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Starving Trancer feat. Maki - Give a Reason (Trance Remix)

posted 2009-10-05T16:04:01+00:00

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Kytoxid

osu! Alumni

Joined April 2009

Kytoxid 2009-10-27T01:53:41+00:00

[Easy]

00:12:51 (1) - This spinner might be a bit tough for Easy.
00:23:34 (5,10) - New combo?
00:51:67 (5) - ^
00:57:51 (2,1) - Very difficult jump for Easy.
01:33:34 (1,2,3) - Move this around to make a nice triangle?
01:36:67 (5) - New combo?
02:38:34 (1,2,3) - Might be a slightly difficult pattern for Easy.

[Hard]

00:43:97 (3) - Move this to finish on the same spot as 2?
00:58:34 (1,2,3) - Spacing's a bit weird.
01:53:76 (2) - Move it one grid right?
01:54:80 (5,1,2,3) - This could be arranged into a cool diamond.
02:08:13 (5,1) - Spacing.
02:22:51 (3) - Down 1 grid?

[Insane]

00:18:97 (1) - Unrankable spinner; too short. Extend it by at least 1/4, preferably 1/2.
00:25:01 (5) - 1 less repeat?
00:52:09 (6,7) - Stack endpoints?
00:53:76 (1,3) - Make it symmetrical?
02:05:84 (6,7,8,1,2) - Make 6-7-8 into a triangle, and then avoid covering up the 1-2 that's upcoming.

Cool song though. Starred.

aesopl19193

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

aesopl19193 2009-10-27T11:54:40+00:00

DJPop wrote:
You used me really worth ;___;

Red text = must fix.

~Easy~
00:08:34 (1) - remove new combo
00:10:01 (1) - move down 1 grid
00:11:67 (3) - move left 1 grid
............

+Star

Sorry for using you worth ._." (?)

Thanks! =]

loading127

Joined March 2009

loading127 2009-10-27T12:12:32+00:00

gooood

Lokamp

Joined January 2009

Lokamp 2009-10-28T21:05:10+00:00

Easy
00:11:67 (spinner) - end it with finish
00:23:34 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - finish the 6th beat, clap the 4th and 5th, whistle the others
01:13:34 (1,2) - whistle these sliders (and leave clap on the 2nd slider's end)
01:16:67 (1,2) - whistle here
01:23:34 (1,2,3,4) - finish 1st and 2nd beats, clap the 3rd and the slider's start and end
01:26:67 (1,2,3) - end these sliders with a whistle
02:10:42 (1,3) - whistle here

Hard
01:23:55 (2,4) - end these sliders with a clap
02:46:88 (2,4) - ^

Insane
Nothin'wrong!

A star for this good map ^^

aesopl19193

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

aesopl19193 2009-10-28T23:13:41+00:00

done =]

Zekira

Joined September 2008

Zekira 2009-10-31T13:38:09+00:00

Offset: 15

That's it for now.

aesopl19193

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

aesopl19193 2009-10-31T17:24:51+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Lissette

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Joined July 2008

Lissette 2009-10-31T19:29:40+00:00

Hi!

Easy
02:34:59 (4) - move one beat later, end point at 02:35:84, and......
02:34:59 - add note

Hard
Place a spinner somewhere to variety score ^^

Insane
This are just suggestions, that I think would sound better ^^
00:42:51 (6) - new combo? maybe in jump >=)
00:55:84 (7) - same
01:40:22 - add note
01:40:64 - ^
01:41:16 - ^
01:41:78 - ^
01:42:09 - ^
01:42:20 - ^
01:42:72 - ^
Same to the others parts like this, you don't have to change it, but this is the way i would put it ^^
03:02:82 - add note?

Al2e' Dif
Nice Diff.
Suggestion
00:56:89 (3) - remove, and start the next slider here, end point of the slider at 00:57:09 and repeat slider, then......
00:57:51 - add note, then......
00:57:61 - add note, and.......
00:57:72 (6) - end point at 00:57:93 and repeat slider

Nice map, nice song....
Have a Star!

aesopl19193

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

aesopl19193 2009-11-01T01:26:15+00:00

Lissette wrote:
Hi!

