yuikonnu - Genjitsu Game · forum

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

4,298 posts

Joined July 2011

[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2013-08-23T00:43:21+00:00

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yuikonuu

Regou

1,916 posts

Joined July 2010

Regou 2013-08-23T01:13:02+00:00

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fuduji

Azure

771 posts

Joined November 2010

Azure 2013-09-25T15:09:06+00:00

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SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 31046
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Genjitsu Game
TitleUnicode:現実ゲーム
Artist:yuikonnu
ArtistUnicode:ゆいこんぬ
Creator:Amamiya Yuko
Version:Az's Hard
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
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SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Sound Samples
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Flower

1,723 posts

Joined August 2011

Flower 2013-09-25T15:10:17+00:00

So when of tomorrow are you planning to rank it?

eniyan

107 posts

Joined September 2011

eniyan 2013-10-05T04:24:33+00:00

Hi

　From my queue

Oh! i'm first for modding

I haven't listened to this music...It's good that i could know this song! The voice of this singer is very sweet

[general]

Frist,i suggest that you add 'Nico Nico Douga' to south. Because i did not know yuikonnu, i searched her. Then she understood that it was a singer of 'Nico Nico Douga'.

I suggest that you add kiai time.
00:31:646~00:48:446
01:19:646~01:36:446
02:29:246~02:52:946

This is a personal opinion,i feels that there too many that there are combo color six.

[Easy]

02:52:946 (4) - I suggest that change it in this way.
this way

[Normal]

This dif is very nice! I love it

[NEKO]

00:23:096 (6) - blanket not perfect, try this
SS

00:59:096 (4) - it looks odd... try this
SS
Pattern A

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1018797

Pattern B

[skystar]

00:00:521 (2) - I think that there should not be it.

01:51:296 (3) - Ctrl+g

02:22:046 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I suggest that change it in this way.
this way

I love this song!

alex_98

120 posts

Joined August 2011

alex_98 2013-10-29T10:40:50+00:00

Hey, it's from my queue

Ok, let's mod this.....

....

I have nothing to say to this map. Maybe it's just because I'm inexperienced in modding._.

Like the post above, I would just suggest the kiai time settings.
I couldn't find anything else..

Sorry...

Zekmer

68 posts

Joined July 2013

Zekmer 2013-10-29T14:05:05+00:00

Hello! From my queue

[General]
Add kiai time 00:31:646 - 00:40:646
00:41:246 - 00:48:446 ^
01:19:646 - 01:28:646 ^
01:29:246 - 01:36:446 ^
02:29:246 - 02:36:146 ^
02:36:746 - 02:45:446 ^
02:46:046 - 02:53:246 ^

Not much more I can say here. The maps look good.

Good luck!

Skystar

1,628 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Skystar 2013-10-29T14:08:29+00:00

nah... c.c

Kinomi

1,223 posts

Joined August 2012

Kinomi 2013-11-14T14:23:12+00:00

Easy
节奏老怪了
00:20:246 (2) - 不对

SPOILER

后面很多类似的啊
00:46:646 (2) - 我举得这样更厚

SPOILER

后面很多类似的
01:16:796 这边加个1/2 slider好一点
01:55:496 这开始的一段好单调啊，中间换一点不同的节奏好一点
02:37:496 (5) - 这个移到前面的红线然后换成1/1的repeater好一点

Normal
美丽

NEKO
打击感不够强，把音量提高点
00:16:346 (4) - 加clap
00:40:346 (6) - NC？
00:46:646 (5) - 不如像最后一样ctrl g？
00:48:146 (3) - 把这个改成两个单点做个跳吧
01:53:246 (1,2) - 这里应该更激烈一点，放1/2滑条
02:28:346 (6) - NC？

Skystar
00:39:296 (1,1) - 我觉得还是不要和前面的四连分开来了吧。。QAQ
02:21:746 加note0.0?
02:23:396 ^
02:22:046 这边可以改成这样不漏钢琴0.0

SPOILER

02:24:896 (2) - 改成一个1/2 repeater

skystar爽爆

Kinomi

1,223 posts

Joined August 2012

Kinomi 2013-11-14T14:23:27+00:00

怎么回了两次。。。

N E K O

159 posts

Joined September 2010

N E K O 2013-11-14T15:32:13+00:00

Tsukuyomi's Mod

NEKO
打击感不够强，把音量提高点好
00:16:346 (4) - 加clap 好
00:40:346 (6) - NC？嗯之前忘记了
00:46:646 (5) - 不如像最后一样ctrl g？好啊
00:48:146 (3) - 把这个改成两个单点做个跳吧改了改
01:53:246 (1,2) - 这里应该更激烈一点，放1/2滑条先原样看看
02:28:346 (6) - NC？嗯之前忘记了

EnixYuki's Mod

00:23:096 (6) - blanket not perfect, try this yea,fixed
[box=SS]

00:59:096 (4) - it looks odd... try this A seems good
[box=SS]Pattern A

Pattern B

Thanks for your mods.

code↓↓↓

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 31046
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Genjitsu Game
TitleUnicode:現実ゲーム
Artist:yuikonnu
ArtistUnicode:ゆいこんぬ
Creator:Amamiya Yuko
Version:NEKO
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:307310
BeatmapSetID:112210

