Black Raison d'etre - Van!shment Th!s World (TV Size) · forum

Lust

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Lust 2014-01-12T01:37:24+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, March 25, 2014 at 7:09:22 AM

Artist: Black Raison d'etre
Title: Van!shment Th!s World (TV Size)
Source: 中二病でも恋がしたい！戀
Tags: Chu-2 season two ending ED Love, Chunibyo & Other Delusions! Two Chūnibyō Demo Koi ga Shitai! Ren Cloudchaser Momochikun Cloudsplash16 Togashi Yuta Rikka Takanashi Satone Shichimiya Shinka Nibutani Kumin Tsuyuri Sanae Dekomori Makoto Isshiki Kazari Kannagi Kuzuha Togashi Yumeha Togashi Touka Takanashi ZAQ happy30
BPM: 167
Filesize: 8866kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:

Cloudchaser's Normal (3.92 stars, 119 notes)
CloudSplash's Insane (5 stars, 334 notes)
happy30's Insane (5 stars, 271 notes)
Hard (4.97 stars, 237 notes)
Mochi's Easy (2.92 stars, 105 notes)

Download: Black Raison d'etre - Van!shment Th!s World (TV Size)
Download: Black Raison d'etre - Van!shment Th!s World (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Last edited by Lust 2014-03-26T00:26:14+00:00, edited 32 times in total.

Asphyxia

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Asphyxia 2014-01-12T01:38:26+00:00

First

Little

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Little 2014-01-12T01:46:04+00:00

^^/
Here's my diff and hitsounds: http://puu.sh/6hPYf.zip

Unicode Artist should be: Black Raison d'être

Lust

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Lust 2014-01-12T01:56:53+00:00

updated :^)

Umi

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Umi 2014-01-12T02:19:30+00:00

(>' 3')> http://puu.sh/6hS33/f6c6dd2814.rar what u think ?

I was expecting an ending as awesome as the first one, a bit sad ;w; but well not bad too >.<

GL Lust and the Cloud Crew lol

Cloudchaser

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Joined May 2012

Cloudchaser 2014-01-12T07:59:12+00:00

Here's my diff http://puu.sh/6i9Dk.rar I need to check NCs but it's ready for mods, I hope you like it.

I'm using Cloud16's hitsounds too~

MouseEasy

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MouseEasy 2014-01-12T22:48:45+00:00

Ganbatte Lustão :^)

MikuEviL

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MikuEviL 2014-01-14T20:37:43+00:00

Mod Reqest???

Lust

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Lust 2014-01-15T20:47:30+00:00

opened for modding

MikuEviL

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MikuEviL 2014-01-17T00:33:21+00:00

Lust wrote:
opened for modding

Yes!!!!!!

MikuEviL

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MikuEviL 2014-01-17T07:04:35+00:00

[b]Mydiff+Sound+BG>>>>>>>>>>>Deleted!!!

Last edited by MikuEviL 2014-01-20T04:56:38+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Lust

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Lust 2014-01-17T11:25:50+00:00

sorry but not taking anymore gds

Yauxo

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Yauxo 2014-01-18T00:04:12+00:00

[Mochi's Easy]

00:13:300 (1) - (semi-optional?) Iam unsure whether this Spinner is doable to new players. An alternative would be another long Slider or a simple Circle combo.
01:05:036 (1) - ^

[Cloud's Normal]

00:07:821 (3) - You could add a Circle here
00:08:090 (3) - Consider resnapping this one. Jumping from .8 to .5ish feels weird and is hard to actually hit.
00:25:695 (2) - This one seems offbeat and is difficult to play (for some reason it actually is) Consider changing the mapping here abit; some examples:
Now:

Ex1:

Ex2:

(Optional (variation)) 00:56:234 (3) - Add a Circle here

[Lust's Hard]

00:10:066 (4) - Add a Circle to keep the flow/ up with the beat.
00:32:252 (2) - let this one start at 00:32:342 (2) - (1 tick). Doesnt really make sense to me that its starting mid-vocal and between the beats
(optional) 00:54:078 (2) - lower slider velocity for this one
00:55:695 (3) - This one feels better with a simple slider

[Cloud's Insane]

00:14:198 (4,5) - Add 2 Circles here for a better transition into the slider

In general, NCing on sudden speed changes would be something that makes it easier to read those.
The ones that really got me were:

00:02:701 (1) -
00:05:395 (4) -
00:11:503 (5) -
00:37:371 (1) -

[]
Didnt find too much, but its something

Little

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Joined November 2012

Little 2014-01-18T01:52:20+00:00

Yauxo wrote:
[Cloud's Insane]

00:14:198 (4,5) - Add 2 Circles here for a better transition into the slider That doesn't follow the music..

In general, NCing on sudden speed changes would be something that makes it easier to read those. Using NC like that screws up the HP scaling.. and I don't see how any of these SV changes are hard to read.. all of them have visible slider ticks
The ones that really got me were:

00:02:701 (1) -
00:05:395 (4) -
00:11:503 (5) -
00:37:371 (1) -

[]
Didnt find too much, but its something

Thanks, no changes to my diff from this mod.
@Lust, I made a couple of changes on my own to improve spacing and flow at parts.

Cloud's Insane

osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54617
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Van!shment Th!s World (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Van!shment Th!s World (TV Size)
Artist:Black Raison d'etre
ArtistUnicode:Black Raison d'être
Creator:Lust
Version:Cloud's Insane
Source:中二病でも恋がしたい！戀
Tags:Chu-2 season two ending ED Love, Chunibyo & Other Delusions! Two Chūnibyō Demo Koi ga Shitai! Ren Cloudchaser Momochikun Cloudsplash16 Togashi Yuta Rikka Takanashi Satone Shichimiya Shinka Nibutani Kumin Tsuyuri Sanae Dekomori Makoto Isshiki Kazari Kannagi Kuzuha Togashi Yumeha Togashi Touka Takanashi ZAQ
BeatmapID:353859
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[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:2

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Pagno

175 posts

Joined September 2012

Pagno 2014-01-18T10:19:56+00:00

hello! from your queue~

~ Mod ~

[Cloud's Insane]
00:07:551 (1,2,3,4,5) - It's quite hard to tell the timing difference of these notes, pheraps make it like this:

00:11:503 (5) - hmmm, CTRL+G or do something that makes you understand that it's a slider ending on the blue tick, such as putting its end on the next slider's head

00:24:976 (1,2,3,4) - The idea itself is good, if I were you however I'd put more spacing

00:37:641 (7) - I'd stack it on the next slider's head like

[Lust's Hard]
00:06:114 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ehhhh this is a Hard, personally I wouldn't put any stream at all, instead I'd put reverse sliders ;c

00:14:198 (3) - In my opinion it would give a better effect if you stacked this on 00:13:839 (2)

01:02:521 (3) - *hitclap*

01:04:318 (2,3,4,5) - Decrease spacing of a bit?

[Cloud's Normal]
00:07:012 (2,3,4) - This pattern here, maybe change it like this so that it's easier to get the timing

Nothing much to say about this difficulty - the only thing, maybe try doing less complicated patterns in your next map! remember that it's beginners who play those diffs!

[Mochi's Easy]
00:13:300 (1,1) - Placing a note immediatly after a spinner is quite disorienting for a beginner - consider removing the spinner and convert it into a single slider

01:05:036 (1,1) - Same as before

In general, it's a good mapset! Just, try making easier easy difficulties next time

Ghost Reaver

Ghost Reaver 2014-01-18T11:38:50+00:00

hello m4m here

General:
clear

Cloud's Insane:
pretty good mapped insane, only one suggestion please consider to lower SV on this sliders, they are really frustrating to play and just spoils all the good impression from this diiff
00:11:503 (5) -
00:14:377 (4) -
00:25:874 (6) -
00:37:371 (6) -
01:11:863 (1) -

Lust's Hard:
00:12:401 (2,3,1) - sorry but this overlap pattern not looking any good, maybe alter to http://puu.sh/6p4D1.jpg
00:14:377 (4) - sounds too loud moreover you have 00:14:557 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - with quiet hitsounds, that's sounds strange
00:17:252 (4,5,1) - space this? http://puu.sh/6p4JE.jpg
00:24:078 (2,1) - remove this overlap? it looks awkward now
00:56:054 (4,1) - maybe http://puu.sh/6p4Qo.jpg
01:01:084 (2,3) - and 3 flows bad after 2, move it left a bit

Cloud's Normal:
setting really low for 167 bpm normal, try 4-6-5 plays much better
00:25:695 (2) - clap here? feels lonely now without any hitsoud
00:42:042 (3) - curve a bit more this one http://puu.sh/6p52M.jpg
'01:20:845 (1,1) - eh, fill empty space with slider or something http://puu.sh/6p56Q.jpg

Mochi's Easy:
great easy, 5 spinners is too much tho. And hp setting is rather low.

Good Luck (:

Little

2,509 posts

Joined November 2012

Little 2014-01-18T17:21:47+00:00

Pagno's mod

Pagno wrote:
hello! from your queue~

[box=~ Mod ~][Cloud's Insane]
00:07:551 (1,2,3,4,5) - It's quite hard to tell the timing difference of these notes, pheraps make it like this: No, I think it's reasonable readable since the AR is quite high. I've had other players test this, and they haven't had any trouble reading it.

00:11:503 (5) - hmmm, CTRL+G or do something that makes you understand that it's a slider ending on the blue tick, such as putting its end on the next slider's head I think the SV is enough to tell the player this.

00:24:976 (1,2,3,4) - The idea itself is good, if I were you however I'd put more spacing Too hard imo

00:37:641 (7) - I'd stack it on the next slider's head like I think it looks nicer the way it is now, and makes sense because the time spacing is equal.

In general, it's a good mapset! Just, try making easier easy difficulties next time

@Ghost Reaver, all I can say is that my high SV sliders are all placed with purpose, and I think they're quite fun to play.
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_koinuri

451 posts

Joined June 2012

_koinuri 2014-01-18T22:37:30+00:00

Hello for M4M; I hope this mod is useful, still have lots to learn >.<

[General]
Rikka <3
The difficulty setting jump from Normal and Hard seems extreme (HP2->6, AR4->AR8, OD2->OD7). I think you should lower the gap a little bit

[Mochi's Easy]
Wow, very nice Easy.
00:40:605 (1) - Stack with the end of 00:37:731 (1) - ?
01:15:455 (4) - I think making this more parellel to the end of 01:14:377 (3) - looks nicer.

[Cloud's Normal]
Having distance snap of 1.0 makes symmetry made at the end with sliders and circles look better, but it's probably too late for that
00:19:048 (4) - Moving it to (162,89) makes it perfectly symmetrical to 00:17:431 (1) - , assuming that was what you intended.
00:26:054 (3) - Moving this note on timeline to white tick nearby (either way, I personally would go for 00:25:874) sounds better. Right now, it's ignoring the beginning of the vocal and feels awkward.
01:06:833 (2,3,4) - Try ctrl+H 01:05:036 (4) - and move around the object so that all the object fits inside this curve. It gives more symmetrical feel

Like this

[Lust's Hard]
The 2x distance snap used at some places seems too difficult for Hard, like 01:04:318 (2,3,4,5) - and 01:10:246 (5,6) -
00:15:815 (7,8,1) - I don't think this is readable to Hard players. The sudden 2x distance snap and 00:16:354 (1) - being placed at the same place where 00:15:815 (7) - was with different timing is confusing
00:19:946 (3,4) - (272,302) for 3, (315,229) for 4. Makes better curve, kind of continuing the 00:19:407 (2) -
00:30:545 (1) - (157,141). I'm not sure if it's on purpose, but it's not perfectly straight from the 2 notes before.
00:32:252 (2) - Make this shorter and move it to the white tick, and add a note at the blue tick it was on. This makes the beat consistent with other following circle-slider in the combo and fits the song better
00:38:270 (2,3,4,5,6) - Arrange this in better hexagon shape? (381,68) for 4, (405,144) for 5, (350,202) for 6
00:53:360 (2,3,1) - Overlap doesn't look that great in my opinion.

