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Topic Starter
Mira-san

Snookie wrote:

http://puu.sh/4zcLK.jpg

Loving the maps ;D hope it gets ranked ^0^
Thanks for the support :D ^^
FerreTrip
Pretty good! Just a few notes. I only actually played Easy (which I stopped partway through because too easy), Neormal, and Hard, watched the rest in Edit mode.

Easy: Very nice, though I quit partway due to it being too easy for me. It's nice to know people care about the Easy people.

Neormal: Very nice, indeed! A bit spinner-heavy, though.

Remap and World's End: I understand the concept you have here, making it very fast-paced and stuff and have those triple 16th notes everywhere, but...do you REALLY need so many of those triple 16th notes? They kinda muddy things up a little, though they do sound nice. Also, I appreciate how you use death streams very sparingly. Just...why the remap, I wonder? Also, uh...I understand the idea of a marathon map, but when it's this freaking intense, I think you could do to add another break or two ^^; I wanna compliment your use of colors in certain parts of the song (like the monochrome start and some other segments). I wouldn't have both monochrome things one after the other during the colored sequences, however, because it might confuse the player a bit.

AI: Cool map! Very nice start. Again, maybe lay off the triple 16ths a bit (though I really like how at the end, the new, syncopated rhythms catch people used to them off-guard, sneaky!). The death streams are more apparent here, though they mostly occur during the parts she's singing in 16th notes, so I guess it's alright. (To be honest, I think death streams are a stupid, cheap-ass way to make maps harder and exclude those of us who don't have rapid-fire fingers or prefer mouse only or tablet.) I like some of the formations, though.

Hard: This map was GREAT. You know why? Not only didn't you use death streams—see my above statement on those—but you made the map very hard, yet possible to sightread through if you're attentive enough, striking that balance of challenge required to make it a blast to play. I failed 3/4 through and played the rest in the editor, I admit, but it was still very fun. One more thing? You are a stylistic genius matching the colors to the sound sets like that. It took me a bit to notice, but when I did, it was AWESOME. Great job overall.

Also, forgot which one it was, but there were a few spots where, watching it play, you suddenly change the speed of the sliders to become very fast. Miiiiiight wanna change how fast they actually go, or it might be a tad on the unplayable side.

Overall, I would try and add another easier map (maybe one that fits into the "normal" category by the game's grading?), but so far, so very good! Love the stylistic elements a lot, great to see a map with polish like that. I really like how you mostly avoid cheap ways to make it hard and just make it plain, straight-up challenging and skill-based, not are-you-really-human type stuff, and how the markers are nice and big while still giving it a challenge. I would watch your spacing a tiny bit, but other than all that, I think this thing's pretty damn good! Nice work, Mira! Shootin' a star your way if I can!
Topic Starter
Mira-san

FerreTrip wrote:

Pretty good! Just a few notes. I only actually played Easy (which I stopped partway through because too easy), Neormal, and Hard, watched the rest in Edit mode.

Easy: Very nice, though I quit partway due to it being too easy for me. It's nice to know people care about the Easy people.
lol.

Neormal: Very nice, indeed! A bit spinner-heavy, though.
Spinner-heavy, i see. I'll try to contact neonat about that lol.

Remap and World's End: I understand the concept you have here, making it very fast-paced and stuff and have those triple 16th notes everywhere, but...do you REALLY need so many of those triple 16th notes? They kinda muddy things up a little, though they do sound nice. Also, I appreciate how you use death streams very sparingly. Just...why the remap, I wonder? Also, uh...I understand the idea of a marathon map, but when it's this freaking intense, I think you could do to add another break or two ^^; I wanna compliment your use of colors in certain parts of the song (like the monochrome start and some other segments). I wouldn't have both monochrome things one after the other during the colored sequences, however, because it might confuse the player a bit.
I made the remap since World's End needed a lot of polishing. Also, I intended to put where triples sound good .
The remap will definitely contain breaks. After I'm done remapping it I'll probably polish World's End and make it an Extra-like diff or something.

Also, The current World's End was a remap.



AI: Cool map! Very nice start. Again, maybe lay off the triple 16ths a bit (though I really like how at the end, the new, syncopated rhythms catch people used to them off-guard, sneaky!). The death streams are more apparent here, though they mostly occur during the parts she's singing in 16th notes, so I guess it's alright. (To be honest, I think death streams are a stupid, cheap-ass way to make maps harder and exclude those of us who don't have rapid-fire fingers or prefer mouse only or tablet.) I like some of the formations, though.
You could try asking -AI about that. ^^

Hard: This map was GREAT. You know why? Not only didn't you use death streams—see my above statement on those—but you made the map very hard, yet possible to sightread through if you're attentive enough, striking that balance of challenge required to make it a blast to play. I failed 3/4 through and played the rest in the editor, I admit, but it was still very fun. One more thing? You are a stylistic genius matching the colors to the sound sets like that. It took me a bit to notice, but when I did, it was AWESOME. Great job overall.
Thanks lol. :D For me I'm getting the grumd feel in this diff. Well I think this is the first time someone praised this map that much.

Also, forgot which one it was, but there were a few spots where, watching it play, you suddenly change the speed of the sliders to become very fast. Miiiiiight wanna change how fast they actually go, or it might be a tad on the unplayable side. World's End contained SV changes that are too fast. In the remap, I decided to make it easier.

Overall, I would try and add another easier map (maybe one that fits into the "normal" category by the game's grading?), but so far, so very good! Love the stylistic elements a lot, great to see a map with polish like that. I really like how you mostly avoid cheap ways to make it hard and just make it plain, straight-up challenging and skill-based, not are-you-really-human type stuff, and how the markers are nice and big while still giving it a challenge. I would watch your spacing a tiny bit, but other than all that, I think this thing's pretty damn good! Nice work, Mira! Shootin' a star your way if I can!
I could ask someone to make an Easy diff, but I'll think about it first.
Thanks for the feedback and the star! :D :)
sssyoyo
I like this map so much.

Rank this PLZ!!!
happy623
Topic Starter
Mira-san

happy623 wrote:

Thanks for the star! :D
FrzR
Remodded my diff.

Link

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Topic Starter
Mira-san

Fr33z3R wrote:

Remodded my diff.

Link

;w;
Updated.
kamisamaaa
from my queue~I only mod the world's end~
really a good map~ :)
[my mod]
01:06:746 (4) - maybe add a finish?
02:59:553 (6,7) - why you change hitsound here? delete the greenline 02:59:553 here maybe better
03:08:852 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - you use so many whistle here , but why not use the same hitsound on 01:38:325 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - they have same rythm
03:55:167 (1) - remove the whistle on the slider body
02:37:624 (4) - add a finish
00:06:396 maybe you can use hit-normal here and only use this hitsound at the kiai time
03:13:764 (9) - maybe make a blanket with 8 ? like this 03:30:518 (7) - begin at the white line?

hope this mod can help you (I'm not a good modder :o and english is also poor...if you have something understand you can PM me)
Topic Starter
Mira-san

kamisamaaa wrote:

from my queue~I only mod the world's end~
really a good map~ :)
[my mod]
01:06:746 (4) - maybe add a finish? ~Added.
02:59:553 (6,7) - why you change hitsound here? delete the greenline 02:59:553 here maybe better ~This is intended. I'll keep it lol.
03:08:852 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - you use so many whistle here , but why not use the same hitsound on 01:38:325 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - they have same rythm ~well at the 2nd kiai time the bass is quite err, louder. :D
03:55:167 (1) - remove the whistle on the slider body ~fixed.
02:37:624 (4) - add a finish ~added.
00:06:396 maybe you can use hit-normal here and only use this hitsound at the kiai time ~I changed it on that part. I kept the bamboo sounds on other parts.
03:13:764 (9) - maybe make a blanket with 8 ? like this ~fixed
03:30:518 (7) - begin at the white line? ~ops. this is an error. fixed

hope this mod can help you (I'm not a good modder :o and english is also poor...if you have something understand you can PM me)
Thanks a lot! :DDD
- Miomio Chii -
hihi mira ! i mod yours first !
-------------------------------------------------
-General-
- OK
[Fr33z3R's Easy]
01:21:466 (3) - add whistle for the center ?
02:43:923 (1,2,3) - blanket it better

03:22:870 - to 03:42:519 - too softly, nearly silent. ><
try 60 ~ 70%?

04:06:379 (3) - down a little
[Hard]
00:31:643 (10) - nc, 00:32:169 (1) - remove nc
00:48:660 (9) - nc, 00:49:362 (1) - remove nc
00:49:888 (4) - nc ?
00:54:099 (8) - nc, 00:54:801 (1) - remove nc
01:16:730 (9) - nc, 01:17:608 (1) - remove nc
01:19:888 (8) - nc, 01:21:467 (1) - remove nc
01:22:169 (3) - nc
01:33:572 (9) - nc, 01:33:923 (1) - remove nc
01:39:011 (9) - nc, 01:40:590 (1) - remove nc
01:41:994 (4) - nc
02:07:081 (9) - nc, 02:07:958 (1) - remove nc
02:12:695 (8) - nc, 02:14:099 (1) - remove nc ?

02:19:713 (1,2,3,4) - del ?
(i think rhythm start from 02:21:116 - here is better)

02:29:888 (8) - nc, 02:30:765 (1) - remove nc
02:32:520 (6) - nc, 02:34:274 (1) - remove nc, 02:35:151 (4) - nc
02:40:765 (11) - nc, 02:41:116 (1) - remove nc
02:43:748 (8) - nc ?
02:47:608 (10) - nc?
03:03:397 (9) - nc, 03:03:748 (1) - remove nc
03:08:836 (9) - nc, 03:10:415 (1) - remove nc
03:11:819 (4) - nc
03:45:502 (6) - nc, 03:47:081 (1) - remove nc
03:48:134 (4) - nc
03:53:923 (9) - nc
03:55:853 (1) - remove nc, 03:56:555 (3) - nc
04:05:151 (8) - nc
04:10:765 (9) - nc, 04:11:818 (1) - remove nc
04:13:572 (6) - nc, 04:15:678 (1) - remove nc
04:16:379 (3) - nc

any hitsound ?

this diff you are not map good >< (rhythm a little ok)
umm your diffs need all end at same time ><
[World's End]
01:05:167 (4,5,6) - here's rhythm is a little strange
02:12:536 (9) - up and right a grid
[AI]
seems ok

End of this mod,
hope it could help you !
Good luck mira ! :)
Topic Starter
Mira-san

- Miomio Chii - wrote:

hihi mira ! i mod yours first !
-------------------------------------------------
-General-
- OK
[Fr33z3R's Easy]
01:21:466 (3) - add whistle for the center ? ~added. (will do for Fr33z3R)
02:43:923 (1,2,3) - blanket it better ~fixed

03:22:870 - to 03:42:519 - too softly, nearly silent. ><
try 60 ~ 70%? ~left this as is.

04:06:379 (3) - down a little ~fixed.

[Hard]
00:31:643 (10) - nc, 00:32:169 (1) - remove nc
00:48:660 (9) - nc, 00:49:362 (1) - remove nc
00:49:888 (4) - nc ?
00:54:099 (8) - nc, 00:54:801 (1) - remove nc
01:16:730 (9) - nc, 01:17:608 (1) - remove nc
01:19:888 (8) - nc, 01:21:467 (1) - remove nc
01:22:169 (3) - nc
01:33:572 (9) - nc, 01:33:923 (1) - remove nc
01:39:011 (9) - nc, 01:40:590 (1) - remove nc
01:41:994 (4) - nc
02:07:081 (9) - nc, 02:07:958 (1) - remove nc
02:12:695 (8) - nc, 02:14:099 (1) - remove nc ?

02:19:713 (1,2,3,4) - del ?
(i think rhythm start from 02:21:116 - here is better)

02:29:888 (8) - nc, 02:30:765 (1) - remove nc
02:32:520 (6) - nc, 02:34:274 (1) - remove nc, 02:35:151 (4) - nc
02:40:765 (11) - nc, 02:41:116 (1) - remove nc
02:43:748 (8) - nc ?
02:47:608 (10) - nc?
03:03:397 (9) - nc, 03:03:748 (1) - remove nc
03:08:836 (9) - nc, 03:10:415 (1) - remove nc
03:11:819 (4) - nc
03:45:502 (6) - nc, 03:47:081 (1) - remove nc
03:48:134 (4) - nc
03:53:923 (9) - nc
03:55:853 (1) - remove nc, 03:56:555 (3) - nc
04:05:151 (8) - nc
04:10:765 (9) - nc, 04:11:818 (1) - remove nc
04:13:572 (6) - nc, 04:15:678 (1) - remove nc
04:16:379 (3) - nc

any hitsound ?

this diff you are not map good >< (rhythm a little ok)
umm your diffs need all end at same time ><

~ I modded this heavily. Hitsounds and rhythm errors.
[World's End]
01:05:167 (4,5,6) - here's rhythm is a little strange ~leaving this
02:12:536 (9) - up and right a grid ~fixed
[AI]
seems ok ~lol ok

End of this mod,
hope it could help you !
Good luck mira ! :)
Thanks!!!! :)
RandF
From my queue~

[General]
  1. Airtist: it is "ROCKETMAN" ,isn't it? (Genjitsutouhi-P is the airtist of the original)
  2. Tags suggetion
    "ryo fukawa"
  3. You should conform "offset" and "AudioLead-in" among all diffs
  4. where is .osb file? I cannot find your SB (very sad... :( )
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:853 (10) - I prefer to end at 00:06:029
  2. 00:11:116 (10) - I prefer the following
  3. 00:30:415 (7,8) - avoid overlap
  4. 00:49:713 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how about unifroming DS? (and stack 00:50:941 (6) - on 00:49:362 (3) - )
    SPOILER

    176,80,49713,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    176,80,49801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    176,80,49888,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    72,200,50239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    208,280,50590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    312,160,50941,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  5. 01:00:941 (4) - I prefer the following
  6. 01:06:379 (1) - start at 01:06:730-
  7. 01:25:327 (2) - curve more like 01:24:976 (1) -
  8. 01:26:204 (5) - I prefer to delete
  9. 01:27:608 (1) - start at 01:27:783
  10. 02:21:643 (6,7,8,9,10) - conformDS
  11. 02:35:327 (2,3) - avoid overlap
  12. 02:40:064 (8,9,10,1) - avoid overlap. increase DS
  13. 02:50:590 (4,5) - i prefer this (same as 02:49:187 (1,2) - )
  14. 03:23:046- change Kiai-Time end to 03:22:871
  15. 03:23:222 (1) - delete
  16. 03:39:362 - start at 03:39:713- ?
  17. 03:54:976 (4) - move to x:317 y:168 (stack correctly)
  18. 01:33:413 (1) - Ctrl+G
[World's End]
  1. 01:26:922 (4) - I prefer symmetric curved slider about 01:27:273 (5) -
  2. 01:40:080 (9,10,2) - how about stack?
  3. 02:10:431 (4,7) - stack correctly on 02:09:027 (5,6,7) -
  4. 02:32:185 (7) - stack slider's head on the head of 02:33:238 (5) -
  5. 02:34:992 (7) - ^ of 02:33:852 (1,2) -
  6. 02:50:254 (8) - Object isn't snapped!
  7. 03:04:290 (7,1) -avoid overlap
  8. 03:24:466 (4) - the position is not good. I suggest to move to x:336 y:144, for example
  9. 03:57:975 (1) - move to x:151 y:262 (stack correctly)
[Fr33z3R's Easy]
  1. For easy-diff, DS is too large, imo. ( I think less than 1.3x is better)
  2. 01:17:957 (4,5) - mistake DS?
  3. 01:31:291~01:31:642- add slider
  4. 02:06:029 (2,1) - stack correctly
[Neormal]
  1. 00:55:501 (3,4) - how about making parallel ?
  2. 02:51:993 (1,2) - ^
  3. 03:03:922 (2) - i prefer symmetric curve slider about 03:03:221 (1) -
  4. 03:17:782 (2,3) - how about this rhythm?
  5. 03:41:115 (3,4) - how about this?
[AI]
  1. 00:15:167 (2) - I prefer symmetric curved slider about 00:14:817 (1) -
  2. 01:22:010 (8) - NC?
  3. 01:30:606 (1) - avoid overlap with previous stream
  4. 01:40:781 (4,5) - Ctrl+G for smoother cursor moving
  5. 01:41:308 (7,8) - ^
  6. 01:41:308 (7,8,9) - I prefer regular triangle in common with previous pattern
  7. 01:48:852 (1,2,3,4,5) - make a neat star!
    SPOILER

    429,117,108852,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    272,201,109027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    449,227,109203,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    320,101,109378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    352,280,109553,2,0,B|332:288|332:288|336:300|336:300|324:296|324:296|324:308|324:308|312:304|312:304|312:316|312:316|300:312|300:312|300:332|300:332|288:324|288:324|276:316|276:316|260:328|260:328|240:320|240:320,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  8. 02:57:097 (1,1) - similar color. I suggest to select other color
  9. 02:59:027 (8) - Object isn't snapped!
  10. 03:06:746 (3) - end at 03:06:922
  11. 03:42:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - how about this?
  12. 03:50:782 (8,1) - stack correctly
  13. 03:50:782 (8,1,2,3,4,1) - regular pentagon~
    SPOILER

