Hi~ As requested. from Mei chan :3
[General]
●offset +2~4?
[Athena's Easy]
●OD +1
●00:02:874 (1) - add finish
●00:10:331 (1) - add finish on the slider's head.
●00:18:654 (1) - add whistle on the slider's end.
●00:17:267 (2) - 1 grid left ? perfect stack here.00:20:735 (2) - look better imo :3
●00:45:706 (3) - this slider isnt fit here . I hope you remove this and try making another pattern.
my suggestion ↓
●00:54:724 (1,2) - try to make the spacing equal here ?
●01:05:822 (1) - add finish on the slider's head.
●01:08:597 (1) - ^
●01:09:464 (2) - ^ slider's end
●01:10:157 (3) - remove slider ? and add note here.01:10:678 -
●01:22:469 (3) - try to bend slider to the opposite direction ? the flow is good
●02:31:834 (1,2,3) - same as above.
●02:40:157 (1) - add clap at the end instead of finish ? since it follows nothing.
[Normal]
●00:04:782 (1) - add finish on the slider's head.
●00:10:331 (1) - ^
●00:13:105 (1) - remove finish ? it is loud imo >_< and add whistle .
●00:46:920 (2) - try this ?
●00:54:724 (3) - add clap on the slider's end
●00:56:111 (1) - ^
●01:05:822 (3) - add finish on the slider's head.
●01:21:082 (4) - add clap on the slider's end
●01:22:469 (1) - reduce spacing ? >.< here is hard to take a little.
●01:24:550 (4) - add clap instead of finish ?
●02:09:290 (3) - hmm , I think one note is better to here.02:09:290 -
●02:20:389 (3) - move above ? the flow is good ~
●02:29:059 (3) - add finish on the slider's head.
●02:47:787 (4) - same as here.01:24:550 (4) -
[jogfi2002's Hard]
●00:06:863 (1,2,3) - try to make the spacing equal here ? look better imo
●00:12:759 (3) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical.same as previous notes
●00:15:880 (1) - add whistle
●00:30:620 (6) - add whistle on the slider's end.
●00:33:741 (6) - add new combo.because you changed slider speed
●00:39:811 (8) - add clap around 50% volume
●00:42:585 (8) - ^
●00:44:320 (3) - add whistle on the slider's end.
●00:59:579 (1) - try to put 1/8 slider?
●01:00:273 (1) - add finish on the slider's head.
●01:10:678 (1) - same as here.00:59:579 (1) -
●01:11:371 (1) - add finish on the slider's head.
●01:39:117 (1) - add whistle
●01:39:117 - use lower volume? since the melody is calmer than previous part.
●01:44:666 (1) - add whistle
●02:17:961 (5) - add whistle on the slider's repeat and end.
●02:19:348 (2) - add finish on the slider's repeat and end.
●02:22:816 (1) - same as here.00:59:579 (1) -
●02:23:510 (1) - add finish on the slider's head.
●02:33:915 (1) - same as here.00:59:579 (1) -
●02:49:522 (1) - add finish
clap sound ...
[Insane]
●00:15:013 (1) - remove whistle ? it follows nothing.
●00:37:556 (3) - more spacing here ?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/526725
●00:54:724 (3) - move to x:248 y:232 looks better imo
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/526728
●01:05:822 (3) - add finish on the slider's head.
●01:25:244 (1) - <3
●01:50:128 - add note ?
●02:05:475 (1) - try to put 3/4 slider ? :3
●02:35:128 (3) - i want jump here >_<
nice ! ♪
[Pokie]
(「・ω・)「 poke pokie
●00:10:331 (1) - add finish on the slider's head.
●00:40:851 (3) - add whistle on the slider's head.
●00:43:626 (1,3) - ^
●00:58:886 (4) - add new combo ?same as here.02:22:123 (1) -
●01:41:891 (3) - more spacing ? i want jump here ! same as here.01:47:441 (1) -
●01:56:978 (1,2) -try this ? following vocal is better to here.
