Nem - Aa, Subarashiki Nyansei · forum

Irreversible

osu! Alumni

Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2013-07-29T15:59:32+00:00

-_- I had the mod, I HAD THE MOD AND PRESSED BACKSPACE NOW EVERYTHING IS GONE!!

I give you Feedback now instead, really can't be bothered to write this again. Tomorrow when I calmed down you'll receive my mod I suppose.

[General]

You passed

[Nyan~]

My thoughts: Really enjoyable diff!
Suggestinos: I think you should work on the slider shapes mostly, also the blankets. The rhythm is acceptable! I'm just a bit worried about the spacing, if you put a slider, and then a circle afterwards, I think you should reduce the DS between them a bit, it'll look much more polished then!

[Hard]

My thoughts: Didn't finish to Play it, but seems okay.
Suggestions: I think you should definetly work on the rhythm and please reduce the SV for at least 0.3 .. It will make everything more readable! Please, also use more stacking, because the way you used DS after a slider, I don't really like it! But I think for a 1/3 song it's very important to get a nice flow with the rhythm, so I think you should overthink these Things again.
[Normal]

My thoughts: I like it!
Suggestions: Not much, this diff is almost perfect, there are a few weird rhythms where I think you should map to the lyrics, but apart that I think it's great!

Don't hesitate asking me~

~~no kd, this is 1) not helpful and 2) not a real mod, but i feel more satisfied instead of doing nothing now. xD~~

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2013-07-30T08:27:00+00:00

You're getting kudosu and you're going to like it.

Fixing changes in a bit. should be up soon

Irreversible

osu! Alumni

4,315 posts

Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2013-07-30T13:22:52+00:00

CDFA wrote:
You're getting kudosu and you're going to like it.

Fixing changes in a bit. should be up soon

alright, ask me again then~

CrazyErrorMan

110 posts

Joined February 2013

CrazyErrorMan 2013-07-30T17:32:39+00:00

== Hard Diff ==
Can you move some of the circles between these time points please?
It may not get ranked due to this.
02:48:312 - 02:49:550
Thanks!

Alarido

1,744 posts

Joined September 2012

Alarido 2013-07-30T19:23:35+00:00

Hi CDFA ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND VI

Legenda wrote:
→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

* No complaints on General Things

[Normal]
♥ Fully nice and enjoyable (:

[Hard]
♥ Enjoyable as Normal, but...
00:17:385 (4) - why not try a clean slider like 00:18:622 (1) ?
00:43:261 (2) - why not stack it with 00:43:364 (3)'s head ?

[Nyan~]
♥ Nyan~

That's it ^^

Hope to get ranked soon !!!!

In general I dislike Vocaloid but OHHH ♥ Nyan~ I LOVE this song

And the video story is amazing too

Att.

Sleepy Tori

103 posts

Joined May 2013

Sleepy Tori 2013-08-01T23:40:29+00:00

OHMIGOSH i finally finished it.

It's so incredibly hard to make an easy.
I'm not even sure if i did good on this song. welp i hope you like it.
Feel free to make any changes you want or trash it all together.

snlrock's easy

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: WorkDammit.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 40902
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Ah, It's a Wonderful Cat Life!
TitleUnicode:Ah, It's a Wonderful Cat Life!
Artist:Nem-P
ArtistUnicode:Nem-P
Creator:CDFA
Version:snlrock's easy
Source:
Tags:Megpoid Gumi Kagamine Len
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:0
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:0
ApproachRate:0
SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Leorda

4,416 posts

Joined June 2009

Leorda 2013-08-04T17:24:42+00:00

Hi~

[General]
* Wasn't the artist should me "Nem"? I saw that in your video
* Use orange, yellow, and green combo colour? Default one seems boring to me

[Nyan~]
00:33:776 (2) - Unsnapped tail slider

Good job, call me when you're ready

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2013-08-04T19:18:37+00:00

snlrocks wrote:

OHMIGOSH i finally finished it.

It's so incredibly hard to make an easy.
I'm not even sure if i did good on this song. welp i hope you like it.
Feel free to make any changes you want or trash it all together.

snlrock's easy

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: WorkDammit.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 40902
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Ah, It's a Wonderful Cat Life!
TitleUnicode:Ah, It's a Wonderful Cat Life!
Artist:Nem-P
ArtistUnicode:Nem-P
Creator:CDFA
Version:snlrock's easy
Source:
Tags:Megpoid Gumi Kagamine Len
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:0
ApproachRate:0
SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