    256,96,230782,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    339,60,230957,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    398,128,231132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    351,206,231308,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    264,185,231483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,96,231659,5,0,0:0:0:0:
  14. 04:06:045 (4,1) - stack correctly
if you finish SB, I'm willing to do lyrics check ;)
~Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Mira-san

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]
  1. Airtist: it is "ROCKETMAN" ,isn't it? (Genjitsutouhi-P is the airtist of the original) ~I'll leave this. For example: This map didn't put REDALiCE as it's artist. But this has crossed my mind. I'll rethink about it. I'll probably consider it if more people suggest it.
  2. Tags suggetion
    "ryo fukawa" ~mmk
  3. You should conform "offset" and "AudioLead-in" among all diffs ~hmmm...
  4. where is .osb file? I cannot find your SB (very sad... :( ) ~sb is reuploaded. i noticed it this afternoon.
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:853 (10) - I prefer to end at 00:06:029 ~fixed.
  2. 00:11:116 (10) - I prefer the following ~fixed.
  3. 00:30:415 (7,8) - avoid overlap ~they aren't
  4. 00:49:713 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how about unifroming DS? (and stack 00:50:941 (6) - on 00:49:362 (3) - )~fixed. manually edited.
    SPOILER

    176,80,49713,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    176,80,49801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    176,80,49888,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    72,200,50239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    208,280,50590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    312,160,50941,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  5. 01:00:941 (4) - I prefer the following ~ this has been changed in the last mod.
  6. 01:06:379 (1) - start at 01:06:730- ~fixed.
  7. 01:25:327 (2) - curve more like 01:24:976 (1) ~fixed.
  8. 01:26:204 (5) - I prefer to delete ~nah
  9. 01:27:608 (1) - start at 01:27:783 ~fixed.
  10. 02:21:643 (6,7,8,9,10) - conformDS ~fixed.
  11. 02:35:327 (2,3) - avoid overlap ~fixed.
  12. 02:40:064 (8,9,10,1) - avoid overlap. increase DS ~fixed.
  13. 02:50:590 (4,5) - i prefer this (same as 02:49:187 (1,2) - ) ~nah
  14. 03:23:046- change Kiai-Time end to 03:22:871 ~fixed.
  15. 03:23:222 (1) - delete ~fixed within last update.
  16. 03:39:362 - start at 03:39:713- ? ~fixed.
  17. 03:54:976 (4) - move to x:317 y:168 (stack correctly) ~fixed within last update.
  18. 01:33:413 (1) - Ctrl+G
~wat
[World's End]
  1. 01:26:922 (4) - I prefer symmetric curved slider about 01:27:273 (5) - ~fixed.
  2. 01:40:080 (9,10,2) - how about stack? ~wat
  3. 02:10:431 (4,7) - stack correctly on 02:09:027 (5,6,7) - ~fixed.
  4. 02:32:185 (7) - stack slider's head on the head of 02:33:238 (5) - ~nah
  5. 02:34:992 (7) - ^ of 02:33:852 (1,2) - ~fixed.
  6. 02:50:254 (8) - Object isn't snapped! ~wat. AImod is wrong.
  7. 03:04:290 (7,1) -avoid overlap ~intended
  8. 03:24:466 (4) - the position is not good. I suggest to move to x:336 y:144, for example ~fixed.
  9. 03:57:975 (1) - move to x:151 y:262 (stack correctly)
~fixed.

if you finish SB, I'm willing to do lyrics check ;) ~oh i'm sure it's accurate at this time.
~Good Luck~
Thanks! ;)
SapphireGhost
Alright, let's do this.

General
- Timing is inconsistent between difficulties. I think putting the first offset at 782 for all of them works best. After fixing the timing, make sure all kiai sections are also consistent.
- Change the tags to "wowaka Vocaloid Hatsune Miku Megurine Luka Fr33z3R neonat _AI" for all difficulties. "rocketman remix" is in the title already and can be removed from tags. Megurine Luka is another vocaloid used in the original song, and "Vocaloid" is another relevant tag.
- Tick Rate 2 is appropriate for all difficulties of this set and would keep the flow going.
- Consider keeping the ending time the same for all difficulties. There should be a point that makes enough sense for all of the difficulties to agree.
- AudioLeadIn is slightly inconsistent between difficulties. In the .osu files, you could change them all to 2012, the year the world was scheduled to end.

World's End
- Generally the map flows well, looks decent and has some good ideas. Keep working on new and creative patterns to keep the map interesting, and keeping your new combo placement more consistent. Still not bad, and I will look forward seeing your progress as a mapper in the future.
00:45:167 (9) - Try to change the pattern to keep this from going into the HP bar too much.
01:19:378 (2) - This note marks the start of a new measure and a stream and would be a good place to put a new combo.
01:43:589 (2,3) - Strange spacing here, it might be better to space it out more intuitively.
02:52:624 (1) - Starting a kickslider on a blue tick here is a little bit strange to play.
02:54:992 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try to make this part follow the song more clearly.
03:22:887 (1) - This slider would look better if the second curved part was more smooth.
03:42:536 - I think a pattern like this would be cool here. The first two (1,2) patterns are stacked and then the next slider blankets the first stack and the following stream blankets the second stack like this.

AI
- It would be good to start this difficulty at the same time as the others for consistency, and it makes sense.
00:53:764 (5) - This is a tricky note because the player has to wait over a beat to hit it. Adding a note at 00:53:589
02:59:027 (8) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:59:729 (10) - I think the shape of this slider could be more visually appealing (add some more curves to balance out the linear bits).
03:44:992 (1) - Too close to the previous note, so it is tempting to hit it earlier than it should be. Spacing it further away should make it better.

Hard
01:44:801 (2,3) - Tricky pattern to read because of the stack. Try to change the pattern so the intention is more clear.
02:50:590 (4) - Since the previous kickslider had one fewer repeat, this becomes tricky and unintuitive to read. Try to keep it consistent with the previous one.

And the lower difficulties look alright. I'll be fine re-checking this once you're happy with the mapset and done with fixes. As a bonus note, if you have time to check my map as well I'd appreciate it. Thanks in advance!
Topic Starter
Mira-san

SapphireGhost wrote:

Alright, let's do this.

General
- Timing is inconsistent between difficulties. I think putting the first offset at 782 for all of them works best. After fixing the timing, make sure all kiai sections are also consistent.
- Change the tags to "wowaka Vocaloid Hatsune Miku Megurine Luka Fr33z3R neonat _AI" for all difficulties. "rocketman remix" is in the title already and can be removed from tags. Megurine Luka is another vocaloid used in the original song, and "Vocaloid" is another relevant tag.
- Tick Rate 2 is appropriate for all difficulties of this set and would keep the flow going.
- Consider keeping the ending time the same for all difficulties. There should be a point that makes enough sense for all of the difficulties to agree.
- AudioLeadIn is slightly inconsistent between difficulties. In the .osu files, you could change them all to 2012, the year the world was scheduled to end.

~all fixed

World's End
- Generally the map flows well, looks decent and has some good ideas. Keep working on new and creative patterns to keep the map interesting, and keeping your new combo placement more consistent. Still not bad, and I will look forward seeing your progress as a mapper in the future. ~thanks :D
00:45:167 (9) - Try to change the pattern to keep this from going into the HP bar too much. ~fixed
01:19:378 (2) - This note marks the start of a new measure and a stream and would be a good place to put a new combo. ~fixed
01:43:589 (2,3) - Strange spacing here, it might be better to space it out more intuitively. ~this is intended :v
02:52:624 (1) - Starting a kickslider on a blue tick here is a little bit strange to play. ~fixed
02:54:992 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try to make this part follow the song more clearly. ~i think it's fine lel.
03:22:887 (1) - This slider would look better if the second curved part was more smooth. ~fixed
03:42:536 - I think a pattern like this would be cool here. The first two (1,2) patterns are stacked and then the next slider blankets the first stack and the following stream blankets the second stack like this. ~fixed

AI
- It would be good to start this difficulty at the same time as the others for consistency, and it makes sense.
00:53:764 (5) - This is a tricky note because the player has to wait over a beat to hit it. Adding a note at 00:53:589
02:59:027 (8) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:59:729 (10) - I think the shape of this slider could be more visually appealing (add some more curves to balance out the linear bits).
03:44:992 (1) - Too close to the previous note, so it is tempting to hit it earlier than it should be. Spacing it further away should make it better.

~leaving this for -AI's mod. ^^

Hard
01:44:801 (2,3) - Tricky pattern to read because of the stack. Try to change the pattern so the intention is more clear.
02:50:590 (4) - Since the previous kickslider had one fewer repeat, this becomes tricky and unintuitive to read. Try to keep it consistent with the previous one.
~all fixed.

And the lower difficulties look alright. I'll be fine re-checking this once you're happy with the mapset and done with fixes. As a bonus note, if you have time to check my map as well I'd appreciate it. Thanks in advance!
Thanks! I will :3.
_AI

RandomEffect wrote:

[AI]
  1. 00:15:167 (2) - I prefer symmetric curved slider about 00:14:817 (1) -
  2. 01:22:010 (8) - NC?
  3. 01:30:606 (1) - avoid overlap with previous stream
  4. 01:40:781 (4,5) - Ctrl+G for smoother cursor moving
  5. 01:41:308 (7,8) - ^
  6. 01:41:308 (7,8,9) - I prefer regular triangle in common with previous pattern
  7. 01:48:852 (1,2,3,4,5) - make a neat star!
    SPOILER

    429,117,108852,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    272,201,109027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    449,227,109203,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    320,101,109378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    352,280,109553,2,0,B|332:288|332:288|336:300|336:300|324:296|324:296|324:308|324:308|312:304|312:304|312:316|312:316|300:312|300:312|300:332|300:332|288:324|288:324|276:316|276:316|260:328|260:328|240:320|240:320,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  8. 02:57:097 (1,1) - similar color. I suggest to select other color
  9. 02:59:027 (8) - Object isn't snapped!
  10. 03:06:746 (3) - end at 03:06:922
  11. 03:42:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - how about this?
  12. 03:50:782 (8,1) - stack correctly
  13. 03:50:782 (8,1,2,3,4,1) - regular pentagon~
    SPOILER

    256,96,230782,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    339,60,230957,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    398,128,231132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    351,206,231308,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    264,185,231483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,96,231659,5,0,0:0:0:0:
  14. 04:06:045 (4,1) - stack correctly
~Good Luck~

SapphireGhost wrote:

Alright, let's do this.

AI
- It would be good to start this difficulty at the same time as the others for consistency, and it makes sense.
00:53:764 (5) - This is a tricky note because the player has to wait over a beat to hit it. Adding a note at 00:53:589
02:59:027 (8) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:59:729 (10) - I think the shape of this slider could be more visually appealing (add some more curves to balance out the linear bits).
03:44:992 (1) - Too close to the previous note, so it is tempting to hit it earlier than it should be. Spacing it further away should make it better.
Thx :3 everything is fixed~

Mira-san : http://puu.sh/5oTMA.osu
Topic Starter
Mira-san

_AI wrote:

Thx :3 everything is fixed~

Mira-san : http://puu.sh/5oTMA.osu
Updated.
Asagi
:!:
konting tyaga n lng mira :3
Topic Starter
Mira-san

-Asagi wrote:

:!:
konting tyaga n lng mira :3
lolololol
UnitedWeSin
Hello. :)
From my random queue.

I see SG is checking this already so I'll just leave opinions.

[General]
  1. I think there are no places where you use NC:2 or NC:3 or SC:3 yet you have custom hitsound files for those sample sets in the folder. It's unrankable to have unused files in the folder, if you aren't using hitsound files in these sets, you need to delete them.
  2. Title and Artist unicode have been corrupted in AI's diff. They need to be copied again.
  3. Preview time is not snapped. It would be nice to snap it to 01:30:626 again.
  4. I'm fairly certain timing is not correct. There is an obvious offset switch at 00:12:010. I think a red line at 00:12:030 is necessary, maybe more after that. We should try asking for opinions on the timing.
  5. 04:28:852 (1) - I highly suggest to delete this spinner in Easy, Hard, and World's End. Coming from a player's point of view, it's very boring to have a 10 second break at the very end of the map only waiting to play a spinner. It's much better to end the map at 04:19:027.
  6. Inconsistency in widescreen storyboard support. World's End diff is the only one with the option checked, please uncheck if you don't want to use it.
[World's End]
  1. 00:13:413 (1) - It feels too close to the 00:13:062 (4). Maybe you can make a nicer pattern if you stack the 1 on the head of the 00:12:711 (3) instead of the tail.
  2. 00:27:994 (2,3,4,5) - You break your pattern of triplets here and it's confusing. I suggest to keep following that pattern and place the triplet at 00:27:974. If you listen to the music, the triplet is actually at 00:27:974.
  3. 00:49:223 (2) - This slider isn't fitting with the music because the repeat is on the blue tick. The vocals are not hitting there, so it would be better to stay out of 1/4. Remove the repeat and shorten the slider by 1/4. You can try a rhythm like this with a 1/2 slider at 00:49:924 to follow vocals:
  4. 01:04:837 (3,4) - This is a very confusing rhythm because you skip over this important downbeat at 01:05:363. You can make a much more intuitive pattern if you move 01:05:187 (4,5) forward by 1/2 and add a note at 01:05:187. Try this:
  5. 01:19:398 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Try to maintain a constant spacing throughout the stream. As you can see in the middle of stream 01:19:836 (6,7,8,9) the spacing starts to decrease. It makes your stream look messy.
  6. 01:26:942 (4) - Try instead a 1/2 slider with a repeat here. I think it would fit more closely with the music:
  7. 01:27:644 - How about adding a triplet here. I think it fits well with the music here. Also you can try making more spacing to the 01:28:082 (2,3) double. It will make it much nicer to read the 1/4 rhythm. If you do, create more spacing between 01:28:521 (5,6,7) as well.
  8. 01:43:609 (2,3) - This looks like 1/4 spacing, please increase the spacing between 2 and 3.
  9. 02:52:360 (5,1) - This is very difficult to see as 1/4. It might be nicer if you move this to 02:52:711 and remove a repeat.
  10. 03:13:433 (8,9) - Try to wrap the 9 around the 8 more cleanly. Here is code if you need help:
    Example + Code

    356,192,193082,2,0,P|297:211|236:208,1,125,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    171,103,193433,2,0,P|226:132|288:140,1,125
    340,60,193784,2,0,B|248:88|220:44|220:44|144:-4|88:80,1,250
  11. 03:30:255 (6,7) - Use 1.2 spacing here would look cleaner.
  12. 04:05:869 (6,7,8,9) - I recommend that you replace these doubles with two 1/4 sliders instead because this is the first appearance of this rhythm. Using 1/4 sliders will make it easier to catch.
  13. 04:09:729 (3,4,5,6,7) - Clean up the spacing in the stream there, it's very uneven.
For the most part the diff is nice to play and has good flow. The major problem are your rhythms. Some of you triplets feel very randomly placed, and you ignore key triplets in the music. Generally it is a bad idea to place triplets starting on the white tick because the last note of the triplet is the one that is accented. This means that the red tick will be accented which is not what is happening in the music most of the time.
Triplets like 01:45:080 (2,3) that are ending on the red tick make really no sense. Just as an example, if you listen closely to the music there, the triplet is actually at 01:45:167.

[AI]

  1. You've used 100% volume through this entire map. Try to add variations in volume to fit better with the music. For example, and the very beginning, 100% volume is var too much.
  2. 00:08:676 (5) - Move it up one grid to make more even spacing.
  3. 00:13:413 (1,2,3) - Even out the spacing in your triplet.
  4. 01:12:887 (10) - The slider with a repeat in 1/4 is unfitting here because the repeat is not hitting with anything in the music. I suggest remove repeat and extend slider by 1/4. Then add slider or circle at 01:13:413.
  5. 01:27:799 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythms isn't fitting very well with the music, may I suggest some different ones?
    Example

    Triplet at 01:27:624 with 3/4 slider on downbeat.

    Or without slider. You can make nice jump between 3 and 4.
  6. 01:30:606 - I think you want to start the kiai here and not at 01:30:431.
  7. 02:37:624 (7) - I believe sliders like this were made unrankable because the speed of the slider changes towards the end. You can read all about it in this thread: t/158947&start=0
  8. 02:51:308 (9,10,11,1,2,3,4) - You can make a much more intuitive pattern if you delete 02:51:308 (9) and move 02:51:396 (10,11,1,2,3,4) to the left 1/4. That way the sliders will be clicked along with changes in the vocals at 02:51:308 and 02:51:659. Then add a note at 02:52:360. Like this:
  9. 02:55:869 (1) - Remove NC for consistency with 01:26:045 (2).
  10. 02:57:273 (1) - ^ same idea.
  11. 02:57:624 (1,2,3,4) - Same concern as 01:27:799 (1,2,3,4). Your rhythm isn't fitting well with the music.
  12. 02:59:027 (8) - NC.
  13. 02:59:729 (10) - I think it's really difficult not to slider break on this slider. 2.0 SV is too much imo, and the slider feels awkward because it extends past the cut off for the vocals here. I think you should try a shorter slider or smaller SV.
I'm concerned about rankability of the crunched sliders like01:49:553 (5) and 02:37:624 (7). See what SapphireGhost has to say about it.
Other than that it's a creative map.

