ming comes as jerry request~ o/ hey guys
Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it
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[ Kantan]
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[ Futsuu]
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[ Muzukashii]
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woff wofff, sorry i just mod 3diffs there. but, i will continue it tomorrowwhen i have a time.
btw, nice diffs, jerry :3
why don't you ask me for the GD too? i want it too lollll
wait for my next mods~
Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it
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[ Kantan]
General
☞ you can use 3 for OD and HP at this map. 4 is quite hard and it'll have a same OD and HP with Futsuu
☞ changed the SV to be 1.20. consider for the Kantan player that will play this. 200BPM and 1.40SV will be quite hard because it's quite fast
☞ changed the SV to be 1.20. consider for the Kantan player that will play this. 200BPM and 1.40SV will be quite hard because it's quite fast
Notes Strucutre
☞ from 00:19:605 - until 00:37:005 - , basicly you used o o o o pattern there. well, it's nice because it'll keep the consistent pattern. but, it's quite monotonous sounds at that part, because it's just a repetition of notes. i have a suggestion at the Notes box too add a notes at there, but don't worry, it'll not change your basic pattern
☞ from 00:38:805 - until 01:07:605 -, same like above too. i saw that you used o o o o. well, it's nice too~ but, it will be quite boring for the player, because it doesn't have any variation notes. i have some suggestions at the Notes box
☞ from 00:38:805 - until 01:07:605 -, same like above too. i saw that you used o o o o. well, it's nice too~ but, it will be quite boring for the player, because it doesn't have any variation notes. i have some suggestions at the Notes box
Notes
• add a note (don) at 00:28:305 - . i will follow the strong pitch sound at there as well
• add a note (don) at 00:40:305 - . same like above too, and this note will follow the vocal too
• move 00:43:305 - to 00:42:105 - , the 3-notes are better at there, that you put it before~ (it will follow the vocal sounds too)
• add a note (kat) at 00:45:705 - , and change 00:45:405 - to be don. so it'll be o o o notes there.
• add a note (don) again at 00:49:905 - if you use my second mod
• move 00:52:905 - to 00:51:705 - if you use my third mod
• add kat at 00:55:305 - , so it'll be o o o. it will be different like fourth mod, because the pitch sounds are different
• add a note (don) at 00:59:505 -
• add a note (don) again at 01:04:905 - . this note will be follow the vocal sounds there (failing pitch sounds i mean)
• add a note (don) at 00:40:305 - . same like above too, and this note will follow the vocal too
• move 00:43:305 - to 00:42:105 - , the 3-notes are better at there, that you put it before~ (it will follow the vocal sounds too)
• add a note (kat) at 00:45:705 - , and change 00:45:405 - to be don. so it'll be o o o notes there.
• add a note (don) again at 00:49:905 - if you use my second mod
• move 00:52:905 - to 00:51:705 - if you use my third mod
• add kat at 00:55:305 - , so it'll be o o o. it will be different like fourth mod, because the pitch sounds are different
• add a note (don) at 00:59:505 -
• add a note (don) again at 01:04:905 - . this note will be follow the vocal sounds there (failing pitch sounds i mean)
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[ Futsuu]
Gerenal
☞ change the SV to be 1.20? 1.40 is quite hard for Futsuu diff which has 200BPM too
Notes Structre
☞ an inconsistent patterns from 00:10:305 - until 00:11:505 (3) - . those notes should be forward 1/2, to make a consistent pattern like the next part, like 00:19:605 - until 00:21:405 -
Notes
• 00:10:305 - should be at 00:10:005 - ; 00:10:905 - should be at 00:10:605 - ; and 00:11:505 - should be at 00:11:205 -
• add a note (don) at 00:11:805 - there. this will be empty (because it's not have any notes and it has 2/4 break too) if you my first mod
• delete 00:12:705 - , there's not any sounds at there, and there's not any reasons to use it too
• add a note (don) at 00:40:305 - and change 00:40:605 - to be kat. so the notes will be o o o o o. you can hear clearly too if it will follow the vocal sounds as well
• delete 00:42:705 - . there's not any reasons to use it. there's not any vocal sounds or instrument sounds at there
• add a note (kat) at 00:50:505 - . the notes will be same like forth mod
• delete 00:52:305 - , same like the fifth mod
• change 01:07:305 - to be don, the vocal is already low here. but, you can ignore this if you want follow the instrument sounds
• add a note (don) at 01:09:705 - , to follow the vocal sounds there which need 5-notes
• change 01:11:505 - to be don. this should be don, because the vocal sound is still same like 01:11:205 - which you use don
• add a note (don) at 01:14:505 - , the reason same like Kantan diff which i modded
• kat at 01:21:705 - . because it should be consistent like 01:19:305 - ; 01:24:105 - ; 01:26:505 -
• add a note (don) at 00:11:805 - there. this will be empty (because it's not have any notes and it has 2/4 break too) if you my first mod
