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Topic Starter
litoluna
@Cherry Blossom

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Awh this song... :3

Well, hello from my queue :)
my mod is noooooooob :o

[Normal]

00:40:088 (2) - this is not exactly on the center, you might arrange it.
01:10:404 (3) - better blanket for (2)
01:14:194 (1) - (slider's end) sounds better with a finish instead of clap
02:22:404 (1) - ^
03:28:089 (1) - ^
02:09:773 (1,2,3) - why don't to make this ? :
02:35:983 (2) - 1 grid left (to be a nice blanket for 1) but you also have to move 02:36:931 (3)


[Hard]

00:21:141 (1,3) - this overlap is weird because 1 is a bit overlapped to 3's end
00:29:352 (3,5) - ^ same thing and many more...
00:23:036 (1) - make something like this for a little better movement :
00:27:615 (5,6,7) - it's really hard to play this for a "normal player who begins hard" because (5) is longer than 6 and 7, you have to ad a NC on 6 or do this :
00:36:299 (2) - for a better movement you can do this :
00:59:667 (5,6,7) - Why don't to make something like this ? :
01:14:825 (3) - Finish sounds better instead of clap (end)
02:23:036 (3) - ^
03:28:720 (3) - ^
01:44:194 (1,2,3,4) - You can make this pattern better :
02:13:562 (5) - why don't to make a blanket for 4 ?
02:15:457 (3) - Better blanket for 2, second point x216 y100, tail x216 y156
02:16:720 (7) - better blanket for 6, beginning x36 y168, second point x100 y140, tail x164 y168
02:41:825 (3,5) - CTRL+G, it can be better
03:05:036 (2) - 1 grid down

[Insane]
i'm noob at modding insane so.. >.>

00:10:088 (4,6) - CTRL-G ?
00:40:878 (4) - why don't tu use the reversed 00:40:088 (1) instead of this slider ? i mean

00:42:141 (4) - same thing as ^, for a better movement you can do this :
00:52:404 (5) - move to x152 y64
01:15:141 (2) - Sounds better with finish instead of clap (beginning)
02:23:352 (2) - ^
01:32:194 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this kind of pattern is really hard to play when the jumps are close, space further like airmanfor example, i know /me runs away x)
01:54:457 (4,1,2,3,4) - why don't to make a symmetrical pattern with these notes ? like this :
02:05:352 (4) - Better blanket for 2
03:16:720 (1,2,3,4) - why don't to do this ? (i didn't use DS)



That's all, well mapped, nice map.
Good Luck ~
thanks a lot modding~!!!
helpful your modding~
Normal and Hard almost fixed
Insane some fixed :)
scanter
go go ! \o/
Topic Starter
litoluna

scanter wrote:

go go ! \o/
yay~!\o/
Azure
Hello, from popner and Azure's modding

Nice song and ゆいこんぬ (o´艸`o)

[General]
move "Nico Nico Douga" to tags, and remove the Source
add " sm20605397 Rokugen Astrology" to tags

You can try this http://puu.sh/3BBn9.wav as "soft-hitclap" if you need (●゜c_゜●)

[Normal]
  1. 00:10:720 (4) +clap
  2. 01:15:141 (1) -finish +clap
  3. 02:23:352 (1) ^
  4. 03:29:036 (1) ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:28:720 (1) +finish
  2. 01:12:931 (1) -clap
  3. 02:23:352 (3) -finish +clap
[Insane]
  1. 00:18:062 (2) move it up to x172, y292
    00:18:378 (6) x60, y208
    00:18:457 (7) x56, y172
  2. 00:24:457 (6,7) use ctrl+G follow with vocal (Lyrics: 聞き..)
  3. 00:35:667 (9,1) change to http://puu.sh/3BBaD.jpg flow will be better
  4. 00:28:720 (1) +finish
    00:33:773 (1) ^
    01:36:931 (1) ^
  5. 01:15:141 (2) -finish +clap
  6. 02:08:983 (2,3) move (2) to (3) slider's tail
  7. 02:12:220 (8) move it left to x436, y164
  8. 02:50:036 (3) move it to x136, y88
  9. 02:52:088 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) so ugly.. fix it or you can try this http://puu.sh/3BBBM.jpg
  10. 03:02:510 (3,4) use ctrl+G follow with vocal (Lyrics: なんで..)
nice job, good luck (*ゝω・*)ノ
Topic Starter
litoluna
@Azure

