wowaka - World's End Dancehall (ROCKETMAN Remix) [Osu|Taiko]‬ · forum‬

_none_old

Joined April 2010

i like that songs /o/ Remix verison!

[General]
Artist : ROCKETMAN (Genjitsutouhi-P is original verison maker)
Source : Genjitsutouhi-P

Red : Must Be Fixed(*Unrankable)
Green : need fixed, but skip ok.
Orange : Just my opinion

[Fr33z3R's Easy]
1/4 notes not match on music : +0:058 offset
03:22:871 - End kiai time : easy's score is so much

[Hard]
hitsound WIP, then skip this diff to mod.

[World's End]
kiai time's slider speed x1.5? i think need fix x1.25 or x1.0

[AI]
too Nice mapping to mod! lol

that's mod may not help you, but i hope to be it helpful from you.
(Bad engg D:)

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 12 years ago

DEAncientNaga wrote:
Just some mods, tho not sure you request it or not

[General]
Audio lead in is different, please check

Please resnap all inherited [/color](green) timing points ~Fixed!

[Easy]
03:42:520 - KIAI time ends ~Fixed!
04:16:204 (1) - Something like this looks better ~Fixed!
Picture

[AI]
00:56:922 - Break starts here ~Fixed!
02:59:027 (8) - Resnap timing ~Fixed!
01:10:080 (1) - Remove NC ~Fixed!
01:10:781 (3) - NC ~Fixed!
03:29:904 (1,2,3,4,5) - ?? ~I'll leave it like that. ^^

[Hard]
00:36:818 (9) - Resnap timing ~I don't really know what to resnap on this one but ok.
Others are good >.o /

[World's End]
Nicely mapped (>.o)b ~lel thanks. alot
Hope it will be ranked

Mania Vocaloid wrote:
i like that songs /o/ Remix verison!

[General]
Artist : ROCKETMAN (Genjitsutouhi-P is original verison maker) ~the source is Genjitsu? wut. I'll ask some people about this.
Source : Genjitsutouhi-P

Red : Must Be Fixed(*Unrankable)
Green : need fixed, but skip ok.
Orange : Just my opinion

[Fr33z3R's Easy]
1/4 notes not match on music : +0:058 offset ~idk about this. I'll leave it.
03:22:871 - End kiai time : easy's score is so much ~Fixed!

[Hard]
hitsound WIP, then skip this diff to mod. ~I'll move on this later.

[World's End]
kiai time's slider speed x1.5? i think need fix x1.25 or x1.0 ~1.5x is just fine lol.

[AI]
too Nice mapping to mod! lol ~ikr huehue. Thank ShanaAI for the awesome diff

that's mod may not help you, but i hope to be it helpful from you.
(Bad engg D:)

_AI

225 posts

Joined February 2013

_AI 12 years ago

Fr33z3R's Easy : maybe AR2 will be better,
Well, juz a suggestion :3 u can ignore me

AruOtta

1,303 posts

Joined May 2012

AruOtta 12 years ago

My 6th Mod =D

[General]
00:21:834 to 00:22:887 The background change strangely here =/

[Wolrd's End]
When the circle has a soft clap hitsound, maybe you can add a soft whistle hitsound, it'll feels better
01:45:518 Maybe you can add a circle to x:200 y:64
02:15:518 to 02:26:659 You can add whistle hitsounds, it'll feels better
03:15:343 Maybe you can add a circle to x:312 y:64

The rest of the song is good =)

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 12 years ago

ShanaAI wrote:
Fr33z3R's Easy : maybe AR2 will be better,
Well, juz a suggestion :3 u can ignore me

naaaah. lol

Kenterz9 wrote:
My 6th Mod =D

[General]
00:21:834 to 00:22:887 The background change strangely here =/ ~It's intentional ^^

[Wolrd's End]
When the circle has a soft clap hitsound, maybe you can add a soft whistle hitsound, it'll feels better ~Well, idk about this. D:
01:45:518 Maybe you can add a circle to x:200 y:64 ~Been thinking about this. It's added.
02:15:518 to 02:26:659 You can add whistle hitsounds, it'll feels better ~Sure, please check if I did it right lol. I suck at hitsounding
03:15:343 Maybe you can add a circle to x:312 y:64 ~Added!

The rest of the song is good =) ~Well thanks a lot huheuehueheuhe

Thanks for the mod!

izzydemon

1,382 posts

Joined April 2013

izzydemon 12 years ago

oh

oh god that kiai time

so much art in one map, take my star

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 12 years ago

SnowStorm wrote:
oh

oh god that kiai time

so much art in one map, take my star

wow. thanks a lot man

want me to put stars on yours too? though ig I only get one.

Asagi

1,021 posts

Joined March 2013

Asagi 12 years ago

Yo Mirakurun >w</

May time n ako para i mod ung map mo haha.. btw mag tatagalog n lng ako para mas madali XD....NOSEBLEED

World Ends

im a BOX lewl

-00:35:167 - lagyan mo ng circle d2, parang mas bagay ata
-00:45:694 - palitan mo n lng ng stream
-01:40:080 (3,4,5,6) - medyo pag layu layuin mo lng ng konti XD
-01:47:448 (3,4,5,6) - pati rin to pag layu layuin mo ng konti hahaha
-02:32:185 - lagyan mo nung parang triplet blah blah haha
-02:33:062 - pati rin d2 lagyan mo rin ng ganun
-03:17:273 (3,4,5,6) - paglayu layuin mo ng konti
-03:52:011 (10) - paliitin mo to hanggang d2 03:52:185 then lagyan mo ng circle d2 03:52:360 , mas masarap pakinggan
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to ung sa hitsounds...i mean ung volume lng hahaha....
-gawing mong 60% ung volume sa audio settings. masyadong malakas ang 100% , nasasayang ung ganda nung song
-00:00:781 (1) to 00:12:010 (9) 40% audio volume
-02:15:518 (1) simula d2 hanggang 02:26:746 (1) gawin mong 30% ung volume, kc medyo soft ang sound nung parteng un. ang panget nmn pakinggan pag malakas ang tic tic blah blah hahaha!!

-03:23:413 (1) to 03:44:992 (1) 40%

Tanungin mo n lng ako INGAME pag nde mo maintindihan ung iba haha

GOOD LUCK MIRA-SAN \o/

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 12 years ago

_Asagi_ wrote:
Yo Mirakurun >w</

May time n ako para i mod ung map mo haha.. btw mag tatagalog n lng ako para mas madali XD....NOSEBLEED

World Ends
im a BOX lewl
-00:35:167 - lagyan mo ng circle d2, parang mas bagay ata ~Added!
-00:45:694 - palitan mo n lng ng stream ~Added!
-01:40:080 (3,4,5,6) - medyo pag layu layuin mo lng ng konti XD ~Added!
-01:47:448 (3,4,5,6) - pati rin to pag layu layuin mo ng konti hahaha ~Added!
-02:32:185 - lagyan mo nung parang triplet blah blah haha ~Added!
-02:33:062 - pati rin d2 lagyan mo rin ng ganun ~Added!
-03:17:273 (3,4,5,6) - paglayu layuin mo ng konti ~Added!
-03:52:011 (10) - paliitin mo to hanggang d2 03:52:185 then lagyan mo ng circle d2 03:52:360 , mas masarap pakinggan ~Added!
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to ung sa hitsounds...i mean ung volume lng hahaha....
-gawing mong 60% ung volume sa audio settings. masyadong malakas ang 100% , nasasayang ung ganda nung song
-00:00:781 (1) to 00:12:010 (9) 40% audio volume ~Added!
-02:15:518 (1) simula d2 hanggang 02:26:746 (1) gawin mong 30% ung volume, kc medyo soft ang sound nung parteng un. ang panget nmn pakinggan pag malakas ang tic tic blah blah hahaha!! ~Added!
-03:23:413 (1) to 03:44:992 (1) 40%
~Added!

Tanungin mo n lng ako INGAME pag nde mo maintindihan ung iba haha

GOOD LUCK MIRA-SAN \o/

SALAMAT HAHAHA.

One kudosu lang shet. >.>

Asagi

1,021 posts

Joined March 2013

Asagi 12 years ago

Yo Mirakurun >w</

im back again! ,kainis nag hang uulitin ko n nmn ung sinabi ko kanina XD, mag tagalog n lng let ako

AI

im a BOX lewl v.2

-paki fix nung mga gantong stream

medyo nakakairitang tingnan kasi, fix mo n lng hue :3
-01:19:378 (1) to 01:22:010 (8) - ung stream dyan gawin mong simple like this

mas ayos tingnan, ung mga may ka2lad n ganyan ang itsura, paki change n rin

. dami kong nakitang ganyan , ang dami pag sasabihin ko lahat XD
-01:25:869 (1,1) - gawin mong magkatulad ung color like 1 2

-01:27:273 (1,1) - same here
-01:30:431 (7) to 01:52:360 (12) - baka gusto mong medyo pabilisin ung slider?? or wag na?? pati din dun sa isang kiai .haha huehue

XD
-02:59:904 (1) - palitan n mo n lng to ng fast or long slider, nakakalito kasi masyado

-------
da hitsound volume...
-ka2lad lng yan nung sinabi ko dun sa nauna kong naimod. gayahin mo n lng, tulad lng yon

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Less error to this - ShanaAI pro

GOOD LUCK AGAIN MIRA-SAN

SANA MA RANKED N AGAD TO \

/

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 12 years ago

_Asagi_ wrote:
Yo Mirakurun >w</

im back again! ,kainis nag hang uulitin ko n nmn ung sinabi ko kanina XD, mag tagalog n lng let ako

AI
im a BOX lewl v.2
-paki fix nung mga gantong stream ~ahh ok na yan. special style ni AI yan.

medyo nakakairitang tingnan kasi, fix mo n lng hue :3
-01:19:378 (1) to 01:22:010 (8) - ung stream dyan gawin mong simple like this ~Added!

mas ayos tingnan, ung mga may ka2lad n ganyan ang itsura, paki change n rin . dami kong nakitang ganyan , ang dami pag sasabihin ko lahat XD
-01:25:869 (1,1) - gawin mong magkatulad ung color like 1 2 ~Added!

-01:27:273 (1,1) - same here ~Added!
-01:30:431 (7) to 01:52:360 (12) - baka gusto mong medyo pabilisin ung slider?? or wag na?? pati din dun sa isang kiai .haha huehue XD ~naah
-02:59:904 (1) - palitan n mo n lng to ng fast or long slider, nakakalito kasi masyado ~wew haha, papatingnan ko muna to.
-------
da hitsound volume...
-ka2lad lng yan nung sinabi ko dun sa nauna kong naimod. gayahin mo n lng, tulad lng yon ~bukas na lang haha.

----
Less error to this - ShanaAI pro

GOOD LUCK AGAIN MIRA-SAN

SANA MA RANKED N AGAD TO \ /

hahaha salamat ule hahahaha ^^

YunoFanatic

1,699 posts

Joined April 2013

YunoFanatic 12 years ago

From: Productive Mod Team!

freezer's easy:
-ang audio masyadong malakas -.- paki hinaan
00:24:976 lagay ka finish
00:24:976 ^
00:31:994 wala na sya sa pwesto katulad ng 1 at 3
01:10:239 tanggalin ang whistle except dun sa huli ng slider ipalit ang finish dun sa tinanggal muh
01:33:748 katulad nito maganda ang pattern

01:36:555 alisin ang NC at ilagay ang nc sa 01:38:309
01:39:362 delete mu ung NC
02:56:906 replace mo ng circle hanggang lumapit ang spinner..
03:51:994 notes dito
03:53:397 note ule

wala ng problema dto hmmps kuha ka na ng bat para mag rank

Genesis Rose

185 posts

Joined April 2011

Genesis Rose 12 years ago

Worlds End:
00:44:115 (6,7,8) - 7 and 8 are not spaced as 6 and 7
00:45:694 (1,2,3) - uhh, very visible spacing issue.
01:03:589 (1,2,3) - spacing
02:15:518 (1) - Sound to 40%?
03:25:869 (7) - Overmap, no beat or note here.
03:26:571 (9) - offbeat
That section seemed off :/

Instead of a full mod for AI im just gonna say one thing. Space your triples. The entire map grinds to a halt on every triple, but the sliders stay fast. Really hurts the maps flow.

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 12 years ago

There wrote:
Worlds End:
00:44:115 (6,7,8) - 7 and 8 are not spaced as 6 and 7 ~Fixed!
00:45:694 (1,2,3) - uhh, very visible spacing issue. ~Fixed!
01:03:589 (1,2,3) - spacing ~Seems fine. :/
02:15:518 (1) - Sound to 40%? ~Intended. ^^
03:25:869 (7) - Overmap, no beat or note here. ~changed ^^
03:26:571 (9) - offbeat ~changed ^^
That section seemed off :/ ~idk about this o.o

Instead of a full mod for AI im just gonna say one thing. Space your triples. The entire map grinds to a halt on every triple, but the sliders stay fast. Really hurts the maps flow. ~gonna ask AI about this.

Thanks

YunoFanatic wrote:
From: Productive Mod Team!

freezer's easy:
-ang audio masyadong malakas -.- paki hinaan
00:24:976 lagay ka finish
00:24:976 ^
00:31:994 wala na sya sa pwesto katulad ng 1 at 3
01:10:239 tanggalin ang whistle except dun sa huli ng slider ipalit ang finish dun sa tinanggal muh
01:33:748 katulad nito maganda ang pattern
01:36:555 alisin ang NC at ilagay ang nc sa 01:38:309
01:39:362 delete mu ung NC
02:56:906 replace mo ng circle hanggang lumapit ang spinner..
03:51:994 notes dito
03:53:397 note ule

wala ng problema dto hmmps kuha ka na ng bat para mag rank

sinunod ko lahat except yung slider replacement. and about BATs, idk, probably soon.

Thanks

Xivaxi

133 posts

Joined November 2011

Xivaxi 12 years ago

Hi, from my m4m

[AI]
00:07:097 (2) - x:284 y:328 ,this and the next change makes a nice cleaner pattern~
00:07:799 (3) - x:468 y:208
00:08:852 (1) - 1st point x:212 y:168, 2nd point x:248 y:255, 3rd point x:324 y:283 ,this and the next 2 changes to make a cleaner pattern again
00:09:553 (2) - 1st point x:327 y:56, 2nd point x:299 y:132, 3rd point x:211 y:168
00:10:255 (3) - 1st point x:98 y:280, 2nd point x:126 y:204, 3rd point x:213 y:168
00:13:413 (1) - x:319 y:54 and 00:13:501 (2) - x:320 y:77, makes a cleaner curve
00:14:817 (1) - 2nd point x:234 y:207
00:19:553 (2,3,4) - and 00:20:080 (6,7,8) should be mirrored on 00:19:904 (5) - you can do this easily by positioning 5 somewhere on y:192, then designing one of the triples relative to it -> once done, copy it position it on the timeline, and CTRL J it across the horizon line, then you can select the whole pattern and rotate/move it where it's supposed to be
00:23:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as above, two triples perfectly mirrored around 4
00:24:641 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^, though this one looks relatively clean compared to the other two
00:29:378 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - These two triples would be nice mirrored, with the next 8 splitting them
00:30:781 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:10:781 (1,2,3) - I'm not sure if this
01:32:010 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make this a cleaner hexagon, use the horizontal/vertical axis and CTRL H/CTRL J to make this easier
01:35:167 (4) - Clap
01:37:974 (7) - Remove Clap on reverse arrow and slider end
01:41:834 (1) - Remove clap on slider end, 01:42:360 (4) - Add clap 01:42:887 (7) - Add clap on slider end - I think this makes for a more natural rhythm here...
02:02:010 (3) - x:79 y:84 to stack the slider end directly on the other slider
02:03:414 (3) - x:332 y:82 ^
02:28:764 (11) - It feels like there should be a triple here
02:42:010 (8,9,10,11,12) - Perfect pentagon here
02:47:624 (7) - Stack this directly on 02:48:501 (3) - 's end
02:52:448 (5) - Remove note? The 4 here marked the end of this line of music
02:57:273 (1) - Stack this on 02:55:869 (1) - this
03:00:957 (4,5,6) - These three sliders feel a little off, I think this feels better

Pic

03:52:360 (1) - Can this maybe finish off the pentagon of 03:51:659 (1,2,3,4) - these four
04:04:115 (2,3,4,5,6) - Space these evenly?
04:06:396 (1) - x:174 y:252 to stack better
04:16:746 (2,3,4,5) - Make these a perfect square/diamond
04:18:325 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Space these evenly?