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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128,152,157046,2,0,P|88:172|48:172,1,75
24,92,157346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,44,157496,2,0,P|180:28|264:52,1,150
292,132,157946,2,0,L|360:168,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,256,158246,2,0,P|424:252|460:228,1,75
496,164,158546,1,8,0:0:0:0:
468,76,158696,5,0,0:0:0:0:
392,28,158846,2,0,B|332:24|332:24|288:40|288:40|232:40,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,159296,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,124,159446,2,0,L|8:124,2,75,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,184,159896,2,0,B|203:184|203:184|247:168|247:168|307:172,1,150
396,176,160346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,340,160646,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,276,160796,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,340,160946,1,10,0:0:0:0:
60,220,161246,6,0,B|120:232|120:232|148:184|192:188,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,340,161846,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,272,161996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,340,162146,1,8,0:0:0:0:
488,264,162296,2,0,B|460:208|460:208|472:152|472:152|452:108,1,150
380,80,162746,2,0,P|340:68|312:32,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,16,163046,2,0,L|160:44,1,75
76,76,163346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
12,244,163646,6,0,L|80:212,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,240,163946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,268,164096,2,0,L|328:248,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,308,164396,2,0,L|472:288,1,75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,204,164696,1,0,0:0:0:0:
492,204,164996,2,0,P|496:160|484:120,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,52,165296,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,64,165446,2,0,B|308:64|308:64|272:80|272:80|204:80,1,150
32,140,166046,6,0,B|80:176|80:176|128:152|176:172,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,100,166646,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,164,166796,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,228,166946,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,164,167096,2,0,B|240:132|240:132|184:104|184:104|152:68,1,150
64,84,167546,6,0,L|116:144,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,212,167846,2,0,L|108:272,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,336,168146,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,360,168446,6,0,B|400:328|400:328|384:272|408:232,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,156,168896,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,220,169046,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,244,169196,2,0,P|356:228|328:200,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,156,169496,2,0,P|192:124|164:57,1,150
164,60,169946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,84,170246,5,0,0:0:0:0:
424,156,170396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,244,170546,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,368,170846,6,0,L|176:344,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,248,171146,2,0,P|128:238|96:208,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,116,171446,2,0,P|68:92|60:44,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,36,171746,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,171896,6,0,B|300:80|300:80|332:108|332:108|400:108,1,150
456,176,172346,2,0,P|456:220|440:256,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,328,172646,2,0,P|376:356|328:368,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,372,172946,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,236,173246,6,0,L|44:180,2,75,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,180,173696,2,0,L|232:232,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,168,173996,2,0,L|350:219,2,75
140,76,174596,6,0,L|64:76,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,152,174896,2,0,L|203:152,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,168,175196,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,244,175346,2,0,P|368:288|360:324,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,372,175646,6,0,P|268:328|276:292,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,244,175946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,204,176096,2,0,P|448:248|440:280,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,244,176396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,188,176546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,100,176696,2,0,P|160:64|84:76,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,132,177146,6,0,L|80:164,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,220,177446,2,0,P|172:264|204:288,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,296,177746,2,0,P|332:276|352:248,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,164,178046,2,0,P|356:120|320:88,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,52,178346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,44,178496,2,0,L|88:44,1,75
32,108,178796,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,108,178946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,164,179096,6,0,B|156:164|156:164|212:192|212:192|256:192,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,228,179546,2,0,L|424:228,1,75
476,304,179846,2,0,L|401:304,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,308,180146,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,276,180296,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,204,180446,2,0,L|120:132,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,56,180746,2,0,L|200:128,1,75
244,196,181046,2,0,L|288:268,2,75,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,260,181496,6,0,P|340:208|356:128,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,56,181946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,96,182096,6,0,P|160:148|144:228,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,292,182546,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,292,182696,1,8,0:0:0:0:

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Mira-san 2013-11-16T08:01:53+00:00

Hi. From my modding queue.
Skystar pls mod my map pls.

General

No Kiai time?
Is this intended?

Easy and Normal

None.

NEKO

Nothing much in here. Except position stuff.
Yeah.

00:16:346 (4)
- Move to x:212 y:120
00:16:646 (6)
- Move to x:316 y:116
01:06:896 (3)
- Move to x:168 y:296

Skystar

Diff requires skilled sightreading.
Similar to Augoeides but harder. (?)
I probably can't do well on this diff so I can't mod it properly.

02:02:096 (3,4,5,6)
- Fix this jump please.
03:02:696 (4)
- Move this to x:72 y:292

Sorry. I suck at modding.
Can't give as much as others.

Skystar

1,628 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Skystar 2013-11-23T14:24:44+00:00

EnixYuki wrote:
Hi 　From my queue

Oh! i'm first for modding

I haven't listened to this music...It's good that i could know this song! The voice of this singer is very sweet

[general]

Frist,i suggest that you add 'Nico Nico Douga' to south. Because i did not know yuikonnu, i searched her. Then she understood that it was a singer of 'Nico Nico Douga'. fixed
I suggest that you add kiai time. well just intuitively thought that keeping none of kiais would be better
00:31:646~00:48:446
01:19:646~01:36:446
02:29:246~02:52:946
This is a personal opinion,i feels that there too many that there are combo color six. well intuitive again, setting 6 colors for no reason ;-;
[Easy]

02:52:946 (4) - I suggest that change it in this way. fixed
this way
[Normal]

This dif is very nice! I love it
[NEKO]

00:23:096 (6) - blanket not perfect, try this
SS
00:59:096 (4) - it looks odd... try this
SS
Pattern A

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1018797

Pattern B

[skystar]

00:00:521 (2) - I think that there should not be it. fixed
01:51:296 (3) - Ctrl+g no
02:22:046 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I suggest that change it in this way. fixed
this way

I love this song!

Tsukuyomi wrote:
Easy
节奏老怪了
00:20:246 (2) - 不对白線起比較好
SPOILER
后面很多类似的啊
00:46:646 (2) - 我举得这样更厚不覺得0.0...
SPOILER
后面很多类似的
01:16:796 这边加个1/2 slider好一点 fixed
01:55:496 这开始的一段好单调啊，中间换一点不同的节奏好一点其實我覺得還可以啊= =
02:37:496 (5) - 这个移到前面的红线然后换成1/1的repeater好一点強迫癥 >_>

Normal
美丽

NEKO
打击感不够强，把音量提高点
00:16:346 (4) - 加clap
00:40:346 (6) - NC？
00:46:646 (5) - 不如像最后一样ctrl g？
00:48:146 (3) - 把这个改成两个单点做个跳吧
01:53:246 (1,2) - 这里应该更激烈一点，放1/2滑条
02:28:346 (6) - NC？

Skystar
00:39:296 (1,1) - 我觉得还是不要和前面的四连分开来了吧。。QAQ 要QAQ
02:21:746 加note0.0? fixed
02:23:396 ^ fixed
02:22:046 这边可以改成这样不漏钢琴0.0 還是note好
SPOILER
02:24:896 (2) - 改成一个1/2 repeater 同上

skystar爽爆

Mira-san wrote:

Hi. From my modding queue.
Skystar pls mod my map pls.

General

No Kiai time?
Is this intended?

Easy and Normal

None.

NEKO

Nothing much in here. Except position stuff.
Yeah.

00:16:346 (4)
- Move to x:212 y:120
00:16:646 (6)
- Move to x:316 y:116
01:06:896 (3)
- Move to x:168 y:296

Skystar

Diff requires skilled sightreading.
Similar to Augoeides but harder. (?)
I probably can't do well on this diff so I can't mod it properly.