[Hard]

  1. The 50% volume soft sample set portions of this diff are too quiet. I can barely hear the hitsounds. I think you should raise the volume of those sections to be more like your Insane diff.
  2. 00:04:992 (7,8,9,10) - Just a suggestion here. I think it would be much more fitting if you removed two repeats from the 7 and added a note at 00:05:343 then a 1/1 slider at 00:05:694. That way the player clicks along with the vocals properly.
  3. 00:11:659 (11,12) - Another suggestion, switch the position of these two is more fitting. The beat at 00:11:834 is very light so the slider ending there is fitting, and the beat at 00:12:010 is super heavy so clicking feels much better than the slider end.
  4. 01:22:185 (3) - I suggest NC here to make the player more aware that this and the 01:22:711 (4) have more repeats than the 1 and 2. Maybe remove NC from 01:21:483 (1) if you do so.
Spacing is pretty inconsistent at times but it's not so bad.

[Neormal]

  1. 01:30:606 - Kiai beginning is unsnapped.
  2. 03:22:870 - I think you want to delete this timing section because it's ending kiai early and is unsnapped.
Solid

[Fr33z3R's Easy]

  1. 00:23:238 (1) - Remove finish from the end, it seems extra in your pattern.
  2. 02:44:992 (2,3) - Minor spacing error, it's just a bit far.
  3. 03:22:887 - Unsnapped kiai ending.
Also solid.

I think the maps need more polishing in rhythms and hitsounds. Your choice of hitsounding in Hard was completely different than in World's End which I found to be odd, maybe SapphireGhost will disagree.

Well I hope this is helpful to you. Good luck. :) :)
Topic Starter
Mira-san

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hello. :)
From my random queue.

I see SG is checking this already so I'll just leave opinions.

[General]
  1. I think there are no places where you use NC:2 or NC:3 or SC:3 yet you have custom hitsound files for those sample sets in the folder. It's unrankable to have unused files in the folder, if you aren't using hitsound files in these sets, you need to delete them. ~fixed
  2. Title and Artist unicode have been corrupted in AI's diff. They need to be copied again. ~fixed
  3. Preview time is not snapped. It would be nice to snap it to 01:30:626 again. ~hmmm.
  4. I'm fairly certain timing is not correct. There is an obvious offset switch at 00:12:010. I think a red line at 00:12:030 is necessary, maybe more after that. We should try asking for opinions on the timing. ~we should. I wouldn't put more timing points unless it's been confirmed.
  5. 04:28:852 (1) - I highly suggest to delete this spinner in Easy, Hard, and World's End. Coming from a player's point of view, it's very boring to have a 10 second break at the very end of the map only waiting to play a spinner. It's much better to end the map at 04:19:027. ~I am a player myself and I don't think waiting for 10 seconds is that boring, but then I will try to consider it after I ask for opinions about it.
  6. Inconsistency in widescreen storyboard support. World's End diff is the only one with the option checked, please uncheck if you don't want to use it.
~fixed

[World's End]
  1. 00:13:413 (1) - It feels too close to the 00:13:062 (4). Maybe you can make a nicer pattern if you stack the 1 on the head of the 00:12:711 (3) instead of the tail. ~fixed
  2. 00:27:994 (2,3,4,5) - You break your pattern of triplets here and it's confusing. I suggest to keep following that pattern and place the triplet at 00:27:974. If you listen to the music, the triplet is actually at 00:27:974. ~fixed
  3. 00:49:223 (2) - This slider isn't fitting with the music because the repeat is on the blue tick. The vocals are not hitting there, so it would be better to stay out of 1/4. Remove the repeat and shorten the slider by 1/4. You can try a rhythm like this with a 1/2 slider at 00:49:924 to follow vocals:
    ~fixed
  4. 01:04:837 (3,4) - This is a very confusing rhythm because you skip over this important downbeat at 01:05:363. You can make a much more intuitive pattern if you move 01:05:187 (4,5) forward by 1/2 and add a note at 01:05:187. Try this:
    ~fixed
  5. 01:19:398 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Try to maintain a constant spacing throughout the stream. As you can see in the middle of stream 01:19:836 (6,7,8,9) the spacing starts to decrease. It makes your stream look messy. ~fixed
  6. 01:26:942 (4) - Try instead a 1/2 slider with a repeat here. I think it would fit more closely with the music:
    ~fixed
  7. 01:27:644 - How about adding a triplet here. I think it fits well with the music here. Also you can try making more spacing to the 01:28:082 (2,3) double. It will make it much nicer to read the 1/4 rhythm. If you do, create more spacing between 01:28:521 (5,6,7) as well. ~fixed
  8. 01:43:609 (2,3) - This looks like 1/4 spacing, please increase the spacing between 2 and 3. ~since someone else told me to, ok then. :v
  9. 02:52:360 (5,1) - This is very difficult to see as 1/4. It might be nicer if you move this to 02:52:711 and remove a repeat.
    ~fixed
  10. 03:13:433 (8,9) - Try to wrap the 9 around the 8 more cleanly. Here is code if you need help:
    Example + Code

    356,192,193082,2,0,P|297:211|236:208,1,125,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    171,103,193433,2,0,P|226:132|288:140,1,125
    340,60,193784,2,0,B|248:88|220:44|220:44|144:-4|88:80,1,250
    ~fixed
  11. 03:30:255 (6,7) - Use 1.2 spacing here would look cleaner. ~fixed
  12. 04:05:869 (6,7,8,9) - I recommend that you replace these doubles with two 1/4 sliders instead because this is the first appearance of this rhythm. Using 1/4 sliders will make it easier to catch. ~fixed
  13. 04:09:729 (3,4,5,6,7) - Clean up the spacing in the stream there, it's very uneven. ~fixed


For the most part the diff is nice to play and has good flow. The major problem are your rhythms. Some of you triplets feel very randomly placed, and you ignore key triplets in the music. Generally it is a bad idea to place triplets starting on the white tick because the last note of the triplet is the one that is accented. This means that the red tick will be accented which is not what is happening in the music most of the time.
Triplets like 01:45:080 (2,3) that are ending on the red tick make really no sense. Just as an example, if you listen closely to the music there, the triplet is actually at 01:45:167.
~You could have given more examples. I checked for triples that end on red ticks, Fixed some.

[Hard]

  1. The 50% volume soft sample set portions of this diff are too quiet. I can barely hear the hitsounds. I think you should raise the volume of those sections to be more like your Insane diff. ~fixed
  2. 00:04:992 (7,8,9,10) - Just a suggestion here. I think it would be much more fitting if you removed two repeats from the 7 and added a note at 00:05:343 then a 1/1 slider at 00:05:694. That way the player clicks along with the vocals properly.
    ~fixed
  3. 00:11:659 (11,12) - Another suggestion, switch the position of these two is more fitting. The beat at 00:11:834 is very light so the slider ending there is fitting, and the beat at 00:12:010 is super heavy so clicking feels much better than the slider end.
    ~fixed
  4. 01:22:185 (3) - I suggest NC here to make the player more aware that this and the 01:22:711 (4) have more repeats than the 1 and 2. Maybe remove NC from 01:21:483 (1) if you do so.
~fixed

Spacing is pretty inconsistent at times but it's not so bad.

[Neormal]

  1. 01:30:606 - Kiai beginning is unsnapped.
  2. 03:22:870 - I think you want to delete this timing section because it's ending kiai early and is unsnapped.
Solid

~all fixed on neonat's behalf

[Fr33z3R's Easy]

  1. 00:23:238 (1) - Remove finish from the end, it seems extra in your pattern.
  2. 02:44:992 (2,3) - Minor spacing error, it's just a bit far.
  3. 03:22:887 - Unsnapped kiai ending.
    ~all fixed on Fr33z3R's behalf
Also solid.

I think the maps need more polishing in rhythms and hitsounds. Your choice of hitsounding in Hard was completely different than in World's End which I found to be odd, maybe SapphireGhost will disagree.

Well I hope this is helpful to you. Good luck. :) :)
Thanks! :D
_AI

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hello. :)
From my random queue.
:?
I see SG is checking this already so I'll just leave opinions.

[AI]

  1. You've used 100% volume through this entire map. Try to add variations in volume to fit better with the music. For example, and the very beginning, 100% volume is var too much.
  2. 00:08:676 (5) - Move it up one grid to make more even spacing.
  3. 00:13:413 (1,2,3) - Even out the spacing in your triplet.
  4. 01:12:887 (10) - The slider with a repeat in 1/4 is unfitting here because the repeat is not hitting with anything in the music. I suggest remove repeat and extend slider by 1/4. Then add slider or circle at 01:13:413.
  5. 01:27:799 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythms isn't fitting very well with the music, may I suggest some different ones?
    Example

    Triplet at 01:27:624 with 3/4 slider on downbeat.

    Or without slider. You can make nice jump between 3 and 4.
  6. 01:30:606 - I think you want to start the kiai here and not at 01:30:431.
  7. 02:37:624 (7) - I believe sliders like this were made unrankable because the speed of the slider changes towards the end. You can read all about it in this thread: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/158947&start=0
  8. 02:51:308 (9,10,11,1,2,3,4) - You can make a much more intuitive pattern if you delete 02:51:308 (9) and move 02:51:396 (10,11,1,2,3,4) to the left 1/4. That way the sliders will be clicked along with changes in the vocals at 02:51:308 and 02:51:659. Then add a note at 02:52:360. Like this:
  9. 02:55:869 (1) - Remove NC for consistency with 01:26:045 (2).
  10. 02:57:273 (1) - ^ same idea.
  11. 02:57:624 (1,2,3,4) - Same concern as 01:27:799 (1,2,3,4). Your rhythm isn't fitting well with the music.
  12. 02:59:027 (8) - NC.
  13. 02:59:729 (10) - I think it's really difficult not to slider break on this slider. 2.0 SV is too much imo, and the slider feels awkward because it extends past the cut off for the vocals here. I think you should try a shorter slider or smaller SV.
I'm concerned about rankability of the crunched sliders like01:49:553 (5) and 02:37:624 (7). See what SapphireGhost has to say about it.
Other than that it's a creative map.

Well I hope this is helpful to you. Good luck. :) :)
Thx :D fixed everything~
Mira-san : http://puu.sh/5vK5U.osu
Topic Starter
Mira-san

_AI wrote:

Thx :D fixed everything~
Mira-san : http://puu.sh/5vK5U.osu
Updated. :3
Zaphirox
[World's End]
02:50:254 (8) - not snapped

EDIT: Still huntin :D
eniyan
Hi~

From my queue ~ :)

[Fr33z3R's Easy]

General
AR-1

  1. 01:23:238 (1,2) - Remove NC on (1) and add NC on (2)
  1. 01:36:571 (4) - Add NC
Placement
  1. 00:02:185 (3) - Blanket perfectly.
    Form
    rotate 4° and move x=242 y=237

  1. 00:03:238 (4,5) - You shouldn't stack
  1. 00:04:992 (2,3,4) - ^
  1. 00:05:694 (4,1) - Spacing is different! It is necessary for you to fix this!
  1. 00:52:360 (2,3) - Spacing is different! It is necessary for you to fix this!
  1. 01:17:973 (4,5) - Spacing is different! It is necessary for you to fix this!
  1. 01:44:290 (1,2) - Spacing is different! It is necessary for you to fix this!
  1. 02:06:395 (3,1) - How about in this way?
    Placement
    Change some form of 02:06:395 (3) , and move 02:07:097 (1) to x=400 y=192 (Stack on 02:06:045 (2) ).

  1. 02:32:711 (1,2) - Spacing is different! It is necessary for you to fix this!
  1. 03:23:588 (1,2) - Spacing is different! It is necessary for you to fix this!
  1. 03:34:466 (3,1) - The beginner may be puzzled in the direction to go ahead through.
  1. 03:56:571 (5,1) - Spacing is different! It is necessary for you to fix this!
  1. 04:00:431 (2,3) - Spacing is different! It is necessary for you to fix this!
  1. 04:06:395 (3,4) - Spacing is different! It is necessary for you to fix this!
  1. 04:07:799 (5,1) - Spacing is different! It is necessary for you to fix this!
  1. 04:13:413 (5,1) - Spacing is different! It is necessary for you to fix this!
OMG! There are too many points different in Spacing. :o
Rhythm
  1. 01:17:973 (4) - Object is not snapped! It is necessary for you to fix this!
  1. 01:18:675 (5) - Object is not snapped
  2. ! It is necessary for you to fix this!
Hitsound
  1. 02:11:308 (4) - Why add Whistle?
[Neormal]

General
Umm this map is very good if this is hard dif...However, this is Normal dif...It is necessary for you to choose whether this dif change hard or remake map.

03:22:887 ~ 03:23:238 For Normal Dif,you shouldn't change Slider Velocity.
Placement
  1. 00:06:045 (4) - shouldn't stack
  1. 00:11:659 (4) - shouldn't stack
  1. 00:34:115 (6) - shouldn't stack
  1. 01:23:238 (2) - shouldn't stack
  1. 01:24:992 (1,2) - Completely symmetric
  1. 01:26:746 (4) - shouldn't stack
  1. 01:27:448 (6) - shouldn't stack
  1. 01:34:641 (2) - this stack is ok
  1. 01:35:869 (4) - shouldn't stack
  1. 01:41:483 (6) - shouldn't stack
  1. 01:44:290 (6) - shouldn't stack
  1. 02:29:203 (5) - shouldn't stack
  1. 02:37:624 (4) - shouldn't stack
  1. 02:40:431 (5) - shouldn't stack
  1. 02:41:659 (2,3,4,5) - this stack is ok
  1. 02:46:045 (5) - shouldn't stack
  1. 02:55:869 (4) - shouldn't stack
  1. 02:57:272 (4) - shouldn't stack
  1. 03:02:536 (7) - shouldn't stack
  1. 03:04:641 (3,4,5) - shouldn't stack
  1. 03:09:553 (1,2) - this stack is ok
  1. 03:10:080 (3,4) - this stack is ok
  1. 03:11:308 (5) - shouldn't stack
  1. 03:26:220 (1,2) - this stack is ok
  1. 03:26:922 (3,4) - this stack is ok
  1. 04:13:062 (10) - shouldn't stack
Rhythm
  1. 00:54:115 (1) - I think blue is difficult to normal dif.
  1. 02:46:396 (1) - ^
Hitsound
hit sound is good

[World's End]

This map is great! I love this! :)

[AI]

General
  1. 02:59:729 (1) - Change NC
Placement
  1. 00:01:132 (2) - Distance to (3) is too near. How about in this way?
Rhythm
rhythm is very good!
Hitsound
  1. 00:12:010 (1) - add finifh
  1. 00:23:238 (1) - add finish
  1. 00:23:589 (4) - add clap
  1. 00:34:466 (1) - add finish on the head
  1. 01:08:150 (1) - add finish
  1. 01:13:413 (11) - add clap on the head
  1. 01:19:378 (1) - add finish
  1. 01:20:430 (7) - add clap
  1. 01:20:606 (1) - add clap
  1. 01:21:834 (7) - add clap
  1. 01:22:010 (1) - add clap
  1. 01:27:448 (2) - add finish because I hear the sound of cymbals by a performance
  1. 02:52:887 (10) - remove finish
  1. 01:30:606 (1) - add finish on the head
  1. 01:37:974 (7) - remove clap
  1. 01:41:308 (7) - remove clap
  1. 01:41:483 (8) - add clap
  1. 01:41:834 (1) - add finish on the head
  1. 01:52:360 (12) - remove finish
  1. 01:53:062 (1) - add finish on the head
  1. 02:04:290 (1) - add finish on the head
  1. 02:04:817 (4) - remove clap on the head or 02:10:431 (4) - add clap
  1. 02:26:746 (1) - add clap one the head
  1. 02:37:624 (7) - add finish on the end
  1. 02:49:203 (1) - add finish
  1. 02:51:308 (9) - add clap on 02:51:483 and remove clap on the end
  1. 02:51:659 (10) - add clap on the head
  1. 02:52:887 (10) - add clap
  1. 02:57:273 (2) - add finish because I hear the sound of cymbals by a performance
  1. 03:00:080 (7) - add finish(This depends on the preference of the person, but I like the one that added it.)
  1. 03:00:431 (1) - add finish
  1. 03:01:483 (6) - add clap on the head and remove clap by the end
  1. 03:11:659 (14) - add finish
  1. 03:20:957 (2) - add clap
  1. 03:21:659 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - add clap ( (8) is on the head )
  1. 03:22:536 (8) - add finish on the end
  1. 03:50:957 (1) - add finish
  1. 03:50:957 (1) - add finish
  1. 03:57:799 (5) - remove clap or 04:03:413 add clap on slidertick and 04:09:027 add clap on slidertick
  1. 04:04:817 (6) - add clap
Good luck~ :)
_AI

EnixYuki wrote:

Hi~

From my queue ~ :)

[AI]

General
  1. 02:59:729 (1) - Change NC
Placement
  1. 00:01:132 (2) - Distance to (3) is too near. How about in this way?
Rhythm
rhythm is very good!
Hitsound
  1. 00:12:010 (1) - add finifh
  1. 00:23:238 (1) - add finish
  1. 00:23:589 (4) - add clap
  1. 00:34:466 (1) - add finish on the head
  1. 01:08:150 (1) - add finish
  1. 01:13:413 (11) - add clap on the head
  1. 01:19:378 (1) - add finish
  1. 01:20:430 (7) - add clap
  1. 01:20:606 (1) - add clap
  1. 01:21:834 (7) - add clap
  1. 01:22:010 (1) - add clap
  1. 01:27:448 (2) - add finish because I hear the sound of cymbals by a performance
  1. 02:52:887 (10) - remove finish
  1. 01:30:606 (1) - add finish on the head
  1. 01:37:974 (7) - remove clap
  1. 01:41:308 (7) - remove clap
  1. 01:41:483 (8) - add clap
  1. 01:41:834 (1) - add finish on the head
  1. 01:52:360 (12) - remove finish
  1. 01:53:062 (1) - add finish on the head
  1. 02:04:290 (1) - add finish on the head
  1. 02:04:817 (4) - remove clap on the head or 02:10:431 (4) - add clap
  1. 02:26:746 (1) - add clap one the head
  1. 02:37:624 (7) - add finish on the end
  1. 02:49:203 (1) - add finish
  1. 02:51:308 (9) - add clap on 02:51:483 and remove clap on the end
  1. 02:51:659 (10) - add clap on the head
  1. 02:52:887 (10) - add clap
  1. 02:57:273 (2) - add finish because I hear the sound of cymbals by a performance
  1. 03:00:080 (7) - add finish(This depends on the preference of the person, but I like the one that added it.)
  1. 03:00:431 (1) - add finish
  1. 03:01:483 (6) - add clap on the head and remove clap by the end
  1. 03:11:659 (14) - add finish
  1. 03:20:957 (2) - add clap
  1. 03:21:659 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - add clap ( (8) is on the head )
  1. 03:22:536 (8) - add finish on the end
  1. 03:50:957 (1) - add finish
  1. 03:50:957 (1) - add finish
  1. 03:57:799 (5) - remove clap or 04:03:413 add clap on slidertick and 04:09:027 add clap on slidertick
  1. 04:04:817 (6) - add clap
Good luck~ :)
Thx >.o/ fixed all

Mira-san : http://puu.sh/5DFxC.osu *the title went to some weird character after i re-dl the map lol
neonat

EnixYuki wrote:

Hi~

From my queue ~ :)

[Neormal]

Placement

  1. 00:11:659 (4) - shouldn't stack
  1. 01:24:992 (1,2) - Completely symmetric
  1. 01:35:869 (4) - shouldn't stack
  1. 03:11:308 (5) - shouldn't stack

This is what I changed, thanks.

Good luck~ :)
Neormal
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Worlds End . Dance Hall.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2012
PreviewTime: 90606
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 765,20941,56730,68309,90590,122871,142520,157958,169187,180415,202871,225327,259187
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:World's End Dancehall (ROCKETMAN Remix)
TitleUnicode:ワールズエンド・ダンスホール (ROCKETMAN Remix)
Artist:Genjitsutouhi-P
ArtistUnicode:現実逃避P
Creator:Mira-san
Version:Neormal
Source:
Tags:wowaka vocaloid miku hatsune megurine luka fr33z3r _ai neonat ryo fukawa
BeatmapID:275817
BeatmapSetID:88911

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.20000000596046
SliderTickRate:2

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Topic Starter
Mira-san

neonat wrote:

EnixYuki wrote:

Hi~

From my queue ~ :)

[Neormal]

Placement

  1. 00:11:659 (4) - shouldn't stack
  1. 01:24:992 (1,2) - Completely symmetric
  1. 01:35:869 (4) - shouldn't stack
  1. 03:11:308 (5) - shouldn't stack

This is what I changed, thanks.

Good luck~ :)
Neormal
osu file format v12

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Updated 7 days ago.
izzydemon
+69 sp hueeeeeeeeh
Topic Starter
Mira-san

Niokin wrote:

+69 sp hueeeeeeeeh
NOT ANYMORE HUEHUHUEHAUEHAUEHAUEHAUE
neonat
yessss the 'e' is back in the difficulty name :3
SapphireGhost
I remember this, and can get back to it now that the Christmas stuff is over (or not, because it seems osu! is still hyped up about it).

General
- Kiai times are inconsistent by a small amount, so it is probably best to just make them all exactly the same.
- The version I downloaded seems to be missing the lyrics storyboard again.
- I am sad to see World's End is gone as a difficulty name. But don't change it back. That's unrankable. BATs wouldn't like that. ;__________;

Colours
- This map has three sets of colours. One set is used for Insane and AI's Insane, a second set is used for Hard, and a third is used for Normal. Here is my suggestion of colours for Insane, and perhaps you can adjust them for the other difficulties as well. They are based off of "faded" and "vibrant" versions of Miku and Luka colours, as well as the two greyscale colours and an extra red for the kiai time. (red + blue = purple!)
iro
[Colours]
Combo1 : 125,125,125
Combo2 : 180,235,230
Combo3 : 210,140,220
Combo4 : 25,125,255
Combo5 : 200,10,200
Combo6 : 230,50,50
Combo7 : 175,175,175

_AI's Insane
- I can't tell how the combo colours are being used on this difficulty, but it doesn't seem consistent like with Insane.
01:45:167 (5,6) - Something like this looks and plays more neatly.

Hard
03:14:642 (9,1) - Unstack these so it is easier to read.

Neormal
03:22:887 to 03:45:343 - It looks like a different slider velocity was meant to be used for this section.

I saw that the AudioLeadIn was 2012 and thought "I must have suggested that" and then checked my mod and yes, I did. Good for you for making that happen.
Topic Starter
Mira-san

SapphireGhost wrote:

I remember this, and can get back to it now that the Christmas stuff is over (or not, because it seems osu! is still hyped up about it).

General
- Kiai times are inconsistent by a small amount, so it is probably best to just make them all exactly the same. ~fixed
- The version I downloaded seems to be missing the lyrics storyboard again. ~the .osb file was missing (and was not uploaded). redownloading will fix it. :v
- I am sad to see World's End is gone as a difficulty name. But don't change it back. That's unrankable. BATs wouldn't like that. ;__________; ~ikr ;w;

Colours
- This map has three sets of colours. One set is used for Insane and AI's Insane, a second set is used for Hard, and a third is used for Normal. Here is my suggestion of colours for Insane, and perhaps you can adjust them for the other difficulties as well. They are based off of "faded" and "vibrant" versions of Miku and Luka colours, as well as the two greyscale colours and an extra red for the kiai time. (red + blue = purple!)
iro
[Colours]
Combo1 : 125,125,125
Combo2 : 180,235,230
Combo3 : 210,140,220
Combo4 : 25,125,255
Combo5 : 200,10,200
Combo6 : 230,50,50
Combo7 : 175,175,175
~applied. blue miku huh. lolol
_AI's Insane
- I can't tell how the combo colours are being used on this difficulty, but it doesn't seem consistent like with Insane.
01:45:167 (5,6) - Something like this looks and plays more neatly. ~fixed in behalf of _AI gg

Hard
03:14:642 (9,1) - Unstack these so it is easier to read. ~fixed
Neormal
03:22:887 to 03:45:343 - It looks like a different slider velocity was meant to be used for this section. ~changed to 0.75x. i wonder how it became 1.0x

I saw that the AudioLeadIn was 2012 and thought "I must have suggested that" and then checked my mod and yes, I did. Good for you for making that happen. ~yesss lololol
wao thanks again :D
FrzR
Just a little more. XD
rank pls.
happy623

Fr33z3R wrote:

Just a little more. XD
rank pls.
sheela
Hello. From mii-KK-sheela Newbie Modding/GD Team :3

[SB]
The sb2.png, it doesn't go to a straight line.

[Easy]
00:52:360 (2,3) - Move 00:52:360 (2) to x:201 y:322, and 00:53:062 (3) to x:346 y:267?
01:31:571 - Add a note?
01:41:834 (3) - Add a new combo?
02:06:045 (2) - Make a perfect stack on the head of 02:07:097 (1) .
03:12:711 (2) - Move it to x:241 y:145.

[Normal]
00:34:115 (6) - Move it to x:316 y:278?
01:52:360 (1) - The length of this spinner is not to quick?
02:37:624 (4) - Move it to x:275 y:255?
04:10:606 (5) - Add a new combo?
04:16:220 (5) - Add a new combo?

I can only find these. Good Luck on ranking this map, and here's a star.
neonat

sheela901 wrote:

Hello. From mii-KK-sheela Newbie Modding/GD Team :3


[Normal]
00:34:115 (6) - Move it to x:316 y:278? no change
01:52:360 (1) - The length of this spinner is not to quick? changed it to a slider. Surprised you didn't asked about 03:44:641 (1) - I changed this one too
02:37:624 (4) - Move it to x:275 y:255? no change
04:10:606 (5) - Add a new combo? ok
04:16:220 (5) - Add a new combo? ^

I can only find these. Good Luck on ranking this map, and here's a star.
Thanks

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Worlds End . Dance Hall.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2012
PreviewTime: 90606
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:World's End Dancehall (ROCKETMAN Remix)
TitleUnicode:ワールズエンド・ダンスホール (ROCKETMAN Remix
Artist:Genjitsutouhi-P
ArtistUnicode:現実逃避P
Creator:Mira-san
Version:Neormal
Source:
Tags:wowaka vocaloid miku hatsune megurine luka fr33z3r _ai neonat ryo fukawa
BeatmapID:275817
BeatmapSetID:88911

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.20000000596046
SliderTickRate:2

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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Yokoiha
Please tell me this maps is getting ranked i love it so much >.<
izzydemon
BUBBLE IT ALREADY GODDAMN
Topic Starter
Mira-san

Niokin wrote:

BUBBLE IT ALREADY GODDAMN
Probably in the next few months.

Not kidding tho. :o

edit: someone told me that BATs think this needs a major rework-- flow, slider construction/creation
so yeah. might take long. wish they could be damn straightforward.
Yokoiha

Mira-san wrote:

Niokin wrote:

BUBBLE IT ALREADY GODDAMN
Probably in the next few months.

Not kidding tho. :o

edit: someone told me that BATs think this needs a major rework-- flow, slider construction/creation
so yeah. might take long. wish they could be damn straightforward.
lol o.o
ayaka2000
My English is not very good, but I'll be happy if we can understand each other.
This song is good melody

Easy
00:03:589 - No stac
00:04:992 - No stac
01:08:150 - add note.
01:44:290 (1) - No turn.
01:47:799 (2) &01:48:852 (4) - same style

Normal
Circle Siza 3 to request that a wish be granted
00:55:518 (3) run parallel to 00:56:220 (4)
01:33:764 - Add a note

Hard
02:14:992 - add a note
03:34:115 (1) - too long

Insane
00:32:974 - add a note
04:17:097 (5) - 04:06:132 (7) -04:05:869 (6) - Somehow, I feel something is off.
have no idea.I'd like you to consider an alternative plan.
03:55:518 (2) - 03:55:869 (3) - Whistle?

good luck
Topic Starter
Mira-san

ayaka2000 wrote:

My English is not very good, but I'll be happy if we can understand each other.
This song is good melody

Easy
00:03:589 - No stac
00:04:992 - No stac
01:08:150 - add note.
01:44:290 (1) - No turn.
01:47:799 (2) &01:48:852 (4) - same style

Some are fixed in behalf of Fr33z3R. (basic mods) lel.

Normal
Circle Siza 3 to request that a wish be granted
00:55:518 (3) run parallel to 00:56:220 (4)
01:33:764 - Add a note

neonat only 'agreed' ('agreed' as in make ME decide if I want to) to change the CS to 3. Nothing else.

Hard
02:14:992 - add a note
03:34:115 (1) - too long

Nope.


Insane
00:32:974 - add a note -errrr no. :v
04:17:097 (5) - 04:06:132 (7) -04:05:869 (6) - Somehow, I feel something is off.
have no idea.I'd like you to consider an alternative plan. - Changed this (atlast)
03:55:518 (2) - 03:55:869 (3) - Whistle? -fixed for (2), not for (3)

good luck
ありがとございます。

ggboi. 8-)
NachtHemdPlaya
[Easy]

change slider tick rate from 2 to 1, this is too much

[Neormal]

02:04:992 (2) - remove circle to keep it smooth
02:41:659 (2) - remove circle
03:29:904 (4) - put this slider and 03:30:255 (5) together

[Hard]

01:47:360 (7) - remove circle, breaks the flow
02:21:834 (2,3,4,5) and 02:24:641 (1,2,3,4) - not sure about this, you can do this better
03:44:992 (6) - make this slider faster/shorter to match the beat like u did in 03:44:290 (5)

[Insane]

-greater distance spacing
-lesser use of triples
-stretch streams
Topic Starter
Mira-san

NachtHemdPlaya wrote:

[Hard]

01:47:360 (7) - remove circle, breaks the flow ~fixed
02:21:834 (2,3,4,5) and 02:24:641 (1,2,3,4) - not sure about this, you can do this better ~i'll think about it
03:44:992 (6) - make this slider faster/shorter to match the beat like u did in 03:44:290 (5) ~changed it. though i'm not really sure if i should have. lel.

[Insane]

-greater distance spacing
-lesser use of triples
-stretch streams
~thanks for the suggestions!
Thanks!
Tenderz
General
  • I don't know if this is really a problem but the size of the osz file is larger than 10 mb. You might be able to reduce it by merging some of the backgrounds and using the storyboard color instead for the grayscale image and a seperate image for the noisy overlay.
_AI's Insane
  • 00:06:396 (1,2,3) - I think claps on the first note of these sliders sound good
    02:48:501 (3,4) - You might do something like this to match the notes before it http://puu.sh/6qmgb.jpg
    02:54:115 (6) - This one very close to the edge, not sure if that plays well in windowed 800*600 http://puu.sh/6qmjR.jpg
    03:39:027 (9,10,11) - Don't know if it's me but i find this playing weird, try this double http://puu.sh/6qmwl.jpg
Hard
  • 02:21:834 (2,3,4,5) - This kind of makes the timing less readable and looks a little weird. This would also work http://puu.sh/6qmKW.jpg
    From 02:26:746 (5) -02:57:624 (1) - There aren't really any hitsounds here which makes it sound a little boring. The contrast with the chorus hitsounds is nice but at least use some different sounds than just the soft-hitnormal :P
    Same as for 00:34:466 (1) - 01:27:799 (1) - In the Beginning
    Maybe just remove the spinner at 04:28:852 (1) and let the song end at 04:18:325 (1)
Neormal
Easy
  • 01:32:010 (1) - Consider adding a slider before this or something, It feel really empty as a start of the chorus
    Same as with Hard, consider removing this spinner 04:28:852 (1) a 7-8sec break before one last note is a bit too much :P
  • Same thing as with the other diffs 04:28:852 (1) - The ending spinner after the break :P
    Played Fine :D
Good luck with this map :D, I like it.
Topic Starter
Mira-san

Tenderz wrote:

Hard
  • 02:21:834 (2,3,4,5) - This kind of makes the timing less readable and looks a little weird. This would also work http://puu.sh/6qmKW.jpg ~ okay
    From 02:26:746 (5) -02:57:624 (1) - There aren't really any hitsounds here which makes it sound a little boring. The contrast with the chorus hitsounds is nice but at least use some different sounds than just the soft-hitnormal :P
    Same as for 00:34:466 (1) - 01:27:799 (1) - In the Beginning ~tried to add some hitsounds. not sure if they fit.
    Maybe just remove the spinner at 04:28:852 (1) and let the song end at 04:18:325 (1) ~removed the spinner on all diffs. this has been suggested before.
Good luck with this map :D, I like it.
Thanks!
GDers reply asap pls. :v
neonat

Tenderz wrote:

Neormal

  • 00:29:203 (1) - Feels better if it starts on a white tick :) http://puu.sh/6qn8W.jpg not really sure, because I feel there is nothing on the white tick
    02:52:536 (2) - Move one grid left-up for parallelism with other slider #ocd do you mean down? I moved it down
    03:56:922 (1) - Also on white tick http://puu.sh/6qnti.jpg same with the first
SPOILER
osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 2012
PreviewTime: 90606
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
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TitleUnicode:ワールズエンド・ダンスホール (ROCKETMAN Remix)
Artist:wowaka
ArtistUnicode:wowaka
Creator:Mira-san
Version:Neormal
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Topic Starter
Mira-san

neonat wrote:

Tenderz wrote:

Neormal

  • 00:29:203 (1) - Feels better if it starts on a white tick :) http://puu.sh/6qn8W.jpg not really sure, because I feel there is nothing on the white tick
    02:52:536 (2) - Move one grid left-up for parallelism with other slider #ocd do you mean down? I moved it down
    03:56:922 (1) - Also on white tick http://puu.sh/6qnti.jpg same with the first
Updated.