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Video,0,"ThatsSoReagan.avi"
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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301,154,161494,2,0,P|249:136|209:152,1,99.9999999999999,8|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
138,222,162113,5,8,0:0:0:0:
138,22,162731,1,8,0:0:0:0:
338,22,163350,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,92,163659,1,8,0:0:0:0:
337,162,163969,1,8,0:0:0:0:
195,303,164587,5,8,0:0:0:0:
336,161,165206,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,161,165824,1,8,0:0:0:0:
65,90,166133,1,8,0:0:0:0:
135,19,166443,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,33,167061,6,0,L|252:145,3,99.9999999999999,0|0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
393,174,168298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
322,244,168608,1,8,0:0:0:0:
222,244,168917,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,169536,12,0,170773,0:0:0:0:
129,84,171082,5,0,0:0:0:0:
228,84,171391,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,84,171701,1,8,0:0:0:0:
427,84,172010,1,0,0:0:0:0:
426,287,172628,5,0,0:0:0:0:
225,287,173247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
125,287,173556,1,8,0:0:0:0:
54,216,173865,1,8,0:0:0:0:
54,15,174484,5,8,0:0:0:0:
254,15,175103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
453,15,175721,1,8,0:0:0:0:
453,114,176030,1,8,0:0:0:0:
382,184,176340,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,224,176958,6,0,P|96:232|56:136,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
54,342,178195,1,8,0:0:0:0:
85,247,178505,1,8,0:0:0:0:
155,176,178814,1,8,0:0:0:0:
354,176,179432,6,0,P|442:184|482:88,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,104,180670,2,0,P|224:112|200:176,1,99.9999999999999,8|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
120,104,181288,2,0,P|176:112|200:176,1,99.9999999999999,8|4,3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
128,216,181907,5,8,0:0:0:0:
269,357,182525,1,0,0:0:0:0:
410,215,183144,2,8,L|472:120,1,99.9999999999999
394,60,183762,1,8,0:0:0:0:
193,60,184381,5,8,0:0:0:0:
51,201,184999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,342,185618,2,8,L|272:240,1,99.9999999999999
182,192,186237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,336,186855,6,0,P|368:287|368:224,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,181,187474,2,0,P|333:129|389:113,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,43,188092,1,8,0:0:0:0:
195,43,188402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,113,188711,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,212,189020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,189329,12,0,191804,0:0:0:0:

I've taken a look at the diff, and although it's an ok diff, I sadly won't take it since this is so close to ranking ;A;

Sorry about that ;A;.

Just for some tips on mapping, though, since I did take a look at it

If you're making a lower diff for someone, make sure you're consistently checking with the diff above it to make sure that your parts aren't harder than the diff above. That happened a few times with this map (And I know for this map in particular, it was hard, since I mapped Normal as minimally as possible)

Sorry about that ;AAA;

I'll fix Leorda's changes in a bit. I gotta check on the artist name, tho.

EDIT: Source for anybody that's curious

http://vocaloid.wikia.com/wiki/Nem

Will make changes.

Sleepy Tori

103 posts

Joined May 2013

Sleepy Tori 2013-08-05T00:36:26+00:00

Yep thats fine. i did make this map out of boredom after all XD

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2013-08-06T05:44:18+00:00

i made changes and um

like

choo choo

uguu nyan

Yuukari-Banteki

1,534 posts

Joined June 2008

Yuukari-Banteki 2013-08-17T00:58:30+00:00

[Normal]
00:47:075 (3) - can you move this so that the slider path is centered over the previous sliderend?
00:52:024 (3) - ^
01:24:498 (2) - line this up with the straight part of 1
01:46:456 (3) - same sliderpath thing
01:51:405 (3) - ^

[Hard]
~~rename to CDFA is Hard~~
holy mother of slider velocity
01:27:900 (5) - the second curve looks asymmetrical
~.~ copy pasta chorus
02:43:055 (3) - the slight turn at the end, I feel, would work better if you placed it closer to the middle of the slider. It looks pretty wonky right now cus it doesn't fall on any beats. Perhaps move it so that it falls on the 1/6 at 02:43:209

[Nyan~]
00:33:467 (1) - move this down slightly to follow linearly out of 5
01:11:508 (4,5) - fix stacking
01:53:261 (3) - move this down to flow out of 2
02:42:745 (3) - can you line this up with 2?
02:54:189 (7) - ^ 6
02:55:426 (4) - ^ 3
just a couple flow nitpicks. otherwise looks pretty cool~

RandF

1,245 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2013-08-17T01:03:58+00:00

From my queue~

[General]

Title: "嗚呼、素晴らしきニャン生"
(Romanised Title is OK)

[Normal]

00:45:529 (5) - move to x:448 y:292
01:24:498 (2) - move slider-end to x:426 y:257

01:36:560 (4) - the following looks good, I think

256,116,96560,2,4,P|356:104|400:200,2,200,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:51:405 (3) - move to x:176 y:152

[Hard]

02:13:673 (4) - end at 02:14:292
02:49:550 (5) - move to x:256 y:148

[Nyan~]

Good!　 Nyan~~

Go, Go, ranked!

