Lapis Aoki wrote:

1st mod~~ owo I found your map in #modreqs xD
[Easy]
00:07:231 -You know its gonna be possible if you added a spinner till 00:08:564 i wanted to do this but the time between the spinner and the next note is too short :/
00:17:453 -Move. where ? '-'
[Normal]
00:03:231 -Straight. what u mean here, the slider is already straight

[Insane]
00:28:453 -Make these 2 circles under the slider. k fixed :3

GL Umi-san~! ^^ Take a star. c:

Fatfan Kolek wrote:

[Easy]
00:44:453 (1) Hmh, not sure if it's better. Maybe you can start the spinner on blue tick. :p
01:25:231 (1) I personally like it more to set spinner on the following ticks. :< Maybe start on blue tick here, too? Dunno, if it's allowed on Easy maps. Teach me, master! D:
fixed both spinners's start

[Normal]
00:16:119 (1) Blanket can be better here. I am not even sure if you really wanted to set a blanket here to be honest.
01:09:453 (1) Blanket can be also better here. ^^
fixed both blanket :3

[Insane]
Didn't find anything here. :3

Sorry for that VERY short mod. D: Anyways, I really like your maps. :3 Have my Starrrrrr. GL~

Winek wrote:

Hello Hello! Rapid Mod \o/

Red is unrankable
Green is suggestion that should higly be followed
Silly suggestion

[Easy]
Maybe CS 2 instead of 3? nah too big lol
01:16:564 (1,2,3) - After the reverse arrow, you should add the same whistle than 01:16:119 (4) no need whistle here imo

[Normal]
00:32:119 (3) - You should reduce it of one tick and add a note: 00:32:564 fixed in another way :3

[Insane]
01:02:342 (1) - Change the combo of this color or it may be hard to see with this part of video. it's okay for me but i'll consider if i have other reflexion

Sorry for da short mod. No kudosu if you don't accept any please.

1. Add Clara and Alice to tags, I think it's quite clear that these are names of the singers.
2. Disable Widescreen support. It's for Widescreen storyboard only. There's no point in keeping it enabled.
3. Make sure to fix Preview Point on alacat's diff. It differs from other diffs, atm. :< It's a mistake, I guess.

1. 00:06:342 (4,5) - beginners don't really care about approach-hitcircles, they just click on the nearest hitobject they see, that's why I recommend you to move tail of the slider away. It seems to be confusing for beginners.
2. 00:40:564 (1,2) - you could replace them with 3/2 slider, as you did it previously with some similar patterns.
   Note: 00:42:342 (2,3) - pretty much the same here. If you still want to keep it as it is, at least reduce OD by one tick to make it less stressful for beginners!
3. 01:16:564 (1,2,3) - let's nazi! - you could make blanket-sliders here, they'd look much prettier and give you more intuitive flow!
4. 01:25:119 (1) - this diff is designed to be playable in ALL modes. Make sure it is playable in o!m/taiko as well, since this diff can be played in other game modes and you have no specific taiko/ctb/o!m diffs. This 1/4 pattern will stress players in o!m mode too much. Consider starting this spinner on 01:25:453 - in order to make the diff more playable or remove the spinner
   
   Except for the last spinner, which is unplayable for beginners in special modes, everything else is okay.

1. 00:04:342 (2,3,4,5) - maybe you can swap these sliders on the timeline to make your flow smoother. Swap and rotate them a bit! here's an example
2. 00:31:231 (2) - I'd curve this lider to make your flow a bit smoother. Take a look at the screenshot
   and see if you like this idea or not.
   Note: 00:44:342 (3,1) - same. 1/4 pattern which will probably be too complicated to play in any other special mode. :<
3. 01:25:008 (3,1) - you have no mode- specific diffs, so o!m/taiko/ctb players will play your standard diffs in their modes. Make sure this diff is playable, avoid 1/4 patterns like these one, which is clearly too hard for a Normal mania diff. :<
   
   Nothing else. Neat and enjoyable diff.

