this is my Mod, my Friend
okay, let's begin.
00:10:507 (3) - CTRL + G it, looks beautiful
00:28:319 (2,3,4,5) - umm it looks good
00:34:319 (2,3,4,5) - i like this patter is same in above
02:20:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - for better placement , CTRL + , it and move circle 1 in X:160 y:276 (it move all circles)
02:29:819 (7) - move it to x:20 y:12. for nice jump and nice look too
02:44:819 - add circle here, stack it with slider 7
03:38:257 (5) - umm it looks nice like this i think
03:55:694 (4) - this slider so tricky, i think change it to 2 hitcircle is the best
04:20:257 (6) - umm... i think move it to x:192 y: 191
04:24:757 (2) - stack it like this
04:48:382 (1) - i think place it in x:128 y:268 for better flow
04:50:632 (6) - i think its better to place in x:468 y:264
04:57:757 (2) - this slider is hard to read, try to place them like this
OR
04:58:132 (3) - you can place move this to x:192 y:84
05:01:507 (5) - it looks fit with two hitcircle
05:08:257 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - i think this jumps like tricky, try make another patter of this jumps
05:13:882 (5) - i think the kiai time is make player (especially mouse player) is tired try place this in x:448 y:216 for little rest
05:23:819 (7,8) - for circle 7 place it in 8. for circle 8, try place it in X:288 y:96
05:29:632 (7,9) - try make curves on this slider
Some Procedure (suggestion for me)
1. 06:07:507 (3) - NC it
2. 06:07:882 (1) - release NC
3. 06:08:257 (2) - NC it
4. 06:09:007 (5) - NC it
5. 06:09:382 (1) - Release NC.
06:34:132 (2) - i think move it to x:292 y:108 is nice idea
07:28:132 (4) - i suggest move it to x:44 y:176
07:29:069 (7) - stack it with circle 6
07:36:382 - to 08:12:194 - in this time try to make anti-jumps, looks like hard patterns and umm sorry "random jumps" and hard reading reversed slider pattern is a little bit confusing player (my opinion). for this problem, try to make slider interested to read like making curved sliders, star patter jumps, or manymore, including add some antijumps
if this mod useful for you, just give a little kudos for me, same like "thanks" words.
if this mod is useless, just feel free. you have star rating by me, and it's okay if you dont give kudos for me
. maybe im wrong
and i am sorry for my english.
and sorry i cant read chinese, so i cant read beatmap description. lol