[World's End]
00:08:852 (2) - Stack on 00:07:974 (8) - 's head
00:10:431 (5) - Stack on 00:09:729 (3) - 's tail
00:10:606 (6,7) - These should be perfect mirrors
00:33:238 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
00:55:518 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ Though they kind of look OK the way they are right now, it's just slightly sloppy looking
01:19:904 (6,9) - ^
01:24:817 (3,4,5,6,7) - Can these form a sort of triangle instead?

Like this, but prettier

02:10:957 (15) - Is the break after this necessary? It interrupts gameplay more than it seems to give a break. A break would start better 02:15:518 (1) - Here I think
02:29:203 (10) - Add note
02:44:817 (5) - Make this a mirror of 02:44:466 (4)
03:03:062 (8) - Stack on 03:02:010 (5) - 's head
03:39:729 (1,2,3,4) - This doesn't look like a clean square? I think the 4 is off a little
03:54:641 (1,2) - I may have bumped something, but these look like a double spaced very far a part, Either make them normal single taps, or stack them closer together so they're easier to read/play as a double
04:07:448 (16,17,18) - Make this a mirror of 04:06:045 (6,7,8) - to finish the X pattern with triples you have going
04:19:378 (1) - This end bit seems unnecessary, but if you want to leave it in - turn down the volume on the notes a bit more, probably to 30% like the other quiet parts of the song.

Nice song, good luck!

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 12 years ago

Xivaxi wrote:
Hi, from my m4m

[AI]
00:07:097 (2) - x:284 y:328 ,this and the next change makes a nice cleaner pattern~ ~Fixed!
00:07:799 (3) - x:468 y:208 ~Fixed!
00:08:852 (1) - 1st point x:212 y:168, 2nd point x:248 y:255, 3rd point x:324 y:283 ,this and the next 2 changes to make a cleaner pattern again ~Fixed!
00:09:553 (2) - 1st point x:327 y:56, 2nd point x:299 y:132, 3rd point x:211 y:168 ~Fixed!
00:10:255 (3) - 1st point x:98 y:280, 2nd point x:126 y:204, 3rd point x:213 y:168 ~Fixed!
00:13:413 (1) - x:319 y:54 and 00:13:501 (2) - x:320 y:77, makes a cleaner curve ~Fixed!
00:14:817 (1) - 2nd point x:234 y:207 ~Fixed!
00:19:553 (2,3,4) - and 00:20:080 (6,7,8) should be mirrored on 00:19:904 (5) - you can do this easily by positioning 5 somewhere on y:192, then designing one of the triples relative to it -> once done, copy it position it on the timeline, and CTRL J it across the horizon line, then you can select the whole pattern and rotate/move it where it's supposed to be ~Fixed!
00:23:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as above, two triples perfectly mirrored around 4 ~Fixed!
00:24:641 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^, though this one looks relatively clean compared to the other two ~i see. i left it.
00:29:378 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - These two triples would be nice mirrored, with the next 8 splitting them ~Fixed!
00:30:781 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ~Fixed!
01:10:781 (1,2,3) - I'm not sure if this ~left it
01:32:010 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make this a cleaner hexagon, use the horizontal/vertical axis and CTRL H/CTRL J to make this easier ~Fixed!
01:35:167 (4) - Clap ~Fixed!
01:37:974 (7) - Remove Clap on reverse arrow and slider end ~Fixed!
01:41:834 (1) - Remove clap on slider end, 01:42:360 (4) - Add clap 01:42:887 (7) - Add clap on slider end - I think this makes for a more natural rhythm here... ~Fixed!
02:02:010 (3) - x:79 y:84 to stack the slider end directly on the other slider ~Fixed!
02:03:414 (3) - x:332 y:82 ^ ~Fixed!
02:28:764 (11) - It feels like there should be a triple here ~Fixed!
02:42:010 (8,9,10,11,12) - Perfect pentagon here ~Fixed!
02:47:624 (7) - Stack this directly on 02:48:501 (3) - 's end ~Fixed!
02:52:448 (5) - Remove note? The 4 here marked the end of this line of music ~Fixed!
02:57:273 (1) - Stack this on 02:55:869 (1) - this ~Fixed!
03:00:957 (4,5,6) - These three sliders feel a little off, I think this feels better ~Fixed!
Pic
03:52:360 (1) - Can this maybe finish off the pentagon of 03:51:659 (1,2,3,4) - these four ~Fixed!
04:04:115 (2,3,4,5,6) - Space these evenly? ~Fixed!
04:06:396 (1) - x:174 y:252 to stack better ~Fixed!
04:16:746 (2,3,4,5) - Make these a perfect square/diamond ~Fixed!
04:18:325 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Space these evenly? ~Nah...

[World's End]
00:08:852 (2) - Stack on 00:07:974 (8) - 's head ~Fixed!
00:10:431 (5) - Stack on 00:09:729 (3) - 's tail ~Fixed!
00:10:606 (6,7) - These should be perfect mirrors ~Fixed!
00:33:238 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^ ~Fixed!
00:55:518 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ Though they kind of look OK the way they are right now, it's just slightly sloppy looking ~Fixed!
01:19:904 (6,9) - ^ ~Fixed!
01:24:817 (3,4,5,6,7) - Can these form a sort of triangle instead? ~I left them since they look fine imo.
Like this, but prettier
02:10:957 (15) - Is the break after this necessary? It interrupts gameplay more than it seems to give a break. A break would start better 02:15:518 (1) - Here I think ~Added some notes on the break. No more breaks except for the intro. ^^
02:29:203 (10) - Add note ~Fixed!
02:44:817 (5) - Make this a mirror of 02:44:466 (4) ~Fixed!
03:03:062 (8) - Stack on 03:02:010 (5) - 's head ~Fixed!
03:39:729 (1,2,3,4) - This doesn't look like a clean square? I think the 4 is off a little ~Fixed!
03:54:641 (1,2) - I may have bumped something, but these look like a double spaced very far a part, Either make them normal single taps, or stack them closer together so they're easier to read/play as a double ~Some accident. Not intended lol. ^^
04:07:448 (16,17,18) - Make this a mirror of 04:06:045 (6,7,8) - to finish the X pattern with triples you have going ~I'll keep the ones I have right now. lol.
04:19:378 (1) - This end bit seems unnecessary, but if you want to leave it in - turn down the volume on the notes a bit more, probably to 30% like the other quiet parts of the song. ~Fixed!
Nice song, good luck!

Thanks for the long mod!

talk about my mod. ._.

Leader

osu! Alumni

1,849 posts

Joined January 2011

Leader 12 years ago

Hello

[World's End]

I enjoyed playing the map, I'll just give you a bunch of suggestion. 1) You should change your combo usage by adding two more combo colours in normal part. Also, grey part should be lower in difficulty, right? Then I suggest you to change slider velocity in that part. In the end, I didn't really like the part starting from 04:19:378 -, it doesn't follow anything imo.

04:18:412 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Remove all those NC

[AI]

00:51:483 (3,4,5,6) - Move on the same line as 1 and 2
01:32:360 (3) - Missing clap
01:44:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Ugh, change the sliders in that part, they don't fit the song if made in this way
Fun diff!

[Hard]

00:26:730 (3,4,5) - Move down them, it will be much better :3
00:33:046 (3,4,5,6) - Uh.. this part doesn't fit the song much, why don't you map it like the rest of the diff?
03:43:222 (1,2,3) - Unstack them
Be careful with new combo, you should add more, it shouldn't go over >10 combo, imo

[Neormal]

00:11:993 (5) - Unstack, it should be confusing
02:32:343 (1) - Make it less.. curve?
03:04:624 (3,4,5,6) - This is way too hard for a Normal diff

[Fr33z3R's Easy]

01:17:958 (1,2,3,4) - This is square is not so good to play :I

I might come later to recheck and mod further the two Insane diff, not in a good mood now, sorry =w="

Good luck~

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,539 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 12 years ago

Leader wrote:
Hello

[Neormal]
00:11:993 (5) - Unstack, it should be confusing changed
02:32:343 (1) - Make it less.. curve? ok
03:04:624 (3,4,5,6) - This is way too hard for a Normal diff replaced them with sliders

Good luck~

Updated code

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Worlds End . Dance Hall.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2007
PreviewTime: 90590
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 765,20941,56730,68309,90590,122871,142520,157958,169187,180415,202871,225327,259187
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:World's End Dancehall (ROCKETMAN Remix)
TitleUnicode:ワールズエンド・ダンスホール (ROCKETMAN Remix)
Artist:Genjitsutouhi-P
ArtistUnicode:現実逃避P
Creator:Mira-san
Version:Neormal
Source:
Tags:wowaka miku hatsune rocketman remix
BeatmapID:275817
BeatmapSetID:88911

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.20000000596046
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Miku.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,12193,22021
2,57105,65529
2,113245,121670
2,135701,144126
2,225526,233950
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\sbguestdiff.png",320,240
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 12 years ago

Leader wrote:
Hello

[World's End]

I enjoyed playing the map, I'll just give you a bunch of suggestion. 1) You should change your combo usage by adding two more combo colours in normal part. Also, grey part should be lower in difficulty, right? Then I suggest you to change slider velocity in that part. In the end, I didn't really like the part starting from 04:19:378 -, it doesn't follow anything imo. ~ I left this but I think I'll reconsider.
04:18:412 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Remove all those NC
~ ookay

[AI]
00:51:483 (3,4,5,6) - Move on the same line as 1 and 2 ~ ookay
01:32:360 (3) - Missing clap ~ ookay
01:44:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Ugh, change the sliders in that part, they don't fit the song if made in this way ~ ookay
Fun diff!
[Hard]
00:26:730 (3,4,5) - Move down them, it will be much better :3 ~ idk what you mean by this but okay.
00:33:046 (3,4,5,6) - Uh.. this part doesn't fit the song much, why don't you map it like the rest of the diff? ~ ookay
03:43:222 (1,2,3) - Unstack them ~ ookay
Be careful with new combo, you should add more, it shouldn't go over >10 combo, imo ~ hmmmm...
[Neormal]
00:11:993 (5) - Unstack, it should be confusing
02:32:343 (1) - Make it less.. curve?
03:04:624 (3,4,5,6) - This is way too hard for a Normal diff
~ I will update neonat's diff this weekend. Kinda busy.

[Fr33z3R's Easy]
01:17:958 (1,2,3,4) - This is square is not so good to play :I
~ ookay

I might come later to recheck and mod further the two Insane diff, not in a good mood now, sorry =w="

Good luck~

Well, thanks

.

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,539 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 12 years ago

Don't forget to put the guest mappers' names in the tags too mira-san~

Mira-san

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Mira-san 12 years ago

neonat wrote:
Don't forget to put the guest mappers' names in the tags too mira-san~

I believe I already did that. I don't know where it went.

I already had them in. :/

Asagi

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Asagi 12 years ago

Shut up and Take my Star

(╯°□°)╯︵

Mira-san

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Mira-san 12 years ago

_Asagi_ wrote:
Shut up down and Take my Star

(╯°□°)╯︵

Fixed it for ya. /o/

_AI

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_AI 12 years ago

Gambatte Gambatteeeeeeee
>.o/

\o.<

Mira-san

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Mira-san 12 years ago

_AI wrote:
Gambatte Gambatteeeeeeee
>.o/ \o.<

Thank you

huehueheueh

FrzR

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FrzR 12 years ago

Starred >:3

Mira-san

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Mira-san 12 years ago

aaaaa

reupdate atlast. ^^

Fr33z3R wrote:
Starred >:3

Thanks aswell

izzydemon

1,382 posts

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izzydemon 12 years ago

stuff

Toran

37 posts

Joined March 2012

Toran 12 years ago

http://puu.sh/4zcLK.jpg

Loving the maps ;D hope it gets ranked ^0^

Mira-san

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Mira-san 12 years ago

Snookie wrote:
http://puu.sh/4zcLK.jpg

Loving the maps ;D hope it gets ranked ^0^

Thanks for the support

^^

FerreTrip

81 posts

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FerreTrip 12 years ago

Pretty good! Just a few notes. I only actually played Easy (which I stopped partway through because too easy), Neormal, and Hard, watched the rest in Edit mode.

Easy: Very nice, though I quit partway due to it being too easy for me. It's nice to know people care about the Easy people.

Neormal: Very nice, indeed! A bit spinner-heavy, though.

Remap and World's End: I understand the concept you have here, making it very fast-paced and stuff and have those triple 16th notes everywhere, but...do you REALLY need so many of those triple 16th notes? They kinda muddy things up a little, though they do sound nice. Also, I appreciate how you use death streams very sparingly. Just...why the remap, I wonder? Also, uh...I understand the idea of a marathon map, but when it's this freaking intense, I think you could do to add another break or two ^^; I wanna compliment your use of colors in certain parts of the song (like the monochrome start and some other segments). I wouldn't have both monochrome things one after the other during the colored sequences, however, because it might confuse the player a bit.

AI: Cool map! Very nice start. Again, maybe lay off the triple 16ths a bit (though I really like how at the end, the new, syncopated rhythms catch people used to them off-guard, sneaky!). The death streams are more apparent here, though they mostly occur during the parts she's singing in 16th notes, so I guess it's alright. (To be honest, I think death streams are a stupid, cheap-ass way to make maps harder and exclude those of us who don't have rapid-fire fingers or prefer mouse only or tablet.) I like some of the formations, though.

Hard: This map was GREAT. You know why? Not only didn't you use death streams—see my above statement on those—but you made the map very hard, yet possible to sightread through if you're attentive enough, striking that balance of challenge required to make it a blast to play. I failed 3/4 through and played the rest in the editor, I admit, but it was still very fun. One more thing? You are a stylistic genius matching the colors to the sound sets like that. It took me a bit to notice, but when I did, it was AWESOME. Great job overall.

Also, forgot which one it was, but there were a few spots where, watching it play, you suddenly change the speed of the sliders to become very fast. Miiiiiight wanna change how fast they actually go, or it might be a tad on the unplayable side.

Overall, I would try and add another easier map (maybe one that fits into the "normal" category by the game's grading?), but so far, so very good! Love the stylistic elements a lot, great to see a map with polish like that. I really like how you mostly avoid cheap ways to make it hard and just make it plain, straight-up challenging and skill-based, not are-you-really-human type stuff, and how the markers are nice and big while still giving it a challenge. I would watch your spacing a tiny bit, but other than all that, I think this thing's pretty damn good! Nice work, Mira! Shootin' a star your way if I can!

Mira-san

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Mira-san 12 years ago

FerreTrip wrote:
Pretty good! Just a few notes. I only actually played Easy (which I stopped partway through because too easy), Neormal, and Hard, watched the rest in Edit mode.

Easy: Very nice, though I quit partway due to it being too easy for me. It's nice to know people care about the Easy people.
lol.

Neormal: Very nice, indeed! A bit spinner-heavy, though.
Spinner-heavy, i see. I'll try to contact neonat about that lol.

Remap and World's End: I understand the concept you have here, making it very fast-paced and stuff and have those triple 16th notes everywhere, but...do you REALLY need so many of those triple 16th notes? They kinda muddy things up a little, though they do sound nice. Also, I appreciate how you use death streams very sparingly. Just...why the remap, I wonder? Also, uh...I understand the idea of a marathon map, but when it's this freaking intense, I think you could do to add another break or two ^^; I wanna compliment your use of colors in certain parts of the song (like the monochrome start and some other segments). I wouldn't have both monochrome things one after the other during the colored sequences, however, because it might confuse the player a bit.
I made the remap since World's End needed a lot of polishing. Also, I intended to put where triples sound good .
The remap will definitely contain breaks. After I'm done remapping it I'll probably polish World's End and make it an Extra-like diff or something.

Also, The current World's End was a remap.