02:02:096 (3,4,5,6)
- Fix this jump please. it's intentional
03:02:696 (4)
- Move this to x:72 y:292 keep consistent with 00:09:446 (1,2,3,4) -

Sorry. I suck at modding.
Can't give as much as others.

litoluna

1,073 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2013-12-09T02:08:21+00:00

Yuko~\^^/
support yuikonnu <3

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Mira-san 2013-12-21T10:26:08+00:00

~~What happened and why'd you change Skystar to Insane = =~~
i see :v

Skystar

1,628 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Skystar 2013-12-21T14:21:33+00:00

Mira-san wrote:
~~What happened and why'd you change Skystar to Insane = =~~
i see :v

Don't mind, it was Insane originally. :>

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Zero__wind 2013-12-23T13:21:40+00:00

01姐姐应邀前来

Unrankable issues
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions

General
为何没有kiai，我觉得这kiai的位置挺明显的啊
把你粉色系和蓝色系的combo color错开现在两个连续的粉色根本就起不到NC的效果，正好你是3蓝3粉可以交替的

NEKO's Hard
不从头开始做too懒
00:11:696 (2) - 从1过来角度不太舒服试试逆时针转一点然后往上面放和00:11:096 (5) - 的头构成blanket 而且头上应该是漏了whistle，听音乐的话
00:12:896 (2) - 这里尾巴上又漏clap 我可以plz自己修一遍音效么不然我要写5页，whistle漏了非常多比如00:12:146 (4) - 还有00:12:446 - 等等这些音乐里明显有低音鼓的地方
00:21:296 (1) - NC意义不明最好去掉，00:23:696 (1) - 这里也是，或者你就都像00:25:496 (1) - 这里这样提前一些加啊，然后00:27:896 (5) - 这种地方就也要应该加NC，总之就是要保持一致
00:31:046 (3) - 这滑条加clap是什么思路？这滑条头上那里根本就没有鼓尾巴上应该加finish
00:33:446 (1) - 又是奇怪的NC 最好去掉以保持一致性
哦不我觉得你根本就毫无一致性可言，plz自己重新过一遍NC，每条长白线的地方加一个NC或者两条长白线加一个NC 就会很规律了。你看你现在kiai里面00:33:446 (1) - 这加在奇怪的位置 00:34:046 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这中间没加 00:36:446 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里又对半分，我已经彻底不能理解
00:38:846 - 这种地方为什么会想到用whistle呢……明明不是低音啊=。= 像你后面一段01:26:846 (1,3,6) - 一样加几个finish多好
00:40:346 (1,2,3) - 这里可以用这种1/1的稀疏节奏但是不适合这样小间距，因为歌曲明显还是在激烈地进行着，伴奏里鼓也是一直在打你这个间距就毫无道理了你可以把2扔到下面去构成一个上下跳，也不一定要跳正常间距就行
00:48:446 - 这里加个带finish的circle做结尾就好了不要拖动break time，你现在给拖到一个颇为奇怪的位置
00:57:446 - 这里也不需要往前拖，拖回去就行
01:11:696 (3) - 角度不好没有很好地把01:11:096 (1) - 的尾巴包起来
01:36:146 (6) - 把这个换成一个1/2 slider然后01:36:446 - 再加个circle结束这个段落不就好了反正音乐里有鼓的你现在这样停得真心突兀不要拖动break time
01:45:146 - 这里也是完全没必要拖而且就算你要拖也拖到01:44:696 - 吧现在这个时间点完全莫名其妙
01:49:046 (3,4,1) - 突然莫名的叠在了一起我不解个中缘由我看你整个diff好像都没有过像这样把circle叠在1/2 slider尾巴上的感觉很不自然拉开用正常间距就是了
01:55:496 - 这种明显的重音也都没有finish 还有01:56:696 - 等等漏了好多
02:20:096 (2,3,4,5) - 什么心态在慢速段把节奏排这么密？即使你是跟伴奏我也听不出伴奏里有这么多音，建议02:20:096 (2,3) - 合并成一个1/1 slider
02:28:346 (1,2,3) - 又是奇怪的小间距这里都是马上高潮的地方了摆这么憋屈是闹哪样
没了音效和NC是大问题=。=

Normal
00:07:046 (3) - 尾巴上明显whistle
00:08:696 (4) - ^
00:09:446 (5) - ^
00:29:246 (1) - 尾巴请务必消音啊这里哪来的鼓
00:47:096 (4) - 这头上你需要个响一点儿的finish =。= 不要你NC2这个
好像没啥了节奏有点儿蛋疼=。=

Easy
00:26:846 (3) - 把这个扔到屏幕上半部分成不连续几个全在下面有点儿说不过去比如放到(192,64)然后00:27:446 (4) - CTRL+G放到(68,164)
01:26:846 (1) - 这有点太高了啊感觉都快出去了你把01:25:646 (2,1,2) - 一起挪到(368,340)就好多了
02:13:346 (2) - CTRL+G 然后转60° 然后放到(168,312) 免得一直在那里转来转去
02:29:246 (1) - 这也是太高了这很好调啊稍微调整一下它前面那个slider的位置就可以把这个slider拉下来一些了
02:43:646 (1) - 这里好像和上面我提到过的一个地方是复制的……你把前面改完了再复制一下吧………………………………

真的不摸了啦好累摸到一半睡着了

N E K O

159 posts

Joined September 2010

N E K O 2013-12-25T16:00:13+00:00

01's mod

NEKO's Hard
不从头开始做too懒 _(:3JL)_
00:11:696 (2) - 从1过来角度不太舒服试试逆时针转一点然后往上面放和00:11:096 (5) - 的头构成blanket 而且头上应该是漏了whistle，听音乐的话 --好
00:12:896 (2) - 这里尾巴上又漏clap[/color] 我可以plz自己修一遍音效么不然我要写5页，whistle漏了非常多比如00:12:146 (4) - 还有00:12:446 - 等等这些音乐里明显有低音鼓的地方 ----好的我在recheck
00:21:296 (1) - NC意义不明最好去掉，00:23:696 (1) - 这里也是，或者你就都像00:25:496 (1) - 这里这样提前一些加啊，然后00:27:896 (5) - 这种地方就也要应该加NC，总之就是要保持一致
00:31:046 (3) - 这滑条加clap是什么思路？这滑条头上那里根本就没有鼓尾巴上应该加finish
00:33:446 (1) - 又是奇怪的NC 最好去掉以保持一致性
哦不我觉得你根本就毫无一致性可言，plz自己重新过一遍NC，每条长白线的地方加一个NC或者两条长白线加一个NC 就会很规律了。你看你现在kiai里面00:33:446 (1) - 这加在奇怪的位置 00:34:046 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这中间没加 00:36:446 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里又对半分，我已经彻底不能理解
00:38:846 - 这种地方为什么会想到用whistle呢……明明不是低音啊=。= 像你后面一段01:26:846 (1,3,6) - 一样加几个finish多好
00:40:346 (1,2,3) - 这里可以用这种1/1的稀疏节奏但是不适合这样小间距，因为歌曲明显还是在激烈地进行着，伴奏里鼓也是一直在打你这个间距就毫无道理了你可以把2扔到下面去构成一个上下跳，也不一定要跳正常间距就行
00:48:446 - 这里加个带finish的circle做结尾就好了不要拖动break time，你现在给拖到一个颇为奇怪的位置 ---好的
00:57:446 - 这里也不需要往前拖，拖回去就行
01:11:696 (3) - 角度不好没有很好地把01:11:096 (1) - 的尾巴包起来
01:36:146 (6) - 把这个换成一个1/2 slider然后01:36:446 - 再加个circle结束这个段落不就好了反正音乐里有鼓的你现在这样停得真心突兀不要拖动break time ---好的
01:45:146 - 这里也是完全没必要拖而且就算你要拖也拖到01:44:696 - 吧现在这个时间点完全莫名其妙 ---好的改了
01:49:046 (3,4,1) - 突然莫名的叠在了一起我不解个中缘由我看你整个diff好像都没有过像这样把circle叠在1/2 slider尾巴上的感觉很不自然拉开用正常间距就是了 ---这里想保留
01:55:496 - 这种明显的重音也都没有finish 还有01:56:696 - 等等漏了好多
02:20:096 (2,3,4,5) - 什么心态在慢速段把节奏排这么密？即使你是跟伴奏我也听不出伴奏里有这么多音，建议02:20:096 (2,3) - 合并成一个1/1 slider ---好的改了
02:28:346 (1,2,3) - 又是奇怪的小间距这里都是马上高潮的地方了摆这么憋屈是闹哪样 ----两处这样的梗是有意想停顿一下的
没了音效和NC是大问题=。=
----谢谢mod，音效和NC很多都接受，我会重新看一遍NC和音效的.太久没看我都忘记当时怎么脑洞的了