Easy diff changes:
Removes some spinners and replaced them with notes. (Thanks Fr33z3R!)
_AI
http://puu.sh/6yLjh.osu owo done everything
buny
i remember this

GL on rank
Topic Starter
Mira-san

buny wrote:

i remember this

GL on rank
thanks

though i think at it's current state, it's going for graveyard. :D
FrzR

Mira-san wrote:

buny wrote:

i remember this

GL on rank
thanks

though i think at it's current state, it's going for graveyard. :D
nuuu. ;w;
neonat
Got to continue with the effort to rank!
TheWantedOne
rank pls
Asagi
77 favs, Mira OP
Topic Starter
Mira-san

-Asagi wrote:

77 favs, Mira OP
0 chance rank tho :p
neonat
Maybe ask sapphireghost or dkun?
Topic Starter
Mira-san

neonat wrote:

Maybe ask sapphireghost or dkun?
lol nahh.

real purpose was to kind of bump.
pola[r]is
make this ranked please! :3
klaki892
I love this map :X its in my favorites and i've played it over and over for months.
Make it ranked!!!!
Plz Q_Q
(really? my first post? EVEN MOAR REASON TO GET IT RANKED!)
Yumeno Himiko
Sorry for being late ;w; My MAD has just finished >_>
From my modding queue~

[General]
Reset the letter box of all diffs.
Enable Epilepsy warning (because of the flashes in your storyboard) it's in Song Setup>Design

[Easy]
01:17:973 (4,5) - These two notes are not snapped.

00:01:834 (2,3) - Make them a better blanket~
00:08:150 (3,1) - End at the white line.
00:10:606 (2,3) - ^
01:06:746 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - A hexagon here?
01:08:501 (1,2) - A better blanket.
01:32:010 (1,2) - ^
01:39:378 (1,2) - ^
01:41:834 (3,4) - ^
01:46:045 (1,2) - ^
02:06:045 (2,1) - May place them at the same point ?
02:41:132 (1,2,1) - Not looking so good here,you may think of a better pattern.
02:49:904 (1,2) - Blanket.
02:55:167 (1,2) - reverse 1 with 180°
03:01:834 (4,2) - May place them at the same point ?
03:06:395 (1,2) - Blanket.
03:25:343 (3,1) - Blanket.
03:28:150 (5,6) - ^
04:06:045 (2,3) - ^

[Normal]
Personally,I think it's too difficult as a Normal diff.
00:11:659 (4,5) - Better move 4 away since it's Normal.
00:37:273 (1) - This slider is off the screen.
00:37:273 (1) - Better move them apart.
01:34:641 (2,3,4) - Must be moved apart since the delay time is different on 2 and 4.
02:04:992 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Not a good pattern I think.
02:31:483 (4,1) - Blanket.
02:41:659 (2,3,4) - Awsome~ Move those circles~
Many same problems are followed~ I hope you delete some circles and sliders to make it more like a Normal diff.

Hard and Insane will be modded tommorrow~Don't give me kudosu before I finish my mod.
Good Luck~
neonat
Made some changes in positions

Just one thing to say

examination wrote:

[Normal]
00:37:273 (1) - This slider is off the screen. It's still on screen for me though
Neormal
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Worlds End . Dance Hall.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2012
PreviewTime: 90606
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 765,20941,56730,68309,90590,122871,142520,157958,169187,180415,202871,225327,259187
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:World's End Dancehall (ROCKETMAN Remix)
TitleUnicode:ワールズエンド・ダンスホール (ROCKETMAN Remix)
Artist:wowaka
ArtistUnicode:wowaka
Creator:Mira-san
Version:Neormal
Source:
Tags:genjitsutouhi-p vocaloid miku hatsune megurine luka fr33z3r _ai neonat ryo fukawa
BeatmapID:275817
BeatmapSetID:88911

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.20000000596046
SliderTickRate:2

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//Break Periods
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2,57122,65546
2,113261,121687
2,135718,144143
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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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225343,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
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Topic Starter
Mira-san

neonat wrote:

Made some changes in positions

Just one thing to say

examination wrote:

[Normal]
00:37:273 (1) - This slider is off the screen. It's still on screen for me though
Neormal
osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 2012
PreviewTime: 90606
Countdown: 0
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WidescreenStoryboard: 0

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[Metadata]
Title:World's End Dancehall (ROCKETMAN Remix)
TitleUnicode:ワールズエンド・ダンスホール (ROCKETMAN Remix)
Artist:wowaka
ArtistUnicode:wowaka
Creator:Mira-san
Version:Neormal
Source:
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256,192,258325,12,4,259027,0:0:0:0:
Updated.
Yuuki Aoi_old
Can't CTRL+C more than 1 object in the editor, for some reason it crashes my game when i copied more than 1 object so, sorry if this becomes a trouble.

Insane
Please add hitsounds from 00:34:466 (1) - to 01:29:729 (5) -

01:36:922 (1) - i think this slider is hard to read because it doesn't have that extra circle to make a triple before it. since it looks the same as the previous ones, players can easily mistake this as a triple, I think you should revise this :3
01:58:676 (1) - add NC:1 normal-hitfinish to the head?
02:04:115 (7) - remove normal-hitfinish?
02:04:290 (1) - add NC:1 normal-hitfinish to the head?
02:09:904 (1) - ^
02:12:711 (1) - the spinner, i think it would sound better if you use the default soft-hitfinish here.
from 02:26:746 (1) - to 02:59:378 (5) - I can hear the hitsounds (the drum-hitnormal), but I think it's too... empty(?) Maybe if you could add more :3
03:03:676 (4) - this piece here doesn't fit well with the song i think, it's better if the triple starts from here 03:03:413 (3) -
03:11:220 (5) - overmap xD, i can't tell what part of the song backs up that triple, i think it should be removed.
03:43:062 (2,1) - swap NC
03:59:378 (9) - NC
03:59:905 (1) - remove NC
04:14:729 (1) - remove NC
04:14:817 (2) - NC

04:04:290 (1) - the stream here, I can't really tell why it's there.
04:06:396 (1) - ^
04:12:010 (1) - i think this may become confusing for players to play out, the amount of times it repeats itself i mean.
04:18:325 (1) - normal hitsounds is better for the stream with soft-hitfinish at the end imo. :D

_AI's Insane
00:00:781 (1) - change to circle? The slider isn't backed up by anything in the song.
00:35:343 (1) - remove NC
00:38:150 (1) - ^
01:22:711 (1) - remove NC
01:30:431 (7) - remove hitfinish
01:33:062 (8) - add clap
01:37:974 (7) - remove clap in tail
02:33:939 (10) - add NC
02:42:185 (9) - add NC
02:51:308 (9) - fix the clap here.. lol
03:01:483 (4) - remove clap in tail
03:11:659 (14) - this needs to be more powerful, add a hitfinish here
03:43:238 (6) - it feels like the triple here should be removed and the triple should start here 03:43:413 (8) -
04:11:132 (5) - the doubles from this here, dunno if it's necessary.
04:18:325 (1) - the stream from here, (optional) make the sampleset to hitnormal? keep the soft-hitfinish at the end though.

Hard
00:20:343 (1) - i think this kind of triple is too hard for hard (Slider+2 circles, especially when the next object is a circle). i'd stay away from this type of triple for hard. changing it is up to you (i'll keep pointing it out, though changing it or not is up to u)
00:31:659 (6) - ^
00:50:255 (1) - ^
03:34:115 (1) - ?????? xD
03:53:764 (2) - slider triple again
04:00:781 (8) - ^
04:18:325 (1) - hitnormal + soft-hitfinish at the end? :3

done :D can't mod easy/normal :c
Yumeno Himiko
Sorry for being late.
I'm so lazy ;w;

No kudosu on this post

[Hard]
00:17:536 - A note is needed here to fit with the rhythm,since you also set notes at 00:14:729 (6) 00:20:343 (1) 00:23:150 (1)
01:12:010 (3,4) - You can make a blanket here.
01:14:641 (7,1) - This flow feels not so good,change it into a blanket.
01:39:378 (2,4) - Maybe set 2's tail on 4's reverse arrow?
01:44:817 (3,4,5,6) - Make it a regular triangle.
02:08:501 (6,7) - Also make a blanket~
02:21:132 (1) - According to the music,only a circle is needed here. But I think you should follow another line instead of the piano line. Since it's hard to catch its rhythm,especially with the volume 100%
02:40:781 (1,2) - A blanket.
03:09:203 (2,4) - Same as 01:39:378 (2,4)
03:13:063 (3,4,5,6) - Same as 01:44:817 (3,4,5,6)
03:20:782 (2,3) - A blanket.

[Insane]
Generally,I think there are too many streams(stuffs like this 00:39:378 (2,3,4,5,6) ),and the DS are not changing in a fluent way (in the beginning part of this diff)
Since I can't play it myself,you can choose whether to take my suggestions.
01:52:185 (1,2,3) - They are overmapped.
03:52:273 (6) - This note is not necessary.
These stuffs should be regular triangles.
SPOILER
01:09:378 (6,7,8) -
02:00:957 (5,6,7) -
02:28:852 (1,2,3) -
02:40:431 (5,1,2) -
02:53:413 (1,2,3) -
04:02:712 (4,5,6) -

[_AI's Insane]
Nice diff~ In fact I'm too tired to mod,sorry.QAQ But it's well done~

Good luck on ranking this map~
I'll go to sleep~ zzzzzz
Topic Starter
Mira-san
Any modders that will mod this map.

DON'T MOD INSANE.

Insane diff "overhaul" in progress.
Tsukasa
Well

You made me mod overhaul soooo

It should count :3

IRC Mod
21:04 Mira-san: tsukassy tsukasshit tsukasa tsukassssss
21:05 Mira-san: tsuki
21:05 Mira-san: tsukasa
21:05 Mira-san: tsukasa-chan
21:05 Mira-san: tsukasa hiiragi
21:10 Tsukasa: here's my main point
21:10 Tsukasa: ung flow mo
21:11 Mira-san: ooo
21:12 Tsukasa: 00:01:483 (3) -
21:12 Tsukasa: ok ung note placement mo eh
21:12 Tsukasa: pero ung slider na 3
21:12 Tsukasa: paiba sa flow
21:13 Mira-san: ctrl+g ko?
21:13 Tsukasa: no no no
21:13 Tsukasa: try mo
21:13 Tsukasa: idaan ung mouse cursor mo sa edit
21:13 Tsukasa: pansinin mo
21:13 Tsukasa: ang ganda nung note placement
21:14 Tsukasa: isang magandang arch
21:14 Tsukasa: pero ung slider ng 3 pasira dun sa arc
21:14 Tsukasa: matatamaan parin naman pero ang weird lang sa pakiramdam
21:21 Tsukasa: did you say anything
21:21 Tsukasa: or
21:21 Tsukasa: did you recieve anything?
21:22 Mira-san: er nothing
21:22 Mira-san: up to "that could work" lang
21:22 Tsukasa: http://puu.sh/8hvKh.jpg
21:22 Tsukasa: eto?
21:22 Tsukasa: I sent "that could work"
21:22 Tsukasa: via IRC
21:22 Tsukasa: si di ko alam kung eto nagsend
21:23 Mira-san: er yea
21:23 Mira-san: nagsend yan lahat
21:24 Tsukasa: 00:21:834 (1,2,3) -
21:24 Tsukasa: ilapit mo ung 3
21:24 Tsukasa: make it pretty
21:24 Mira-san: okay
21:25 Tsukasa: isa pang thing about this
21:26 Tsukasa: hmmmm....
21:26 Tsukasa: how could I put this to words...
21:27 Tsukasa: let's just say na medyo "Makalat" ung iba mong note placement
21:29 Mira-san: like? :o
21:29 Tsukasa: 00:30:781 (2,3,4) -
21:29 Tsukasa: notice how you made some sort of pattern here
21:29 Tsukasa: if you look at it like a box
21:30 Tsukasa: mukha siyang trapezium instead of box
21:30 Tsukasa: if you look at it like a dagger, mapapansin mo na off ung "handle" or in this case, note 5
21:31 Mira-san: hmm
21:31 Tsukasa: mas mukha kasing "maganda" pag inayos mo siya
21:31 Mira-san: ok made it like a box
21:32 Tsukasa: diba?
21:32 Mira-san: http://puu.sh/8hwiJ.jpg
21:33 Tsukasa: mmmm...
21:33 Tsukasa: baba mo pa ung 4
21:33 Mira-san: yep binaba ko na
21:33 Mira-san: medyo off kase lol
21:33 Tsukasa: mga ano pa
21:33 Tsukasa: tig 1 grid left and down
21:34 Mira-san: done
21:34 Tsukasa: eto gawin mo
21:34 Tsukasa: pano ka ba nagbabasa ng notes pag naglalaro ka
21:34 Tsukasa: isa isa?
21:35 Mira-san: no
21:35 Mira-san: lol
21:35 Tsukasa: ooo?
21:36 Mira-san: depends
21:36 Mira-san: when it's really fast i don't read the notes one by one
21:36 Mira-san: i think of ti as a pttern or something
21:36 Tsukasa: ayun rin dapat gawin mo sa mapping
21:36 Tsukasa: look at notes as a whole
21:37 Tsukasa: always remember the flow
21:38 Tsukasa: tapos
21:38 Tsukasa: please lang
21:38 Tsukasa: wag mo na gayahin ang 2014 meta :(
21:38 Mira-san: i don't recognize metas and stuff :o
21:38 Mira-san: nub mapper4lyf
21:38 Tsukasa: well
21:39 Tsukasa: nabuhay ka sa 2013 eh
21:39 Tsukasa: wala na akong magagawa dun
21:39 Mira-san: 2012 lolz
21:40 Tsukasa: 2012 was like
21:40 Tsukasa: 60% 2013
21:40 Mira-san: i see :o
21:42 Tsukasa: practice your slider creation as well
21:42 Tsukasa: hanggang ngayon nga pinapraktis ko pa
21:43 Mira-san: copypaste slider B)
21:43 Mira-san: also wavy sliders
21:43 Tsukasa: lol
21:43 Mira-san: i rarely see them now
21:43 Tsukasa: di na ako nagamit ng copy paste
21:43 Tsukasa: madalang na
21:43 Mira-san: is that part of the 2014 meta
21:43 Mira-san: no wavy sliders
21:43 Mira-san: lol
21:45 Tsukasa: mmm
21:45 Tsukasa: no
21:46 Tsukasa: di lang ako nakakakita ng use for that
21:46 Mira-san: oooh
21:46 Mira-san: lol
21:47 Tsukasa: well
21:47 Tsukasa: one thing you do have
21:47 Tsukasa: that's a silver lining in 2014
21:47 Tsukasa: is proper use of hitsounds
21:48 Tsukasa: well
21:48 Mira-san: oooh
21:48 Tsukasa: pare pareho naman ung issues ko sa map mo
21:48 Mira-san: i'm creating my own rhythm here :D
21:48 Tsukasa: placements and stuff
21:48 Tsukasa: ung sliders mo
21:48 Tsukasa: ung flow mo
21:49 Tsukasa: I just wish you'd be more consistent with your hitsound use though
21:49 Mira-san: ahaha
21:49 Mira-san: different rhythms :>
21:50 Tsukasa: no no
21:50 Tsukasa: ok na ok ung hitsounds mo
21:50 Mira-san: ah
21:50 Tsukasa: lalo na ung sa verse mo
21:50 Tsukasa: ung chorus mo ok rin
21:50 Tsukasa: pero sa intro ako naabala
21:51 Tsukasa: ok sana kung silent ung sounds dito
21:51 Tsukasa: erm... soft I mnea
21:51 Mira-san: hmm
21:53 Tsukasa: mas fit ung soft sa mood ng intro eh
21:53 Mira-san: will try that
21:54 Tsukasa: keep the jingle bells though
21:54 Tsukasa: lol
21:55 Mira-san: lol okay then
21:56 Tsukasa: ang baguhin mo lang
21:56 Tsukasa: ung intro
21:56 Tsukasa: sa 00:06:366 -
21:56 Tsukasa: *396
21:56 Tsukasa: trip ko ung pagkatapos niya
21:57 Mira-san: ayos :D haha
21:59 Tsukasa: ayusin mo lang ung claps
21:59 Tsukasa: good to go na yan
21:59 Mira-san: claps hmm
21:59 Mira-san: ah
21:59 Mira-san: mali yun
21:59 Mira-san: Soft:C1
21:59 Tsukasa: actually
22:00 Tsukasa: isa lang pala
22:00 Tsukasa: 00:10:431 (5) -
22:00 Tsukasa: remove clap
22:00 Mira-san: :o
22:00 Mira-san: walang clap dun
22:00 Mira-san: lol
22:00 Mira-san: ohwait
22:00 Tsukasa: 00:10:606 (6) - add clap
22:00 Tsukasa: wat
22:00 Tsukasa: meron sakin
22:00 *Tsukasa is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/294387 wowaka - World's End Dancehall (ROCKETMAN Remix) [NewInsane]]
22:01 Mira-san: nvm ok na
22:01 Mira-san: lol
22:01 Mira-san: natanggal ko na
22:01 Mira-san: nasa end pala
22:01 Tsukasa: mhmmm
22:01 Mira-san: okay done
22:01 Tsukasa: ok na
22:01 Tsukasa: kaya mo nasiguro tapusin to
22:02 Mira-san: hmm
22:02 Mira-san: suggest hitsounds sa intro lel
22:02 Mira-san: soft gamitin ko
22:02 Mira-san: >
22:02 Mira-san: ?
22:02 Tsukasa: ah mixture of normal soft
22:02 Tsukasa: + jingle bells
22:02 Tsukasa: and the whistle
22:04 Mira-san: hmm
22:04 Tsukasa: ...
22:04 Tsukasa: uhhmm...
22:04 Tsukasa: lol...
22:04 Tsukasa: so akala ko
22:04 Tsukasa: hitsounds
22:04 Tsukasa: un pala nasa kanta
22:04 Tsukasa: LOL
22:04 Mira-san: wat LOL
22:04 Tsukasa: well
22:04 Tsukasa: tama naman ako
22:04 Tsukasa: wag m0 na baguhin
22:05 Mira-san: nothing to change lel
22:06 Tsukasa: lol
22:06 Tsukasa: so we ok nowz?
22:06 Mira-san: er dode comments and everything
22:06 Mira-san: final judgement
22:06 Mira-san: judgment*
22:06 Mira-san: :>
22:06 Tsukasa: final judgment
22:06 Tsukasa: it's rankable
22:07 Tsukasa: but it needs tweeks
22:07 Tsukasa: kahit di mo na masyado baguhin
22:07 Mira-san: aaa dem tweeks lol
22:07 Tsukasa: itweek mo lang ung sliders and ung note placements
22:07 Tsukasa: medyo kailangan mong isa-isahin yan
22:07 Mira-san: hmm
22:08 Mira-san: okay
22:08 Tsukasa: marami rami yan
22:08 Tsukasa: pero
22:08 Tsukasa: it's going to be worth it
22:11 Tsukasa: oh well
22:11 Tsukasa: posting on forums, as standard procedure
Topic Starter
Mira-san

