Ceui - Asphodelus · forum

terametis

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

terametis 2013-11-17T01:29:20+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年3月15日 at 2:53:52

Artist: Ceui
Title: Asphodelus
Source: Aiyoku no Eustia
Tags: august opening visual novel Active Planets 穢翼のユースティア NewRulerNA Laurier
BPM: 160
Filesize: 8757kb
Play Time: 04:25
Difficulties Available:

Easy (2.13 stars, 236 notes)
Hard N/A (4.73 stars, 518 notes)
Insane (4.99 stars, 699 notes)
Laurier's Normal (3.56 stars, 331 notes)

Download: Ceui - Asphodelus
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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*:.｡..｡.:+・ﾟ・✽:.｡..｡.:+・ﾟ・✽:.｡..｡.:+・ﾟ*:.｡..｡.:+・ﾟ・✽:.｡..｡.:+・ﾟ・✽
Asphodelus　―アスフォデルス―
　　　　　　　　　　　
いつの日か、この都市に陽が差す時が来るのだろうか――
　　　
Insane by me
Hard by NewRulerNA
Normal by Laurier
Easy by me
*:.｡..｡.:+・ﾟ・✽:.｡..｡.:+・ﾟ・✽:.｡..｡.:+・ﾟ*:.｡..｡.:+・ﾟ・✽:.｡..｡.:+・ﾟ・✽
opening by Aiyoku no Eustia(穢翼のユースティア)

Last edited by terametis 2014-03-14T17:55:25+00:00, edited 52 times in total.

alacat

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alacat 2013-11-27T18:00:20+00:00

terametis

1,140 posts

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

terametis 2013-11-27T18:04:13+00:00

alacat wrote:

~~This cat is me.~~ thanks star

-Teina-

529 posts

Joined October 2013

-Teina- 2013-12-01T09:23:30+00:00

[Inasne]

open

00:20:486 (1) - slider here (2/4)
00:42:423 (2,3,4) - you can try the long distance (not important)
00:50:298 (4) - push this in the 00:49:736 (3) - end of the location.↓

00:52:736 - circle here
01:28:548 - slider here (not important)
01:28:736 (3) - delete (not important)
02:27:236 - slider here
02:27:423 - delete

Try to use this package^

[Song setup]

open

Source:穢翼のユースティア Aiyoku no Eustia
Tag:august opening visual novel game

My friend like this game.
But this game cannot buy in Hong Kong~(cry T_T)

I love this song, strive to finish and rank this song~

terametis

1,140 posts

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

terametis 2013-12-01T17:20:11+00:00

tellertheworld wrote:
SPOILER
[Inasne]
00:20:486 (1) - slider here (2/4)　umm, It is a good suggestion, but prefer my placement.
00:42:423 (2,3,4) - you can try the long distance (not important)　no, This map have many anti-jump.
00:50:298 (4) - push this in the 00:49:736 (3) - end of the location.↓　sorry no, I don't want jump here.

00:52:736 - circle here　　no,I haven't put it on basis of the sound of the piano.
01:28:548 - slider here (not important)　State now feel good for me
01:28:736 (3) - delete (not important)　^
02:27:236 - slider here 　sorry no~
02:27:423 - delete　　^

Try to use this package^
hmm, Rejects it, but I consider change to rhythm 03:53:861 (3) -. I might change later .

[Song setup]
open
Source:穢翼のユースティア Aiyoku no Eustia
Tag:august opening visual novel game

My friend like this game.
But this game cannot buy in Hong Kong~(cry T_T)

I love this song, strive to finish and rank this song~

add tag 穢翼のユースティア, but no change on [Insane].
I examined them, but I prefer to my placement.
anyway, thanks for mod :3

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

kajiyatta 2013-12-04T13:42:59+00:00

M4M
[General]
SB無いのでWidescreen Supportのチェック外しましょう
[Normal]
一番簡単な難易度でスペーシングがっつり変えてるのが少し気になりましたが、スペーシング十分あるので多分大丈夫だと思います。
Placement
01:18:236(5) 実際に打つときにはほとんど影響ないんですが、やっぱりスライダー上に丸々置くのは少しどうかなと思うのでこんな風にずらしてみては？

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:50:579 不要な緑線
04:21:236(5) 「え」の音が途中で入ってしまいやや聞こえが悪いので、シンプルに音取りしてみては？

SPOILER

[N/A]
Placement
01:14:486(2) KIAIの始点なのでここからNCつけてみては？他の部分ではそのようになっていたので
01:59:111(6)プレイしていてもここの重なりはあまり見栄えが良くないので、もう少し上にずらしてみては？

SPOILER

02:58:923(5,6) 少し下にずらして三角形を作るように配置してみるのはどうですか？

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:19:361　不要な緑線
00:18:236(4)ここで×1.00に変えていますが、ここは×0.75のままで十分なように思います。00:19:361から曲調が変わるので、この部分から×1.00で持ってきた方が自然です。
03:56:111(5) ここは×1.00のままで良いと思います、極端に曲調がゆるやかになったとかいうわけでもないので。
Hit Sound
00:12:611(1) 普通のwhistleの方が良いと思います、特にここだけバックの曲が変わっているようには聞こえないので。
01:38:436(5)終点をfinishにしたほうが聞こえがいいです。
03:06:236(5)^
04:39:329(1) スピナーのボーナス音が結構うるさいので徐々にデクレシェンドかけていくと良いと思います。
[Insane]
Placement
00:54:611(1,2) 前の(1,2)と同じような曲調なのでここも対照的にジャンプさせてやると見栄えがいいと思います。

SPOILER

01:01:923(4)　バックの音がそれほど強いわけではないのに、ここで結構大きめのジャンプ持ってくるのは少し違和感があります。例えば前の(2)の頭にスタックさせてみるとか…
02:06:236(1,2,1) 少し窮屈に感じるので、スペーシングをもう少し広げてみては？
02:08:111(3,4)　今のままでも良いんですが、三角形っぽくジャンプさせてみるのはどうですか？

SPOILER

02:39:986(4)前の部分でボーカルに合わせて1/2の感覚でNCついていたので、ここでNC打ってやるとパターン通りになっていいと思います。
02:42:236(1)意図的？にしてはちょっとわかりにくいスペーシングなので、もっと広げるか同じ間隔で置いてみては？
03:26:483(2)x:256,y:312に持ってきて同じようにスタックさせてみては？
04:19:923(4,5)　ラストパートなのでもっとジャンプさせてもいいと思います、(4)をx124:y304あたりに置いてみるのはどうでしょうか？

Nice map

NewRulerNA

1,301 posts

Joined December 2010

NewRulerNA 2013-12-04T16:31:20+00:00

kajiyatta wrote:
M4M
[N/A]
Placement
01:14:486(2) KIAIの始点なのでここからNCつけてみては？他の部分ではそのようになっていたので
他をこれに合わせる形での修正しました
01:59:111(6)プレイしていてもここの重なりはあまり見栄えが良くないので、もう少し上にずらしてみては？
SPOILER
見栄えが悪いとは正直思っていません。BPMとしてみてもそこまで見にくい配置でもありませんし、なにより4,6で同じような音を拾っているので角度プレイ感覚をその2つを叩く際にそれぞれ変えること無く、プレイさせていきたいと感じてこの配置をしていたという理由もあります。
02:58:923(5,6) 少し下にずらして三角形を作るように配置してみるのはどうですか？
SPOILER
ok
Rhythm
00:19:361　不要な緑線
ミスでした
00:18:236(4)ここで×1.00に変えていますが、ここは×0.75のままで十分なように思います。00:19:361から曲調が変わるので、この部分から×1.00で持ってきた方が自然です。
ここでは各ドラムに合わせて少し早いタイミングで変化を加えています。それより前にはその音は存在していないので、これをすることは実際理にかなっているように私には感じられました。
03:56:111(5) ここは×1.00のままで良いと思います、極端に曲調がゆるやかになったとかいうわけでもないので。
その提案の意図するところはもちろんわかるのですが、私にはここのボーカルを拾ったスライダーを他と同じ速度で再生させることよりも、ボーカルのトーンが下がっているのであえて速度を落とし、そこからのスピード感に変化を加えたほうがより面白くなるという考えのもとそうしています。ごめんなさい。
Hit Sound
00:12:611(1) 普通のwhistleの方が良いと思います、特にここだけバックの曲が変わっているようには聞こえないので。
ただのヒットサウンドのミスでした
01:38:436(5)終点をfinishにしたほうが聞こえがいいです。
03:06:236(5)^
両方まとめてfinishを追加しました
04:39:329(1) スピナーのボーナス音が結構うるさいので徐々にデクレシェンドかけていくと良いと思います。
確かに・・・

