Okay, lets check the CtBs once more.
[Cup]
Seems interesting but needs some improvement. I will just mainly give you rhythmical changes.
00:30:314 (2) - To be honest this is bleeding twice. First you missed a big white line which lead to a hole in the rhythm, and second your sliderend will be unsnapped due the red timing point which is unrankable. Just use a slider which ends at 00:31:174 and add a circle to 00:32:056.
00:47:938 (1) - Please use a repeat slider instead since you missed a nice point in the song at 00:48:820.
01:02:056 (1) - You placed this slider after the vocal part while the remaining ones are fit for the music. Why? Please end at 01:02:938.
0,38x Star rating seems a bit too low for me. Try to add a bit more rhythm to 00:54:997 (1) and 01:05:585 (1) since it is the kiai part. You need to do some difference there in both rhythm and patterns. Try to add a bit more distance to the notes during kiai and this Cup should be fine.
Man, AR2? Why while you gave 6 to Salad? Try out HP3/AR4/OD4 and maybe CS3 for better scale.
Lastly, you can add a bit more space between notes since this is CtB and you only need to think verticaly. I'm using grid level 2 and always leaves 1 free line between 1/2s (two square during kiai).
[Salad]
00:23:696 (1) - Why is this starting at red line? There is nothing in the rhythm which needs to be mapped at this level.
00:28:108 (2) - You missed a good part of the song at 00:30:093 - 00:30:314. True it needs to be easy but still I think this part is needs to be mapped out.
00:31:615 (3,4,5,6) - I reather use two sliders between 00:31:174 - 00:31:615 and 00:32:056 - 00:32:497. And start the next 00:32:718 (1) - slider at the white line. This will also solve the unsnapped sliderend problem.
00:40:218 (1) - Oh come on, you can do better rhythm here.
00:51:247 (7) - Move this note to the next white tick.
00:51:688 (1) - Just no. Try to use two circle at 00:51:908 and 00:52:129 then add a slider to 00:52:350 - 00:52:791.
00:53:232 (2) - Repeat slider?
00:55:217 (2) - Delete this please, I know it goes after the vocal but this ways gives better rhyhtm.
01:01:173 (1,1) - Change it to a repeat slider.
01:08:673 (2,3) - Repeat the slider to fit to the vocal part?
01:12:203 (3,5) - Add one more note between them.
01:13:085 (1,2) - End both slider at the previous white tick.
Same placing is applies to this as well, but it can be a bit higher. Like 2 square for 1/2 and 2 lines during kiai.
[Platter]
Oh c'on there was no dash not even during kiai. o.o And just +4 combo is the difference between Salad and this. And 2,20 SV.............. thats way too high even 1,5 is high for Platter, I guess you will need to lower it but still I give you some advice.
00:23:476 (3) - Why? There is nothing to be repeated, please just add a circle to 00:23:696 if you really want something to be there.
00:25:240 - Man, here is a nice place for a repeat slider and you missed it.
00:27:226 - Add a cicle?
00:29:211 (1) - This spinner here is not really makes sense. I suggest you to delete it and map it out.
00:31:835 (2) - I really want to see something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1230857
00:34:262 (1,2,3,4) - Same as before.
00:44:409 - Again an important beat. Same as at 01:09:997 and 01:11:761.
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In general, you sometimes missed good beat in the song while they should be mapped even in Cup. Please do something about them.
And why is the beginning of the song is empty? Its clear and loud enough to be mapped, please do it. This is ctb, every hearable beat should be mapped out.
And at last some example how you can alter your sliders path to make them interesting. First, Second.
It is still a long journey is waiting for this set before it can be ranked. Good luck. o/
Oh, one more thing. Why Rain and Overdose is still in the set but with different title? If you want to keep, use the same title, or just simply delete them.
[Cup]
Seems interesting but needs some improvement. I will just mainly give you rhythmical changes.
00:30:314 (2) - To be honest this is bleeding twice. First you missed a big white line which lead to a hole in the rhythm, and second your sliderend will be unsnapped due the red timing point which is unrankable. Just use a slider which ends at 00:31:174 and add a circle to 00:32:056.
00:47:938 (1) - Please use a repeat slider instead since you missed a nice point in the song at 00:48:820.
01:02:056 (1) - You placed this slider after the vocal part while the remaining ones are fit for the music. Why? Please end at 01:02:938.
0,38x Star rating seems a bit too low for me. Try to add a bit more rhythm to 00:54:997 (1) and 01:05:585 (1) since it is the kiai part. You need to do some difference there in both rhythm and patterns. Try to add a bit more distance to the notes during kiai and this Cup should be fine.
Man, AR2? Why while you gave 6 to Salad? Try out HP3/AR4/OD4 and maybe CS3 for better scale.
Lastly, you can add a bit more space between notes since this is CtB and you only need to think verticaly. I'm using grid level 2 and always leaves 1 free line between 1/2s (two square during kiai).
[Salad]
00:23:696 (1) - Why is this starting at red line? There is nothing in the rhythm which needs to be mapped at this level.
00:28:108 (2) - You missed a good part of the song at 00:30:093 - 00:30:314. True it needs to be easy but still I think this part is needs to be mapped out.
00:31:615 (3,4,5,6) - I reather use two sliders between 00:31:174 - 00:31:615 and 00:32:056 - 00:32:497. And start the next 00:32:718 (1) - slider at the white line. This will also solve the unsnapped sliderend problem.
00:40:218 (1) - Oh come on, you can do better rhythm here.
00:51:247 (7) - Move this note to the next white tick.
00:51:688 (1) - Just no. Try to use two circle at 00:51:908 and 00:52:129 then add a slider to 00:52:350 - 00:52:791.
00:53:232 (2) - Repeat slider?
00:55:217 (2) - Delete this please, I know it goes after the vocal but this ways gives better rhyhtm.
01:01:173 (1,1) - Change it to a repeat slider.
01:08:673 (2,3) - Repeat the slider to fit to the vocal part?
01:12:203 (3,5) - Add one more note between them.
01:13:085 (1,2) - End both slider at the previous white tick.
Same placing is applies to this as well, but it can be a bit higher. Like 2 square for 1/2 and 2 lines during kiai.
[Platter]
Oh c'on there was no dash not even during kiai. o.o And just +4 combo is the difference between Salad and this. And 2,20 SV.............. thats way too high even 1,5 is high for Platter, I guess you will need to lower it but still I give you some advice.
00:23:476 (3) - Why? There is nothing to be repeated, please just add a circle to 00:23:696 if you really want something to be there.
00:25:240 - Man, here is a nice place for a repeat slider and you missed it.
00:27:226 - Add a cicle?
00:29:211 (1) - This spinner here is not really makes sense. I suggest you to delete it and map it out.
00:31:835 (2) - I really want to see something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1230857
00:34:262 (1,2,3,4) - Same as before.
00:44:409 - Again an important beat. Same as at 01:09:997 and 01:11:761.
[]
In general, you sometimes missed good beat in the song while they should be mapped even in Cup. Please do something about them.
And why is the beginning of the song is empty? Its clear and loud enough to be mapped, please do it. This is ctb, every hearable beat should be mapped out.
And at last some example how you can alter your sliders path to make them interesting. First, Second.
It is still a long journey is waiting for this set before it can be ranked. Good luck. o/
Oh, one more thing. Why Rain and Overdose is still in the set but with different title? If you want to keep, use the same title, or just simply delete them.