Easy
02:34:59 (4) - move one beat later, end point at 02:35:84, and......
02:34:59 - add note

Hard
Place a spinner somewhere to variety score ^^

Insane
This are just suggestions, that I think would sound better ^^
00:42:51 (6) - new combo? maybe in jump >=)
00:55:84 (7) - same
01:40:22 - add note
01:40:64 - ^
01:41:16 - ^
01:41:78 - ^
01:42:09 - ^
01:42:20 - ^
01:42:72 - ^
Same to the others parts like this, you don't have to change it, but this is the way i would put it ^^
03:02:82 - add note?

Al2e' Dif
Nice Diff.
Suggestion
00:56:89 (3) - remove, and start the next slider here, end point of the slider at 00:57:09 and repeat slider, then......
00:57:51 - add note, then......
00:57:61 - add note, and.......
00:57:72 (6) - end point at 00:57:93 and repeat slider

Nice map, nice song....
Have a Star!

Thanks! but for ale's dif, i have to ask him =]

al2e10

Joined August 2008

al2e10 2009-11-02T10:46:22+00:00

Change ^^

Download: EXIT TRANCE - Give A Reason(remix) (aesopl19193) [Al2e' Dif].osu

aesopl19193

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

aesopl19193 2009-11-02T10:49:31+00:00

al2e10 wrote:
Change ^^

done ^^

kino77

Joined March 2009

kino77 2009-11-03T07:35:38+00:00

抱歉mod图晚了...
作为新mapper来说很八错的图~

背景图片上女生的头没有完全露出来,看起来很奇怪,把尺寸调节一下吧~
把Easy,Normal和Insane的note color换成和Al2e's Dif一样的?默认的有点丑- -

[Easy]
Fine~

[Hard]
00:13:56(2)-向后移到蓝tick处,像01:50:33处,其他的2也是同样的处理方式?

[AL2e's Dif]
01:14:39(1)-Slider 从01:14:49开始?
01:17:93(4)-移动到01:17:83?
01:21:06(4)-Slider 从01:21:16开始?
01:34:39(4)-Slider 从01:34:49开始?
01:35:33(x)-增加一个note?
02:45:33(x)-^

[Insane]
00:23:35(1)-延长至00:23:66?
00:54:81(3,4)-Spacing?
00:55:85(6,7)-^

Star~

aesopl19193

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

aesopl19193 2009-11-03T08:49:39+00:00

不介意啦^^" 我倒很感謝你幫我MOD呢

kino77 wrote:
背景图片上女生的头没有完全露出来,看起来很奇怪,把尺寸调节一下吧~
把Easy,Normal和Insane的note color换成和Al2e's Dif一样的?默认的有点丑- -

原圖已經是這樣了 (汗...
我應該找過第二張圖嗎? 要是CG內的人物無關也可以嗎?

kino77 wrote:
[Hard]
00:13:56(2)-向后移到蓝tick处,像01:50:33处,其他的2也是同样的处理方式?

之前我也想過這個問題~
我覺得現在這樣排的節奏感比較強..

kino77 wrote:
[AL2e's Dif]
01:14:39(1)-Slider 从01:14:49开始?
01:17:93(4)-移动到01:17:83?
01:21:06(4)-Slider 从01:21:16开始?
01:34:39(4)-Slider 从01:34:49开始?
01:35:33(x)-增加一个note?
02:45:33(x)-^

這個等 al2e @@"

kino77 wrote:
[Insane]
00:23:35(1)-延长至00:23:66?
00:54:81(3,4)-Spacing?
00:55:85(6,7)-^

Star~

改了, 至於 00:55:85(6,7)-^ 這裡我是想放一個jump的

al2e10

Joined August 2008

al2e10 2009-11-04T10:58:31+00:00

kino77 wrote:
[AL2e's Dif]