Azure wrote:

Hello, from popner and Azure's modding

Nice song and ゆいこんぬ (o´艸`o)

[General]
move "Nico Nico Douga" to tags, and remove the Source other map ("歌ってみたutattemita") in Nico Nico Douga Source...
add " sm20605397 Rokugen Astrology" to tags ok

You can try this http://puu.sh/3BBn9.wav as "soft-hitclap" if you need (●゜c_゜●) wow thanks!!

[Normal]
  1. 00:10:720 (4) +clap
  2. 01:15:141 (1) -finish +clap
  3. 02:23:352 (1) ^
  4. 03:29:036 (1) ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:28:720 (1) +finish
  2. 01:12:931 (1) -clap
  3. 02:23:352 (3) -finish +clap
[Insane]
  1. 00:18:062 (2) move it up to x172, y292
    00:18:378 (6) x60, y208
    00:18:457 (7) x56, y172
  2. 00:24:457 (6,7) use ctrl+G follow with vocal (Lyrics: 聞き..)
  3. 00:35:667 (9,1) change to http://puu.sh/3BBaD.jpg flow will be better
  4. 00:28:720 (1) +finish
    00:33:773 (1) ^
    01:36:931 (1) ^
  5. 01:15:141 (2) -finish +clap
  6. 02:08:983 (2,3) move (2) to (3) slider's tail the same as other(01:00:773 (2,3) - and 03:20:983 (2,3) - ) no stack sorry><
  7. 02:12:220 (8) move it left to x436, y164
  8. 02:50:036 (3) move it to x136, y88
  9. 02:52:088 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) so ugly.. fix it or you can try this http://puu.sh/3BBBM.jpg
  10. 03:02:510 (3,4) use ctrl+G follow with vocal (Lyrics: なんで..)
nice job, good luck (*ゝω・*)ノ
thanks modding and HitSound wav~!
almost fixed
Helios_Zul
Hello Mod From My Queue


Normal
Approach Rate = -1
00:43:878(1) Like This?

01:10:404(3) Out From Grid - Fix It
01:16:404(3) Move To x:337 y:80
01:28:088(3) Move To x:316 y:248
01:49:562(5) Like This?

02:14:510(4) Move To x:236 y:160
02:14:825(1) Move To x:180 y:104
02:24:615(3) move To x:308 y:40
02:48:773(1) Move Middle Point To x:312 y:264 Then End Point , x:256 y:288
02:57:773(1,2) Move Like This?

03:15:457(1) Move Middle Point To x:232 y:92
03:30:299(3) Move To x:336 y:272

Other Are Perfects.

Hard
00:10:720(6) Move To x:208 y:36
00:11:036(1) move To x:104 y:148
00:21:615(2) Move To x:260 y:180
01:00:299(5) Move Middle Point To x:296 y:128 Then End Point To x:300 y:100
01:09:615(2) Move To x:388 y:148
01:09:773(3) ^ x:316 y:100
01:29:352(1) ^ x:472 y:92
01:41:352(5,1) Make Like THis?

01:53:983(6) Move To x:56 y:88
01:57:141(1,2,3,4) Make More Neat Like This Pic

02:41:036(1,2,3,4) Make It Like This (Star Patterns)

03:01:878(2) Move To x:132 y:272
03:02:194(3) ^ x:236 y:340
03:02:510(4) ^ x:356 y:308

Insane
00:10:404(5) Move To x:64 y:240
00:10:720(6) ^ x:424 y:240
00:24:773(8) Move To x:252 y:120

I Can't Mod Insane Too Hard For Me :o (sorry)

Hope This Helpful
Good On RANKED
Topic Starter
litoluna
@Helios_Zul

Helios_Zul wrote:

Hello Mod From My Queue


Normal
Approach Rate = -1
00:43:878(1) Like This?

