- Tu - wrote:
1st
happy623 wrote:
2nd
- Tu - wrote:
1st
happy623 wrote:
2nd
thanks a lot! applied everything !shARPII wrote:
Hello, french mod for you, don't expect something really good, that's been a long time I haven't mod o/
[General]
Maybe try to find someone who can check your timing, I think your offset is a little bit to early.
[623's Easy]Good job for this mapset and GL for the rank! o3o/
- 00:09:895 (4) - One grid up (yeah that's nazi but the square pattern will be better like that) I like nazi mod, thanks
- 00:26:678 (3) - I dunno, even if this circle is on the beat, it sounds weird for me. It's better on the blue tick but yeah blue tick in easy = bad idea so mby try this instread? http://puu.sh/6pije.jpg yea its quite hard to map this imo, I now decided to undermap here
- 00:35:909 (1) - remove NC (for me, it's still in the last combo => the singer hasn't finish)
- 00:38:426 (2) - NC fixed these twoo
- 01:17:867 (1) - I'm not sure this NC is useful here hmm, it feels little bit overused for me now xD removed
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shARPII wrote:
Hello, french mod for you, don't expect something really good, that's been a long time I haven't mod o/
[General]
Maybe try to find someone who can check your timing, I think your offset is a little bit to early. changed as happy623 stated
[Normal]
- 00:12:412 (1,2,3,4) - I don't know if you were trying to do a square pattern, but it could be better if you really do one like this : http://puu.sh/6pjuD.jpg Done
- 00:29:196 (1) - Mby you can do a better shape for this slider, no? (2 times the same is not really funny to play) I will consider a better flow
- 00:44:301 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I think this isn't really funny to play because it's repetitive : mby try to remove 00:46:608 (2) - and 00:45:979 (1) - should finish on 00:46:608 - http://puu.sh/6pjlc.jpg Fix
- 00:31:713 (3) - Try to lower this slider on the grid because it's almost on my drain bar : http://puu.sh/6piUw.jpg Fix
[Hard]Nothing else to say on this diff, almost perfect for me
- 01:32:972 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think you can do a better flow here with 01:32:552 (4) - : http://puu.sh/6pkly.jpg Done
Good job for this mapset and GL for the rank! o3o/ Thanks so much for the quick mod!!!
Ikaros_F wrote:
hello,IamKwaN
from message
我觉得offset是7399比较稳一点(一个非常不科学的建议而已 沒轉w
[Hard]
00:14:750 (2,3) - 我觉得可以稍微再包的好一点 好
00:41:184 (2,3) - ctrl+G 换下位置,感觉能顺一些 不錯
00:43:072 (2,3) - 这里也换下位置,一跳一跳感觉爽一点 也不錯
00:46:009 (1,2) - 我觉得这里的滑条间距可以放大一点 好 前面我都有放 這裡都應該放
01:04:470 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我调整了一下它的位置,以前那个看起来有点乱→ http://puu.sh/6pZHs ,而且感觉这里稍微跳一点也没什么事 Good
01:01:114 (1,2,1) - 看起来和前面的1靠在一起了,而没有和后面的1靠在一起,微调一下吧 好
00:32:582 (1) - 我觉得这里的大白线上可以有一个clap 這個好像沒差別我就不放了
抱歉,其他2个难度找不出什么 謝謝
就摸到这里了
祝你好运 謝謝你的mod
wmtokok wrote:
From pm
以下無改先講理由
[General]
所有Kiai必須要一樣,因為你同623個diff唔同左 你睇下邊個改番岩佢 應該系你未update w
[Hard]
00:45:170 (6) - 包的好一點,因為這樣看起來尾部跟(5)有點遠
00:59:435 (1,2,1,2) - 我覺得(1)的尾部可以拉長至(2) 把(2)delete ,因為00:58:806 (2) - 這裹有個大跳,令大量circle的出現變得就點怪 我覺得無問題;w;
01:07:827 (1,3) - 頭部加上finish 加強進入高潮的效果 這裡的音樂比較輕跟小聲 加上finish我覺得不適合
01:09:401 (1) - 加上finish 加了whistle
01:19:575 (1) - 頭部加上finish 違和感上線 這裡只是中段 ;w; 這歌很輕鬆耶
01:23:981 (6) - 跟01:22:932 (1) - 做個對稱 X:16 Y168 http://puu.sh/6q32S 做了一個三角形
01:36:359 (1) - 頭加上finish 違和
01:37:198 (3) - 加上finish ^
[Normal]
00:44:331 (1) - 頭加上finish 因為太明顯了這個 +clap 但hard那邊你沒提出;w;
00:57:757 (1) - ^
01:33:002 (1) - ^
01:34:680 (1) - ^
01:36:359 (1) - ^
00:51:883 (2,3,1,2) - http://puu.sh/6q1C6 這個節拍打起來比較順 我覺得現在這個也順
01:12:442 (4) - 回到Y:192 ........因為你看這個01:11:603 (2) - (這個無意中看到= =對整體完全沒影響 可以不fix XD)
[總結]
圖做得很好@@
音效要加強 因為你本身音效太細聲 因為首歌本身好輕鬆,太大聲反而同首歌唔夾
加油 謝謝!