Tsukasa wrote:

Well

You made me mod overhaul soooo

It should count :3

IRC Mod
21:04 Mira-san: tsukassy tsukasshit tsukasa tsukassssss
21:05 Mira-san: tsuki
21:05 Mira-san: tsukasa
21:05 Mira-san: tsukasa-chan
21:05 Mira-san: tsukasa hiiragi
21:10 Tsukasa: here's my main point
21:10 Tsukasa: ung flow mo
21:11 Mira-san: ooo
21:12 Tsukasa: 00:01:483 (3) -
21:12 Tsukasa: ok ung note placement mo eh
21:12 Tsukasa: pero ung slider na 3
21:12 Tsukasa: paiba sa flow
21:13 Mira-san: ctrl+g ko?
21:13 Tsukasa: no no no
21:13 Tsukasa: try mo
21:13 Tsukasa: idaan ung mouse cursor mo sa edit
21:13 Tsukasa: pansinin mo
21:13 Tsukasa: ang ganda nung note placement
21:14 Tsukasa: isang magandang arch
21:14 Tsukasa: pero ung slider ng 3 pasira dun sa arc
21:14 Tsukasa: matatamaan parin naman pero ang weird lang sa pakiramdam
21:21 Tsukasa: did you say anything
21:21 Tsukasa: or
21:21 Tsukasa: did you recieve anything?
21:22 Mira-san: er nothing
21:22 Mira-san: up to "that could work" lang
21:22 Tsukasa: http://puu.sh/8hvKh.jpg
21:22 Tsukasa: eto?
21:22 Tsukasa: I sent "that could work"
21:22 Tsukasa: via IRC
21:22 Tsukasa: si di ko alam kung eto nagsend
21:23 Mira-san: er yea
21:23 Mira-san: nagsend yan lahat
21:24 Tsukasa: 00:21:834 (1,2,3) -
21:24 Tsukasa: ilapit mo ung 3
21:24 Tsukasa: make it pretty
21:24 Mira-san: okay
21:25 Tsukasa: isa pang thing about this
21:26 Tsukasa: hmmmm....
21:26 Tsukasa: how could I put this to words...
21:27 Tsukasa: let's just say na medyo "Makalat" ung iba mong note placement
21:29 Mira-san: like? :o
21:29 Tsukasa: 00:30:781 (2,3,4) -
21:29 Tsukasa: notice how you made some sort of pattern here
21:29 Tsukasa: if you look at it like a box
21:30 Tsukasa: mukha siyang trapezium instead of box
21:30 Tsukasa: if you look at it like a dagger, mapapansin mo na off ung "handle" or in this case, note 5
21:31 Mira-san: hmm
21:31 Tsukasa: mas mukha kasing "maganda" pag inayos mo siya
21:31 Mira-san: ok made it like a box
21:32 Tsukasa: diba?
21:32 Mira-san: http://puu.sh/8hwiJ.jpg
21:33 Tsukasa: mmmm...
21:33 Tsukasa: baba mo pa ung 4
21:33 Mira-san: yep binaba ko na
21:33 Mira-san: medyo off kase lol
21:33 Tsukasa: mga ano pa
21:33 Tsukasa: tig 1 grid left and down
21:34 Mira-san: done
21:34 Tsukasa: eto gawin mo
21:34 Tsukasa: pano ka ba nagbabasa ng notes pag naglalaro ka
21:34 Tsukasa: isa isa?
21:35 Mira-san: no
21:35 Mira-san: lol
21:35 Tsukasa: ooo?
21:36 Mira-san: depends
21:36 Mira-san: when it's really fast i don't read the notes one by one
21:36 Mira-san: i think of ti as a pttern or something
21:36 Tsukasa: ayun rin dapat gawin mo sa mapping
21:36 Tsukasa: look at notes as a whole
21:37 Tsukasa: always remember the flow
21:38 Tsukasa: tapos
21:38 Tsukasa: please lang
21:38 Tsukasa: wag mo na gayahin ang 2014 meta :(
21:38 Mira-san: i don't recognize metas and stuff :o
21:38 Mira-san: nub mapper4lyf
21:38 Tsukasa: well
21:39 Tsukasa: nabuhay ka sa 2013 eh
21:39 Tsukasa: wala na akong magagawa dun
21:39 Mira-san: 2012 lolz
21:40 Tsukasa: 2012 was like
21:40 Tsukasa: 60% 2013
21:40 Mira-san: i see :o
21:42 Tsukasa: practice your slider creation as well
21:42 Tsukasa: hanggang ngayon nga pinapraktis ko pa
21:43 Mira-san: copypaste slider B)
21:43 Mira-san: also wavy sliders
21:43 Tsukasa: lol
21:43 Mira-san: i rarely see them now
21:43 Tsukasa: di na ako nagamit ng copy paste
21:43 Tsukasa: madalang na
21:43 Mira-san: is that part of the 2014 meta
21:43 Mira-san: no wavy sliders
21:43 Mira-san: lol
21:45 Tsukasa: mmm
21:45 Tsukasa: no
21:46 Tsukasa: di lang ako nakakakita ng use for that
21:46 Mira-san: oooh
21:46 Mira-san: lol
21:47 Tsukasa: well
21:47 Tsukasa: one thing you do have
21:47 Tsukasa: that's a silver lining in 2014
21:47 Tsukasa: is proper use of hitsounds
21:48 Tsukasa: well
21:48 Mira-san: oooh
21:48 Tsukasa: pare pareho naman ung issues ko sa map mo
21:48 Mira-san: i'm creating my own rhythm here :D
21:48 Tsukasa: placements and stuff
21:48 Tsukasa: ung sliders mo
21:48 Tsukasa: ung flow mo
21:49 Tsukasa: I just wish you'd be more consistent with your hitsound use though
21:49 Mira-san: ahaha
21:49 Mira-san: different rhythms :>
21:50 Tsukasa: no no
21:50 Tsukasa: ok na ok ung hitsounds mo
21:50 Mira-san: ah
21:50 Tsukasa: lalo na ung sa verse mo
21:50 Tsukasa: ung chorus mo ok rin
21:50 Tsukasa: pero sa intro ako naabala
21:51 Tsukasa: ok sana kung silent ung sounds dito
21:51 Tsukasa: erm... soft I mnea
21:51 Mira-san: hmm
21:53 Tsukasa: mas fit ung soft sa mood ng intro eh
21:53 Mira-san: will try that
21:54 Tsukasa: keep the jingle bells though
21:54 Tsukasa: lol
21:55 Mira-san: lol okay then
21:56 Tsukasa: ang baguhin mo lang
21:56 Tsukasa: ung intro
21:56 Tsukasa: sa 00:06:366 -
21:56 Tsukasa: *396
21:56 Tsukasa: trip ko ung pagkatapos niya
21:57 Mira-san: ayos :D haha
21:59 Tsukasa: ayusin mo lang ung claps
21:59 Tsukasa: good to go na yan
21:59 Mira-san: claps hmm
21:59 Mira-san: ah
21:59 Mira-san: mali yun
21:59 Mira-san: Soft:C1
21:59 Tsukasa: actually
22:00 Tsukasa: isa lang pala
22:00 Tsukasa: 00:10:431 (5) -
22:00 Tsukasa: remove clap
22:00 Mira-san: :o
22:00 Mira-san: walang clap dun
22:00 Mira-san: lol
22:00 Mira-san: ohwait
22:00 Tsukasa: 00:10:606 (6) - add clap
22:00 Tsukasa: wat
22:00 Tsukasa: meron sakin
22:00 *Tsukasa is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/294387 wowaka - World's End Dancehall (ROCKETMAN Remix) [NewInsane]]
22:01 Mira-san: nvm ok na
22:01 Mira-san: lol
22:01 Mira-san: natanggal ko na
22:01 Mira-san: nasa end pala
22:01 Tsukasa: mhmmm
22:01 Mira-san: okay done
22:01 Tsukasa: ok na
22:01 Tsukasa: kaya mo nasiguro tapusin to
22:02 Mira-san: hmm
22:02 Mira-san: suggest hitsounds sa intro lel
22:02 Mira-san: soft gamitin ko
22:02 Mira-san: >
22:02 Mira-san: ?
22:02 Tsukasa: ah mixture of normal soft
22:02 Tsukasa: + jingle bells
22:02 Tsukasa: and the whistle
22:04 Mira-san: hmm
22:04 Tsukasa: ...
22:04 Tsukasa: uhhmm...
22:04 Tsukasa: lol...
22:04 Tsukasa: so akala ko
22:04 Tsukasa: hitsounds
22:04 Tsukasa: un pala nasa kanta
22:04 Tsukasa: LOL
22:04 Mira-san: wat LOL
22:04 Tsukasa: well
22:04 Tsukasa: tama naman ako
22:04 Tsukasa: wag m0 na baguhin
22:05 Mira-san: nothing to change lel
22:06 Tsukasa: lol
22:06 Tsukasa: so we ok nowz?
22:06 Mira-san: er dode comments and everything
22:06 Mira-san: final judgement
22:06 Mira-san: judgment*
22:06 Mira-san: :>
22:06 Tsukasa: final judgment
22:06 Tsukasa: it's rankable
22:07 Tsukasa: but it needs tweeks
22:07 Tsukasa: kahit di mo na masyado baguhin
22:07 Mira-san: aaa dem tweeks lol
22:07 Tsukasa: itweek mo lang ung sliders and ung note placements
22:07 Tsukasa: medyo kailangan mong isa-isahin yan
22:07 Mira-san: hmm
22:08 Mira-san: okay
22:08 Tsukasa: marami rami yan
22:08 Tsukasa: pero
22:08 Tsukasa: it's going to be worth it
22:11 Tsukasa: oh well
22:11 Tsukasa: posting on forums, as standard procedure
Thanks lolz. :)
Selisi
hi Mira-san~ M4M from my queue
wow miku~ love~
[General]
  1. offset:786
  2. remove newinsane.zip/7z in SB file
  3. widescreen support open in hard diff. considering this map have storyboard work, open widescreen support all diff plz
  4. 01:30:606 - very high brightness of the background, consider to open epilepsy warning
  5. check your Normal diff name "Neormal"?
[Story board]
  1. 03:22:536 - you add ambiguity here, it would draw away players’ attention, highly recommend remove it
[_AI's Insane]
  1. add some whistle at the beginning, make your map more playable. and use soft-sliderslide to keep silent slider
  2. 00:00:781 (1) - whistle on head
  3. 00:01:132 (2) - whistle on head and reverse
  4. 00:01:834 (1) - whistle on head
  5. 00:02:185 (2,3) - whistle
  6. 00:02:536 (4) - whistle on head
  7. 00:03:238 (1) - whistle on head and reverse
  8. 00:04:115 (2) - whistle on head
  9. 00:04:641 (1) - this one is confusing, why reverse slider here, any sounds in 00:04:641 (1) - ? i thk it is overmap
  10. 00:04:992 (2,3,4,5) - all whistle on head
  11. 02:58:325 (5,6) - try to avoid this overlap
  12. 03:14:027 (9,10) - adjust 9 and 10, it looks bad in spacing and shape
  13. nothing wrong, but i recommend u try to put each object in a tidy way, this mapset looks a little disorder
[Insane]
  1. 00:03:589 (1,2,3) - keep the same spacing
  2. 01:26:045 (1) - remove nc
  3. 01:09:904 (7) - stack with 01:08:676 (4) - 's head
  4. 01:14:115 - add a circle
  5. 01:15:343 (5) - recommend to remove the reverse and start a slider at 01:15:719 - end at 01:16:045 -
  6. 02:48:852 (1) - finish on tail
  7. 04:07:097 (7) - remove whistle
  8. 04:06:746 (5) - whistle
[Hard]
  1. 00:56:220 (8,1) - recommend not to overlap here, very heavy sounds at 00:56:922 - it is fine to put a jump
  2. 01:33:413 (3,4,5) - spacing
  3. 02:57:624 (1) - this spinner i recommend end at 02:59:729 - then add a circle at 03:00:080 -
  4. 03:34:115 (1) - why spinner ?why? you can put breaktime here, but should continue to start at 03:34:115 - don't be laaaazy
[Normal???]
  1. 02:28:676 (4,5) - stack it better, it 0.02X spacing here
[Fr33z3R's Easy]
  1. open aimod and fix all unsnap slider tail
  2. 00:03:238 (4,5,1,2) - fix these spacing, it is kinda confusing.
really nice song~ Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Mira-san

Yuuki Aoi wrote:

Can't CTRL+C more than 1 object in the editor, for some reason it crashes my game when i copied more than 1 object so, sorry if this becomes a trouble.

Insane
Please add hitsounds from 00:34:466 (1) - to 01:29:729 (5) - yeah.

01:36:922 (1) - i think this slider is hard to read because it doesn't have that extra circle to make a triple before it. since it looks the same as the previous ones, players can easily mistake this as a triple, I think you should revise this :3
01:58:676 (1) - add NC:1 normal-hitfinish to the head?
02:04:115 (7) - remove normal-hitfinish?
02:04:290 (1) - add NC:1 normal-hitfinish to the head?
02:09:904 (1) - ^
02:12:711 (1) - the spinner, i think it would sound better if you use the default soft-hitfinish here. no. lolol

from 02:26:746 (1) - to 02:59:378 (5) - I can hear the hitsounds (the drum-hitnormal), but I think it's too... empty(?) Maybe if you could add more :3 removed all drum hitsounds
03:03:676 (4) - this piece here doesn't fit well with the song i think, it's better if the triple starts from here 03:03:413 (3) - dunno about this.
03:11:220 (5) - overmap xD, i can't tell what part of the song backs up that triple, i think it should be removed. i'm keeping it HUEHEU.
03:43:062 (2,1) - swap NC
03:59:378 (9) - NC
03:59:905 (1) - remove NC
04:14:729 (1) - remove NC
04:14:817 (2) - NC all NC mods are applied.

04:04:290 (1) - the stream here, I can't really tell why it's there. welp.
04:06:396 (1) - ^ welp.
04:12:010 (1) - i think this may become confusing for players to play out, the amount of times it repeats itself i mean. changed it to a stream lolz
04:18:325 (1) - normal hitsounds is better for the stream with soft-hitfinish at the end imo. :D "iyo". hehe.


Hard
00:20:343 (1) - i think this kind of triple is too hard for hard (Slider+2 circles, especially when the next object is a circle). i'd stay away from this type of triple for hard. changing it is up to you (i'll keep pointing it out, though changing it or not is up to u)
00:31:659 (6) - ^
00:50:255 (1) - ^
03:34:115 (1) - ?????? xD
03:53:764 (2) - slider triple again
04:00:781 (8) - ^
04:18:325 (1) - hitnormal + soft-hitfinish at the end? :3
All triples are intended. No changes :p .

done :D can't mod easy/normal :c
Thanks!

examination wrote:

Sorry for being late.
I'm so lazy ;w; No probs!