Mira-san's mod

NEKO

Nothing much in here. Except position stuff.
Yeah.

00:16:346 (4)
- Move to x:212 y:120
00:16:646 (6)
- Move to x:316 y:116
01:06:896 (3)
- Move to x:168 y:296

--All fixed

~~代码稍后。今天有点晚舍友都挺尸了，明天给你~~

code

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: genjitsugame.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 31046
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Genjitsu Game
TitleUnicode:現実ゲーム
Artist:yuikonnu
ArtistUnicode:ゆいこんぬ
Creator:Amamiya Yuko
Version:NEKO's Hard
Source:
Tags:reality N E K O c84
BeatmapID:307310
BeatmapSetID:112210

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"5.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,48746,57296
2,96646,105296
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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19646,-100,4,1,1,100,0,0
58046,-100,4,1,1,45,0,0
66296,-100,4,1,1,65,0,0
139046,-125,4,2,0,45,0,0
146846,-100,4,1,1,65,0,0


[Colours]
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Combo2 : 130,200,250
Combo3 : 250,180,180
Combo4 : 255,128,255
Combo5 : 128,128,255
Combo6 : 255,128,192

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Irreversible

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Irreversible 2013-12-30T20:17:56+00:00

reminder

Skystar

1,628 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Skystar 2014-01-08T13:55:17+00:00

Zero__wind wrote:
01姐姐应邀前来

Unrankable issues
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions

General
为何没有kiai，我觉得这kiai的位置挺明显的啊懶
把你粉色系和蓝色系的combo color错开现在两个连续的粉色根本就起不到NC的效果，正好你是3蓝3粉可以交替的 fixed

Normal
00:07:046 (3) - 尾巴上明显whistle
00:08:696 (4) - ^
00:09:446 (5) - ^
00:29:246 (1) - 尾巴请务必消音啊这里哪来的鼓
00:47:096 (4) - 这头上你需要个响一点儿的finish =。= 不要你NC2这个懶
好像没啥了节奏有点儿蛋疼=。= 其他fixed

Easy
00:26:846 (3) - 把这个扔到屏幕上半部分成不连续几个全在下面有点儿说不过去比如放到(192,64)然后00:27:446 (4) - CTRL+G放到(68,164) 不太喜歡
01:26:846 (1) - 这有点太高了啊感觉都快出去了你把01:25:646 (2,1,2) - 一起挪到(368,340)就好多了
02:13:346 (2) - CTRL+G 然后转60° 然后放到(168,312) 免得一直在那里转来转去 nah
02:29:246 (1) - 这也是太高了这很好调啊稍微调整一下它前面那个slider的位置就可以把这个slider拉下来一些了
02:43:646 (1) - 这里好像和上面我提到过的一个地方是复制的……你把前面改完了再复制一下吧………………………………

真的不摸了啦好累摸到一半睡着了其他fixed

Irreversible wrote:
reminder

does the reminder still work

[Kamiya]

637 posts

Joined November 2012

[Kamiya] 2014-01-09T17:40:03+00:00

咳 hard部分;w;
00:31:046 (3) - kiai开始
00:48:446 (8) - kiai结束
01:19:646 (1) - kiai开始
01:36:446 (7) - kiai结束
02:20:096 (2,3,4) - 间距可以拉开点
02:21:446 (6,7) - 同上
02:23:396 (4,5,6) - 同上
02:24:446 (6,7) - 可以做个blanket。应该美观些(也看不出什么特别的
02:25:346 (7,8) - 间距拉长顺便可以同上
02:29:246 (1) - kiai开始
02:36:146 (8) - kiai结束
02:36:746 (1) - kiai开始
02:52:946 (8) - kiai结束
就这些吧不成熟的意见请笑纳

Irreversible

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Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2014-01-25T16:58:43+00:00

Yay, finally! Sorry for the delay

[Easy]

00:47:846 - Uhm, personal suggestion but I don’t like how you lead in the break:
http://puu.sh/6xDB3/330579728d.jpg Could you try this? Please xD
01:17:246 (1) - I’m not sure, but I’ve been told this is not enough space to recover in an easy. (my map had 190 bpm) so.. you might wanna find another solution, like ending the spinner eariler.
02:36:746 (4) - NC? o.o

[Normal]

I saw that you’ve used many ½ rhythm outside of the chorus, and many 1/1 rhythms during the kiai, it kinda fits good together, although I think you could use some ½ in the chorus as well.

Good rhythm otherwise, the placing is neat.

