193
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aesopl19193

Leorda wrote:

[Easy]
00:09:181 (4) - Replace with slider (make a slider to white tick)
4 same slider i think is too boring ..

But, Thanks for your star~
Essien_old
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Essien_old
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aesopl19193
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aesopl19193

Essien wrote:

Hard:
01:22:723 (11, 1): Move a grid up.

fixed

01:31:681 (7): Move a grid down to align with 6

no

Insane:
00:16:056 (7-9): Move a grid to the left to align.

fixed

00:44:885 (7): Move a grid to the left.

Is that move it to right ?=] fixed
royathrun
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royathrun
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Kitty McWittles
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Kitty McWittles
[Easy]
01:20:001 (1) - Clap on 3rd repeat and end?
01:22:009 (2) - Clap on end? (maybe start too?)
01:58:034 (1) - Shorten by 1 repeat, add claps on 2nd repeat and end
01:59:059 (2) - Add, with a finish

[Hard]
Raise hitsound volume to ~70%
Seems a little whistle spammy at times, maybe go back and tone down your whistle sliders a little?

[Al2e]
Fine

[Insane]
Fine, though you should end your last kiai
Minor gripe: I hate the tiny circles, but it IS insane, so... I'll shutup now

Nice, have a star~
Tanmak
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Tanmak
Hello~~

[Easy]
02:25:431 (2) 1 grid up?

[Hard]
00:38:556 (1) Whistle?
00:43:556 (2,3,4) ^
01:46:056 (11) New combo?
01:52:306 (10) Arrange whistle start part and end part only.
03:00:015 (2) Re-whistle?

[Al2e's Dif]
00:40:015 (1,2) Move (1) 1 gird left and (2) 1 grid up.
01:33:765 (3,4) Make like this picture. And re-spacing. (With set snap divisor 1/6)

02:46:473 (1,2,3) Stack.

[Insane]
Ohhhhh...circle size is small....>_<
00:43:556 (1) 1 grid down.

Great song~!
Starred.
aesopl19193
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aesopl19193

Samurai_X wrote:

[Easy]
01:20:001 (1) - Clap on 3rd repeat and end?
01:22:009 (2) - Cla ....
All fixed =]

Tanmak wrote:

Hello~~

[Easy]
02:25:431 (2) 1 grid u.........
All fixed , but i am waiting for al2e to mod his diff~=]
Teara
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Teara
Nothing wrong~
al2e10
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al2e10
Fixed the problem already ~

Download: EXIT TRANCE - Give A Reason(remix) (aesopl19193) [Al2e' Dif].osu
aesopl19193
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aesopl19193
Updated ^^
Hikato
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aesopl19193
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aesopl19193

Hikato wrote:

[Easy]
1:18:034 (3) - align with 1?

[Hard]
00:58:014 (5) - align with 4

[Al2e' Dif]
Nothing.

[Insane]
01:31:047 (6) - alignment
01:32:093 (1,2,3) - looks weird but not quite sure how to explain it.. feel free to ignore.
01:40:001 (1) to 01:52:030 (13) - This entire section feels horrible to me ^_^
01:54:059 (5) - alignment
02:40:095 (8) - clap makes it sound horrible remove it imo.
02:44:091 (2) - alignment
02:56:026 (1,2,3) - another that looks weird but not quite sure how to explain it.. feel free to ignore.

End the Kiai if you've finished mapping.

All suggestions, up to you of course if you decide to change anything.
Star.
Fixed ~
Starrodkirby86
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Yo~

The song name you given is fine since there's really a lack of information on what it is on my end. XD I seem to have found "Give a Reason (Trance Remix)". What do you think? If you're changing it, then make sure it's a full submission. If you see an empty description box when resubmitting, cancel! It's going to end up as a duplicate. :X

Maybe add Slayers and Megumi Hayashibara in Tags?

All difficulties are fine, but I'm very unsure of [Insane]. >A<;;; What am I so wishy washy about? The max score. It's 16 million. I'm not sure what you can do with that. There's also a lack of breaks, but oh well.

Mmh, still. Tell me what you think~
aesopl19193
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aesopl19193

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Yo~

The song name you given is fine since there's really a lack of information on what it is on my end. XD I seem to have found "Give a Reason (Trance Remix)". What do you think? If you're changing it, then make sure it's a full submission. If you see an empty description box when resubmitting, cancel! It's going to end up as a duplicate. :X

Maybe add Slayers and Megumi Hayashibara in Tags?

