Bold = edits to my own part
Easy00:06:149 (4) - The finish feels out of place to me
01:00:049 (1) - Shorten 1/2 and add a hitcircle?
02:34:337 (2,3) - Make this into a slider? They are the first 1/4 beats in the map, it'll prepare the lesser skilled players for the similar 1/4 parts after it. If not, then I agree about stacking it.
03:34:773 (5) - Finish sounds weird on the offbeat
Hard00:08:183 (8) - Same finish complaint
01:38:353 (1) [and similar] - Personally I think these sliders sound better ending on the onbeats.
02:00:113 (x) - Could a hitcircle be added here? I think it makes the transition to ASH's part more fluid02:12:351 (6) - finish blah blah
02:53:036 (1,2,3,4) - Change it to this so it flows better03:34:773 (7) - Weird finish again
03:55:168 (1,2,3,4) - Plays really awkwardly