happy623 wrote:

shooooooooooooooot

Fycho wrote:

因为太喜欢这曲子所以来稍微提点建议.-.

[Mod Info]

1. Black: Suggestions
2. Blue: Importance.You might consider
3. Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]
Fine.

[Insane]

1. 02:06:673 (3) –换成双折返然后离02:06:973 (4) –近点，我觉得节奏上好点。改成了三连跟00:58:273 (3,4,5) 一致
2. 02:18:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) –波浪形怎么样？比单一的弧度美观度要好点，大概这样的，好
   SPOILER

   
3. 03:07:573 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) –其实我觉得这个自创的节奏不怎么好，还不如跟人声。好吧很多人都这么说就改了吧
4. 03:09:673 (1,2) –这里03:09:673 –比03:09:973 –要强很多，所以我建议03:09:073 (4,1) –间距比03:09:673 (1,2) –大点。嗯
5. 03:13:873 (3,4,5) –换成五连吧，不建议自创白线三连。这种节奏之前用过很多次，因为个人觉得三连相比五连打起来要爽随意就保留这个了
6. 03:19:798 –我建议加个circle，这块节奏密度相对较小。这里我把三连加到了03:20:323 (5,6,1) 所以这里留空，一般我都是一小节有一个三连所以这里不想加太多

[Hard]

1. 00:13:273 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) –这个我在打的时候下意识的00:17:473 (4,5) –以为这两个没有…这干脆都跟人声别跟钢琴了，00:15:673 (1,2) –这和之前很多钢琴都忽略了，在没人声的地方突然来跟钢琴节奏密度变大有点违和。
2. 00:19:273 (5,6,7) –这也同理，钢琴音这里是一整句，全跟钢琴或者不跟钢琴的话反而还更好，而前半人声后半跟不完全的钢琴不怎么好。这里和上面都加了一些跟钢琴的音，删note导致密度太小的话打hr会悲剧
3. 00:29:923 (4,1) –有点近。和前面1,2,3比起来看。改了
4. 01:06:973 (4,1) –不建议1.0间距，可以放个小跳，配合finish音效。加到1.3了
5. 01:52:123 (3) –这打起来挺违和，可能是中间白线上既有人声又有鼓音的原因，强烈建议改成1/2短滑条。
6. 02:49:723 (3) –和上面的差不多，中间白线上有鼓音，而看你02:48:073 (1,2) –这些等等都是跟着鼓点过来的，这个长滑条打起来就… 都改了
7. 03:07:573 (1,2,3) –同insane。好
8. 03:09:073 (5) –其实这个可以换成3/4滑条233 这里打算跟insane节奏一样
9. 03:17:173 (3,4) –倾斜程度一样？嗯
10. 03:38:173 (4) –这间距可以比之前03:37:573 (2) –来的大点。嗯可以

Fr33z3R wrote:

Star. =w=

TestApple wrote:

oooo nice map~ teach how to slider art pls. faved~

btw have 6 stars because "(93 maps higher on the list)" won't go below 100 until i gave my 6th.

1. 00:02:473 - What's the point of this being a red timing setction? Maybe you forgot to make it green.

1. 00:22:423 (6,7,8,9) - This played better the way you had it before imo. It's confusing to read the stream of only 4 after the big jump, maybe you if you reduced spacing between 5 and 6... Either way I think it's way more fitting with the music like this:
   
   Example

   
2. 03:44:473 - Maybe 1.1 SV is best so the player can get life from the spinner easier after failing that last stream, because that's normal to do right?.

1. 03:11:473 (3) - I'd like to see it replaced with a 1/2 slider to lead into 03:11:473 (3). If you could make it work I feel it could spice up this climax.

1. 00:11:473 (5) - Maybe you'd prefer like this to follow the music:
   
   Example

   

1. 03:44:473 (1) - Is this alright to have the end overlapping the head?

kantokun wrote:

mod~

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  add Secret (english name) in tag sure
  and Nico Nico Douga in source we are no longer using nico nico douga as source due to a recent rule change, but i will put it in tags

UnitedWeSin wrote:

A wild mod appears. a wild UWS appears

[General]

1. 00:02:473 - What's the point of this being a red timing setction? Maybe you forgot to make it green.

its a stanza reset so that nightcore mod has cymbal finishes landing in correct places (else you get random finishes in places like 00:06:073 - 00:10:873 etc.

[Insane]

1. 00:22:423 (6,7,8,9) - This played better the way you had it before imo. It's confusing to read the stream of only 4 after the big jump, maybe you if you reduced spacing between 5 and 6... Either way I think it's way more fitting with the music like this: i think i will just make this easier via repeat slider to rid all ambiguity here (troll composer)
   
   Example

   
2. 03:44:473 - Maybe 1.1 SV is best so the player can get life from the spinner easier after failing that last stream, because that's normal to do right?. meant to use 1.0 here xD

[Hard]

1. 03:11:473 (3) - I'd like to see it replaced with a 1/2 slider to lead into 03:11:473 (3). If you could make it work I feel it could spice up this climax. yes

Dat symmetry. mmmm

[Normal]

1. 00:11:473 (5) - Maybe you'd prefer like this to follow the music: sure
   
   Example

   

[Easy]

1. 03:44:473 (1) - Is this alright to have the end overlapping the head? i got this

Trololol. Sorry it took so long.
Why do you get all of Muyu's stars I want some. harass him for testplays

LunarSakuya wrote:

yaranaika