[General]- Change the "and" in the artist to "&", please. Don't forget to Full Submit!
- Why didn't you use the Normal audio sampleset for this? It would fit a lot better.
[Matma's Catching Up]- You must add MatmaRex to the Tags.
- I don't like this difficulty much... the ending is a bit awkward and shouldn't have used so many short sliders.
00:14:072 (4,5) - This sounds rather weird, but it's not your fault. Adding a whistle at the endpoint of this slider might be helpful.
[Loogie Vs. BlueDragon]- You must add Loogiesquared and Blue Dragon to the Tags.
- I might have missed some errors, but just to clear things up, please resnap and recheck everything with 1/2 snap, not 1/4.
~Loogiesquared~00:16:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1) - Huh, yeah, you must NOT use 1/4 here, but I'll assume it's just a resnapping error. Just get these back 1/4 and you're fine.
00:32:086 (1) - Sounds awkward. Extend 1/2 more.
~Blue Dragon~01:23:031 (2,3,4,5) - Can you point out the error here? (2) should be 1/4 shorter, but it isn't, messing up the rest of this pattern.
01:35:079 (1,4) - No please.
01:36:061 (2) - Sounds better if you remove one repeat.
01:41:086 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Also sounds weird. I'd say move 1/4 back, but you would have to fix spacing later. Please recheck this.
[3rd Place]- Raise Overall Difficulty a bit... Also, you should have mapped with with larger spacing.
00:26:072 (5,6) - Check the spacing.
00:31:063 (1) - Do not use 1/4!
00:35:018 (5,6) - No please.
01:04:009 (3,4) - Sounds weird and out of place. You can transform (4) into a normal hitcircle and it will be fine.
[2nd Place]00:15:040 (3,4) - Check the spacing.
[1st Place]- Most of these jumps are bad, in my opinion, they don't play good at all.

00:15:095 (5,6) - This jump is... horrible, to be honest. It's one of the worse jumps there are.
00:19:063 (10) - Do not use 1/4!
00:38:072 (6) - Do not use 1/4!
00:42:040 (8) - Do not use 1/4!
01:24:068 (5) - Sounds weird, please recheck this.
01:35:045 (1,2,3,4) - 1/3s are confusing here, use 1/4 instead.
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Sorry, but there still are some things that need fixing, like new combos, hitsounds, etc.... I will recheck this once it has 40+ SP. Sorry to say this, but this map still has a long way to go before ranking.

I, of course, know how to fix all of these things, but I didn't list them because it would be a rather long list AND it would be time consuming... I am actually interested to do this in IRC, so PM me (in IRC) if you're interested too.
But in the meanwhile, you'll have to wait for your star.