Ray - lull ~Soshite Bokura wa~ (TV Size) · forum

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Oyatsu 2013-10-08T14:09:57+00:00

Thank you guys!! <3
EDIT: Copy from Natsu, WHo people posted FIRST - SECOND will mod this map ><

yurunneram

682 posts

Joined January 2012

yurunneram 2013-10-20T11:41:50+00:00

Ooh nagi no asukara!!! :3

Yurun will mod in time to come <3 don't come to my queue thx

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

kajiyatta 2013-11-19T01:06:27+00:00

M4M
[General]
Inconsistent "Widescrren Support", uncheck better.
Combo color 1 and 2 is similar, so that we can be hard to know these partition.I suppose you can set another color better.
Set Audio-Lead-In, current is suddnly started. Maybe 2000 better.
Back ground image is too large, you can convert it to lower size better.
[Easy]
Placement
00:24:095(3) The flow is a bit difficult for newbie, you can put this note more natural. e.g.)

SPOILER

00:27:253(3) Again, this flow isn't good for newbie. Not to place downward, but smoothly. e.g.)

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:59:058 Useless green line since there is no notes in this section.
00:21:389 Missing a note is not good for consistence.
Hit Sound
00:14:622(1) Same as Hard.
00:56:125(1) Same as hard.
01:10:561(1) Delete finish at head, it sounds weird.
[Normal]
Placement
00:45:298(2,3,4) You can emphasize up-down flow here, and it looks fine for newbie to play.

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:56:125(3,4,1) Sounds odd for me since you don't follow music properly. So, I recommend this rhythm.

SPOILER

Hit Sound
00:14:622(1) Add soft finish at head not custom one.
[Hard]
Placement
00:08:757(4,1) For hard, the flow is looks anti-jumping, so ti looks a bit difficult. Try to put simply better.e.g.)

SPOILER

00:17:779(3,1)^
00:51:480(4,1)^
00:13:043(1,2,3) Move like this? It looks more natural flow I suppose.

SPOILER

00:22:742(3,4) Currnet is a bit odd for me, you can put these notes rotationally.

SPOILER

00:42:140(1) Delete NC better for pattern, I don't think it is effective.
01:00:637(3,4,1) It's not bad, but I suppose it is hard to hit notes. So to be more playable flow, just suggestion here.

SPOILER

01:09:434(2) Move up a bit on the tail, and it looks parallelly.
Rhythm
00:00:186-00:07:404 If you aim simply rhythm in this calm part, maybe set ×0.75 velocity looks more nice. Or add some notes better.
00:29:058(1,2) Unify these notes to 1/1/ slider better.
00:48:231(3,4) To follow the vocal correctly, I recommend this rhythm.

SPOILER

Hit Sound
00:14:622(1) Add soft-finish at head, not custom one.
00:50:486(3) Add clap.
01:11:238(2)^
00:56:125(1) Add clap at end and delete finish.
[Insane]
Placement
00:11:103(1) The spacing from (6) is narrow I suppose, here is first combo so I expect you can put more spacing.
00:19:584(5) The flow looks a bit odd for me, you can put here curved slider for consistence (3). e.g.)

SPOILER

00:29:960(4) Would be more spacing better for playing.
01:02:441(3) nazi, move at x40:y104, and the spacing from (3) to (5) looks fine.
01:06:276(3) Bent this slider a little, and the flow for (4) looks better.

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:12:592(1) Is this necessary to be slow down? I suppose it looks a bit odd since there is no reason to do. At least raise ×0.75 better, it is so confused.
00:56:802(1)^
00:14:283 I can hear sound clearly so add a note for consistence, you can put stream here, the blank looks odd.
Hit Sound
00:13:945(3) Add finish.
00:41:464(1) Add whistle at end.
00:42:140(4) Add whistle.
01:11:351(4,5) Delete drum sound (4) and add drum at (5)

Good Luck!

Nichiyouki

1,579 posts

Joined August 2011

Nichiyouki 2013-11-19T12:20:48+00:00

Fixed mostly in my diff

Thank you kajiyatta for your mod

My diff

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: ray.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 58945
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:lull ~Soshite Bokura wa~ (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:lull～そして僕らは～ (TV Size)
Artist:Ray
ArtistUnicode:Ray
Creator:Oyatsu
Version:Nich's Insane
Source:Nagi no Asukara
Tags:凪のあすから romance drama comedy fantasy opening op xinely nichiyouki sky cloud water blue friend from calm tomorrow p.a.works hikari sakishima manaka mukaido chisaki hiradaira kaname isaki tsumugu kihara
BeatmapID:316404
BeatmapSetID:121189

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

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Video,0,"video.flv"
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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@Oyatsu : Please add "nich95" in the tags, too. Because that is my old username >.<

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-11-19T14:16:41+00:00

fixed all from kajiyatta's mod ~
thanks \:D/

=w=

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Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Oyatsu 2013-11-19T14:23:11+00:00

kajiyatta

M4M

I will mod your map soon.

[General]
Inconsistent "Widescrren Support", uncheck better.

ok
Combo color 1 and 2 is similar, so that we can be hard to know these partition.I suppose you can set another color better.

I think it is fine, need more advise of anothers
Set Audio-Lead-In, current is suddnly started. Maybe 2000 better.

added
Back ground image is too large, you can convert it to lower size better.

it is 16:4/1366x768. rankble. No problem this

[Easy]
Placement
00:24:095(3) The flow is a bit difficult for newbie, you can put this note more natural. e.g.)

ok

SPOILER

00:27:253(3) Again, this flow isn't good for newbie. Not to place downward, but smoothly. e.g.)

ok

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:59:058 Useless green line since there is no notes in this section.

deleted
00:21:389 Missing a note is not good for consistence.