[NEKO’s Hard]

00:11:696 (7,8,9) - To provide a better flow, can you make this a bit more curve shaped?
00:12:446 (1,2,3,4) - The lyrics are pretty dominant in this part here, let me suggest you some rhythm for this: http://puu.sh/6xE2o/01255f68e9.jpg 1 = 00:12:446 -
00:15:896 - Same in this part. http://puu.sh/6xE5i/a31826aff5.jpg pink 1 = 00:14:846 - purple 1 = 00:15:896 -
00:19:646 - Yeah.. 100% is way too loud, reduce the volume a bit please
00:47:846 (5,6,7,8) - Those kind of jumps feel a bit uncofortnable in hard, since people are not used to it in beforehands - so i would personally stick to
normal spacing, from 5 to 6 - then you can increase it a bit (triangle shape?)
01:29:246 (3) - NC, new part
02:26:696 - I guess a circle here would fit perfectly to emphasize her voice o,o
02:27:896 (5) - why the stack? doesn’t fit at all imo.. I would unstack it, and space it properly. (properly as in, like the other stuff)

Rhythm was okayish most of the time, except those two mentioned above, I strongly think you should fix them. Placing.. well, it’s ok, but it would definetly go better. Else to that, not much to say.

[Insane]

00:27:296 (2,1) - Why so close together x.x
01:00:296 (4,5,1,2) - huh, why is this placed like this? It looks kinda confusing like that o.o
01:15:296 (2,1) - wow, this is nice, can you also make this on the “why so close together” part? Or at least similar, it’s awesome.

Awesome diff, nothing to point out, I really like this kind of stuff : D

[Spread]

Well, the maps were okay, but we have to talk about the spread. I guess you can see that the spread given between hard and insane is not really okay. Insane seems more like an Extra diff, like, harder than Insane. What do you say about mapping another insane, to fix this gap? Because imagine, someone passed hard, and goes to this. Wouldn’t he feel a bit confused?

Uhm, tell me what you think about this, see you! o/

Skystar

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Topic Starter

Skystar 2014-01-26T05:42:48+00:00

WOW irre-chan finally came.
sadly as i said before, i was gonna be afk for a period of time and so i cant use my pc and internet atm.
once i get my pc and the internet is available, i will reply to it shortly!
about the spread hm, im kinda fine of it personally, as the insane diff is just an insane... it's not that hard actually, unlike some my other maps. but i will ask for some others' opinions for it!

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2014-01-26T15:02:08+00:00

Amamiya Yuko wrote:
WOW irre-chan finally came.
sadly as i said before, i was gonna be afk for a period of time and so i cant use my pc and internet atm.
once i get my pc and the internet is available, i will reply to it shortly!
about the spread hm, im kinda fine of it personally, as the insane diff is just an insane... it's not that hard actually, unlike some my other maps. but i will ask for some others' opinions for it!

okay, good idea

Maybe it's just me! let me know then~

N E K O

159 posts

Joined September 2010

N E K O 2014-02-02T07:13:33+00:00

Irreversible's mod

[NEKO’s Hard]

00:11:696 (7,8,9) - To provide a better flow, can you make this a bit more curve shaped? --kay
00:12:446 (1,2,3,4) - The lyrics are pretty dominant in this part here, let me suggest you some rhythm for this: http://puu.sh/6xE2o/01255f68e9.jpg 1 = 00:12:446 -
00:15:896 - Same in this part. http://puu.sh/6xE5i/a31826aff5.jpg pink 1 = 00:14:846 - purple 1 = 00:15:896 -

These two parts , as you know i followed the drum beat throughout the map , but if i change like that i would miss a drum beat obviously at 00:16:646 since it's not tr2.So i keep it.

00:19:646 - Yeah.. 100% is way too loud, reduce the volume a bit please --kay
00:47:846 (5,6,7,8) - Those kind of jumps feel a bit uncofortnable in hard, since people are not used to it in beforehands - so i would personally stick to
normal spacing, from 5 to 6 - then you can increase it a bit (triangle shape?) ---oh yes, i changed them into a better flow.
01:29:246 (3) - NC, new part --fixed
02:26:696 - I guess a circle here would fit perfectly to emphasize her voice o,o --added
02:27:896 (5) - why the stack? doesn’t fit at all imo.. I would unstack it, and space it properly. (properly as in, like the other stuff)
--changed as you suggested

Rhythm was okayish most of the time, except those two mentioned above, I strongly think you should fix them. Placing.. well, it’s ok, but it would definetly go better. Else to that, not much to say.
--Thanks a lot for your mod

Kamiya's mod

[Kamiya] wrote:
咳 hard部分;w;
00:31:046 (3) - kiai开始
00:48:446 (8) - kiai结束
01:19:646 (1) - kiai开始
01:36:446 (7) - kiai结束
02:20:096 (2,3,4) - 间距可以拉开点
02:21:446 (6,7) - 同上
02:23:396 (4,5,6) - 同上
02:24:446 (6,7) - 可以做个blanket。应该美观些(也看不出什么特别的
02:25:346 (7,8) - 间距拉长顺便可以同上
02:29:246 (1) - kiai开始
02:36:146 (8) - kiai结束
02:36:746 (1) - kiai开始
02:52:946 (8) - kiai结束
就这些吧不成熟的意见请笑纳

嗯kiai加上了，建议很棒。
间距问题，那个地方是慢速段，我用的是ds1.2，个人感觉还可以，所以先保留原样看看有没有别的modder的新建议。
推荐blanket的部分由于我是有意做成那样的所以也保留原样。
谢谢mod

code

osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 31046
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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Title:Genjitsu Game
TitleUnicode:現実ゲーム
Artist:yuikonnu
ArtistUnicode:ゆいこんぬ
Creator:Amamiya Yuko
Version:NEKO's Hard
Source:
Tags:reality N E K O c84
BeatmapID:307310
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
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captin1

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captin1 2014-02-24T17:04:11+00:00

random opinion appears

imo I kinda agree with irre on the spread, your insane isn't necessarily hard due to pattern reading like some of your other maps, but is hard because of the sections that are tricky rhythm wise with a lot of circles and 1/4 sliders. I know a lot of competent players that have a hard time single tapping 200 bpm, so i can only imagine that a lot of weaker players will not even come close to this.

~~maybe i'm just saying this so i can ask if i can map the diff to fill the spread~~ but still, it'd be good to have another diff.

can't have too much yuikonnu

captin1

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captin1 2014-03-24T03:15:45+00:00

http://puu.sh/7HcWM.zip doublepost, done~

also, add nijiiro chocolatier to tags? since this song is on that album

Skystar

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Skystar 2014-03-26T09:07:21+00:00

so yeah, fixed almost everything from Iree's mod besides:
Easy:
00:47:846 - the puush link is down rip
01:17:246 (1) - well ;w; but i find nowhere else to end...
Normal:
nah it's a normal and the song is 200 bpm ;w; that would be so hard to have 1/2
Insane (Extra now):
all fixed

Uploaded captin's diff btw, will find some mods as well for the diff before getting a bubble

kisata

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kisata 2014-03-26T12:52:49+00:00

Amamiya Yuko wrote:
Uploaded captin's diff btw, will find some mods as well for the diff before getting a bubble

hey look, a wild mod appears! hello capnit

Personally, I didn't think the original insane was that difficult. I can play it fine and it feels more like an insane than an actual Extra. captin's Insane is a nice addition to the mapset overall though; it plays well and slots in with the diff spread nicely so let's just roll with it.

