thank u, purrseen >:3Forseen wrote:
ryuu's NOVICE
- 00:01:297 (1) - Use the normal sampleset for the head of this slider, otherwise it sounds too quiet. ugu
- 00:10:053 - Add a note here. ugu
- 00:46:702 (3) - 2x reverse may prove to be a bit confusing, remove one reverse and add a circle instead: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1179992. ugu
- 01:12:648 (3) - Rotate it like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1180002? i don't like how it looks with 01:13:946 (1) -
- 01:16:215 - Really would suggest a note here as well. You might want to change two of the circles that come before into a slider (either 01:14:919 (2,3) or 01:15:567 (4,5)), because 5 consecutive circles would be a bit too much. done
- 01:26:594 (5) - Add a finish. ugu
- 01:36:000 (3) - 2 grids up. ugu
- 01:46:702 (3) - Add a new combo and maybe make this slider similar to this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1180062? Also try using a whistle for the slider's head. i like my slider ;~;
- 01:47:351 (4) - Add a finish. ugu
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