01:14:39(1)-Slider 从01:14:49开始? 是
01:17:93(4)-移动到01:17:83? 不

01:21:06(4)-Slider 从01:21:16开始? 是
01:34:39(4)-Slider 从01:34:49开始? 是
01:35:33(x)-增加一个note? 不
02:45:33(x)-^ 不

Download: EXIT TRANCE - Give A Reason(remix) (aesopl19193) [Al2e' Dif].osu

aesopl19193

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

aesopl19193 2009-11-04T11:25:09+00:00

al2e10 wrote:
kino77 wrote:
[AL2e's Dif]

01:14:39(1)-Slider 从01:14:49开始? 是
01:17:93(4)-移动到01:17:83? 不

01:21:06(4)-Slider 从01:21:16开始? 是
01:34:39(4)-Slider 从01:34:49开始? 是
01:35:33(x)-增加一个note? 不
02:45:33(x)-^ 不

已改 ^_^

kino77

Joined March 2009

kino77 2009-11-05T07:49:01+00:00

aesopl19193 wrote:
原圖已經是這樣了 (汗...
我應該找過第二張圖嗎? 要是CG內的人物無關也可以嗎?

试下这个呢~?

aesopl19193

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

aesopl19193 2009-11-05T08:35:51+00:00

kino77 wrote:
aesopl19193 wrote:
原圖已經是這樣了 (汗...
我應該找過第二張圖嗎? 要是CG內的人物無關也可以嗎?
试下这个呢~?

我轉用了你的圖片了~

不過看起來好像差不多..?

Armin

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Joined May 2009

Armin 2009-11-05T17:24:21+00:00

The map is nicely made. I don't see problems of spacing/timing/mapping. It should be bubbled. D:

[Easy]

00:30:015 Finish
00:33:348 Finish at the start
00:36:681 Finish
00:41:681 Finish
00:42:515 Whistle at the start+ finish. Also add a finish at the end
00:50:431 (2,4,2) Add claps
00:55:848 (x) Add a hitcircle
00:56:681 Add also a finish
00:57:515 (2,3,1,2) Whistles at the start
00:20:848 (2,4) Claps
00:23:765 Clap
00:52:098 Whistle
01:04:181 (1,3) Whistles
01:30:015 Whistle on the second, fourt, sixth repeat; finish at the end
01:53:348 Finish
01:56:681 ^
02:04:181 Clap
02:06:681 Finish+whistle at the start
02:08:348 Whistle at the start
02:12:098 Whistle
02:13:765 Whistle at the start
02:16:265 (x) add a hitcircle
02:23:348 Finish
02:26:681 ^
02:27:515 Clap
02:30:015 Finish
02:33:348 ^
02:36:681 ^
02:37:515 Clap
02:41:681 remove the clap at the start and at the end, add a clap on the repeat instead
02:43:348 Finish
02:46:681 Finish at the end

[Hard]

00:20:015 Clap
00:21:682 ^
00:23:348 ^
00:24:181 ^
00:25:015 ^
00:25:327 Whistle
00:26:265 Finish
00:35:015 Remove the whistle in the middle; add another whistle at the start
00:36:056 Clap
00:37:931 ^
00:41:681 (1,3) Whistles
00:42:306 Clap
00:42:515 Align with (3)
00:44:388 Unsnapped hitcircle
00:51:264 Clap
00:53:139 to 00:55:848 add hitsounds
01:19:183 Unsnapped hitcircle
01:25:015 Finish+whistle at the start
01:44:808 Unsnapped hitcircle
01:50:848 Clap
01:54:388 Unsnapped hitcircle
01:58:348 Remove the whistle in the middle; add another whistle at the start
Use the same hitsounds suggestion at the start.