1. 00:00:120 (1) - nazi - are you sure about this shape. Normally, we use such sliders as blanket-sliders, so play may expect it to be a blanket slider. It looks kinda out of it's place here, imo. Try another shape, maybe? I'm sure you can make it prettier!
2. 00:15:675 (6,7,8) - here, you use x0.8 DS, but 00:22:786 (5,6,1) - here you go with x1.0 DS. It seems kinda illogical and some players may read it wrong. Please, try to keep the DS consistent for triplets, it is important to make them understandable for players, since this diff shouldn't be too compluicated for players!
3. 00:27:897 - both vocals and music are audible here, why don't you try to place a circle here. It may hurt your flow a bit, but it's really needd here!
4. 01:17:008 (2,3) - I'd use Ctrl+G on them to make them fit with the music better. Try to do it and listen!
   Note: oh, and don't forget to fix the DS if you agree
5. 01:24:675 (4,5) - and pretty much the same as above happens here. example. Since there's no "slide" sound, this pattern looks more logical to me.
   
   Looks fine. Didn't like some of your patterns, but maybe it's just me.

1. 00:29:008 (1,2,3) - try to follow background music here, these beats were mapped in a Hard diff, so it's kinda strange to keep these beats unmaped here.
2. 00:46:786 (1) - NC bug. You should fix that!
   
   Everything else looks fine here. Lovely diff.

-Bakari- wrote:

Hi. As requested.

[General]

1. Add Clara and Alice to tags, I think it's quite clear that these are names of the singers. added
2. Disable Widescreen support. It's for Widescreen storyboard only. There's no point in keeping it enabled. disabled
3. Make sure to fix Preview Point on alacat's diff. It differs from other diffs, atm. :< It's a mistake, I guess. ops fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:06:342 (4,5) - beginners don't really care about approach-hitcircles, they just click on the nearest hitobject they see, that's why I recommend you to move tail of the slider away. It seems to be confusing for beginners. fixed
2. 00:40:564 (1,2) - you could replace them with 3/2 slider, as you did it previously with some similar patterns. i don't want skip the finish sound ~
   Note: 00:42:342 (2,3) - pretty much the same here. If you still want to keep it as it is, at least reduce OD by one tick to make it less stressful for beginners!same as before, and also OD 2 is enough
3. 01:16:564 (1,2,3) - let's nazi! - you could make blanket-sliders here, they'd look much prettier and give you more intuitive flow! it's intentionnal here, in prefer in this way
4. 01:25:119 (1) - this diff is designed to be playable in ALL modes. Make sure it is playable in o!m/taiko as well, since this diff can be played in other game modes and you have no specific taiko/ctb/o!m diffs. This 1/4 pattern will stress players in o!m mode too much. Consider starting this spinner on 01:25:453 - in order to make the diff more playable or remove the spinner moved spinner on red line
   
   Except for the last spinner, which is unplayable for beginners in special modes, everything else is okay.

[Normal]

1. 00:04:342 (2,3,4,5) - maybe you can swap these sliders on the timeline to make your flow smoother. Swap and rotate them a bit! here's an example nice fixed
2. 00:31:231 (2) - I'd curve this lider to make your flow a bit smoother. Take a look at the screenshot
   and see if you like this idea or not. okay
   Note: 00:44:342 (3,1) - same. 1/4 pattern which will probably be too complicated to play in any other special mode. :< fixed
3. 01:25:008 (3,1) - you have no mode- specific diffs, so o!m/taiko/ctb players will play your standard diffs in their modes. Make sure this diff is playable, avoid 1/4 patterns like these one, which is clearly too hard for a Normal mania diff. :< fixed
   
   Nothing else. Neat and enjoyable diff.

[Insane]

1. 00:29:008 (1,2,3) - try to follow background music here, these beats were mapped in a Hard diff, so it's kinda strange to keep these beats unmaped here. i don't think is strange imo, prefer follow the vocal here
2. 00:46:786 (1) - NC bug. You should fix that! fixed !
   
   Everything else looks fine here. Lovely diff.

In general, it looks alright. I'd try to make flow a bit smoother, tho.

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Best of luck!

1. Move Nisekoi to the tags and add to the source ''ニセコイ'' since it's allowed now owo
2. The spinner in Normal ends later than the other diffs pls fix it to make it consistent :3
3. huumm btw maybe add ''False Love'' to the tags it's the english translation of Nisekoi

1. 00:02:786 (5) - You might want to consider adding a whistle here, I know you dont like them but, it's really compatible with the music here ;3
2. 00:19:564 - You should add a note here imo. Throughout the wholeeee section you have made this beat a triplet owo, so imo better to also make one here to be a bit consistent. Also plays nicer owo/
3. 00:48:119 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - imo this played a bit weird for me as I didn't really understand what you were following T-T
   You could try something like this:
   
   as for this placement if you do this something like this would be cool owo:
   
   Box

   
4. 00:49:897 (1,2) - Nazi this might look a bit random for ppl owo, try to adjust it a bit like this?
   