01:10:404(3) Out From Grid - Fix It
01:16:404(3) Move To x:337 y:80
01:28:088(3) Move To x:316 y:248
01:49:562(5) Like This?

02:14:510(4) Move To x:236 y:160
02:14:825(1) Move To x:180 y:104
02:24:615(3) move To x:308 y:40
02:48:773(1) Move Middle Point To x:312 y:264 Then End Point , x:256 y:288
02:57:773(1,2) Move Like This?

03:15:457(1) Move Middle Point To x:232 y:92
03:30:299(3) Move To x:336 y:272

Other Are Perfects.

Hard
00:10:720(6) Move To x:208 y:36
00:11:036(1) move To x:104 y:148
00:21:615(2) Move To x:260 y:180
01:00:299(5) Move Middle Point To x:296 y:128 Then End Point To x:300 y:100
01:09:615(2) Move To x:388 y:148
01:09:773(3) ^ x:316 y:100
01:29:352(1) ^ x:472 y:92
01:41:352(5,1) Make Like THis?

01:53:983(6) Move To x:56 y:88
01:57:141(1,2,3,4) Make More Neat Like This Pic

02:41:036(1,2,3,4) Make It Like This (Star Patterns)

03:01:878(2) Move To x:132 y:272
03:02:194(3) ^ x:236 y:340
03:02:510(4) ^ x:356 y:308

Insane
00:10:404(5) Move To x:64 y:240
00:10:720(6) ^ x:424 y:240
00:24:773(8) Move To x:252 y:120

I Can't Mod Insane Too Hard For Me :o (sorry)

Hope This Helpful
Good On RANKED
thanks a lot modding!
Xinely
Hi :3


  • Normal
    00:27:773 (2) - imo, straight like http://puu.sh/3WN0k.jpg have a kinda bad flow, try make http://puu.sh/3WN07.jpg ?
    00:56:194 (4) - just like above lol ^
    01:05:036 (2) - 348,136?
    01:41:667 (3) - 24,248?
    02:35:983 (2) - remove finish, no need imo
    02:52:720 (4) - nazi, NC for consistency
    03:07:246 (5) - end in 03:07:562 - , more follow vocal
    03:10:089 (4) - 112,160


  • Hard
    00:30:931 (8) - try ctrl+G?
    00:53:667 - add note here?
    01:28:720 (3,1) - touched
    02:01:878 - add note?
    02:18:299 (4) - can ctrl+G for jump
    03:05:352 (3) - NC for SV change
    fun diff but it's more fun if you add a few jump :3


  • Insane
    00:24:457 (6) - NC to easier read?
    00:46:878 (4) - 352,236?
    nice ;)

Good Luck ~
Topic Starter
litoluna
@Xinely

Xinely wrote:

Hi :3


  • Normal
    00:27:773 (2) - imo, straight like http://puu.sh/3WN0k.jpg have a kinda bad flow, try make http://puu.sh/3WN07.jpg ? okay~!
    00:56:194 (4) - just like above lol ^
    01:05:036 (2) - 348,136?
    01:41:667 (3) - 24,248?
    02:35:983 (2) - remove finish, no need imo Cymbals in back sound
    02:52:720 (4) - nazi, NC for consistency
    03:07:246 (5) - end in 03:07:562 - , more follow vocal follow Snare in back sound
    03:10:089 (4) - 112,160


  • Hard
    00:30:931 (8) - try ctrl+G?
    00:53:667 - add note here?
    01:28:720 (3,1) - touched
    02:01:878 - add note?
    02:18:299 (4) - can ctrl+G for jump
    03:05:352 (3) - NC for SV change
    fun diff but it's more fun if you add a few jump :3


  • Insane
    00:24:457 (6) - NC to easier read?
    00:46:878 (4) - 352,236?
    nice ;)

Good Luck ~
thanks nice modding Xinely~! :)
some fixed :3
Aldwych
Hi!