~Good Luck~

LunarSakuya

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Joined August 2011

LunarSakuya 2013-08-29T19:50:06+00:00

from queue, sry im so late orz

General
- the kiai times in Normal and Hard are unsnapped. Please make them match Nyan~

- Title Unicode: 嗚呼、素晴らしきニャン生

- "vocaloid" in tags wouldn't hurt

Normal
00:14:910 (2) - Try using Soft sample set on the reverse and tail (with a whistle somewhere possibly). Better contrast between the trumpet instrument and the vocals imo
00:17:694 (2,3) - ^
03:04:395 (5) - NC, like 02:54:498 (1) -

Hard
- the SV seemed a bit extreme compared to Normal's, consider lowering it?

00:30:684 - Add note http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/955689 The trumpet is emphasized here, making the notes sound more natural imo
00:35:632 - ^
01:25:117 - ^
01:30:065 - ^
01:35:013 -
and so on
02:16:147 (1) - Pretty sure you could make a better blanket with (2) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/955698

Nyan~'s pretty fun

Is Leorda coming back lol

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2013-08-30T05:33:53+00:00

Leorda's not coming back

I'll do changes soon. College orientation is a lot of work

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2013-08-30T20:24:28+00:00

also mother fuck I have to pretty much remap hard then

@Sakuya: I'll PM you when I remap the diff if you want o3o.

NOTE: These mods were not requested proceeding my desire to quit mapping or modding. These mods were all requested beforehand, and are being applied due to common courtesy. Please do not send me mod requests. I am not back.

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2013-12-30T09:12:18+00:00

I swear to fucking god I will get this shit ranked if its the last thing I do

Mystyk

osu! Alumni

950 posts

Joined June 2011

Mystyk 2014-01-02T03:21:26+00:00

General:
According to AiMod there are a lot of unsnapped kiais and green sections and also some inconsistencies between the difficulties, so please check it.
Also, you should rename Nyan~ difficulty to insane, or have similar difficulty names, from which it is easy to tell the differencies between them (so which is Normal Hard and Insane). (you should check this thread for more information)

[Normal]
Some hitsound suggestions:
00:11:199 (1) - add finish to the beginning of the slider? since the music has a similar sound, it would fit well imo
00:12:436 (2) - same here, add finish to the beginning of the slider, because it is a stronger beat
00:13:673 (1,2) - ^
00:16:147 (1) - ^ and also the end of the slider
00:18:622 (1,3) - add finish like I said previously (beginning of the slider and hit circle)
01:40:271 (1) - add finish to the beginning of the slider, it will emphasize the start ot the kiai nicely

00:43:364 (2,3) - try a different direction for better flow? - http://puu.sh/65K6J.jpg
00:55:735 (1,3) - don't hide the reverse arrow on (3), this is a similar pattern to yours, but the reverse arrow is visible: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1218258
the start point of 00:55:735 (1) - is at the place where it was, the mid point is at x:236 y:208 and the end point is at x:208 y:108 (then just copy paste and ctrl+h ctrl+g)
01:12:127 (2) - small thing, but put this a little up and make a better blanket so that the pattern is nicer - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1218269 (you can see the coordinates on the screenshot)
01:25:426 (1) - try placing this a little up, and also making a better blanket, because the end of the slider is a bit too much out of the grids - http://puu.sh/65Qm7.jpg
01:36:251 (3,4) - try making a better balnket? (sorry for nazi stuff :<) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1218396
well since the rest is copy paste, I suggest the same things that I already mentioned:
01:42:745 (2,3) - direction of the slider
01:47:384 (4,1) - blanket
01:55:116 (1,3) - reverse arrow
01:46:147 (2) - this is too close to the previous note
02:09:962 (1,3) - it would be better if you didn't make them overlap, because this is the easiest difficulty of the map, try to replace (1) and (2) a bit - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1218410
03:01:921 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - you shouldn't have such a long combo on a Normal diff, so add new combo here? 03:04:395 (5) - you used to add new combos after that nyan nyan nyan part, so why not do it like this here as well?

[Hard]
The hitsound suggestions from the normal difficulty apply to this difficulty as well.

