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Nymph
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sionKotori

Zero__wind wrote:

ADVANCED
00:00:869 (1,4) - may avoid the small overlap fixed
00:06:380 (3,4) - wrong slider length fixed
00:07:298 (6) - clap fits much better if added to the reverse point as there's a strong drum sound added
00:23:523 (3) - clap on head? ^ added
00:27:502 (8) - may try blanket with the next circle 1? no change
00:40:972 (3) - don't really like this rhythm, consider to replace it with a 1/2 slider and add a circle at 00:41:278 - ? in order to make players actually "hit" on the downbeat added
00:43:421 (6) - also whistle at end sounds really nice, it shares quite the same sound with its head in the music added
00:45:410 (4) - may whistle on head? added
00:53:523 (6,7) - add a Nc on either of them? to divide this long combo set fixed
01:12:273 (2) - don't really like this rhythm, it feels really weird to hit a blue tick short slider at the slow part -> *

T_Liz wrote:

ADVANCED
00:19:037 (3) - Change idea: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1257888 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1257890 ? fixed
01:12:278 (2) - Change idea: slider→2Circle ? *added
Thanks for modding!
new .osu!:click here
Azure
反震震 <3

[General]
我看到你有在資料夾裡丟clap和whistle但你沒有用吶,

而且ADVANCED那個難度用的是N:C2,你們在確定一下吧
還有我覺得換成這個normal-hitnormal 會好很多,你自己聽聽 (前提是換成N:C1之後)

[Easy]
Slider Tick Rate -> 1

[MEDIUM]
沒必要的話就把 Slider Tick Rate 調成1吧,因為你也沒特別弄音效的樣子
00:34:237 (3) 這結束在藍線?

[ADVANCED]
The control and feeling of slider are good, but there are many unnecessary overlapped notes like this:
...etc
if you can fix parts like this,I ensure the quality of this diff will be better

[EXTREME]
  1. 00:51:839 (2) 這裡和 00:54:441 (3) 的感覺是一樣的,所以我建議在 00:51:839 把加個x1.5的綠線,
    然後弄成這樣
  2. 00:56:737 (2) 這跟上面那個一樣,看你要不要改
  3. 01:04:237 (5) slider在藍線 01:04:466 結束
沒勒
woshiguabi
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IRC MOD
01:13 *woshiguabi is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/352861 Expander - Move That Body]
01:13 woshiguabi: 你怎么跑台湾去了
01:15 fanzhen0019: vpn
01:19 woshiguabi: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1263730
01:20 woshiguabi: 这图也是挺爽
01:20 woshiguabi: 需要mod吗
01:22 woshiguabi: 不说话算了
01:25 fanzhen0019: yaoa
01:26 fanzhen0019: 我要睡觉了
01:28 woshiguabi: 开编辑器吧
01:31 fanzhen0019: 你先写
01:32 woshiguabi: 00:25:130 (3) - 加个note爽11
01:32 woshiguabi: 01:12:349 (4) - 五连打比滑条更合适
01:39 woshiguabi: advanced的话 感觉可以加一些三连
01:39 woshiguabi: 00:34:543 (3) - 个人建议 放1/3
01:41 woshiguabi: 01:30:257 (4) - 还有就是这个地方给我感觉怪怪的
01:45 woshiguabi: medium
01:45 woshiguabi: 感觉需要调整一下间距 你懂的
01:45 woshiguabi: 01:32:706 (2) - 这个滑条节奏不对
01:46 woshiguabi: 建议不要搞折返
01:47 woshiguabi: 然后CS或者HP-1
01:49 woshiguabi: basic
01:49 woshiguabi: 00:41:278 (3) - 建议换个位置
01:49 woshiguabi: 00:46:176 (3) -
01:50 woshiguabi: 我赌有人会打快01:15:870 (2) -
01:51 fanzhen0019: pl
01:51 woshiguabi: 好 水煎
01:52 woshiguabi: 你想说什么
01:54 fanzhen0019: 擦
01:54 fanzhen0019: 掉了
01:54 woshiguabi: 爽11
01:54 fanzhen0019: 第二个五连 背景只有三连所以这么弄了
01:54 woshiguabi: 妈的 怎么我听得到5连
01:55 fanzhen0019: adv跟的都很有道理 不过我要看guest differ
01:56 fanzhen0019: med hp-1
01:57 fanzhen0019: basoc 位置换了
01:57 fanzhen0019: 不会的放心
01:57 fanzhen0019: 先放置
01:57 woshiguabi: 玛德
01:57 woshiguabi: 这都不重要
01:57 woshiguabi: 有没有KD
01:57 fanzhen0019: 到时有人挑了再来改
01:57 fanzhen0019: 有啊
01:57 fanzhen0019: 你打/savelog 然后复制到论坛post
01:58 woshiguabi: 我他妈专业IRC MOD啊 因为懒
01:58 woshiguabi: 最近骗的KD都是irc
01:58 fanzhen0019: 我去给kd
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Zetera
Why are you no BAT yet? :<
Oriance
Helloooo~ owo Random mod requested.
Should change the mp3 to 192 kbps, can't really hear the hitsounds quite well.