AI: Cool map! Very nice start. Again, maybe lay off the triple 16ths a bit (though I really like how at the end, the new, syncopated rhythms catch people used to them off-guard, sneaky!). The death streams are more apparent here, though they mostly occur during the parts she's singing in 16th notes, so I guess it's alright. (To be honest, I think death streams are a stupid, cheap-ass way to make maps harder and exclude those of us who don't have rapid-fire fingers or prefer mouse only or tablet.) I like some of the formations, though.
You could try asking -AI about that. ^^

Hard: This map was GREAT. You know why? Not only didn't you use death streams—see my above statement on those—but you made the map very hard, yet possible to sightread through if you're attentive enough, striking that balance of challenge required to make it a blast to play. I failed 3/4 through and played the rest in the editor, I admit, but it was still very fun. One more thing? You are a stylistic genius matching the colors to the sound sets like that. It took me a bit to notice, but when I did, it was AWESOME. Great job overall.
Thanks lol. For me I'm getting the grumd feel in this diff. Well I think this is the first time someone praised this map that much.

Also, forgot which one it was, but there were a few spots where, watching it play, you suddenly change the speed of the sliders to become very fast. Miiiiiight wanna change how fast they actually go, or it might be a tad on the unplayable side. World's End contained SV changes that are too fast. In the remap, I decided to make it easier.

Overall, I would try and add another easier map (maybe one that fits into the "normal" category by the game's grading?), but so far, so very good! Love the stylistic elements a lot, great to see a map with polish like that. I really like how you mostly avoid cheap ways to make it hard and just make it plain, straight-up challenging and skill-based, not are-you-really-human type stuff, and how the markers are nice and big while still giving it a challenge. I would watch your spacing a tiny bit, but other than all that, I think this thing's pretty damn good! Nice work, Mira! Shootin' a star your way if I can!
I could ask someone to make an Easy diff, but I'll think about it first.

Thanks for the feedback and the star!

sssyoyo

24 posts

Joined March 2012

sssyoyo 12 years ago

I like this map so much.

Rank this PLZ!!!

happy623

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happy623 11 years ago

Mira-san

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Mira-san 11 years ago

happy623 wrote:

Thanks for the star!

FrzR

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FrzR 11 years ago

Remodded my diff.

Link

;w;

Mira-san

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Mira-san 11 years ago

Fr33z3R wrote:
Remodded my diff.

Link

;w;

Updated.

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

kamisamaaa 11 years ago

from my queue~I only mod the world's end~
really a good map~

[my mod]
01:06:746 (4) - maybe add a finish?
02:59:553 (6,7) - why you change hitsound here? delete the greenline 02:59:553 here maybe better
03:08:852 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - you use so many whistle here , but why not use the same hitsound on 01:38:325 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - they have same rythm
03:55:167 (1) - remove the whistle on the slider body
02:37:624 (4) - add a finish
00:06:396 maybe you can use hit-normal here and only use this hitsound at the kiai time
03:13:764 (9) - maybe make a blanket with 8 ? like this

SPOILER

03:30:518 (7) - begin at the white line?

hope this mod can help you (I'm not a good modder

and english is also poor...if you have something understand you can PM me)

Mira-san

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Topic Starter

Mira-san 11 years ago

kamisamaaa wrote:
from my queue~I only mod the world's end~
really a good map~
[my mod]
01:06:746 (4) - maybe add a finish? ~Added.
02:59:553 (6,7) - why you change hitsound here? delete the greenline 02:59:553 here maybe better ~This is intended. I'll keep it lol.
03:08:852 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - you use so many whistle here , but why not use the same hitsound on 01:38:325 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - they have same rythm ~well at the 2nd kiai time the bass is quite err, louder.
03:55:167 (1) - remove the whistle on the slider body ~fixed.
02:37:624 (4) - add a finish ~added.
00:06:396 maybe you can use hit-normal here and only use this hitsound at the kiai time ~I changed it on that part. I kept the bamboo sounds on other parts.
03:13:764 (9) - maybe make a blanket with 8 ? like this
SPOILER
~fixed
03:30:518 (7) - begin at the white line? ~ops. this is an error. fixed

hope this mod can help you (I'm not a good modder and english is also poor...if you have something understand you can PM me)

Thanks a lot!

DD

- Miomio Chii -

440 posts

Joined October 2012

- Miomio Chii - 11 years ago

hihi mira ! i mod yours first !
-------------------------------------------------
-General-
- OK ✔
[Fr33z3R's Easy]
01:21:466 (3) - add whistle for the center ?
02:43:923 (1,2,3) - blanket it better

03:22:870 - to 03:42:519 - too softly, nearly silent. ><
try 60 ~ 70%?

04:06:379 (3) - down a little
[Hard]
00:31:643 (10) - nc, 00:32:169 (1) - remove nc
00:48:660 (9) - nc, 00:49:362 (1) - remove nc
00:49:888 (4) - nc ?
00:54:099 (8) - nc, 00:54:801 (1) - remove nc
01:16:730 (9) - nc, 01:17:608 (1) - remove nc
01:19:888 (8) - nc, 01:21:467 (1) - remove nc
01:22:169 (3) - nc
01:33:572 (9) - nc, 01:33:923 (1) - remove nc
01:39:011 (9) - nc, 01:40:590 (1) - remove nc
01:41:994 (4) - nc
02:07:081 (9) - nc, 02:07:958 (1) - remove nc
02:12:695 (8) - nc, 02:14:099 (1) - remove nc ?

02:19:713 (1,2,3,4) - del ?
(i think rhythm start from 02:21:116 - here is better)

02:29:888 (8) - nc, 02:30:765 (1) - remove nc
02:32:520 (6) - nc, 02:34:274 (1) - remove nc, 02:35:151 (4) - nc
02:40:765 (11) - nc, 02:41:116 (1) - remove nc
02:43:748 (8) - nc ?
02:47:608 (10) - nc?
03:03:397 (9) - nc, 03:03:748 (1) - remove nc
03:08:836 (9) - nc, 03:10:415 (1) - remove nc
03:11:819 (4) - nc
03:45:502 (6) - nc, 03:47:081 (1) - remove nc
03:48:134 (4) - nc
03:53:923 (9) - nc
03:55:853 (1) - remove nc, 03:56:555 (3) - nc
04:05:151 (8) - nc
04:10:765 (9) - nc, 04:11:818 (1) - remove nc
04:13:572 (6) - nc, 04:15:678 (1) - remove nc
04:16:379 (3) - nc

any hitsound ?

this diff you are not map good >< (rhythm a little ok)
umm your diffs need all end at same time ><
[World's End]
01:05:167 (4,5,6) - here's rhythm is a little strange
02:12:536 (9) - up and right a grid
[AI]
seems ok

End of this mod,
hope it could help you !
Good luck mira !

Mira-san

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Topic Starter

Mira-san 11 years ago

- Miomio Chii - wrote:
hihi mira ! i mod yours first !
-------------------------------------------------
-General-
- OK ✔
[Fr33z3R's Easy]
01:21:466 (3) - add whistle for the center ? ~added. (will do for Fr33z3R)
02:43:923 (1,2,3) - blanket it better ~fixed

03:22:870 - to 03:42:519 - too softly, nearly silent. ><
try 60 ~ 70%? ~left this as is.

04:06:379 (3) - down a little ~fixed.

[Hard]
00:31:643 (10) - nc, 00:32:169 (1) - remove nc
00:48:660 (9) - nc, 00:49:362 (1) - remove nc
00:49:888 (4) - nc ?
00:54:099 (8) - nc, 00:54:801 (1) - remove nc
01:16:730 (9) - nc, 01:17:608 (1) - remove nc
01:19:888 (8) - nc, 01:21:467 (1) - remove nc
01:22:169 (3) - nc
01:33:572 (9) - nc, 01:33:923 (1) - remove nc
01:39:011 (9) - nc, 01:40:590 (1) - remove nc
01:41:994 (4) - nc
02:07:081 (9) - nc, 02:07:958 (1) - remove nc
02:12:695 (8) - nc, 02:14:099 (1) - remove nc ?

02:19:713 (1,2,3,4) - del ?
(i think rhythm start from 02:21:116 - here is better)

02:29:888 (8) - nc, 02:30:765 (1) - remove nc
02:32:520 (6) - nc, 02:34:274 (1) - remove nc, 02:35:151 (4) - nc
02:40:765 (11) - nc, 02:41:116 (1) - remove nc
02:43:748 (8) - nc ?
02:47:608 (10) - nc?
03:03:397 (9) - nc, 03:03:748 (1) - remove nc
03:08:836 (9) - nc, 03:10:415 (1) - remove nc
03:11:819 (4) - nc
03:45:502 (6) - nc, 03:47:081 (1) - remove nc
03:48:134 (4) - nc
03:53:923 (9) - nc
03:55:853 (1) - remove nc, 03:56:555 (3) - nc
04:05:151 (8) - nc
04:10:765 (9) - nc, 04:11:818 (1) - remove nc
04:13:572 (6) - nc, 04:15:678 (1) - remove nc
04:16:379 (3) - nc

any hitsound ?

this diff you are not map good >< (rhythm a little ok)
umm your diffs need all end at same time ><

~ I modded this heavily. Hitsounds and rhythm errors.
[World's End]
01:05:167 (4,5,6) - here's rhythm is a little strange ~leaving this
02:12:536 (9) - up and right a grid ~fixed
[AI]
seems ok ~lol ok

End of this mod,
hope it could help you !
Good luck mira !

Thanks!!!!

RandF

1,249 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 11 years ago

From my queue~

[General]

Airtist: it is "ROCKETMAN" ,isn't it? (Genjitsutouhi-P is the airtist of the original)
Tags suggetion
"ryo fukawa"
You should conform "offset" and "AudioLead-in" among all diffs
where is .osb file? I cannot find your SB (very sad... )

[Hard]

00:05:853 (10) - I prefer to end at 00:06:029
00:11:116 (10) - I prefer the following
00:30:415 (7,8) - avoid overlap

00:49:713 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how about unifroming DS? (and stack 00:50:941 (6) - on 00:49:362 (3) - )

SPOILER

176,80,49713,5,0,0:0:0:0:
176,80,49801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,80,49888,1,2,0:0:0:0:
72,200,50239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,280,50590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,160,50941,1,0,0:0:0:0:

01:00:941 (4) - I prefer the following
01:06:379 (1) - start at 01:06:730-
01:25:327 (2) - curve more like 01:24:976 (1) -
01:26:204 (5) - I prefer to delete
01:27:608 (1) - start at 01:27:783
02:21:643 (6,7,8,9,10) - conformDS
02:35:327 (2,3) - avoid overlap
02:40:064 (8,9,10,1) - avoid overlap. increase DS
02:50:590 (4,5) - i prefer this (same as 02:49:187 (1,2) - )
03:23:046- change Kiai-Time end to 03:22:871
03:23:222 (1) - delete
03:39:362 - start at 03:39:713- ?
03:54:976 (4) - move to x:317 y:168 (stack correctly)
01:33:413 (1) - Ctrl+G

[World's End]

01:26:922 (4) - I prefer symmetric curved slider about 01:27:273 (5) -
01:40:080 (9,10,2) - how about stack?
02:10:431 (4,7) - stack correctly on 02:09:027 (5,6,7) -
02:32:185 (7) - stack slider's head on the head of 02:33:238 (5) -
02:34:992 (7) - ^ of 02:33:852 (1,2) -
02:50:254 (8) - Object isn't snapped!
03:04:290 (7,1) -avoid overlap
03:24:466 (4) - the position is not good. I suggest to move to x:336 y:144, for example
03:57:975 (1) - move to x:151 y:262 (stack correctly)

[Fr33z3R's Easy]

For easy-diff, DS is too large, imo. ( I think less than 1.3x is better)
01:17:957 (4,5) - mistake DS?
01:31:291~01:31:642- add slider
02:06:029 (2,1) - stack correctly

[Neormal]

00:55:501 (3,4) - how about making parallel ?
02:51:993 (1,2) - ^
03:03:922 (2) - i prefer symmetric curve slider about 03:03:221 (1) -
03:17:782 (2,3) - how about this rhythm?
03:41:115 (3,4) - how about this?

[AI]

00:15:167 (2) - I prefer symmetric curved slider about 00:14:817 (1) -
01:22:010 (8) - NC?
01:30:606 (1) - avoid overlap with previous stream
01:40:781 (4,5) - Ctrl+G for smoother cursor moving
01:41:308 (7,8) - ^
01:41:308 (7,8,9) - I prefer regular triangle in common with previous pattern

01:48:852 (1,2,3,4,5) - make a neat star!

SPOILER

429,117,108852,5,0,0:0:0:0:
272,201,109027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
449,227,109203,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,101,109378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,280,109553,2,0,B|332:288|332:288|336:300|336:300|324:296|324:296|324:308|324:308|312:304|312:304|312:316|312:316|300:312|300:312|300:332|300:332|288:324|288:324|276:316|276:316|260:328|260:328|240:320|240:320,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

02:57:097 (1,1) - similar color. I suggest to select other color
02:59:027 (8) - Object isn't snapped!
03:06:746 (3) - end at 03:06:922
03:42:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - how about this?
03:50:782 (8,1) - stack correctly

03:50:782 (8,1,2,3,4,1) - regular pentagon~

SPOILER

256,96,230782,1,8,0:0:0:0:
339,60,230957,5,0,0:0:0:0:
398,128,231132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
351,206,231308,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,185,231483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,231659,5,0,0:0:0:0:

04:06:045 (4,1) - stack correctly

if you finish SB, I'm willing to do lyrics check

~Good Luck~

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 11 years ago

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~

[General]
Airtist: it is "ROCKETMAN" ,isn't it? (Genjitsutouhi-P is the airtist of the original) ~I'll leave this. For example: This map didn't put REDALiCE as it's artist. But this has crossed my mind. I'll rethink about it. I'll probably consider it if more people suggest it.
Tags suggetion
"ryo fukawa" ~mmk
You should conform "offset" and "AudioLead-in" among all diffs ~hmmm...
where is .osb file? I cannot find your SB (very sad... ) ~sb is reuploaded. i noticed it this afternoon.
[Hard]
00:05:853 (10) - I prefer to end at 00:06:029 ~fixed.
00:11:116 (10) - I prefer the following ~fixed.
00:30:415 (7,8) - avoid overlap ~they aren't
00:49:713 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how about unifroming DS? (and stack 00:50:941 (6) - on 00:49:362 (3) - )~fixed. manually edited.
SPOILER
176,80,49713,5,0,0:0:0:0:
176,80,49801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,80,49888,1,2,0:0:0:0:
72,200,50239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,280,50590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,160,50941,1,0,0:0:0:0:
01:00:941 (4) - I prefer the following ~ this has been changed in the last mod.
01:06:379 (1) - start at 01:06:730- ~fixed.
01:25:327 (2) - curve more like 01:24:976 (1) ~fixed.
01:26:204 (5) - I prefer to delete ~nah
01:27:608 (1) - start at 01:27:783 ~fixed.
02:21:643 (6,7,8,9,10) - conformDS ~fixed.
02:35:327 (2,3) - avoid overlap ~fixed.
02:40:064 (8,9,10,1) - avoid overlap. increase DS ~fixed.
02:50:590 (4,5) - i prefer this (same as 02:49:187 (1,2) - ) ~nah
03:23:046- change Kiai-Time end to 03:22:871 ~fixed.
03:23:222 (1) - delete ~fixed within last update.
03:39:362 - start at 03:39:713- ? ~fixed.
03:54:976 (4) - move to x:317 y:168 (stack correctly) ~fixed within last update.
01:33:413 (1) - Ctrl+G
~wat
[World's End]
01:26:922 (4) - I prefer symmetric curved slider about 01:27:273 (5) - ~fixed.
01:40:080 (9,10,2) - how about stack? ~wat
02:10:431 (4,7) - stack correctly on 02:09:027 (5,6,7) - ~fixed.
02:32:185 (7) - stack slider's head on the head of 02:33:238 (5) - ~nah
02:34:992 (7) - ^ of 02:33:852 (1,2) - ~fixed.
02:50:254 (8) - Object isn't snapped! ~wat. AImod is wrong.
03:04:290 (7,1) -avoid overlap ~intended
03:24:466 (4) - the position is not good. I suggest to move to x:336 y:144, for example ~fixed.
03:57:975 (1) - move to x:151 y:262 (stack correctly)
~fixed.

if you finish SB, I'm willing to do lyrics check ~oh i'm sure it's accurate at this time.
~Good Luck~

Thanks!

SapphireGhost

osu! Alumni

2,618 posts

Joined June 2010

SapphireGhost 11 years ago

Alright, let's do this.

General
- Timing is inconsistent between difficulties. I think putting the first offset at 782 for all of them works best. After fixing the timing, make sure all kiai sections are also consistent.
- Change the tags to "wowaka Vocaloid Hatsune Miku Megurine Luka Fr33z3R neonat _AI" for all difficulties. "rocketman remix" is in the title already and can be removed from tags. Megurine Luka is another vocaloid used in the original song, and "Vocaloid" is another relevant tag.
- Tick Rate 2 is appropriate for all difficulties of this set and would keep the flow going.
- Consider keeping the ending time the same for all difficulties. There should be a point that makes enough sense for all of the difficulties to agree.
- AudioLeadIn is slightly inconsistent between difficulties. In the .osu files, you could change them all to 2012, the year the world was scheduled to end.

World's End
- Generally the map flows well, looks decent and has some good ideas. Keep working on new and creative patterns to keep the map interesting, and keeping your new combo placement more consistent. Still not bad, and I will look forward seeing your progress as a mapper in the future.
00:45:167 (9) - Try to change the pattern to keep this from going into the HP bar too much.
01:19:378 (2) - This note marks the start of a new measure and a stream and would be a good place to put a new combo.
01:43:589 (2,3) - Strange spacing here, it might be better to space it out more intuitively.
02:52:624 (1) - Starting a kickslider on a blue tick here is a little bit strange to play.
02:54:992 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try to make this part follow the song more clearly.
03:22:887 (1) - This slider would look better if the second curved part was more smooth.
03:42:536 - I think a pattern like this would be cool here. The first two (1,2) patterns are stacked and then the next slider blankets the first stack and the following stream blankets the second stack like this.

AI
- It would be good to start this difficulty at the same time as the others for consistency, and it makes sense.
00:53:764 (5) - This is a tricky note because the player has to wait over a beat to hit it. Adding a note at 00:53:589
02:59:027 (8) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:59:729 (10) - I think the shape of this slider could be more visually appealing (add some more curves to balance out the linear bits).
03:44:992 (1) - Too close to the previous note, so it is tempting to hit it earlier than it should be. Spacing it further away should make it better.

Hard
01:44:801 (2,3) - Tricky pattern to read because of the stack. Try to change the pattern so the intention is more clear.
02:50:590 (4) - Since the previous kickslider had one fewer repeat, this becomes tricky and unintuitive to read. Try to keep it consistent with the previous one.

And the lower difficulties look alright. I'll be fine re-checking this once you're happy with the mapset and done with fixes. As a bonus note, if you have time to check my map as well I'd appreciate it. Thanks in advance!

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 11 years ago

SapphireGhost wrote:
Alright, let's do this.

General
- Timing is inconsistent between difficulties. I think putting the first offset at 782 for all of them works best. After fixing the timing, make sure all kiai sections are also consistent.
- Change the tags to "wowaka Vocaloid Hatsune Miku Megurine Luka Fr33z3R neonat _AI" for all difficulties. "rocketman remix" is in the title already and can be removed from tags. Megurine Luka is another vocaloid used in the original song, and "Vocaloid" is another relevant tag.
- Tick Rate 2 is appropriate for all difficulties of this set and would keep the flow going.
- Consider keeping the ending time the same for all difficulties. There should be a point that makes enough sense for all of the difficulties to agree.
- AudioLeadIn is slightly inconsistent between difficulties. In the .osu files, you could change them all to 2012, the year the world was scheduled to end.

~all fixed

World's End
- Generally the map flows well, looks decent and has some good ideas. Keep working on new and creative patterns to keep the map interesting, and keeping your new combo placement more consistent. Still not bad, and I will look forward seeing your progress as a mapper in the future. ~thanks
00:45:167 (9) - Try to change the pattern to keep this from going into the HP bar too much. ~fixed
01:19:378 (2) - This note marks the start of a new measure and a stream and would be a good place to put a new combo. ~fixed
01:43:589 (2,3) - Strange spacing here, it might be better to space it out more intuitively. ~this is intended :v
02:52:624 (1) - Starting a kickslider on a blue tick here is a little bit strange to play. ~fixed
02:54:992 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try to make this part follow the song more clearly. ~i think it's fine lel.
03:22:887 (1) - This slider would look better if the second curved part was more smooth. ~fixed
03:42:536 - I think a pattern like this would be cool here. The first two (1,2) patterns are stacked and then the next slider blankets the first stack and the following stream blankets the second stack like this. ~fixed

AI
- It would be good to start this difficulty at the same time as the others for consistency, and it makes sense.
00:53:764 (5) - This is a tricky note because the player has to wait over a beat to hit it. Adding a note at 00:53:589
02:59:027 (8) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:59:729 (10) - I think the shape of this slider could be more visually appealing (add some more curves to balance out the linear bits).
03:44:992 (1) - Too close to the previous note, so it is tempting to hit it earlier than it should be. Spacing it further away should make it better.

~leaving this for -AI's mod. ^^

Hard
01:44:801 (2,3) - Tricky pattern to read because of the stack. Try to change the pattern so the intention is more clear.
02:50:590 (4) - Since the previous kickslider had one fewer repeat, this becomes tricky and unintuitive to read. Try to keep it consistent with the previous one.
~all fixed.

And the lower difficulties look alright. I'll be fine re-checking this once you're happy with the mapset and done with fixes. As a bonus note, if you have time to check my map as well I'd appreciate it. Thanks in advance!

Thanks! I will :3.

_AI

225 posts

Joined February 2013

_AI 11 years ago

RandomEffect wrote:
[AI]
00:15:167 (2) - I prefer symmetric curved slider about 00:14:817 (1) -
01:22:010 (8) - NC?
01:30:606 (1) - avoid overlap with previous stream
01:40:781 (4,5) - Ctrl+G for smoother cursor moving
01:41:308 (7,8) - ^
01:41:308 (7,8,9) - I prefer regular triangle in common with previous pattern
01:48:852 (1,2,3,4,5) - make a neat star!
SPOILER
429,117,108852,5,0,0:0:0:0:
272,201,109027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
449,227,109203,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,101,109378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,280,109553,2,0,B|332:288|332:288|336:300|336:300|324:296|324:296|324:308|324:308|312:304|312:304|312:316|312:316|300:312|300:312|300:332|300:332|288:324|288:324|276:316|276:316|260:328|260:328|240:320|240:320,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
02:57:097 (1,1) - similar color. I suggest to select other color
02:59:027 (8) - Object isn't snapped!
03:06:746 (3) - end at 03:06:922
03:42:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - how about this?
03:50:782 (8,1) - stack correctly
03:50:782 (8,1,2,3,4,1) - regular pentagon~
SPOILER
256,96,230782,1,8,0:0:0:0:
339,60,230957,5,0,0:0:0:0:
398,128,231132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
351,206,231308,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,185,231483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,231659,5,0,0:0:0:0:
04:06:045 (4,1) - stack correctly
~Good Luck~

SapphireGhost wrote:
Alright, let's do this.

AI
- It would be good to start this difficulty at the same time as the others for consistency, and it makes sense.
00:53:764 (5) - This is a tricky note because the player has to wait over a beat to hit it. Adding a note at 00:53:589
02:59:027 (8) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:59:729 (10) - I think the shape of this slider could be more visually appealing (add some more curves to balance out the linear bits).
03:44:992 (1) - Too close to the previous note, so it is tempting to hit it earlier than it should be. Spacing it further away should make it better.

Thx :3 everything is fixed~

Mira-san : http://puu.sh/5oTMA.osu

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 11 years ago

_AI wrote:
Thx :3 everything is fixed~

Mira-san : http://puu.sh/5oTMA.osu

Updated.

Asagi

1,021 posts

Joined March 2013

Asagi 11 years ago

konting tyaga n lng mira :3

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 11 years ago

-Asagi wrote:
:!:
konting tyaga n lng mira :3

lolololol

UnitedWeSin

891 posts

Joined July 2012

UnitedWeSin 11 years ago

Hello.

From my random queue.

I see SG is checking this already so I'll just leave opinions.

[General]

I think there are no places where you use NC:2 or NC:3 or SC:3 yet you have custom hitsound files for those sample sets in the folder. It's unrankable to have unused files in the folder, if you aren't using hitsound files in these sets, you need to delete them.
Title and Artist unicode have been corrupted in AI's diff. They need to be copied again.
Preview time is not snapped. It would be nice to snap it to 01:30:626 again.
I'm fairly certain timing is not correct. There is an obvious offset switch at 00:12:010. I think a red line at 00:12:030 is necessary, maybe more after that. We should try asking for opinions on the timing.
04:28:852 (1) - I highly suggest to delete this spinner in Easy, Hard, and World's End. Coming from a player's point of view, it's very boring to have a 10 second break at the very end of the map only waiting to play a spinner. It's much better to end the map at 04:19:027.
Inconsistency in widescreen storyboard support. World's End diff is the only one with the option checked, please uncheck if you don't want to use it.

[World's End]

00:13:413 (1) - It feels too close to the 00:13:062 (4). Maybe you can make a nicer pattern if you stack the 1 on the head of the 00:12:711 (3) instead of the tail.
00:27:994 (2,3,4,5) - You break your pattern of triplets here and it's confusing. I suggest to keep following that pattern and place the triplet at 00:27:974. If you listen to the music, the triplet is actually at 00:27:974.
Example
00:49:223 (2) - This slider isn't fitting with the music because the repeat is on the blue tick. The vocals are not hitting there, so it would be better to stay out of 1/4. Remove the repeat and shorten the slider by 1/4. You can try a rhythm like this with a 1/2 slider at 00:49:924 to follow vocals:
Example
01:04:837 (3,4) - This is a very confusing rhythm because you skip over this important downbeat at 01:05:363. You can make a much more intuitive pattern if you move 01:05:187 (4,5) forward by 1/2 and add a note at 01:05:187. Try this:
Example
01:19:398 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Try to maintain a constant spacing throughout the stream. As you can see in the middle of stream 01:19:836 (6,7,8,9) the spacing starts to decrease. It makes your stream look messy.
01:26:942 (4) - Try instead a 1/2 slider with a repeat here. I think it would fit more closely with the music:
Example
01:27:644 - How about adding a triplet here. I think it fits well with the music here. Also you can try making more spacing to the 01:28:082 (2,3) double. It will make it much nicer to read the 1/4 rhythm. If you do, create more spacing between 01:28:521 (5,6,7) as well.
01:43:609 (2,3) - This looks like 1/4 spacing, please increase the spacing between 2 and 3.
02:52:360 (5,1) - This is very difficult to see as 1/4. It might be nicer if you move this to 02:52:711 and remove a repeat.
Example

03:13:433 (8,9) - Try to wrap the 9 around the 8 more cleanly. Here is code if you need help:

Example + Code

356,192,193082,2,0,P|297:211|236:208,1,125,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,103,193433,2,0,P|226:132|288:140,1,125
340,60,193784,2,0,B|248:88|220:44|220:44|144:-4|88:80,1,250

03:30:255 (6,7) - Use 1.2 spacing here would look cleaner.
04:05:869 (6,7,8,9) - I recommend that you replace these doubles with two 1/4 sliders instead because this is the first appearance of this rhythm. Using 1/4 sliders will make it easier to catch.
04:09:729 (3,4,5,6,7) - Clean up the spacing in the stream there, it's very uneven.

For the most part the diff is nice to play and has good flow. The major problem are your rhythms. Some of you triplets feel very randomly placed, and you ignore key triplets in the music. Generally it is a bad idea to place triplets starting on the white tick because the last note of the triplet is the one that is accented. This means that the red tick will be accented which is not what is happening in the music most of the time.
Triplets like 01:45:080 (2,3) that are ending on the red tick make really no sense. Just as an example, if you listen closely to the music there, the triplet is actually at 01:45:167.

[AI]

You've used 100% volume through this entire map. Try to add variations in volume to fit better with the music. For example, and the very beginning, 100% volume is var too much.
00:08:676 (5) - Move it up one grid to make more even spacing.
00:13:413 (1,2,3) - Even out the spacing in your triplet.
01:12:887 (10) - The slider with a repeat in 1/4 is unfitting here because the repeat is not hitting with anything in the music. I suggest remove repeat and extend slider by 1/4. Then add slider or circle at 01:13:413.
Example
01:27:799 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythms isn't fitting very well with the music, may I suggest some different ones?
Example

Triplet at 01:27:624 with 3/4 slider on downbeat.

Or without slider. You can make nice jump between 3 and 4.
01:30:606 - I think you want to start the kiai here and not at 01:30:431.
02:37:624 (7) - I believe sliders like this were made unrankable because the speed of the slider changes towards the end. You can read all about it in this thread: t/158947&start=0
02:51:308 (9,10,11,1,2,3,4) - You can make a much more intuitive pattern if you delete 02:51:308 (9) and move 02:51:396 (10,11,1,2,3,4) to the left 1/4. That way the sliders will be clicked along with changes in the vocals at 02:51:308 and 02:51:659. Then add a note at 02:52:360. Like this:
Example
02:55:869 (1) - Remove NC for consistency with 01:26:045 (2).
02:57:273 (1) - ^ same idea.
02:57:624 (1,2,3,4) - Same concern as 01:27:799 (1,2,3,4). Your rhythm isn't fitting well with the music.
02:59:027 (8) - NC.
02:59:729 (10) - I think it's really difficult not to slider break on this slider. 2.0 SV is too much imo, and the slider feels awkward because it extends past the cut off for the vocals here. I think you should try a shorter slider or smaller SV.

I'm concerned about rankability of the crunched sliders like01:49:553 (5) and 02:37:624 (7). See what SapphireGhost has to say about it.
Other than that it's a creative map.

[Hard]

The 50% volume soft sample set portions of this diff are too quiet. I can barely hear the hitsounds. I think you should raise the volume of those sections to be more like your Insane diff.
00:04:992 (7,8,9,10) - Just a suggestion here. I think it would be much more fitting if you removed two repeats from the 7 and added a note at 00:05:343 then a 1/1 slider at 00:05:694. That way the player clicks along with the vocals properly.
Example
00:11:659 (11,12) - Another suggestion, switch the position of these two is more fitting. The beat at 00:11:834 is very light so the slider ending there is fitting, and the beat at 00:12:010 is super heavy so clicking feels much better than the slider end.
Example
01:22:185 (3) - I suggest NC here to make the player more aware that this and the 01:22:711 (4) have more repeats than the 1 and 2. Maybe remove NC from 01:21:483 (1) if you do so.

Spacing is pretty inconsistent at times but it's not so bad.

[Neormal]

01:30:606 - Kiai beginning is unsnapped.
03:22:870 - I think you want to delete this timing section because it's ending kiai early and is unsnapped.

Solid

[Fr33z3R's Easy]

00:23:238 (1) - Remove finish from the end, it seems extra in your pattern.
02:44:992 (2,3) - Minor spacing error, it's just a bit far.
03:22:887 - Unsnapped kiai ending.

Also solid.

I think the maps need more polishing in rhythms and hitsounds. Your choice of hitsounding in Hard was completely different than in World's End which I found to be odd, maybe SapphireGhost will disagree.

Well I hope this is helpful to you. Good luck.

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 11 years ago

UnitedWeSin wrote:
Hello.
From my random queue.

I see SG is checking this already so I'll just leave opinions.