[General]

Kiai time is inconsistent between NEKO's Hard and the rest of the diffs. That's fine of course, I don't think it's required that you fix it but I think all the diffs would benefit from the Kiai placement in the hard rather than none at all. The choruses give nice emphasis that would go well with Kiai.

[captin's Insane]

00:04:346 (5) - I would curve this around the opposite way; asthetically it would be more pleasing and would flow a bit better
00:05:996 (4) - I'm not sure how much I like four in this position. Flow wise it makes an odd triangle with 2 & 3 and is this sort of jerk up to the left. If there was a sharp punctuation in the music there I could understand but I really this would be better represent by a curved slider, but your call.
00:08:096 (2) - Curved slider would look better, or even just rotating it to some degree would make it look less wacky
00:09:146 (2,4) - idk???
00:10:646 (3,4,6,7) - I these gaps should be consistently snapped, especially in a less intense part like this. Would be a relatively simple fix too.
00:14:246 (6) - Don't see the point of this slider personally. There's hardly anything there on 00:14:246 - while there is a relatively strong stress on 00:14:396 - that I think you should definitely catch. Could try something like this?
00:28:946 (5) - There's two strong stresses in this slider, and it's right before a slight dip in intensity. Personally, I'd map this as two notes instead of a slider ;w; It would really make the rhythm there pop!
00:38:996 (2) - This would be MUCH better as an actual stream, it's basically the same thing as 00:39:596 (4,5,6,7,1) - anyways so I'm a bit curious why you did it with a repeat slider instead. The drums there are just ripe for a stream! It's just five notes too so it's not like it's really kicking up the difficulty if you had that in mind while doing that
00:42:296 (4) - This just barely pops up while 00:41:546 (2) - is there but i think it looks kind of funny ;;
00:45:146 (3,4,5) - Think it would play better in a more circular motion
00:59:846 (6) - make this distance snapped like the others (1.85-1.9x), looks bad right now; actually make this whole little section more consistent, all your jumps/gaps are close to each other in DS but not exactly the same and would be better if they were
01:18:146 (5) - use two circles instead of a slider
01:19:046 (1,1) - I thought about saying something earlier, but what about overlaying these on top of each other
01:26:996 (2) - same as earlier ;;
01:48:146 (5) - I think this should be two circles; it's easier to differentiate the two guitar notes here rather than in 01:47:846 (4) -
01:49:796 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the guitar here is oscillating at 1/2 and is basically low pitch higher pitch low high low high; I think it would be better if the
pattern was more of small jump big jump, small big, small big or something along those lines
01:53:246 (1,2,1,2) - i really think you should map the guitar here, perhaps with repeater sliders if you're not comfortable mapping a full streams; the guitar is really prominent in the solo here so it would make for more effective emphasis but that's just imo (you could still slap the drum hitsounds on the sliders/notes too!)
02:09:146 (2,3,4,5) - overlap pattern here looks not good
02:22:046 (1,2) - it doesn't sound like something is lining up here properly; i think the second part of her voice actually starts on 02:22:546 - (second 1/3 tick)
02:36:746 (1) - stack on 02:36:296 (7) - and have it point more downwards maybe?

This diff was pretty enjoyable :3

[Extra]

Nothing to really note here except could you really not make 02:18:296 (1) - any better looking ;w;

Other than that, plays quite well and is really fun!

Last edited by kisata 2014-03-26T13:18:43+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Skystar

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Skystar 2014-03-26T13:02:34+00:00

apaffy wrote:
a wild ~~mod~~neko appears!

kisata

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kisata 2014-03-26T13:15:03+00:00

Amamiya Yuko wrote:
a wild ~~mod~~neko appears!

neko, you say?

also, take a star!

Kodora

Kodora 2014-03-26T13:29:00+00:00

Yuko asked me to check new Insane, so...

[captin's Insane]

00:01:196 (4) - Linear slider doesn't flows here well, brobably re-arrange it a bit a better flow? something like this:

SPOILER
00:11:846 (8,9) - I personally prefer if you'd line up them with 00:12:596 (2) - for better flow
00:29:246 (1) - Ah, this spinner doesn't fit at all. Whole spinner section feels more like calm build-up while this spinner is too short, which give weird feelings while playing. Map this section please. If you really really want to keep it at least reduse volume at spinner and remove finish please, it sounds kinda weird here
00:38:846 (1) - Make 1/4 kickslider instead follow drums?
01:26:846 (1,2) - same as above
01:28:646 (1,2,3) - Start this build-up from 30% volume section. I understand your idea here but 25% is simple too quit here with such loud bgm
01:53:246 (1,2,1,2) - I'd prefer to see regular linears here, such curved sliders feels kinda out of place.
02:07:046 (3) - Stack with tail of 02:06:296 (1) - for estetical reasons?
02:14:696 - 02:18:296 - Ah, the whole section feels kinda too fast and doesn't fit song's tempo. I know, it is pain to do, but i highly prefer if you would use x0.75 SV here to give better feelings at this part while playing.
02:18:371 (1) - reduse volume at spinner and add whistle
02:20:096 (1) - whistle to head
02:26:096 (5) - Single circle works better with music.
02:43:646 (1,2) - same as at 00:38:846 (1) -

not much to say, decent diff
good luck

@Yuko: add captin to tags, and there are different combo-colours on neko's diff with no reason.

captin1

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captin1 2014-03-26T14:04:44+00:00

~~aaa i'll check once i get out of class~~

"apaffy"

[captin's Insane]