With itunes magic... POOF, 192 kbps. :3

Basic
The biggest problem I see here is from 01:09:441 (1) - 01:24:135 (1) regarding the major sv change and ds. Reason is because comparing to your ds with for ex. 01:20:767 (2,3) - 01:21:992 (3,1) it could be really confusing for beginners (and i totally failed it :D... cuz i suck). I don't quite understand why you have the sv change because the music doesn't really slow down. If you plan to keep it though, consider the ds.

00:57:502 (3,4) - These sliders are really really low, and this is the only one I believe. Maybe move it a bit up?

After playing this for a few times, I really can't find problems I can actually speak about I guess? I felt like there were many 1/2 (are they called that?) Sliders (ex. 00:32:706 (1)) which i didn't really enjoy. The arrangement for this is pretty weird as well for me. I really can't explain it.. sorry ><"

Medium
00:05:461 (1) - NC for consistency with your other difficulties (except Extreme. LOL...) Be sure to NC 00:05:767 (2) if followed.
00:13:114 - Suggest adding a note here for the "BOOP" sound.
00:13:727 (4) - Sounds like something new so i would add a NC. Be sure to remove NC 00:14:339 (1) if followed.
00:14:339 (1,2,3) - Pretty awkward, especially 00:14:798 (2), doesn't follow anything. Maybe make a slider here to 00:14:951?
00:18:012 - Similar to 00:13:114
00:22:910 - ^
00:24:135 (1,2,3) - Same reason like 00:14:339, slider to 00:24:747?
00:49:543 - Suggest adding something, beats really strong here.
01:31:788 - ^
01:41:584 - ^

Extreme
Oh hell no.

Can't really beat it, my only problem here. Can't really mod this type of insanity LOL....

Advanced
I honestly had a fun time here, but I was wondering if the sliders were legal... xD. They're pretty interesting.

00:00:869 (1) - Add finish for consistency with the other difficulties.
00:26:278 (4) - Blanket The previous slider to make it look better?
01:20:767 (6) - The beat is really strong here in the middle of the slider, maybe do something like this?
(Slider starts at 01:20:614)

I hope this helps (and i hope these suggestions aren't crazy xD...) Good luck, interesting song!
sionKotori

Oriance wrote:

Helloooo~ owo Random mod requested.
Should change the mp3 to 192 kbps, can't really hear the hitsounds quite well.

Advanced
I honestly had a fun time here, but I was wondering if the sliders were legal... xD. They're pretty interesting. >w<

00:00:869 (1) - Add finish for consistency with the other difficulties. added
00:26:278 (4) - Blanket The previous slider to make it look better? no change
01:20:767 (6) - The beat is really strong here in the middle of the slider, maybe do something like this?
(Slider starts at 01:20:614) umm... no change

I hope this helps (and i hope these suggestions aren't crazy xD...) Good luck, interesting song!
thanks for modding~~ :D
new .osu -> click here
Topic Starter
fanzhen0019
Az姐姐

Azure wrote:

反震震 <3

[General]
我看到你有在資料夾裡丟clap和whistle但你沒有用吶,

而且ADVANCED那個難度用的是N:C2,你們在確定一下吧
還有我覺得換成這個normal-hitnormal 會好很多,你自己聽聽 (前提是換成N:C1之後)

原来想用 后来没用了...
音效改了 好像不错哦


[Easy]
Slider Tick Rate -> 1 k

[MEDIUM]
沒必要的話就把 Slider Tick Rate 調成1吧,因為你也沒特別弄音效的樣子
00:34:237 (3) 這結束在藍線? 改了..