   Box

   
   Code if you need it owo
   
   Box

   304,206,49897,6,0,L|304:70,2,135,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   148,331,50786,2,0,L|177:240,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

5. 01:16:119 (6) - I guess your're missing a hitsound here owo/
6. 01:16:342 (7) - Try a whistle here to emphasize than uuh weird instrument you also have it at other places owo
7. 01:18:342 (1) - I think you're missing a clap on the head here owo
8. 01:24:008 - 01:24:119 - these two could use some hitsounds imo owo maybe use normal sample just like alacat

1. 00:43:453 (3,4,5) - Maybe use the 0,15 or 0.80 spacing you have been using the whole time owo?
2. 00:36:786 (2,3,4) - Looks a bit odd imo, maybe try something like this owo?
   
   Box

   

1. 00:03:675 (1,2,3) - This might be a bit trouble for a normal I'm not sure tho, you could easily make this more simple by adding a repeat, but yea idk. just pointing it out.
2. 00:05:231 (4) - This blank is a bit awkward imo, because the whole section you have followed the vocal strictly, and now your letting it blank.. imo you should add a note here owo
3. 00:05:453 (4) - I think you're missing a whistle here on the head :3
4. 00:13:231 (2) - Missing a clap here at the end.
5. 00:18:786 (4) - Missing a clap here at the head.
6. 00:41:231 (2) - Missing clap on the repeat I think, Because you also have it at Insane.
7. 00:43:231 (2) - Missing whistle at the end of the slider :3
8. 01:09:453 (1) - Missing clap on the head of the slider ;3
9. 01:10:786 (2) - Same as above
10. 01:18:342 (2) - Try adding a whistle here on the repeat, it sounds nice and also consistent with the previous slider.
11. 01:20:119 (3) - The NC should be here for consistency also cuz this section: 00:09:008 (1,2,3,1,2) - which has the same sound does have a NC there. Also don't forget to fix the following NC's when you do this.

1. 00:07:231 (5) - Add a whistle here on the head. Because you have mapped this beat on the Insane also, and there is has a whistle on the head owo.
2. 00:25:008 (3,4,1) - It is a nice idea to make this triangle, but... (4) and (1) are slightly overlapping. maybe do some tweeking owo? my suggestion is to move (4) 382|138, you won't have it lined up anymore with (3) but you still have your triangle ;3
3. 00:41:453 (2) - Add a clap on the head and end, since this music, and also consistency throughout your diffs ;3
4. 00:43:231 (4) - Same as above
5. 01:16:564 (1,2,3) - Why no blankets orz.. Try something like this
   
   Box

   
   I tweeked the first slider a bit, and than Copyed it and rotated.
   If you like it, here is the code:
   
   Box

   367,177,76564,6,0,P|366:237|300:303,2,135,6|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   348,99,78342,2,0,P|408:100|474:166,2,135,10|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   270,121,80119,2,0,P|271:61|337:-5,2,135,10|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

1. 00:04:564 (2) - I honestly didn't like how you made this slider =3=/ how about making it like this instead, to make it more fun to play and watch
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:07:231 (5) - I think finish in the head would fit the music pretty well imo, and maybe add whistle in the end but this one is up to you owo
3. 00:18:786 (1) - why you made the repeat go on big beat? i honestly think it's bad, so how about making something like this instead?
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:06:786 (2) - ^

1. 00:07:231 (1) - same as easy, maybe add whistle in this spinner
2. 00:28:119 (3) - I think it'll be more fun to play, if you moved this slider like this instead
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:35:675 (3) - move the 3rd point to fix the blanket between 00:34:786 (2) -
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:04:119 (5) - how about moving it like this?
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:20:119 (3) - I don't like how you made this slider, it's kinda odd and bad imo, so how about making it something like this instead owo
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:51:675 (3) - ^
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:04:564 (4) - move the slider end, 2 grids up to fix the blanket btw 00:03:675 (3) -
2. 00:07:342 (1) - remove clap on this spinner and add whistle insead, i think it'll fit much better imo

xChippy wrote:

Yo~ owo/
modmodmod, I forgot how2mod

[General]

1. Move Nisekoi to the tags and add to the source ''ニセコイ'' since it's allowed now owo yeah it's allowed but not obligatory :3
2. The spinner in Normal ends later than the other diffs pls fix it to make it consistent :3
3. huumm btw maybe add ''False Love'' to the tags it's the english translation of Nisekoi

[Insane]

1. 00:02:786 (5) - You might want to consider adding a whistle here, I know you dont like them but, it's really compatible with the music here ;3
2. 00:19:564 - You should add a note here imo. Throughout the wholeeee section you have made this beat a triplet owo, so imo better to also make one here to be a bit consistent. Also plays nicer owo/
3. 00:48:119 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - imo this played a bit weird for me as I didn't really understand what you were following T-T
   You could try something like this:
   
   as for this placement if you do this something like this would be cool owo:
   
   Box

   
4. 00:49:897 (1,2) - Nazi this might look a bit random for ppl owo, try to adjust it a bit like this?
   
   Box

   
   Code if you need it owo
   
   Box

   304,206,49897,6,0,L|304:70,2,135,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   148,331,50786,2,0,L|177:240,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

5. 01:16:119 (6) - I guess your're missing a hitsound here owo/
6. 01:16:342 (7) - Try a whistle here to emphasize than uuh weird instrument you also have it at other places owo no need imo
7. 01:18:342 (1) - I think you're missing a clap on the head here owo
8. 01:24:008 - 01:24:119 - these two could use some hitsounds imo owo maybe use normal sample just like alacat

[Normal]

1. 00:03:675 (1,2,3) - This might be a bit trouble for a normal I'm not sure tho, you could easily make this more simple by adding a repeat, but yea idk. just pointing it out. it's ok for me >.<
2. 00:05:231 (4) - This blank is a bit awkward imo, because the whole section you have followed the vocal strictly, and now your letting it blank.. imo you should add a note here owo hum i don't think so
3. 00:05:453 (4) - I think you're missing a whistle here on the head :3
4. 00:13:231 (2) - Missing a clap here at the end.
5. 00:18:786 (4) - Missing a clap here at the head.
6. 00:41:231 (2) - Missing clap on the repeat I think, Because you also have it at Insane.
7. 00:43:231 (2) - Missing whistle at the end of the slider :3
8. 01:09:453 (1) - Missing clap on the head of the slider ;3
9. 01:10:786 (2) - Same as above
10. 01:18:342 (2) - Try adding a whistle here on the repeat, it sounds nice and also consistent with the previous slider.
11. 01:20:119 (3) - The NC should be here for consistency also cuz this section: 00:09:008 (1,2,3,1,2) - which has the same sound does have a NC there. Also don't forget to fix the following NC's when you do this.

[Easy]

1. 00:07:231 (5) - Add a whistle here on the head. Because you have mapped this beat on the Insane also, and there is has a whistle on the head owo.
2. 00:25:008 (3,4,1) - It is a nice idea to make this triangle, but... (4) and (1) are slightly overlapping. maybe do some tweeking owo? my suggestion is to move (4) 382|138, you won't have it lined up anymore with (3) but you still have your triangle ;3
3. 00:41:453 (2) - Add a clap on the head and end, since this music, and also consistency throughout your diffs ;3
4. 00:43:231 (4) - Same as above
5. 01:16:564 (1,2,3) - Why no blankets orz.. Try something like this as i said to bakari, it's intentional here >.<
   
   Box

   
   I tweeked the first slider a bit, and than Copyed it and rotated.
   If you like it, here is the code:
   
   Box

   367,177,76564,6,0,P|366:237|300:303,2,135,6|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   348,99,78342,2,0,P|408:100|474:166,2,135,10|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   270,121,80119,2,0,P|271:61|337:-5,2,135,10|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[]
Thats all :3, Really nice map :3, Gogogo Rank it <33

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Hi Umi, Mod as requested in-game =w=/ noob mod incoming huehuehue


Easy:
how about rising OD +1 to balance this diff o.o current OD good imo

1. 00:04:564 (2) - I honestly didn't like how you made this slider =3=/ how about making it like this instead, to make it more fun to play and watch
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:07:231 (5) - I think finish in the head would fit the music pretty well imo, and maybe add whistle in the end but this one is up to you owo added a finish drum finish instead
3. 00:18:786 (1) - why you made the repeat go on big beat? i honestly think it's bad, so how about making something like this instead? i don't think so >.<
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:06:786 (2) - ^ ^