[General]
I think there are no places where you use NC:2 or NC:3 or SC:3 yet you have custom hitsound files for those sample sets in the folder. It's unrankable to have unused files in the folder, if you aren't using hitsound files in these sets, you need to delete them. ~fixed
Title and Artist unicode have been corrupted in AI's diff. They need to be copied again. ~fixed
Preview time is not snapped. It would be nice to snap it to 01:30:626 again. ~hmmm.
I'm fairly certain timing is not correct. There is an obvious offset switch at 00:12:010. I think a red line at 00:12:030 is necessary, maybe more after that. We should try asking for opinions on the timing. ~we should. I wouldn't put more timing points unless it's been confirmed.
04:28:852 (1) - I highly suggest to delete this spinner in Easy, Hard, and World's End. Coming from a player's point of view, it's very boring to have a 10 second break at the very end of the map only waiting to play a spinner. It's much better to end the map at 04:19:027. ~I am a player myself and I don't think waiting for 10 seconds is that boring, but then I will try to consider it after I ask for opinions about it.
Inconsistency in widescreen storyboard support. World's End diff is the only one with the option checked, please uncheck if you don't want to use it.
~fixed

[World's End]
00:13:413 (1) - It feels too close to the 00:13:062 (4). Maybe you can make a nicer pattern if you stack the 1 on the head of the 00:12:711 (3) instead of the tail. ~fixed
00:27:994 (2,3,4,5) - You break your pattern of triplets here and it's confusing. I suggest to keep following that pattern and place the triplet at 00:27:974. If you listen to the music, the triplet is actually at 00:27:974. ~fixed
Example
00:49:223 (2) - This slider isn't fitting with the music because the repeat is on the blue tick. The vocals are not hitting there, so it would be better to stay out of 1/4. Remove the repeat and shorten the slider by 1/4. You can try a rhythm like this with a 1/2 slider at 00:49:924 to follow vocals:
Example
~fixed
01:04:837 (3,4) - This is a very confusing rhythm because you skip over this important downbeat at 01:05:363. You can make a much more intuitive pattern if you move 01:05:187 (4,5) forward by 1/2 and add a note at 01:05:187. Try this:
Example
~fixed
01:19:398 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Try to maintain a constant spacing throughout the stream. As you can see in the middle of stream 01:19:836 (6,7,8,9) the spacing starts to decrease. It makes your stream look messy. ~fixed
01:26:942 (4) - Try instead a 1/2 slider with a repeat here. I think it would fit more closely with the music:
Example
~fixed
01:27:644 - How about adding a triplet here. I think it fits well with the music here. Also you can try making more spacing to the 01:28:082 (2,3) double. It will make it much nicer to read the 1/4 rhythm. If you do, create more spacing between 01:28:521 (5,6,7) as well. ~fixed
01:43:609 (2,3) - This looks like 1/4 spacing, please increase the spacing between 2 and 3. ~since someone else told me to, ok then. :v
02:52:360 (5,1) - This is very difficult to see as 1/4. It might be nicer if you move this to 02:52:711 and remove a repeat.
Example
~fixed
03:13:433 (8,9) - Try to wrap the 9 around the 8 more cleanly. Here is code if you need help:
Example + Code
356,192,193082,2,0,P|297:211|236:208,1,125,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,103,193433,2,0,P|226:132|288:140,1,125
340,60,193784,2,0,B|248:88|220:44|220:44|144:-4|88:80,1,250
~fixed
03:30:255 (6,7) - Use 1.2 spacing here would look cleaner. ~fixed
04:05:869 (6,7,8,9) - I recommend that you replace these doubles with two 1/4 sliders instead because this is the first appearance of this rhythm. Using 1/4 sliders will make it easier to catch. ~fixed
04:09:729 (3,4,5,6,7) - Clean up the spacing in the stream there, it's very uneven. ~fixed
For the most part the diff is nice to play and has good flow. The major problem are your rhythms. Some of you triplets feel very randomly placed, and you ignore key triplets in the music. Generally it is a bad idea to place triplets starting on the white tick because the last note of the triplet is the one that is accented. This means that the red tick will be accented which is not what is happening in the music most of the time.
Triplets like 01:45:080 (2,3) that are ending on the red tick make really no sense. Just as an example, if you listen closely to the music there, the triplet is actually at 01:45:167.
~You could have given more examples. I checked for triples that end on red ticks, Fixed some.

[Hard]

The 50% volume soft sample set portions of this diff are too quiet. I can barely hear the hitsounds. I think you should raise the volume of those sections to be more like your Insane diff. ~fixed
00:04:992 (7,8,9,10) - Just a suggestion here. I think it would be much more fitting if you removed two repeats from the 7 and added a note at 00:05:343 then a 1/1 slider at 00:05:694. That way the player clicks along with the vocals properly.
Example
~fixed
00:11:659 (11,12) - Another suggestion, switch the position of these two is more fitting. The beat at 00:11:834 is very light so the slider ending there is fitting, and the beat at 00:12:010 is super heavy so clicking feels much better than the slider end.
Example
~fixed
01:22:185 (3) - I suggest NC here to make the player more aware that this and the 01:22:711 (4) have more repeats than the 1 and 2. Maybe remove NC from 01:21:483 (1) if you do so.
~fixed

Spacing is pretty inconsistent at times but it's not so bad.

[Neormal]

01:30:606 - Kiai beginning is unsnapped.
03:22:870 - I think you want to delete this timing section because it's ending kiai early and is unsnapped.
Solid

~all fixed on neonat's behalf

[Fr33z3R's Easy]

00:23:238 (1) - Remove finish from the end, it seems extra in your pattern.
02:44:992 (2,3) - Minor spacing error, it's just a bit far.
03:22:887 - Unsnapped kiai ending.
~all fixed on Fr33z3R's behalf
Also solid.

I think the maps need more polishing in rhythms and hitsounds. Your choice of hitsounding in Hard was completely different than in World's End which I found to be odd, maybe SapphireGhost will disagree.

Well I hope this is helpful to you. Good luck.

Thanks!

_AI

225 posts

Joined February 2013

_AI 11 years ago

UnitedWeSin wrote:
Hello.
From my random queue.

I see SG is checking this already so I'll just leave opinions.

[AI]

You've used 100% volume through this entire map. Try to add variations in volume to fit better with the music. For example, and the very beginning, 100% volume is var too much.
00:08:676 (5) - Move it up one grid to make more even spacing.
00:13:413 (1,2,3) - Even out the spacing in your triplet.
01:12:887 (10) - The slider with a repeat in 1/4 is unfitting here because the repeat is not hitting with anything in the music. I suggest remove repeat and extend slider by 1/4. Then add slider or circle at 01:13:413.
Example
01:27:799 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythms isn't fitting very well with the music, may I suggest some different ones?
Example

Triplet at 01:27:624 with 3/4 slider on downbeat.

Or without slider. You can make nice jump between 3 and 4.
01:30:606 - I think you want to start the kiai here and not at 01:30:431.
02:37:624 (7) - I believe sliders like this were made unrankable because the speed of the slider changes towards the end. You can read all about it in this thread: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/158947&start=0
02:51:308 (9,10,11,1,2,3,4) - You can make a much more intuitive pattern if you delete 02:51:308 (9) and move 02:51:396 (10,11,1,2,3,4) to the left 1/4. That way the sliders will be clicked along with changes in the vocals at 02:51:308 and 02:51:659. Then add a note at 02:52:360. Like this:
Example
02:55:869 (1) - Remove NC for consistency with 01:26:045 (2).
02:57:273 (1) - ^ same idea.
02:57:624 (1,2,3,4) - Same concern as 01:27:799 (1,2,3,4). Your rhythm isn't fitting well with the music.
02:59:027 (8) - NC.
02:59:729 (10) - I think it's really difficult not to slider break on this slider. 2.0 SV is too much imo, and the slider feels awkward because it extends past the cut off for the vocals here. I think you should try a shorter slider or smaller SV.
I'm concerned about rankability of the crunched sliders like01:49:553 (5) and 02:37:624 (7). See what SapphireGhost has to say about it.
Other than that it's a creative map.

Well I hope this is helpful to you. Good luck.

Thx

fixed everything~
Mira-san : http://puu.sh/5vK5U.osu

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 11 years ago

_AI wrote:
Thx fixed everything~
Mira-san : http://puu.sh/5vK5U.osu

Updated. :3

Zaphirox

314 posts

Joined March 2013

Zaphirox 11 years ago

[World's End]
02:50:254 (8) - not snapped

EDIT: Still huntin

eniyan

107 posts

Joined September 2011

eniyan 11 years ago

Hi~

From my queue ~

[Fr33z3R's Easy]

General
AR-1

01:23:238 (1,2) - Remove NC on (1) and add NC on (2)

01:36:571 (4) - Add NC

Placement

00:02:185 (3) - Blanket perfectly.
Form
rotate 4° and move x=242 y=237

00:03:238 (4,5) - You shouldn't stack

00:04:992 (2,3,4) - ^

00:05:694 (4,1) - Spacing is different! It is necessary for you to fix this!

00:52:360 (2,3) - Spacing is different! It is necessary for you to fix this!

01:17:973 (4,5) - Spacing is different! It is necessary for you to fix this!

01:44:290 (1,2) - Spacing is different! It is necessary for you to fix this!

02:06:395 (3,1) - How about in this way?
Placement
Change some form of 02:06:395 (3) , and move 02:07:097 (1) to x=400 y=192 (Stack on 02:06:045 (2) ).

02:32:711 (1,2) - Spacing is different! It is necessary for you to fix this!

03:23:588 (1,2) - Spacing is different! It is necessary for you to fix this!

03:34:466 (3,1) - The beginner may be puzzled in the direction to go ahead through.

03:56:571 (5,1) - Spacing is different! It is necessary for you to fix this!

04:00:431 (2,3) - Spacing is different! It is necessary for you to fix this!

04:06:395 (3,4) - Spacing is different! It is necessary for you to fix this!

04:07:799 (5,1) - Spacing is different! It is necessary for you to fix this!

04:13:413 (5,1) - Spacing is different! It is necessary for you to fix this!

OMG! There are too many points different in Spacing.

Rhythm

01:17:973 (4) - Object is not snapped! It is necessary for you to fix this!

01:18:675 (5) - Object is not snapped
! It is necessary for you to fix this!

Hitsound

02:11:308 (4) - Why add Whistle?

[Neormal]

General
Umm this map is very good if this is hard dif...However, this is Normal dif...It is necessary for you to choose whether this dif change hard or remake map.

03:22:887 ~ 03:23:238 For Normal Dif,you shouldn't change Slider Velocity.
Placement

00:06:045 (4) - shouldn't stack

00:11:659 (4) - shouldn't stack

00:34:115 (6) - shouldn't stack

01:23:238 (2) - shouldn't stack

01:24:992 (1,2) - Completely symmetric

01:26:746 (4) - shouldn't stack

01:27:448 (6) - shouldn't stack

01:34:641 (2) - this stack is ok

01:35:869 (4) - shouldn't stack

01:41:483 (6) - shouldn't stack

01:44:290 (6) - shouldn't stack

02:29:203 (5) - shouldn't stack

02:37:624 (4) - shouldn't stack

02:40:431 (5) - shouldn't stack

02:41:659 (2,3,4,5) - this stack is ok

02:46:045 (5) - shouldn't stack

02:55:869 (4) - shouldn't stack

02:57:272 (4) - shouldn't stack

03:02:536 (7) - shouldn't stack

03:04:641 (3,4,5) - shouldn't stack

03:09:553 (1,2) - this stack is ok

03:10:080 (3,4) - this stack is ok

03:11:308 (5) - shouldn't stack

03:26:220 (1,2) - this stack is ok

03:26:922 (3,4) - this stack is ok

04:13:062 (10) - shouldn't stack

Rhythm

00:54:115 (1) - I think blue is difficult to normal dif.

02:46:396 (1) - ^

Hitsound
hit sound is good

[World's End]

This map is great! I love this!

[AI]

General

02:59:729 (1) - Change NC

Placement

00:01:132 (2) - Distance to (3) is too near. How about in this way?
Form and Placement

Rhythm
rhythm is very good!
Hitsound

00:12:010 (1) - add finifh

00:23:238 (1) - add finish

00:23:589 (4) - add clap

00:34:466 (1) - add finish on the head

01:08:150 (1) - add finish

01:13:413 (11) - add clap on the head

01:19:378 (1) - add finish

01:20:430 (7) - add clap

01:20:606 (1) - add clap

01:21:834 (7) - add clap

01:22:010 (1) - add clap

01:27:448 (2) - add finish because I hear the sound of cymbals by a performance

02:52:887 (10) - remove finish

01:30:606 (1) - add finish on the head

01:37:974 (7) - remove clap

01:41:308 (7) - remove clap

01:41:483 (8) - add clap

01:41:834 (1) - add finish on the head

01:52:360 (12) - remove finish

01:53:062 (1) - add finish on the head

02:04:290 (1) - add finish on the head

02:04:817 (4) - remove clap on the head or 02:10:431 (4) - add clap

02:26:746 (1) - add clap one the head

02:37:624 (7) - add finish on the end

02:49:203 (1) - add finish

02:51:308 (9) - add clap on 02:51:483 and remove clap on the end

02:51:659 (10) - add clap on the head

02:52:887 (10) - add clap

02:57:273 (2) - add finish because I hear the sound of cymbals by a performance

03:00:080 (7) - add finish(This depends on the preference of the person, but I like the one that added it.)

03:00:431 (1) - add finish

03:01:483 (6) - add clap on the head and remove clap by the end

03:11:659 (14) - add finish

03:20:957 (2) - add clap

03:21:659 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - add clap ( (8) is on the head )

03:22:536 (8) - add finish on the end

03:50:957 (1) - add finish

03:50:957 (1) - add finish

03:57:799 (5) - remove clap or 04:03:413 add clap on slidertick and 04:09:027 add clap on slidertick

04:04:817 (6) - add clap

Good luck~

_AI

225 posts

Joined February 2013

_AI 11 years ago

EnixYuki wrote:
Hi~

From my queue ~

[AI]

General
02:59:729 (1) - Change NC
Placement
00:01:132 (2) - Distance to (3) is too near. How about in this way?
Form and Placement

Rhythm
rhythm is very good!
Hitsound
00:12:010 (1) - add finifh
00:23:238 (1) - add finish
00:23:589 (4) - add clap
00:34:466 (1) - add finish on the head
01:08:150 (1) - add finish
01:13:413 (11) - add clap on the head
01:19:378 (1) - add finish
01:20:430 (7) - add clap
01:20:606 (1) - add clap
01:21:834 (7) - add clap
01:22:010 (1) - add clap
01:27:448 (2) - add finish because I hear the sound of cymbals by a performance
02:52:887 (10) - remove finish
01:30:606 (1) - add finish on the head
01:37:974 (7) - remove clap
01:41:308 (7) - remove clap
01:41:483 (8) - add clap
01:41:834 (1) - add finish on the head
01:52:360 (12) - remove finish
01:53:062 (1) - add finish on the head
02:04:290 (1) - add finish on the head
02:04:817 (4) - remove clap on the head or 02:10:431 (4) - add clap
02:26:746 (1) - add clap one the head
02:37:624 (7) - add finish on the end
02:49:203 (1) - add finish
02:51:308 (9) - add clap on 02:51:483 and remove clap on the end
02:51:659 (10) - add clap on the head
02:52:887 (10) - add clap
02:57:273 (2) - add finish because I hear the sound of cymbals by a performance
03:00:080 (7) - add finish(This depends on the preference of the person, but I like the one that added it.)
03:00:431 (1) - add finish
03:01:483 (6) - add clap on the head and remove clap by the end
03:11:659 (14) - add finish
03:20:957 (2) - add clap
03:21:659 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - add clap ( (8) is on the head )
03:22:536 (8) - add finish on the end
03:50:957 (1) - add finish
03:50:957 (1) - add finish
03:57:799 (5) - remove clap or 04:03:413 add clap on slidertick and 04:09:027 add clap on slidertick
04:04:817 (6) - add clap
Good luck~

Thx >.o/ fixed all

Mira-san : http://puu.sh/5DFxC.osu *the title went to some weird character after i re-dl the map lol

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,539 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 11 years ago

EnixYuki wrote:
Hi~

From my queue ~

[Neormal]

Placement

00:11:659 (4) - shouldn't stack
01:24:992 (1,2) - Completely symmetric
01:35:869 (4) - shouldn't stack
03:11:308 (5) - shouldn't stack

This is what I changed, thanks.

