17:26 Priti: So, after I let you watch my horrible play, it's modding time!
17:27 Priti: 00:17:483 - imo this is the hardest part of the map, might be just me but this whole section is so cluttered and confusing
17:27 Priti: it's also the highest note density if you look at the yellow bars on the side.
17:28 ExPew: oh that part
17:29 ExPew: i put 3 instruments beat + synth + piano
17:29 Priti: 00:52:392 - you could have much more serious LN patterns in this section if you follow the vocals harder
17:29 Priti: relaxing yet hard.
17:29 ExPew: nope
17:30 ExPew: that Ln i not follow the vocal
17:30 ExPew: that organ
17:31 ExPew: plus o2jam mix note
17:31 ExPew: unique pattern makes player fun to play
17:32 Priti:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1273544 here is an example
17:32 Priti: I suck at mania mapping, but this is just an example.
17:33 Priti: so like, it will make the part stay calm, but not as boring and simple
17:34 Priti: about the kiai, these jackhammers feel way too easy, maybe put them on 2~3 keys instead of one to make it feel more intense?
17:34 Priti: or like, jackhammers + 1/4 sliders
17:35 ExPew: agree on your image
17:35 ExPew: and jackahmmer i dont think because this mapset mania only 2 diffs
17:36 Priti: well, what diff are you aiming for?
17:36 ExPew: i scare when diff spike on NM with MX
17:36 Priti: This feels like a HD most of the time
17:37 ExPew: NM and MX
17:37 Priti: this doesn't feel like MX
17:37 Priti: at all
17:37 Priti: there are HDs that are harder than this tbh
17:37 ExPew: yea just few part feel not like HD
17:37 ExPew: xD
17:37 ExPew: lol
17:38 Priti: the kiais should be the hardest
17:38 Priti: while tbh, the relaxing 1/4 part is hell
17:38 Priti:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1273554 illustration of my concept
17:39 ExPew: is it okay if triple synth there?
17:39 Priti: if you are not too fond of the double jackhammers and/or the 1/4 sliders, you could make these 01:11:347 (71347|6,71483|1,71483|4,71619|6,71756|4,71892|2,72029|3,72029|0,72029|6) - parts harder
17:39 Priti: actually if you put the LNs then you will also need one on 01:10:801
17:40 Priti: yes, these sounds just get cut by eachother
17:40 Priti: 1/4 LNs*
17:41 Priti: these jackhammers are too easy since they are *just* jackhammers on 1 key and not really much else.
17:41 Priti: and tbh most people can singletap 220BPM, even I can.
17:42 Priti: if it's for just 5 notes ofc
17:43 ExPew: got it...
17:43 ExPew: going to gettin harder
17:43 Priti: 01:27:301 - this part feels a bit random
17:43 Priti: there are small 2-note jackhammers at times, but they don't seem consistent
17:44 ExPew: no idea pattern most
17:44 Priti: you can keep these small jackhammers
17:44 Priti: if you actually put them in a consistent emphasised mannre
17:45 Priti: like, adding a note between these two 01:29:210 (89210|5,89483|5) - could make a nice jackhammer
17:45 ExPew: how about jack like this?
17:45 ExPew:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/127358017:46 Priti: and then here 01:31:392 -
17:46 Priti: i likey
17:46 Priti: then, instead of 2 3 2 3
17:46 Priti: make it 3 4 3 4
17:46 Priti: 3's are 1 key, 4's are 2 on 2 leus
17:46 Priti: 2 keys*
17:47 Priti: actually, I think they are all supposed to be 4
17:47 ExPew: 23 23 45 45
17:47 Priti: anyways, you get the idea
17:48 Priti: 01:44:756 this section needs more and longer LNs to match the constant sound that gets cut off for like 1/4 ~ 1/2 at times
17:49 Priti: like, 01:45:574 - 01:45:847 - doesn't have this sound (which also means you need to change the LN on 01:45:574 - to a single note
17:50 Priti: 02:05:210 - shouldn't there be 1/4 starting from there?
17:51 Priti: 02:18:574 - LN up to 02:19:665 - could work well
17:52 ExPew: hitsound will sink the music 02:05:210 -
17:52 Priti: 02:22:801 (142801|2,142938|2) - strange untuitive double, just splitting it to different colomns could work well
17:53 Priti: 02:19:665 - also, lower note density in this section, it's crazy for a calm part
17:53 ExPew: op
17:53 ExPew: moved other lines
17:53 Priti: like, in both calm 1/4 sections
17:54 ExPew: so need to continue synth note like this part? 02:24:029 -
17:54 Priti: yes
17:54 Priti: it's the only double you have in this whole section so it's strange and unfitting
17:54 ExPew: alright
17:54 Priti: 02:37:119 - again, feels to simple, making it a bit more complex but still calm could work well
17:55 Priti: again, first kiai section is too simple, second is too inconsistent and needs better jackhammers
17:55 Priti: post-kiai needs longer LNs
17:56 Priti: sorta like how L i a did in his diff on smooooch where in the last kiai he got a constant LN that just moves to another colomn according to the pitch.
17:56 ExPew: its previous pattern b4
17:57 ExPew: i fix them
17:57 Priti: one last thing
17:57 Priti: right at the end, there are sounds you are skipping
17:57 Priti: like, pretty soft ones
17:57 ExPew: actually Lia note all followin music pitch
17:57 ExPew: but 1 thing i dont like
17:59 ExPew: himitsu~!
18:00 Priti: huh
18:00 Priti: I think that's all
18:00 Priti: peace