Normal:
OD+1 would be good imo~ same as easy diff

1. 00:07:231 (1) - same as easy, maybe add whistle in this spinner same as easy diff
2. 00:28:119 (3) - I think it'll be more fun to play, if you moved this slider like this instead no prefer my current flow >.<
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:35:675 (3) - move the 3rd point to fix the blanket between 00:34:786 (2) -
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:04:119 (5) - how about moving it like this? It give a bad flow imo >.<
   
   SPOILER

   

Insane:

1. 00:04:564 (4) - move the slider end, 2 grids up to fix the blanket btw 00:03:675 (3) -
2. 00:07:342 (1) - remove clap on this spinner and add whistle insead, i think it'll fit much better imo same as easy diff

wow...Nice mapset <3 and ClariS all the way <333 good luck Umi and alacat owo//

smallboat wrote:

Hi,-Umi-, In-game mod req. A bit late,sor.

1. Red words: Should be fix it.
2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

Video Offset inconsistent,need fixed. ops fixed
Here:

SPOILER

(Nm diff is 93),(Easy、alacat and ins diff is 196),so,you should fixed it(at Nm diff).

[Easy]

00:03:675 (1,2) - Perhap can copy 00:04:564 (2),be a symmetry,imo. okay
01:18:342 (2) - Seems can adjust a bit slider be a blanket? imo. as i said to bakari, xChippy and PAN it's intentional here, i would like keep it like this >.<

SPOILER

01:20:119 (3) - ^ ^

[Normal]

00:05:453 (4) - Seem forgot add whistle in slider head? Because no add at this here feel a bit strange. added
00:26:786 (1) - Use ctrl+H,you will found this slider a bit crooked off.


[Insane]

00:20:564 (3) - Try to stack 00:18:786 (3)slider head and turn a bit angle (Be a curve)? fixed

SPOILER

00:29:008 (1,2) - Maybe can be place a antijump,imo.I feel a bit fit to it. already an anti jup here
00:33:008 (4) - I feel slider head should be place 00:32:897 ,listen, the vocal is starts here,imo. prefer the current rythm
00:51:675 (1) - Maybe can stack 00:49:897 (1) slider head? too nazy i think it's okay x)
01:05:453 (3) - Blanket (2) slider head? ^

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
4.Overall is quite goodso I shoot a star for you,Good Luck!

Jemmmmy wrote:

Insane

tags conflict with other diffs
00:03:453 (2) - move to [256.312] ok
00:23:231 (1,2,3) - use triangle? more or less fixed
00:44:342 (1) - cancel NC nop

woo perfect diff

Normal

00:54:119 (5,6) - stack fixed

easy

00:58:342 (4,1) - fixed

nice job!

HabiHolic wrote:

as your reqs

[Easy]

00:22:342 (4) - hmm like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1264725 nop i prefer the current flow
01:04:119 (3) - Please fix that deviated https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1264731 fixed

nice mapset

1. It would be good to add some Lead-In through the .osu files on all the difficulties.

1. 00:44:453 (1) - This spinner would be better if it would start on the next white tick and not istantly on the blue one.
2. 01:00:564 (3) - This slider is somehow touching the HP Bar, try to move it a bit more to the left to fix this.

1. 00:20:119 (3) - This slider has a really weird shape if you ask me, it would be better if you make it curved instead.
2. 00:35:675 (1,2,3,4) - I don't really like how you spaced these notes here and how (4) is overlapping with (1), spacing them normally instead would look and play better to me.

1. 00:29:897 (3) - I'd add a new combo here because of the jumpy pattern, to make it easier to read.

Andrea wrote:

~General~

1. It would be good to add some Lead-In through the .osu files on all the difficulties.Alright added

~Easy~

1. 00:44:453 (1) - This spinner would be better if it would start on the next white tick and not istantly on the blue one. ops i forgot to fixed this one
2. 01:00:564 (3) - This slider is somehow touching the HP Bar, try to move it a bit more to the left to fix this.should be good now :3

~Insane~

1. 00:29:897 (3) - I'd add a new combo here because of the jumpy pattern, to make it easier to read. fixed

Okay, call me back when it's fixed. ^^