Modding queue :


Normal

- 00:30:931 Use the same Y position as the previous circle? (This or the other it doesn't matter)
- 01:30:615 Same thing as the previous one, use same Y position as the slider n°1?
- 02:40:088 Again.
- 03:09:895 Same X as the previous slider?
-03:17:983 Is it possible that you can finish this slider at the same position of the pink slider n°2? (168 ; 185)



Hard


- 03:03:299 Be carefull it touches a little the HP bar, you should fix it.
- 03:03:773 Try to start this slider as the same position of the violet slider n°1.
- 03:10:878 Imo, i don't like where the 3 circles are, they don't put a beautifull line (if you know what i mean. ;) )
- 03:20:983 Same Y position as the previous circle.
- 03:21:141 The curve of the slider doesn't really match with the previous circle, if you can fix it.
- 03:30:299 You will kill me if i say that the X position here doesn't match with the circle n°2? =D


Insane


- 00:10:404 Well... This patter is ind of strange, for the circle n°6, i agree that you put it at the same position of the slider n°2, here this is ok, but if you take a look at the Y position difference between the circle 1 and 2 ther's 8 of difference, and not on the circle 5 and 6, i suggest you to down the circle 5 to Y = 264, but the snap position will be higher, so you should think at a solution Imo.
- 00:23:194 Is it impossible to move this circle to (98;272)? =D
- 00:26:825 How about move this to the begining of the pink slider n°5?
- 00:44:352 Same position as the red circle n°3 before?
- 01:11:667 Aww, too bad that this hasn't the same position as 01:10:878 :<
- 02:02:825 Position! =D (Comparing to the first green slider)

Anyway, that's all good map you did just some minor fixes, imo the hard one is kinda too fast but it's ok.

Gl for ranking! ;)
Topic Starter
litoluna
@Aldwych

Aldwych wrote:

Hi!

Modding queue :


Normal

- 00:30:931 Use the same Y position as the previous circle? (This or the other it doesn't matter)
- 01:30:615 Same thing as the previous one, use same Y position as the slider n°1?
- 02:40:088 Again.
- 03:09:895 Same X as the previous slider?
-03:17:983 Is it possible that you can finish this slider at the same position of the pink slider n°2? (168 ; 185)



Hard


- 03:03:299 Be carefull it touches a little the HP bar, you should fix it.
- 03:03:773 Try to start this slider as the same position of the violet slider n°1.
- 03:10:878 Imo, i don't like where the 3 circles are, they don't put a beautifull line (if you know what i mean. ;) )
- 03:20:983 Same Y position as the previous circle.
- 03:21:141 The curve of the slider doesn't really match with the previous circle, if you can fix it.
- 03:30:299 You will kill me if i say that the X position here doesn't match with the circle n°2? =D


Insane


- 00:10:404 Well... This patter is ind of strange, for the circle n°6, i agree that you put it at the same position of the slider n°2, here this is ok, but if you take a look at the Y position difference between the circle 1 and 2 ther's 8 of difference, and not on the circle 5 and 6, i suggest you to down the circle 5 to Y = 264, but the snap position will be higher, so you should think at a solution Imo.
- 00:23:194 Is it impossible to move this circle to (98;272)? =D
- 00:26:825 How about move this to the begining of the pink slider n°5?
- 00:44:352 Same position as the red circle n°3 before?
- 01:11:667 Aww, too bad that this hasn't the same position as 01:10:878 :<
- 02:02:825 Position! =D (Comparing to the first green slider)

Anyway, that's all good map you did just some minor fixes, imo the hard one is kinda too fast but it's ok.

Gl for ranking! ;)
thanks modding Aldwych~
some fixed! ;)
Garven
I was asked to check the timing, but it feels good to me. Tick rate 2 fits this song best though. Good luck! <3 Yuiko
Topic Starter
litoluna
@Garven

Garven wrote:

I was asked to check the timing, but it feels good to me. Tick rate 2 fits this song best though. Good luck! <3 Yuiko
Thanks timing check! :)
I don't like Tick rate 2 >< sorry

yuiko~<3
Guy


遅れてすみません;;;;;

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. Clear.