No kudosu on this post

[Hard]
00:17:536 - A note is needed here to fit with the rhythm,since you also set notes at 00:14:729 (6) 00:20:343 (1) 00:23:150 (1)
01:12:010 (3,4) - You can make a blanket here.
01:14:641 (7,1) - This flow feels not so good,change it into a blanket.
01:39:378 (2,4) - Maybe set 2's tail on 4's reverse arrow?
01:44:817 (3,4,5,6) - Make it a regular triangle.
02:08:501 (6,7) - Also make a blanket~
02:21:132 (1) - According to the music,only a circle is needed here. But I think you should follow another line instead of the piano line. Since it's hard to catch its rhythm,especially with the volume 100%
02:40:781 (1,2) - A blanket.
03:09:203 (2,4) - Same as 01:39:378 (2,4)
03:13:063 (3,4,5,6) - Same as 01:44:817 (3,4,5,6)
03:20:782 (2,3) - A blanket.
All are applied except the piano thingy. I changed it.

[Insane]
Generally,I think there are too many streams(stuffs like this 00:39:378 (2,3,4,5,6) ),and the DS are not changing in a fluent way (in the beginning part of this diff)
Since I can't play it myself,you can choose whether to take my suggestions.
01:52:185 (1,2,3) - They are overmapped.
03:52:273 (6) - This note is not necessary.
These stuffs should be regular triangles.
SPOILER
01:09:378 (6,7,8) - fixed
02:00:957 (5,6,7) - fixed
02:28:852 (1,2,3) - intended
02:40:431 (5,1,2) - its supposed to be a diamond pattern lol
02:53:413 (1,2,3) - fixed
04:02:712 (4,5,6) - intended
Thanks!

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

hi Mira-san~ M4M from my queue
wow miku~ love~
[General]
  1. offset:786 i'll try to ask about this and see if your timing is right.
  2. remove newinsane.zip/7z in SB file wao it got included. thanks :D
  3. widescreen support open in hard diff. considering this map have storyboard work, open widescreen support all diff plz okay
  4. 01:30:606 - very high brightness of the background, consider to open epilepsy warning epilepsy warning added
  5. check your Normal diff name "Neormal"?
intended lolz
[Story board]
  1. 03:22:536 - you add ambiguity here, it would draw away players’ attention, highly recommend remove it
people can simply turn the SB off. that's what they do nowadays. :<

[Insane]
  1. 00:03:589 (1,2,3) - keep the same spacing
  2. 01:26:045 (1) - remove nc
  3. 01:09:904 (7) - stack with 01:08:676 (4) - 's head
  4. 01:14:115 - add a circle
  5. 01:15:343 (5) - recommend to remove the reverse and start a slider at 01:15:719 - end at 01:16:045 -
  6. 02:48:852 (1) - finish on tail
  7. 04:07:097 (7) - remove whistle
  8. 04:06:746 (5) - whistle the whistles are intended.
Almost did everything here.

[Hard]
  1. 00:56:220 (8,1) - recommend not to overlap here, very heavy sounds at 00:56:922 - it is fine to put a jump changed to something else.
  2. 01:33:413 (3,4,5) - spacing mmm
  3. 02:57:624 (1) - this spinner i recommend end at 02:59:729 - then add a circle at 03:00:080 - added
  4. 03:34:115 (1) - why spinner ?why? you can put breaktime here, but should continue to start at 03:34:115 - don't be laaaazy I added more notes in this part.
really nice song~ Good Luck~
どもども!


aaaaaaa.
NachtHemdPlaya
Good job :D Insane diff feels much better now! Gonna mod it later on if I have some time
moonlightleaf
Form my queue

[General]

try no to use two similar grays

[SB]

the size is not the same, just say, maybe no problem , as : 13&14&15

[Normal]
00:08:852 (5,1) - blanket

00:29:203 note

00:32:711 (3) - change to note and 00:33:062

add a note on 00:33:413 (4) add finish

01:23:238 (2) - no hidden , put on other space

01:26:746 (4,6) - ^

01:39:027 (1) - end 01:39:378 , note 01:39:553

02:04:992 (2,3) - change to slider, same as 02:10:606 (2)

02:25:343 (1) - delete

02:42:010 (4) - ^

02:36:571 (1,2) - maybe stack ?

02:55:694 (3,4) - change to slider , too hard

02:57:097 (3,4) - ^

03:04:641 (3,4,5) - stack is no so good

03:55:167 (1) - delete

03:56:571 slider to 03:56:834

04:18:325 (1) - too hard in Normal

[Hard]

00:06:396 (1,2) - strange

00:20:431 (2,3,4,5,6) - strange , different from before

00:51:220 (6) - delete , no sound here

01:16:483 (5) - ^

00:55:518 (7) - all clap change to finish

01:34:466 (1) - change to note at 01:34:641

03:04:291 (1) - ^ same way

01:39:378 (2,4) - stack to better

01:50:255 (1) - sound is in 01:50:431 and 01:50:606

02:15:167 (2) - (332,96)

02:22:536 note same as 02:23:939 (4)

02:25:343 ^

02:29:027 (3) - ctrl+g

02:33:062 (2) - ^

02:40:693 (8) - delete

03:00:080 (1) - ^

03:14:642 (3) - delete will be better

03:53:939 (3,4,5) - 5 &(34) ctrl+g

04:00:694 (7) - delete

[Insane]

00:16:571 (6) - try other place (248,32)

00:18:150 (2,3) - ctrl+g

00:29:553 (3) - ctrl+g

00:32:624 (5) - (352,188)

00:42:360 (11) - ctrl+g

00:56:396 (10,11) - try to map like 00:56:045 (8,9)

01:13:062 (4) - ctrl+g

01:15:518 (8) - ctrl+g

01:30:255 (8,9) - too far , 7 move closer to 8 ?

01:42:448 (3) - delete

02:42:010 (7,1) - return to 1 maybe bad flow

02:48:852 (1) - ctrl+g

03:11:132 (4,5) - delete

stack you can do better

04:11:132 (3,4) - ctrl+g


good luck on rank~ :)
Frostings
hello Mira-san! :)
Doing a mod in place of Star Seraph in her M4M. You'll be receiving a mod from me instead of her, I hope this is ok :?

[Fr33z3R's Easy]
00:23:238 (1,2) - blanket and center the slider
00:30:957 (4,5) - why don't you blanket these?
00:51:659 (1,2,3) - not sure about this overlap. It's a little hard to read on Easy. try: http://puu.sh/8jA1T.jpg
01:01:483 (1,2) - is this really necessary?
01:17:974 (4,5) - overlap is not nice. maybe try http://puu.sh/8jA9N.jpg
01:27:097 (2,3) - this blanket could also be better
02:13:764 (3,4) - ^ (i recommend using a smaller grid size for better accuracy)
04:15:518 (2) - It might be better to make this a 1/1 slider instead of 1/2 reverse slider, because this is the only object that is like this

[Normal]
00:12:010 (5) - NC (maybe blue) for effect with SB? Not entirely necessary, just a small suggestion
00:38:325 (2,3) - you should blanket this better
00:50:606 (4,1) - hmm you should avoid small overlap like this. you could rotate the reverse slider a little bit so they're not touching
01:12:360 (3) - snapping intentional? (it ends on the blue tick instead of red or white)

this difficulty is pretty hard ><

[Hard]
00:42:185 (2,3) - could blanket these
00:59:729 (4) - NC should be here, instead of 00:58:852 (1) - and 01:01:132 (1) - because the song is separated in 2 bars and this is the start of a new 2 bars
There are some other NC issues but I won't mention them specifically
Generally the song behaves in such a way where there are 4 beats in one bar, and each 2 bars are distinct from each other.
You want to follow a NC pattern like so:
1 (NC), 2, 3, 4 / 1, 2, 3, 4 / 1 (NC), 2, 3, 4 / 1, 2, 3, 4 <---- if this makes sense
obviously the pattern can change depending on what you have mapped, but for the most part you want to follow this.
You're following a NC pattern that is slightly irregular. Maybe go through the map and look out for this
02:22:536 - note here to follow the instrumentals
02:25:343 - ^

[Insane]
fun to play, really nice!

[_AI's Insane]
main thing is to avoid unintentional overlaps
things like:
03:09:553 (5,6,7) -
03:24:290 (4,6) -
03:35:518 (6,8) -
03:54:466 (5,1) -
03:58:325 (2,3,4) -

unfortunately the approach rate isn't quite high enough that these aren't noticeable

also
04:04:115 (2,3,4,5,6) - why not make distances the same?

alright that's all from me. Hope this helps and good luck
Kinshara
Other comments:

This Storyboard is beautiful...makes me want to cry ;_;
Topic Starter
Mira-san
I'll mod now.
I guess not being lazy helps. :D

Star Seraph wrote:

Other comments:

This Storyboard is beautiful...makes me want to cry ;_;
Thanks! lol it's been like that since April 2013-ish. :D
Topic Starter
Mira-san

moonlightleaf wrote:

Form my queue

[General]

try no to use two similar grays i need it since the intro and a part needs a different gray :w;

[SB]

the size is not the same, just say, maybe no problem , as : 13&14&15 ah yes. noob storyboarding at it's best lelz.

[Hard]

00:06:396 (1,2) - strange i could have used an explanation here. :<

00:20:431 (2,3,4,5,6) - strange , different from before what is.

00:51:220 (6) - delete , no sound here i am following a rhythm here :< ehehe.

01:16:483 (5) - ^ ^

00:55:518 (7) - all clap change to finish changed

01:34:466 (1) - change to note at 01:34:641 made a better pattern out of this :D

03:04:291 (1) - ^ same way also here.

01:39:378 (2,4) - stack to better stacked.

01:50:255 (1) - sound is in 01:50:431 and 01:50:606 explain this please. :<

02:15:167 (2) - (332,96) okay.

02:22:536 note same as 02:23:939 (4)

02:25:343 ^ both fixed.

02:29:027 (3) - ctrl+g woth
02:33:062 (2) - ^ could have used an explanation here.

02:40:693 (8) - delete consistent rhythm is needed ;w;

03:00:080 (1) - ^ okay i will. this doesn't follow anything.

03:14:642 (3) - delete will be better explanation would do best. :<

03:53:939 (3,4,5) - 5 &(34) ctrl+g eh :?:

04:00:694 (7) - delete eh. same point as before.

[Insane]

00:16:571 (6) - try other place (248,32) moved somewhere further lol

00:18:150 (2,3) - ctrl+g nuuuuuu ;w;

00:29:553 (3) - ctrl+g these are anti-jumps and stuff. they are intended. ;w;

00:32:624 (5) - (352,188) jump intended. :v

00:42:360 (11) - ctrl+g here too.

00:56:396 (10,11) - try to map like 00:56:045 (8,9) i would lack a tick then. ;w;

01:13:062 (4) - ctrl+g i will keep that jump lol.

01:15:518 (8) - ctrl+g it would make a weird flow then?

01:30:255 (8,9) - too far , 7 move closer to 8 ? it's intended ;w;

01:42:448 (3) - delete intended triple

02:42:010 (7,1) - return to 1 maybe bad flow it's been there since day 1 of the re-re-map so i guess it's fine

02:48:852 (1) - ctrl+g ets entendedooo

03:11:132 (4,5) - delete

stack you can do better
this isn't supposed to be stacked lol

04:11:132 (3,4) - ctrl+g ehhhh. direct flow here.


good luck on rank~ :)
Thanks! :D

Frostings wrote:

hello Mira-san! :)
Doing a mod in place of Star Seraph in her M4M. You'll be receiving a mod from me instead of her, I hope this is ok :?

[Hard]
00:42:185 (2,3) - could blanket these
00:59:729 (4) - NC should be here, instead of 00:58:852 (1) - and 01:01:132 (1) - because the song is separated in 2 bars and this is the start of a new 2 bars
There are some other NC issues but I won't mention them specifically
Generally the song behaves in such a way where there are 4 beats in one bar, and each 2 bars are distinct from each other.
You want to follow a NC pattern like so:
1 (NC), 2, 3, 4 / 1, 2, 3, 4 / 1 (NC), 2, 3, 4 / 1, 2, 3, 4 <---- if this makes sense
obviously the pattern can change depending on what you have mapped, but for the most part you want to follow this.
You're following a NC pattern that is slightly irregular. Maybe go through the map and look out for this
02:22:536 - note here to follow the instrumentals
02:25:343 - ^

All are applied. NC fixed.

[Insane]
fun to play, really nice! Thanks! ;D

alright that's all from me. Hope this helps and good luck
Thank you!

皆さん有難う. #weebs lol
69653863
Mod request from my queue

Guide
Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

Additional notes:
I cannot mod another game modes.
Please reply to my mods, I always looking forward to the replies so I could improve better.
If you think one or more points on my mod is unclear, feel free to ask about it.

General
  1. 00:12:016 - Move title text here, ask the BATs.
  2. Your combo colours didn't really fit. I suggest to use lighter shade on each colour

    Storyboard
    1. Somehow you're a bit careless as all the lyrics coordinates are not unified. Some lyrics are placed too left or too right, this is just ain't neat. To fix it, better replace
      Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"EVERY LYRIC SPRITE",320,240
      into
      Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"EVERY LYRIC SPRITE",158,415
      and remove every M parameters below it (should looks like M,0,109888,,158,415 or w/e)
    2. And later instead of scaling every sprites through SB, why don't you resize the sprites on the image editor as scaling sprites through SB took SB load
    3. Pulse is too big. I suggest you to tune it down a bit.
    4. I'd rather write "A guest diff by" instead of "A guest diff of"
Easy
  1. A lot of hitsound inconsistencies, fix please.
  2. 00:03:588 (5,1) - No, wat. Why don't you stack (5) with previous (4)?
  3. 00:04:290 (1,2) - Stack these too please
  4. 00:07:805 - I don't see any reason why you didn't put a note here
  5. 00:36:922 (1) - NC here just didn't fit. Move the NC to 00:37:974 (3) -
  6. 01:01:483 (1,2) - No, why? Let the players enjoy the break
  7. 01:08:150 (5) - Man please, this is clearly downbeat so put NC here
  8. 01:16:922 (3) - Broken: remove red sliderpoint at the end
  9. 02:46:395 (1) - Remove the spinner and map this part, really unfitting to place snipper here
  10. 02:54:817 (6) - NC here
  11. 03:32:711 (1) - Remove NC
  12. 03:34:466 (3) - Put NC here and remove next NC
  13. 03:36:922 (1) - Remove this NC. Why so much combo with only few notes?
  14. 03:40:787 - Add note
  15. 04:10:606 (1,2,3) - This is ugly. At least mirror it or something
  16. 04:15:518 (2) - Out of place, replace it with a slider without repeats
Normal
  1. 00:33:764 (5,6) - If you could unstack these, it'll be good
  2. 00:50:606 (4,1) - Looks ugly ;w; put them farther?
  3. 00:54:115 (1,2) - Spacing
  4. 01:06:746 (1) - Spinner is way too short, I suggest remove it, there's a better place to put spinners throughout the song
  5. 01:33:939 (1) - Put this on 01:33:770 - and add repeat, sounds better.
  6. 01:41:483 (6) - Stack to 01:41:834 (1) - instead
  7. 02:02:887 (1) - Remove please, same reason as previous spinner
  8. 02:25:343 (1) - ^
  9. 02:37:273 (3,4) - Breaks flow if stacked, so please unstack
  10. 02:46:396 (1,2) - Spacing
  11. 03:01:132 (3) - Add clap on slider end
  12. 03:09:209 - See my mod on 01:41:483 (6) - should be similar
  13. 04:17:624 (4,5) - Remove these and extend the next spinner to start here. Really.
Hard
  1. A very nice diff yet overmapped on intro, ending, and kiai sections, which lead the star rating up to 5.00 and diff feels like Insane (or Hard+). Overmapping because you mapped those parts with completely 1/2 notes and sliders. My suggestion is remap those parts and add more 1/1 notes. I'm gonna ignore these parts and mod the other parts.
  2. 00:36:396 (3) - Put the sliderend right on top of 00:35:167 (2) - looks better
  3. 01:03:238 (3,5) - Somehow, this sliderbow could be made better. Try fixing the blanket?
  4. 01:07:799 (4) - Not really a good idea. Replace it with a circle maybe?
  5. 01:12:010 (3,4) - Spacing.
  6. 02:11:308 (5,6,7) - Imperfect sliderbow again.
  7. 02:14:816 (7,8) - Merge into slider for better flow?
  8. 02:15:518 (1) - Use a soft-hitwhistle on the spinner end, sounds more fitting
  9. 02:27:799 (5,1) - Why stack? Doesn't play good here
I like the way you use hitsounds here, they're nice.

Insane diffs are fine, the flow, the hitsounds, overall is good. Nice job.

Starred. Good luck.
Topic Starter
Mira-san

inverness wrote:

Mod request from my queue

Guide
Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

Additional notes:
I cannot mod another game modes.
Please reply to my mods, I always looking forward to the replies so I could improve better.
If you think one or more points on my mod is unclear, feel free to ask about it.

General
  1. 00:12:016 - Move title text here, ask the BATs. Will do. gg.
  2. Your combo colours didn't really fit. I suggest to use lighter shade on each colour. I'd like to see your preferences about this.