Good luck~

Neormal

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Worlds End . Dance Hall.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2012
PreviewTime: 90606
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:World's End Dancehall (ROCKETMAN Remix)
TitleUnicode:ワールズエンド・ダンスホール (ROCKETMAN Remix)
Artist:Genjitsutouhi-P
ArtistUnicode:現実逃避P
Creator:Mira-san
Version:Neormal
Source:
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BeatmapID:275817
BeatmapSetID:88911

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.20000000596046
SliderTickRate:2

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Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 11 years ago

neonat wrote:

EnixYuki wrote:
Hi~

From my queue ~

[Neormal]

Placement

00:11:659 (4) - shouldn't stack
01:24:992 (1,2) - Completely symmetric
01:35:869 (4) - shouldn't stack
03:11:308 (5) - shouldn't stack

This is what I changed, thanks.

Good luck~

Neormal

osu file format v12

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TitleUnicode:ワールズエンド・ダンスホール (ROCKETMAN Remix)
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Updated 7 days ago.

izzydemon

1,382 posts

Joined April 2013

izzydemon 11 years ago

+69 sp hueeeeeeeeh

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 11 years ago

Niokin wrote:
+69 sp hueeeeeeeeh

NOT ANYMORE HUEHUHUEHAUEHAUEHAUEHAUE

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,539 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 11 years ago

yessss the 'e' is back in the difficulty name :3

SapphireGhost

osu! Alumni

2,618 posts

Joined June 2010

SapphireGhost 11 years ago

I remember this, and can get back to it now that the Christmas stuff is over (or not, because it seems osu! is still hyped up about it).

General
- Kiai times are inconsistent by a small amount, so it is probably best to just make them all exactly the same.
- The version I downloaded seems to be missing the lyrics storyboard again.
- I am sad to see World's End is gone as a difficulty name. But don't change it back. That's unrankable. BATs wouldn't like that. ;__________;

Colours
- This map has three sets of colours. One set is used for Insane and AI's Insane, a second set is used for Hard, and a third is used for Normal. Here is my suggestion of colours for Insane, and perhaps you can adjust them for the other difficulties as well. They are based off of "faded" and "vibrant" versions of Miku and Luka colours, as well as the two greyscale colours and an extra red for the kiai time. (red + blue = purple!)

iro

[Colours]
Combo1 : 125,125,125
Combo2 : 180,235,230
Combo3 : 210,140,220
Combo4 : 25,125,255
Combo5 : 200,10,200
Combo6 : 230,50,50
Combo7 : 175,175,175

_AI's Insane
- I can't tell how the combo colours are being used on this difficulty, but it doesn't seem consistent like with Insane.
01:45:167 (5,6) - Something like this looks and plays more neatly.

Hard
03:14:642 (9,1) - Unstack these so it is easier to read.

Neormal
03:22:887 to 03:45:343 - It looks like a different slider velocity was meant to be used for this section.

I saw that the AudioLeadIn was 2012 and thought "I must have suggested that" and then checked my mod and yes, I did. Good for you for making that happen.

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 11 years ago

SapphireGhost wrote:
I remember this, and can get back to it now that the Christmas stuff is over (or not, because it seems osu! is still hyped up about it).

General
- Kiai times are inconsistent by a small amount, so it is probably best to just make them all exactly the same. ~fixed
- The version I downloaded seems to be missing the lyrics storyboard again. ~the .osb file was missing (and was not uploaded). redownloading will fix it. :v
- I am sad to see World's End is gone as a difficulty name. But don't change it back. That's unrankable. BATs wouldn't like that. ;__________; ~ikr ;w;

Colours
- This map has three sets of colours. One set is used for Insane and AI's Insane, a second set is used for Hard, and a third is used for Normal. Here is my suggestion of colours for Insane, and perhaps you can adjust them for the other difficulties as well. They are based off of "faded" and "vibrant" versions of Miku and Luka colours, as well as the two greyscale colours and an extra red for the kiai time. (red + blue = purple!)
iro
[Colours]
Combo1 : 125,125,125
Combo2 : 180,235,230
Combo3 : 210,140,220
Combo4 : 25,125,255
Combo5 : 200,10,200
Combo6 : 230,50,50
Combo7 : 175,175,175
~applied. blue miku huh. lolol
_AI's Insane
- I can't tell how the combo colours are being used on this difficulty, but it doesn't seem consistent like with Insane.
01:45:167 (5,6) - Something like this looks and plays more neatly. ~fixed in behalf of _AI gg

Hard
03:14:642 (9,1) - Unstack these so it is easier to read. ~fixed
Neormal
03:22:887 to 03:45:343 - It looks like a different slider velocity was meant to be used for this section. ~changed to 0.75x. i wonder how it became 1.0x

I saw that the AudioLeadIn was 2012 and thought "I must have suggested that" and then checked my mod and yes, I did. Good for you for making that happen. ~yesss lololol

wao thanks again

FrzR

2,237 posts

Joined October 2012

FrzR 11 years ago

Just a little more. XD
rank pls.

happy623

1,437 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 11 years ago

Fr33z3R wrote:
Just a little more. XD
rank pls.

sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 11 years ago

Hello. From mii-KK-sheela Newbie Modding/GD Team :3

[SB]
The sb2.png, it doesn't go to a straight line.

[Easy]
00:52:360 (2,3) - Move 00:52:360 (2) to x:201 y:322, and 00:53:062 (3) to x:346 y:267?
01:31:571 - Add a note?
01:41:834 (3) - Add a new combo?
02:06:045 (2) - Make a perfect stack on the head of 02:07:097 (1) .
03:12:711 (2) - Move it to x:241 y:145.

[Normal]
00:34:115 (6) - Move it to x:316 y:278?
01:52:360 (1) - The length of this spinner is not to quick?
02:37:624 (4) - Move it to x:275 y:255?
04:10:606 (5) - Add a new combo?
04:16:220 (5) - Add a new combo?

I can only find these. Good Luck on ranking this map, and here's a star.

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,539 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 11 years ago

sheela901 wrote:
Hello. From mii-KK-sheela Newbie Modding/GD Team :3

[Normal]
00:34:115 (6) - Move it to x:316 y:278? no change
01:52:360 (1) - The length of this spinner is not to quick? changed it to a slider. Surprised you didn't asked about 03:44:641 (1) - I changed this one too
02:37:624 (4) - Move it to x:275 y:255? no change
04:10:606 (5) - Add a new combo? ok
04:16:220 (5) - Add a new combo? ^

I can only find these. Good Luck on ranking this map, and here's a star.

Thanks

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Worlds End . Dance Hall.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2012
PreviewTime: 90606
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 765,20941,56730,68309,90590,122871,142520,157958,169187,180415,202871,225327,259187
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:World's End Dancehall (ROCKETMAN Remix)
TitleUnicode:ワールズエンド・ダンスホール (ROCKETMAN Remix
Artist:Genjitsutouhi-P
ArtistUnicode:現実逃避P
Creator:Mira-san
Version:Neormal
Source:
Tags:wowaka vocaloid miku hatsune megurine luka fr33z3r _ai neonat ryo fukawa
BeatmapID:275817
BeatmapSetID:88911

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.20000000596046
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
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2,57122,65546
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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23238,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
33062,-100,4,3,0,100,0,0
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225343,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
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Yokoiha

50 posts

Joined November 2013

Yokoiha 11 years ago

Please tell me this maps is getting ranked i love it so much >.<

izzydemon

1,382 posts

Joined April 2013

izzydemon 11 years ago

BUBBLE IT ALREADY GODDAMN

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 11 years ago

Niokin wrote:
BUBBLE IT ALREADY GODDAMN

Probably in the next few months.

Not kidding tho.

edit: someone told me that BATs think this needs a major rework-- flow, slider construction/creation
so yeah. might take long. wish they could be damn straightforward.

Yokoiha

50 posts

Joined November 2013

Yokoiha 11 years ago

Mira-san wrote:
Niokin wrote:
BUBBLE IT ALREADY GODDAMN
Probably in the next few months.

Not kidding tho.

edit: someone told me that BATs think this needs a major rework-- flow, slider construction/creation
so yeah. might take long. wish they could be damn straightforward.

lol o.o

ayaka2000

55 posts

Joined June 2013

ayaka2000 11 years ago

My English is not very good, but I'll be happy if we can understand each other.
This song is good melody

Easy
00:03:589 - No stac
00:04:992 - No stac
01:08:150 - add note.
01:44:290 (1) - No turn.
01:47:799 (2) &01:48:852 (4) - same style

Normal
Circle Siza 3　to request that a wish be granted
00:55:518 (3) run parallel to 00:56:220 (4)
01:33:764 - Add a note

Hard
02:14:992 - add a note
03:34:115 (1) - too long

Insane
00:32:974 - add a note
04:17:097 (5) - 04:06:132 (7) -04:05:869 (6) - Somehow, I feel something is off.
have no idea.I'd like you to consider an alternative plan.
03:55:518 (2) - 03:55:869 (3) - Whistle?

good luck

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 11 years ago

ayaka2000 wrote:
My English is not very good, but I'll be happy if we can understand each other.
This song is good melody

Easy
00:03:589 - No stac
00:04:992 - No stac
01:08:150 - add note.
01:44:290 (1) - No turn.
01:47:799 (2) &01:48:852 (4) - same style

Some are fixed in behalf of Fr33z3R. (basic mods) lel.

Normal
Circle Siza 3　to request that a wish be granted
00:55:518 (3) run parallel to 00:56:220 (4)
01:33:764 - Add a note

neonat only 'agreed' ('agreed' as in make ME decide if I want to) to change the CS to 3. Nothing else.

Hard
02:14:992 - add a note
03:34:115 (1) - too long

Nope.

Insane
00:32:974 - add a note -errrr no. :v
04:17:097 (5) - 04:06:132 (7) -04:05:869 (6) - Somehow, I feel something is off.
have no idea.I'd like you to consider an alternative plan. - Changed this (atlast)
03:55:518 (2) - 03:55:869 (3) - Whistle? -fixed for (2), not for (3)

good luck

ありがとございます。

ggboi.

NachtHemdPlaya

12 posts

Joined September 2013

NachtHemdPlaya 11 years ago

[Easy]

change slider tick rate from 2 to 1, this is too much

[Neormal]

02:04:992 (2) - remove circle to keep it smooth
02:41:659 (2) - remove circle
03:29:904 (4) - put this slider and 03:30:255 (5) together

[Hard]

01:47:360 (7) - remove circle, breaks the flow
02:21:834 (2,3,4,5) and 02:24:641 (1,2,3,4) - not sure about this, you can do this better
03:44:992 (6) - make this slider faster/shorter to match the beat like u did in 03:44:290 (5)

[Insane]

-greater distance spacing
-lesser use of triples
-stretch streams

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 11 years ago

NachtHemdPlaya wrote:
[Hard]

01:47:360 (7) - remove circle, breaks the flow ~fixed
02:21:834 (2,3,4,5) and 02:24:641 (1,2,3,4) - not sure about this, you can do this better ~i'll think about it
03:44:992 (6) - make this slider faster/shorter to match the beat like u did in 03:44:290 (5) ~changed it. though i'm not really sure if i should have. lel.

[Insane]

-greater distance spacing
-lesser use of triples
-stretch streams
~thanks for the suggestions!

Thanks!

Tenderz

105 posts

Joined August 2013

Tenderz 11 years ago

General

I don't know if this is really a problem but the size of the osz file is larger than 10 mb. You might be able to reduce it by merging some of the backgrounds and using the storyboard color instead for the grayscale image and a seperate image for the noisy overlay.

_AI's Insane

00:06:396 (1,2,3) - I think claps on the first note of these sliders sound good
02:48:501 (3,4) - You might do something like this to match the notes before it http://puu.sh/6qmgb.jpg
02:54:115 (6) - This one very close to the edge, not sure if that plays well in windowed 800*600 http://puu.sh/6qmjR.jpg
03:39:027 (9,10,11) - Don't know if it's me but i find this playing weird, try this double http://puu.sh/6qmwl.jpg

Hard

02:21:834 (2,3,4,5) - This kind of makes the timing less readable and looks a little weird. This would also work http://puu.sh/6qmKW.jpg
From 02:26:746 (5) -02:57:624 (1) - There aren't really any hitsounds here which makes it sound a little boring. The contrast with the chorus hitsounds is nice but at least use some different sounds than just the soft-hitnormal
Same as for 00:34:466 (1) - 01:27:799 (1) - In the Beginning
Maybe just remove the spinner at 04:28:852 (1) and let the song end at 04:18:325 (1)

Neormal

00:29:203 (1) - Feels better if it starts on a white tick http://puu.sh/6qn8W.jpg
02:52:536 (2) - Move one grid left-up for parallelism with other slider #ocd
03:56:922 (1) - Also on white tick http://puu.sh/6qnti.jpg

Easy

01:32:010 (1) - Consider adding a slider before this or something, It feel really empty as a start of the chorus
Same as with Hard, consider removing this spinner 04:28:852 (1) a 7-8sec break before one last note is a bit too much

Same thing as with the other diffs 04:28:852 (1) - The ending spinner after the break
Played Fine

Good luck with this map

, I like it.

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 11 years ago

Tenderz wrote:
Hard
02:21:834 (2,3,4,5) - This kind of makes the timing less readable and looks a little weird. This would also work http://puu.sh/6qmKW.jpg ~ okay
From 02:26:746 (5) -02:57:624 (1) - There aren't really any hitsounds here which makes it sound a little boring. The contrast with the chorus hitsounds is nice but at least use some different sounds than just the soft-hitnormal
Same as for 00:34:466 (1) - 01:27:799 (1) - In the Beginning ~tried to add some hitsounds. not sure if they fit.
Maybe just remove the spinner at 04:28:852 (1) and let the song end at 04:18:325 (1) ~removed the spinner on all diffs. this has been suggested before.
Good luck with this map , I like it.

Thanks!
GDers reply asap pls. :v

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,539 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 11 years ago

Tenderz wrote:
Neormal

00:29:203 (1) - Feels better if it starts on a white tick http://puu.sh/6qn8W.jpg not really sure, because I feel there is nothing on the white tick
02:52:536 (2) - Move one grid left-up for parallelism with other slider #ocd do you mean down? I moved it down
03:56:922 (1) - Also on white tick http://puu.sh/6qnti.jpg same with the first

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 2012
PreviewTime: 90606
Countdown: 0
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DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
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TitleUnicode:ワールズエンド・ダンスホール (ROCKETMAN Remix)
Artist:wowaka
ArtistUnicode:wowaka
Creator:Mira-san
Version:Neormal
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Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 11 years ago

neonat wrote:
Tenderz wrote:
Neormal

00:29:203 (1) - Feels better if it starts on a white tick http://puu.sh/6qn8W.jpg not really sure, because I feel there is nothing on the white tick
02:52:536 (2) - Move one grid left-up for parallelism with other slider #ocd do you mean down? I moved it down
03:56:922 (1) - Also on white tick http://puu.sh/6qnti.jpg same with the first

Updated.

Easy diff changes:
Removes some spinners and replaced them with notes. (Thanks Fr33z3R!)

_AI

225 posts

Joined February 2013

_AI 11 years ago

http://puu.sh/6yLjh.osu owo done everything

buny

3,435 posts

Joined March 2012

buny 11 years ago

i remember this

GL on rank

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 11 years ago

buny wrote:
i remember this

GL on rank

thanks

though i think at it's current state, it's going for graveyard.

FrzR

2,237 posts

Joined October 2012

FrzR 11 years ago

Mira-san wrote:
buny wrote:
i remember this

GL on rank
thanks

though i think at it's current state, it's going for graveyard.

nuuu. ;w;

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,539 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 11 years ago

Got to continue with the effort to rank!

TheWantedOne

21 posts

Joined May 2012

TheWantedOne 11 years ago

rank pls

Asagi

1,021 posts

Joined March 2013

Asagi 11 years ago

77 favs, Mira OP

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 11 years ago

-Asagi wrote:
77 favs, Mira OP

0 chance rank tho :p

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,539 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 11 years ago

Maybe ask sapphireghost or dkun?

