1. Hard (4.96 stars, 484 notes)
2. Normal (2.98 stars, 214 notes)

Pokie wrote:

TOUHOU >_< !

[General]
Offset: 27840 ? Nope, the current offset sounds perfect even though it's 0
Delete .osb Done lol

The hitsounds are so loud , I can't hear the song clearly...
decrease overall volume by 10~20? How do I decrease overall volume? o_o Do I need to decrease each section's volume individually?

[Normal]
00:37:826 (1) - no finish Fixed
00:44:782 (4) - add a circle? Fixed
00:55:325 (T) -
00:55:543 (T) - ^ delete one of them Fixed
01:39:021 (T) - delete sections before this Fixed
02:07:065 (T) - delete this section Fixed
02:19:565 (2) - no clap on reverse Fixed
02:54:782 (4) - no whistle Fixed
02:55:869 (2) - ^ Fixed
02:58:152 (6) - ^ Fixed
03:00:869 (5) - different from 02:46:956 (1) - ? Fixed
03:02:499 (T) - this part is too loud, volume decrease to 50 Fixed

[Hard]
I really don't like normal-whistle in this diff...

00:31:521 (3) - like this: Fixed

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01:45:652 (4) - slider? Fixed
01:46:630 (4) - delete this note? Fixed
01:50:000 (3) - like this? Fixed

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02:06:086 (7) - 2 grid down Fixed
02:09:782 (6) - like this? Fixed

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02:33:043 (2) - add one reverse fix 02:33:913 (3) - spacing? I don't see anything wrong with the spacing
02:34:782 (4) - no clap at the end Fixed
02:51:956 (x) - add circle Fixed
02:54:782 (9) - make streams here ? I don't really like streams lol, I'll think about it
03:02:499 (T) - this part is too loud, volume decrease to 50 Fixed

Nice song and map Thanks ^^

Lena wrote:

Map is too easy btw [x

Gens wrote:

- Resnap all notes. They were already snapped weren't they?o.o All I did was moving the uninherited section forward since it used to be right at the beginning of the song. Resnapped again just to be sure
- Hard's HP drain is a bit too high... it goes down even if you're SSing at the slow part. Decreased HP drain by 1 tick

Excellent work, I must say. Thanks ^^

1. 01:03:912 (T) - add a circle with clap
2. 01:17:825 (T) - ^
3. 02:29:129 (T) - ^
4. 03:21:738 (4) - add a back and place an clap at the end (cancel the finish on the end circle)
5. 03:35:651 (4) - ^
6. 02:13:912 (5) - ^

• Nice work.

Pokie wrote:

Yes, each section

Use Ctrl to select them:

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Then click OK, done

no kds this post

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[General]
Offset is wrong. And i'm not the first who say it. 6973 sounds more better. Fix it then resnap all notes. Timing can wait until it's ready for a bubble, plus I've been getting 99%+ with this offset .

[Normal]
00:42:824 - Distance
01:00:451 - ^
01:00:886 - ^
01:01:320 - ^
01:01:755 - ^
01:02:190 - ^
01:56:538 - ^
02:23:494 - ^
02:24:364 - ^
02:30:451 - ^
03:11:320 - ^
03:27:842 - ^

[Hard]
Perfect.

Colin Hou wrote:

Only suggestions, feel free to ignore them.

[Normal]:

1. 01:03:912 (T) - add a circle with clap
2. 01:17:825 (T) - ^
3. 02:29:129 (T) - ^
4. 03:21:738 (4) - add a back and place an clap at the end (cancel the finish on the end circle)
5. 03:35:651 (4) - ^
6. 02:13:912 (5) - ^

[Hard]:

• Nice work.

Star~

Glasslake wrote:

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?t=30227
SP +2, 2 difficulties, 3:44mins each diff.

Vikon wrote:

sorry for my delay , but you did give me a wrong link lol

Glasslake wrote:

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?t=30227
SP +2, 2 difficulties, 3:44mins each diff.

[General]
osu rating of [Normal] is 3.2 , you need a difficulty under 3 to get ranked. I'll fix that

[Normal]
00:34:781 (1) a bit out of screen? Fixed
01:53:912 (2) end this slider at the previous white tick (01:54:346, add clap), and add a note at 01:54:564? Fixed
01:57:390 (2) ^ Nah, not this slider
02:07:172 (1) is it better to slience this spinner? ( I don't understand why you decreased the volume but add a noisy whistle here..) There's no whistle
02:24:346 (7) shorten this slider to the previous white tick and add back? Nope it looks bad
02:31:303 (7) ^ Nope it looks bad

[Hard]
00:59:781 (10) change these normal-whistle to soft-finish? Fixed
01:06:738 (8) ^ Fixed
01:13:694 (13) ^ Fixed
01:20:651 (10,11) ^ Fixed
02:11:085 (12) ^ Fixed
02:15:433 (X) add a note here with clap? I don't like how that sounds
02:18:042 (13) N-whistle -> S-finish? Fixed
02:31:955 (9) ^ Fixed
03:01:846 (12) a little bit out of screen? Fixed
03:25:325 (9) move this note to 03:25:542, and consider to delete (11)? Fixed
03:25:868 (12) N-w -> S-f? Fixed
03:39:781 (10) ^ Fixed

Star-worthy~!