[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:
[623's Easy]
np :3
[Normal]
np :3
[Hard]
00:30:275 (1) - Remove NC?
00:33:421 (1) - ^
00:35:939 (1) - Remove NC here or 00:36:778 (1) - here
01:14:331 (1) - Remove NC here and 01:14:540 (2) - Add NC
01:26:289 (1) - How about This Shape?
01:29:226 (4) - Add NC, 01:29:645 (1) - Remove NC
And 01:30:065 (2) - Remove NC , 01:30:484 (1) - Add NC
well, it's done.
This is so good Have my ☆!
Good Luck!
p.s sorry for poor modding T^T
StarForYou wrote:
新手來Mod一下
[Normal]
01:16:638 (2) - 頭尾加上Clap
01:38:037 (1,2) - 這位置不適合用reverse slider,因為音的位置不同 試試這樣 http://puu.sh/6qdzx.png
[Hard]
00:25:659 (5) - 同Combo突然太遠會誤導人(? 放近一下
01:38:037 (1,2) - 同上,這位置不適合用reverse slider 音的排佈: http://puu.sh/6qdYm.png 可以用Slider+Circle+Slider+Circle/Circle*6的方式代替
[623's Easy]
Nothing :3
第一次mod圖,那裏做得不好請告訴我 OAO
[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:
Hi!noob modder incoming!as your req Thanks so much
I always suggest. so, if you don't want fix it, you don't need fix anything.[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:
[Hard]
00:30:275 (1) - Remove NC?
00:33:421 (1) - ^
00:35:939 (1) - Remove NC here or 00:36:778 (1) - here
01:14:331 (1) - Remove NC here and 01:14:540 (2) - Add NC fix this one!
01:26:289 (1) - How about This Shape?
01:29:226 (4) - Add NC, 01:29:645 (1) - Remove NC
And 01:30:065 (2) - Remove NC , 01:30:484 (1) - Add NC
well, it's done.
This is so good Have my ☆! Thanks XD
Good Luck!
p.s sorry for poor modding T^T Nvm that's not bad at all lol
Syameimaru-Aya wrote:
你好 你好喔
Normal
01:29:226 (6,1,2) - 感觉可以玩个梗 啥梗
Hard
00:08:247 (1,2,3) - 为什么不按下Ctrl+G,更有点感觉吧 flow不對了;w;
00:09:925 (5,6,7) - 这三个稍微转个角度也不错啊和前面四个成为钝角顺便这么做的话⑤可以加NC 直線好像更有難度;w;
00:10:764 (1,2) - 为什么不对准音呢? 加了兩個圓圈;w;
00:12:442 (1,2,3,4) - 总觉得这么放有点坏感觉 為啥233
00:17:058 (5) - 加个NC? 大白線NC是我的做法
00:17:897 (2) - NC(后面的kiai同理 ^
00:19:995 (3) - 按个Ctrl+G会更好?:arrow: CTRL+G 的flow好像不對 ;__;
好像也摸不出啥,十分抱歉
祝早日rank 謝謝!