00:04:346 (5) - I would curve this around the opposite way; asthetically it would be more pleasing and would flow a bit better
00:05:996 (4) - I'm not sure how much I like four in this position. Flow wise it makes an odd triangle with 2 & 3 and is this sort of jerk up to the left. If there was a sharp punctuation in the music there I could understand but I really this would be better represent by a curved slider, but your call. moved 3
00:08:096 (2) - Curved slider would look better, or even just rotating it to some degree would make it look less wacky did the second
00:09:146 (2,4) - idk??? moved a few things around on my own
00:10:646 (3,4,6,7) - I these gaps should be consistently snapped, especially in a less intense part like this. Would be a relatively simple fix too.
00:14:246 (6) - Don't see the point of this slider personally. There's hardly anything there on 00:14:246 - while there is a relatively strong stress on 00:14:396 - that I think you should definitely catch. Could try something like this?
I like mine as is, I think it gives a cool feel with the vocal, and then puts more emphasis on 7 with the jump down
00:28:946 (5) - There's two strong stresses in this slider, and it's right before a slight dip in intensity. Personally, I'd map this as two notes instead of a slider ;w; It would really make the rhythm there pop! did somethin else
00:38:996 (2) - This would be MUCH better as an actual stream, it's basically the same thing as 00:39:596 (4,5,6,7,1) - anyways so I'm a bit curious why you did it with a repeat slider instead. The drums there are just ripe for a stream! It's just five notes too so it's not like it's really kicking up the difficulty if you had that in mind while doing that
00:42:296 (4) - This just barely pops up while 00:41:546 (2) - is there but i think it looks kind of funny ;; the way the pattern is now not really willing to change
00:45:146 (3,4,5) - Think it would play better in a more circular motion did the ctrl+g on 4 only, i think reversing 5 ruins the motion going into 1
00:59:846 (6) - make this distance snapped like the others (1.85-1.9x), looks bad right now; actually make this whole little section more consistent, all your jumps/gaps are close to each other in DS but not exactly the same and would be better if they were couple minor adjustments but this section is a little more based on the patterning than other ones so most of them fit, not really that noticeable if there's .1 difference
01:18:146 (5) - use two circles instead of a slider I tried that at first when i was mapping, didn't like it
01:19:046 (1,1) - I thought about saying something earlier, but what about overlaying these on top of each other no thanks, i like the open spacing here
01:26:996 (2) - same as earlier ;;
01:48:146 (5) - I think this should be two circles; it's easier to differentiate the two guitar notes here rather than in 01:47:846 (4) -
01:49:796 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the guitar here is oscillating at 1/2 and is basically low pitch higher pitch low high low high; I think it would be better if the
pattern was more of small jump big jump, small big, small big or something along those lines awesome idea, didn't do your pattern exactly but yeah
01:53:246 (1,2,1,2) - i really think you should map the guitar here, perhaps with repeater sliders if you're not comfortable mapping a full streams; the guitar is really prominent in the solo here so it would make for more effective emphasis but that's just imo (you could still slap the drum hitsounds on the sliders/notes too!) ehh i'll keep mine for now, i like the jumps
02:09:146 (2,3,4,5) - overlap pattern here looks not good ;w;
02:22:046 (1,2) - it doesn't sound like something is lining up here properly; i think the second part of her voice actually starts on 02:22:546 - (second 1/3 tick) meh it's a slider end so it's close enough, if i extend then a slidertick will show and that'll be ugly ;w;
02:36:746 (1) - stack on 02:36:296 (7) - and have it point more downwards maybe? ha if i'm gonna stack i'm gonna point it upwards for the drastic movement

This diff was pretty enjoyable :3
apaffy for bat pls

Other than that, plays quite well and is really fun!

"Kodora"

Yuko asked me to check new Insane, so...

[captin's Insane]

00:01:196 (4) - Linear slider doesn't flows here well, brobably re-arrange it a bit a better flow? something like this:

SPOILER
00:11:846 (8,9) - I personally prefer if you'd line up them with 00:12:596 (2) - for better flow was going for the angle change on the new phrase, so i rotated the opposite way a little more with these so it's more obvious
00:29:246 (1) - Ah, this spinner doesn't fit at all. Whole spinner section feels more like calm build-up while this spinner is too short, which give weird feelings while playing. Map this section please. If you really really want to keep it at least reduse volume at spinner and remove finish please, it sounds kinda weird here reduced volume~
00:38:846 (1) - Make 1/4 kickslider instead follow drums?
01:26:846 (1,2) - same as above
01:28:646 (1,2,3) - Start this build-up from 30% volume section. I understand your idea here but 25% is simple too quit here with such loud bgm
01:53:246 (1,2,1,2) - I'd prefer to see regular linears here, such curved sliders feels kinda out of place.
02:07:046 (3) - Stack with tail of 02:06:296 (1) - for estetical reasons?
02:14:696 - 02:18:296 - Ah, the whole section feels kinda too fast and doesn't fit song's tempo. I know, it is pain to do, but i highly prefer if you would use x0.75 SV here to give better feelings at this part while playing. I think .75 is a bit too slow since the song is still quite strong, but I went down to .9
02:18:371 (1) - reduse volume at spinner and add whistle spinner is already at 5% o.o added whistle tho
02:20:096 (1) - whistle to head mmm no thanks, I want the emphasis to be on 2
02:26:096 (5) - Single circle works better with music. probably lol
02:43:646 (1,2) - same as at 00:38:846 (1) -

not much to say, decent diff
good luck

@Yuko: add captin to tags, and there are different combo-colours on neko's diff with no reason.

no reply is fixed
whee thanks~

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: genjitsugame.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 31046
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.9

[Metadata]
Title:Genjitsu Game
TitleUnicode:現実ゲーム
Artist:yuikonnu
ArtistUnicode:ゆいこんぬ
Creator:Amamiya Yuko
Version:captin's Insane
Source:
Tags:reality N E K O c84
BeatmapID:391520
BeatmapSetID:112210

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.75
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples
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Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-03-27T00:35:16+00:00

Hi hi hi ~

[General]

Inconsistency in combo colours
Remove kiai on Neko's diff?
countdown is really necessary?

[Capitiny]

00:02:621 , 00:02:771 I'm a bit sad, since you could map that spots following the melody nicely <3 also is consistent with 00:06:671 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - , maybe like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1455769
00:05:846 (3,4) - ctrl G the rhythm? will follow the music better, since the slider will start with the strong sound in the music
00:07:646 (5,1,2) - not a fan of this rhythm,you know I complain so much for slider starting on upbeats, why don't make this consistent with the one at 00:02:846 (1,2,3) -
00:09:296 (3,5) - try to avoid the overlap?
00:13:046 (3,4) - same as 00:05:846 -, also you can check how yuko diff work better with this rhythm
00:10:046 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - your combos starting to get in 2 stanzas, and before you was using 1 not sure if is intentional but take a look on this sectionm since I preffer consistency hue
00:20:696 (1) - finish sound pretty unfitting here, just keep the clap
00:26:396 (4) - i feel this not nice with music, maybe just m, but anyways what about to add just 2 circles (1/2 slider could work too) like: http://puu.sh/7KR8o.jpg if for some reason you don't agree then add a circle here 00:26:771 -, will be like: http://puu.sh/7KRfW.jpg
00:38:846 (1,2) - consider to use less distance here, since is really hard to notice the 1/4 gap in first play
00:45:746 (5) - CTRL G, for better flow?
00:58:046 (1) - same with combos in this section, I'm getting your idea about the long combos in the slow sections, anyways both ways work thought
00:59:846 (6,7) - what about 1/2 repeat slider, following the vocals line, sinceyour current way feel really empty IMO, also you started to follow the vocals here 01:01:496 (6,7) - , will be nice for consistency
01:04:646 (6,7) - same as above
01:10:046 (1,2) - similar as 00:05:846 , also with 01:10:196 (2) - you are breaking the vocals stress at 01:10:346
01:17:171 feel a bit weird how you ignore this one,but you mapped the one at 01:17:771
01:30:221 I want to click some here orz, that spot mapped will improve a lot the rhythm there
01:53:246 (1,2,1,2) -what about to use some 1/4 repeats, since your current way doesn't fit the music nicely, this don't mind your way is wrong, but after looking how cool this sound 01:54:746 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - , I really think you can improve the first part <:
02:03:746 (5) - use two circles to keep the vocal line at 02:03:896
02:20:096 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - some spots feel empty, I'll like if you try to follow the vocals there too, but again just my preference
02:43:646 (1,2) - well this pattern can be really questionable and not intuitive to play :/, maybe can you consider another way here? just as example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1455846

