Hi~ request via PM in-game. sori lagi mager ><" baru ngerjain sekarang
[General]
for overall standard diff imo need to reduce whistle using start from 00:34:901 - it's good for accent but too much just sounds annoying
[Easy]
00:20:866 (3) - hardly related to previous slider, not look really good even you mean to blanket next slider. make it more curvy near slider head
00:33:497 (1,2,3,4) - not recommend stacked notes for easy, it's hard to read for beginners. you can ignore this if you see ranked maps that has this kind of notes on easy (haven't play much recent maps :<)
01:05:778 (1) - make it blanket slider 01:07:181 (2) - ?
pretty good (so much slider art
) just a little afraid of so much slider stacking one another. it loooks good but dunno, notes on easy usually not overlap eah other. need opinion for this point
[Normal]
check spacing for every notes, there're some notes that have 1.2x spacing. be consistent
[Hard]
01:12:795 (4,5,6) - not really like this one. not only because of its sudden jump but also I'm not really get the pattern. suggest to reduce (5) spacing or increase (6) spacing
01:15:252 (2,3,1) - not look symmetry between (2) and (1). make (3) further till they looks similiar, maybe like this
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1228137[Crowds]
(I can't play insane, so I just said something auto-play based)
00:27:883 (3,4,5) - er... seriously? I don't know it is 1/4 notes before I look at ticks
00:26:304 (5) - curve it below? it looks good with next slider
00:39:638 (2,3,4,5) - little suggestion to make it play interesting
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1228204 and it still need some arrangement (?). feel free to ignore~
00:53:146 (1,2,3,4) - pattern suggestions (
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1228170 or
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1228173 ). imo (1) too far from spinner center
[Muzukashii]
it's good but you can add triplets in this diff (when it fits the song, especially in kiai section), still looks simple
[Oni]
pretty much overmapped imo (triplets spam and such). there're some unneeded finishes too, some can be made into triplets with notes before them.
that's all for now. for taiko I just give my overall opinion for now, might look at it later~ for standard actually I want to nazi your hitsound, but well... just pretty lazy. tell me if you want it
EDIT: sori lagi baru ngemod taiko-nya D:
[Muzukashii]
00:14:374 (8,9,10,11,12) - not really follow the pitch, alternate pattern ddkdk (follow drum) or dkddk (follow vocal)
00:24:023 (49,50,51,52,53,54) - in previous pattern you follow drum but here you follow vocal
00:25:602 (56,57,58,59,60) - same as 00:14:374 (8,9,10,11,12)
00:50:339 (153) - D sounds better here
01:05:252 (213) - d, drum sounds low here
[Oni]
00:59:637 (28,29,30,31,32,33,34) - delete (29)? don't push stream when it doesn't fit
01:07:006 (81,82,83) - delete (82), triplet doesn't fit well here
sebenarnya buat oni masih rada overmap, tapi imo fine2 aja kok. gl~