All difficulties are fine, but I'm very unsure of [Insane]. >A<;;; What am I so wishy washy about? The max score. It's 16 million. I'm not sure what you can do with that. There's also a lack of breaks, but oh well.

Mmh, still. Tell me what you think~
OK~ I changed the title =]

normally ,what is the max score of insane?
Or should i cancel all note at 01:40:015~01:52:515 and replace these by a break ?/_\( 13m score ...)
Or only the insane be approved , and the other be ranked?~"~
Starrodkirby86
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Once it's around 13-16mil, you're around an area of controversy. Insane difficulties' scores vary depending on how much is mapped, but it's usually 2-11mil (I guess).

You can always chop off that bit since the map is hard for 13mil, but I don't know if you are reluctant to do that.

Insane /can/ be approved while the others are ranked, but you have to remove Insane here, create a new map with only the Insane difficulty, and submit that as well (Much like Hito's Tsurupettan).
aesopl19193
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bmin11
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What should I say....... Very enjoyable map to play :)
Hopefully will be ranked soon I guess
Sure
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Sure
[General]
Add tag guest name who made a diff at all diffs.


[Easy]
01:38:765 - add note at here?


[Hard]
00:26:026 (1) - Start at 00:26:681 is more fit IMO.


[Al2e]
I think this diff may get more score than Hard. But no problem to be ranked.
00:54:018 (5) - 1 grid down?
02:04:018 (5,6) - 1 grid right?
02:21:068 (5) - new combo


I like this song from old times. Good luck :D
aesopl19193
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Hanyuu
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i dont know why you removed insane it is very fun :?

here in my attachent the old insane version for everyone who want to play it

Download: EXIT TRANCE - Give A Reason(remix) (aesopl19193) [Insane].osu
aesopl19193
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Hanyuu wrote:

i dont know why you removed insane it is very fun :?

here in my attachent the old insane version for everyone who want to play it
should i re-add it into the beatmap?
but there are someone said that the insane maybe cannot be ranked since it have 16m score ..
al2e10
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al2e10
Fixed up some problem ^^

Download: EXIT TRANCE - Give a Reason (Trance Remix) (aesopl19193) [Al2e' Dif].osu
Yes_old
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Yes_old
i think the song is
Artist: MAKI
Song name: Give A Reason (Slayers Next)

that's what i found at least :/
EXIT TRANCE is just the people who compile the trance songs together
aesopl19193
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Yes wrote:

i think the song is
Artist: MAKI
Song name: Give A Reason (Slayers Next)

that's what i found at least :/
EXIT TRANCE is just the people who compile the trance songs together
Oh, I get your question,
I changed the Artist Name to Starving trancer feat. Maki
But I am not willing to change it to (Slayers Next) because it just state the name of anime of this song belong to .=]
James
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James
EXIT TUNES/TRANCE FTW
aesopl19193
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aesopl19193

James wrote:

EXIT TUNES/TRANCE FTW

sorry ...I don't know what you are saying /_\
James
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Yes_old
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Yes_old
Maybe capitalize to Strarving Trancer, too. >O<
aesopl19193
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aesopl19193

Yes wrote:

Maybe capitalize to Strarving Trancer, too. >O<
Changed =]
Breeze
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o.o秀逗魔导士
为什么不是林原惠的版本>A<
aesopl19193
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aesopl19193

Breeze wrote:

o.o秀逗魔导士
为什么不是林原惠的版本>A<
那版本已經有人做啦~
雖然好像還未RANKED..
Starrodkirby86
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Awesome, awesome.
Furawa
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:P wow bubbled
whymeman
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whymeman
Sorry to do this, but you have two .osb files in the song folder. Also, you could make the Tags the same for all difficulties and don't forget to add the person in the collab into the Tags as well. Look into fixing that then i'll bubble.
aesopl19193
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aesopl19193

whymeman wrote:

Sorry to do this, but you have two .osb files in the song folder. Also, you could make the Tags the same for all difficulties and don't forget to add the person in the collab into the Tags as well. Look into fixing that then i'll bubble.
Fixed =] Thanks~
whymeman
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Alright then.
Andrea
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Popped for a spacing error.

[Insane]

02:41:057 (9,1) - This spacing is too far. Remember you have to adjust all the next spacing too.

Fix and I'll bubble this again.

It was only a little error, so congratulations on getting your first map Ranked!~
Furawa
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:P great
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