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
the soft-finish hitsounds is a bit loud imo. so when you want to use it during normal patterns, turn down the volume. (for example: [Hard]00:33:042 (9,10) Will do.
if you won't map the whole song, cut the part not in use. (maybe just use a fade out) I don't like editing the mp3, it seems that everytime I edit it the quality gets worse when I save it

[Normal]
there's lot of unused timing sections... remove them plz?They're all used o.o
01:02:172 (5) - new combo since you changed the spacing Fixed
01:43:042 (2) - not sure but i think it's offscreen. Nah it's inscreen don't worry
02:33:042 (2,3) - spacing Fixed
02:33:042 (2) - clap at the start? Fixed
02:33:912 (3) - ^ Fixed

[Hard]
00:42:825 (2,3) - spacing Fixed
00:46:303 (4,5,6) - ^ Fixed
01:09:564 (10) - new combo? Nope o.o
02:21:738 (6) - ^ Fixed
02:33:042 (2) - add clap to the start? Fixed
02:33:912 (3) - ^ Fixed
03:43:477 (6,11) - new combo? Fixed

really great. star+kud star.

daigurren wrote:

very nice song with great beatmap
hope it's ranked soon

thepianist wrote:

Hello! Sorry for the late reply~

[Overall]
The white + kiai seems to be a bit bright.

[Storyboard]
Is well done. Great job ^^ (Consider moving some the lyrics so they don't go into the letterboxed area though? It looks a little...not really sloppy, but...I dunno.)
Example: Move "On this...Atonement" up so it doesn't enter letterboxed area?

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[Normal]
00:44:781 (4) - Placement of this note seems a bit random. Perhaps consider placing it in the midpoint between (3) and (1)?
01:19:999 (3) - Consider flipping this horizontally and vertically, and reverse it so it flows a bit better? ie

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01:53:912 (2) - ^ :3

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01:57:390 (2) - ^ :]
02:35:868 (1) - This pops at the end. Use soft sample set for the last two timing sections?
02:58:042 (6) - Perhaps this should start on the red tick
03:17:825 (3) - Align with end of (2)?
03:32:172 (3) - Rotate by -16 degrees (selection center) to match the angle of the previous slider?
03:32:172 (3) - Rotate by -35 degrees?

[Hard]
00:31:303 (2) - Align with (1)?
01:43:042 (3) - Move a grid right to make the stream even?
02:35:868 (1) - Pops
02:53:368 (6) - Too close

Good job~ ^^ Star~

Numbbi wrote:

*throws a star*

Eirene wrote:

well, the [Hard] is just awesome *.*
I love cursor light :3

only one thing on the [Normal] : 03:16:085 (4,1) -
though this is a normal, it's hard to see if this is first the circle or first the slider ...
so you might not stack this 2 objects >.< ?

*.* T.T *.* T.T *.*
star :3

Leorda wrote:

hi Glasslake

When I call your name, I call you Glasscake, lol

[General]
You need an easier diff, the star rating must below 3,00

[File]
Cut the mp3 please No, for the reason I stated in one of the previous posts

[Storyboard]
1) Your SB elements is WAY too many transparent pixels, you have to cut it possible. Otherwise, this beatmap will higher performance while play this beatmap fixed some
Example 24.png

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If you see the black space, you have to cut it down. Some SB element need to fix it all, you have to fix the SB elements

2) SB elements overlap the lady at the bg looks bad IMO

[Normal]
00:39:999 (4) - Make it like this to make a nice pattern?? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10730nah
01:09:564 (5) - Make symetric? Fixed

[Hard]
01:53:042 (1,2) - The slider looks odd to me, IMO uh it looks fine to me
02:04:564 (4) - Make parallel? Fixed

Good song
STAR

Garven wrote:

I love the sb. Looks great!
star2 looks awesome, though I don't know if you're allowed to make the image larger than the star2.png template (52x50).

The white combo color looks kind of harsh when Kiai is enabled... but I'm too busy looking at the lyrics on the sb anyway.

Bleh, nothing wrong here at all. I would love to see a third difficulty, though they might end up being extreme on both ends considering how you mapped these two... ah well. Good job!

Glasslake wrote:

Hi Real1, sorry for the late response, but I really don't think cutting the mp3 is necessary. Thanks for the checking the map and sorry for the time you wasted on cutting the song.

scar1410 wrote:

Source is only Touhou~

0989596108 wrote:

it's all done with the spectrum of wonderful
i personally like ... NICE!!

osuplayer111 wrote:

Heart fixed.

LaVolpe024 wrote:

Has to be said again and again, fabulous map and song.

Natteke wrote:

Even after all these years this map looks fantastic and doesn't feel "old", unlike most stuff mapped in 2010. Glasscake could see the future!