Nice map

thank you kajiyatta
来年kudosu数で是非私を追い越して行ってください。

update

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 73936
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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[Metadata]
Title:Asphodelus
TitleUnicode:アスフォデルス -Asphodelus-
Artist:Ceui
ArtistUnicode:Ceui
Creator:terametis
Version:N/A
Source:Aiyoku no Eustia
Tags:august opening visual novel 穢翼のユースティア NewRulerNA
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228,240,276986,6,0,L|165:301,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,143,277361,2,0,L|206:58,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,192,277736,2,0,L|396:216,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,192,278111,6,0,L|116:167,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,143,278486,2,0,L|346:82,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,240,278861,2,0,L|305:325,2,80,10|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,279329,12,0,287111,0:0:0:0:

http://puu.sh/5BXut.zip

terametis

1,140 posts

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

terametis 2013-12-04T16:58:48+00:00

kajiyatta wrote:
M4M
[General]
SB無いのでWidescreen Supportのチェック外しましょう　外しました
[Normal]
一番簡単な難易度でスペーシングがっつり変えてるのが少し気になりましたが、スペーシング十分あるので多分大丈夫だと思います。
Placement
01:18:236(5) 実際に打つときにはほとんど影響ないんですが、やっぱりスライダー上に丸々置くのは少しどうかなと思うのでこんな風にずらしてみては？　このままで
SPOILER
Rhythm
00:50:579 不要な緑線　　Fixed
04:21:236(5) 「え」の音が途中で入ってしまいやや聞こえが悪いので、シンプルに音取りしてみては？　　Fixed
SPOILER

[Insane]
Placement
00:54:611(1,2) 前の(1,2)と同じような曲調なのでここも対照的にジャンプさせてやると見栄えがいいと思います。　んー、フローが気に入ってるのでこのままで
SPOILER
01:01:923(4)　バックの音がそれほど強いわけではないのに、ここで結構大きめのジャンプ持ってくるのは少し違和感があります。例えば前の(2)の頭にスタックさせてみるとか…　　01:02:111 (1,2,3) - の低速の部分をメリハリつけて楽しんでもらいたいのでこのままで
02:06:236(1,2,1) 少し窮屈に感じるので、スペーシングをもう少し広げてみては？　ンン・・・、そのとおりなのですが、広げた後の02:07:923 (2,3,4,1,2) - の調整がどうにも上手くいかないのでこのままで
02:08:111(3,4)　今のままでも良いんですが、三角形っぽくジャンプさせてみるのはどうですか？　んー、このままで
SPOILER
02:39:986(4)前の部分でボーカルに合わせて1/2の感覚でNCついていたので、ここでNC打ってやるとパターン通りになっていいと思います。　パターン的にはNCですが、私はつけないほうがしっくりくるのでこのままで。
02:42:236(1)意図的？にしてはちょっとわかりにくいスペーシングなので、もっと広げるか同じ間隔で置いてみては？　調整して同じぐらいの感覚にしました
03:26:483(2)x:256,y:312に持ってきて同じようにスタックさせてみては？　Fixed
04:19:923(4,5)　ラストパートなのでもっとジャンプさせてもいいと思います、(4)をx124:y304あたりに置いてみるのはどうでしょうか？　結構ジャンプ大きくしました

Nice map

mod&starありがとうごさいました!

CakiP

384 posts

Joined February 2012

CakiP 2013-12-05T18:59:12+00:00

Request from PM

[Normal]
01:39:329 (1) - 後ろのボーカルに合わせて音量を下げてみるとか・・・。
01:53:861 (2) - 01:50:486 (3) - このスライダーの終点にあわせてスタックさせるとか!

[N/A]
02:40:173 (5) - このスライダーを往復にして、01:18:611 (1) - このnoteを消してみたり?
01:22:923 - ひとつ単発があってもいいかもです。
03:32:861 (1) - 後ろの音楽に合わせて音量をあげてみるとか!

[Insane]
02:40:173 (5) - New combo?

どのdiffもすばらしくて言うことがありません・・・。
がんばってください、応援してます!!
star

terametis

1,140 posts

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

terametis 2013-12-05T19:15:21+00:00

CakiP wrote:
Request from PM

[Normal]
01:39:329 (1) - 後ろのボーカルに合わせて音量を下げてみるとか・・・。　Insaneもあわせて変更しました
01:53:861 (2) - 01:50:486 (3) - このスライダーの終点にあわせてスタックさせるとか!　　変更しました!

[Insane]
02:40:173 (5) - New combo?　同じような指摘があったので(4)にNCつけました!