• delete 00:12:705 - , there's not any sounds at there, and there's not any reasons to use it too
• add a note (don) at 00:40:305 - and change 00:40:605 - to be kat. so the notes will be o o o o o. you can hear clearly too if it will follow the vocal sounds as well
• delete 00:42:705 - . there's not any reasons to use it. there's not any vocal sounds or instrument sounds at there
• add a note (kat) at 00:50:505 - . the notes will be same like forth mod
• delete 00:52:305 - , same like the fifth mod
• change 01:07:305 - to be don, the vocal is already low here. but, you can ignore this if you want follow the instrument sounds
• add a note (don) at 01:09:705 - , to follow the vocal sounds there which need 5-notes
• change 01:11:505 - to be don. this should be don, because the vocal sound is still same like 01:11:205 - which you use don
• add a note (don) at 01:14:505 - , the reason same like Kantan diff which i modded
• kat at 01:21:705 - . because it should be consistent like 01:19:305 - ; 01:24:105 - ; 01:26:505 -
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[ Muzukashii]
Gerenal
☞ well~
Notes Structure
☞ an incosistent pattern starts from 00:23:505 - until 00:26:805 - . the kat should be at x:1 and x:3. but, you used kats at x:2. the other reason too, i saw that you used kat at x:1 and x:3 at the previous part before it too. so, you should be consistent with the kat that you use. some suggestions could be looked at the Notes box
☞ wrong doubles from 00:55:905 - until 00:57:405 - . you can see the suggestion at the Notes box
☞ inconsistent kats from 01:00:405 - until 01:02:205 - . you can see again the suggestion at the Notes box
☞ wrong doubles from 00:55:905 - until 00:57:405 - . you can see the suggestion at the Notes box
☞ inconsistent kats from 01:00:405 - until 01:02:205 - . you can see again the suggestion at the Notes box
Notes
• add a note (don) at 00:10:005 - . you should be consistent at there, because you put don too at 00:19:605 - (be carefull, they have a same part of song, and also same pitch sounds)
• add a don (don) at 00:10:755 -, to make o o o notes there like 00:20:205 - until 00:20:505 -
• from 00:23:205 - until 00:26:805 - , i have a suggestion notes here. you can see after you change them, double notes at there which are oo oo will follow the vocal sounds, and make a variation patterns too but still consistent.
• kat at 00:27:405 - . to make a variation note there (to follow the vocal sound too)
• kat too at 00:28:905 - , to follow the instrument sounds there
• from 00:37:605 - until 00:38:205 - , change to be O O O O. i changed them to follow the increasing pitch sounds there. you can hear carefully after you change them
• kat at 00:45:705 - , to keep the vocal pitch sound like 00:45:405 - (they have same vocal pitch sounds)
• change 00:55:905 - to be kat, and move 00:56:055 - to 00:56:205 -. so, they will be o ooo
• move 00:56:955 - to 00:57:105 -
• 01:00:705 - should be kat there, because the kats appear at x:1 and x:3, like the previous notes that you used it. and then, change 01:01:005 - to be don
• from 01:01:305 - until 01:02:205 - . change them to be oo oo o. i changed them all to follow the kat patterns at x:1 and x:3 that you used before too
• add a note (don) at 01:08:505 - ? the vocal still appears at here
• move 01:09:855 - to 01:09:255 - , and change it to be don. and change 01:09:705 - to be don
• if you use two my mods at above, you can hear clearly that the notes will follow the vocals as well
• add a note (don) too at 01:10:905 - , if you add don too at 01:08:505 -
• add a don (don) at 00:10:755 -, to make o o o notes there like 00:20:205 - until 00:20:505 -
• from 00:23:205 - until 00:26:805 - , i have a suggestion notes here. you can see after you change them, double notes at there which are oo oo will follow the vocal sounds, and make a variation patterns too but still consistent.
• kat at 00:27:405 - . to make a variation note there (to follow the vocal sound too)
• kat too at 00:28:905 - , to follow the instrument sounds there
• from 00:37:605 - until 00:38:205 - , change to be O O O O. i changed them to follow the increasing pitch sounds there. you can hear carefully after you change them
• kat at 00:45:705 - , to keep the vocal pitch sound like 00:45:405 - (they have same vocal pitch sounds)
• change 00:55:905 - to be kat, and move 00:56:055 - to 00:56:205 -. so, they will be o ooo
• move 00:56:955 - to 00:57:105 -
• 01:00:705 - should be kat there, because the kats appear at x:1 and x:3, like the previous notes that you used it. and then, change 01:01:005 - to be don
• from 01:01:305 - until 01:02:205 - . change them to be oo oo o. i changed them all to follow the kat patterns at x:1 and x:3 that you used before too
• add a note (don) at 01:08:505 - ? the vocal still appears at here
• move 01:09:855 - to 01:09:255 - , and change it to be don. and change 01:09:705 - to be don
• if you use two my mods at above, you can hear clearly that the notes will follow the vocals as well
• add a note (don) too at 01:10:905 - , if you add don too at 01:08:505 -
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woff wofff, sorry i just mod 3diffs there. but, i will continue it tomorrow
btw, nice diffs, jerry :3
wait for my next mods~