[Insane]
  1. 00:10:404 (5) - 1grid left & 4grid down で 00:10:088 (4,6) - こっちと同じ角度、スペーシングになります。
  2. 00:15:141 (4) - 1grid up & 1grid rightで 00:14:825 (3,5) - ^
  3. 00:17:510 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - この6つにwhistle入れるといい感じにピアノがとれると思います。
  4. 00:41:352 (1) - ここの終端は結構音が大きいのでwhistleが入りそうです。
  5. 00:47:352 (2) - 終端もしくは両端にclap追加
  6. 00:48:931 (8) - NC
  7. 00:49:088 (1) - NC削除 以降もこんな感じにしてまとまりがあるようにすると良いと思います。
  8. 00:53:510 (3) - 1/4伸ばせそうですがスライダーの形とかの調整もあると思うので任せます。
  9. 01:13:404 (1,2,3,4,5,7) - 上の00:17:510 (4,5,6,7,8,1) -と同じで全部whistle入れるといい感じです。
  10. 01:14:667 (3) - 始端のwhistleは曲と合ってない気がしたので削除?
  11. 01:36:299 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - このストリームにもwhistleを入れたいです。全部入れてもいいんですがやかましいって人がいたりするので、自分が音付けするなら最初の5つくらいにwhistle入れると思います。
  12. 01:43:720 - add note?
  13. 01:57:141 (8) - この辺のNCも上記と同じ指摘です。
  14. 02:00:615 - ここからドラムの音が大きくなってるのでVolumeを15%くらい上げてみてはどうでしょう?
  15. 02:21:615 (1,2,3,4,5,7) - ここと00:17:510 (4,5,6,7,8,1) -同じです
  16. 02:45:694 - note追加して3連にしましょう。
  17. 03:15:615 (2,4) - Ctrl+G? 突然スライダーの終端に隠れてしまう配置なのでこっちの方が安定して叩けると思いました。
  18. 03:27:299 (1,2,3,4,5,7) - ここと00:17:510 (4,5,6,7,8,1) -同じです

[Hard]
  1. 特に気になった点はありませんでした 流れもいいし問題ないと思います。

[Normal]
  1. 01:49:562 (3) - 1番のとこと同じでCtrl+Jして上下対象にした方がいいと思いました。
  2. 02:03:457 (3) - 終端のpointを1grid下げると更に綺麗に見えます。

    こっちも特に気になる点はなし。
頑張ってください :)
Topic Starter
litoluna
@Guy

Guy wrote:



遅れてすみません;;;;;

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. Clear.

[Insane]
  1. 00:10:404 (5) - 1grid left & 4grid down で 00:10:088 (4,6) - こっちと同じ角度、スペーシングになります。
  2. 00:15:141 (4) - 1grid up & 1grid rightで 00:14:825 (3,5) - ^
  3. 00:17:510 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - この6つにwhistle入れるといい感じにピアノがとれると思います。
  4. 00:41:352 (1) - ここの終端は結構音が大きいのでwhistleが入りそうです。
  5. 00:47:352 (2) - 終端もしくは両端にclap追加
  6. 00:48:931 (8) - NC
  7. 00:49:088 (1) - NC削除 以降もこんな感じにしてまとまりがあるようにすると良いと思います。
  8. 00:53:510 (3) - 1/4伸ばせそうですがスライダーの形とかの調整もあると思うので任せます。 現状維持で!
  9. 01:13:404 (1,2,3,4,5,7) - 上の00:17:510 (4,5,6,7,8,1) -と同じで全部whistle入れるといい感じです。
  10. 01:14:667 (3) - 始端のwhistleは曲と合ってない気がしたので削除?
  11. 01:36:299 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - このストリームにもwhistleを入れたいです。全部入れてもいいんですがやかましいって人がいたりするので、自分が音付けするなら最初の5つくらいにwhistle入れると思います。
  12. 01:43:720 - add note?
  13. 01:57:141 (8) - この辺のNCも上記と同じ指摘です。
  14. 02:00:615 - ここからドラムの音が大きくなってるのでVolumeを15%くらい上げてみてはどうでしょう?
  15. 02:21:615 (1,2,3,4,5,7) - ここと00:17:510 (4,5,6,7,8,1) -同じです
  16. 02:45:694 - note追加して3連にしましょう。
  17. 03:15:615 (2,4) - Ctrl+G? 突然スライダーの終端に隠れてしまう配置なのでこっちの方が安定して叩けると思いました。
  18. 03:27:299 (1,2,3,4,5,7) - ここと00:17:510 (4,5,6,7,8,1) -同じです