    Storyboard
    1. Somehow you're a bit careless as all the lyrics coordinates are not unified. Some lyrics are placed too left or too right, this is just ain't neat. To fix it, better replace
      Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"EVERY LYRIC SPRITE",320,240
      into
      Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"EVERY LYRIC SPRITE",158,415
      and remove every M parameters below it (should looks like M,0,109888,,158,415 or w/e) Done.

    2. And later instead of scaling every sprites through SB, why don't you resize the sprites on the image editor as scaling sprites through SB took SB load Suggestion taken. Will try to do that soon™
    3. Pulse is too big. I suggest you to tune it down a bit. Wot. lol
    4. I'd rather write "A guest diff by" instead of "A guest diff of"
    Changed. welpo.

Hard
  1. A very nice diff yet overmapped on intro, ending, and kiai sections, which lead the star rating up to 5.00 and diff feels like Insane (or Hard+). Overmapping because you mapped those parts with completely 1/2 notes and sliders. My suggestion is remap those parts and add more 1/1 notes. I'm gonna ignore these parts and mod the other parts. I could use more suggestions regarding this overmapping thing lol. For now I'll leave it as it is.
  2. 00:36:396 (3) - Put the sliderend right on top of 00:35:167 (2) - looks better
  3. 01:03:238 (3,5) - Somehow, this sliderbow could be made better. Try fixing the blanket?
  4. 01:07:799 (4) - Not really a good idea. Replace it with a circle maybe?
  5. 01:12:010 (3,4) - Spacing.
  6. 02:11:308 (5,6,7) - Imperfect sliderbow again.
  7. 02:14:816 (7,8) - Merge into slider for better flow?
  8. 02:15:518 (1) - Use a soft-hitwhistle on the spinner end, sounds more fitting
  9. 02:27:799 (5,1) - Why stack? Doesn't play good here
Tried my best making the sliderbow perfect. All are applied.

I like the way you use hitsounds here, they're nice. Thanks :D

Insane diffs are fine, the flow, the hitsounds, overall is good. Nice job. /hi5 _AI

Starred. Good luck.
thxthx :D
Thank you! :D
_AI
Done all mods above me
Mira-san : http://puu.sh/8lohH.osu thnkz ;D
neonat
Quite a few mods lol. Will try to check them if I can find time from tmr onwards.
FrzR

Frostings wrote:

[Fr33z3R's Easy]
00:23:238 (1,2) - blanket and center the slider ~Fixed. Also Copy-pasted 00:26:051 (4) by 90°.
00:30:957 (4,5) - why don't you blanket these? ~Fixed.
00:51:659 (1,2,3) - not sure about this overlap. It's a little hard to read on Easy. try: http://puu.sh/8jA1T.jpg ~I liked it. Added =w=)b
01:01:483 (1,2) - is this really necessary? ~Why not eh? Long breaks could bore the player imo. o3o
01:17:974 (4,5) - overlap is not nice. maybe try http://puu.sh/8jA9N.jpg ~Added. Thanks.
01:27:097 (2,3) - this blanket could also be better ~Fixed.
02:13:764 (3,4) - ^ (i recommend using a smaller grid size for better accuracy) ~Nah. Good enough for me. =w=
04:15:518 (2) - It might be better to make this a 1/1 slider instead of 1/2 reverse slider, because this is the only object that is like this ~Indeed it's unique for the map. But I liked the clap hitsound ;w;. Replaced with 1/1 Slider.

inverness wrote:

Easy
  1. A lot of hitsound inconsistencies, fix please. ~Sorry. Well that map was like almost a year ago. So I guess I could remaster the hitsounds on my next update. Thanks.
  2. 00:03:588 (5,1) - No, wat. Why don't you stack (5) with previous (4)? ~Hmm. Yep, okay. Since It has a long gap between them
  3. 00:04:290 (1,2) - Stack these too please ~Stacked
  4. 00:07:805 - I don't see any reason why you didn't put a note here ~I followed a different beat there before. Added
  5. 00:36:922 (1) - NC here just didn't fit. Move the NC to 00:37:974 (3) - ~Fixed
  6. 01:01:483 (1,2) - No, why? Let the players enjoy the break ~Kind of a conflict with Frostings. I stated it already. Denied =w=
  7. 01:08:150 (5) - Man please, this is clearly downbeat so put NC here ~Didn't notice that before lol. Fixed
  8. 01:16:922 (3) - Broken: remove red sliderpoint at the end ~Fixed
  9. 02:46:395 (1) - Remove the spinner and map this part, really unfitting to place snipper here ~Removed and added notes
  10. 02:54:817 (6) - NC here ~Fixed
  11. 03:32:711 (1) - Remove NC ~Removed
  12. 03:34:466 (3) - Put NC here and remove next NC ~Fixed
  13. 03:36:922 (1) - Remove this NC. Why so much combo with only few notes? ~"Whoops". Fixed
  14. 03:40:787 - Add note ~Added
  15. 04:10:606 (1,2,3) - This is ugly. At least mirror it or something ~lol. Mirrored
  16. 04:15:518 (2) - Out of place, replace it with a slider without repeats~Fixed from Frostings' mod.
Thanks guys! :D RE-EDIT: Finished remastering the hitsounds and reupped days ago. I was on a trip after that. =w=)b
moonlightleaf
no kd , just for eexplan-req

[hard]

00:06:396 (1,2) - strange i could have used an explanation here. :<

01:50:255 (1) - sound is in 01:50:431 and 01:50:606 explain this please. :<

02:33:062 (2) - ^ could have used an explanation here. ----do this flow will be better

03:14:642 (3) - delete will be better explanation would do best. :< ---to make a break ?

03:53:939 (3,4,5) - 5 &(34) ctrl+g eh :?:
69653863
I know you could decide the combo colours with your own preference, just use lighter color shade like cyan, light green, pink, etc. Simple, I'll leave that back to you.

Regarding overmapped Hard, I suggest that you remapped the parts with more 1/1 sliders and less jumps. To be simple: just the way you mapped other non-overmapped parts. I hope you can understand what I mean here.
Topic Starter
Mira-san

moonlightleaf wrote:

no kd , just for eexplan-req

[hard]

00:06:396 (1,2) - strange i could have used an explanation here. :<
wat lol.

01:50:255 (1) - sound is in 01:50:431 and 01:50:606 explain this please. :<
welp did something about this. thanks!

02:33:062 (2) - ^ could have used an explanation here. ----do this flow will be better hmm i think it's fine. unless you can give something better :D

03:14:642 (3) - delete will be better explanation would do best. :< ---to make a break ? it's in kiai? but yeah i think i get your point here, i'll try and see which is better.

03:53:939 (3,4,5) - 5 &(34) ctrl+g eh :?:
ah as for this i don't want to make jumps since I used DS here. well the map not as DS'd as it used to be since I made a few tweaks (mods).
Thanks! :D

inverness wrote:

I know you could decide the combo colours with your own preference, just use lighter color shade like cyan, light green, pink, etc. Simple, I'll leave that back to you. For now I like the colors. I guess I'll leave it as it is.

Regarding overmapped Hard, I suggest that you remapped the parts with more 1/1 sliders and less jumps. To be simple: just the way you mapped other non-overmapped parts. I hope you can understand what I mean here. I did something which kind of like follows the rhythm of Insane (wat), yeah. lol.
Thanks again! :D
WinglessAsura
  • here's my mod !! :)

    Fr33z3R's Easy

    1. 00:04:296 change the object to short slider. slider starts at 00:04:121 ends at 00:04:296
    2. 00:04:998 change the object to short slider. slider starts at 00:04:823 ends at 00:04:998
    3. 00:09:735 add slider here, slider ends at 00:09:910
    4. 00:36:226 increase slider length to 00:36:402
    5. 00:47:454 decrease slider ending to 00:47:805
    6. 00:48:156 add a normal object here.
    7. 00:57:279 ~ 01:01:138 empty? try to fill it. :)
    8. 03:35:173 add a normal object here to follow song rhytm.

    Neormal

    1. increase DS to 0,9 ~ 1,0
    2. 00:35:524 change the object to short slider, slider starts at 00:35:349 ends at 00:35:524
    3. 00:38:331 same goes as number 2
    4. 00:40:963 this one too, also at 00:43:945

    Insane

    1. decrease DS 1,3 ~ 1,2 based on high AR, you should balance them.
    2. slightly improve hitsound on this map

    Hard

    1. 00:06:928 add slider here, slider ends at 00:07:103
    2. 00:07:279 move slider starts to 00:07:454 ends at 00:07:630
    3. i don't see any jumps here.
    4. slightly improve hitsound ? (opinion)
well, that's my mod. hope it will be useful ;)

well, thats
Topic Starter
Mira-san

WinglessAsura wrote:

  • here's my mod !! :)

    Insane

    1. decrease DS 1,3 ~ 1,2 based on high AR, you should balance them. I've used 0.9x - 1.3x DS on some parts. :<
    2. slightly improve hitsound on this map I could use an explanation here.

    Hard

    1. 00:06:928 add slider here, slider ends at 00:07:103 I am following the essential downbeat here.
    2. 00:07:279 move slider starts to 00:07:454 ends at 00:07:630 Then again, I am following the essential downbeat here.
    3. i don't see any jumps here. There isn't supposed to be lol.
    4. slightly improve hitsound ? (opinion) Errr how can I do that? An explanation would do best for these kinds of things. Or you're probably trying to say "fix some errors on hitsounds"? Hmm.
well, that's my mod. hope it will be useful ;)
Mmm. Thanks! :?
neonat
Updated difficulty

SPOILER
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AudioFilename: Worlds End . Dance Hall.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2012
PreviewTime: 90606
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:ワールズエンド・ダンスホール (ROCKETMAN Remix)
Artist:wowaka
ArtistUnicode:wowaka
Creator:Mira-san
Version:Neormal
Source:
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[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
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FrzR

WinglessAsura wrote:

[list]here's my mod !! :)

Fr33z3R's Easy

1. 00:04:296 change the object to short slider. slider starts at 00:04:121 ends at 00:04:296 ~Hm.. I don't know. I prefer having these as circles only. Denied
2. 00:04:998 change the object to short slider. slider starts at 00:04:823 ends at 00:04:998 ~^ >.>
3. 00:09:735 add slider here, slider ends at 00:09:910 ~I don't like this one. Feels a bit awkward since most sliders are at 1/1 length.
4. 00:36:226 increase slider length to 00:36:402 ~This suggestion makes the clap hitsound offbeat. Sorry, denied.
5. 00:47:454 decrease slider ending to 00:47:805 ~Eeehh.. This ruins the flow on the preceding notes. ><
6. 00:48:156 add a normal object here. ~^
7. 00:57:279 ~ 01:01:138 empty? try to fill it. :) ~It's a short break time ffs. It's on Easy. ><
8. 03:35:173 add a normal object here to follow song rhytm. ~Sorry but the beat I'm following is different on what you're suggesting. ;w;

Sorry. Your mod isn't good enough for me. ;w;)b
Topic Starter
Mira-san
asd AI's Insane turned into an Extra.

why.

discard all mods LOL. Mod the new diff please! :DD
FrzR

Mira-san wrote:

asd AI's Insane turned into an Extra.

why.

discard all mods LOL. Mod the new diff please! :DD
#pending5ever. Moddings could extend for weeks or even months. ;w;)b
Topic Starter
Mira-san

Fr33z3R wrote:

Mira-san wrote:

asd AI's Insane turned into an Extra.

why.

discard all mods LOL. Mod the new diff please! :DD
#pending5ever. Moddings could extend for weeks or even months. ;w;)b
Hopefully it doesn't. :<

#pending6ever
ffstar
me slaps _AI

random mod

[AI's Extra]
00:03:770 - why don't you decrease the volume here to 10%? (increase back after it)
00:04:472 - ^
00:08:858 (3,1) - actually it's a bit out of flow (just a bit), maybe consider move them to x:160 y:172 and since your (1) has lower DS (0.85) so it doesn't really affect the distance too :3
00:14:472 (7) - this slider isn't straight enough lol, move the last node to x:248 y:240 (feel free to ignore it lelelel)
00:23:068 - here, there is an obvious sound here, you can try add slider tick hitsound or just make it like this http://puu.sh/8qDzC.jpg
00:33:945 (4,7) - add clap?
00:34:384 - (slider end) add clap?
00:56:226 (4) - maybe consider increase the sv? just try whatever speed you like, i recommend 1.5 :P hehehe, blame me, i like to play sv changes :P
01:11:226 - maybe add a circle on 01:11:314 (2) - slider start here? because of the vocal
01:15:349 (3) - actually the vocal is on 01:15:437 - ._. but nvm you can ignore this lel
01:52:717 (1) - hmm, actually it start a bit late, should be on the blue tick before it
02:40:963 (2) - remove clap on slider start
02:42:366 (2) - ^
02:49:559 (5,7,9) - consider NC this...
02:55:349 (4,5,6) - select all and move down one grip make it parallel to 02:54:823 (1) -
03:18:682 (1,2,3) - ctrl+G these, make the flow better actually :3
03:21:314 (1) - remove NC
03:21:489 (2) - and NC this, because here got an anti-jump
03:59:384 (1) - better blanket http://puu.sh/8qHMH.jpg
288,216,239384,86,0,P|216:256|136:208,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Insane]
00:07:279 (3) - add drum clap/normal clap? on slider start? there is an obvious drum sound there
00:08:682 (7) - ^
00:09:910 (4) - slider end ^
00:11:314 (9) - slider end ^
00:11:665 (10) - add normal clap
00:25:349 (3) - the flow a bit off, try ctrl+G it
01:52:717 (1) - maybe change the hitsound to soft-default, the N:C1 hitnormal not fit the sound there ><
03:00:086 (9,10) - i suggest you to put (9) as moving-up-slider and (10) as moving-down-slider will follow the flow more. example : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1554553
03:39:735 (1) - hmm, actually this part adding a spinner doesn't fit ><

sorry, i lazy mod the rest ><

well, nice work :3 good luck then!
_AI

ffstar0716 wrote:

me slaps _AI

random mod

[AI's Extra]
00:03:770 - why don't you decrease the volume here to 10%? (increase back after it)
00:04:472 - ^
00:08:858 (3,1) - actually it's a bit out of flow (just a bit), maybe consider move them to x:160 y:172 and since your (1) has lower DS (0.85) so it doesn't really affect the distance too :3
00:14:472 (7) - this slider isn't straight enough lol, move the last node to x:248 y:240 (feel free to ignore it lelelel) eagle eye
00:23:068 - here, there is an obvious sound here, you can try add slider tick hitsound or just make it like this http://puu.sh/8qDzC.jpg
00:33:945 (4,7) - add clap?
00:34:384 - (slider end) add clap?
00:56:226 (4) - maybe consider increase the sv? just try whatever speed you like, i recommend 1.5 :P hehehe, blame me, i like to play sv changes :P Increased SV! ah kick ah lai
01:11:226 - maybe add a circle on 01:11:314 (2) - slider start here? because of the vocal
01:15:349 (3) - actually the vocal is on 01:15:437 - ._. but nvm you can ignore this lel
01:52:717 (1) - hmm, actually it start a bit late, should be on the blue tick before it
02:40:963 (2) - remove clap on slider start
02:42:366 (2) - ^
02:49:559 (5,7,9) - consider NC this...
02:55:349 (4,5,6) - select all and move down one grip make it parallel to 02:54:823 (1) - Nazi eye
03:18:682 (1,2,3) - ctrl+G these, make the flow better actually :3
03:21:314 (1) - remove NC
03:21:489 (2) - and NC this, because here got an anti-jump
03:59:384 (1) - better blanket http://puu.sh/8qHMH.jpg
288,216,239384,86,0,P|216:256|136:208,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

sorry, i lazy mod the rest ><

well, nice work :3 good luck then!
/me slap back etstar Thanks!

Mira-san : http://puu.sh/8qJFH.osu
Topic Starter
Mira-san

ffstar0716 wrote:

me slaps _AI

[Insane]
00:07:279 (3) - add drum clap/normal clap? on slider start? there is an obvious drum sound there
00:08:682 (7) - ^
00:09:910 (4) - slider end ^
00:11:314 (9) - slider end ^
00:11:665 (10) - add normal clap
there isn't supposed to be hitsounds here lol

00:25:349 (3) - the flow a bit off, try ctrl+G it applied
01:52:717 (1) - maybe change the hitsound to soft-default, the N:C1 hitnormal not fit the sound there >< applied
03:00:086 (9,10) - i suggest you to put (9) as moving-up-slider and (10) as moving-down-slider will follow the flow more. example : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1554553
03:39:735 (1) - hmm, actually this part adding a spinner doesn't fit >< hmm. aaaaa i think it's fine tho lol. i'll think about it. ^^

sorry, i lazy mod the rest ><

well, nice work :3 good luck then!
Thanks! :D
neonat
Mine was pending for 1 year 4 months ^^'
Topic Starter
Mira-san

neonat wrote:

Mine was pending for 1 year 4 months ^^'
I wonder how long this will take lololol. 8-)

Maybe 3 years.
Asagi Mutsuki
99 sp? nope
Topic Starter
Mira-san

cdhsausageboy wrote:

99 sp? nope
LOL WAT

THANKS MAN HAHAHAHAHA :D
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