I will consider
Hit Sound
00:14:622(1) Same as Hard.

ok
00:56:125(1) Same as hard.

ok
01:10:561(1) Delete finish at head, it sounds weird.

I want to keep
[Hard]
Placement
00:08:757(4,1) For hard, the flow is looks anti-jumping, so ti looks a bit difficult. Try to put simply better.e.g.)

I want 00:08:306 (3,4) - are ooposite together. So I think it is fine

SPOILER

00:17:779(3,1)^

^
00:51:480(4,1)^

^
00:13:043(1,2,3) Move like this? It looks more natural flow I suppose.

ok fixed

SPOILER

00:22:742(3,4) Currnet is a bit odd for me, you can put these notes rotationally.

ok

SPOILER

00:42:140(1) Delete NC better for pattern, I don't think it is effective.

oh lol, a mistake sorry. Thank you, moved NC to 00:42:817 (1) -
01:00:637(3,4,1) It's not bad, but I suppose it is hard to hit notes. So to be more playable flow, just suggestion here.

Naisu!!! Fixed!!

SPOILER

01:09:434(2) Move up a bit on the tail, and it looks parallelly.

ok
Rhythm
00:00:186-00:07:404 If you aim simply rhythm in this calm part, maybe set ×0.75 velocity looks more nice. Or add some notes better.

I didn't see anyproblem here
00:29:058(1,2) Unify these notes to 1/1/ slider better.

I will consider with another modders
00:48:231(3,4) To follow the vocal correctly, I recommend this rhythm.

ok. thank you

SPOILER

Hit Sound
00:14:622(1) Add soft-finish at head, not custom one.

??
00:50:486(3) Add clap.

ok
01:11:238(2)^

nope sorry
00:56:125(1) Add clap at end and delete finish.

ok
Good luck!!~

Thank you for modding, kaji!!
@Nich: Added and updated ur diff.

@Xinely: Updated ur diff, too

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

kajiyatta 2013-11-19T15:09:12+00:00

Oyatsu wrote:
Back ground image is too large, you can convert it to lower size better. it is 16:4/1366x768. rankble. No problem this

No, it's not aspect rate I said. The problem is size, current is over 1MB so it's too large.
Sorry for my laziness English

Try to replace this file.

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Oyatsu 2013-11-20T05:33:38+00:00

kajiyatta wrote:
No, it's not aspect rate I said. The problem is size, current is over 1MB so it's too large.
Sorry for my laziness English
Try to replace this file.

Ah lol. Understood. Thank you for BG

yurunneram

682 posts

Joined January 2012

yurunneram 2013-11-25T10:25:12+00:00

AHHHHHHH Late mod late mod late mod GOMENASAI ((_ _))"

Love this anime @@ The OP too that's why I wanted to mod this but totally forgot

Thanks for ranking the PV though. That's how I found out bout NNA

GENERAL

Combo colour 1 and 2 are way too close. Maybe Chiisaki's hair colour would be nice?

EASY

00:21:389 - Add note?

00:30:862 (1) - NC should be on (2) instead (um.. the one after)

00:34:471 (1) - Then I'd remove this NC

00:39:885 (5) - NC here instead of 00:41:689 (1)

00:52:065 (3,4,5,6,1) - Possibly... just possibly you could make a pentagon or incomplete hexagon with these things? ^^

01:05:148 (1) - Remove NC

Good diff ^^

NORMAL

00:08:757 (3,4,5) - Don't think it's good for stacking

00:30:862 (3) - Move down. x168 y348

00:31:764 (4) - Then uh move this to x48 y160 (and ya know, resnap the rest)

01:00:411 (1,2) - Use the same slider and make it symmetrical

HARD

00:06:952 (4) - Stack under 00:06:050 (2) - properly

00:34:246 (1,2,3,4) - Make an incomplete pentagon? OwO

00:42:817 (1) - Why not just stack directly under?

00:45:073 (5) - NC?

00:58:155 (2,3,4,5) - A really funny lookin shape don'chya think? maybe (2,3,4,1) could be a nice square?

01:02:892 (4,5) - Switch places? would be nice with a jump here

Nice :3 Gomen if I'm a bit crazy for shapes =w=")7 shape nerd ahaha~

Not a Modder of insanes

Gomen~

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Oyatsu 2013-12-17T11:46:13+00:00

Sorry for late!!

yurunneram wrote:
GENERAL

Combo colour 1 and 2 are way too close. Maybe Chiisaki's hair colour would be nice? Changed!

EASY

00:21:389 - Add note? I make follow vocal

00:30:862 (1) - NC should be on (2) instead (um.. the one after) Yea! fixed

00:34:471 (1) - Then I'd remove this NC ^

00:39:885 (5) - NC here instead of 00:41:689 (1) Nope

00:52:065 (3,4,5,6,1) - Possibly... just possibly you could make a pentagon or incomplete hexagon with these things? ^^ yes

01:05:148 (1) - Remove NC ok

Hard, sorry because I see it is bad so I did re-diff. Sorry alot!!

Thank you for modding. ^^

Sonnyc

7,761 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2013-12-19T10:04:18+00:00

General:

-- Add Sliderborder.
-- Imo the White combo color could be merged to the school uniform of the BG. Maybe make it to gray?