00:17:385 (4,1) - you could make these flow better if they had a different direction, because 4 goes from right to left and back, and then you have to go left again, so it would be better to have something like this: http://puu.sh/6696j.jpg
00:35:941 (1,2,3) - imo this doesn't flow well, because - http://puu.sh/66dIJ.jpg - you go from one place to another back and forth, imo it doesn't really play well so try a different pattern, and it might be better if you make this 00:36:869 (2) - a hit circle and a slider, because he starts singing a new word(?) here 00:37:178 (3) - (I guess), it sounds like a new "section" - http://puu.sh/66dT4.jpg
00:39:034 (2,3) - why don't you have the same distance here, with the one you had here 00:38:416 (1,2) - ? they sound the same, so it would be reasonable to use the same distance - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1218988
00:52:024 (6,2) - this overlap is not nice imo, try this maybe? - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1219013
01:19:859 (4) - why not use normal sampleset on this? the beat sounds big, so I think normal sampleset would sound better
01:29:653 (3,1,2) - this will flow better imo, because (3) will lead to (1) nicely, and (1) will lead to (2) nicely - http://puu.sh/66fui
01:37:178 (5,6) - small thing but make them have the same direction so that the pattern looks nicer - http://puu.sh/66fEz.jpg
01:39:446 (4) - ctrl+G on this slider would make a better flow
01:51:405 (6,2) - I already mentioned this, but since it's copy paste, I'll mention it again :< make a nicer overlap please
01:53:879 (5,6) - stack (6) with (5)'s end properly?
02:16:663 (2,3) - ctrl+G on the timeline, it fits so much better to the music, listen to the background sound (I don't know what instrument it could be), and also try making a nicer pattern? - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1219040 - you could also try this? fits well to the music imo - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1219052 (but of course it's just a suggestion)
02:18:003 (2,3,4,5) - nice pattern :3
02:37:075 (7) - it feels a bit weird to have this sliderend at a start of a section in vocals, maybe use 2 hit circles instead? - http://puu.sh/66gHu.jpg - or something different >.<
03:03:158 (5,1) - nazi but you could make this a blanket so that you have a nicer pattern - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1219062

[Nyan~]
00:11:199 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you should use a soft sampleset at the end of the sliders because the song is not so fast here and it sounds awkward that the normal hitsounds are so loud as well
00:22:952 (5,6,7) - kind of nazi but the distance between 6 and 7 is not the same as between 5 and 6 :< so put them a little further?
00:33:776 (2) - put this a little down, because right now it looks like a halfmade blanket, but if you put it a little down it won't look similar to a blanket
00:44:910 (5,6,7) - this pattern looks kind of awkward >.< try something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1300873
00:46:457 (3,4) - same here, I think the pattern needs some polishment

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1300889
00:53:261 (1,2,3,4) - ^ - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1300921
01:14:910 (8) - this slider should end on 01:15:117 - because that's where the beat is in the song, you could also use hitcircles instead of a slider? you use too many sliders in this difficulty so it wouldn't hurt to make it vary
01:15:838 (2,3) - what about this? - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1300935
01:17:385 (7,1) - imo it would fit better to the song if you used a hit circle 01:17:385 - and then started a slider 01:17:694 - because of the vocals, the song between 01:17:385 - and 01:17:694 - is too silent so there is no need to use a slider there
01:24:704 (3) - it's annoying that the vocals start in the middle of the slider, so why don't you remove the reverse and add something? for example use 2 hit circles so that you don't have to change the pattern - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1300963
01:34:601 (5) - same as above ^ and also some improvement on the pattern - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1300978 and http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1300983
01:40:271 (1,2,3,4) - I think you could improve this pattern - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1301019 (I copy pasted (4) and used it for (2)) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1301019
here's the code for both this point and the next one:

16,200,100271,6,0,P|88:192|136:244,1,146.666666666667
64,260,100580,2,0,B|64:188|140:132,1,146.666666666667,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,84,100890,2,0,B|264:68|336:84,1,146.666666666667,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,136,101199,2,0,B|384:208|308:264,1,146.666666666667,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,199,101508,2,0,P|372:196|384:295,2,220

01:41:199 (4,5) - make a nicer curve for (5) - http://puu.sh/6Gm68.jpg
01:42:436 (2) - you could make this curve nicer C:
01:45:220 (2,3) - make this nicer >.< - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1301033
01:55:117 (1,2) - same as above ^ - http://puu.sh/6Gn3A.jpg
02:09:962 (1) - dat old slider xD could be nicer :<
02:20:787 (4) - put the end point of the slider 1 grid up or copy pasyte (3) and replace the new (4) to where it was before
02:26:663 (6) - make this symmetrical >.<

184,280,146663,2,0,B|196:224|256:204|256:204|316:224|328:280,1,220

02:29:446 (1) - what about using a drum clap maybe? a normal clap doesn't sound so nice imo
02:35:632 (6) - put the end of the slider point a bit to the left so that it will look nicer - http://puu.sh/6GnJc.jpg
02:35:941 (1) - place this a little up so that it has the same distance between 02:35:941 (1,2) - and 02:36:251 (2,3) -
02:47:385 (2) - make this curve nicer
03:03:158 (5,7) - it's not really good to have the slider end under another slider so I would suggest something like this - http://puu.sh/6Go12.jpg
03:05:941 (4) - I think it would be nice if you had a hit circle here and not a slider, because the vocals kind of "stop" at that point so it would play nice imo - http://puu.sh/6Go5q.jpg
03:07:797 (4,1) - I don't know why you used different spacing here, so put (1) closer to (4)?

