Mystyk wrote:

Hi there! Very late mod, sorry, but here it is:

General:
Check AiMod, because it seems like the tags are different. - I forgot

Beginner:
01:06:981 (2,3) - maybe you could replace these with a long slider, just like 01:05:635 (1) - the beats in the background are basically the same at these places - a slider feels wrong to use here personally
01:13:169 (3,1) - I love this :3
01:27:160 (1,2) - these feel out of place, it is not comfortable to play, maybe try something like this? http://puu.sh/4Hz4I.jpg - as soon as I saw this, i thought of the same thing BUT, theres no room for the slider and removing the 2nd note feels weird to hear
01:25:008 (1) - I think the repeat should start 1/2 earlier - oh wow, fixed
01:33:348 (2,1) - well this is a little bit confusing, because you focused on the melody and not the big beat, so it feels a bit strange to hit the circle after the slider, so in my opinion something like this would fit better: - done
http://puu.sh/4Hy1d.jpg
01:38:864 (2,3) - the distance actually confused me, even though it is fine, I would rather use a slider instead of a hit circle (2) - http://puu.sh/4HylX.jpg - it also fits the melody better - I kinda followed this since this raises a overlap issue and made the last slider a circle instead
01:44:380 (3,4) - it feels like (3) doesn't fit the melody or the beats perfectly, so I think this would be more comfortable to play - http://puu.sh/4Hyxe.jpg - it fits the melody and the piano too (but you have to rearrange the spinner) - done, rearranged spinner to when piano starts

Standard:
00:08:595 (2) - it might flow better, if you rotated (2), e.g. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1018251 - yay for changing parts that made this obsolete, changed to something that works decently I think
00:29:582 (2,3) - this antijump is kind of confusing, so I would suggest you to put (3) further (just an example http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1019300) - also done because its just too good
01:11:017 (1,2) - please change the color here, at this point the background video is "disturbing" and it is hard to see the notes, and maybe don't stack them (?) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1018246 (the screenshot might not show it well that it is hard to see the notes) - unstacking would look weird but changed NC color
01:20:703 (1) - very small thing, but I think this would look nicer: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1019313 - done
01:26:353 (3,1,2) - I think the short reverse sliders are a bit hard (and kind of unnecessasry too), so you should try to make it a bit easier, for example like this: http://puu.sh/4I3fW.jpg - ehh I don't like the use of 1/2's in such a fast map, done something different instead
01:31:465 (1,2) - you might want to use a slider instead of 2 hit circles, since (2) is on a red tick (and there is a fast piano sound in the background too, so the slider ticks would fit too) - I just went with a 1/1 repeated slider. It can't be that hard
01:36:846 (2,3) - this was confusing, because between these notes, there was another melody, and you didn't place anything there, so it would be nice if you replaced (2) and (3) with a slider - replaced with a slider, now I gotta rearrange more notes
01:38:192 (1) - remove maybe? there is only a soft beat there, and you might make it easier if you remove it, and (2) will be emphasized better, since it's a bit beat, and the new combo will start there too - despite the difficulty, I actually think this slider emphasizes quite well and fits the song
01:50:299 (1,1) - it might flow better if you replaced these --> http://puu.sh/4I3GP.jpg (but of course make it nicer if you decide to do it) - done

Hyper:
00:28:909 (3,1) - I don't like the sudden spacing change, and I don't think there is anything THAT loud in the music, so what about something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1019532 - okay, done
01:12:496 (2,3) - stacking is confusing here (or the antijump), I woulld rather do it in a different way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1019510 - also done
01:19:627 (1) - this place feels a bit empty - 01:20:030 (2) - so why don't you try using 2 1/2 sliders? http://puu.sh/4I5vI.jpg - I prefer the current one as (1) is the note that goes well with the melody
01:26:622 (5,2) - this overlap is ugly imo, try playing those 4 reverse sliders a bit to the right: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1019521 - fixed

Another:
00:05:905 (4) - why don't you put this a bit left? to make the distance around 1,50, because you used high spacing here too 00:05:366 (1,2,3) - ehh, this is fine as it is
00:11:824 - add hit circle? since you left out a bigger beat in the music - woah, forgot
00:12:093 (2,3,4) - I think it would fit better to the melody if you removed (2) and put (3) and (4) 1/2 earlier then add a hit circle here 00:12:900 (4) - it would fit a lot better imo, it is weird that you put those long sliders right AFTER the melody starts - this part was changed due to suggestions from someone
00:20:299 (5) - remove hit circle, because you follow a pattern before, kind of hard to explain but "tu-tu-tu-tu tu tu-tu" and here you put one more object, and i think (4) is unnecessary, because the sounds are not so loud
00:22:452 (7) - same here ^ - done for both
00:47:609 (1,2) - I think you could make these nicer: http://puu.sh/4I6tl.jpg - fixed
01:07:788 (1,2) - replace these with hit circles? i think circles here fit better, they empshasize the individual beats better than sliders - this destroyed so much, thank god for an alternative
01:34:021 (2) - put a hit sound on the reverse maybe(?), it sounds a bit empty - okay
01:37:250 (5) - same here, but you even put a hitsound to the beginning, but no hitsound on the reverse, while you can hear the same sound at both places - I just spammed white ticks for hitsounds, done regardless
01:39:537 (3) - something like this for better flow? http://puu.sh/4I6LK.jpg - (3) will lead into (1) nicely like this - also done

Extra:
01:24:739 (7,1) - ugly overmap imo, we can hardly see the end of the slider, it would be better to replace (1), e.g. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1019646 - tried something else since that ruins the flow quite a bit
01:55:411 (2) - this should end 1/2 earlier and you should add a hit circle - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1019654 - done

That's it for this difficulty, there is not much to say, I can't play it, and it looks decent already.

I'm sorry if my mod is not useful, the mapset is already very nice, so you get a star from me. I also got to like the song, good job, and good luck! - It's fine, and also thanks

PS. Find a better BG :> - BG's are impossible to find