Easy:

00:01:990 (1) - I doubt if this is a necessary NC.
01:12:140 (1,2) - I would prefer starting NC from (2) for the lyric, but up to you.
01:13:719 (3) - I hear a symbol. Try soft-Finish instead?
01:24:998 (1) - Start from 01:24:772 as you've done at 00:10:787 00:57:704 (1)?

Xinely's Normal:

00:46:201 (4) - Imo reducing 1/2 sounds better since the background music ends there. Plus, starting 00:45:975 will sound better~
00:57:930 (1) - Start from 00:57:704?

Hard:

00:27:253 (1) - Jump with (2) fit, but the jump with 00:27:028 (5) didn't felt nice. Make them closer?
00:45:298 (1) - Make this a 1/2 repeat slider like 00:48:907 (1). It fits the song better.
00:54:321 (1) - Reduce 1/4 please. It doesn't fit the lyric nor music.

nich's Insane:

00:12:592 (1) - Imo, 0.5x sv change was too much. Was a bit confusing to me.
00:20:035 (6) - Consider NC?
00:23:193 (4) - Consider (216,356)? This zigzag flow doesn't feel bad, so suggesting.

Not sure about the easy ones, but I think you could map after 01:27:028 in harder diffs.

Good luck~

Akabato

207 posts

Joined October 2013

Akabato 2013-12-19T11:44:28+00:00

hi!~M4M here~
[General]
all diffs add widescreen support?
[Easy]
00:33:569 (2) - far from 00:32:667 (1),use DS?
01:12:140 (1) - not a perfect blanket,move one grid right?
[Xinely's Normal]
seems have some useless greenlines,remove them?
[Hard]
00:43:945 add note?vocal here is obvious
00:47:554 ^
00:48:456 (3) - add clap at slider's head?
[Nich's Insane]
00:34:246 (1) - remove NC?
00:35:148 (5) - add NC?
00:56:576 add note?
01:12:366 ^
can't find more,nice map~hope it can get ranked soon,good luck!~

Nichiyouki

1,579 posts

Joined August 2011

Nichiyouki 2013-12-19T13:04:47+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
nich's Insane:

00:12:592 (1) - Imo, 0.5x sv change was too much. Was a bit confusing to me. I think that adding the NC here, it will be able to solve the problem imo. So, I won't change this, but if this is really have problem, I will fix later.
00:20:035 (6) - Consider NC? Okay, added
00:23:193 (4) - Consider (216,356)? This zigzag flow doesn't feel bad, so suggesting. It's good, but when I testplayed this. I think the original is flowing better than.

Not sure about the easy ones, but I think you could map after 01:27:028 in harder diffs. I can, but I will map that part later if we are accepted.

Akabato wrote:
[Nich's Insane]
00:34:246 (1) - remove NC? Okay, removed
00:35:148 (5) - add NC? added
00:56:576 add note? Nope, it don't fit with the melody or rhythm.
01:12:366 ^ Same with previously suggestion.

Thank you both for the mods

My diff

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: ray.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 58945
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:lull ~Soshite Bokura wa~ (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:lull～そして僕らは～ (TV Size)
Artist:Ray
ArtistUnicode:Ray
Creator:Oyatsu
Version:Nich's Insane
Source:Nagi no Asukara
Tags:凪のあすから romance drama comedy fantasy sea life world opening op xinely nichiyouki nich95 sky cloud water blue friend from calm tomorrow p.a.works hikari sakishima manaka mukaido chisaki hiradaira kaname isaki tsumugu kihara
BeatmapID:316404
BeatmapSetID:121189

