Feverie wrote:

[Novice]

00:40:243 (1) - and 00:41:541 (3) - Slight overlap
01:13:973 (1,2,3) - Do you think you can make this symmetrical?

Can't find much else wrong

Good Luck.

grumd wrote:

Normal

01:20:784 (3) - blanket the previous slider start http://puu.sh/6ni6Y.jpg maybe you'll need to fix spacing after this, don't forget about it

Hard

00:01:325 (1,2,3) - because of this close 0.8x spacing this is quite confusing for the first notes in the map. better use this rhythm to make player sure about the rhythm http://puu.sh/6niih.jpg
00:04:406 (2,3) - also your spacing is sometimes not the best one. 0.86x here
00:05:216 (4,5) - 0.7x here
00:13:973 (5) - 0.76x here
01:42:514 (1) - a bit too cluttered, move it to the left http://puu.sh/6niwy.jpg don't forget to fix spacing after this

Extra

00:37:000 (3) - make it same shape as previous two http://puu.sh/6niEx.jpg like that
00:55:973 (1,2,3) - this rhythm sucks. mostly because there is no sound at suck ticks as this 00:56:054 -
if you want to have doubles, make them with long sliders which are less confusing: http://puu.sh/6niSq.jpg (1) is at 00:55:973 -
same change for this 00:57:270 (1,2,3,4) -
00:57:757 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - this stream is mostly okay because you have reasons to put it there. but i'd better use some nice pattern with that 1/2 longer sliders and same rhythm as before


Edit:

easy diff so bad, nuking map for it

grumd wrote:

bubbled

Andrea wrote:

IRC Modded.