どのdiffもすばらしくて言うことがありません・・・。
がんばってください、応援してます!!
star

全部なおしました!　mod&starありがとうございました<333

NewRulerNA

1,301 posts

Joined December 2010

NewRulerNA 2013-12-07T22:13:51+00:00

IRC MOD

06:15 *NewRulerNA is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/325845 Ceui - Asphodelus [Insane]]
06:15 NewRulerNA: 00:27:236 (1,2,3,4) - 
06:15 NewRulerNA: 曲に対して飛び過ぎだと思うimo
06:15 terametis: それ
06:15 terametis: わかります!!!
06:15 terametis: むしろ
06:15 terametis: おととり
06:15 NewRulerNA: 加えて距離を広げたいのは00:27:423 (2,3) - 
06:15 terametis: ずっと変えようとおもってたんだけど
06:16 terametis: 00:27:986 (5) - 
06:16 terametis: これを
06:16 terametis: 対称におきたくて
06:16 terametis: で
06:16 terametis: いまの2と4を
06:16 terametis: 消そうとおもったんだけど
06:16 NewRulerNA: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1154481
06:16 terametis: うまい配置おもいつかなくて
06:17 terametis: 放置してるやつ
06:17 NewRulerNA: 個人的にはこんなのが思い浮かんだ
06:17 NewRulerNA: 00:41:392 (5) - 音細かく聞いていくとこれがovermapっぽい
06:18 terametis: changed 00:27:236 (1,2,3,4) - 
06:18 terametis: とりあえずつっこまれるまで
06:18 terametis: これでいきます
06:18 terametis: これ連打系は
06:18 terametis: かなりovermappedしてるから
06:19 terametis: 仕様です
06:19 NewRulerNA: 00:58:829 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - これとかもそうだよね
06:19 terametis: 00:59:392 (11,12,13,14,15,1) - 
06:19 terametis: wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
06:19 terametis: そうです
06:19 terametis: かぶるあたりうける
06:19 NewRulerNA: なんかそれっぽい伸びてる音すら無いから
06:19 NewRulerNA: 正直怖い
06:20 NewRulerNA: セーフを出せない
06:20 terametis: ばれないばれない(ばれる
06:20 terametis: 01:18:423 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 
06:20 terametis: このたぐいも
06:20 NewRulerNA: あまり強くは言わないけど、かなり修正推していきたい
06:20 terametis: 全部overmapped
06:21 NewRulerNA: 01:04:923 (1,2,3) - なんかこのジャンプが光らない
06:21 terametis: さすがに00:58:548 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - 
06:21 terametis: は
06:21 terametis: やりすぎかんあるけど
06:21 NewRulerNA: 後ろが静かだから小さくしたい
06:21 terametis: けどこれでいきます
06:21 terametis: ﾝｰｰｰ
06:22 terametis: これはちいさいのやだなあ
06:22 NewRulerNA: というと
06:22 terametis: 小さくしてもいいんだけど
06:22 terametis: なんかこう
06:22 terametis: 01:04:923 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 
06:22 terametis: このながれが
06:22 terametis: わりときにいってるから
06:23 terametis: プロ案あったら
06:23 terametis: かえます
06:23 NewRulerNA: 01:03:986 (3) - 一番楽なのがこれの終点側に(2)で
06:23 NewRulerNA: 始点に(3)なんだよなー・・・・
06:23 NewRulerNA: でもこれはどうなんだろ
06:23 NewRulerNA: スタック
06:23 terametis: HDが
06:24 terametis: 抹殺される
06:24 NewRulerNA: Mod付けるのがわるい（）
06:24 NewRulerNA: でもそれ以上の案出ないかなー
06:24 NewRulerNA: 対称性も削れてきちゃうし
06:25 terametis: このサビまじ
06:25 terametis: volumeいじって
06:25 terametis: hitsound0にすると
06:26 terametis: いかにovermappedしてるかよくわかる
06:26 terametis: でも絶対サビのovermapped連打うまくおけてるとおもいます)
06:26 NewRulerNA: 誰かが止めてくれると信じるしか無い
06:26 terametis: 配置はべつにして・・・
06:26 NewRulerNA: 01:08:486 (4,5,1) - 
06:26 NewRulerNA: ここの間だけスペーシング狭める気はない？
06:26 NewRulerNA: 音量が前の方から小さくなってくるから
06:26 NewRulerNA: ここで狭めたほうが曲によりフィットすると思う
06:27 terametis: まったくきにいってない
06:27 terametis: 配置だから
06:27 terametis: 01:07:736 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 
06:27 terametis: あたり
06:27 terametis: かえたいなあ
06:28 terametis: こういう配置も
06:28 NewRulerNA: http://puu.sh/5FiPg.jpg
06:28 terametis: どっかにいれたくはあるんだけど
06:28 terametis: あんまりにも
06:28 terametis: 4,5,1が流れきついよね
06:28 NewRulerNA: ちょっと雑だけどこういうのはどう？
06:28 terametis: それはせますぎ感ある
06:28 terametis: 流れがよければ
06:28 terametis: 縮めるにしても
06:29 terametis: もうちょっと飛ばしたい
06:29 NewRulerNA: 01:08:298 (3,4,5) - を上の提案からさらに広げる感じ？
06:29 NewRulerNA: http://puu.sh/5FiVr.jpg
06:29 NewRulerNA: ただそれだけならこうなるわけだけど・・・・
06:30 NewRulerNA: 4,5もう少し離す感じか・・・
06:31 terametis: ｳｰｰｰｰｰｰｰｰﾝ
06:31 terametis: いろいろいじってみてるけど
06:31 terametis: どうもしっくりこない
06:32 terametis: この類の流れ悪いけど露骨にAIMさせる配置に
06:32 NewRulerNA: 流れの向きを途中でどう切り替えるか
06:32 terametis: 差をつけてこの配置がいいなって思わせる配置を
06:32 terametis: 思いつけない
06:34 NewRulerNA: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1154502
06:34 NewRulerNA: うーん・・・・
06:34 NewRulerNA: 思いつかない
06:35 terametis: 実際
06:35 terametis: Insって
06:35 NewRulerNA: 01:08:298 (3,4,5) - 主に狭めたいのはここ、特に4,5なだけだからなー
06:35 terametis: 難しさが楽しさに直結する部分が少なからずあるから
06:35 terametis: こういうバランスとるのむずい
06:35 terametis: 圧倒的に流れがいいなら配置かえたいところ
06:36 NewRulerNA: 45で狭めて51で広げるって考えとかそのものには賛成できる？
06:36 terametis: ｳｰｰｰﾝ
06:37 terametis: 正直狭めようが広げようがどっちでもいいパートって
06:37 terametis: いめーじ
06:37 NewRulerNA: じゃあ視点を変えて単発連続って言うことに対しては？
06:37 terametis: それは確定
06:38 NewRulerNA: 5が小さいからスライダー終点に～っていうのもあったけど、単発入れたいのが伝わってたし
06:38 NewRulerNA: やっぱりそうなるよね・・・
06:38 terametis: 極論
06:38 terametis: 流れが最高にいいの
06:38 terametis: 求めてしまったら
06:39 terametis: 23スタック2連単発の
06:39 terametis: 45すたっく単発とかに
06:39 terametis: なるけど
06:39 terametis: そういうのもさけていきたい
06:39 NewRulerNA: ぱちぇさんの出番かなーこれ
06:39 NewRulerNA: センス溢れる提案はサポート対象外になる悲しみ
06:39 terametis: きっと
06:40 terametis: Guy選手がっ・・・
06:40 NewRulerNA: Gay選手、スルー
06:42 terametis: そことあと
06:42 terametis: 変えようとおもいつつ
06:42 terametis: かえてないのが
06:42 terametis: 01:50:486 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 
06:42 terametis: らへんのクールな01:51:423 (4) - の外し方
06:42 terametis: 入れたくない音だけだなーんか
06:42 terametis: 4いれたほうが
06:42 terametis: たたきやすくなる不思議
06:43 NewRulerNA: 30秒位前に4回くらい見なおしてセーフ判定そこ出した
06:43 NewRulerNA: 01:55:548 - ここちょっとうるさくない？
06:43 NewRulerNA: 一貫性とか持ち出すとださいのはわかってるんだけど
06:44 NewRulerNA: なんか激しすぎる感じがする
06:44 NewRulerNA: finish clap外して良さそう
06:44 terametis: それはno
06:44 terametis: 長い白のとこに
06:45 terametis: finish clap whistleつけちゃってるから
06:45 terametis: うるさいのわかるけど
06:45 terametis: ここだけclapはずしたりすると
06:45 terametis: なんかちがう感個人的にはあるんだよなあ・・・
06:45 terametis: うるさいけど)
06:46 NewRulerNA: じゃあもう一つの案が01:54:986 - から音つけに変化をもたせるパターンとかかなー
06:47 NewRulerNA: パターン音つけがこれだとできないから
06:47 NewRulerNA: それを無視できるように再構成
06:47 terametis: 01:54:986はまちがいなくこれで確定の音
06:47 terametis: 個人的には・・・
06:47 terametis: 01:55:548 (2) - は遊べる音なんだけど
06:47 NewRulerNA: 変化の始まりの節として見るとそこからスタートだけど
06:48 terametis: (1)との感じがなんか
06:48 terametis: うーーーん
06:48 NewRulerNA: この場合実際に変化があるのは次のスライダーの頭だね
06:49 terametis: 私選手は消すよりは過剰な今のほうが
06:49 terametis: 好きです(結論
06:49 NewRulerNA: (2)からスピナー前全部finish単体に変化させ
06:49 NewRulerNA: 爆音をかき消す方向かなー・・・
06:50 NewRulerNA: clap whistleはお好みだな・・・
06:50 terametis: もう
06:50 terametis: 混ぜて汚くならない音って基準で
06:50 terametis: hitsoundきめた
06:51 terametis: 全部マシマシしてる
06:51 terametis: サビとかヤバイ
06:51 NewRulerNA: 盛り上げていきたいところは少し過剰でもいいとは思う
06:52 terametis: finish信者
06:52 terametis: 03:53:861 (3) - 
06:52 terametis: スライダーの初めと最後にfinishはいってる
06:52 terametis: 神スライダー
06:53 NewRulerNA: 最後だし気合入れてfinishいいけど
06:53 NewRulerNA: ちょっとはバランス弄りたいね
06:53 NewRulerNA: 02:07:923 (2,3,4) - 曲に対して～
06:54 terametis: その
06:54 terametis: 234みたいなあまり単発
06:54 terametis: 結構どこでもジャンプおいてるから
06:54 terametis: たぶんかえないです
06:54 terametis: 02:12:423 (4,5,6) - 
06:55 terametis: とかそのたもろもろ
06:55 NewRulerNA: 音が余分に感じるから違和感感じるのかなー・・・・
06:56 NewRulerNA: かと言って消せっていうのも・・・
06:56 terametis: 02:08:298 (4) - 
06:56 terametis: たぶんこれが
06:56 terametis: overmappedっぽいから
06:56 terametis: そうおもう説
06:56 NewRulerNA: だよね
06:56 terametis: なお消すきはない
06:56 NewRulerNA: 諦めよう
06:57 terametis: hitsoundミスを
06:57 terametis: ちゃくちゃくと発見してくげーむたのしい
06:58 NewRulerNA: 指摘したい内容が減ってきて辛い
06:58 NewRulerNA: 前のパートと違うけど問題はないから言わなかったりするし
06:58 NewRulerNA: 割とこれ書けること無い・・・・？
06:58 terametis: 音がふえてる系は
06:58 terametis: わりと意図的
06:58 terametis: 02:26:392 (3) - 
06:58 terametis: とか
06:59 terametis: 02:52:173 (4,5) - 
06:59 terametis: とか
06:59 terametis: そのたもろもろ
06:59 NewRulerNA: その辺のoffbeatからはいるのは
06:59 NewRulerNA: 実際良く使うからなんとも思わないかな
07:00 NewRulerNA: 03:24:986 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - これジャンプ小さいのから大きいのじゃなくて逆にしてみない？
07:00 NewRulerNA: 声が前半高めで、後半低めだから
07:00 NewRulerNA: なんかそうさせたく感じる
07:01 NewRulerNA: その直後の配置も同じ
07:01 terametis: ここらへんなあ
07:01 terametis: もうちょっとかっこよくしたいところ
07:02 NewRulerNA: !summon ぱちぇ
07:03 terametis: さりげにかえといた
07:04 terametis: ちょっとスペーシングとかいろいろいじった
07:04 NewRulerNA: もうひとつ踏み込んで欲しかったな
07:04 terametis: ちょっとかっこよさあがった
07:04 NewRulerNA: 03:49:361 - whistleどう思う？
07:06 terametis: つけますね!
07:06 terametis: あれ
07:06 terametis: べつのとこみてた
07:06 NewRulerNA: D:
07:07 terametis: つけないかなあ
07:07 terametis: このwhistle
07:07 terametis: 超間延びするから
07:07 terametis: 03:49:361 (9) - 
07:07 terametis: がへんにきこえる
07:07 terametis: (8)つけると)
07:07 terametis: あれ
07:07 terametis: さらに
07:07 terametis: 別の場所みてた
07:07 NewRulerNA: 03:48:236 (6,7) - のパターンを03:49:361 (9,1) - にも持ってきただけ
07:08 NewRulerNA: 1はまた違うけど
07:08 terametis: つけないなあ
07:08 terametis: わたしてきには今でfine
07:08 NewRulerNA: ok
07:09 NewRulerNA: 細かく見る気力も今はないし以上かな・・・
07:09 terametis: 神modder
07:10 terametis: 張りにいこう(にっこり
07:10 NewRulerNA: それは皮肉なのか・・・・あるいは・・・・
07:10 NewRulerNA: 正直糞modだからいいかな
07:10 terametis: 00:27:236 (1,2,3) - 
07:10 terametis: 変えなきゃ配置を
07:10 terametis: 一個
07:10 terametis: 消化したの
07:10 terametis: でかい
07:10 NewRulerNA: CPのためにpostするか・・・