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

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//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.png",0,0
Video,0,"video.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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40,224,34810,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,224,34922,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,104,35148,5,0,0:0:0:0:
200,260,35373,2,0,L|292:272,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,264,35825,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,344,36050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,172,36276,6,0,P|416:108|356:88,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,108,36727,2,0,P|272:116|228:104,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,32,37178,2,0,P|68:24|112:36,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,100,37516,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,100,37629,2,0,L|136:192,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,272,38080,2,0,P|156:220|216:208,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,212,38531,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,280,38757,6,0,P|348:232|348:192,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,32,39208,2,0,P|448:80|448:120,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,212,39659,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,100,39885,6,0,L|380:88,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,208,40336,1,8,1:0:0:0:
512,208,40561,2,0,L|376:224,1,135,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,216,41013,2,0,L|240:228,1,90,10|2,1:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
120,264,41464,6,0,P|136:220|140:176,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,152,41802,1,0,1:0:0:0:
136,152,41915,1,0,1:0:0:0:
24,68,42140,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,196,42366,1,0,1:0:0:0:
128,64,42592,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,160,42817,1,8,1:0:0:0:
220,160,43043,1,8,1:0:0:0:
308,76,43268,1,0,1:0:0:0:
336,72,43381,1,0,1:0:0:0:
364,72,43494,6,0,P|392:84|420:108,2,67.5000025749208,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,160,44170,2,0,B|168:160|136:132|136:132|136:160|128:180,1,135.000005149842,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,268,44847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,268,45073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,308,45298,2,0,L|232:312,2,67.5000025749208,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,176,45975,2,0,P|132:140|144:108,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,48,46426,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,48,46539,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,48,46652,2,0,P|324:84|312:116,1,67.5000025749208,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,256,47103,6,0,L|92:264,1,67.5000025749208,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,176,47554,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,176,47779,2,0,L|68:168,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,196,48231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,196,48343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,196,48456,2,0,P|256:228|260:264,1,67.5000025749208,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,340,48907,5,2,0:0:0:0:
124,164,49133,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,292,49358,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,176,49584,2,0,P|316:112|256:96,1,135.000005149842,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,100,50148,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,108,50261,2,0,L|188:172,1,67.5000025749208,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,292,50712,5,4,0:0:0:0:
372,256,50937,2,0,L|412:172,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,24,51389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,104,51614,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,72,51840,2,0,P|256:68|212:72,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,196,52291,1,2,0:1:0:0:
156,264,52516,6,0,P|204:268|248:264,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
280,152,52967,2,0,P|232:148|188:152,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
80,272,53419,2,0,L|84:364,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,152,54095,1,2,0:1:0:0:
128,64,54321,6,0,P|200:80|244:120,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,144,54772,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,292,54998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,244,55223,2,0,P|340:232|384:232,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,356,55674,2,0,P|424:368|380:368,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
304,356,56013,1,0,1:0:0:0:
304,356,56125,2,0,L|244:288,1,90,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,84,56802,6,0,L|356:152,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,240,57479,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,120,57704,6,0,L|388:52,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,56,58155,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,124,58381,2,0,L|32:136,2,90,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,160,59058,5,2,0:0:0:0:
304,52,59283,1,0,3:0:0:0:
332,48,59396,1,0,3:0:0:0:
360,52,59509,1,0,3:0:0:0:
384,60,59622,1,0,3:0:0:0:
404,80,59734,6,0,P|428:148|416:208,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,256,60185,2,0,L|264:264,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,168,60637,2,0,L|248:160,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,180,61088,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,348,61313,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,236,61539,6,0,P|244:168|268:104,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,48,61990,2,0,L|224:56,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,120,62441,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,32,62667,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,200,62892,2,0,P|120:244|144:280,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,312,63343,6,0,P|348:264|412:260,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,272,63795,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,368,64020,2,0,P|208:316|212:280,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,140,64471,2,0,P|328:192|324:228,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,328,64922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,172,65148,6,0,B|192:136|232:136|232:136|240:84|284:64,2,180,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,248,66163,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,248,66276,2,0,P|156:288|192:308,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,316,66727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,312,66952,6,0,P|28:256|48:184,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,168,67404,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,220,67629,2,0,P|228:268|212:308,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,312,68080,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,140,68306,2,0,P|204:124|252:120,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,240,68757,6,0,P|384:220|412:160,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,88,69208,2,0,L|308:52,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,80,69546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,80,69659,2,0,L|140:88,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,168,70110,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,32,70336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,160,70561,6,0,B|192:208|172:248,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
72,344,71013,1,8,0:1:0:0:
220,320,71238,1,8,0:1:0:0:
220,320,71351,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,320,71464,1,8,0:1:0:0:
104,188,71689,1,8,0:1:0:0:
260,216,71915,1,8,0:1:0:0:
360,88,72140,5,4,0:0:0:0:
360,88,72592,1,2,0:1:0:0:
428,172,72817,2,0,L|412:264,1,90,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,324,73268,2,0,L|228:232,1,90,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,80,73719,1,2,0:1:0:0:
428,172,73945,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,172,74058,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,172,74170,6,0,P|396:228|332:256,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,256,74622,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,148,74847,2,0,L|176:60,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,184,75298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,184,75524,2,0,L|44:276,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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288,184,76426,2,0,P|332:208|372:212,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,140,76877,1,2,0:0:0:0:
444,276,77103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,252,77328,2,0,L|208:260,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,184,77779,6,0,P|64:116|112:76,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,72,78231,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,248,78456,2,0,P|88:272|44:280,2,90,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,128,79133,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,216,79358,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,120,79584,6,0,L|480:128,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,260,80036,2,0,L|420:252,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,216,80486,2,0,B|252:164|256:108|256:108|232:120|200:128,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,88,81163,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,188,81389,6,0,L|92:276,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,344,81840,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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344,320,82516,2,0,L|364:232,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,92,82967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,140,83193,6,0,P|468:120|480:48,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,28,83644,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,92,83870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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400,352,84546,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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472,216,85449,2,0,P|488:256|488:304,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,360,85900,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,168,86125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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488,140,86802,1,2,0:0:0:0:

Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Mao 2013-12-19T15:48:05+00:00

M4M Request

[Easy]

General

Solid Easy, I like it. Almost no mistakes ^^

Mod

00:28:607 (5,1) - Blanket could be better here
00:32:667 (1,2) - Why are the distances higher here?

[Xinely's Normal]

General

If you ask me, the distance snap is way too low. Even though it's a normal the circles don't have to touch each other.
Other than that, almost nothing to say here.

Mod

00:27:253 (4,5) - How about a blanket here?

[Hard]

General

Pretty good hard diff. Just suggestions.

Mod

00:12:366 (6,1) - Consider to blanket them.
00:16:426 (1,2) - How about using the same slider for both of these? Just Copy Paste and Rotate
00:25:900 (3,4) - Probably just my own opinion, but the end of (3) is way too far on (4)'s slider track, let it overlap just a little part (up to half of the slider track) or let it fully overlap (see Insane diff)
00:30:637 (5,1) - I think creating a blanket with these would be cool. -> http://puu.sh/5RJMr.jpg
00:33:795 (3) - The blanket with 00:34:471 (1) - could be better here.
00:37:404 (4) - Blanket with 00:38:080 (1) - ?

[Nich's Insane]

General

Really good diff. All few things I listed are just nitpicks and suggestions. Good job Nichiyouki!

Mod

OD+1, since it has just got AR8 it can be a little bit harder.