[Cloud's Insane]
00:02:521 (4,5) - (432,237) for 4, (334,157) for 5? This seem cleaner imo
00:21:204 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - This sudden non-vocal rhythm feels awkward to me since the other notes around is following the vocal. Having notes in the empty place feels more natural
00:27:132 (4) - Somewhere around (203,300). I think moving this so that it forms isosceles triangle with 00:26:773 (2,3) - looks nicer than stacking under 00:25:516 (4) - . 00:27:312 (5) - looks better being in the center of a triangle too
00:32:342 (2,3,4) -Same as 00:21:204 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) -

Nice map, good luck on this map!

izzydemon

1,382 posts

Joined April 2013

izzydemon 2014-01-18T23:34:04+00:00

get modded

Easy

00:33:419 (1) - ugly
00:40:605 (1) - move the red node to x264 y52 and the end node to x176 y88
01:02:162 (3) - ugly pls

i think you overused spinners in this, but w/e seems fine

Normal

good

Hard

it's your map man why is it named Lust's Hard

00:00:904 (2,3) - i hate this pattern so i can't avoid bitching about it but it's just my opinion
00:06:114 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you sure you want to do this on a hard?
00:26:234 (1,2,3) - would look better if they didn't all start in the same place, imo
00:45:635 (3,4) - also something i can't avoid bitching about fdshkfasdkfuasdg please change this
00:52:102 (1) - luv u 2 bby s2
01:13:659 (1) - ugly

good

Insane

00:33:779 (2) - kinda ugly

aaAAAHHH DAMN LOVE THIS DIFF

welp that's it

Lust

osu! Alumni

2,667 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

Lust 2014-01-18T23:55:57+00:00

thanks for the mods! updated

MikuEviL

19 posts

Joined October 2012

MikuEviL 2014-01-19T00:18:37+00:00

My Diff?????

izzydemon

1,382 posts

Joined April 2013

izzydemon 2014-01-19T00:23:52+00:00

Lust wrote:
sorry but not taking anymore gds

Little

2,509 posts

Joined November 2012

Little 2014-01-19T00:33:48+00:00

Loli -Koinuri's mod

Loli -[Koinuri] wrote:
Hello for M4M; I hope this mod is useful, still have lots to learn >.<

[Cloud's Insane]
00:02:521 (4,5) - (432,237) for 4, (334,157) for 5? This seem cleaner imo How is that cleaner? I like my current placement. It's ideal for me in terms of flow and appearance.
00:21:204 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - This sudden non-vocal rhythm feels awkward to me since the other notes around is following the vocal. Having notes in the empty place feels more natural It's not sudden.. I wasn't follow vocal to begin with.
00:27:132 (4) - Somewhere around (203,300). I think moving this so that it forms isosceles triangle with 00:26:773 (2,3) - looks nicer than stacking under 00:25:516 (4) - . 00:27:312 (5) - looks better being in the center of a triangle too Stack is nicer imo. I don't care much for isoceles or equilateral triangles or placing circles on medians or centre points and that kinda stuff. Stacks look cleaner to me.
00:32:342 (2,3,4) -Same as 00:21:204 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - It makes more sense for you to complain about 00:30:186 (4) - suddenly following vocals.. because i've been following drums and bass all this time.. so I don't get what the problem is. I follow vocals on the short interjections for emphasis, and for the rest, I follow instruments.

Nice map, good luck on this map!

@Niokin: Do you have any suggestion for a shape that would be less ugly?
Thanks for mod, no change to my diff.

Last edited by Little 2014-01-19T00:54:32+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

izzydemon

1,382 posts

Joined April 2013

izzydemon 2014-01-19T00:42:42+00:00

CloudSplash16 wrote:
@Niokin: Do you have any suggestion for a shape that would be less ugly?

all of the "ugly" comments i wrote were just my opinion, if i were to tell you how to change the pattern there it wouldn't be your map anymore, trust me

edit: 420 posts

Jemmmmy

526 posts

Joined September 2012

Jemmmmy 2014-01-19T01:09:53+00:00

INSANE

00:31:982 (1,2) - put closer?
00:37:371 (6) - NC
01:02:162 (1,2) - use same shape
01:18:330 (2) - nc
01:25:515 (2,3) - too far

hard

00:09:707 (3) -

00:38:270 (2,3,4,5,6) -

01:23:000 (4,5,6,7) - rhythm

01:17:970 (4) - rhythm

Normal

00:07:012 (2,3) - too close
00:31:264 (4) - move to [252.48]
00:37:371 (4,1) -

Easy

00:37:731 (1) - use simple shape

00:46:354 (1) - ^
01:09:348 (1) - ^

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,844 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-01-19T01:49:48+00:00

