Hey Konei~ here from M4M, My map is here https://osu.ppy.sh/s/123956
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- 00:21:530 (1) - Needs to be properly centered in the middle of the grid by moving this slider to the right a little bit, it will also fix spacing and other needed things.
- 00:42:398 (1) - Curve it less? there a bit of overlap going on this slider here : http://puu.sh/56HfK.jpg But if your trying to make 00:44:136 (3) - Be blanketed by the next slider coming after this, then alright
- 01:03:266 (1) - Ahaha, can you do a different slider here hehe, I don't see the purpose of this slider and why you need to make it the same as 00:58:049 (3) -
- 00:15:443 (2,3) - Should really be sliders, because I'm pretty sure you want this to match with 00:11:096 (1,2) - right? But it isn't and the next combo you should add more clicking than just two sliders
- 00:16:313 (1) - Better to make it line up with the previous note, its a bit off in the y axis
- 00:25:008 (1) - Also off symmetry a little bit :X
- 00:44:571 (4,5) - Why not make this symmetrical? Its to make this whole combo be symmetrical, it wouldn't make sense to get off symmetry here anyways.
- 00:52:832 (1,2) - You can be more creative and not use the same sliders like you did previously! it gets boring especially for the kiai, I think you should try this : http://puu.sh/570MM.jpg and do for the next slider too to keep the symmetry.
- 01:05:005 (2) - Flip it vertically would make more sense to me
- 01:19:786 (4) - This slider isn't symmetrical to 01:17:178 (1) - I think it should be , like said before your whole combo can have a better design and stay symmetrical
- 01:24:134 (1,2) - Do regular curved sliders like this : http://puu.sh/5711R.jpg
- 00:25:008 (1) - Change the sampleset to Normal and add a Finish or a whistle here? There a transition that should be signaled or have some sort of hitsound to signal it
- 00:07:183 (3) - Fix stacking here? its not at the same spot as 00:09:357 (1) - , rather you move the note than sliders unless you want to redo symmetry in that spot
- 00:27:942 (3) - Same thing as above, this note isn't at the same spot as 00:25:877 (2) -
- 00:41:528 (3) - So unatural blankets, fix by moving down and right more
- 00:43:050 (3) - Curve this slider please? also curve 00:43:919 (1) - , You should add more curved sliders that why! I mean try to do this : http://puu.sh/5761a.jpg Would be awesome
- 00:48:267 (3) - The certain straight movement of this curved slider after the 2nd slider point is driving me nuts, you need to move the end slider point down to the right and that'll make the movement of cursor much better
- 00:58:918 (2) - Move this circle to the spot of this slider's end : 00:57:614 (5) - to make your map cleaner.
- 01:18:591 (3) - Remove this slider, It feels quite weird to click on , even if the slider start's is lenient when you click it, it feels way better if you remove it and add a note at : 01:18:698 -
- 00:05:008 (4) - Why not add a note here? It doesn't make sense when you have a slider end 00:06:638 (3) - that codes for that same exact beat orz
- 00:07:073 - Same logic here? Why did you not add a note here but you added it at 00:05:334 (5) -
- 01:01:091 (5,6,7,8) - Don't need to stack these all the time LMAO , Try to space them and come up with something better!
- 00:54:136 (8,9,10,11) - ^
- 00:23:268 (1) - I'd say remove the new combo here because it's part of the symmetrical pattern of the previous 4 notes
- 00:23:594 (6) - Add it here if you do above
- 01:14:786 (2,3,4,5) - Try for a more simply rhythm here, involving reverse arrow sliders since this is the less-click and calm part.