[Hard]
  1. 特に気になった点はありませんでした 流れもいいし問題ないと思います。

[Normal]
  1. 01:49:562 (3) - 1番のとこと同じでCtrl+Jして上下対象にした方がいいと思いました。
  2. 02:03:457 (3) - 終端のpointを1grid下げると更に綺麗に見えます。

    こっちも特に気になる点はなし。
頑張ってください :)
modありがとうございます!
記載の無い所はfixedです!!
alacat
一ヶ月前くらいのrandom queueからきました。

[General]
  1. 00:00:931 - ここから音楽が始まるので、赤線を移動してください。
[Insane]

  • ~音量の提案です。
  1. 最初~00:18:615 - 70%
  2. 00:18:615 - ~00:28:720 - 50%
  3. 00:28:720 - ~00:38:825 - 60%
  4. 00:38:825 - ~00:43:878 - 50%
  5. 00:43:878 - ~kiai前までに60->70% そして kiai time 80%につなげてみてください。
    スローパートの40%ですがあまりよく聞こえないので50%はあった方がいいと思います。後のパートは修正した場合確認をお願いします。
    ~
  6. 00:17:510 (4) - 連打の開始ということでnew comboを追加すると個数などより分かりやすくなります。
  7. 00:17:588 (5,6,7,8) - whistleが連続していて不自然に思えます。(1)のみにあった方がclapの音も目立ちますしより良いと思います。
  8. 00:25:799 - 20%以下だとほとんど聞こえないので、20%まで上げて下さい。後のパートも同じくです。
  9. 00:47:983 (4) - ,00:48:457 (6) - clap
  10. 01:14:825 (1) - ちょっとしたnew comboの提案です。音をまとめた方がいいと思いました。
  11. 02:25:167 (1) - ここだけ不自然なので間つめてください。02:24:852 -
  12. 02:38:036 (2) - 00:17:510 (4) - と同じです。前の(1)もはずしていいと思います
  13. 02:49:799 (2) - ここにもwhistleあった方がピアノの音を強調できます。
  14. 02:50:194 (1) - 始点にfinish.定期的に入れるのであればここにも必要です。
  15. 02:51:615 (2) - ピアノの音をフォローするのであれば02:51:931 - ,02:52:010 - ここの二つは音がないので間をあけてください。
    また、後ろの音をとる場合はこちらを試してみてください。
  16. 02:52:167 (8) - 細かいですが、ここまで差があると見たときにわかってしまうので0.8にもう少し近づけてください
  17. 03:07:404 (5) - 歌詞をフォローして、青線まで伸ばして3/4sliderにしたいです(願望 
  18. 03:16:720 (1) - 1/8を4つおきたいところですが、03:16:799 - には音がないのでnote + 3sliderにしてください。
  19. 03:26:826 (7) - 始点にwhistle.こちらも同じく音のないところ03:26:904 - などに折り返しがあるので後ろの音にあわせてこのようにしてみてください
申し訳ないんですが、時間がなくなってしまったのでNormal Hardは後日見ます!

修正後に呼んでください~ :D
Topic Starter
litoluna
@alacat

alacat wrote:

一ヶ月前くらいのrandom queueからきました。

[General]
  1. 00:00:931 - ここから音楽が始まるので、赤線を移動してください。 全diff移動させました~
[Insane]