00:09:659 (2) - (2) could be blanket better with 00:10:336 (4) -
00:15:749 (4,5) - How about making a blanket? -> http://puu.sh/5RIXu.jpg
01:01:539 (1,2) - I like most of your overlap but this one is somewhat different. (2) is just touching (1) a little bit. Consider changing this.
01:15:975 (1,2) - Probably just me, but same as abouve (^)

So, that's it. Good luck

OmgHahaLOLxD

26 posts

Joined January 2013

OmgHahaLOLxD 2013-12-19T19:38:53+00:00

Easy

00:45:298 (1) - remove New combo
00:56:125 (1) - note sounds nicer when extended to next white tick, but this ones rly your call
01:02:892 (4) - new combo
01:03:343 (1) - remove new combo
01:24:095 (3) - idk about this slider

Hard

00:37:855 (5) - new combo
00:38:080 (1) - remove new combo

Your timing for notes is all good, just some of my recommendations, GL with map!

Unusual-bot

Unusual-bot 2013-12-20T10:37:58+00:00

Hi there, here is new modder who try to mod your map, so sorry if i make some mistakes or am too picky
let's start then

Easy
00:06:952 (4) - move to 400,176
00:07:404 (1) - move to 388,246 => these two will make the flow better
00:25:900 (2,3,4) - move 3 and 4 so it will make better flow

before

after

or something similar to after, and of course move the next object so the distance will be snaped
00:37:629 (2,1) - move to 148,156
00:54:321 (1) - 340,88
01:06:501 (4) - 412,180 so it will flow better

Hard
00:09:659 (2,3,4) - why don't you make it flow like this

SPOILER

00:45:298 (1,2) - blanket it will make this flow better i think
00:50:712 (1) - 444,244

ok, that's all from me, i won't mod GD

really2 good song and map,hope it will be ranked soon
good luck~

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2013-12-20T15:38:15+00:00

Hi hi~

M4M from your queue~
My map: CLIFF EGDE feat. Nakamura Maiko - Endless Tears

[General]
Osu! needs more Ray! <3

[Easy]
00:00:637 - Is there suppose to be any custom hitsound there? something like standard normal hit
00:04:246 - ^
00:06:501 - Remain standard hitsound instead of whistle for consistency (altho there's whistle starts 00:06:050 - )
00:10:787 - Suggest to continue mapping here or give a break by 00:07:404 -
00:29:058 (1) - Move this to X:112 Y:156
00:29:960 (2) - X:264 Y:192
00:30:862 (3) - X:396 Y:116
00:32:667 (1) - X:308 Y:136
00:33:569 (2) - X:132 Y:116
00:34:471 (3) - X:108 Y:228
00:35:825 (4) - and then arrange this

00:53:870 (6) - Clap here, I like constant hitsounds

00:57:704 (1) - Spinner is too short and it's too close to previous note, not suitable in Easy
^ I suggest to remove 00:57:704 (1) - and reverse 00:56:802 (2) - with some extra notes at 00:58:381 - and arrangements
01:02:441 (3) - Remove this and make 01:01:539 (2) - Ctrl+G and a reverse (for better flow)
^ after that blanket with 00:59:734 (1) -
01:08:757 (3) - Blanket this properly (if you dont understand this mod PM me)
01:10:561 (1) - ^
01:12:140 (1) - ^
01:24:998 (1) - Suggest to move this to 01:26:802 - and map the part at 01:24:998 - for filling the song ^_^

[Xinely's Normal]
00:12:140 - Extra green line (timing line)
00:12:253 - ^
00:23:644 (2,3) - Switch their position to fit the flow with 00:21:840 (1) - (if you get what I mean)
00:31:539 - Vocal starts here, suggest to follow due to previous vocal notes
^ OR remove the reverse of 00:29:734 (2) - and add a note at 00:30:411 - to follow the beat and add note at 00:30:637 - too
00:41:238 (3) - Clap
00:52:967 - Clap
00:53:870 (4) - ^
01:00:185 - Circle here, stack on 01:00:411 (1) -
01:11:013 (2) - Try not to touch this slider with 01:12:140 (4) -
01:13:719 (6) - Clap (if you agree with previous hitsound mods)
01:27:028 - Spinner?

[Hard]
00:12:253 (5) - Remove this, it's an extra note (it sounds fine even it's not there)
00:28:607 (7) - You can follow 1/8 reverse for this part if you dont mind to the raise difficulty by a little (some decent mappers do that)
00:43:945 - Note here, following vocal (follow vocal of KA in [ya wa ra ka i])
00:50:261 (3) - Same as previous mod
00:52:967 - Clap (consistency)
00:56:125 (1) - Remove NC here and NC at 00:56:125 (1) - because it's kinda hard to expect the timing with jump like 00:56:125 (1) - in the map
01:06:952 (1) - Ctrl+G (it's strange to play here)
01:16:652 (2) - Move closer a little to 01:15:975 (1) - (this jump is a little random)
01:26:915 - Spinner?

[Nich's Insane]
Looks good and delicious!
00:41:802 (2,3) - Hitsound sounds a bit loud for me
00:42:817 (7) - NC here? I dont like (10) to be appeared especially soft songs
01:06:163 (2) - Remove this, extra hit
01:12:592 (2) - NC here for easier gameplay

Hope it helps \o/

Pagno

175 posts

Joined September 2012

Pagno 2013-12-20T17:12:59+00:00

hello! from your queue~

~ Mod ~

[Insane]
00:05:148 (3,4) - How about adding another note on the blue tick, in order to make it a triplet? It feels like a note is missing

00:09:659 (2) - Try to make a better blanket!

