Taylor Swift - Last Christmas · forum

Asphyxia

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Asphyxia 2013-12-15T14:35:24+00:00

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Yoeri

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Joined March 2012

Yoeri 2013-12-15T17:58:34+00:00

ChivaCookie wrote:
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02:47:491 (3) - I dont think that whistle fit. It sounds off. Doesn't do nice with the song. It doesnt... fit... FINE OMG
00:29:646 (1,2) - this doesn't look good. dunno. it looks very pressed just like you didn't know what to do there. Maybe if you go down with 1 you can do something better looking. This looks to forced... Changed.
00:32:749 (4,5,6) - i'd strg + j this vor better flow. this way you only change the way 2 times not 3. strg? You Germans and your funny keyboards. Changed though.
01:57:577 (2,3,4) - this could be difficult to read for newer players. dunno. it's not wrong just wanted to point that out. Changed.

Kyshiro wrote:
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I feel like this diff lacks hitsounds, consider using a few whistles, i'll list some while modding Took all of them.
00:22:405 (2) - This slider should end 1/2 earlier, thats where the beat is and where the word ends Done.
00:33:784 (1) - Add whistle at end
00:35:853 (3) - Add a whistle on the head and reverse, remove the one from the end, sounds a lot better
00:38:439 (2) - Whistle
00:38:956 (4) - whistle on start
00:40:249 (6) - ^
00:42:577 (2) - ^
00:44:387 (4) - Whistle on reverse
00:44:387 (4,5) - The gap here sounds very odd, try arranging something like this: http://puu.sh/5MU8W.jpg Don't really like it.
01:29:387 (3,4,5) - This part played a bit weird because you're not following the vocals properly, 01:29:387 (3) - add a repeat, 01:30:681 (5) - move this one 1/2 further (Don't forget to adjust the hitsounds Didn't add the return but did move (5).
01:36:629 (3,4) - I think this overlap is pretty ugly and unnecessary > http://puu.sh/5MTlc.jpg Fixed.
01:52:405 (1) - This slider should end 1/2 earlier, thats where the beat is and where the word ends Done.
01:57:577 (2,3,4) - This doesn't really look that fantastic, and is kind of hard to read for a new player, I suggest making this a 1/2 slider with a reverse instead Mhm.
02:09:732 (3,4) - again that overlap >: make the spacing 1,1x if necessary, would be a lot better to avoid that overlap Done.
02:19:301 (3) - This slider should start 1/2 later, you might want to add a 1/2 slider before this from 02:18:784 - till 02:19:043 - or you could add a note at 02:19:043 - Changed.
02:47:491 (3) - The whistle on the slidertrack sounds really weird, would be better to remove it, also since this is the first time you use it, it'd weird and random to put it here dhsafacernwaiucryweaoiufhuisofzvbnerwaitu98a74foirehgdfo
02:55:249 (2) - ^ a

Stefan

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Stefan 2013-12-17T14:52:46+00:00

ChivaCookie wrote:
Hi. I was forced to mod. Because Ayu sux.
SPOILER
that song too

Easy

01:22:922 (3,2) - Stack them properly. I dont need a reason for this, because it's just for the looks. ikr
01:25:508 (2,3) - not good flow. I know it's an easy and all but if you strg + g 3 it would play better. You'd have to rearrange the pattern after this, though. Honestly do not see the worth of changing this.

Nothing else.

Kyshiro wrote:
Easy
It's really weird having a CS4 easy while the normal is CS3, I suggest you use CS3 for the easy too Looks terrible now, changed.
HP drain, OD and AR - 1 AR3 is pretty cool :c HP/OD doesn't need to be changed that urgent.
00:29:646 (4) - I love you ˙ ͜ʟ˙
01:35:853 (4) - The whistle on this end sounds a bit weird, Would be better if it was removed
01:37:663 (1) - Add finish
02:29:646 (1) - Either make it clear that this wasn't supposed to be symmetric, or make it perfectly symmetric, it kind of looks like a failed attempt to make a symmetric slider right now Ah.. okay.
02:43:870 (1) - Add finish
03:16:974 (1) - finish god dangit. OMG I SWEAR I HAVE ADDED A FINISH THERE..,.,.. Y IZ DIS HAPPEHNENG
This mapset is this close to being perfect.

Thanks!

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osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Taylor Swift - Last Christmas - Kopie.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 133094
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Last Christmas
TitleUnicode:Last Christmas
Artist:Taylor Swift
ArtistUnicode:Taylor Swift
Creator:Ayu
Version:Easy
Source:
Tags:yoeri stefan xmas cover
BeatmapID:332014
BeatmapSetID:131023

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
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SliderTickRate:1

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Dangaard

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Joined July 2008

Dangaard 2013-12-20T23:03:42+00:00

Is there a storyboard missing by any chance? The background image is quite plain.

Ayu

1,126 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

Ayu 2013-12-21T01:37:20+00:00

I thought about it but wasn't sure, especially because I don't really have any experience in making good storyboards myself. I'm quite the minimalist though, so the background appealed good to me.

Irreversible

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Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2013-12-22T15:22:31+00:00

Ok, let's give it a try then

General

Well.. maybe use a Christmas tree as Background? This Wood stuff seems really bland..

Easy

Rename to Stefan’s Easy, this will help recognizing the guy who actually mapped it. Well, just me maybe.

I guess some sliderticks could be hitsounded, such as 00:21:370 (1) - this one for example.. Or is it on purpose, that you didn’t do that?

00:52:405 (3) - why this finish?
01:45:163 (2) - Yeah, I definetly would add hitsounds on the slider ticks. It sounds really empty without
01:52:405 (1) - Nice slider!
02:15:163 (2,3) - I would actually CTRL + G the rhyth here, it fits the song more overall, because “heart” sounds like a single circle for me (02:16:197 (3) - )
02:17:232 (1,3) - And agian, the sliderticks.

Really nice map, Stefan! Well done.

Normal

Yoeri’s Normal? D:

00:26:284 (2) - Sounds a bit too harsh imo. I would extend it by ½, even if it doesn’t follow the lyrics then - it will sound nicer to listen to, also you can hitsound it more properly then.
00:33:784 (1) - to the Kiai: Please add some whistles. It sounds really boring, adding one every second and fourth white tick sounds pretty good imo! http://puu.sh/5UWew.jpg This means, you could add one on each slider end, and maybe add a finish on the slider head of 1.
00:44:387 (4,5) - I personally would add a single circle here. With this reverse, the rhythm sounds very weird again, sometimes it’s better to keep a good and easy structure.

The rhythm you’ve placed was very good and clean, except the few things i pointed up above. If you fix them, I guess it’s a really good normal. And please, try to hitsound the part shown above! If you need further help, I can help you more for sure.

Hard

01:38:439 (1) - Sounds a bit empty without hitsound :O You could add one to keep consistency and to keep the cool effect on that pattern.

Good hard, I enjoyed it really much.

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Ayu

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Ayu 2013-12-22T15:32:27+00:00

Irreversible wrote:
Ok, let's give it a try then

General

Well.. maybe use a Christmas tree as Background? This Wood stuff seems really bland.. Still think it's okay. I know that it's pretty minimalist, but then still it's fine imo. pls i hope i made my point clear i suck

Easy

Rename to Stefan’s Easy, this will help recognizing the guy who actually mapped it. Well, just me maybe. I'd rather keep it "Easy / Normal / Hard" otherwise it'd look terrible since I actually only made one difficulty myself

Normal

Yoeri’s Normal? D: ^ o:

Hard

01:38:439 (1) - Sounds a bit empty without hitsound :O You could add one to keep consistency and to keep the cool effect on that pattern. Put Drum Sampleset

Good hard, I enjoyed it really much. ♥♥♥

call me back

waiting for Stefan and Yoeri

Ayu

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Ayu 2013-12-22T16:12:58+00:00

Yoeri wrote:
Irreversible wrote:
Normal

Yoeri’s Normal? D:

00:26:284 (2) - Sounds a bit too harsh imo. I would extend it by ½, even if it doesn’t follow the lyrics then - it will sound nicer to listen to, also you can hitsound it more properly then. Done.
00:33:784 (1) - to the Kiai: Please add some whistles. It sounds really boring, adding one every second and fourth white tick sounds pretty good imo! http://puu.sh/5UWew.jpg This means, you could add one on each slider end, and maybe add a finish on the slider head of 1. Already applied the ones from Kyshiro's mod, but also added a few more now.
00:44:387 (4,5) - I personally would add a single circle here. With this reverse, the rhythm sounds very weird again, sometimes it’s better to keep a good and easy structure. Changed it. Kind of seems boring now though.

The rhythm you’ve placed was very good and clean, except the few things i pointed up above. If you fix them, I guess it’s a really good normal. And please, try to hitsound the part shown above! If you need further help, I can help you more for sure. Thanks!

Stefan

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Stefan 2013-12-22T17:11:21+00:00

Irreversible wrote:
Ok, let's give it a try then

General

Well.. maybe use a Christmas tree as Background? This Wood stuff seems really bland..

Easy

Rename to Stefan’s Easy, this will help recognizing the guy who actually mapped it. Well, just me maybe.

I guess some sliderticks could be hitsounded, such as 00:21:370 (1) - this one for example.. Or is it on purpose, that you didn’t do that?

00:52:405 (3) - why this finish? Removed.
01:45:163 (2) - Yeah, I definetly would add hitsounds on the slider ticks. It sounds really empty without Done.
01:52:405 (1) - Nice slider! Thank you =w="
02:15:163 (2,3) - I would actually CTRL + G the rhyth here, it fits the song more overall, because “heart” sounds like a single circle for me (02:16:197 (3) - ) I cannot agree with that, it personally sounds more natural with the current pattern.
02:17:232 (1,3) - And agian, the sliderticks. ye, ikr

Really nice map, Stefan! Well done.