[Al2e' Dif]

Maybe it should be renamed in Al2e's Diff XD

00:35:015 Whistle at the start
00:43:765 (1,2) Whistles at the start
01:10:223 Whistle or finish
01:23:765 Whistle
01:24:181 Whistle or clap
01:58:348 Whistle
02:01:681 ^
02:03:348 ^
02:23:348 (1,2) Whistles
02:30:015 (1,2) Whistles
02:31:890 1/4 later, also reduce the slider of 1/4
02:35:848 Whistle at the end
02:37:098 (1,2) Whistles
02:37:827 1/4 Later, remove the repeat
02:38:348 (x) Add a hitcircle
02:46:681 Whistle
02:49:181 Finish

[Insane]

01:09:390 Make a straigh line as 01:08:556 (2,3,4)

For the hitsounds: Use the same suggestions in [Hard], even if I think the map don't need other hitsounds this time.

Well, starred. I liked so much Al2e' Difficulty.

yaya

osu! Alumni

Joined November 2008

yaya 2009-11-05T19:25:16+00:00

Insane
00:42:051 (6) - new combo.becuz it's a jump.
00:55:084 (7) - ^
没什么错误，但是打起来有点无聊，始终同样的节奏，同样的下note法

al2e
我没看

hard
00:14:018 (4,5) 和 00:15:001 (7,8,9) 的间距是一样的么？这里读不出

别没什么。slider有点不好看，然后不要太死跟背景音乐，试着自己做一下节奏。会做的更好。

aesopl19193

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

aesopl19193 2009-11-06T09:52:04+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

WyndII

Joined October 2008

WyndII 2009-11-07T15:52:29+00:00

[mod]

[Easy]
00:20:001 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this section's pattern is messy, rearrange?
00:28:348 - + note
00:28:765 - add note
00:29:181 - ^
00:41:068 (1,2) - add whistle
01:28:034 (3) - recheck spacing also since editor is... u know. just copy the time and look at the timeline then try to click the note in that timeline then click on the slider, it will snap or something.
01:29:181 (4) - recheck spacing ^
01:35:084 (4,1,2,3,4) - messy
02:17:098 - this section is so boring, add notes please.
03:02:931 - remove timeline section thing.

[Hard]
Beginning of this map is messy.
01:31:047 (6,7) - omg look at your spacing here
03:02:030 (7) - spacing
00:44:080 (5) - ^
01:13:034 (2) - finish
01:16:068 (2) - ^
01:20:001 (2) - ^
03:02:931 - remove kiai timing section.
Do a Timing => resnap all notes.

[Al2e' Dif]
00:27:306 remove break
00:28:348 - 00:41:056 whistles on this section is random. try doing a pattern
00:59:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - stream feels not so complete. try adding two notes at the end of stream without changing the spacing with the next combo

01:13:034 (4) - new combo
01:14:049 (1) - remove new combo
nice~

[Insane]
Do a Timing => resnap all notes.
02:42:093 (3) - check spacing
00:13:348 - increase volume
no other probs found~

Give a reason why i should star this

aesopl19193

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

aesopl19193 2009-11-08T01:00:20+00:00

Thanks !
(also waiting for al2e to mod his diff)

aesopl19193

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

aesopl19193 2009-11-08T10:17:41+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

jericho2442

osu! Alumni

Joined March 2009

jericho2442 2009-11-10T12:25:56+00:00

ok soft modding is go

[Easy]
first off just to let you kno for if you want, theres is alot of small problems in spacing and lining up notes within each combo, i guess its classed as nazi'ng so insted of being mean i thought id just let you kno that they are there for if you wanna fix them

the following mods are thing i think really need sorting out
00:33:034 (1,2) - the way these 2 sliders cross each other at the end looks ugly, try to map these a bit better
01:33:034 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - the placing of these notes could be much better
03:02:093 - get rid of this kai time

[Hard]
ok again in this there is some lining up probs,best to go through the map and fix any small things you find, once you have ppl will find the map more fun to play

00:43:055 (2,3) - the way the end of these 2 sliders join is ugly
02:15:001 (1,2) - the way these join looks ugly too
02:46:005 (11) - this not i have to point out, the way its lined up is horrid, please fix it, theres a few more like this too

[Al2e' Diff]

01:02:009 (6) - ew instantly saw this and its horrid, make it so its not overlapped as much by the slider before
02:50:000 - end kai time

under soft modding this is a pretty solid map, nice job

[Insane]
00:52:009 (1,2) - eww bad placing
01:40:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this rythem could be done much better, the first half timing if fine but the second half feels bad, this really needs fixing to make the map fun, once you have fixed it here, also fix the rest of the song what uses this same rythem which is upto 01:52:093 -
02:15:043 (1,2) - ugly again

__________________________________________________________________________
you still have a fair way to go untill its rankable but its a nice map, anyway thats soft modding done, if you ever want it hard modded just post in my topic again, but please wait till this is a lil ferther on before you do

will star once you have applied the changes what need to be

aesopl19193

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

aesopl19193 2009-11-10T13:07:02+00:00

Thanks for you mod ^^

Almost mods are fixed , but i still want some comment from you =],
also there is something i don't undestand what's you means and how can i improve it:

01:40:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this rythem could be done much better, the first half timing if fine but the second half feels bad, this really needs fixing to make the map fun, once you have fixed it here, also fix the rest of the song what uses this same rythem which is upto 01:52:093 -

jericho2442

osu! Alumni

Joined March 2009

jericho2442 2009-11-10T13:14:21+00:00

aesopl19193 wrote:
01:40:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this rythem could be done much better, the first half timing if fine but the second half feels bad, this really needs fixing to make the map fun, once you have fixed it here, also fix the rest of the song what uses this same rythem which is upto 01:52:093 -

the first part of the combo follows the lead keyboard, but then by the end you are kinda creating your own line with it, this does not sound as good as maybe following the keyboard line fully at that point is what i mean

also i'll star now

aesopl19193

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

aesopl19193 2009-11-10T13:45:25+00:00

Thanks !

It is fixed ~

Diasios

Joined August 2008

Diasios 2009-11-10T16:55:17+00:00

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Easy]

It's ok

[Hard]

It's ok

[Al2e's diff]

It's ok

[Insane]

I love it *w*

Nice song and nice map, grats <3
Starred~

Takuma

osu! Alumni

Joined October 2008

Takuma 2009-11-12T21:26:41+00:00

The title bothers me. D: If it's okay, i'd like you to rename to "Give A Reason (Remix)", exactly like that.

Insane:
03:02:827 ~ kiai time doesn't fit imo.

Al2e' difficulty:
01:14:181 (3,4) - Eh, spacing is inconsistent.
01:20:848 (3,4) - ^
02:31:994 (6) - Move this away from (5).
02:33:973 ~ I don't really understand why you made this volume change; please remove.

Anyway, while I do think this mapset is great, please add more breaks next time! Players also need a rest. :P

aesopl19193

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

aesopl19193 2009-11-12T23:30:46+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

al2e10

Joined August 2008

al2e10 2009-11-13T10:38:27+00:00

My Dif.s

Take it ~~~

Download: EXIT TRANCE - Give A Reason(remix) (aesopl19193) [Al2e' Dif].osu

aesopl19193

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

aesopl19193 2009-11-13T10:45:58+00:00

al2e10 wrote:
My Dif.s

Take it ~~~

updated =]

wmfchris

osu! Alumni

Joined March 2008

wmfchris 2009-11-13T10:48:22+00:00

played, nice.
maybe after I have a cup of tea I can try to mod this (but it's no doubt that it's already nearly flawness

)

star!

aesopl19193

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

aesopl19193 2009-11-13T10:53:14+00:00

wmfchris wrote:
played, nice.
maybe after I have a cup of tea I can try to mod this (but it's no doubt that it's already nearly flawness )

star!

Thanks for your star~ =]

wmfchris

osu! Alumni

Joined March 2008

wmfchris 2009-11-13T11:26:35+00:00

[insane]
nothing wrong, but Auto plays 16m.
Is it supposed to be approved, or you can turn down the difficulty?
(I really have no relavent experience about this)

al's diff:
trust on al =]

in taiko mode:
comfortable fc in 1 play, well done lol

aesopl19193

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

aesopl19193 2009-11-13T11:38:03+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Leorda

Joined June 2009

Leorda 2009-11-14T01:10:31+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

aesopl19193

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

aesopl19193 2009-11-14T05:39:38+00:00

Leorda wrote:
[Easy]
00:09:181 (4) - Replace with slider (make a slider to white tick)

4 same slider i think is too boring ..

But, Thanks for your star~

Essien_old

Joined November 2009

Essien_old 2009-11-14T12:43:37+00:00

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aesopl19193

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

aesopl19193 2009-11-14T15:05:38+00:00

Essien wrote:
Hard:
01:22:723 (11, 1): Move a grid up.

fixed

01:31:681 (7): Move a grid down to align with 6

no

Insane:
00:16:056 (7-9): Move a grid to the left to align.

fixed

00:44:885 (7): Move a grid to the left.

Is that move it to right ?=] fixed

royathrun

Joined June 2009

royathrun 2009-11-14T16:00:16+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Kitty McWittles

Joined September 2008

Kitty McWittles 2009-11-18T11:39:37+00:00

[Easy]
01:20:001 (1) - Clap on 3rd repeat and end?
01:22:009 (2) - Clap on end? (maybe start too?)
01:58:034 (1) - Shorten by 1 repeat, add claps on 2nd repeat and end
01:59:059 (2) - Add, with a finish

[Hard]
Raise hitsound volume to ~70%
Seems a little whistle spammy at times, maybe go back and tone down your whistle sliders a little?

[Al2e]
Fine

[Insane]
Fine, though you should end your last kiai
Minor gripe: I hate the tiny circles, but it IS insane, so... I'll shutup now

Nice, have a star~

Tanmak

Joined August 2009

Tanmak 2009-11-18T12:12:19+00:00

Hello~~

[Easy]
02:25:431 (2) 1 grid up?

[Hard]
00:38:556 (1) Whistle?
00:43:556 (2,3,4) ^
01:46:056 (11) New combo?
01:52:306 (10) Arrange whistle start part and end part only.
03:00:015 (2) Re-whistle?

[Al2e's Dif]
00:40:015 (1,2) Move (1) 1 gird left and (2) 1 grid up.
01:33:765 (3,4) Make like this picture. And re-spacing. (With set snap divisor 1/6)

02:46:473 (1,2,3) Stack.

[Insane]
Ohhhhh...circle size is small....>_<
00:43:556 (1) 1 grid down.

Great song~!
Starred.

aesopl19193

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

aesopl19193 2009-11-18T12:31:10+00:00

Samurai_X wrote:
[Easy]
01:20:001 (1) - Clap on 3rd repeat and end?
01:22:009 (2) - Cla ....

All fixed =]

Tanmak wrote:
Hello~~

[Easy]
02:25:431 (2) 1 grid u.........

All fixed , but i am waiting for al2e to mod his diff~=]

Teara

osu! Alumni

Joined June 2009

Teara 2009-11-18T20:04:01+00:00

Nothing wrong~

al2e10

Joined August 2008

al2e10 2009-11-19T12:17:36+00:00

Fixed the problem already ~

Download: EXIT TRANCE - Give A Reason(remix) (aesopl19193) [Al2e' Dif].osu

aesopl19193

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

aesopl19193 2009-11-19T12:33:56+00:00

Updated ^^

Hikato

Joined August 2008

Hikato 2009-11-27T13:02:46+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

aesopl19193

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

aesopl19193 2009-11-28T02:53:50+00:00

Hikato wrote:
[Easy]
1:18:034 (3) - align with 1?

[Hard]
00:58:014 (5) - align with 4

[Al2e' Dif]
Nothing.