[General]

[Easy]

00:02:162 (4) - curve might fit better here like 00:05:036 (4)

00:03:240 (1) - this should be curved like 00:00:366 (1)

00:11:863 (1) - shape this one so that it looks better with the overlap with 00:10:425 (3) suggestion: http://gyazo.com/ade730569217f561298d13cb7b0a3be9
idk that just looks better imo

00:27:312 (2) - adjust this so that it forms a straight line with the end of 00:26:234 (1) and the start of 00:27:491 (3)
01:01:803 (2) - maybe

00:39:168 (3) - move this so it forms a better triangle: http://gyazo.com/5e3eee8ce22334fca4b1ec49e58394e6
00:57:132 (3) - same here
01:14:377 (3) - possibly?

love those oddly shaped sliders <3

KIAI time might be a little long imo

[Normal]

00:06:114 (1,2) - these could be rounder. try putting a beat in the middle to help
00:06:114 (1,2) - same here maybe

00:34:497 (4) - this seems a bit out of place. or maybe its just me

00:46:354 (1) - this doesn't really match the soundtrack as there isn't really anything here 00:42:892 in the song

[Hard]

00:12:940 (3) - this overlap looks really awkward.

00:14:198 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream looks very messy to me. try giving it a better pattern

00:23:180 (4) - make this beat kind of like 00:22:461 (2) http://gyazo.com/53c4339de50dced388cb8ceb76a4197f

00:49:228 (1,2) - think would look better if they're curved
00:54:078 (2) - same

01:10:246 (5,6) - i think there are ways to make this look nice even with distance snap

[Insane]

Honestly, i couldn't find much here
use more distance snap maybe? only suggestion

01:00:186 (4,5,6) - make this more triangular?

01:21:563 (1,2,3,4) - use more distance snap maybe

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2014-01-19T03:26:15+00:00

Easy

00:01:982 (3) - Consider removing this or placing it on top of the slider
00:04:857 (3) - Same as above

00:13:300 (1) - Consider removing the spinner, too short

00:22:282 (2,3) - Consider changing from original to new:

Original

New

00:24:437 (2) - Consider changing to circle

01:05:036 (1) - Spinner also quite short, consider removing

Overall quite challenging for an Easy diff, in my opinion

Normal

00:08:090 (3) - Consider removing, could be a bit confusing
00:17:611 (1) - Consider moving this slider forward one tick and shortening it by one tick (In 1/2 divisor)

00:24:976 (1,2,3) - From original to new:

Original

New

00:50:665 (3) - Consider moving forward one tick

Hard

00:03:958 (3) - Consider removing
00:01:982 (1,2,3) or 00:05:036 (1,2,3) - Consider making one set a reverse arrow slider
00:06:114 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Consider making this a reverse slider for the same duration and same speed
00:15:276 (4) - Consider moving to the left so that it doesn't overlap 00:14:916 (2)
00:20:395 (6) - Consider removing
00:48:689 (4) - Consider positioning this slider near the end of 00:48:330 (3)

Very difficult Hard map, personally I would go and shave off some difficulty, but it's up to you whether or not you deem it suitable

Insane

01:11:863 (1) - I would forego the massive slider vel. increase, maybe lower the velocity a little bit if you want to keep it. This is mainly a preference

These are very fun & well designed maps

Little

2,509 posts

Joined November 2012

Little 2014-01-19T03:27:01+00:00

Jemmmmy

Jemmmmy wrote:
[box=INSANE]00:31:982 (1,2) - put closer? Fixed
00:37:371 (6) - NC no
01:02:162 (1,2) - use same shape why?
01:18:330 (2) - nc changed combo pattern
01:25:515 (2,3) - too far I think it's fine

Kibbleru

Kibbleru wrote:
[Insane]

Honestly, i couldn't find much here
use more distance snap maybe? only suggestion

01:00:186 (4,5,6) - make this more triangular? It is a triangle... how can I make a triangle more triangular? >.<

01:21:563 (1,2,3,4) - use more distance snap maybe no.