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 11 years ago

neonat wrote:
Maybe ask sapphireghost or dkun?

lol nahh.

real purpose was to kind of bump.

pola[r]is

51 posts

Joined October 2013

pola[r]is 11 years ago

make this ranked please! :3

klaki892

6 posts

Joined July 2013

klaki892 11 years ago

I love this map :X its in my favorites and i've played it over and over for months.
Make it ranked!!!!
Plz Q_Q
(really? my first post? EVEN MOAR REASON TO GET IT RANKED!)

Yumeno Himiko

Elite Storyboarder

1,168 posts

Joined August 2012

Yumeno Himiko 11 years ago

Sorry for being late ;w; My MAD has just finished >_>
From my modding queue~

[General]
Reset the letter box of all diffs.
Enable Epilepsy warning (because of the flashes in your storyboard) it's in Song Setup>Design

[Easy]
01:17:973 (4,5) - These two notes are not snapped.

00:01:834 (2,3) - Make them a better blanket~
00:08:150 (3,1) - End at the white line.
00:10:606 (2,3) - ^
01:06:746 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - A hexagon here?
01:08:501 (1,2) - A better blanket.
01:32:010 (1,2) - ^
01:39:378 (1,2) - ^
01:41:834 (3,4) - ^
01:46:045 (1,2) - ^
02:06:045 (2,1) - May place them at the same point ?
02:41:132 (1,2,1) - Not looking so good here,you may think of a better pattern.
02:49:904 (1,2) - Blanket.
02:55:167 (1,2) - reverse 1 with 180°
03:01:834 (4,2) - May place them at the same point ?
03:06:395 (1,2) - Blanket.
03:25:343 (3,1) - Blanket.
03:28:150 (5,6) - ^
04:06:045 (2,3) - ^

[Normal]
Personally,I think it's too difficult as a Normal diff.
00:11:659 (4,5) - Better move 4 away since it's Normal.
00:37:273 (1) - This slider is off the screen.
00:37:273 (1) - Better move them apart.
01:34:641 (2,3,4) - Must be moved apart since the delay time is different on 2 and 4.
02:04:992 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Not a good pattern I think.
02:31:483 (4,1) - Blanket.
02:41:659 (2,3,4) - Awsome~ Move those circles~
Many same problems are followed~ I hope you delete some circles and sliders to make it more like a Normal diff.

Hard and Insane will be modded tommorrow~Don't give me kudosu before I finish my mod.
Good Luck~

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,539 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 11 years ago

Made some changes in positions

Just one thing to say

examination wrote:
[Normal]
00:37:273 (1) - This slider is off the screen. It's still on screen for me though

Neormal

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Worlds End . Dance Hall.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2012
PreviewTime: 90606
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 765,20941,56730,68309,90590,122871,142520,157958,169187,180415,202871,225327,259187
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:World's End Dancehall (ROCKETMAN Remix)
TitleUnicode:ワールズエンド・ダンスホール (ROCKETMAN Remix)
Artist:wowaka
ArtistUnicode:wowaka
Creator:Mira-san
Version:Neormal
Source:
Tags:genjitsutouhi-p vocaloid miku hatsune megurine luka fr33z3r _ai neonat ryo fukawa
BeatmapID:275817
BeatmapSetID:88911

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.20000000596046
SliderTickRate:2

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2,57122,65546
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2,135718,144143
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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 11 years ago

neonat wrote:

Made some changes in positions

Just one thing to say

examination wrote:
[Normal]
00:37:273 (1) - This slider is off the screen. It's still on screen for me though

Neormal

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Worlds End . Dance Hall.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2012
PreviewTime: 90606
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:World's End Dancehall (ROCKETMAN Remix)
TitleUnicode:ワールズエンド・ダンスホール (ROCKETMAN Remix)
Artist:wowaka
ArtistUnicode:wowaka
Creator:Mira-san
Version:Neormal
Source:
Tags:genjitsutouhi-p vocaloid miku hatsune megurine luka fr33z3r _ai neonat ryo fukawa
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BeatmapSetID:88911

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
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SliderTickRate:2

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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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204,352,186746,2,0,P|160:364|76:348,1,120.000000596046
44,328,187273,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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152,188,189553,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,284,190080,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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420,292,201483,2,0,L|336:276,1,60.000000298023
348,328,201834,2,0,L|284:348,1,60.000000298023
244,332,202185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,360,202536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,312,202887,21,4,0:0:0:0:
32,248,203238,2,0,P|44:208|64:200,2,45.0000019401311,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,248,203939,2,0,L|160:232,1,45.0000019401311
184,228,204290,2,0,L|248:224,1,45.0000019401311,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,216,204641,2,0,L|312:200,1,45.0000019401311,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,184,204992,2,0,P|384:168|424:180,2,90.0000038802622,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,206220,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,206396,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,60,206922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,60,207097,2,0,P|116:68|88:112,1,90.0000038802622,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,132,207799,2,0,P|131:162|83:170,1,90.0000038802622,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,228,208501,86,0,L|104:308,1,90.0000038802622,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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204,300,209553,2,0,L|264:300,1,45.0000019401311,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,320,209904,2,0,L|344:308,1,45.0000019401311,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,292,210255,2,0,L|408:300,2,45.0000019401311,2|4|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,248,210957,2,0,L|220:192,1,90.0000038802622,0|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,96,211834,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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276,40,212536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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388,280,216571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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376,164,217624,2,0,P|384:120|376:64,1,90.0000038802622,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,76,218325,2,0,P|264:84|224:52,2,90.0000038802622,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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148,360,241483,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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12,144,256220,86,0,P|-2:200|33:267,1,120.000000596046,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,308,256922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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264,316,257624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,284,257974,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,258325,12,4,259027,0:0:0:0:

Updated.

Yuuki Aoi_old

Yuuki Aoi_old 11 years ago

Can't CTRL+C more than 1 object in the editor, for some reason it crashes my game when i copied more than 1 object so, sorry if this becomes a trouble.

Insane

Please add hitsounds from 00:34:466 (1) - to 01:29:729 (5) -

01:36:922 (1) - i think this slider is hard to read because it doesn't have that extra circle to make a triple before it. since it looks the same as the previous ones, players can easily mistake this as a triple, I think you should revise this :3
01:58:676 (1) - add NC:1 normal-hitfinish to the head?
02:04:115 (7) - remove normal-hitfinish?
02:04:290 (1) - add NC:1 normal-hitfinish to the head?
02:09:904 (1) - ^
02:12:711 (1) - the spinner, i think it would sound better if you use the default soft-hitfinish here.
from 02:26:746 (1) - to 02:59:378 (5) - I can hear the hitsounds (the drum-hitnormal), but I think it's too... empty(?) Maybe if you could add more :3
03:03:676 (4) - this piece here doesn't fit well with the song i think, it's better if the triple starts from here 03:03:413 (3) -
03:11:220 (5) - overmap xD, i can't tell what part of the song backs up that triple, i think it should be removed.
03:43:062 (2,1) - swap NC
03:59:378 (9) - NC
03:59:905 (1) - remove NC
04:14:729 (1) - remove NC
04:14:817 (2) - NC

04:04:290 (1) - the stream here, I can't really tell why it's there.
04:06:396 (1) - ^
04:12:010 (1) - i think this may become confusing for players to play out, the amount of times it repeats itself i mean.
04:18:325 (1) - normal hitsounds is better for the stream with soft-hitfinish at the end imo.

_AI's Insane

00:00:781 (1) - change to circle? The slider isn't backed up by anything in the song.
00:35:343 (1) - remove NC
00:38:150 (1) - ^
01:22:711 (1) - remove NC
01:30:431 (7) - remove hitfinish
01:33:062 (8) - add clap
01:37:974 (7) - remove clap in tail
02:33:939 (10) - add NC
02:42:185 (9) - add NC
02:51:308 (9) - fix the clap here.. lol
03:01:483 (4) - remove clap in tail
03:11:659 (14) - this needs to be more powerful, add a hitfinish here
03:43:238 (6) - it feels like the triple here should be removed and the triple should start here 03:43:413 (8) -
04:11:132 (5) - the doubles from this here, dunno if it's necessary.
04:18:325 (1) - the stream from here, (optional) make the sampleset to hitnormal? keep the soft-hitfinish at the end though.

Hard

00:20:343 (1) - i think this kind of triple is too hard for hard (Slider+2 circles, especially when the next object is a circle). i'd stay away from this type of triple for hard. changing it is up to you (i'll keep pointing it out, though changing it or not is up to u)
00:31:659 (6) - ^
00:50:255 (1) - ^
03:34:115 (1) - ?????? xD
03:53:764 (2) - slider triple again
04:00:781 (8) - ^
04:18:325 (1) - hitnormal + soft-hitfinish at the end? :3

done

can't mod easy/normal :c

Yumeno Himiko

Elite Storyboarder

1,168 posts

Joined August 2012

Yumeno Himiko 11 years ago

Sorry for being late.
I'm so lazy ;w;

No kudosu on this post

[Hard]
00:17:536 - A note is needed here to fit with the rhythm,since you also set notes at 00:14:729 (6) 00:20:343 (1) 00:23:150 (1)
01:12:010 (3,4) - You can make a blanket here.
01:14:641 (7,1) - This flow feels not so good,change it into a blanket.
01:39:378 (2,4) - Maybe set 2's tail on 4's reverse arrow?
01:44:817 (3,4,5,6) - Make it a regular triangle.
02:08:501 (6,7) - Also make a blanket~
02:21:132 (1) - According to the music,only a circle is needed here. But I think you should follow another line instead of the piano line. Since it's hard to catch its rhythm,especially with the volume 100%
02:40:781 (1,2) - A blanket.
03:09:203 (2,4) - Same as 01:39:378 (2,4)
03:13:063 (3,4,5,6) - Same as 01:44:817 (3,4,5,6)
03:20:782 (2,3) - A blanket.

[Insane]
Generally,I think there are too many streams(stuffs like this 00:39:378 (2,3,4,5,6) ),and the DS are not changing in a fluent way (in the beginning part of this diff)
Since I can't play it myself,you can choose whether to take my suggestions.
01:52:185 (1,2,3) - They are overmapped.
03:52:273 (6) - This note is not necessary.
These stuffs should be regular triangles.

SPOILER

01:09:378 (6,7,8) -
02:00:957 (5,6,7) -
02:28:852 (1,2,3) -
02:40:431 (5,1,2) -
02:53:413 (1,2,3) -
04:02:712 (4,5,6) -

[_AI's Insane]
Nice diff~ In fact I'm too tired to mod,sorry.QAQ But it's well done~

Good luck on ranking this map~
I'll go to sleep~ zzzzzz

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 11 years ago

Any modders that will mod this map.

DON'T MOD INSANE.

Insane diff "overhaul" in progress.

Tsukasa

471 posts

Joined June 2011

Tsukasa 11 years ago

Well

You made me mod overhaul soooo

It should count :3

IRC Mod

21:04 Mira-san: tsukassy tsukasshit tsukasa tsukassssss
21:05 Mira-san: tsuki
21:05 Mira-san: tsukasa
21:05 Mira-san: tsukasa-chan
21:05 Mira-san: tsukasa hiiragi
21:10 Tsukasa: here's my main point
21:10 Tsukasa: ung flow mo
21:11 Mira-san: ooo
21:12 Tsukasa: 00:01:483 (3) -
21:12 Tsukasa: ok ung note placement mo eh
21:12 Tsukasa: pero ung slider na 3
21:12 Tsukasa: paiba sa flow
21:13 Mira-san: ctrl+g ko?
21:13 Tsukasa: no no no
21:13 Tsukasa: try mo
21:13 Tsukasa: idaan ung mouse cursor mo sa edit
21:13 Tsukasa: pansinin mo
21:13 Tsukasa: ang ganda nung note placement
21:14 Tsukasa: isang magandang arch
21:14 Tsukasa: pero ung slider ng 3 pasira dun sa arc
21:14 Tsukasa: matatamaan parin naman pero ang weird lang sa pakiramdam
21:21 Tsukasa: did you say anything
21:21 Tsukasa: or
21:21 Tsukasa: did you recieve anything?
21:22 Mira-san: er nothing
21:22 Mira-san: up to "that could work" lang
21:22 Tsukasa: http://puu.sh/8hvKh.jpg
21:22 Tsukasa: eto?
21:22 Tsukasa: I sent "that could work"
21:22 Tsukasa: via IRC
21:22 Tsukasa: si di ko alam kung eto nagsend
21:23 Mira-san: er yea
21:23 Mira-san: nagsend yan lahat
21:24 Tsukasa: 00:21:834 (1,2,3) -
21:24 Tsukasa: ilapit mo ung 3
21:24 Tsukasa: make it pretty
21:24 Mira-san: okay
21:25 Tsukasa: isa pang thing about this
21:26 Tsukasa: hmmmm....
21:26 Tsukasa: how could I put this to words...
21:27 Tsukasa: let's just say na medyo "Makalat" ung iba mong note placement
21:29 Mira-san: like?

21:29 Tsukasa: 00:30:781 (2,3,4) -
21:29 Tsukasa: notice how you made some sort of pattern here
21:29 Tsukasa: if you look at it like a box
21:30 Tsukasa: mukha siyang trapezium instead of box
21:30 Tsukasa: if you look at it like a dagger, mapapansin mo na off ung "handle" or in this case, note 5
21:31 Mira-san: hmm
21:31 Tsukasa: mas mukha kasing "maganda" pag inayos mo siya
21:31 Mira-san: ok made it like a box
21:32 Tsukasa: diba?
21:32 Mira-san: http://puu.sh/8hwiJ.jpg
21:33 Tsukasa: mmmm...
21:33 Tsukasa: baba mo pa ung 4
21:33 Mira-san: yep binaba ko na
21:33 Mira-san: medyo off kase lol
21:33 Tsukasa: mga ano pa
21:33 Tsukasa: tig 1 grid left and down
21:34 Mira-san: done
21:34 Tsukasa: eto gawin mo
21:34 Tsukasa: pano ka ba nagbabasa ng notes pag naglalaro ka
21:34 Tsukasa: isa isa?
21:35 Mira-san: no
21:35 Mira-san: lol
21:35 Tsukasa: ooo?
21:36 Mira-san: depends
21:36 Mira-san: when it's really fast i don't read the notes one by one
21:36 Mira-san: i think of ti as a pttern or something
21:36 Tsukasa: ayun rin dapat gawin mo sa mapping
21:36 Tsukasa: look at notes as a whole
21:37 Tsukasa: always remember the flow
21:38 Tsukasa: tapos
21:38 Tsukasa: please lang
21:38 Tsukasa: wag mo na gayahin ang 2014 meta

21:38 Mira-san: i don't recognize metas and stuff

21:38 Mira-san: nub mapper4lyf
21:38 Tsukasa: well
21:39 Tsukasa: nabuhay ka sa 2013 eh
21:39 Tsukasa: wala na akong magagawa dun
21:39 Mira-san: 2012 lolz
21:40 Tsukasa: 2012 was like
21:40 Tsukasa: 60% 2013
21:40 Mira-san: i see

21:42 Tsukasa: practice your slider creation as well
21:42 Tsukasa: hanggang ngayon nga pinapraktis ko pa
21:43 Mira-san: copypaste slider B)
21:43 Mira-san: also wavy sliders
21:43 Tsukasa: lol
21:43 Mira-san: i rarely see them now
21:43 Tsukasa: di na ako nagamit ng copy paste
21:43 Tsukasa: madalang na
21:43 Mira-san: is that part of the 2014 meta
21:43 Mira-san: no wavy sliders
21:43 Mira-san: lol
21:45 Tsukasa: mmm
21:45 Tsukasa: no
21:46 Tsukasa: di lang ako nakakakita ng use for that
21:46 Mira-san: oooh
21:46 Mira-san: lol
21:47 Tsukasa: well
21:47 Tsukasa: one thing you do have
21:47 Tsukasa: that's a silver lining in 2014
21:47 Tsukasa: is proper use of hitsounds
21:48 Tsukasa: well
21:48 Mira-san: oooh
21:48 Tsukasa: pare pareho naman ung issues ko sa map mo
21:48 Mira-san: i'm creating my own rhythm here