Syameimaru-Aya wrote:
你好
Easy
00:20:834 (1) - 我总觉得这么拉不好看 改了一點
01:02:373 (2,3) - 这两个角度不好看 右移了 (3)
01:14:540 (3) - 弯的不好看 fixed
01:27:967 (3) - 角度不好看。。 done w
我真是个垃圾modder,满篇不好看,自己都过意不去了,非常对不起……不过确实是没啥问题吧 別沒信心啊;w; 你很好的
好像也摸不出啥,十分抱歉
祝早日rank
thanks both!axschiming wrote:
Hello,m4m
整体难度比较低,铺面很整洁啊XD
歌曲还是很轻松的,能力低摸不出啥东西;w;
柑橘挺喜欢,射一发~
[Easy]
00:12:442 (2) - 改成滑条?不了, 想突出那個重音
00:44:331 (1) - 没包好…… 改了w
00:49:785 (2) - 感觉可以放在前一根白线上……要不1稍稍改改?恩
00:53:142 (2) - 可以缩到红线上 這個可能有點太難了
祝早日rank
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pro Xinely xD was very helpful, thanks a lot!!Xinely wrote:
yo as requestedGuide
Bold = Unrankable/must be fixed
Red = consider to fix it
Black = Suggestion
Blue = Personal Taste
623's Easy
- OD+1? OD1 seems too Easy for Easy diff imo XD.. okay, btw AR3
- 00:12:442 (2) - i don't hear any cymbal sound here. remove the finish instead. okay
- 00:14:121 - volume of kiai really low, (almost can't hear asdf). how about around 70%? sure
- 00:20:834 (1) - how about move it to 8,320? so in order Blanket easier for viewing hmm, I think current one is better here, sorry no change ;w;/
- 00:25:449 (2) - is whistle body here intentional? sound isn't really good as i expected. aa i prefer to remove it umm, its intentinal tho, okay
- 00:27:547 (1) - you should to add finish on head since i hear cymbal here. also feel empty w/o any hitsounds my bad, forget to placed, thank you!
- 00:27:547 (1,2) - finish on tail for both sliders should be remove. i just hear claps sound here. finish is really loud too.
- 00:29:226 (3) - add clap on head because sound of clap here. and remove finish since there isn't any cymbal. if you want to emphasize the clap sound that increasing in tail. arrange the volume instead use finish both done, and yea, I increased the voloume to 80%
- 00:32:582 (2,3) - nazi, blanket could be better here. example : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1267464 fixed
- 00:40:135 (3) - i guess you're forget to add whistle on head for consistency with previous YES pro xD
- 00:41:394 (2) - the vocal is increasing and become loud on repeat here. add whistle to emphasize that vocal? feel empty asdf xD awesome, applied =w=
- 00:49:366 (3) - swap the whistle to tail and clap to repeat for consistency. also guitar sound of 00:50:205 - louder than 00:49:785 - , need whistle to emphasize the 00:50:205 imo copy that
- 00:57:757 (1) - i guess you're forget to add finish on head :p B) puuuro
- 01:01:114 (1) - hmm i heard piano sound only here. remove finish and additions Normal and use whistle instead alright
- 01:12:862 - same as 00:14:121 - volume 70%
- 01:12:862 (1) - nazi, flow could be smoother and better if you move the tail 412,232 hmm, moved, but it seems better in 400,216
- 01:19:575 (1) - i know it will be break consistency but sound of 01:19:575 - is really loud, can't emphasize with soft clap like this. add whistle too instead added whistle but didnt remove the clap
- 01:25:030 (2) - you could to make smother curve of slider here. try to move the tail 316,72 and middle point 312,108 moved not exactly the same
- 01:31:743 (2) - i guess you need to change claps to whistles on head and tail for consistency. also vocal is being high so whistle better to emphasize it done!
- 01:36:778 (4) - nazi, blanket could be better for smoother flow here. example : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1267490 fixed /o/
- 01:38:876 (2) - remove finish, there isn't any cymbal sound. whistle only better sure
感謝wHollow Wings wrote:
as ur req623's Easy
- 00:28:387 (2,3) - blanket?似乎不弄也么事,你之后也都没弄的样子 試著改了
- 01:25:030 (2,1) - blanket perfect
- 01:34:680 (3,4) - ^ all fixed w
- 妹纸0.0
少见的最高难度为hard噗
good luck
pretty nice mod, thanksritsu-tanaika wrote:
Yo as promised
EASY
00:17:058 (4) - Think you should add a note here because there's an important clap in the rhythm okay
00:19:575 (3) - Better if you make the red dot in the slider path at (112,216), just for symmetry hmm, leave this first since I want to make blanket with the next slider
00:54:820 (1) - Move a little to the left (488,136) so its less offscreen to the right moved to 492,136
00:56:079 (3) - Shape looks a bit funny, you might wanna change it to a normal curved one xD I guess its okay
yeah its a good map in general, didnt spot many errors! good luck
thanks baaaaakaaaaaaaaaariiiiiiiiiii <3-Bakari- wrote:
Yo, thank you for your request.
[General][623's Easy]
- Disable the widescreen support. It makes no sense to keep it enabled, because this thing is for widescreen SB ONLY.
- Preview times and offset differ. It is an unrankable mistake and you should fix it as soon, as possible!
- Please, fix the Source. I's supposed to be 銀の匙 or at least Gin no Saji, this is the official name, so it should be mentioned as the source. Anything else should be mentioned in tags.