@Smug-, I prefer to keep that sv change as is
Thanks
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Cloud's Insane

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So many mods so fast >< Lust is speedranker

MikuEviL

19 posts

Joined October 2012

MikuEviL 2014-01-19T03:53:41+00:00

Niokin wrote:
Lust wrote:
sorry but not taking anymore gds

What am I doing wrong???????

Little

2,509 posts

Joined November 2012

Little 2014-01-19T04:06:31+00:00

IRC with Lust

2014-01-18 22:36 CloudSplash16: I might have some suggestions for your hard diff
2014-01-18 22:36 Lust: anything to help \o/
2014-01-18 22:37 CloudSplash16: Just wondering about this 00:06:114 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
2014-01-18 22:37 CloudSplash16: I don't know if any BAT will be willing to rank that in a hard diff
2014-01-18 22:38 CloudSplash16: I'd suggest just using a 1/4 repeat slider
2014-01-18 22:38 Lust: thats the big stack right
2014-01-18 22:38 Lust: x)
2014-01-18 22:38 CloudSplash16: yea
2014-01-18 22:38 Lust: yeah ill probably change that
2014-01-18 22:38 Lust: everybody ive talked to said it was weird
2014-01-18 22:39 Lust: and too much for a hard
2014-01-18 22:39 CloudSplash16: 00:11:863 (1,2) - I suggest changing these to curved sliders. I don't know what it is, just whenever i hear this kind of electric guitar stuff, I just feel like curved sliders are more appropriate
2014-01-18 22:40 Lust: so similar pattern just curve them?
2014-01-18 22:41 CloudSplash16: yeah, same rhythm
2014-01-18 22:42 CloudSplash16: 00:14:377 (4) - I feel like this needs more emphasis
2014-01-18 22:42 CloudSplash16: putting it in the middle of a string of circles just doesn't feel right
2014-01-18 22:43 CloudSplash16: I'd say to either remove 00:14:198 (3,5) - or change (4,5) into a 1/2 slider
2014-01-18 22:44 Lust: yeah
2014-01-18 22:45 CloudSplash16: 00:16:713 (3) - Since you seem to be following vocals for the most part, I'd suggest changing this to a circle and a 1/2 slider
2014-01-18 22:45 CloudSplash16: because
2014-01-18 22:45 CloudSplash16: there's a strong beat on 00:16:892 -
2014-01-18 22:46 CloudSplash16: and it feels weird on the slider repeat
2014-01-18 22:46 Lust: hmm alright
2014-01-18 22:47 CloudSplash16: 00:26:234 (1,2,3) - ehh.. I don't really feel like this kind of rotation pattern fits the music, but keep it if you want
2014-01-18 22:47 CloudSplash16: it's just my opinion
2014-01-18 22:49 CloudSplash16: 00:27:222 (4) - there isn't actually a 1/4 in the music here, and I think you should split 00:27:312 (5) - into two circles to emphasize syncopated beat on the red tick
2014-01-18 22:50 Lust: alright
2014-01-18 22:51 CloudSplash16: 00:30:725 (2) - replace with circle and 1/2 slider for same reason as the other one i said
2014-01-18 22:52 Lust: alright
2014-01-18 22:52 CloudSplash16: 00:32:611 (3,5) - These 1/4s aren't in the music. You can keep them if you like, but this is what they call "overmapping", and I highly suggest you don't use the 1/4s here
2014-01-18 22:53 Lust: ill remove them
2014-01-18 22:53 Lust: the pattern is ugly anyways
2014-01-18 22:53 CloudSplash16: 00:39:437 (2) - this one too
2014-01-18 22:53 CloudSplash16: 00:48:240 (2) - and this
2014-01-18 22:54 CloudSplash16: 00:51:473 (2) - I suggest removing this and changing 00:51:563 (3) - into two circles
2014-01-18 22:55 Lust: alright
2014-01-18 22:56 CloudSplash16: 01:09:617 (2) - remove this
2014-01-18 22:57 Lust: alright
2014-01-18 22:57 CloudSplash16: That's about it i guess
2014-01-18 22:58 CloudSplash16: oh
2014-01-18 22:58 CloudSplash16: OD7 is way too high imo
2014-01-18 22:58 Lust: OD6 then?
2014-01-18 22:58 CloudSplash16: OD6 is okay, but I'd say OD5
2014-01-18 22:59 Lust: oh damn
2014-01-18 22:59 Lust: thats all the way down there LOL
2014-01-18 22:59 Lust: actually
2014-01-18 22:59 Lust: if i drop it then your diff will come after mine
2014-01-18 22:59 Lust: which will be better LOL
2014-01-18 22:59 CloudSplash16: lol most hards I see are actually 4,5,7,5
2014-01-18 23:00 CloudSplash16: and some 4,6,8,6
2014-01-18 23:00 CloudSplash16: OD7 is quite uncommon on hards xD
2014-01-18 23:00 Lust: i like to have difficult hards if i have a fastish song

spaghetti2222

120 posts

Joined August 2011

spaghetti2222 2014-01-19T10:47:21+00:00

Hi

(sorry for my bad english >.< if you don't understand something just PM me)

Easy
00:52:102 (1,1) - A hit circle just after the spinner in Easy mod is not recommended.
01:09:348 (1) - Make this slider look like 01:06:473 (1) - or 01:02:162 (3) -

Normal is ok i think

Hard
00:14:737 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make some 1-2, 3-4 and 5-6... 3 little sliders. 7 and 8 are ok. Like here 00:26:234 (1,2,3,4,5) -
00:52:102 (1) - Add the red colour to the combo and make it appear only when this slider is shown.

Insane
00:06:114 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The spacing between these hit circles is weird :/
01:22:102 (4,1) - Add something here.

That's all i think... Your map is really good and i couldn't find much problems.

Have a nice day

Zetera

Medal Hunter

1,019 posts

Joined November 2010

Zetera 2014-01-19T11:53:24+00:00

Hoping for a M4M, I'll post my map in your Queue.

Easy:

00:00:366 (1,2,3,4) - For an Easy diff, this seems to be very hard. Same counts for the next few objects. My suggestion: http://puu.sh/6qhiZ.jpg
Doesn't need to be like this, but at least try to make this easier.
00:13:300 (1,1) - In evry other Difficulty, I would accept this, but not in Easy. I think the Circle is too hard to be aimed by beginners after that very short
spinner. You might want to delete and substitute the spinner by a long slider or something.
00:52:102 (1,1) - Same problem here. You might want to extand the spinner up to the circle's time and delete the circle.
01:05:036 (1,1) - I know, I am repeating myself. I am still considering this case as being okay and and option to change, but it still got my attention.

Normal:

00:00:366 (1,2) - I am still not a friend of this. :c
00:02:880 (1) - I would change this to a circle and start a slider at the current Slider's end. After that, Number 3 also has to be shifted a little. If you can't
follow, I will make a timeline screenshot.
01:05:036 (1,1) - Very, Very confusing. I don't know, it feels weird to read and to play in terms of rhythm.

Hard:

00:17:252 (4,5,1) - Maybe expanding this Triple over the whole space from one Slider to another would look better. This is what I mean:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1262978 . This point is findable pretty often. Decide whether to change it or to let it stay as it is.
00:31:982 (1,2) - I don't understand why slider 2 is extended here. It might sound better to simply put another slider similar in rhythm to 1 instead of 2
here. Firstly it does not fit, secondly, this "pattern" looks very confusing in connection with this: 00:33:419 (1,2) .
00:54:078 (2) - (optional) Make the slider's end silent.
01:22:461 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Really nice Idea!

All in all, there are some extended Sliders which don't really fit to the map. You might want to change them to 2 seperate 1/2s in the Rhythm.

Insane:

00:14:377 (4) - This one kinda comes uncalled.and I think a slow slider would fit better. My suggestion: Start it at the red line before the current position of
the slider (00:14:198). At this line, you will put your inherited section and decrease the SV instead of increasing it. Then you will make the
slider straight and pointing to the next object.
00:15:276 (2,3,4,5) - Maybe a consequently similar Distance is optically better.
00:37:371 (6) - This one is again uncalled. Put a New combo here.

Usually, I dislike jumpy Diffs, but this one really got me, nice work!
Only one more thing to point out, maybe it's a lot easier to get the grip with these high-velocity-sliders by giving them one certain combo colour such as red.

Good luck for a rank, my Map will be in your Queue, I will apprectiate a mod. c:

Little

2,509 posts

Joined November 2012

Little 2014-01-19T14:02:25+00:00

spaghetti2222's mod

spaghetti2222 wrote:
Hi (sorry for my bad english >.< if you don't understand something just PM me)

Insane
00:06:114 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The spacing between these hit circles is weird :/ What's weird about it? It's just increasing spacing
01:22:102 (4,1) - Add something here. No. There's no drum or instrument here

That's all i think... Your map is really good and i couldn't find much problems.

Have a nice day

Sala-'s mod

Sala- wrote:
Hoping for a M4M, I'll post my map in your Queue.

Insane:

00:14:377 (4) - This one kinda comes uncalled.and I think a slow slider would fit better. My suggestion: Start it at the red line before the current position of
the slider (00:14:198). At this line, you will put your inherited section and decrease the SV instead of increasing it. Then you will make the
slider straight and pointing to the next object. Doesn't make sense to me. It feels weird to use low SV slider here, as it doesn't really reflect the sound in the music imo.
00:15:276 (2,3,4,5) - Maybe a consequently similar Distance is optically better. Maybe but I'll leave it for now.. I think it looks fine as it is.
00:37:371 (6) - This one is again uncalled. Put a New combo here. It should already be readable.. by noticing that there's no slidertick, the player should be able to tell it's 1/2 or faster. Putting a new combo would mess with the hp scaling

Usually, I dislike jumpy Diffs, but this one really got me, nice work!
Only one more thing to point out, maybe it's a lot easier to get the grip with these high-velocity-sliders by giving them one certain combo colour such as red.

Good luck for a rank, my Map will be in your Queue, I will apprectiate a mod. c:

Thanks
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Lustwhydidyounotupdatemydifflasttime

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izzydemon

1,382 posts

Joined April 2013

izzydemon 2014-01-19T15:20:08+00:00

MikuEviL wrote:
What am I doing wrong???????

Sorry, but Lust is not going to add any more diffs.

desudesud

118 posts

Joined December 2013

desudesud 2014-01-19T23:59:23+00:00

Mod for an M4M from Lust!

[General]
Nothing, really. The most I can say is awesome video!

[Mochi's Easy]

SPOILER

00:17:611 (1) - Could change into 2 sliders with half the length of the current one each, but it's not really necessary to do that.

01:16:533 (1) - Would shorten spinner by 2 ticks

[Cloud's Normal]

SPOILER

01:17:611 (4) - Move entire slider one tick backwards

[Lust's Hard]

SPOILER

00:03:958 (3) - Unnecessary circle

01:01:084 (2) - Moving from the end of this slider to the 3rd one is a bit surprising for the player. I would either overlap it, or keep it if you want to keep the difficulty higher.

01:15:635 (2,3,4) - Would remove 2 and 3 and make 4 the entire length of the current 2, 3, and 4 in the combo.

01:17:521 (2) - Unnecessary circle

I can't map Insane maps. Sorry, Cloud! ;_;

These maps only have a few errors. I say you guys deserve a star!

Lust gained 1 star!
Your party (Mochi and Cloud) gained Experience from the Mapping EXP Share!
Lust leveled up to Level 48!
Lust learned Hydro Pump!

TAIN

168 posts

Joined January 2012

TAIN 2014-01-20T05:49:04+00:00

Hi ~

I am a beginner modding.

You can ignore the suggestions.

Mochi's Easy

00:02:880 - Additional recommendations Circle.

00:05:755 - ^

Cloud's Normal

00:24:976 (1,2,3) - This arrangement, what about this rhythm?

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