This is technically my second time modding-- so take these suggestions with a grain of salt
[Normal] 00:33:042 (1,2) - This part threw me off a bit, Maybe you should replace these notes with the slider just before it (00:31:561 (3))?
01:20:820 (5,6) - Slight inconsistency, but you didn't have beats placed on the echo voices at the beginning of the song, So remove these or add beats at the beginning?
01:32:672 (5,6) - ^
02:03:412 (8,9) - Spacing, they're a bit too close together
I notice you too use 0.8x spacing between notes, but 1.0x spacing in between combos, however, you started doing this at about 01:18, was this on purpose or did you mean to do it through the beginning part too? (As you can tell, I like consistency lol )
Your rhythm seems to be following the vocals for most of the song-- the following notes aren't placed on vocals (I think it sounds a little better with them removed, but since they are consistent throughout the song, it's fine if you leave them)
00:50:820 (4)
01:02:672 (5)
01:56:005 (4)
02:07:857 (5)
02:43:412 (4)
02:55:264 (5)
Also, some of the beats stacked on top of each other seem a bit too difficult/awkward compared to the rest of the difficulty. If this is going to be your easiest difficulty, you should probably try these changes (If not, you don't have to since it does make it quite a bit easier)
If you want to try out the following changes, copy a temporary difficulty and change it in case you don't like it:
SPOILER00:49:015 (1) - Remove
00:58:412 (9) - ^
01:01:005 (2) - ^
01:03:227 (2) - ^
01:08:412 (1) - ^
01:36:931 (4) - ^ (Actually instead of removing some of these you could also make a short slider from the previous note)
01:38:412 (2) - ^
01:54:338 (1) - ^
02:01:746 (1) - ^ (And a lot of these notes are actually on words like 'I' or 'the' that are sung quicker and quieter than the other words)
02:03:598 (9) - ^
02:06:019 (2) - ^
02:08:412 (2) - ^
02:13:598 (1) - ^
02:21:005 (1) - ^
02:33:042 (2) - ^
02:32:857 (1,2,3) - This tends to be a bit trickier to fix, I recommend deleting 1 and making 2->3 a slider
02:41:746 (1) - Remove
02:49:153 (1) - ^
02:53:598 (2) - ^
02:55:820 (2) - ^
(Obviously, you'll have to double check the spacings after removing some of these)
[Hard]I actually don't mind the extra spacing between combos, as long as the new combos are in the right spots, the jumps are perfect!
00:18:227 - 00:24:153 - I really love this part for some reason
00:30:079 - 00:33:968 - This is almost the same series of notes as the section above, but I don't like this part as much (I know, I'm strange
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00:58:227 (1,2,3,4,5) - This may sound confusing, but this whole section follows both the drums and the vocals. The only difference is note #4. Since you mostly only follow drums when there are no vocals, I think you should remove #4 so it follows the vocals rather than the drums. (Did that make sense? lol)
00:56:375 (8,1) - I always mess up at this spot because of that spacing, I think you should make 8 a new combo and remove the new combo on 1, then adjust the spacing accordingly.
01:08:227 (8,1) - ^ Same thing, however this one didn't mess me up as bad for some reason..
02:01:561 (8,1) - ^
02:04:153 (4) - Remove due to beat/vocals thing again
02:13:412 (8,1) - The spacing seems right as to what I've been suggesting, so this doesn't match your new combo/spacing theory.
02:48:968 (8,1) - (Similar to above issues, you'll get it when you see the note lol)
02:51:561 (4) - ^
03:00:820 (8,1) - ^
03:17:857 (6,7,8,9) - Once again, you start following the drums here, I think it flows better if you remove 6 and 8 (and perhaps make it a cool jump, too! lol)
Completely optional, but maybe move the spinner to 03:27:857, then add a beat at 03:26:931 and 03:27:487 (Or maybe replace the last beat with the spinner)
Anyways, wow, that went a bit longer than I planned on haha-- And as I hinted earlier, I definitely won't be offended if you choose to ignore any of my advice
It's a fun map! Good luck with it!