- Add names of the main characters and A-1 Pictures to the tags. I guess it may help us to find your map faster. all fixed as IamKwaN's reply=w=
The mapset could be better, but it's a pretty nice one!
- Reduce the HP Drain by one tick, your rhythm is not really intensive, so I'm sure that lower HP Drain will fit better here. done
- 00:10:764 (1) - tail of this slider is too close to the previous circle, so players may mistakenly hit the tail,, just because it is so close. Try to move it somewhere else to make the diff a bit friendlier towards beginners. placed away from it o/
- 00:12:862 - there strong vocals and they can be mapped without any problems. Please, try to map it, I'm sure that beginner expect it to be mapped!
Note: 00:26:289 - same here! Keep your rhythm consistent, sudden empty spaces will bug players! okay- 00:17:058 - both vocals and music are pretty strong here. Place here a circle to make your rhythm more intuitive, logical and understandable for players! added
- 00:29:226 (3) - nazi - you could make a neater blanket here. It's a good idea, because beginners would appreciate cute patterns!
Note: 00:44:331 (1) - do the same here ty xD- 00:38:037 - 00:38:876 - here we are again. Do NOT skip beats just to make the diff easier, it breaks your flow and rhythm, consider adding two more circles or placing an 1/1 reversed slider here. added 1/1 reversed slider!
- 00:49:366 (3) - whistle-slidesound here would help you to emphasize that tricky sound on the background. Try to place it here and listen to it! learnt from this
- 00:51:044 (1) - nazi - let me go a bit more nazi - this slider looks kkinda confusing to me. It looks just like one of those blanket sliders, so beginners will expect to see a circle at this place.Since you don't have any circles here, it will be confusin. therefore, consider using another shape okaay xD
- 00:56:079 (3) - nazi - SORRY ABOUT BEING SO NAZI - seriously, this sudden change off the direction reflects nothing in musuic, so I'd like to avoid it. Try to use some softer shape, if i's possible! hmm, I placed a cuuurved slider here
- 01:30:904 (3,1,2,1,2,3) - consider using different comboind for this part, current one feels a bit illogical. I've made some changes, see if you like it! It seems lmore logical and fitting with the music, from my point of view! changed so nice
- 01:38:456 - 01:39:296 - STRONG vocals and music. You can't just ignore them! It makes the diff simply unplayable and hardly understandable for players! it seeeems sooo hard to catch the beats here, so I convert to a long slider instead
Overall, it's okay, but you can make this diff much better! Go for it!
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Good luck!
thanks for moddingW h i t e wrote:
As your request (I don't wanna Forum PM T_T)
[notice][General]
Fine : ) But soft-hitclap2 volume is so low... I can't hear this hitsound
And Why Easy Diff's Timing is different to Normal, Hard Diff? It's unrankable.
I think Timing change 'About 7400' is better. It should be conformed
[Easy]
Hitsound Volume is so low, How about considering to +10~20%?yess, +10%
And Fine : )
Clean Map GL~
thanks! o/kintyan wrote:
hi~ from PM
[623's Easy]
00:12:442 (2) - 00:10:764 (1) - ctrl+V as the mod before this, I changed the whole sliders arrangement, thanks for suggestion!
01:07:827 (1) - spinner end to 01:10:764 hmm, I will keep this because I want to follow the drums instead of the vocal
01:11:184 - add 3/1 slider Because of ^, so it will be a time for newbies to recover and wait for the kiai time
good luck :3
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smallboat wrote:
Hi,IamKwaN, In-game mod req. A bit late,sor.
- Red words: Should be fix it.
- Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
- Black words : In my personal opinion.
[General]
None.
[623's Easy] 01:26:276 (1) - Kiai線未對齊 fixed
00:53:129 (2) - 雖然包得很平均,但這包的似乎感覺有點奇怪呢。改了改
01:20:401 (2) - 感覺靠太近。
01:22:919 (1) - 中間是不是忘了加whistle? 這裡的Pattern應該不用放whistle (?
節奏沒什麼問題。
Sweet Vanilla wrote:
太晚了 先占个位子 明天来edit T T
M4M from my queue
[General][623's Easy]
- None
很棒的图~good luck~
- 00:53:129 (2) - 做的好看些 像这样哦 就小船的mod 我決定把整個滑條改掉了
- 01:01:940 - 这里应该有个circle的 好的
- 01:34:667 (1) - 尾巴上加whistle
- 00:51:031 (1) - 头尾都加whistle
- 00:45:996 (2) - 头 whistle
- 00:47:674 (1) - ^
- 00:53:129 (2) - 尾巴whistle all fixed
Tsukuyomi wrote:
as your req
我先看看他怎么玩的
然后report
General
明显可以做insane
虽然不做也行,不过以后肯定要做insane,还不如现在就多做做
音效太单薄了,你需要跟着vocal或者downbeat加一点whistle
623's Easy
00:41:381 (2) - 没拉好
01:25:017 (2) - 往右歪了点,没和01:22:919 (1) -的边平行 both fixed
美丽
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Kuro Fuyusaki wrote:
Hi, From PM-in game req mod
[General][623's Easy]01:01:730 (2) - -> seems hollow, why don't you add HC?