21:48 Tsukasa: placements and stuff
21:48 Tsukasa: ung sliders mo
21:48 Tsukasa: ung flow mo
21:49 Tsukasa: I just wish you'd be more consistent with your hitsound use though
21:49 Mira-san: ahaha
21:49 Mira-san: different rhythms :>
21:50 Tsukasa: no no
21:50 Tsukasa: ok na ok ung hitsounds mo
21:50 Mira-san: ah
21:50 Tsukasa: lalo na ung sa verse mo
21:50 Tsukasa: ung chorus mo ok rin
21:50 Tsukasa: pero sa intro ako naabala
21:51 Tsukasa: ok sana kung silent ung sounds dito
21:51 Tsukasa: erm... soft I mnea
21:51 Mira-san: hmm
21:53 Tsukasa: mas fit ung soft sa mood ng intro eh
21:53 Mira-san: will try that
21:54 Tsukasa: keep the jingle bells though
21:54 Tsukasa: lol
21:55 Mira-san: lol okay then
21:56 Tsukasa: ang baguhin mo lang
21:56 Tsukasa: ung intro
21:56 Tsukasa: sa 00:06:366 -
21:56 Tsukasa: *396
21:56 Tsukasa: trip ko ung pagkatapos niya
21:57 Mira-san: ayos

haha
21:59 Tsukasa: ayusin mo lang ung claps
21:59 Tsukasa: good to go na yan
21:59 Mira-san: claps hmm
21:59 Mira-san: ah
21:59 Mira-san: mali yun
21:59 Mira-san: Soft:C1
21:59 Tsukasa: actually
22:00 Tsukasa: isa lang pala
22:00 Tsukasa: 00:10:431 (5) -
22:00 Tsukasa: remove clap
22:00 Mira-san:

22:00 Mira-san: walang clap dun
22:00 Mira-san: lol
22:00 Mira-san: ohwait
22:00 Tsukasa: 00:10:606 (6) - add clap
22:00 Tsukasa: wat
22:00 Tsukasa: meron sakin
22:00 *Tsukasa is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/294387 wowaka - World's End Dancehall (ROCKETMAN Remix) [NewInsane]]
22:01 Mira-san: nvm ok na
22:01 Mira-san: lol
22:01 Mira-san: natanggal ko na
22:01 Mira-san: nasa end pala
22:01 Tsukasa: mhmmm
22:01 Mira-san: okay done
22:01 Tsukasa: ok na
22:01 Tsukasa: kaya mo nasiguro tapusin to
22:02 Mira-san: hmm
22:02 Mira-san: suggest hitsounds sa intro lel
22:02 Mira-san: soft gamitin ko
22:02 Mira-san: >
22:02 Mira-san: ?
22:02 Tsukasa: ah mixture of normal soft
22:02 Tsukasa: + jingle bells
22:02 Tsukasa: and the whistle
22:04 Mira-san: hmm
22:04 Tsukasa: ...
22:04 Tsukasa: uhhmm...
22:04 Tsukasa: lol...
22:04 Tsukasa: so akala ko
22:04 Tsukasa: hitsounds
22:04 Tsukasa: un pala nasa kanta
22:04 Tsukasa: LOL
22:04 Mira-san: wat LOL
22:04 Tsukasa: well
22:04 Tsukasa: tama naman ako
22:04 Tsukasa: wag m0 na baguhin
22:05 Mira-san: nothing to change lel
22:06 Tsukasa: lol
22:06 Tsukasa: so we ok nowz?
22:06 Mira-san: er dode comments and everything
22:06 Mira-san: final judgement
22:06 Mira-san: judgment*
22:06 Mira-san: :>
22:06 Tsukasa: final judgment
22:06 Tsukasa: it's rankable
22:07 Tsukasa: but it needs tweeks
22:07 Tsukasa: kahit di mo na masyado baguhin
22:07 Mira-san: aaa dem tweeks lol
22:07 Tsukasa: itweek mo lang ung sliders and ung note placements
22:07 Tsukasa: medyo kailangan mong isa-isahin yan
22:07 Mira-san: hmm
22:08 Mira-san: okay
22:08 Tsukasa: marami rami yan
22:08 Tsukasa: pero
22:08 Tsukasa: it's going to be worth it
22:11 Tsukasa: oh well
22:11 Tsukasa: posting on forums, as standard procedure

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Mira-san 11 years ago

Tsukasa wrote:
Well

You made me mod overhaul soooo

It should count :3

IRC Mod
21:04 Mira-san: tsukassy tsukasshit tsukasa tsukassssss
21:05 Mira-san: tsuki
21:05 Mira-san: tsukasa
21:05 Mira-san: tsukasa-chan
21:05 Mira-san: tsukasa hiiragi
21:10 Tsukasa: here's my main point
21:10 Tsukasa: ung flow mo
21:11 Mira-san: ooo
21:12 Tsukasa: 00:01:483 (3) -
21:12 Tsukasa: ok ung note placement mo eh
21:12 Tsukasa: pero ung slider na 3
21:12 Tsukasa: paiba sa flow
21:13 Mira-san: ctrl+g ko?
21:13 Tsukasa: no no no
21:13 Tsukasa: try mo
21:13 Tsukasa: idaan ung mouse cursor mo sa edit
21:13 Tsukasa: pansinin mo
21:13 Tsukasa: ang ganda nung note placement
21:14 Tsukasa: isang magandang arch
21:14 Tsukasa: pero ung slider ng 3 pasira dun sa arc
21:14 Tsukasa: matatamaan parin naman pero ang weird lang sa pakiramdam
21:21 Tsukasa: did you say anything
21:21 Tsukasa: or
21:21 Tsukasa: did you recieve anything?
21:22 Mira-san: er nothing
21:22 Mira-san: up to "that could work" lang
21:22 Tsukasa: http://puu.sh/8hvKh.jpg
21:22 Tsukasa: eto?
21:22 Tsukasa: I sent "that could work"
21:22 Tsukasa: via IRC
21:22 Tsukasa: si di ko alam kung eto nagsend
21:23 Mira-san: er yea
21:23 Mira-san: nagsend yan lahat
21:24 Tsukasa: 00:21:834 (1,2,3) -
21:24 Tsukasa: ilapit mo ung 3
21:24 Tsukasa: make it pretty
21:24 Mira-san: okay
21:25 Tsukasa: isa pang thing about this
21:26 Tsukasa: hmmmm....
21:26 Tsukasa: how could I put this to words...
21:27 Tsukasa: let's just say na medyo "Makalat" ung iba mong note placement
21:29 Mira-san: like?
21:29 Tsukasa: 00:30:781 (2,3,4) -
21:29 Tsukasa: notice how you made some sort of pattern here
21:29 Tsukasa: if you look at it like a box
21:30 Tsukasa: mukha siyang trapezium instead of box
21:30 Tsukasa: if you look at it like a dagger, mapapansin mo na off ung "handle" or in this case, note 5
21:31 Mira-san: hmm
21:31 Tsukasa: mas mukha kasing "maganda" pag inayos mo siya
21:31 Mira-san: ok made it like a box
21:32 Tsukasa: diba?
21:32 Mira-san: http://puu.sh/8hwiJ.jpg
21:33 Tsukasa: mmmm...
21:33 Tsukasa: baba mo pa ung 4
21:33 Mira-san: yep binaba ko na
21:33 Mira-san: medyo off kase lol
21:33 Tsukasa: mga ano pa
21:33 Tsukasa: tig 1 grid left and down
21:34 Mira-san: done
21:34 Tsukasa: eto gawin mo
21:34 Tsukasa: pano ka ba nagbabasa ng notes pag naglalaro ka
21:34 Tsukasa: isa isa?
21:35 Mira-san: no
21:35 Mira-san: lol
21:35 Tsukasa: ooo?
21:36 Mira-san: depends
21:36 Mira-san: when it's really fast i don't read the notes one by one
21:36 Mira-san: i think of ti as a pttern or something
21:36 Tsukasa: ayun rin dapat gawin mo sa mapping
21:36 Tsukasa: look at notes as a whole
21:37 Tsukasa: always remember the flow
21:38 Tsukasa: tapos
21:38 Tsukasa: please lang
21:38 Tsukasa: wag mo na gayahin ang 2014 meta
21:38 Mira-san: i don't recognize metas and stuff
21:38 Mira-san: nub mapper4lyf
21:38 Tsukasa: well
21:39 Tsukasa: nabuhay ka sa 2013 eh
21:39 Tsukasa: wala na akong magagawa dun
21:39 Mira-san: 2012 lolz
21:40 Tsukasa: 2012 was like
21:40 Tsukasa: 60% 2013
21:40 Mira-san: i see
21:42 Tsukasa: practice your slider creation as well
21:42 Tsukasa: hanggang ngayon nga pinapraktis ko pa
21:43 Mira-san: copypaste slider B)
21:43 Mira-san: also wavy sliders
21:43 Tsukasa: lol
21:43 Mira-san: i rarely see them now
21:43 Tsukasa: di na ako nagamit ng copy paste
21:43 Tsukasa: madalang na
21:43 Mira-san: is that part of the 2014 meta
21:43 Mira-san: no wavy sliders
21:43 Mira-san: lol
21:45 Tsukasa: mmm
21:45 Tsukasa: no
21:46 Tsukasa: di lang ako nakakakita ng use for that
21:46 Mira-san: oooh
21:46 Mira-san: lol
21:47 Tsukasa: well
21:47 Tsukasa: one thing you do have
21:47 Tsukasa: that's a silver lining in 2014
21:47 Tsukasa: is proper use of hitsounds
21:48 Tsukasa: well
21:48 Mira-san: oooh
21:48 Tsukasa: pare pareho naman ung issues ko sa map mo
21:48 Mira-san: i'm creating my own rhythm here
21:48 Tsukasa: placements and stuff
21:48 Tsukasa: ung sliders mo
21:48 Tsukasa: ung flow mo
21:49 Tsukasa: I just wish you'd be more consistent with your hitsound use though
21:49 Mira-san: ahaha
21:49 Mira-san: different rhythms :>
21:50 Tsukasa: no no
21:50 Tsukasa: ok na ok ung hitsounds mo
21:50 Mira-san: ah
21:50 Tsukasa: lalo na ung sa verse mo
21:50 Tsukasa: ung chorus mo ok rin
21:50 Tsukasa: pero sa intro ako naabala
21:51 Tsukasa: ok sana kung silent ung sounds dito
21:51 Tsukasa: erm... soft I mnea
21:51 Mira-san: hmm
21:53 Tsukasa: mas fit ung soft sa mood ng intro eh
21:53 Mira-san: will try that
21:54 Tsukasa: keep the jingle bells though
21:54 Tsukasa: lol
21:55 Mira-san: lol okay then
21:56 Tsukasa: ang baguhin mo lang
21:56 Tsukasa: ung intro
21:56 Tsukasa: sa 00:06:366 -
21:56 Tsukasa: *396
21:56 Tsukasa: trip ko ung pagkatapos niya
21:57 Mira-san: ayos haha
21:59 Tsukasa: ayusin mo lang ung claps
21:59 Tsukasa: good to go na yan
21:59 Mira-san: claps hmm
21:59 Mira-san: ah
21:59 Mira-san: mali yun
21:59 Mira-san: Soft:C1
21:59 Tsukasa: actually
22:00 Tsukasa: isa lang pala
22:00 Tsukasa: 00:10:431 (5) -
22:00 Tsukasa: remove clap
22:00 Mira-san:
22:00 Mira-san: walang clap dun
22:00 Mira-san: lol
22:00 Mira-san: ohwait
22:00 Tsukasa: 00:10:606 (6) - add clap
22:00 Tsukasa: wat
22:00 Tsukasa: meron sakin
22:00 *Tsukasa is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/294387 wowaka - World's End Dancehall (ROCKETMAN Remix) [NewInsane]]
22:01 Mira-san: nvm ok na
22:01 Mira-san: lol
22:01 Mira-san: natanggal ko na
22:01 Mira-san: nasa end pala
22:01 Tsukasa: mhmmm
22:01 Mira-san: okay done
22:01 Tsukasa: ok na
22:01 Tsukasa: kaya mo nasiguro tapusin to
22:02 Mira-san: hmm
22:02 Mira-san: suggest hitsounds sa intro lel
22:02 Mira-san: soft gamitin ko
22:02 Mira-san: >
22:02 Mira-san: ?
22:02 Tsukasa: ah mixture of normal soft
22:02 Tsukasa: + jingle bells
22:02 Tsukasa: and the whistle
22:04 Mira-san: hmm
22:04 Tsukasa: ...
22:04 Tsukasa: uhhmm...
22:04 Tsukasa: lol...
22:04 Tsukasa: so akala ko
22:04 Tsukasa: hitsounds
22:04 Tsukasa: un pala nasa kanta
22:04 Tsukasa: LOL
22:04 Mira-san: wat LOL
22:04 Tsukasa: well
22:04 Tsukasa: tama naman ako
22:04 Tsukasa: wag m0 na baguhin
22:05 Mira-san: nothing to change lel
22:06 Tsukasa: lol
22:06 Tsukasa: so we ok nowz?
22:06 Mira-san: er dode comments and everything
22:06 Mira-san: final judgement
22:06 Mira-san: judgment*
22:06 Mira-san: :>
22:06 Tsukasa: final judgment
22:06 Tsukasa: it's rankable
22:07 Tsukasa: but it needs tweeks
22:07 Tsukasa: kahit di mo na masyado baguhin
22:07 Mira-san: aaa dem tweeks lol
22:07 Tsukasa: itweek mo lang ung sliders and ung note placements
22:07 Tsukasa: medyo kailangan mong isa-isahin yan
22:07 Mira-san: hmm
22:08 Mira-san: okay
22:08 Tsukasa: marami rami yan
22:08 Tsukasa: pero
22:08 Tsukasa: it's going to be worth it
22:11 Tsukasa: oh well
22:11 Tsukasa: posting on forums, as standard procedure

Thanks lolz.

Selisi

721 posts

Joined October 2012

Selisi 11 years ago

hi Mira-san~ M4M from my queue
wow miku~ love~
[General]

offset:786
remove newinsane.zip/7z in SB file
widescreen support open in hard diff. considering this map have storyboard work, open widescreen support all diff plz
01:30:606 - very high brightness of the background, consider to open epilepsy warning
check your Normal diff name "Neormal"?

[Story board]

03:22:536 - you add ambiguity here, it would draw away players’ attention, highly recommend remove it

[_AI's Insane]

testplay

add some whistle at the beginning, make your map more playable. and use soft-sliderslide to keep silent slider
00:00:781 (1) - whistle on head
00:01:132 (2) - whistle on head and reverse
00:01:834 (1) - whistle on head
00:02:185 (2,3) - whistle
00:02:536 (4) - whistle on head
00:03:238 (1) - whistle on head and reverse
00:04:115 (2) - whistle on head
00:04:641 (1) - this one is confusing, why reverse slider here, any sounds in 00:04:641 (1) - ? i thk it is overmap
00:04:992 (2,3,4,5) - all whistle on head
02:58:325 (5,6) - try to avoid this overlap
03:14:027 (9,10) - adjust 9 and 10, it looks bad in spacing and shape
nothing wrong, but i recommend u try to put each object in a tidy way, this mapset looks a little disorder

[Insane]

00:03:589 (1,2,3) - keep the same spacing
01:26:045 (1) - remove nc
01:09:904 (7) - stack with 01:08:676 (4) - 's head
01:14:115 - add a circle
01:15:343 (5) - recommend to remove the reverse and start a slider at 01:15:719 - end at 01:16:045 -
02:48:852 (1) - finish on tail
04:07:097 (7) - remove whistle
04:06:746 (5) - whistle

[Hard]

00:56:220 (8,1) - recommend not to overlap here, very heavy sounds at 00:56:922 - it is fine to put a jump
01:33:413 (3,4,5) - spacing
02:57:624 (1) - this spinner i recommend end at 02:59:729 - then add a circle at 03:00:080 -
03:34:115 (1) - why spinner ?why? you can put breaktime here, but should continue to start at 03:34:115 - don't be laaaazy

[Normal???]

02:28:676 (4,5) - stack it better, it 0.02X spacing here

[Fr33z3R's Easy]

open aimod and fix all unsnap slider tail
00:03:238 (4,5,1,2) - fix these spacing, it is kinda confusing.

really nice song~ Good Luck~

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