GL awesome song and mapset!

captin1

osu! Alumni

2,595 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2014-03-27T03:09:35+00:00

"Natsu"

Hi hi hi ~

[Capitiny]

00:02:621 , 00:02:771 I'm a bit sad, since you could map that spots following the melody nicely <3 also is consistent with 00:06:671 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - , maybe like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1455769 no thanks i like the variety and motion from the slider
00:05:846 (3,4) - ctrl G the rhythm? will follow the music better, since the slider will start with the strong sound in the music i really like how this plays right now, so sorry
00:07:646 (5,1,2) - not a fan of this rhythm,you know I complain so much for slider starting on upbeats, why don't make this consistent with the one at 00:02:846 (1,2,3) - because the music is different, i want 00:08:096 (2) - to have a start and if I did the rhythm before it would be on the repeat
00:09:296 (3,5) - try to avoid the overlap? the overlap is the pattern, so i made that more clear
00:13:046 (3,4) - same as 00:05:846 -, also you can check how yuko diff work better with this rhythm I think mine is fine
00:10:046 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - your combos starting to get in 2 stanzas, and before you was using 1 not sure if is intentional but take a look on this sectionm since I preffer consistency hue the two bar combo is to represent the fact that the song is in a more halftime feel here
00:20:696 (1) - finish sound pretty unfitting here, just keep the clap ehhhh i like the impacts for this, but i'll consider
00:26:396 (4) - i feel this not nice with music, maybe just m, but anyways what about to add just 2 circles (1/2 slider could work too) like: http://puu.sh/7KR8o.jpg if for some reason you don't agree then add a circle here 00:26:771 -, will be like: http://puu.sh/7KRfW.jpg did something similar to your ideas here
00:38:846 (1,2) - consider to use less distance here, since is really hard to notice the 1/4 gap in first play kk
00:45:746 (5) - CTRL G, for better flow? this odd flow is intentional, since I want the end of 5 to point away from 1 after although i'll move it some to help
00:58:046 (1) - same with combos in this section, I'm getting your idea about the long combos in the slow sections, anyways both ways work thought yep
00:59:846 (6,7) - what about 1/2 repeat slider, following the vocals line, sinceyour current way feel really empty IMO, also you started to follow the vocals here 01:01:496 (6,7) - , will be nice for consistency I like the rhythmic break, and I'm still following drum at this point
01:04:646 (6,7) - same as above ^
01:10:046 (1,2) - similar as 00:05:846 , also with 01:10:196 (2) - you are breaking the vocals stress at 01:10:346 I think it's fine personally
01:17:171 feel a bit weird how you ignore this one,but you mapped the one at 01:17:771 kk
01:30:221 I want to click some here orz, that spot mapped will improve a lot the rhythm there hmmm don't think so, since it would be a triplet going into a red tick, which would feel a bit odd to me
01:53:246 (1,2,1,2) -what about to use some 1/4 repeats, since your current way doesn't fit the music nicely, this don't mind your way is wrong, but after looking how cool this sound 01:54:746 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - , I really think you can improve the first part <: oh fineee
02:03:746 (5) - use two circles to keep the vocal line at 02:03:896 kk
02:20:096 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - some spots feel empty, I'll like if you try to follow the vocals there too, but again just my preference i like this stufff it's pretty
02:43:646 (1,2) - well this pattern can be really questionable and not intuitive to play :/, maybe can you consider another way here? just as example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1455846 I don't see the big issue, the 1/4 gap is pretty much consistent since players will just hit the head of 2 and stop (why do people always forget this?) and i personally prefer to keep repeat sliders away from the streams right after because of that

GL awesome song and mapset!

Natsu wrote:
[*]02:43:646 (1,2) - well this pattern can be really questionable and not intuitive to play :/, maybe can you consider another way here? just as example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1455846 I don't see the big issue, the 1/4 gap is pretty much consistent since players will just hit the head of 2 and stop (why do people always forget this?) and i personally prefer to keep repeat sliders away from the streams right after because of that

I meant there is not way to know how many repeats this have 02:43:796 (2) - , mainly cuz you didn't use a repeat here 02:43:646 (1) - changing the rhythm can help thought :

since I don't see a reason to have a slider alone and then other with 2 repeats, maybe just me

talked about this irc and kkk

#BLAMENATSU2014 thanks baka

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Natsu

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Natsu 2014-03-27T03:14:29+00:00

[*]02:43:646 (1,2) - well this pattern can be really questionable and not intuitive to play :/, maybe can you consider another way here? just as example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1455846 I don't see the big issue, the 1/4 gap is pretty much consistent since players will just hit the head of 2 and stop (why do people always forget this?) and i personally prefer to keep repeat sliders away from the streams right after because of that

I meant there is not way to know how many repeats this have 02:43:796 (2) - , mainly cuz you didn't use a repeat here 02:43:646 (1) - changing the rhythm can help thought :

since I don't see a reason to have a slider alone and then other with 2 repeats, maybe just me

Skystar

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Skystar 2014-03-27T11:12:56+00:00

fixed the colors, kiais and countdowns, updated!

captin1

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captin1 2014-03-27T13:12:18+00:00

still don't have captin1 in tags tho? :p

Skystar

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Skystar 2014-03-27T14:51:25+00:00

blame me lol

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Kurai 2014-04-07T10:26:02+00:00

The mapset is pretty good in general! I'm not going to nazimod it, there is no need for that :q

There is just one thing that bothers me, why do you only use HP draain 6 in the Extra difficulty? It is supposed to be extremely difficult, so why do you make it easy to pass? (I even cleared it myself o.o). It'd be more suitable to use HP Drain 7 here!

Fix this (if you agree with me) and I'll bubble the set!

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