- Clear
01:22:919 (1,2) - -> Fix the blanket both fixed
Okay, that's from my mod, hope it's useful
baka umiiiiiiiiiiiii-Umi- wrote:
i planned to map this song, but you did a good job no need for another version >3< have star ;3
Thanks!-Umi- wrote:
i planned to map this song, but you did a good job no need for another version >3< have star ;3
Zweib wrote:
hi~req from forum pm
唔。。。感觉挺好挺整齐的ww找些nazi混kds 233
[Normal]
不妨试试用替换soft-slidertick或者soft-sliderslide的方式补补缺的clap音? 好
01:16:625 (2) - 漏clap? 不是;w;
[Hard]
00:41:171 (2,3) - swap clap 對!!我先前把他們互換了位置忘記改了!!
00:58:583 (2,3) - ^ 這段過渡段是不加的
01:16:625 (2,3) - 这两个note的sampleset变成drum了如果不是故意的请去掉(因为我看后面一段kiai上相似的地方没用drum 納尼?! 好像沒有用到drum的音效啊..
01:29:213 (4,5,1) - 摆这个的时候稍微呈一点弧线可能会更舒服,后面01:30:052 (2,3,1) - 同理 好
Desperate-kun wrote:
M4M hi
[General]I think mine is fine. ;w;
- 01:25:856 - I would let Kiai end here instead of here: 01:26:171 But I think it's just personal preference.
[Normal][Hard]
- 00:12:429 (1,2,3,4) - Whistle for all of them? Because in the song, there's no different emphasizing. ok~
- 00:17:464 (1,2,3,1,2) - This straight line doesn't look and doesn't flow good here. I suggest something like this: I think it's fine.
Of course you have to redo the stuff after that then ^^- 00:24:807 (2) - 0,04 Distance snap error. Please fix :3 done
- 00:27:534 (1) - ^ ^
- 00:33:408 (3) - NC to emphasize Echo, like you did in the hard diff? ok
- 00:37:604 (1,2) - Fix blanket. it's fine.
- 01:00:262 (2,1) - ^ ok
- 01:11:171 (1,2,3,4) - All whistle? nice
- 01:13:478 (2) - 0,04 Distance snap error done
- 01:35:926 (3,1) - Fix blanket. It's fine for me.
- 01:36:346 (1) - 0,04 Distance snap error done
- 01:38:863 (2) - Move to x:112 y:172, so that 01:38:024 (1) and 01:38:863 (2) continue each other's curve better. To improve flow + look ^^ ok~
- Nice diff
Nice mapset, good luck for rank ^^ Song is kawaiiiii :3 aha, thanks!
- 00:07:604 (2,3) - Fix blanket ^^ It's fine o.o
- 00:10:751 (1,2,3) - Fix both blankets done.
- 00:12:429 (1,2,3,4) - Whistle for all start of sliders? Same reason as in normal ok
- 00:15:576 (1) - Move NC to 00:15:786 (2) good
- 00:25:856 (1,2) - Fix blanket it's fine.
- 00:29:842 (1) - 00:30:262 (1) - No reason for NC indicator for jump
- 00:36:765 (1) - ^ echo~
- 00:38:443 (3,4,5) - This triple doesn't fit here. My suggestion is: Remove 5 and make 4 a 3/4 slider. nope 'w'
- 00:41:171 (2,3,4,5) - Why isn't this a perfect square? ;w; always perfect square would be boring ;w;
- 00:54:388 (1) - Ctrl+g for better flow? nope
- 00:56:066 (1,2,3) - Fix blanket. done
- 01:11:171 (1,2,3,4) - Whistle for all slider starts? done
- 01:20:192 (2,3) - ^ nope 'w'
- 01:20:401 (3) - Ctrl+g for better flow? ^
- 01:26:905 (2,3) - ^ ^
- 01:29:213 (4,5,1,2,3,1) - This doesn't look good. Try something like this maybe? don't think so 'w'
So that (2,3,1) starts at the position of 5! Of course, you have to redo the stuff after than :3- Cool
Here's my map: Click!