I'm sorry that I mentioned too much "nazi" stuff but I think that the patterns need some work

Sorry that it took so long to finish! I was busy with exams >.< Good luck with the mapset!

Last edited by Mystyk 2014-02-01T20:19:30+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Asphyxia

osu! Alumni

1,986 posts

Joined June 2012

Asphyxia 2014-01-03T23:02:59+00:00

NYAN NYAN NYAN NYAN

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2014-01-03T23:06:21+00:00

thats right nigga

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2014-01-11T00:45:21+00:00

I made this +50 star priority because someone said they'd mod stuff that was +50 star prioity

Someone for the sweet love of jesus please

captin1

osu! Alumni

2,595 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2014-01-29T00:01:07+00:00

rip

Mystyk

osu! Alumni

950 posts

Joined June 2011

Mystyk 2014-02-01T20:20:36+00:00

CDFA: I updated my mod with the last difficulty, so please check it and answer whenever you can :<

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2014-02-28T00:21:55+00:00

WAIT HOLY FUCK MYSTYK UPDATED HIS/HER MOD OH FUCK

The lord jesus will give me the strength to try to get this ranked over the week I have of spring break.

Lust

osu! Alumni

2,667 posts

Joined January 2013

Lust 2014-03-08T00:10:42+00:00

nyan~ is not a rankable diff name

kd please

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2014-03-11T08:09:37+00:00

Asked two more BATs to look at this and the most I've gotten is "your parallel lines suck lmao"

One day

LexiaLovesU

822 posts

Joined June 2012

LexiaLovesU 2014-03-17T15:21:22+00:00

Ill mod this owo

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2014-03-17T20:02:54+00:00

Cool.

LexiaLovesU

822 posts

Joined June 2012

LexiaLovesU 2014-03-18T01:00:59+00:00

Modding this map cause I love this song so much

[General]

Check AImod: A lot of Unrankable Factors ><

[Normal]

00:20:168 (4,5) - The transition btw these 2 is sudden and aburt if you were to draw the flow btw these 2 you would see that you made a very sharp turn which in 192 bpm might be a bit uncomforting for a newb. Usually in the easiest diff you would like to keep the transition a bit more gradually especially in a High BPM map. doing something like this might make the Newb play uncomfortably and in generally have an iffy feel about the map so I would suggest doing this to the transition to make it not as aburt.

Screenshot

00:22:642 (2,3) - Same with this as above and I would suggest doing this to make 2 flow a bit more towards 3 remember this is the easiest diff in the set so it should also apply to the beginners owo

Screenshot

00:25:117 (4) - Why don't you make this the same as 3 this way you will get a nice circle flow that flows very nicely to 1 instead of having the awkard change of direction flow plus it will look a bit prettier owo though I gotta say that is one sexy curve o3o

To get this curve rotate by 60

00:28:519 (3) - Why not make the Y axis same as 2's since it looks a bit odd owo
00:35:013 (3) - The transition is again kinda sudden and aburt maybe try letting 3 flow more to 1 so that its a bit easier.
00:43:364 (2,3) - Same as above
00:48:312 (1) - I don't get why you ended the slider when a new phase in music occurs on the stanza you ended on (the trumpets) To me that sounds kinda off it makes it seem like you completely ignored the first trumpet which should be hitable since its a emphasized sound in the music. If your willing to change this let me warn you it probably will cause some rearrangements cause the best to fix this would be to end the slider on 00:49:240 and continue with the 4 circles from that point since circle would be best to emphasize the trumpets. Remember this would cause arrangement since there is no way of going back to that point without causing a slider that is off the grid or very bad flow.
00:49:859 (2,3,4,1) - this pattern may be aburt but since it goes well with the empasised trumpets(or whatever that is) it fits nicely but maybe instead of doing a triangle which at the end go confusing cause of the fact the hit circles hit impact covers the slider. I would suggest doing a diamond pattern like this so that it will be easier to read owo

Screenshot

00:54:498 (4,1,2,3) - TBH I would suggest re arranging these since they are all so cramped and their transition is aburt >< how about this owo This one has a nice very easier flow this I think can still be fun for newbs owo

owo

00:58:519 (1) - This spinner seems so out of place there is 2 very prominent notes in the spinner which should be mapped it sounds so empty >< try this rhythm instead and see how you like it also I suggest putting the spinner to start at 01:00:684 and end at 01:01:921 so that this way you get a drain outed feel from the spinner instead of ending on a note that should be drained out for the break