00:14:170 (5) - 1/4 slider? I love making this kind of stuff :p

00:56:802 (1) - This is just my opinion, but I generally feel very unconfortable with such speed changes ;c

01:26:802 (7) - What about adding a spinner at the end?

[Hard]
00:06:501 (3,4) - I think that stacking those two makes reading difficult, so maybe stack (3) under (2)'s end

00:33:795 (3) - Try blanketing this with (4), I think that it looks a lot better!

And, same here, a spinner at the end?

[Normal]
00:57:930 (1,1) - Maybe add a hitcircle on the white tick between those two, and stack it on (1)

I can't find many problems here, the only thing, maybe be more careful with notes which start on the red tick without another note on the white tick before since it may be quite hard for beginners!

[Easy]
00:42:366 (2) - This may not start on the red tick, it's hard to tell its timing ;c
consider making it like

Nothing much to say!

Good job, nice mapset

good luck with ranking!

Laurier

1,785 posts

Joined February 2011

Laurier 2013-12-20T17:14:01+00:00

from your queue

Easy
00:03:795 (1) - try this rhythm

SPOILER

it is more suited to sound.
00:10:110 (4) - add reverse ?

SPOILER

or start spin at 00:11:013
00:18:231 (1) - why you use this finish ? it isn't fit to sound. use soft hitfinish with more low volume (25~30%)
00:21:840 - ^
00:27:704 (4) - ^
00:27:704 (4) - remove whistle
00:29:058 (1) - move more up and make batter blanket

SPOILER

00:39:885 (3) - NC
00:41:689 (1) - remove NC
00:52:065 (3) - add finish with CS:2

Nromal
Overmapped confuses beginners. should use more large spacing.
00:03:795 (1) - add finish
00:14:622 (1) - same as easy
00:46:201 (4) - start at 00:45:975 -

Hard
00:00:186 (1,2) - it's too simply . maybe try this ?

SPOILER

00:12:366 (6,1) - it's makes bad flow try this~

SPOILER

00:18:231 (1) - same as another diffs
00:30:637 (5,1) - same as 00:12:366 (6,1)
01:03:795 (2) - more down and make better blanket

SPOILER

Insane
tick 2 is best
you should add soft-slidertick with drum sounds
00:10:787 (6,1) - how about this jump pattern ?

SPOILER

00:23:644 (1) - too near to next note try move to x241y268
00:29:509 (2) - add note

- Kevin

159 posts

Joined September 2012

- Kevin 2013-12-20T19:52:38+00:00

From your queue

Well you have a lot of outstanding mods above... maybe some things do not fill.

[General]
01:13:043 - 01:14:170 - why this hole on kiai?
-
Same as my last MOD

- Kevin wrote:
You have a custom hit circle so you MUST add this code on all your .osu files:
SliderBorder: 255,255,255
under this:
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 28,169,244
Combo3 : 50,126,241
When skinning gameplay elements, complete sets of elements must be skinned. For instance, if you skin hitcircles, you must include a hitcircle.png, hitcircleoverlay.png, approachcircle.png, and a slider border color (this can be done by adding the line "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" (using RGB values) under the [Colours] section of each .osu file). The same logic applies to hitbursts, cursors, numbers, and anything else of this nature. If you didn't intend to skin an element in the set, then using the template skin's version is okay. Setting a Skin Preference is also acceptable (e.g. forcing the default skin).

[Nich's Insane]

00:11:013 (1,2) - Change slider shape a little:

SPOILER

01:01:539 (1,2) - Overlap, whatever just letting you know, it's cool and i liked it
00:50:712 (1,2) - Would you Stack them?

Awesome hit sounds arrange i will give a star because of you!.

[Hard]

00:43:945 - add note
01:06:952 (1) - This jump... Ctrl + G note
01:15:073 (3,4,1,2) - (4) Overlap with (1) try something like this:

SPOILER

[Xinely's Normal]

00:10:787 (7) - move a little x:120 y:204 fix 00:11:013 (1) -
00:24:546 (3) - move to x:492 y:196 you will need to fix the next 4 notes 00:25:449 (1,2,3,4) - like this:

SPOILER

00:25:449 (1) - x:240 y:208
00:25:900 (2) - x:124 y:292
00:26:351 (3) - x:152 y:152 Shape: http://puu.sh/5SYyj.jpg
00:27:253 (4) - x:400 y:93

01:00:185 - maybe add note
01:11:013 (2,4) - Overlap move (3,4) up slightly

[Easy]

00:00:186 (1,1) - disproportionate curves
00:03:795 (1) - move to x:124 y: 292 (same height position with (2) ) fix 00:05:599 (2,3,4) -
00:20:486 (3,1) - disproportionate curves
00:42:366 (2) - Easy should be 1/1 starting this slider at red tick will make new players cry... ...preferably pick up the white beat instead of red.
00:48:907 (1,2) - red tick again... hmm would you try this?

00:43:494 (1,1,1) - this three slider have tail at red ticks... better think of changing this... try a new rhythm
00:56:125 (1,2) - red ticks issue
00:57:704 (1) - i'ts too short for easy? idk sorry
01:10:561 (1,2,1) - red ticks

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Oyatsu 2013-12-23T12:37:11+00:00

Thank you guys so much! Because too many mods, I will M4M with u guys soonest I can. I wrote fixed what post but my cat canceled it. I really don't have time to write again. This is REALLY.I'm sorry so much.!!

Almost fixed

Updated Xinely's diff!