[EXTREME]
  1. 00:51:839 (2) 這裡和 00:54:441 (3) 的感覺是一樣的,所以我建議在 00:51:839 把加個x1.5的綠線,
    然後弄成這樣 其实挺好 但是红线起怪怪的 先留着
  2. 00:56:737 (2) 這跟上面那個一樣,看你要不要改 懒了
  3. 01:04:237 (5) slider在藍線 01:04:466 結束 nice
沒勒

Oriance

Oriance wrote:

Helloooo~ owo Random mod requested.
Should change the mp3 to 192 kbps, can't really hear the hitsounds quite well.

With itunes magic... POOF, 192 kbps. :3 Thank you !!:D

Basic
The biggest problem I see here is from 01:09:441 (1) - 01:24:135 (1) regarding the major sv change and ds. Reason is because comparing to your ds with for ex. 01:20:767 (2,3) - 01:21:992 (3,1) it could be really confusing for beginners (and i totally failed it :D... cuz i suck). I don't quite understand why you have the sv change because the music doesn't really slow down. If you plan to keep it though, consider the ds. alright,i changed ds :)

00:57:502 (3,4) - These sliders are really really low, and this is the only one I believe. Maybe move it a bit up? done

After playing this for a few times, I really can't find problems I can actually speak about I guess? I felt like there were many 1/2 (are they called that?) Sliders (ex. 00:32:706 (1)) which i didn't really enjoy. The arrangement for this is pretty weird as well for me. I really can't explain it.. sorry ><" ah i see ;w;

Medium
00:05:461 (1) - NC for consistency with your other difficulties (except Extreme. LOL...) Be sure to NC 00:05:767 (2) if followed. k
00:13:114 - Suggest adding a note here for the "BOOP" sound. k
00:13:727 (4) - Sounds like something new so i would add a NC. Be sure to remove NC 00:14:339 (1) if followed. umm i dont think so
00:14:339 (1,2,3) - Pretty awkward, especially 00:14:798 (2), doesn't follow anything. Maybe make a slider here to 00:14:951? changed the placement
00:18:012 - Similar to 00:13:114 ^
00:22:910 - ^ ^
00:24:135 (1,2,3) - Same reason like 00:14:339, slider to 00:24:747? ^
00:49:543 - Suggest adding something, beats really strong here. um.. i follow the midi here so the beat can be temporarily ignored imo
01:31:788 - ^ ^
01:41:584 - ^ ^

Extreme
Oh hell no.

Can't really beat it, my only problem here. Can't really mod this type of insanity LOL....
x)

I hope this helps (and i hope these suggestions aren't crazy xD...) Good luck, interesting song!

Thank you!
sionKotori

Azure wrote:

反震震 <3

[ADVANCED]
The control and feeling of slider are good, but there are many unnecessary overlapped notes like this:
...etc
if you can fix parts like this,I ensure the quality of this diff will be better really sorry, I can't change these ><
沒勒
thanks for modding
fixed a bit, new .osu! -> click here
Topic Starter
fanzhen0019
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Nymph
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Beige
Yeah~ Let's Go!
namazun
今日もいい天気
sionKotori
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Topic Starter
fanzhen0019

namazun wrote:

今日もいい天気
(棒読
Charles445
Modding, will post when done.