Ryhthm

[notice]

01:15:529 (1,2) - The transition between these notes is kinda aburt and sudden this is the easiest diff so keep in mind for Newbs I would suggest making 1 flow a bit more towards 2
01:19:550 (2,1) - The transistion btw these notes is a bit iffy since you curve 2's tail away from 1's head it causes awkward gameplay I would suggest rotating 2 by 30 to get it a nice flow like so

Screenshot

01:22:024 (2,3,4,1) - Nice pattern

01:25:426 (1) - Please fix this blanket owo
01:35:632 (1,2,3,4) - using the same pattern can get kinda repetitive why don't you try to think of a new one here >w< something new and fun here is an idea

Screenshot

Since this is just the first kiai copy and pasted with everything reversed same applies from the first kiai
01:42:745 (2) - Same as above
01:47:693 (1) - I don't get why you ended the slider when a new phase in music occurs on the stanza you ended on (the trumpets) To me that sounds kinda off it makes it seem like you completely ignored the first trumpet which should be hitable since its a emphasized sound in the music. If your willing to change this let me warn you it probably will cause some rearrangements cause the best to fix this would be to end the slider on 01:48:622 and continue with the 4 circles from that point since circle would be best to emphasize the trumpets. Remember this would cause arrangement since there is no way of going back to that point without causing a slider that is off the grid or very bad flow.
01:49:240 (2,3,4,1) - this pattern may be aburt but since it goes well with the empasised trumpets(or whatever that is) it fits nicely but maybe instead of doing a triangle which at the end go confusing cause of the fact the hit circles hit impact covers the slider. I would suggest doing a diamond pattern like this so that it will be easier to read owo

Screenshot

01:53:879 (4,1,2,3) - TBH I would suggest re arranging these since they are all so cramped and their transition is aburt >< how about this owo This one has a nice very easier flow this I think can still be fun for newbs owo

owo

01:57:900 (1) - This spinner seems so out of place there is 2 very prominent notes in the spinner which should be mapped it sounds so empty >< try this rhythm instead and see how you like it also I suggest putting the spinner to start at 02:00:065 and end at 02:01:302 so that this way you get a drain outed feel from the spinner instead of ending on a note that should be drained out for the break

Ryhthm

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02:11:199 (3) - Im kinda corcerned that the sliders repeat is hidden by the other sliders body and when a newb plays it they will be taken by surprise from the reverse to late and lose combo
02:14:910 (1) - While this is aburt there isn't much chose so I guess its fine owo
02:22:333 (1) - Why don't you give this a curve towards both of those circles so the transition isn't to aburt
02:34:395 (1,2) - not a big fan of this overlap its transition is very iffy >.<
02:36:251 (3,4,5,1,2) - There is to many circles this will get hard for a newb to hit especially in 192 bpm I would suggest removing 5 since it has no purpose it only there to maintain symmetry which is NOT a good thing to do. your creating harder gameplay for a newb for the sake of symmetry. leave symmetry out of rhythm not everything is the same Patterns yes but if conflicting with the rhythm whats the point in patterns if it sounds weird ><
02:37:178 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm is a bit off sounding like I said doing fake rhythms for the sake a of symmetry is not a well thing to do it creates awkward sounding patterns. 3 is ending on a very strong vocal note which should be clickable so I would suggest removing 2 then pushing 3 to 2 time postion then moving 4 to the stanza and then placing a circle where 4 used to end like this

Rhythm

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This rhythm will make the vocals and instruments match owo
02:39:653 (1,2,3,4,1) - This patterns seems a bit sudden the transition between 3 and 4 is very aburt and very sharp I would suggest doing something like so that the begginers wont have I really awkward movement right there and this pattern it wont cause much repositioning to the next notes at all owo

02:44:601 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This pattern is can use a lot of polishing since it is a very back tracking pattern cause a repetitive feeling(to me at least) plus its not so pretty looking >.< maybe try this owo

02:54:498 (1,2,3) - The transition between these notes are very aburt and sudden you have 1's end curve greatly away from 2 this causes awkward gameplay for newbs D: if anything I would suggest curve a bit more towards 2 to make it easier on the newbs owo
02:55:735 (3,4) - Same as above owo
02:59:446 (1,2,3,4) - I don't get why you ended the slider when a new phase in music occurs on the stanza you ended on (the trumpets) To me that sounds kinda off it makes it seem like you completely ignored the first trumpet which should be hitable since its a emphasized sound in the music. If your willing to change this let me warn you it probably will cause some rearrangements cause the best to fix this would be to end the slider on 01:48:622 and continue with the 4 circles from that point since circle would be best to emphasize the trumpets. Remember this would cause arrangement since there is no way of going back to that point without causing a slider that is off the grid or very bad flow.
03:03:158 (3) - This would look a bit better if you made it the same as 1 since you seem to be following some sort of symerty pattern I would fit better owo
03:09:653 (1) - This spinner seems so out of place there is 2 very prominent notes in the spinner which should be mapped it sounds so empty >< try this rhythm instead and see how you like it also I suggest putting the spinner to start at 03:11:818 ~ 03:13:983 so that this way you get a drain outed feel from the spinner instead of ending on a note that should be drained out for the break