[Insane]
01:31:047 (6) - alignment
01:32:093 (1,2,3) - looks weird but not quite sure how to explain it.. feel free to ignore.
01:40:001 (1) to 01:52:030 (13) - This entire section feels horrible to me ^_^
01:54:059 (5) - alignment
02:40:095 (8) - clap makes it sound horrible remove it imo.
02:44:091 (2) - alignment
02:56:026 (1,2,3) - another that looks weird but not quite sure how to explain it.. feel free to ignore.

End the Kiai if you've finished mapping.

All suggestions, up to you of course if you decide to change anything.
Star.

Fixed ~

Starrodkirby86

osu! Alumni

Here since the beginning

Starrodkirby86 2009-11-28T07:36:30+00:00

Yo~

The song name you given is fine since there's really a lack of information on what it is on my end. XD I seem to have found "Give a Reason (Trance Remix)". What do you think? If you're changing it, then make sure it's a full submission. If you see an empty description box when resubmitting, cancel! It's going to end up as a duplicate. :X

Maybe add Slayers and Megumi Hayashibara in Tags?

All difficulties are fine, but I'm very unsure of [Insane]. >A<;;; What am I so wishy washy about? The max score. It's 16 million. I'm not sure what you can do with that. There's also a lack of breaks, but oh well.

Mmh, still. Tell me what you think~

aesopl19193

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

aesopl19193 2009-11-28T13:51:50+00:00

Starrodkirby86 wrote:
Yo~

The song name you given is fine since there's really a lack of information on what it is on my end. XD I seem to have found "Give a Reason (Trance Remix)". What do you think? If you're changing it, then make sure it's a full submission. If you see an empty description box when resubmitting, cancel! It's going to end up as a duplicate. :X

Maybe add Slayers and Megumi Hayashibara in Tags?

All difficulties are fine, but I'm very unsure of [Insane]. >A<;;; What am I so wishy washy about? The max score. It's 16 million. I'm not sure what you can do with that. There's also a lack of breaks, but oh well.

Mmh, still. Tell me what you think~

OK~ I changed the title =]

normally ,what is the max score of insane?
Or should i cancel all note at 01:40:015~01:52:515 and replace these by a break ?/_\( 13m score ...)
Or only the insane be approved , and the other be ranked?~"~

Starrodkirby86

osu! Alumni

Here since the beginning

Starrodkirby86 2009-11-28T17:16:45+00:00

Once it's around 13-16mil, you're around an area of controversy. Insane difficulties' scores vary depending on how much is mapped, but it's usually 2-11mil (I guess).

You can always chop off that bit since the map is hard for 13mil, but I don't know if you are reluctant to do that.

Insane /can/ be approved while the others are ranked, but you have to remove Insane here, create a new map with only the Insane difficulty, and submit that as well (Much like Hito's Tsurupettan).

aesopl19193

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

aesopl19193 2009-11-28T17:33:11+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

bmin11

Joined October 2008

bmin11 2009-12-06T04:03:59+00:00

What should I say....... Very enjoyable map to play

Hopefully will be ranked soon I guess

Sure

Joined February 2009

Sure 2009-12-06T07:20:51+00:00

[General]
Add tag guest name who made a diff at all diffs.

[Easy]
01:38:765 - add note at here?

[Hard]
00:26:026 (1) - Start at 00:26:681 is more fit IMO.