[ADVANCED]
00:08:216 (1) - Sliders that change speed by squiggles aren't rankable anymore.
00:30:716 (2) - Sliders that change speed by squiggles aren't rankable anymore.
00:31:941 (5) - Sliders that change speed by squiggles aren't rankable anymore.
00:38:216 (3) - Sliders that change speed by squiggles aren't rankable anymore.
00:48:012 (3) - Sliders that change speed by squiggles aren't rankable anymore.
01:00:716 (3) - Move the point in the middle two grids to the left so the blanket with 2 and 3 is better looking.
01:01:482 (6) - Sliders that change speed by squiggles aren't rankable anymore.
01:23:523 (3) - It'd probably be a better idea to make this squiggle less, otherwise it might become a rankability problem.
01:30:257 (4) - Heavy squiggling isn't rankable anymore.
01:32:706 (1) - Heavy squiggling isn't rankable anymore.
01:33:318 (2) - Heavy squiggling isn't rankable anymore.


[EXTREME]
00:34:543 (1,2) - This part is frustrating to play because the 1 slider is going left when the player has to go all the way to the right. Try this pattern instead --> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1275058
01:14:951 (2) - It'd probably be a better idea to make this squiggle less, otherwise it might become a rankability problem. Also, it should be shortened to 1/3. Try this --> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1275056
Topic Starter
fanzhen0019

Charles445 wrote:

Modding, will post when done.

[EXTREME]
00:34:543 (1,2) - This part is frustrating to play because the 1 slider is going left when the player has to go all the way to the right. Try this pattern instead --> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1275058 Done
01:14:951 (2) - It'd probably be a better idea to make this squiggle less, otherwise it might become a rankability problem. Also, it should be shortened to 1/3. Try this --> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1275056
Uh, I think this is not so squiggle..Anyway I changed ;w;
About ADVANCED, I will link the original mapset by sionKotori in Creator's word.
sionKotori

Charles445 wrote:

[ADVANCED]
00:08:216 (1) - Sliders that change speed by squiggles aren't rankable anymore.
00:30:716 (2) - Sliders that change speed by squiggles aren't rankable anymore.
00:31:941 (5) - Sliders that change speed by squiggles aren't rankable anymore.
00:38:216 (3) - Sliders that change speed by squiggles aren't rankable anymore.
00:48:012 (3) - Sliders that change speed by squiggles aren't rankable anymore. all fixed
01:00:716 (3) - Move the point in the middle two grids to the left so the blanket with 2 and 3 is better looking. fixed
01:01:482 (6) - Sliders that change speed by squiggles aren't rankable anymore. fixed
01:23:523 (3) - It'd probably be a better idea to make this squiggle less, otherwise it might become a rankability problem. fixed
01:30:257 (4) - Heavy squiggling isn't rankable anymore.
01:32:706 (1) - Heavy squiggling isn't rankable anymore.
01:33:318 (2) - Heavy squiggling isn't rankable anymore. all fixed
thanks for modding!!
Topic Starter
fanzhen0019
updated
Charles445
I think the inheriting sections have the wrong setting. Instead of N:C1 it's N:C2
The sound files in the folder are set to custom 1, so the inheriting sections should be custom 1, not custom 2.
Charles445
Ok it looks like it got fixed.

~Rebubbled!~
Topic Starter
fanzhen0019
Thank you :)
sionKotori
:)
DeletedUser_1574070
omg dat crazy stuff
P o M u T a
i think kors k :D or (who? idk Real nature)
Topic Starter
fanzhen0019

P o M u T a wrote:

i think kors k :D or (who? idk Real nature)
I guess 90% 猫叉Master
Jycool
怂不怂,让你改你就改
DeletedUser_1574070
i guess sota + nekomata
sionKotori
Sota Fujimori 3rd season
Low
good job.
Skystar
grats
Mythol
fanzhen best mapper
Topic Starter
fanzhen0019
thank you very much!!!! <3
BeatofIke
Fanzhen so moe <3
Congrats on your ranked map! ^_^
RLC
yesssssss grats!

Mythol wrote:

fanzhen best mapper
Reol
Congratz!!
I love your map :D:D
Kodora
Awesome!
Beige

RLC wrote:

yesssssss grats!

Mythol wrote:

fanzhen best mapper
congratz!
sionKotori
My first ranked map, thanks fanzhen and all!!! :)
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