Ryhthm

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Done owo
Pls go over this diff first then ill look at the other since I covered a lot in this diff owo

Last edited by LexiaLovesU 2014-04-02T06:57:47+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

Shohei Ohtani

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Shohei Ohtani 2014-03-21T20:19:13+00:00

that's hot

Asphyxia

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Asphyxia 2014-05-06T09:43:31+00:00

Yoo CDFA o/

General stuff

Please check your AIMod, as Lexia said, there's a lot of unrankable things that NEEDS to be fixed. I think those unsnapped objects make your kiai times also inconsistent, check this out also!
Click!

Normal

The thing that is pretty annoying is that blankets such as 00:22:642 (2,3) - , 00:44:601 (4,1) - and 00:51:715 (2,3) - got ignored totally. You can consider fixing them all in this difficulty but I can live with it if you do not. I also want to remind you that making these blankets perfect would make the map more clean.
+1 on HP and OD? I feel like that would make a better spread here.
00:47:075 (3) - Curving this slider more would make a lot of sense, because that way you can improve the blanket and same time make the overlap perfect. -> http://puu.sh/8BhFv.jpg
00:52:024 (3) - ^
00:53:879 (3) - Can you curve this more? The curves don't really make any impact if they're like this.
01:30:374 (1) - Maybe not the most beautiful slider around? Looking at your Hard difficulty, you did excellent sliders, I'm sure you could totally come up with an epic slider here too.
And because you copied the kiai for the second one, almost all of these apply to your other kiai as well, remember to fix them.
02:18:622 (3,1) - Symmetric, yeah. It's still a DS error, please fix this.
Like I said earlier, this difficulty is fine, although all of those incorrect blankets make it look not that great, unclean. Rhythm-wise it was a lot better, there wasn't also any flow issues imo.

Hard

00:16:147 (1) - I can live with sliders like these, totally, but improving some of them, such as 00:42:127 (3) - , 00:52:024 (6) - , 00:53:261 (2) - 00:54:498 (5) - and 00:55:735 (1) - would help the map. I know it's 2 years old but it's just for the better.
00:17:385 (4,1) - The overlap makes it a bit weird here, doesn't look that great in editor, it also was a bit meh while playing. You could copy either one of them and insert the slider a bit further away so it doesn't overlap. This way it'd fit way better.
00:25:117 (1) - Useless NC, can you remove it?
00:39:034 (2,3) - Maybe improving the blanket here is a good idea, it only needs a tiny bit of fixing. Remember to copy 00:39:034 (2) - to 00:38:416 (1) - here also.
00:59:550 - If you can, please fill the areas here, same suggestion for your Nyan~ difficulty aswell, it's pretty weird to play now :/
01:24:189 (4,5) - You can improve this blanket too, it's near to be a perfect one.
01:28:828 (1,3) - These sliders are way unfitting, I was expecting mirror ones but nope. Please try to copy either one of them and paste it! That way it would fit way better~
01:34:601 (4,1,2) - Small improvement on the blanket and it's perfect!
01:37:178 (5,6) - Rotating them a bit and giving them a different position would help the flow here -> http://puu.sh/8BiTD.jpg
Is your second kiai a copy from your first? If it is, make sure to improve the second kiai as well with the suggestions I gave you on the first one.
01:58:931 - Filling area suggestions.
02:16:147 (1,2) - I'd prefer to see a correct blanket here, in fact, here's a pattern that I find quite interesting -> http://puu.sh/8BiZz.jpg
02:22:952 (4,5) - Improving this blanket would be a great idea, again.
02:36:766 (6,7) - Hmm, I'd give them a bit more spacing because some might think 02:37:075 (7) - could start 1 tick earlier. Up to you.
02:45:838 (1) - Making this slider straight would fit really well LOL, example here -> http://puu.sh/8Bj4D.jpg and since it isn't a mirror one from your previous, my example makes it a bit better imo
03:10:684 - Areaaaa

