- Artist: DECO*27
- Title: Light Lag feat. topi
- Title: ライトラグ feat. とぴ
Offset I found to be a bit off: 1402 (-3ms off what you have currently)
I highly suggest changing the length of the kiais. For example:
- First one to end on 01:29:404 -.
- Second to end on 03:04:071 -.
Note: All of these mods are before the offset change has been implemented.
- 00:42:404 (1,2,3) - Seems a bit too clustered and confusing for beginners to be able to read.
- 00:58:738 (4) - I would NC this myself just due to the overall length of time the previous three sliders held. It also caters towards the guitarist's change in tone with this beat.
- 01:03:904 (2) - Can't say I was a fan of this as it sounded off. It sounds and plays much better if you kick the slider off on 01:03:738 - instead.
- 01:05:404 (3) - NC this due to the vocal and instrumental change.
- 01:16:071 (4) - NC on this due to the vocal change.
- 01:17:404 (3) - I really think this would have been enjoyable with a repeat chucked onto it. With the repeat it of gives the feeling that you're playing that guitar riff itself.
- 01:28:071 (1) - This is a bit too sudden of a slider velocity drop; I would suggest to raise it up to around 0.85 - 0.9 at most.
- 01:29:404 (1) - This would have been good for a bit of slider art since it's a bit daunting for newer players to cope with dual spinners.
- 01:42:737 (3) - Would NC for the vocal change.
- 01:48:070 (3) - Same as above.
- 01:50:404 (1) - Take the NC off this and add it to 01:50:737 (2) - instead.
- 01:53:404 (4) - NC here due to the vocal phrase.
- 02:26:071 (1) - Would suggest to move this so it doesn't stack onto the next slider.
- 02:26:738 (2) - NC this.
- 02:37:404 (1,2) - Errr, lol overlap? Fix this please.
- 02:40:071 (3) - NC this for the change in vocal pace.
- 02:42:071 (4) - This I would normally say to unstack but it fits the song perfectly so it can stay.
- 02:45:404 (3) - NC on this for a new vocal phrase.
- 02:56:070 (3) - NC on this; 02:57:404 (1) - remove the NC here and place it on 02:58:737 (3) - instead.
- 03:02:737 (1) - Same thing as before with the sudden velocity change and I would highly suggest to end this on 03:03:738 - instead.
- 03:04:071 - If you did like that suggestion earlier about a slider art instead of this spinner duplicate the same here.
- 03:22:738 (4,5) - Would be better to just end this on a spinner instead in my opinion.
- 00:23:404 (2,2) - Overlap here is a bit messy, tidy it up.
- 01:06:738 (3,4,5,6) - What about swapping these beats out for a 1/2 slider that repeats the same length of time?
- 01:09:738 (3,4) - CTRL + G on the rhythm here that way people can catch the vocals?
- 01:18:738 (1) - Seems weird having this as 1/2 repeat; would suggest to change it to 1/1 with the single repeat.
- 01:21:404 (1) - Same as above.
- 01:28:071 (1) - End this on 01:29:071 - instead with a new circle on 01:29:404 - instead?
- 01:40:737 (4) - Would prefer this to end 1/2 tick earlier for the vocal focus to be kept.
- 02:26:738 (3) - NC this.
- 02:33:071 (1) - Remove the NC here and place it on 02:33:404 (2) - instead.
- 02:34:738 (5,1) - Perfectly stack these please.
- 02:38:904 (4,1) - Fairly large jump out of nowhere.
- 02:40:071 (1,2,3) - This is rather hideous on the amount of overlaps that happened in my opinion. Could you possibly tidy this area up?
- 02:42:404 - I know you prefer mapping on instrumentals but would it be too much to ask for a circle here so people can continue playing the vocal rhythm?
- 02:52:904 (4,5) - Kind of confusing to some people as they would try to aim at the (5) first, stack them instead?
- 02:55:404 (4) - Not a fan of this at all. Swap it out for a 1/2 + repeat.
- 03:02:738 (1) - Same as previous slider; if you don't like the change ignore it.
- 03:24:738 (4,5,6,7) - Swap for a 1/2 slider with two repeats attached?
Considering how low the SV was for the Normal it just feels really awkward and a massive difficulty increase for the swap into the Hard difficulty; it just feels too abrupt which would throw a lot of people off.
The only possible suggestion I could offer for this would be to either rework your Normal (happy) to cater towards an increase in slider velocity or for Sharp's Hard to be dropped in value slightly.
Just going to post this as a general comment on the difficulty is some of the overlaps are quite ugly to look at and play equally as awkward while some work, others just don't.
Second kiai's start is unsnapped (3ms early).
- 00:23:404 (2,3) - This is rather awkward to play and look at.
- 00:27:404 (3,3) - Basically covers up the slider ends with each other.
- 00:36:071 (1,2) - Same as 23:404.
- 00:39:071 (5,6) - Ugh, this was awkward to play in my opinion.
- 00:58:738 (1,2) - Flow is sort of killed here.
- 01:09:404 (5,6,7) - Since I wasn't really paying attention on reading this I actually thought it played as (5,7,6) instead of what it is. Swap the (6,7) around and place 7 on top of the 01:10:238 (1) - .
- 01:10:238 (1,2,3) - Awkward to play and looks quite messy too.
- 02:49:404 (2) - CTRL + G this.
Nothing really to complain about here.