Nichiyouki

1,579 posts

Joined August 2011

Nichiyouki 2013-12-23T15:47:57+00:00

Mao wrote:
[Nich's Insane]

General
Really good diff. All few things I listed are just nitpicks and suggestions. Good job Nichiyouki! Oh, thank you >w<

Mod
OD+1, since it has just got AR8 it can be a little bit harder. Nope, I don't like OD=AR, which It's too hard for me.

00:09:659 (2) - (2) could be blanket better with 00:10:336 (4) - Moved a bit in slider (4).
00:15:749 (4,5) - How about making a blanket? -> http://puu.sh/5RIXu.jpg I prefer to use the orginal more than.
01:01:539 (1,2) - I like most of your overlap but this one is somewhat different. (2) is just touching (1) a little bit. Consider changing this. Umm... but it hasn't the problem for my reading.
01:15:975 (1,2) - Probably just me, but same as abouve (^) This, too.

Rakuen wrote:
[Nich's Insane]
Looks good and delicious! >w<
00:41:802 (2,3) - Hitsound sounds a bit loud for me It hasn't the problem for me, but I will reduce the volume in (3).
00:42:817 (7) - NC here? I dont like (10) to be appeared especially soft songs Oh, I forget xD added.
01:06:163 (2) - Remove this, extra hit Nope, I think that it isn't overmapped.
01:12:592 (2) - NC here for easier gameplay Umm... it doesn't the problem to read.

Pagno wrote:
[Insane]
00:05:148 (3,4) - How about adding another note on the blue tick, in order to make it a triplet? It feels like a note is missing Nope, It's unnecessary in that. Because it doesn't follow anything is the song.

00:09:659 (2) - Try to make a better blanket! Fixed

00:14:170 (5) - 1/4 slider? I love making this kind of stuff :p Nope, I don't like to change to this. To jump between (5,6).

00:56:802 (1) - This is just my opinion, but I generally feel very unconfortable with such speed changes ;c Umm... I want make this slider to same with 00:56:125 (7) - by reduce SV. So I don't fix it.

01:26:802 (7) - What about adding a spinner at the end? Nope, but I will use notes instead.

Laurier wrote:
Insane
tick 2 is best Okay, since I accept your next suggestion.
you should add soft-slidertick with drum sounds Oh, okay for both suggestion. Then I will add and give the hitsound to the mapper.
00:10:787 (6,1) - how about this jump pattern ? Nope, I prefer the original more than, and flowing better than.
SPOILER
00:23:644 (1) - too near to next note try move to x241y268 I will move point of slider a bit instead.
00:29:509 (2) - add note I remember that it already has here xD

- Kevin wrote:
[Nich's Insane]

00:11:013 (1,2) - Change slider shape a little: Umm... It rarely different with the original ><
SPOILER

01:01:539 (1,2) - Overlap, whatever just letting you know, it's cool and i liked it Oh :3
00:50:712 (1,2) - Would you Stack them? Nope, I prefer the original more than.

Awesome hit sounds arrange i will give a star because of you!. wow thank you >w<

Thank you everyone for the mods

My new hitsound : http://puu.sh/5W5q1.rar

Update from the present & my previously post

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: ray.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 58945
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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Title:lull ~Soshite Bokura wa~ (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:lull～そして僕らは～ (TV Size)
Artist:Ray
ArtistUnicode:Ray
Creator:Oyatsu
Version:Nich's Insane
Source:Nagi no Asukara
Tags:凪のあすから romance drama comedy fantasy sea life world opening op xinely nichiyouki nich95 sky cloud water blue friend from calm tomorrow p.a.works hikari sakishima manaka mukaido chisaki hiradaira kaname isaki tsumugu kihara
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BeatmapSetID:121189

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HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
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Aurele

Global Moderator

7,514 posts

Joined January 2011

Aurele 2013-12-31T02:39:42+00:00

ircmod

21:11 Gabe: easy
21:11 Gabe: 00:10:561 - add a clap
21:11 Oyatsu: ok
21:12 Gabe: 00:37:629 (2,4) - you might want to stack both of these circles, it looks a bit odd if you keep it that way
21:12 Oyatsu: uhm
21:12 Gabe: is there a problem? o:
21:13 Oyatsu: yes?
21:13 Gabe: I meant, is there something wrong with that suggestion? o:
21:14 Oyatsu: no
21:14 Oyatsu: I'm fixing
21:14 Oyatsu: :D
21:14 Gabe: oh, alright
21:14 Gabe: :3
21:14 Gabe: 01:13:719 (3) - I don't understand why there's a finish here o.o
21:15 Oyatsu: I can hear finish in instrument, only it is abit low
21:15 Oyatsu: let u remvoe and you can hear it :D
21:16 Oyatsu: right? :3
21:16 Gabe: well..
21:16 Gabe: we more hear a whistle, like the previous note
21:17 Oyatsu: 01:13:268 (2) - this?
21:17 Gabe: oh,
21:17 Gabe: got it
21:17 Gabe: keep it
21:17 Oyatsu: lol ok :D
21:19 Gabe: On Xinely's can you add a clap to 00:52:967 - ? It feels very unconfortable if the clap consistency brutally stops.
21:20 Oyatsu: ok added
21:28 Gabe: woot, nothing else to say o3o
21:28 Oyatsu: lol
21:34 Oyatsu: done!