Nyan~

00:12:127 (4) - If you can, try to make a better wave slider shape here, like this -> http://puu.sh/8Bj8Y.jpg (yes, this applied to all of your wave sliders)
00:18:931 (3) - I feel like if you want to, you can copy this instead. This is a way better version of ^ that one
00:31:302 (2,3) - I feel like these shapes could be a bit better, like this? http://puu.sh/8Bjei.jpg
00:39:653 (1,2,3,4) - More spacing would be pretty nice
00:43:983 (3) - Mm, if you can, make the end of this slider like this -> http://puu.sh/8Bjif.jpg so it wouldn't go out of screen
00:49:240 (4) - I feel like the curve here is way too much, rather unfitting with your previous sliders. Giving a shape like this to the slider would help a lot -> http://puu.sh/8Bjku.jpg
00:56:972 (1,2) - Here, make sure that the curve of this slider is more focused on the middle, not in the end (which you have now)
00:58:312 - You could start the spinner here, would give players more time to spin while also making it more fitting with the vocals!
00:59:550 - Please fill ;-; (till 01:00:580 - )
01:18:003 (2,3) - The overlap would be more stylish if it was on the middle of 01:18:312 (3) - instead of beginning
01:20:787 (2,3) - How about just a mirror from 2? That'd be way cooler
01:24:189 (1,3) - Your blanket is almost perfect so improving this isn't the worst idea ^^
01:24:704 (3,1) - ^
01:30:993 (4,5) - ^
01:34:086 (4,5,1) - Some DS errors here?
01:39:034 (1,2,3,4) - More spacing probably?
01:41:508 (5) - It'd be very cool if this slider was a blanket with 01:41:199 (4) - 's end, maybe you can do it? Also the curve that gives you would make it way more fitting with 01:42:436 (2) -
01:52:642 (1,2) - Blanket?
01:56:044 (4,5) - ^
01:57:900 (1) - and 01:58:931 - and suggestions are the same, you can start the spinner earlier (reasons stated in the previous suggestion) and by filling that empty part it makes it way more enjoyable to play.
02:10:580 (1,2) - This NC seems to be pretty useless and inconsistent, remove it maybe?
02:19:240 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Mm, maybe you could turn this into a bit smoother? It's fine though if you want to keep it like this.
02:47:075 (1,2) - Blanket
02:49:859 (1) - You can start this earlier too for the consistency and everything!
03:09:653 (1) - and 03:10:684 - .

Mm, call me back for a recheck! Let's hope this mod will help you out. :3

Shohei Ohtani

Topic Starter

Shohei Ohtani 2014-05-13T20:13:48+00:00

Asphyxia wrote:
Normal I totally didn't accidentally delete the header
The thing that is pretty annoying is that blankets such as 00:22:642 (2,3) - , 00:44:601 (4,1) - and 00:51:715 (2,3) - got ignored totally. You can consider fixing them all in this difficulty but I can live with it if you do not. I also want to remind you that making these blankets perfect would make the map more clean.
Can't garuntee that I fixed all of them but I fixed some.
01:30:374 (1) - Maybe not the most beautiful slider around? Looking at your Hard difficulty, you did excellent sliders, I'm sure you could totally come up with an epic slider here too.
Fixed it somewhat by making the 2 curves better. I can make it a whole new slider if the issue is the shape itself rather than the curves
02:18:622 (3,1) - Symmetric, yeah. It's still a DS error, please fix this.
:((((((((((((((
Hard
02:36:766 (6,7) - Hmm, I'd give them a bit more spacing because some might think 02:37:075 (7) - could start 1 tick earlier. Up to you.
I think I tried it and it ended up confusing me ;w;.

Nyan~
00:43:983 (3) - Mm, if you can, make the end of this slider like this -> http://puu.sh/8Bjif.jpg so it wouldn't go out of screen
didn't exactly do that but I did something
00:58:312 - You could start the spinner here, would give players more time to spin while also making it more fitting with the vocals!
didn't change ;wwww;. Mostly because the spinner would show up while notes are still actively being hit and it wouldn't look kawaii

Mm, call me back for a recheck! Let's hope this mod will help you out. :3

All of this was done off of memory so there was probably more stuff that I skipped ;w;. If it's not listed, I took it and used it.

Asphyxia

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Asphyxia 2014-05-14T13:26:30+00:00

Actually, this looks very good now. I like it a lot. You can now consider your map

~ BUBBLED ~

Shohei Ohtani

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Shohei Ohtani 2014-05-15T01:49:31+00:00

rip this map the novid download doesn't show up

rip

jonathanlfj

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jonathanlfj 2014-05-19T02:29:46+00:00

nyan~

P.S. No-video download link is bugged on the webpage, but it shouldn't stop this map from getting ranked. If you are concerned please file a bug report.

EDIT: oh snap its here gg

Shohei Ohtani

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Shohei Ohtani 2014-05-19T02:31:48+00:00

RANKING THE MAP FIXED THE NOVIDEO PROBLEM

WHAT

Lust

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Lust 2014-05-19T02:32:23+00:00

oh shit congrats yo on the low

Seph

Seph 2014-05-19T02:42:36+00:00