[Al2e]
I think this diff may get more score than Hard. But no problem to be ranked.
00:54:018 (5) - 1 grid down?
02:04:018 (5,6) - 1 grid right?
02:21:068 (5) - new combo

I like this song from old times. Good luck

aesopl19193

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

aesopl19193 2009-12-06T14:44:00+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Hanyuu

Joined February 2009

Hanyuu 2009-12-07T17:31:01+00:00

i dont know why you removed insane it is very fun

here in my attachent the old insane version for everyone who want to play it

Download: EXIT TRANCE - Give A Reason(remix) (aesopl19193) [Insane].osu

aesopl19193

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

aesopl19193 2009-12-07T23:27:48+00:00

Hanyuu wrote:
i dont know why you removed insane it is very fun

here in my attachent the old insane version for everyone who want to play it

should i re-add it into the beatmap?
but there are someone said that the insane maybe cannot be ranked since it have 16m score ..

al2e10

Joined August 2008

al2e10 2009-12-08T12:49:54+00:00

Fixed up some problem ^^

Download: EXIT TRANCE - Give a Reason (Trance Remix) (aesopl19193) [Al2e' Dif].osu

Yes_old

Joined May 2009

Yes_old 2009-12-11T04:41:13+00:00

i think the song is
Artist: MAKI
Song name: Give A Reason (Slayers Next)

that's what i found at least :/
EXIT TRANCE is just the people who compile the trance songs together

aesopl19193

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

aesopl19193 2009-12-11T10:15:49+00:00

Yes wrote:
i think the song is
Artist: MAKI
Song name: Give A Reason (Slayers Next)

that's what i found at least :/
EXIT TRANCE is just the people who compile the trance songs together

Oh, I get your question,
I changed the Artist Name to Starving trancer feat. Maki
But I am not willing to change it to (Slayers Next) because it just state the name of anime of this song belong to .=]

James

osu! Hall of Famer

Joined January 2008

James 2009-12-11T10:23:10+00:00

EXIT TUNES/TRANCE FTW

aesopl19193

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

aesopl19193 2009-12-11T10:26:42+00:00

James wrote:
EXIT TUNES/TRANCE FTW

sorry ...I don't know what you are saying /_\

James

osu! Hall of Famer

Joined January 2008

James 2009-12-11T10:42:28+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Yes_old

Joined May 2009

Yes_old 2009-12-11T16:06:53+00:00

Maybe capitalize to Strarving Trancer, too. >O<

aesopl19193

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

aesopl19193 2009-12-11T17:26:08+00:00

Yes wrote:
Maybe capitalize to Strarving Trancer, too. >O<

Changed =]

Breeze

osu! Alumni

Joined March 2009

Breeze 2009-12-27T09:22:17+00:00

o.o秀逗魔导士
为什么不是林原惠的版本>A<

aesopl19193

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

aesopl19193 2009-12-27T19:15:41+00:00

Breeze wrote:
o.o秀逗魔导士
为什么不是林原惠的版本>A<

那版本已經有人做啦~
雖然好像還未RANKED..

Starrodkirby86

osu! Alumni

Here since the beginning

Starrodkirby86 2009-12-28T18:46:07+00:00

Awesome, awesome.

Furawa

Joined April 2009

Furawa 2010-01-01T10:53:35+00:00

wow bubbled

whymeman

osu! Alumni

Joined November 2008

whymeman 2010-01-01T18:49:31+00:00

Sorry to do this, but you have two .osb files in the song folder. Also, you could make the Tags the same for all difficulties and don't forget to add the person in the collab into the Tags as well. Look into fixing that then i'll bubble.

aesopl19193

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

aesopl19193 2010-01-02T01:43:30+00:00

whymeman wrote:
Sorry to do this, but you have two .osb files in the song folder. Also, you could make the Tags the same for all difficulties and don't forget to add the person in the collab into the Tags as well. Look into fixing that then i'll bubble.

Fixed =] Thanks~

whymeman

osu! Alumni

Joined November 2008

whymeman 2010-01-06T00:53:28+00:00

Alright then.

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

Joined August 2008

Andrea 2010-01-06T21:08:47+00:00

Popped for a spacing error.

[Insane]

02:41:057 (9,1) - This spacing is too far. Remember you have to adjust all the next spacing too.

~~Fix and I'll bubble this again.~~

It was only a little error, so congratulations on getting your first map Ranked!~

Furawa

Joined April 2009

Furawa 2010-01-07T16:40:54+00:00

great

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