今年の上位10位以内にはいる糞mod here

Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Guy 2013-12-08T16:35:09+00:00

Hi! m4m :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]

Clear.

[Insane]

00:54:986 (3) - ボーカルの始まりが音強いのでスライダーエンドではなくcircleにして音取りしませんか？
01:08:486 (4,5,1) - 個人的にですがジグザグの配置できていて(1)が下の位置にあるのは流れが悪い、というか叩きにくい感じがしました。あまりいい提案は出せませんが気になったという点だけ書いておきます。
SPOILER
```
120,184,68486,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,112,68673,1,0,0:0:0:0:
```
01:15:048 (2) - このnoteは直前のスライダーに近づけて配置したほうが、次の(3)がとても叩きやすくなります。
SPOILER
01:15:611 (4) - NC? このへんだけパターン違う気がしました。
01:16:736 (7) - ^
01:19:548 (2) - Drum入れるならclapも追加したほうが音合ってるかもです。
01:22:361 (5) - NC 見た目的には01:22:548 (6) - こっちのほうがいいかも
01:28:548 (2) - Drum clap?
01:38:298 (7) - ここも長くなっちゃうのでNCして区切っていいかもしれない
01:39:329 (1) - スピナーの終わり大きな音はないから、どちらかというとvolume下げてボーカルと共にフェードアウトさせた方がしっくりきました。
01:56:954 (1) - こっちはwhistleが合いそうです。
02:06:798 (2,1) - Ctrl+Gで逆にした方がかっこいいです
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02:37:361 (1) - NCいらないような？
02:44:111 (3) - このスライダーもすこーし曲げてあげて流れを良くしたい。
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02:47:298 (2) - Drum clap?
02:56:298 (2) - ^
03:33:986 (3) - このfinishかなりやかましいので音量下げたほうがいいかもしれません。50%くらい？
04:01:548 (2) - drum clap?

[N/A (Hard)]

現状だとdiff名がUnrankableです^^b
00:56:486 (1) - この流れで来るならばCtrl+Gの形が理想的だと思います。
01:21:236 (1,2,3) - スペーシングの違いが大きく気になりました。01:19:736 (4,5) - 01:19:736 (4,5) - この２つを少し上に移動して（5gridくらい)　01:21:798 (2,3) - 同様にこれも移動したらいい感じになると思います。
01:39:329 (1) - Insaneと同じ
02:29:111 (2) - スライダーの向きこっちのほうが流れ良さそうです。
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[Normal]

01:39:329 (1) - Inasneと同じ
03:33:986 (2) - ^

Good luck

NewRulerNA

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Joined December 2010

NewRulerNA 2013-12-08T16:54:23+00:00

CakiP wrote:
Request from PM
[N/A]
02:40:173 (5) - このスライダーを往復にして、01:18:611 (1) - このnoteを消してみたり?
01:22:923 - ひとつ単発があってもいいかもです。ボーカルが主な音取りとなっているので、これが逆に浮いてしまうように感じました。なので現状維持です
03:32:861 (1) - 後ろの音楽に合わせて音量をあげてみるとか! ok

Guy wrote:
Hi! m4m :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[N/R (Hard)]
現状だとdiff名がUnrankableです^^b
少なくともBATの返事が来るまでは今のままです。今の状態ならレートから判断できるようにもなっているので言い訳もできるので少しだけ悪足掻きしてみます。
00:56:486 (1) - この流れで来るならばCtrl+Gの形が理想的だと思います。
すごく分かります。分かりますが00:56:486 と 00:56:861 - からのボーカルの変化を拾うためにジャンプという要素よりも回転のバランスを変えるほうがより曲に合うように感じたため、この配置になっています。
01:21:236 (1,2,3) - スペーシングの違いが大きく気になりました。01:19:736 (4,5) - 01:19:736 (4,5) - この２つを少し上に移動して（5gridくらい)　01:21:798 (2,3) - 同様にこれも移動したらいい感じになると思います。自分で調節しましたー
01:39:329 (1) - Insaneと同じ okok
02:29:111 (2) - スライダーの向きこっちのほうが流れ良さそうです。
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流れはそちらのほうがいいのは間違いないのですが、ここで間をより強調するためにあえて流れを乱しています。
Good luck

thanks CakiP and Gay

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terametis

1,140 posts

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

terametis 2013-12-08T17:41:46+00:00

Guy wrote:
Hi! m4m :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]
Clear.