  • ~音量の提案です。
  1. 最初~00:18:615 - 70%
  2. 00:18:615 - ~00:28:720 - 50%
  3. 00:28:720 - ~00:38:825 - 60%
  4. 00:38:825 - ~00:43:878 - 50%
  5. 00:43:878 - ~kiai前までに60->70% そして kiai time 80%につなげてみてください。
    スローパートの40%ですがあまりよく聞こえないので50%はあった方がいいと思います。後のパートは修正した場合確認をお願いします。
    全diff調整しました。
    ~
  6. 00:17:510 (4) - 連打の開始ということでnew comboを追加すると個数などより分かりやすくなります。
  7. 00:17:588 (5,6,7,8) - whistleが連続していて不自然に思えます。(1)のみにあった方がclapの音も目立ちますしより良いと思います。
  8. 00:25:799 - 20%以下だとほとんど聞こえないので、20%まで上げて下さい。後のパートも同じくです。
  9. 00:47:983 (4) - ,00:48:457 (6) - clap
  10. 01:14:825 (1) - ちょっとしたnew comboの提案です。音をまとめた方がいいと思いました。
  11. 02:25:167 (1) - ここだけ不自然なので間つめてください。02:24:852 -
  12. 02:38:036 (2) - 00:17:510 (4) - と同じです。前の(1)もはずしていいと思います
  13. 02:49:799 (2) - ここにもwhistleあった方がピアノの音を強調できます。
  14. 02:50:194 (1) - 始点にfinish.定期的に入れるのであればここにも必要です。
  15. 02:51:615 (2) - ピアノの音をフォローするのであれば02:51:931 - ,02:52:010 - ここの二つは音がないので間をあけてください。
    また、後ろの音をとる場合はこちらを試してみてください。
  16. 02:52:167 (8) - 細かいですが、ここまで差があると見たときにわかってしまうので0.8にもう少し近づけてください
  17. 03:07:404 (5) - 歌詞をフォローして、青線まで伸ばして3/4sliderにしたいです(願望 
  18. 03:16:720 (1) - 1/8を4つおきたいところですが、03:16:799 - には音がないのでnote + 3sliderにしてください。
  19. 03:26:826 (7) - 始点にwhistle.こちらも同じく音のないところ03:26:904 - などに折り返しがあるので後ろの音にあわせてこのようにしてみてください
申し訳ないんですが、時間がなくなってしまったのでNormal Hardは後日見ます!

修正後に呼んでください~ :D
all fixed
赤線と音量はNormal,Hard合わせて修正しました~.
thanks modding!! :)
alacat
Modded Normal and Hard diff via IRC.

Good luck for your first rank ;)

Bubbled


I'm worry about video size :? haha
Topic Starter
litoluna
thanks alacat!! ('ω')
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Rankedあくしろよ(せっかち)
Sakura
Hi just dropping by leaving a heart and stuff.
Little
Congratz! :D
Delita
litoluna おめえええええ^^
KSHR
Congratz on your 1st ranked map! keep it up ;)
Quilt

KSHR wrote:

Congratz on your 1st ranked map! keep it up ;)
gらtz
iyasine
1st ranked おめでとう!!! :D
Cloudchaser
Sorry to say but Nico Nico Douga isn't a correct source. You must remove it from the source box because it isn't allowed anymore.

t/156701
[Caramel]
Yay! Congrats on finally getting this map ranked!
I remember playing this way back in June! Osu just needs more Yuikonnu in general~ amirite
Just waiting for your Hatsukoi no Ehon and Houkago Stride to be ranked now :)
Laurier
やったね
maaagic
おめでとう!!
Sakura

Cloudchaser wrote:

Sorry to say but Nico Nico Douga isn't a correct source. You must remove it from the source box because it isn't allowed anymore.

t/156701
Technially it isnt ammended yet, but i should have caught that, i'll check with the mapper when he's online.
Fycho
gratz for 1st ranked :D
Sylith
finally ranked!

gratz for your 1st :D
10nya
Gratz litoluna-san :3
toara_fict
Gretz~ おめでとうございますー!
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オメシャス!
P o M u T a
おめでとうです!
donpen
おめでと
Kodora

Cloudchaser wrote:

Sorry to say but Nico Nico Douga isn't a correct source. You must remove it from the source box because it isn't allowed anymore.

t/156701
This rule is in discussion only, it's not yet added to official Ranking Criteria. Please read the topic.

Loctav wrote:

"source" is quite unspecific. A source can be Youtube. A source can be "my brother's mp3 player". So please... it's not really self-explained in what we use the Source field for.
Gratz with first rank!
fusya
おめでとーです!
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