Seems to be good to go c:

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Oyatsu 2013-12-31T02:41:09+00:00

Gabe wrote:

ircmod

21:11 Gabe: easy
21:11 Gabe: 00:10:561 - add a clap
21:11 Oyatsu: ok
21:12 Gabe: 00:37:629 (2,4) - you might want to stack both of these circles, it looks a bit odd if you keep it that way
21:12 Oyatsu: uhm
21:12 Gabe: is there a problem? o:
21:13 Oyatsu: yes?
21:13 Gabe: I meant, is there something wrong with that suggestion? o:
21:14 Oyatsu: no
21:14 Oyatsu: I'm fixing
21:14 Oyatsu: :D
21:14 Gabe: oh, alright
21:14 Gabe: :3
21:14 Gabe: 01:13:719 (3) - I don't understand why there's a finish here o.o
21:15 Oyatsu: I can hear finish in instrument, only it is abit low
21:15 Oyatsu: let u remvoe and you can hear it :D
21:16 Oyatsu: right? :3
21:16 Gabe: well..
21:16 Gabe: we more hear a whistle, like the previous note
21:17 Oyatsu: 01:13:268 (2) - this?
21:17 Gabe: oh,
21:17 Gabe: got it
21:17 Gabe: keep it
21:17 Oyatsu: lol ok :D
21:19 Gabe: On Xinely's can you add a clap to 00:52:967 - ? It feels very unconfortable if the clap consistency brutally stops.
21:20 Oyatsu: ok added
21:28 Gabe: woot, nothing else to say o3o
21:28 Oyatsu: lol
21:34 Oyatsu: done!

Seems to be good to go c:

Thank you alot!! <3

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2014-01-05T08:44:50+00:00

lets see

[General]
Xinely's Normal is missing the code for slider boarder, please add this to the [Colours] section:

SliderBorder : 255,255,255

[Easy]
00:27:479 - unneeded green line here
00:41:689 (2,3) - i would try to make this a repeat slider like 00:39:885 (1), will help aid the transition better

[Xinely's Normal]
00:21:389 (6,1) - the angle here plays a bit weird, would be cool if you can rotate 00:21:840 (1) a bit clockwise
00:39:885 (1,2,3) - the music is actually really interesting here, would be cool if you can reflect more of it:

SPOILER

00:57:704 (1) - i would shorten this to 00:58:832 and add a note at 00:59:734, since it will reflect the lone vocals in the middle better by not having a spinner over it

[Hard]
00:24:095 (2) - forgot whistle on end
00:39:885 (1) - use a triplet or short repeat slider here, and remove 00:40:449 (3); there is actually no 1/4 there
01:10:110 (4) - place this at the end of 01:08:757 (1) would flow a bit better imo

[Nich's Insane]
since you have 2 blue colours and 1 white, how bout a colour hax so that white is only used on the slow down parts (00:12:592 (1,2,3) and 00:56:802 (1,2))? would help with reading them a lot
00:39:885 (1) - use a triplet? you covered 00:41:464 (1,2,3) so might as well do it here
01:15:975 (1) - shorten it to a normal 1/2 slider instead, since you will be able to cover the sharp sound at 01:16:201 (refer to 01:19:584 (1,2))
01:24:998 (1) - use a finish on the end? you can reduce the volume a bit so it sounds nicely along the finish in the music

let me know afterwards~

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-01-05T09:04:07+00:00

fixed the sliderborder and jonathan's suggestions ~
Thanks 4 mod jonathan ~

code

osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 58945
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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Title:lull ~Soshite Bokura wa~ (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:lull～そして僕らは～ (TV Size)
Artist:Ray
ArtistUnicode:Ray
Creator:Oyatsu
Version:Xinely's Normal
Source:Nagi no Asukara
Tags:凪のあすから romance drama comedy fantasy sea life world opening op xinely nichiyouki nich95 sky cloud water blue friend from calm tomorrow p.a.works hikari sakishima manaka mukaido chisaki hiradaira kaname isaki tsumugu kihara
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
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Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Oyatsu 2014-01-05T11:01:18+00:00

Fixed all in my difs- Easy and Hard. Thank you jona!! <3
Updated Xinely's Mormal

Wait for Nich!!

Nichiyouki

1,579 posts

Joined August 2011

Nichiyouki 2014-01-05T12:23:41+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
[Nich's Insane]
since you have 2 blue colours and 1 white, how bout a colour hax so that white is only used on the slow down parts (00:12:592 (1,2,3) and 00:56:802 (1,2))? would help with reading them a lot Oh, it's interesting about this. So, I fixed it
00:39:885 (1) - use a triplet? you covered 00:41:464 (1,2,3) so might as well do it here Umm... I felt that doesn't same with 00:41:464 (1,2,3), since 00:41:802 (2) - is follow the rhythm, but in this isn't problem for rhythm. So no change.
01:15:975 (1) - shorten it to a normal 1/2 slider instead, since you will be able to cover the sharp sound at 01:16:201 (refer to 01:19:584 (1,2)) Okay, but I will fix (2) is 2 circles instead, too.
01:24:998 (1) - use a finish on the end? you can reduce the volume a bit so it sounds nicely along the finish in the music Nope, I don't like the hitsound that

Thank you for the mod

My diff

osu file format v12

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TitleUnicode:lull～そして僕らは～ (TV Size)
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Creator:Oyatsu
Version:Nich's Insane
Source:Nagi no Asukara
Tags:凪のあすから romance drama comedy fantasy sea life world opening op xinely nichiyouki nich95 sky cloud water blue friend from calm tomorrow p.a.works hikari sakishima manaka mukaido chisaki hiradaira kaname isaki tsumugu kihara
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