[Insane]
00:54:986 (3) - ボーカルの始まりが音強いのでスライダーエンドではなくcircleにして音取りしませんか？

その通りなのですが、00:54:236 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - らへんでずっと1/2を使いたくないのでとりあえずこのままで。後でかえるかも
01:08:486 (4,5,1) - 個人的にですがジグザグの配置できていて(1)が下の位置にあるのは流れが悪い、というか叩きにくい感じがしました。あまりいい提案は出せませんが気になったという点だけ書いておきます。　同じような指摘が重なったので例と似た構図に直しました
SPOILER
120,184,68486,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,112,68673,1,0,0:0:0:0:
01:15:048 (2) - このnoteは直前のスライダーに近づけて配置したほうが、次の(3)がとても叩きやすくなります。結構近づけました
SPOILER
01:15:611 (4) - NC? このへんだけパターン違う気がしました。　ｱｯ　修正
01:16:736 (7) - ^　　　^
01:19:548 (2) - Drum入れるならclapも追加したほうが音合ってるかもです。　ん、んんんんん、曲的には入れたほうが良いとはおもうのですが、似たような配置を繰り返すサビの構成的にあんまりこのノートを強調するような音を付けたくないのでno changeで
01:22:361 (5) - NC 見た目的には01:22:548 (6) - こっちのほうがいいかも　この一連にNCをつけたくない謎のこだわりがあるので、とりあえずこのままで!!!!
01:28:548 (2) - Drum clap?　 01:19:548と同じ理由でno
01:38:298 (7) - ここも長くなっちゃうのでNCして区切っていいかもしれない　ok!!!!!
01:39:329 (1) - スピナーの終わり大きな音はないから、どちらかというとvolume下げてボーカルと共にフェードアウトさせた方がしっくりきました。　オーケー!!
01:56:954 (1) - こっちはwhistleが合いそうです。　マシマシマシマシにしました!
02:06:798 (2,1) - Ctrl+Gで逆にした方がかっこいいですオーケーー!!!　
SPOILER
02:37:361 (1) - NCいらないような？　個人的に同じ場所で急に2個スタック単発って読みづらいので入れたのですが、消したほうが良さそうなので消しました!!
02:44:111 (3) - このスライダーもすこーし曲げてあげて流れを良くしたい。　no!　理由としては 01:19:548と同じような感じ
SPOILER
02:47:298 (2) - Drum clap?　no!!
02:56:298 (2) - ^　　^
03:33:986 (3) - このfinishかなりやかましいので音量下げたほうがいいかもしれません。50%くらい？　このズォオオオンって感じの謎の存在感が気に入ってるのでこのままで!!
04:01:548 (2) - drum clap?　　　no!!!!!
[Normal]
01:39:329 (1) - Inasneと同じ　オーケー
03:33:986 (2) - ^　　　　　　　　ノー
Good luck

もっどありがとうございました!!!

RandF

1,245 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2013-12-10T12:41:37+00:00

From my queue~
terametisさん、またqueueに来ていただいてありがとうございます!
NewRulerNAさん、はじめまして。

[General]

tags suggetion
"Active Planets"

[Normal]

01:12:236 (1,2,3) - 初見でnoteを見失いかけました。せめて２のstackは避けたこんなのいかがでしょうか？
SPOILER
01:18:986 (1) - Ctrl+Gがいいかなと. 個人的にはoverlapも避けてほしいです
01:21:236 (3,5) - stack correctly

[Insane]

01:32:486 (1) - Ctrl+Gの方が好きです
02:19:548- add note. ここは切らない流れの方が良いかなと
03:00:236 (1) - これもCtrl+Gの方が02:59:486 (3,4) - と合ってて良いかなと
03:26:111 (1,2,3) - これだけ中心対称でないので違和感が・・・

[N/A]

00:59:111 (3,1,2) - ここをずらしているのは意図的ですか？
02:33:798 (2) - これはcurve sliderの方が良さそうな気がします
03:51:986 (1) - end at 03:52:361. その後の03:54:236 (1) - と同じpatternにした方が良いと思ったので
04:07:736 (1) - Ctrl+Gの方が好みです
04:34:736 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Fine!

normalの設定細かいですね～
でもきれいな配置で素敵でした<3
~Good Luck~

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,528 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2013-12-11T07:13:18+00:00

Easy and Insane do not have anything at the start, as well as after the last kiai but Hard does, I am sure you can find some ways to map the start and the end of the song for Easy and Insane, it does not feel complete right now.

Insane

00:54:986 (3) - shorten slider to end at 00:55:173 and add a note at 00:55:361 - something like this:

SPOILER

00:57:048 (2) - shorten slide to end at 00:57:423 and add a note at 00:57:611
02:19:548 - add a note?

N/A

03:56:486 (2) - NC here instead
04:00:986 (2) - ^ so on so forth

That's what I can suggest for now.

terametis

1,140 posts

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

terametis 2013-12-12T03:19:03+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~
terametisさん、またqueueに来ていただいてありがとうございます!
NewRulerNAさん、はじめまして。

[General]
tags suggetion　追加しました
"Active Planets"
[Normal]
01:12:236 (1,2,3) - 初見でnoteを見失いかけました。せめて２のstackは避けたこんなのいかがでしょうか？　変更しました
SPOILER
01:18:986 (1) - Ctrl+Gがいいかなと. 個人的にはoverlapも避けてほしいです　んーーこのままで！
01:21:236 (3,5) - stack correctly　　変更しました
[Insane]
01:32:486 (1) - Ctrl+Gの方が好きです　　変更しました
02:19:548- add note. ここは切らない流れの方が良いかなと　　んーー、1番でもとっていない音なのでこのままで
03:00:236 (1) - これもCtrl+Gの方が02:59:486 (3,4) - と合ってて良いかなと　　このままの方が私は好きなのでこのままで
03:26:111 (1,2,3) - これだけ中心対称でないので違和感が・・・　どうにもフローがしっくりこないのでこのままで

modありがとうございました！！

terametis

1,140 posts

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

terametis 2013-12-12T03:37:50+00:00

neonat wrote:
Easy and Insane do not have anything at the start, as well as after the last kiai but Hard does, I am sure you can find some ways to map the start and the end of the song for Easy and Insane, it does not feel complete right now.
It is the discretion of the mapper. I can make it but now is good for me.

Insane

00:54:986 (3) - shorten slider to end at 00:55:173 and add a note at 00:55:361 - something like this:　You are right, but I can't think good placement
SPOILER
00:57:048 (2) - shorten slide to end at 00:57:423 and add a note at 00:57:611　ok
02:19:548 - add a note?　hmm, no

thanks for mod :3

kintyan

150 posts

Joined September 2010

kintyan 2013-12-15T08:56:37+00:00

細かすぎてあまり貢献できないのでno kudosuでお願いします

Insane

00:58:173 (3) - どうせならここのスライダーを 00:57:611 (3) - とで重ねたほうが良いと思います
00:58:548 (4) - ここから始まる連打が 00:58:829 (5) - 以降あんまり合ってないように感じました。単発の方が僕は好きですね
01:56:954 (1) - 好みの問題だと思うのですがspinnerを 02:00:236 までにして 02:00:611 ここから4拍スライダーの折り返しと 02:01:736 ここから2拍スライダーを置いたほうが個人的にはいいと思いました。ほんとに個人次第だと思うのでスルーでも大丈夫です
02:13:548 (2) - スライダーの終点を 02:12:798 (6) - のNoteと綺麗にはめたいです。Y軸を238から240にするだけの細かいことですがすいません。

N/A

02:04:923 (3) - ここのNoteと 02:05:111 (4) - ここのNoteを重ねないほうが綺麗になると置います。
02:29:111 (2) - ^
02:59:486 (1) - NC追加
03:00:236 (1) - NC削除
03:01:361 (1) - NC追加
03:02:486 (1) - NC削除
03:04:361 (1) - NC追加
03:04:736 (1) - NC削除
04:25:736 (1) - NC削除
04:26:298 (2) - NC追加

terametis

1,140 posts

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

terametis 2013-12-15T09:25:05+00:00

kintyan wrote:
細かすぎてあまり貢献できないのでno kudosuでお願いします

00:58:173 (3) - どうせならここのスライダーを 00:57:611 (3) - とで重ねたほうが良いと思います　ちゃんとあわせてたはずなのにいつの間にかずれている不具合　直しました!!
00:58:548 (4) - ここから始まる連打が 00:58:829 (5) - 以降あんまり合ってないように感じました。単発の方が僕は好きですね　んーー、結構長い連打置いてる場所がおおいので今回はこのままで　かなり無理やり置いてる連打なので、今後指摘重なったら変更します。
01:56:954 (1) - 好みの問題だと思うのですがspinnerを 02:00:236 までにして 02:00:611 ここから4拍スライダーの折り返しと 02:01:736 ここから2拍スライダーを置いたほうが個人的にはいいと思いました。ほんとに個人次第だと思うのでスルーでも大丈夫です　ん、んんんん　このままで!!
02:13:548 (2) - スライダーの終点を 02:12:798 (6) - のNoteと綺麗にはめたいです。Y軸を238から240にするだけの細かいことですがすいません。　直しました!!

modありがとうごさいました!!