SPOILER

22:27 Andrea: irc mod is fine for you?
22:28 Asphyxia: yeah
22:28 Asphyxia:
22:28 Andrea: make 2nd kiai time of Kyshiro the same
22:28 Andrea: of the others
22:28 Andrea: so everything is consistent
22:28 Andrea: http://puu.sh/6oqy8.png
22:28 Andrea: look
22:28 Andrea: only 2nd kiai of Kyshiro's is different
22:28 Asphyxia: oh
22:28 Asphyxia: ok
22:28 Asphyxia: thanks
22:29 Andrea: HP +1 on Beginner?
22:29 Andrea: so it's consistent (again) lol
22:30 Andrea: 01:33:432 (2) - unsnapped, gg
22:30 Andrea: 01:42:513 (1) - ^
22:30 Andrea: 00:09:108 (1) - finish on spinner end
22:31 Andrea: 01:47:703 (1) - whistle maybe on this spinner end
22:32 Andrea: when you're done I'll go to Normal
22:32 Asphyxia: wtf how can I get that thingy to snapped again
22:32 Asphyxia: wtf
22:32 Asphyxia: THEY WONT LISTEN TO ME!!
22:33 Asphyxia: well ok
22:33 Asphyxia: resnapped all notes
22:33 Asphyxia: Well, I think thr whistle doesn't fit that well, and the spinners end is silenced anyway so
22:33 Asphyxia: >:
22:34 Andrea: okay u.u
22:35 Andrea: oh, sorry
22:35 Andrea: I found something else on Beginner
22:35 Andrea: 00:52:892 (3) - wrong spacing on this circle
22:35 Andrea: it should be 1,20x
22:35 Andrea: like the rest
22:35 Asphyxia: fixed
22:35 Andrea: great desu
22:35 Andrea: Normal nao
22:35 Asphyxia: oekay :---)
22:36 Andrea: 00:30:027 (1) - I'm not sure but this spinner feels too short imo for a Normal
22:36 Andrea: 00:29:865 (1) - I'd remove this and make it start here
22:37 Asphyxia: but end it the same time?
22:37 Andrea: yup, at least it's a bit longer
22:37 Asphyxia: Okay, done
22:37 Asphyxia: yeah I was a bit worried myself that it was a bit too short
22:37 Andrea: 01:24:352 (1,1) - try to guess?
22:37 Andrea: do the same here!
22:38 Asphyxia: done
22:38 Asphyxia: <3
22:38 Andrea: 01:45:433 (1) - new combo here isn't necessary imo
22:38 Andrea: remove maybe?
22:38 Asphyxia: Hmm
22:38 Asphyxia: sure
22:40 Andrea: okay, Hard o3o
22:40 Asphyxia: Sure thing!
22:41 Andrea: 00:01:487 (2) - finish on slider end
22:41 Andrea: 00:04:406 (2) - finish
22:41 Asphyxia: fix'd
22:41 Andrea: how did you miss these ;w;
22:41 Asphyxia: w0w
22:41 Asphyxia: >:)
22:41 Andrea: 00:05:216 (4) - finish on red tick repeat
22:41 Andrea: the second one
22:41 Asphyxia: doneee
22:42 Andrea: 00:08:460 (4) - finish on start xD
22:42 Andrea: I'm such a nazi
22:42 Asphyxia: lol fixed that too xD
22:42 Andrea: 00:09:757 (3) - another finish that sounds nice o3o
22:43 Asphyxia: sure
22:43 Asphyxia: added
22:43 Andrea: 01:46:730 (1) - I'd remove the clap on this slider start...
22:43 Andrea: feels too powerful with the finish together
22:44 Asphyxia: you're right
22:44 Asphyxia: removed
22:44 Andrea: btw why not renaming Irre's diff -> Irre's Easy ?
22:44 Asphyxia: I can lol
22:44 Asphyxia: just liked the beginner
22:45 Andrea: well, just seeing Beginner -> Normal -> Hard is weird
22:45 Andrea: xD
22:45 *Asphyxia is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/355834 P*Light - TRIGGER*HAPPY [Irre's Easy]]
22:45 Asphyxia: kk done now
22:45 Asphyxia: well I guess so
22:45 Asphyxia: fix'd
22:46 Andrea: on Extra
22:46 Andrea: 00:42:514 (7) - this confused me a lot, I thought it was together with previous pattern
22:46 Andrea: I'd move it a bit more from (6)
22:47 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/6orSj.jpg
22:47 Asphyxia: ?
22:47 Asphyxia: o3o
22:47 Andrea: yeah, much better!
22:47 Asphyxia: Okay, fixed
22:48 Andrea: 00:54:514 (1) - finish on start =3=
22:48 Asphyxia: k done
22:49 Andrea: 01:46:730 (1) - same as hard
22:49 Andrea: clap too stronk
22:50 Asphyxia: okay, removed >:D
22:50 Andrea: OD6 on Insane? wtf
22:50 Andrea: make it 7 please
22:50 Asphyxia: done
22:51 Andrea: 00:54:514 (1) - finish on start <.<
22:51 Asphyxia: Insane?
22:51 Asphyxia: done
22:51 Andrea: yup
22:51 Andrea: 00:58:000 (2,3) - wrong spacing
22:51 Andrea: might be confusing
22:51 Andrea: make them closer
22:52 Asphyxia: Uhh, this was actually suggested by grumd in his mod
22:52 Asphyxia: 00:58:000 (2,3) - this may be misread as 1/4 because of previous rhythm 00:56:946 (3) -
22:52 Andrea: 00:55:973 (1,2) -
22:52 Andrea: 00:58:000 (2,3) -
22:52 Asphyxia: from grumd's mod
22:52 Andrea: compare them
22:52 Andrea: they're different timeline but same spacing
22:53 Asphyxia: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1258522
22:53 Asphyxia: that's fine?
22:53 Asphyxia: or should I make it closed
22:53 Asphyxia: closer*
22:54 Andrea: they should be distance 1,00x
22:54 Andrea: click (3) and check
22:55 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/6osss.jpg
22:55 Asphyxia: made it like that
22:55 Asphyxia: now it has the 1.0 spacing
22:55 Andrea: awesome
22:56 Andrea: 01:01:000 - break begins here
22:56 Asphyxia: Yeah I did that already actually xD
22:57 Andrea: 01:46:730 (1) - that clap omg
22:57 Asphyxia: LOL
22:57 Asphyxia: xD
22:57 Asphyxia: removed
22:57 Andrea: well, guess we're done x_x
22:57 Asphyxia: LOL thank you so much
22:57 Asphyxia: updating

Ranked~

Spy wrote:

Genre: Novelty (Japanese)
Should be this↓
Genre: Video Game (Instrumental)

Spy wrote:

Genre: Novelty (Japanese)
Should be this↓
Genre: Video Game (Instrumental)

Reisen Udongein wrote:

More and More P*light maps yay congratz!

btw can't figure out any relation between this song and BG D: