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Momochikun

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Momochikun 2013-11-19T10:19:08+00:00

At least.. updated~ :3
Sorry can't reply mods. But almost fixed all of your suggestions guys >.<

Hinsvar : 01:12:312 (3) - gue naikin 1 grid krna nazi. pls update lol :3

DenoisoGoiso

681 posts

Joined April 2013

DenoisoGoiso 2013-11-22T14:50:02+00:00

AHHHHHHHH Ken ai sot som setar? (>^.^)>

i will mod this later >.< (random mod)

NewRulerNA

1,301 posts

Joined December 2010

NewRulerNA 2013-11-22T15:30:18+00:00

my lazy mod here

red: Unrankable issue.
blue: maybe unrankable issue.
Bold: not unrankable, but should fix it.

[General]

you must fix this issue.
missing video in Hinsvar's Prayer, 10nya's Easy. dont forget to add video

[10nya]

00:09:226 (2) - (nazi)remove whistle from whole and add whistle on start/end
00:10:598 (4) - I think should emphasize in 00:11:112, because its sound is large.
1. 00:10:598 (4) - 3/2 slider
2. 00:11:455 (5) - circle
00:16:083 (4) - ^
00:18:141 (2) - fmm....would be better to extend to 00:18:826 - . what instrument on 00:18:655 and 00:18:826 is same so if can follow both sounds, it would be best. but maybe star rating become high so pick up the sound of the last. It is possible to reduce the discomfort by picking up many sounds.
00:39:912 (3) - try to add whistle on whole. this mean useing whistle-sliderslide.wav
00:55:683 - 00:56:026 - please...please use clap here ;_; feel discomfort what difference between 00:52:598 (2,4) 's hitsound pattern.
00:54:998 (1) - move to 00:54:655 and clap on all section
00:54:655 (4) - move to 00:56:369 and remove clap

[Xinely]

00:02:883 (1) - why did not follow the vocal between 00:03:398 ~ 00:03:912 ? the vocal in 00:03:741 - . would be better to remove reverse and put circle there.
00:34:255 (3) - should not follow vocal. already followed instruments in 00:30:312 ~ 00:34:083 - (and before it).
00:56:198 (4) - what did this follow...?
01:17:626 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - feel there is some issues. what you picked up is really hard to hear.
01:18:312 - 01:21:055 - 01:23:798 - 01:26:541 - 01:27:912 - there is no any instruments start/end
I could not understand what you want, so there is no any suggestion...sry

[SkyDevil]

skipped

[Hinsvar]

00:07:426 (2) - overmapped. there is no any instruments.
00:18:998 (3) - ^
00:26:198 (1) - move to 00:26:026. vocal start is there.
00:55:683 (3,4,5) - the map needs more jump lol
01:13:855 (4) - same as 00:18:998 (3)

[Insane]

00:00:141 (1,2,3,4,5) - too hard as slow part. pls more easier for overall >.<
like this^
00:21:913 (4,1) - this gap is not good imo, this jump is larger than other (00:24:656 (4,1) etc.). please adjust balance for overall. but dont have to remove the jump.
00:40:942 (7) - why did not use stream? I feel there is same instrument as 00:29:970 (6,7,8,9,1) - .
00:53:456 (6) - Ctrl+G? just want to put jump lol
01:01:684 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - <3
01:02:799 (8) - add soft-whistle?

mod time: 2 hours

gl^^

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Momochikun 2013-11-22T21:59:58+00:00

DenoisoGoiso wrote:
AHHHHHHHH Ken ai sot som setar? (>^.^)>
i will mod this later >.< (random mod)

Thanks for the support :3

NewRulerNA wrote:
my lazy mod here

red: Unrankable issue.
blue: maybe unrankable issue.
Bold: not unrankable, but should fix it.

[General]

you must fix this issue. ofc
missing video in Hinsvar's Prayer, 10nya's Easy. dont forget to add video
[Insane]
00:00:141 (1,2,3,4,5) - too hard as slow part. pls more easier for overall >.< sure
like this^
00:21:913 (4,1) - this gap is not good imo, this jump is larger than other (00:24:656 (4,1) etc.). please adjust balance for overall. but dont have to remove the jump. reduced the jump a bit
00:40:942 (7) - why did not use stream? I feel there is same instrument as 00:29:970 (6,7,8,9,1) - . nice catch
00:53:456 (6) - Ctrl+G? just want to put jump lol i think it didn't fit
01:01:684 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - <3 <3
01:02:799 (8) - add soft-whistle?why not ? added
mod time: 2 hours

gl^^

Thank you for mod~
Updated my diff

Btw Hinsvar yg preview time udh gw fix sendiri.. updet dulu ye sblum cek mod lel :3

DenoisoGoiso

681 posts

Joined April 2013

DenoisoGoiso 2013-11-23T09:03:55+00:00

Hi! From Random modding >.<

Purple : Placement
Aqua : Hitsound
Orange : Change The Slider
Black : Other

[10nya's Easy]

00:40:941 (4) - x:404 y:72 please

Only that

[Xinely's Normal]

00:05:626 (1) - Change Whistle To Finish (front slider)

00:11:112 (1) - It's look like Bengkok With The 00:11:969 (3)

00:57:741 (1) - Change Whistle To Finish (front slider)

01:25:169 (1) - Like this :
Changes

[SkyDevil's Hard]

00:19:341 (1) - Finish please

00:45:226 (5) - New Combo?

00:52:255 (1) - Finish Please

01:02:541 (4) - add clap at front slider

01:07:169 (1) - ^

[Hinsvar's Prayer]
i can't find it anymore

[Insane]
i can't find it anymore

SkyDevil

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

SkyDevil 2013-11-23T21:21:42+00:00

NewRulerNA wrote:
[SkyDevil]
skipped

Does that mean its good ?

DenoisoGoiso wrote:
Hi! From Random modding >.<

[SkyDevil's Hard]
00:19:341 (1) - Finish please ~no, doesnt sound well with drum
00:45:226 (5) - New Combo? ~the pattern would look bad then ; A ;
00:52:255 (1) - Finish Please ~okay
01:02:541 (4) - add clap at front slider
01:07:169 (1) - ^ ~sounds bad at both

Thanks for mods both >w<

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10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

10nya 2013-11-24T02:38:17+00:00

update

osu file format v12

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Title:Anicca
TitleUnicode:Anicca
Artist:Harada Hitomi
ArtistUnicode:原田 ひとみ
Creator:Momochikun
Version:10nya's Easy
Source:Machine Doll wa Kizutsukanai
Tags:opening 機巧少女は傷つかない lerche 夜々 -tennya- -_t_e_n_n_y_a_- xinely hinsvar 10nya skydevil
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sorry for late!

-Neipezi

2,246 posts

Joined October 2011

-Neipezi 2013-11-24T07:52:26+00:00

hello, momochikun. again came to your map xD

[General]
title a "Anicca" -> "Anicca (TV Size)" add

[10nya's Easy]
- CS -1?
01:06:483 - circle add?

[Xinely's Normal]
- remove unused green line 01:15:569 - , 01:16:255 - , 01:16:598 -
00:28:941 (3,4) - 1/1 slide change? (vocal)
00:29:969 (4) - clap add
01:17:626 (1,2) - 01:17:798 - here a 1/2 slide arrowhead add? -> 01:18:998 (2) - ctrl + v
01:18:998 (2) - 01:19:169 - move? (the sound of electric guitars)
01:20:369 (1) - NC remove

[SkyDevil's Hard]
00:05:626 (3) - blanket also really off
01:18:312 (2) - distance
01:18:998 (4) - ^
01:24:141 (3) - ^

[Hinsvar's Prayer]
00:05:455 (5) - x160 y136 move?
00:08:712 (3) - clap remove
00:10:426 (4) - clap add
00:10:769 (2) - clap remove
00:11:455 (3) - ^
00:13:169 (1) - clap add
00:14:198 (3) - clap remove
00:16:941 (3) - ^
00:47:283 (2,3,4) - changing patterns of jump?

box

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01:17:112 (2,3) - whistle add?
01:28:941 - sampleset soft change

[Insane]
00:34:942 (2) - ctrl + g?
00:40:770 (6) - x40 y300 move?
00:46:084 (5) - ctrl + g?
00:48:142 (4) - x132 y192 move? (move quickly)
00:49:341 - circle add? (here you can hear the sound of the drum.)

good lucky:D/

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,789 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2013-11-24T10:44:09+00:00

Loli Cjj wrote:
~~Actually I did some offset change with note snapping so I can mod it right before Hinsvar do it. Too bad I'm lazy so I skip it~~

~~Let's see what can I do in this diff.~~

Since OD is quite high, how about HP 7? Well, the current difficulty setting is like this to make sure the spread is better... Maybe not for now? It's pretty appropriate for this kind of difficulty, anyway.
01:20:369 (1,2,3,4) - All of sudden why ...lol. Added NC on 01:20:712 (3) so it'll be more readable, I guess.
01:21:741 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - From 0.8 to 1.2 I cry. 1.0 or 1.1 is enough just don't too big I'm not ready that time to deal with that spacing I'd still like to keep the 1.2x spacing. It fits with the atmosphere of the song better.
I think that's all.

Chocoliti wrote:
And I got PM by Hinsvar to recheck Hinsvar's Prayer diff, but it doesn't have big problem for me.
Actually I hate pattern like this 01:20:369 (1,2,3,4) - I prefer stream at here. But you can ignore it anyway. I think a series of jumps would work better, considering how the instrument goes here...

NewRulerNA wrote:
[Hinsvar]
00:07:426 (2) - overmapped. there is no any instruments. There is. That's all I have to say here.
00:18:998 (3) - ^ ^
00:26:198 (1) - move to 00:26:026. vocal start is there. The current pattern actually goes with the vocal better, since the singer seems to "hold" her vocal throughout this slider.
00:55:683 (3,4,5) - the map needs more jump lol Made a different jump.
01:13:855 (4) - same as 00:18:998 (3) This one is to emphasize the syllable from the lyrics...

-Kirito wrote:
[Hinsvar's Prayer]
00:05:455 (5) - x160 y136 move? The flow is worse that way, so uh, no.
00:08:712 (3) - clap remove Why should I remove the clap here when an instrument which sounds similar to the clap is being played...?
00:10:426 (4) - clap add ...I'm not sure of how are you hitsounding this song.
00:10:769 (2) - clap remove Okay, I'll gladly remove this one since it actually makes the hitsound pattern better.
00:11:455 (3) - ^ ^
00:13:169 (1) - clap add ^
00:14:198 (3) - clap remove ^
00:16:941 (3) - ^ ^
00:47:283 (2,3,4) - changing patterns of jump? Looking at the pattern, it will surely break the flow of the map, so... no.
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01:17:112 (2,3) - whistle add? Only added one at (3); feels excessive if I have to add two whistles.
01:28:941 - sampleset soft change Gladly.

Thanks for the mod everyone!

\``/

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Ethercastle

116 posts

Joined March 2013

Ethercastle 2013-11-24T11:56:10+00:00

Hi from my queue. Just some suggestions ^ ^

[General]

Check AI mod. Seems that there are some inconsistencies.