NewRulerNA

1,301 posts

Joined December 2010

NewRulerNA 2013-12-16T18:09:18+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~
terametisさん、またqueueに来ていただいてありがとうございます!
NewRulerNAさん、はじめまして。
:3

[N/A]
00:59:111 (3,1,2) - ここをずらしているのは意図的ですか？スタックによるズレを考慮してこういった配置にしています
02:33:798 (2) - これはcurve sliderの方が良さそうな気がします何か明確な根拠があればよいのですが、私のフィーリング的な観点から見ると曲線より直線のほうが格好良く見えるので現状維持をします。
03:51:986 (1) - end at 03:52:361. その後の03:54:236 (1) - と同じpatternにした方が良いと思ったので ok
04:07:736 (1) - Ctrl+Gの方が好みです体感では04:07:361 (7) の方に引き寄せる力がちょっと強すぎるように感じ、Hardの全体難易度と曲をそれぞれ比較した際に、今より無理矢理な感じが強くなっているように思えました。
04:34:736 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Fine! :3
normalの設定細かいですね～
でもきれいな配置で素敵でした<3
~Good Luck~

thanks ^^

neonat wrote:
N/A

03:56:486 (2) - NC here instead did not do it because.....01:14:111 (1,2) -
04:00:986 (2) - ^ so on so forth sorry

That's what I can suggest for now.

><

kintyan wrote:
02:04:923 (3) - ここのNoteと 02:05:111 (4) - ここのNoteを重ねないほうが綺麗になると置います。
重なっていない可能性が・・・？
SPOILER
02:29:111 (2) - ^ 気にする人はあまりいないと思いますがfixed
02:59:486 (1) - NC追加
特別ここに強調させる必要性も感じられず、パターンを壊すだけとなってしまうのでこの修正は見送りです。
03:00:236 (1) - NC削除
03:01:361 (1) - NC追加 ^
03:02:486 (1) - NC削除
03:04:361 (1) - NC追加これとこの下1つを修正
03:04:736 (1) - NC削除
04:25:736 (1) - NC削除 00:18:986 (6,1) - と同じパターンとなるべきポイントなのでここの修正はしてません。
04:26:298 (2) - NC追加

thank you

http://puu.sh/5OGO0.zip

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ayaka2000

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Joined June 2013

ayaka2000 2013-12-19T14:50:08+00:00

初心者が通ります
あまりにも美譜面でコメントがほとんどありません　笑
あと、猫に吹いたw

Easy

01:10:736のあとの白①～ピンク③01:14:111がosuをはじめたばかりの初心者ならちょっと難しいかも
01:22:361　ここも難しいイメージを持ちました。
01:27:611　ここも若干難しいかと思いましたが、4.5のあとなので叩きやすいのでここは大丈夫かと思いました。

N/A

03:48:611 ②～③の距離が一定の方がいいかな

Insane

02:42:048 番号が21番まであるので途中で色を変えてもいいのかなと思いました。

初心者の感想ですので、お聞き流しくださいませ～。それでは失礼します。

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2013-12-23T17:41:22+00:00

脅されたのでinsaneだけpostします

[Insane]
00:41:392 (5) - remove note 00:40:736 (1,2) - ここで2個単発 00:41:111 (3,4) - ここで2個単発重ねて5連打で
ずどどどんっていったほうがプレイしやすそう

SPOILER

00:44:673 (2) - スライダーエンドはAdditions:NでClapいれないのかな・・・？ 00:42:798 (4) - こういうとこ入ってるけど・・・？
00:45:986 (3,4,5,6) - 00:45:986 (3) - これの 00:46:361 - ここをリバース地点で取るなら 00:47:486 (6) - こっちも同じようにあわせて
こんな感じの音取りにしたほうがいいようなきもする

00:52:736 - add noteしたほうが叩きやすそう
00:53:673 (2) - こことおなじ 00:44:673 (2) -
00:54:986 (3) - 後ろのぶいーんみたいな音に合わせてる？のはわかるかもしれないけど歌詞を拾ってこっちの音取りのほうがプレイはしやすそう

00:57:611 (3,1) - Nc入れ替えたほうがいいかも？2番のほうはこの箇所でNcはいってるので~
01:00:611 (2) - こことおなじ 00:44:673 (2) -
01:14:204 - add noteして5連打にしたほうがめてぃすさんぽい？
01:35:486 (2) - Ctrl+Gしてそのあとの 01:35:861 (1,2,3) - これを2番のKiaiと同様に軽いジャンプ配置にしてみては?少し狭く感じました。
01:38:392 (2) - remove noteするか 01:38:111 - ここからストリームにしないと少し叩きづらかったです。2番も同様に(一番最後のKiaiとあわせて)
02:24:236 (1) - 02:24:423 - ここの音が強いので個人的には拾いたい
04:04:548 (8) - Gridtinyで3grid右に移動させるとgood　( 04:03:798 (2,3) - ここと同じ角度になる？)

書くことがありません

terametis

1,140 posts

Joined April 2009

Topic Starter

terametis 2013-12-26T16:21:51+00:00

Satellite wrote:
脅されたのでinsaneだけpostします

[Insane]
00:41:392 (5) - remove note 00:40:736 (1,2) - ここで2個単発 00:41:111 (3,4) - ここで2個単発重ねて5連打で
ずどどどんっていったほうがプレイしやすそう　んーー、このままで
SPOILER
00:44:673 (2) - スライダーエンドはAdditions:NでClapいれないのかな・・・？ 00:42:798 (4) - こういうとこ入ってるけど・・・？　00:42:798 (4) -とかはうしろのドッて音に置いてるとこが多いのでここはつけません
00:45:986 (3,4,5,6) - 00:45:986 (3) - これの 00:46:361 - ここをリバース地点で取るなら 00:47:486 (6) - こっちも同じようにあわせて
こんな感じの音取りにしたほうがいいようなきもする　いろいろ変えました

00:52:736 - add noteしたほうが叩きやすそう　no
00:53:673 (2) - こことおなじ 00:44:673 (2) - 　no
00:54:986 (3) - 後ろのぶいーんみたいな音に合わせてる？のはわかるかもしれないけど歌詞を拾ってこっちの音取りのほうがプレイはしやすそう　ンン・・・1/2スライダーにするとどうにもしっくり来なくて考え中

00:57:611 (3,1) - Nc入れ替えたほうがいいかも？2番のほうはこの箇所でNcはいってるので~　ok
01:00:611 (2) - こことおなじ 00:44:673 (2) -　no
01:14:204 - add noteして5連打にしたほうがめてぃすさんぽい？　no
01:35:486 (2) - Ctrl+Gしてそのあとの 01:35:861 (1,2,3) - これを2番のKiaiと同様に軽いジャンプ配置にしてみては?少し狭く感じました。　ン、んんんんん　時間あるときにジャンプある感じにしてみます
01:38:392 (2) - remove noteするか 01:38:111 - ここからストリームにしないと少し叩きづらかったです。2番も同様に(一番最後のKiaiとあわせて)　ンー、このままの方が好きなのでこのままで
02:24:236 (1) - 02:24:423 - ここの音が強いので個人的には拾いたいok
04:04:548 (8) - Gridtinyで3grid右に移動させるとgood　( 04:03:798 (2,3) - ここと同じ角度になる？)　おそらく(7)だとおもうけどno
書くことがありません

modありがとう!!!!!!!!!!

YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,146 posts

Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2014-01-04T01:44:04+00:00

hey~ tera-san

/. i'm here as you requested from my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: Should be fixed/highly suggested.
Green: Suggestion.
Blue: Comments, Advice, or Other.

[General]
CLEAR~!

[Normal]
consider increasing the HP drain by 1 since this is a mid-BPM song, and the drain is at a perfect speed to go down. HP 2 feels too slow during gameplay IMO.
00:20:486 (2,3,4) - only keep the whistles and claps at the beginning of these sliders. the finishes sound too noisy and too distracting to follow for players during gameplay.
00:25:361 (3,4) - personally, doing Ctrl+G on these notes would make this part more flowy and more fun to follow since it creates triangular patterns for this part of the song.
00:24:986 (2,1,2,3) - same as 00:20:486.
00:39:611 (5) - consider replacing this for a drum clap at the end to emphasize that part in the drums.
00:47:486 (2) - i highly suggest that you replace this for a circle and a 1/1 slider because too many 2/1 sliders like can be too repetitive and not as fun during gameplay IMO.
00:55:361 (1) - either a circle and a 1/1 slider, or a 1/1 repeat slider would be more fitting as it flows to the vocals and BGM equally in a smooth motion during gameplay IMO.
01:11:111 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - maybe to make it more readable and easier to follow, replace this for 2 1/1 repeat sliders. the circles can be most likely confusing to follow for players during gameplay IMO.
01:13:361 (1,2) - use drum claps instead of drum whistles. same reason as 00:39:611.
01:14:111 (3) - get rid of the normal sampleset and replace the finish for a soft clap for emphasis with that sound in the BGM. the clap sounds more fitting than the normal finish IMO.
01:18:986 (1) - same as 00:55:361.
01:31:736 (5) - same as 01:14:111.
01:38:111 (2,3) - maybe move it here instead to make a nice triangular pattern, and to make the diff more fun to follow during gameplay?
01:48:236 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - orz try doing a different pattern instead. i don't like how this is copy+pasted and it'll show the laziness of the mapper. i'll help you out here. use the code in the box instead for a newer and non-repetitive pattern. the hitsounds are all on you however.

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04:00:986 (1) - move this slider down. because it's touching the HP bar, it can be really distracting for players as they would most likely miss during gameplay.
04:13:736 (5) - same as 00:39:611.
04:14:486 (1,2,3,4,5) - make your combos look like this. you can see that they're inconsistent with the 2nd chorus of the song.
not bad. the only things that bothered me the most are number of 2/1 sliders because it feels like an easy diff to me. also the finishes on the majority of the parts. they sound too loud and too distracting to follow, especially for players. consider removing them since the whistle and clap is enough.

[N/A]
because of the new rule regarding diff names, this has to be named "N/A's Hard".
increase the CS and OD by 1 because i feel that it doesn't with the hard diff at all. yes the patterns are like a hard diff, but the settings feel like a normal diff IMO.
i want you to highly consider starting and ending at the same time as tera's diffs. there are players that don't like that and it could annoy them. this isn't a rankable issue, just a suggestion i want you to consider.
00:01:361 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - i suggest that you change some sliders to circles or even 1/1 sliders to make this part fun to follow. it's fine to keep some 1/2 sliders and 1/2 repeats, but using too many can be too repetitive and not as fun as players might think during gameplay IMO.
00:28:173 - add a circle here. you can hear the BGM slightly rising compared to the end of the previous slider.
00:41:861 (1,2) - i'll admit, the look of this pattern is nice, but the flow to me feels uncomfortable to follow during gameplay. i can tel that you wanna keep the blanket between (2,4), but try a different shaped slider, but at the same time, making the flow a lot smoother and keeping the blanket intact during gameplay.
00:44:111 (1,2) - how about re-adjusting to make it look like this so that it flows properly and more smoothly during gameplay.
00:55:361 (2,3,4) - i think these 3 notes should be a jump instead of a spaced out, followed by a jump pattern because the pitch of the vocals are the same, making it look more consistent during gameplay IMO.
01:00:236 (2) - i wanna know why is this manually stacked. since the previous notes aren't manually stacked, i think it'd be more better and consistent if this is perfectly stacked like the other notes during gameplay IMO.
01:04:361 (1) - consider moving this slider here because i feel that players would be expecting this note to be here due to the pattern being followed during gameplay.
01:22:173 (3) - what about Ctrl+G instead? i find it similar to 01:11:111 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - during gameplay, so why not do that to make the map more fun to follow IMO.
01:58:361 (4,5,6,1) - try to clean this up by avoiding the overlaps. the overlaps in this part don't look nice and they make the flow feel uncomfortable to follow during gameplay.
02:33:236 (1) - same idea as 01:04:361, but move it to the right instead.
03:38:486 (1) - reduce this slider 1/2 back and add a circle on the 1/1 tick so that it'll follow the vocals more properly during gameplay.

[Insane]
use AR8 in this. AR9 feels too forced for players to follow during gameplay. using AR8 would not only make the map more fun, but it'll also increase the flow and transitioning as well.
00:24:423 (2) - i think this would flow a lot better if this is blanketing (1) during gameplay.
00:24:986 (1,2) - replace this for a 1/2 slider. there's no drums at (2), so that feels unnecessary to follow during gameplay. the 1/2 slider would follow the vocals and it'll be more smoother to follow as well during gameplay IMO. i can see the triangular jump pattern, but hitting that note would feel uncomfortable during gameplay.
00:41:392 (5) - delete this note. it doesn't follow anything in the BGM, and with this note in effect, it would ruin the calmness and feeling of this part of the song during gameplay.
00:42:798 (4) - maybe stacking this note on the end of (1) would make this pattern fun to follow during gameplay? i feel that the overlap here feels messy during gameplay IMO.
00:52:736 (3) - why don't you follow the vocals instead of the piano for consistency with the other anti-jumps in this part of the song? put this note under (2). it'll be more consistent when following the vocals during gameplay IMO.
00:58:829 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - this stream should be removed because there's no drumroll in this stream, and like i said, it ruins the calmness and feeling in the diff. replace this for 3 circles, and a 1/2 slider to follow the music more properly. the pattern is all on you however.
01:12:423 (6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2) - again--this part is overmapped and there's no 1/4 drumroll in this part. replace this for a circle, followed by 2 1/2 sliders and another circle. same reason as above.
01:18:048 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - replace this for a 1/1 slider and 3 circles like the next pattern. same reason as above.
02:15:048 - add a circle here. you'd be following the BGM if you listen carefully, and i think it'd be more fun to follow IMO.
02:27:798 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - same idea as 00:58:829.
avoid adding too many streams. don't add too many streams for the sake of making this diff harder. the jumps are fine, so i want you to highly consider removing some of them, and add jumps and less notes to follow the music properly, and same comment about the finishes in normal.

and that's all i got. your normal can use more mods since it's like an easy diff to me, and your insane is overmapped at several parts like the ones i mentioned in the mod. for the normal, use more 1/1 patterns, and some 1/2 patterns as well, but not too much. and for the insane--you know what i said so yea. the hard can be more consistent in starting and ending, but it's just a personal preference of mine. that doesn't mean you have to do it, it's ok if you want to keep it. anyways GL and don't give up on the map

.

NewRulerNA

1,301 posts

Joined December 2010

NewRulerNA 2014-01-04T04:18:10+00:00

ayaka2000 wrote:
N/A
03:48:611 ②～③の距離が一定の方がいいかな
ボーカルの声量を意識したバランスにしているので現状維持です。

初心者の感想ですので、お聞き流しくださいませ～。それでは失礼します。

Byakugan249 wrote:
hey~ tera-san /. i'm here as you requested from my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: Should be fixed/highly suggested.
Green: Suggestion.
Blue: Comments, Advice, or Other.