●02:45:013 (5) - add whistle or finish on the slider's head.it needs strong sound imo :3
いいね!言うことないです>.<
good luck ~
[General]
[Athena's Easy]
●OD +1
●00:02:874 (1) - add finish
●00:10:331 (1) - add finish on the slider's head.
●00:18:654 (1) - add whistle on the slider's end.
●00:17:267 (2) - 1 grid left ? perfect stack here.00:20:735 (2) - look better imo :3
●00:45:706 (3) - this slider isnt fit here . I hope you remove this and try making another pattern.
my suggestion ↓
●00:54:724 (1,2) - try to make the spacing equal here ?
●01:05:822 (1) - add finish on the slider's head.
●01:08:597 (1) - ^
●01:09:464 (2) - ^ slider's end
●01:10:157 (3) - remove slider ? and add note here.01:10:678 -
●01:22:469 (3) - try to bend slider to the opposite direction ? the flow is good
●02:31:834 (1,2,3) - same as above.
●02:40:157 (1) - add clap at the end instead of finish ? since it follows nothing.
[Normal]
●00:04:782 (1) - add finish on the slider's head.
●00:10:331 (1) - ^
●00:13:105 (1) - remove finish ? it is loud imo >_< and add whistle .
●00:46:920 (2) - try this ?
●00:54:724 (3) - add clap on the slider's end
●00:56:111 (1) - ^
●01:05:822 (3) - add finish on the slider's head.
●01:21:082 (4) - add clap on the slider's end
●01:22:469 (1) - reduce spacing ? >.< here is hard to take a little.
●01:24:550 (4) - add clap instead of finish ?
●02:09:290 (3) - hmm , I think one note is better to here.02:09:290 -
●02:20:389 (3) - move above ? the flow is good ~
●02:29:059 (3) - add finish on the slider's head.
●02:47:787 (4) - same as here.01:24:550 (4) -
[jogfi2002's Hard]
●00:06:863 (1,2,3) - try to make the spacing equal here ? look better imo
●00:12:759 (3) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical.same as previous notes
●00:15:880 (1) - add whistle
●00:30:620 (6) - add whistle on the slider's end.
●00:33:741 (6) - add new combo.because you changed slider speed
●00:39:811 (8) - add clap around 50% volume
●00:42:585 (8) - ^
●00:44:320 (3) - add whistle on the slider's end.
●00:59:579 (1) - try to put 1/8 slider?
●01:00:273 (1) - add finish on the slider's head.
●01:10:678 (1) - same as here.00:59:579 (1) -
●01:11:371 (1) - add finish on the slider's head.
●01:39:117 (1) - add whistle
●01:39:117 - use lower volume? since the melody is calmer than previous part.
●01:44:666 (1) - add whistle
●02:17:961 (5) - add whistle on the slider's repeat and end.
●02:19:348 (2) - add finish on the slider's repeat and end.
●02:22:816 (1) - same as here.00:59:579 (1) -
●02:23:510 (1) - add finish on the slider's head.
●02:33:915 (1) - same as here.00:59:579 (1) -
●02:49:522 (1) - add finish
clap sound ...
[Insane]
●00:15:013 (1) - remove whistle ? it follows nothing.
●00:37:556 (3) - more spacing here ?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/526725
●00:54:724 (3) - move to x:248 y:232 looks better imo
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/526728
●01:05:822 (3) - add finish on the slider's head.
●01:25:244 (1) - <3
●01:50:128 - add note ?
●02:05:475 (1) - try to put 3/4 slider ? :3
●02:35:128 (3) - i want jump here >_<
nice ! ♪
[Pokie]
(「・ω・)「 poke pokie
●00:10:331 (1) - add finish on the slider's head.
●00:40:851 (3) - add whistle on the slider's head.
●00:43:626 (1,3) - ^
●00:58:886 (4) - add new combo ?same as here.02:22:123 (1) -
●01:41:891 (3) - more spacing ? i want jump here ! same as here.01:47:441 (1) -
●01:56:978 (1,2) -try this ? following vocal is better to here.
●02:45:013 (5) - add whistle or finish on the slider's head.it needs strong sound imo :3
いいね!言うことないです>.<
good luck ~