[Insane]

~~00:00:656 (4,5) - Spacing feels a bit uncomfortable for me. You can probably rotate 00:00:141 (1,2,3,4) clockwise by 45° for more steady spacing.~~ saw you already fixed this, nvm then
00:03:399 (2,1) - This overlap is not that necessary and potentially confusing. Would suggest break 00:03:399 (2) into a slider and a circle.
00:04:427 (1,2,3,4) - I prefer oval flow to jumps here
00:05:283 - feels a bit emty here (follow vocal?)
00:05:627 (1) - move sliderend down a bit for a better blanket?
00:06:827 (5) - NC here instead?
00:06:827 (5,1,2) - Shape it like this?

SPOILER

00:09:227 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2) - sv here may be even lower I think. still feels fast. Or making the sliders curved?
00:12:656 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - not a big fan of the zigzag shape here, as I the beats here don't feel that uniform. 00:13:170 (1,2,3) those three should have larger spacing imo.
00:13:170 (1,2,3) - spacing?
00:15:913 (4) - move to (140,48) ?
00:18:656 (4,5) - I personally find the spacing here too large
00:40:255 (4,5,6,7) - make the two sliders here more symmetrical?
00:43:684 (6) - find the spacing here a bit too large. Keeping it constant with 00:46:084 (5,6) ?
01:02:542 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) & 01:05:456 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - are these stream shapes intentional? kinda messy
01:10:084 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - shape here could be a bit better, e.g. arranging 01:10:599 (1,2,3,1,2,1) into a hexagram?
01:11:456 (1) - Follow the vocal here and make it a dotted half?
01:12:656 (3,4,1,2) - I feel that these four notes are in a group. Sliders doesn't fit 01:11:970 (1,2) that well so I will suggest changing those two, dreacse the spacing, add NC on 01:12:656 (3) and make a pattern for 01:12:656 (3,4,1,2).
01:17:799 (2), 01:18:484 (3), 01:19:170 (5) & 01:20:542 (2) - Sound similar so won't recommend different shape for them
01:23:284 (5,6,1,2,3) - those 1/2 sliders feel kinda spammy

[Hinsvar's Prayer]
Like this diff a lot ^_^ So just some nazi

Feel that it may spam the 1/4s too much, may consider some variety?

00:09:055 (4,1) - nc on 4? (Well it seems that I interpreted it differently, prefer a nc here due to the strong clap sound. Well up to U, same reasons for all following nc suggestions)
00:10:426 (4,1) - ^
00:11:798 (4,1) - &
00:13:169 (1,2,3,4) - - Delete 4 and make 3's spacing larger?
00:14:541 (4,1) - nc on 4?
00:17:283 (4,1) - ^
00:19:341 - 00:30:055 - guess you are intentionally choosing not to use any extra hitsounds here? may consider some soft/drum whistle though.
00:42:483 (1,2,3,1,2) - Symmetry between two line of lyrics so maybe consider some symmetry in the map too?
00:48:141 (1,2,1,2) - ^
00:48:655 (2,1) - nc on 2?
00:52:941 (3) - not a perfect blanket here
00:53:969 (2) - personally don't like the 3/4 slider here
01:07:683 (3) - prefer circles here as the background here is quite strong
01:21:226 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - feel that the ending part is much more difficult, probably due to the streams with large spacing

[SkyDevil's Hard]
Skipping this as I feel kinda the same as previous modders. ~.~
I'm not saying your way of following vocals is bad. I respect your opinions but I do feel the same as some other modders, that a lot of rhythmic patterns are confusing. Thus, I would suggest that you find some players of appropriate level to test play the difficulty.
Moreover, there are still many possible improvements in terms of notes arrangement, especially in terms of spacing (many tiny inconsistencies), triangles (many not perfect) and blanket (many sliders are curved a bit too much).

[Xinely's Normal]
00:00:140 (1,2) - rotating by about -60 degree and move it to the top right may look nicer
00:02:883 (1) - slider end is kinda confusing to me as there're no obvious beats in the music apart from an continuation of vocal (so maybe change the pattern or mute the slider end?)
00:04:083 (2) - move the end to the previous red line could be better imo
00:04:941 (3,4) - switch whistle?
00:05:283 (4,1) - nc on 4 as the vocal is starting here
00:05:626 (1) - same slider end issue
00:24:826 (1,2,3) - 1 is following the vocal where as 2&3 are not, potentially confusing
00:30:312 (1,2) & 00:31:683 (3,4) - - ^
00:33:055 (1,2) - ^ this is especially misleading imo
00:41:283 (1,2) - not a good blanket, adjust it a bit
00:53:969 (4,1) - ^
00:55:683 (3,4,5) - this pattern may be hard
01:07:169 (3) - blanket it?
01:18:998 (3) - ^

[10nya's Easy]
Would not recommend using so many red-line rhythms at the start

00:01:340 (2,3,1) - Overlap potentially confusing for new players
00:06:141 (2,3,4) - hit sound too loud here
00:16:083 (4) - Some strong drums at 00:16:598 so perhaps replacing this long slider
00:22:083 (1) - blanket it better
00:23:455 (3,4,1) - arrange the center of the pattern into a better triangle?
00:31:341 (2) - prefer clap to whistle here, same for similar whistle notes, not gonna repeat this suggestion.
00:38:198 (4,1) - nc on 4?
01:05:969 (1,2) - long gap followed by a red-line beat, potentially confusing for new players

Hope this helps ^_^

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-11-24T13:31:46+00:00

NewRulerNA wrote:
my lazy mod here

[Xinely]
00:02:883 (1) - why did not follow the vocal between 00:03:398 ~ 00:03:912 ? the vocal in 00:03:741 - . would be better to remove reverse and put circle there. it's because i follow piano sound instead vocal
00:34:255 (3) - should not follow vocal. already followed instruments in 00:30:312 ~ 00:34:083 - (and before it). should be fine here
00:56:198 (4) - what did this follow...? vocal
01:17:626 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - feel there is some issues. what you picked up is really hard to hear. it's not overmapped so it's fine tbh
01:18:312 - 01:21:055 - 01:23:798 - 01:26:541 - 01:27:912 - there is no any instruments start/end piano,drum,what this sound too strong, a low drum sound, and lower sound of guitar
I could not understand what you want, so there is no any suggestion...sry
gl^^

DenoisoGoiso wrote:
Hi! From Random modding >.<

[Xinely's Normal]
00:05:626 (1) - Change Whistle To Finish (front slider)
no cymbal
00:11:112 (1) - It's look like Bengkok With The 00:11:969 (3)
bengkok.. curved pls also it's fine
00:57:741 (1) - Change Whistle To Finish (front slider)
no cymbal
01:25:169 (1) - Like this :
Changes
changed as my own

[/notice]

-Kirito wrote:
hello, momochikun. again came to your map xD

[Xinely's Normal]
- remove unused green line 01:15:569 - , 01:16:255 - , 01:16:598 - it's not useless, i guess everyone know why
00:28:941 (3,4) - 1/1 slide change? (vocal) followed drum
00:29:969 (4) - clap add added
01:17:626 (1,2) - 01:17:798 - here a 1/2 slide arrowhead add? -> 01:18:998 (2) - ctrl + v i prefer mine
01:18:998 (2) - 01:19:169 - move? (the sound of electric guitars) what to move?
01:20:369 (1) - NC remove consistency

good lucky:D/

Ethercastle wrote:

Hi from my queue. Just some suggestions ^ ^

[Xinely's Normal]
00:00:140 (1,2) - rotating by about -60 degree and move it to the top right may look nicer i don't see any changed except the oppsoite flow and remap D:
00:02:883 (1) - slider end is kinda confusing to me as there're no obvious beats in the music apart from an continuation of vocal (so maybe change the pattern or mute the slider end?) nope, it's have a repeat
00:04:083 (2) - move the end to the previous red line could be better imo followed the bgm, crystal sound
00:04:941 (3,4) - switch whistle? nope, to emphasize that crystal sound
00:05:283 (4,1) - nc on 4 as the vocal is starting here i used NC following stanza, not vocal ><
00:05:626 (1) - same slider end issue wat the issue
00:24:826 (1,2,3) - 1 is following the vocal where as 2&3 are not, potentially confusing err the space always 1/1
00:30:312 (1,2) & 00:31:683 (3,4) - - ^ ^ , and i don't follow vocal here
00:33:055 (1,2) - ^ this is especially misleading imo followed because i can made an easy rhythm for this
00:41:283 (1,2) - not a good blanket, adjust it a bit
00:53:969 (4,1) - ^ ok
00:55:683 (3,4,5) - this pattern may be hard just made a little bit hard for this to give any challenge, and this is kiai time, should be fine
01:07:169 (3) - blanket it?
01:18:998 (3) - ^

well thanks 4 mods

=3=

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Hope this helps ^_^

SkyDevil

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

SkyDevil 2013-11-26T16:44:57+00:00

Ethercastle wrote:
Hi from my queue. Just some suggestions ^ ^

[SkyDevil's Hard]
Skipping this as I feel kinda the same as previous modders. ~.~
I'm not saying your way of following vocals is bad. I respect your opinions but I do feel the same as some other modders, that a lot of rhythmic patterns are confusing. Thus, I would suggest that you find some players of appropriate level to test play the difficulty.
Moreover, there are still many possible improvements in terms of notes arrangement, especially in terms of spacing (many tiny inconsistencies), triangles (many not perfect) and blanket (many sliders are curved a bit too much). ~I don't really have patterns like triangles in my map.. all the testplayers s'ed this on the first try so I assumed my diff is totally fine ;; I guess you just dont really like my mapping style ;;

Hope this helps ^_^

-Kirito wrote:
hello, momochikun. again came to your map xD

[SkyDevil's Hard]
00:05:626 (3) - blanket also really off ~the blanket with (2,3) seems fine and (3,4) aint even a blanket =3=
01:18:312 (2) - distance
01:18:998 (4) - ^
01:24:141 (3) - ^ ~they are called jumps and they are fun ; A ;

good lucky:D/

No fixes :O Still thanks tho

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

10nya 2013-11-28T06:35:29+00:00

sorry no fix orz
thx for modding tough! :3

lkx_Shore

1,453 posts

Joined January 2010

lkx_Shore 2013-11-28T12:26:30+00:00

[General]
Hi

[Insane]
00:05:283 - add note?
00:06:142 (2) - change into 1/2 slider is better
00:19:856 (2) - if you follow vocal,plz use redline 1/2 slider
00:21:399 (3) - strange rhythm
00:25:856 (5) - change into note and add 1/2 slider in 00:26:026 - ?
00:40:941 (7,8,9,10,11) - use normal hitsound sampleset?
01:02:542 (5,6) - add whistle

[Hinsvar's Prayer]
00:11:112 (1) - add clap?
00:13:169 (1) - add finish
00:16:598 (1) - add clap
00:26:198 (1) - strange rhythm
01:05:969 (1,1,2) - add finish,and 01:07:169 (1) - head add finish
01:26:198 (4) - use soft sampleset

[SkyDevil's Hard]
00:13:169 (4) - change into 2 note

[Xinely's Normal]
00:21:055 (4) - strange rhythm
00:56:198 (4,5) - use the same rhythm like 00:52:941 (2,3,4) -
01:27:398 (5) - end in 01:27:741 - and silencer

[10nya's Easy]
00:41:283 (1) - strange rhythm
01:05:969 (5) - change into slider,end in 01:06:483 -

[Other]
Goodluck

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Momochikun 2013-11-30T09:39:19+00:00

Mod Replies

Ethercastle wrote:
Hi from my queue. Just some suggestions ^ ^

[General]

Check AI mod. Seems that there are some inconsistencies.

[Insane]

~~00:00:656 (4,5) - Spacing feels a bit uncomfortable for me. You can probably rotate 00:00:141 (1,2,3,4) clockwise by 45° for more steady spacing.~~ saw you already fixed this, nvm then
00:03:399 (2,1) - This overlap is not that necessary and potentially confusing. Would suggest break 00:03:399 (2) into a slider and a circle.
00:04:427 (1,2,3,4) - I prefer oval flow to jumps here
00:05:283 - feels a bit emty here (follow vocal?)
00:05:627 (1) - move sliderend down a bit for a better blanket? yeah
00:06:827 (5) - NC here instead? sure
00:06:827 (5,1,2) - Shape it like this?
SPOILER
00:09:227 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2) - sv here may be even lower I think. still feels fast. Or making the sliders curved?
00:12:656 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - not a big fan of the zigzag shape here, as I the beats here don't feel that uniform. 00:13:170 (1,2,3) those three should have larger spacing imo it flows nicely imo.. didn't have any idea
00:13:170 (1,2,3) - spacing?
00:15:913 (4) - move to (140,48) ? for what ?
00:18:656 (4,5) - I personally find the spacing here too large
00:40:255 (4,5,6,7) - make the two sliders here more symmetrical?
00:43:684 (6) - find the spacing here a bit too large. Keeping it constant with 00:46:084 (5,6) ? okay
01:02:542 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) & 01:05:456 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - are these stream shapes intentional? kinda messy
01:10:084 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - shape here could be a bit better, e.g. arranging 01:10:599 (1,2,3,1,2,1) into a hexagram? yeah it should be like that
01:11:456 (1) - Follow the vocal here and make it a dotted half?
01:12:656 (3,4,1,2) - I feel that these four notes are in a group. Sliders doesn't fit 01:11:970 (1,2) that well so I will suggest changing those two, dreacse the spacing, add NC on 01:12:656 (3) and make a pattern for 01:12:656 (3,4,1,2). i prefer mine here.. sorry
01:17:799 (2), 01:18:484 (3), 01:19:170 (5) & 01:20:542 (2) - Sound similar so won't recommend different shape for them eh o.o ?
01:23:284 (5,6,1,2,3) - those 1/2 sliders feel kinda Maybe you're right orz.. sligthtly rearranged the rhytm

Hope this helps ^_^

lkx_Shore wrote:
[General]
Hi

[Insane]
00:05:283 - add note? why ? o.o
00:06:142 (2) - change into 1/2 slider is better didn't have any ideas here
00:19:856 (2) - if you follow vocal,plz use redline 1/2 slider it break my blanket ><
00:21:399 (3) - strange rhythm eeehhh. i follow the drum here
00:25:856 (5) - change into note and add 1/2 slider in 00:26:026 - ? sounds nice. changed
00:40:941 (7,8,9,10,11) - use normal hitsound sampleset? sounds weird imo
01:02:542 (5,6) - add whistle

[Other]
Goodluck

Sorry for being late..
Thanks for modding guys :3 , All diffs now Updated ~

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,789 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2013-11-30T13:46:00+00:00

Ethercastle wrote:
[Hinsvar's Prayer]
Like this diff a lot ^_^ So just some nazi Okay~

Feel that it may spam the 1/4s too much, may consider some variety? Can't be helped; blame the song for that.

00:09:055 (4,1) - nc on 4? (Well it seems that I interpreted it differently, prefer a nc here due to the strong clap sound. Well up to U, same reasons for all following nc suggestions) Umm, no. We're supposed to follow the instrument after that clap here. The clap is still the part of the previous stanza, according to the song.
00:10:426 (4,1) - ^ ^
00:11:798 (4,1) - & ^ (Yes, I do realize that this is a typo.)
00:13:169 (1,2,3,4) - - Delete 4 and make 3's spacing larger? I'm sure enough an instrument is still being played here, and I want to emphasize that.
00:14:541 (4,1) - nc on 4? Well, no. I have already explained the reason before.
00:17:283 (4,1) - ^ ^
00:19:341 - 00:30:055 - guess you are intentionally choosing not to use any extra hitsounds here? may consider some soft/drum whistle though. Yep, it's intentional. It's not like there's anything special to emphasize here. Maybe you can suggest where should I place those whistles?
00:42:483 (1,2,3,1,2) - Symmetry between two line of lyrics so maybe consider some symmetry in the map too? Nah, I don't want to use symmetrical patterns too often. They'll make the map look lazily designed.
00:48:141 (1,2,1,2) - ^ ^
00:48:655 (2,1) - nc on 2? I think you know about what am I going to say here.
00:52:941 (3) - not a perfect blanket here Oops. Fixed.
00:53:969 (2) - personally don't like the 3/4 slider here It goes quite well with how the vocal goes, so I'll keep it for now.
01:07:683 (3) - prefer circles here as the background here is quite strong The instrument's sounds are "connected" to each other, though, so it is better to map them with a slider.
01:21:226 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - feel that the ending part is much more difficult, probably due to the streams with large spacing Can't be helped. Blame the song, again.

lkx_Shore wrote:
[Hinsvar's Prayer]
00:11:112 (1) - add clap? Sure.
00:13:169 (1) - add finish It isn't that loud, IMO.
00:16:598 (1) - add clap Added.
00:26:198 (1) - strange rhythm I'm emphasizing the instrument here.
01:05:969 (1,1,2) - add finish,and 01:07:169 (1) - head add finish Hmm, the instruments aren't heavy-sounding here, so maybe no. I'll reconsider though, if people thinks finishes are really needed here.
01:26:198 (4) - use soft sampleset Ah, okay.

Thanks for the mods!

lol

osu file format v12

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TitleUnicode:Anicca
Artist:Harada Hitomi
ArtistUnicode:原田 ひとみ
Creator:Momochikun
Version:Hinsvar's Prayer
Source:Machine Doll wa Kizutsukanai
Tags:opening 機巧少女は傷つかない lerche 夜々 -tennya- -_t_e_n_n_y_a_- xinely hinsvar 10nya skydevil
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Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Momochikun 2013-12-01T02:46:39+00:00

Updated :3

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

kajiyatta 2013-12-01T02:53:53+00:00

Selective Modding.
[General]
Easy has no video.
[Easy]
Rhythm
00:10:598(4) Sounds weird, the end should be at 00:11:112, then add a note better.

SPOILER

00:16:083(4) ^
01:05:169(1,2,3) Current looks a bit difficult for the easiest diff, so try to be simply rhythm?

SPOILER

Hit Sound
00:00:141(1) Prefer soft-whistle at head.
00:02:883(1)Add soft-whistle at head.
00:54:998(1) Add claps at reverse and end.
[Normal]
Rhythm
00:18:483(4,5) It sounds a bit odd because of weakness.I suppose at 00:18:998 is no sound better. e.g.)

SPOILER

00:56:198(4) Delete this note? Maybe you aimed to follow the vocal, but it looks a bit difficult for Normal, and if nothing here it sounds not bad.
01:27:398(5) Replace it to single note better.Just sounds.
Hit Sound
00:12:655(4) Add whistle at end to follow the instrumental.
01:01:683(3) Add whistle or finish at head?
01:11:112(1) Prefer finish than whistle at end.
[Hard]
Placement
00:30:483(1) It looks fine to be liner slider than curved one to make a blanket.Curved one is a bit hard to play imo.

SPOILER

01:18:312(2) I don't agree with this jumping since there is no emphasized music or vocal.
Rhythm
00:57:569 Add a note here? It would be effective for the next slider.
Hit Sound
In the beginning part, you can put whistle more positively, if no sounds here player might think "missed hitting notes".
00:00:141(1) At head.
00:01:341(4)^
00:02:883(1)^
00:03:398(2)^
00:04:083(1)^
00:19:341(1) prefer soft-finish than drum sound here since it is a first note.
00:46:769(1) Add finish at head, it sounds nicely.
01:03:226(1)^
[Hinsvar]
Placement
00:11:798(4,1) Swap NC better to be consistence.
01:02:541(3) Add NC here to be consistence 4 combo stream.
Rhythm
The gap of difficult (It means before KIAI or after KIAI) looks so large, I suppose latter of them looks overmapped with some notes, and others look a bit easier for AR9. Just suggestion, but you can make this diff more consistence difficulty better.
00:26:026(6) I suppose you can start 1/1 slider from here, it's better to follow the vocal. Curren t sounds a bit lagged.

SPOILER

01:20:369(1,2) It looks overmapped I suppose even if you aim to follow the guitar.It's not main sound so you can put notes simply better.(Replace 1/2 slider or 2 notes)
01:26:883(1,2,3,,1,2,3,) Again ^.
Hit Sound
00:13:855(1) Add finish here.
00:52:255(1) It's a beginning of KIAI and it sounds better if add finish here.
01:22:426~ Turn down volume better, currnt sounds so loudly.
01:26:198(4) Really sounds odd and loudly, maybe delete clap better.
[Insane]
Placement
00:02:883(1) I suppose it would be better to make more spacing from (4), (3)-(4) looks small jump but (4)-(1) didn't so it looks a bit odd. e.g.)

SPOILER

00:23:112(4,1) It looks forced flow, I don't suppose it looks nicely.you can be better to make opposite flow (4) or (1).
00:26:883(3) CTRL+G looks more nice flow, and you can move following noes like this?

SPOILER

00:28:769(6,1) Again it is better to put more spacing here, since it is a down beat and Insane.Just move (6) on 72:168?
00:39:569(1,2) Swap NC better to be pattern.
00:53:112(4) Not stacked looks fine because of flow from(5) to (6).

SPOILER

00:55:512(4) Perfectly stacked looks a bit confused, I suppose you can move this note a bit lagged better. e.g.)

SPOILER

01:00:312(4) This jump looks not reasonable, here is a red line and it's note emphasized. So you can make a jump from (4) to (1) better, not (3) to(4).
Rhythm
00:21:398(3) It sounds weird since the beginning of slider is not followed vocal, in this part the vocal has emphasized so I recommend you to follow this.

SPOILER

Good Luck.

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Momochikun 2013-12-01T14:09:52+00:00

kajiyatta wrote:
Selective Modding.

[Insane]
Placement
00:02:883(1) I suppose it would be better to make more spacing from (4), (3)-(4) looks small jump but (4)-(1) didn't so it looks a bit odd. e.g.) sure
SPOILER
00:23:112(4,1) It looks forced flow, I don't suppose it looks nicely.you can be better to make opposite flow (4) or (1). i think it's fine, i ctrl G'ed next slider though to provide smoother flow
00:26:883(3) CTRL+G looks more nice flow, and you can move following noes like this? in a similiar way
SPOILER
00:28:769(6,1) Again it is better to put more spacing here, since it is a down beat and Insane.Just move (6) on 72:168? i want to stack it with next note.
00:39:569(1,2) Swap NC better to be pattern. My bad.. fixed
00:53:112(4) Not stacked looks fine because of flow from(5) to (6). Umm.. ? i want to make some variety there
SPOILER
00:55:512(4) Perfectly stacked looks a bit confused, I suppose you can move this note a bit lagged better. e.g.) it's not imo.. some testplayers got no problem there
SPOILER
01:00:312(4) This jump looks not reasonable, here is a red line and it's note emphasized. So you can make a jump from (4) to (1) better, not (3) to(4). i make the jump same now xD
Rhythm
00:21:398(3) It sounds weird since the beginning of slider is not followed vocal, in this part the vocal has emphasized so I recommend you to follow this. i didn't really like to skip instrument, i think it doesn't that weird o.o
SPOILER

Good Luck.

Thanks for modding ~
Added video on Easy too -w-

grumd

1,790 posts

Joined October 2010

grumd 2013-12-02T14:26:12+00:00

I lost the previous post because of internet problems so I'm modding this again today.. Well, good.

— Prayer

Your diff has some notes that are not present in the music, they should be removed:
00:27:483 (5) - 00:40:512 (3) - 00:57:312 (4) -
00:50:712 (1) - Move this 2 grids left and 1 grid up

— Hard

00:00:826 (3) - You should better use only one point for both curves, this will make it more accurate and smooth. Don't forget that these point should form a straight line with the red point for the best curve. Check the screenshot and take the slider code if you want:
Screenshot
Code
```
296,192,826,2,0,B|332:172|368:192|368:192|408:212|440:192,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
There are many similar sliders in your map, you'd better fix them the same way, or maybe just copy the slider with my code everywhere.
Similar sliders: 00:03:398 (2) - 00:10:598 (4) - 00:13:512 (5) - 00:15:398 (5) - 00:19:855 (3) - 00:26:712 (6) - 00:39:226 (2) - 00:46:083 (7) - (this one will need to be scaled by 0.8 if you copy previous sliders) 00:50:712 (1) - 00:53:455 (4) - 00:55:683 (5) - 01:04:426 (5) - 01:08:712 (1,2) - 01:20:026 (3) - 01:23:626 (2) -
01:07:169 (1) - Move the red point closer to the start of this slider to make this more accurate and smooth: http://puu.sh/5zPwo.jpg
01:22:769 (3) - This one is similar to the previous case
00:05:626 (3) - Move the 3rd point a bit up to make a better blanket: http://puu.sh/5zPRo.jpg

— Normal

00:11:112 (1,3) - Make them parallel?
00:18:826 - I think it looks better as a single circle, the sound at the end of this slider is a bit tricky, so better just map the guitars.
00:55:683 (3,4,5) - The rhythm like you did here: 01:03:912 (2,3,4) - sounds a lot better at this place too
01:27:398 - This is the only diff that doesn't end at this point. This time is a better place to end the map (because after this point there is no valid note in music, just a fadeout), please just place a circle here instead of a slider.

— Easy

01:05:969 (1,2,3,1) - This pattern might be a bit confusing for beginners because of the red tick notes. Better make sliders from (1) to (2) and from (3) to the next (1)

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-12-02T14:40:19+00:00

try to fixed all
thanks 4 mod grumd :3~

baka take this

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Anicca TV Size.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 51912
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Anicca
TitleUnicode:Anicca
Artist:Harada Hitomi
ArtistUnicode:原田 ひとみ
Creator:Momochikun
Version:Xinely's Normal
Source:Machine Doll wa Kizutsukanai
Tags:opening 機巧少女は傷つかない lerche 夜々 -tennya- -_t_e_n_n_y_a_- xinely hinsvar 10nya skydevil
BeatmapID:313272
BeatmapSetID:121744

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Yaya BG.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"Video.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,255,255,255

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Combo2 : 255,108,108
Combo3 : 205,205,205

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SkyDevil

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

SkyDevil 2013-12-02T14:48:28+00:00

Uhh im checking the mods later but i do already want to say @grumd that i would prefer those sliders with 2 points >< its just some preference

EDIT:

lkx_Shore wrote:
[SkyDevil's Hard]
00:13:169 (4) - change into 2 note ~nooo it belongs to the pattern ><

kajiyatta wrote:
[Hard]
Placement
00:30:483(1) It looks fine to be liner slider than curved one to make a blanket.Curved one is a bit hard to play imo. ~okee
SPOILER
01:18:312(2) I don't agree with this jumping since there is no emphasized music or vocal. ~uhh it was more like a well fit random jump
Rhythm
00:57:569 Add a note here? It would be effective for the next slider. ~seems too random XD
Hit Sound
In the beginning part, you can put whistle more positively, if no sounds here player might think "missed hitting notes".
00:00:141(1) At head.
00:01:341(4)^
00:02:883(1)^
00:03:398(2)^
00:04:083(1)^ ~imo too messy ;;
00:19:341(1) prefer soft-finish than drum sound here since it is a first note. ~okee
00:46:769(1) Add finish at head, it sounds nicely. ~hmm,, prefer it currently
01:03:226(1)^ ~done

grumd wrote:
I lost the previous post because of internet problems so I'm modding this again today.. Well, good.

— Hard
00:00:826 (3) - You should better use only one point for both curves, this will make it more accurate and smooth. Don't forget that these point should form a straight line with the red point for the best curve. Check the screenshot and take the slider code if you want:
Screenshot
Code
296,192,826,2,0,B|332:172|368:192|368:192|408:212|440:192,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
There are many similar sliders in your map, you'd better fix them the same way, or maybe just copy the slider with my code everywhere.
Similar sliders: 00:03:398 (2) - 00:10:598 (4) - 00:13:512 (5) - 00:15:398 (5) - 00:19:855 (3) - 00:26:712 (6) - 00:39:226 (2) - 00:46:083 (7) - (this one will need to be scaled by 0.8 if you copy previous sliders) 00:50:712 (1) - 00:53:455 (4) - 00:55:683 (5) - 01:04:426 (5) - 01:08:712 (1,2) - 01:20:026 (3) - 01:23:626 (2) - ~mentioned already at the begin of the post ;;
01:07:169 (1) - Move the red point closer to the start of this slider to make this more accurate and smooth: http://puu.sh/5zPwo.jpg
01:22:769 (3) - This one is similar to the previous case ~hmmmmmmmmmmmmm okay .w.
00:05:626 (3) - Move the 3rd point a bit up to make a better blanket: http://puu.sh/5zPRo.jpg ~fixed

thanks for mods all ~

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Artist:Harada Hitomi
ArtistUnicode:原田 ひとみ
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Version:SkyDevil's Hard
Source:Machine Doll wa Kizutsukanai
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Hinsvar

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Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2013-12-03T04:42:39+00:00

kajiyatta wrote:
[Hinsvar]
Placement
00:11:798(4,1) Swap NC better to be consistence. Consistent with what?
01:02:541(3) Add NC here to be consistence 4 combo stream. Uh, but even then, it's still a part of the combo where the note is in.
Rhythm
The gap of difficult (It means before KIAI or after KIAI) looks so large, I suppose latter of them looks overmapped with some notes, and others look a bit easier for AR9. Just suggestion, but you can make this diff more consistence difficulty better. I'm just following how the song goes. If the song gets intense, my map will follow it through.
00:26:026(6) I suppose you can start 1/1 slider from here, it's better to follow the vocal. Curren t sounds a bit lagged. Nope; the instrument is stronger here. It will feel weird if I emphasized the vocal instead.
SPOILER
01:20:369(1,2) It looks overmapped I suppose even if you aim to follow the guitar.It's not main sound so you can put notes simply better.(Replace 1/2 slider or 2 notes) ...I guess I'll make them a stream instead. The sound is definitely loud enough to the point where it needs to be mapped, still.
01:26:883(1,2,3,,1,2,3,) Again ^. No. The guitar definitely needs to be mapped because of their volume.
Hit Sound
00:13:855(1) Add finish here. The instrument isn't that heavy here...
00:52:255(1) It's a beginning of KIAI and it sounds better if add finish here.Okay.
01:22:426~ Turn down volume better, currnt sounds so loudly. Well, the music gets more intense here, so I think I should increase the volume to reinforce it.
01:26:198(4) Really sounds odd and loudly, maybe delete clap better. Sure.

grumd wrote:

— Prayer

Your diff has some notes that are not present in the music, they should be removed:
00:27:483 (5) - 00:40:512 (3) - 00:57:312 (4) - Removed the second and third note, but there's definitely something at 00:27:483. I'm sure enough there's a sound.
00:50:712 (1) - Move this 2 grids left and 1 grid up Ah, sure.

Thanks for modding!

Yeah.

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Momochikun

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Momochikun 2013-12-03T14:44:55+00:00

Update :3

grumd

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grumd 2013-12-03T15:37:59+00:00

Hinsvar wrote:
00:27:483. I'm sure enough there's a sound.

Yeah, you're right, my bad, I was listening without headphones.

I don't really like the shapes of some sliders in Hard, but the diff itself is well-made in terms of playability and rhythm, so if the mapper likes his sliders, I'm okay with them.

Bubbled!

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2013-12-06T12:28:18+00:00

Thanks ~
For other Bats that willing to check this, can you make the title and artist appeared at 00:08:369 - ?
With any color that fit the BG / video in your opinion would be appreciated. :3

SkyDevil

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SkyDevil 2013-12-06T17:55:00+00:00

grumd wrote:
I don't really like the shapes of some sliders in Hard, but the diff itself is well-made in terms of playability and rhythm, so if the mapper likes his sliders, I'm okay with them.

Thanks alot btw >w<

Andrea

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Andrea 2013-12-07T01:08:40+00:00

Sorry but I have to pop this map due to the new rule about difficulty names as you can read here: p/2725713

Make sure to rename "Hinsvar's Prayer" difficulty to something that actually shows which kind of difficulty is that like "Hinsvar's Insane".

Once you've fixed it I'll repair your bubble.

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2013-12-07T01:23:00+00:00

k.

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

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Andrea 2013-12-07T01:24:07+00:00

Re-Bubbled~

Kurai

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Kurai 2013-12-07T17:03:00+00:00

Ranked \o

Ryodan_old_1

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Ryodan_old_1 2013-12-07T17:05:27+00:00

Gratz. o/

SkyDevil

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SkyDevil 2013-12-07T17:37:16+00:00

I suddenly received a highlight and i was like: wtf who is calling me

and then it said someone reached rank 1 on my diff...

SERIOUSLY DIDNT EXPECT THIS GRATZ >W<

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2013-12-07T17:40:39+00:00

SkyDevil wrote:
I suddenly received a highlight and i was like: wtf who is calling me

and then it said someone reached rank 1 on my diff...

SERIOUSLY DIDNT EXPECT THIS GRATZ >W<

Something similiar happen to me, i was playing VN and suddenly i received highlight and i was like : shit i'm still playing my favourite VN
when i'm done then it was banchobot HL ing me that my map just got ranked www

Thanks for the effort guys !~

Cydros

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Cydros 2013-12-07T18:07:13+00:00

Finallt next song from this anime :3

Shiviaren

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Shiviaren 2013-12-07T18:10:39+00:00

ah kampret lw makin banyak aja bitmep ranked lw >.>

DenoisoGoiso

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