[N/A]
because of the new rule regarding diff names, this has to be named "N/A's Hard".
I know, changed the name.
increase the CS and OD by 1 because i feel that it doesn't with the hard diff at all. yes the patterns are like a hard diff, but the settings feel like a normal diff IMO.
I know CS3 and OD5 is low as a Hard. but have few reason.
as the difficulty of the intermediate. Normal and Insane have a large difference in comparison with common mapsets, so I think would be better to keep this balance than using general setting.
just like easy map than difficult that.

i want you to highly consider starting and ending at the same time as tera's diffs. there are players that don't like that and it could annoy them. this isn't a rankable issue, just a suggestion i want you to consider.
I just want to map if it is mappable orz
00:01:361 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - i suggest that you change some sliders to circles or even 1/1 sliders to make this part fun to follow. it's fine to keep some 1/2 sliders and 1/2 repeats, but using too many can be too repetitive and not as fun as players might think during gameplay IMO.
not changed. there is not sound to follow other than the piano. in addition I think not need to be fun this section because this is just introduction part.
00:28:173 - add a circle here. you can hear the BGM slightly rising compared to the end of the previous slider.
ok
00:41:861 (1,2) - i'll admit, the look of this pattern is nice, but the flow to me feels uncomfortable to follow during gameplay. i can tel that you wanna keep the blanket between (2,4), but try a different shaped slider, but at the same time, making the flow a lot smoother and keeping the blanket intact during gameplay.
ok
00:44:111 (1,2) - how about re-adjusting to make it look like this so that it flows properly and more smoothly during gameplay.
not changed. its flow may be good but I prefer to use an extreme flow than gradual. sorry.
00:55:361 (2,3,4) - i think these 3 notes should be a jump instead of a spaced out, followed by a jump pattern because the pitch of the vocals are the same, making it look more consistent during gameplay IMO.
changed these spacing, but not same spread
01:00:236 (2) - i wanna know why is this manually stacked. since the previous notes aren't manually stacked, i think it'd be more better and consistent if this is perfectly stacked like the other notes during gameplay IMO.
just for modder. some modders say like"why dont you stack?". use in order to avoid them.
01:04:361 (1) - consider moving this slider here because i feel that players would be expecting this note to be here due to the pattern being followed during gameplay.
missing link ><. but changed a bit.
01:22:173 (3) - what about Ctrl+G instead? i find it similar to 01:11:111 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - during gameplay, so why not do that to make the map more fun to follow IMO.
ctrl+G on (2)~
01:58:361 (4,5,6,1) - try to clean this up by avoiding the overlaps. the overlaps in this part don't look nice and they make the flow feel uncomfortable to follow during gameplay.
alleviated the overlap
02:33:236 (1) - same idea as 01:04:361, but move it to the right instead.
changed a bit by myself
03:38:486 (1) - reduce this slider 1/2 back and add a circle on the 1/1 tick so that it'll follow the vocals more properly during gameplay.
not changed. not need to follow the vocal precisely because this is slow part. I want to add characteristic by reducing the sound >.<

thank you Byakugan >.</

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408,304,251861,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,340,253923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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330,190,255048,2,0,P|208:192|180:152,1,160
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120,156,256361,2,0,L|140:244,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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280,316,257486,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,172,257861,2,0,P|244:132|336:160,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,224,258423,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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284,116,261611,6,0,L|292:195,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,276,261986,2,0,P|392:264|420:232,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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terametis

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terametis 2014-01-09T14:34:55+00:00

Byakugan249 wrote:
hey~ tera-san /. i'm here as you requested from my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: Should be fixed/highly suggested.
Green: Suggestion.
Blue: Comments, Advice, or Other.

[General]
CLEAR~!

[Normal]
consider increasing the HP drain by 1 since this is a mid-BPM song, and the drain is at a perfect speed to go down. HP 2 feels too slow during gameplay IMO.　
ok,changed
00:20:486 (2,3,4) - only keep the whistles and claps at the beginning of these sliders. the finishes sound too noisy and too distracting to follow for players during gameplay.　
no, it may be annoying, but I like finishsound.
00:25:361 (3,4) - personally, doing Ctrl+G on these notes would make this part more flowy and more fun to follow since it creates triangular patterns for this part of the song.
　Fixed
00:24:986 (2,1,2,3) - same as 00:20:486.
sorry no~
00:39:611 (5) - consider replacing this for a drum clap at the end to emphasize that part in the drums.
　umm, I want keep, because of the symmetry and, it is easy to understand.
00:47:486 (2) - i highly suggest that you replace this for a circle and a 1/1 slider because too many 2/1 sliders like can be too repetitive and not as fun during gameplay IMO.
　Fixed
00:55:361 (1) - either a circle and a 1/1 slider, or a 1/1 repeat slider would be more fitting as it flows to the vocals and BGM equally in a smooth motion during gameplay IMO.
umm, no.This suggest is not bad, but I like now state.
01:11:111 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - maybe to make it more readable and easier to follow, replace this for 2 1/1 repeat sliders. the circles can be most likely confusing to follow for players during gameplay IMO.
　changed
01:13:361 (1,2) - use drum claps instead of drum whistles. same reason as 00:39:611.
　ok
01:14:111 (3) - get rid of the normal sampleset and replace the finish for a soft clap for emphasis with that sound in the BGM. the clap sounds more fitting than the normal finish IMO.
ok~
01:18:986 (1) - same as 00:55:361.
I repeat the same pattern intentionally.
01:31:736 (5) - same as 01:14:111.
umm, you're right, but I like this flow. If same pointed out many, I will fixed it.
01:38:111 (2,3) - maybe move it here instead to make a nice triangular pattern, and to make the diff more fun to follow during gameplay?　
nice :3 change it.
01:48:236 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - orz try doing a different pattern instead. i don't like how this is copy+pasted and it'll show the laziness of the mapper. i'll help you out here. use the code in the box instead for a newer and non-repetitive pattern. the hitsounds are all on you however.
SPOILER
116,91,108236,6,0,P|89:157|127:264,1,184,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,317,109361,2,0,P|235:333|279:327,1,91.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,285,110111,1,0,0:0:0:0:
401,210,110486,6,0,B|401:170|401:170|371:106|371:106|371:68,2,138
355,285,111986,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,237,112361,1,0,0:0:0:0:
235,160,112736,6,0,P|224:82|314:28,1,184
389,44,113861,1,0,0:0:0:0:
442,114,114236,2,0,P|457:153|458:217,1,91.9999999999999
425,284,114986,6,0,B|393:331|347:333|347:333|302:308,2,138
462,204,116486,2,0,P|475:154|459:108,1,91.9999999999999
405,50,117236,1,0,0:0:0:0:
thanks! changed this :3
04:00:986 (1) - move this slider down. because it's touching the HP bar, it can be really distracting for players as they would most likely miss during gameplay.
no, I think it is no problem.
SPOILER
04:13:736 (5) - same as 00:39:611.
ok~
04:14:486 (1,2,3,4,5) - make your combos look like this. you can see that they're inconsistent with the 2nd chorus of the song.
ok,fixed

[Insane]
use AR8 in this. AR9 feels too forced for players to follow during gameplay. using AR8 would not only make the map more fun, but it'll also increase the flow and transitioning as well.
No, many have big jumps and Anti-jumps, so I think AR9 is best.
00:24:423 (2) - i think this would flow a lot better if this is blanketing (1) during gameplay.
no, now is good for me.
00:24:986 (1,2) - replace this for a 1/2 slider. there's no drums at (2), so that feels unnecessary to follow during gameplay. the 1/2 slider would follow the vocals and it'll be more smoother to follow as well during gameplay IMO. i can see the triangular jump pattern, but hitting that note would feel uncomfortable during gameplay.
You're right. Fixed.
00:41:392 (5) - delete this note. it doesn't follow anything in the BGM, and with this note in effect, it would ruin the calmness and feeling of this part of the song during gameplay.
I think this note give easy and fun to play. I don't hesitate to use a overmapped of this kind, so I don't change.
00:42:798 (4) - maybe stacking this note on the end of (1) would make this pattern fun to follow during gameplay? i feel that the overlap here feels messy during gameplay IMO.
A little adjustment, but it is not stacking
00:52:736 (3) - why don't you follow the vocals instead of the piano for consistency with the other anti-jumps in this part of the song? put this note under (2). it'll be more consistent when following the vocals during gameplay IMO.
Order to have between 3/2, so this note isn't put under (2).
00:58:829 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - this stream should be removed because there's no drumroll in this stream, and like i said, it ruins the calmness and feeling in the diff. replace this for 3 circles, and a 1/2 slider to follow the music more properly. the pattern is all on you however.
Fixed
01:12:423 (6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2) - again--this part is overmapped and there's no 1/4 drumroll in this part. replace this for a circle, followed by 2 1/2 sliders and another circle. same reason as above.
These are overmapped, but fun for me .
01:18:048 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - replace this for a 1/1 slider and 3 circles like the next pattern. same reason as above.
^
02:15:048 - add a circle here. you'd be following the BGM if you listen carefully, and i think it'd be more fun to follow IMO.
I want to emphasize the vocal in this part, so no.
02:27:798 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - same idea as 00:58:829.
Fixed

thanks a lot, 249!

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