quantum-rose wrote:

hi nn
random mod
[General]
tag里添加Nanjō Yoshino(南条爱乃) 这个其实不想加 因为马甲是自己搜出来才快乐（

[包子's Easy]
00:20:074 (4) - 这个这个……一会一次折返一会两次一会三次很让人摸不着头脑啊，试试这样http://puu.sh/4WrAe.jpg
[Insane]
00:53:931 (7,8,9,10) - 请关爱强迫症人士 其实还好啊 我本来也不是想做正方形
00:42:360 (5,5) - 后面要不要跟着vocal放个圈圈什么的 以前本来是有圈的 后来我想了想给删了
02:38:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - 这两个五角星打着难受看着也不舒服啊暂时没啥梗..
03:01:645 (8,9) - 建议用soft音效目前觉得normal更好

256,192,154002,12,0,155717,0:0:0:0:
144,260,156145,5,0,0:0:0:0:
212,148,156573,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,64,157002,2,0,L|368:24,2,65
236,172,157859,5,0,0:0:0:0:
280,296,158287,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,356,158716,2,0,L|472:360,2,65
340,244,159573,5,0,0:0:0:0:
448,172,160002,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,64,160431,2,0,L|308:16,1,65
276,72,160860,2,0,L|204:60,1,65

p3n wrote:

[Ts8z's Easy]
00:50:074 (2,3) - NC on both to match what you do @01:55:217 (1,1,1) -
00:48:360 (1,2) - spacing should be ~1,00x (because there is no pattern to support such a small spacing here)
02:02:074 (1,2) - minor spacing issue, should be ~1,00x, again the pattern doesn't support the smaller spacing
02:03:788 (2,3) - NC on each note to match what you did before (01:55:217 (1,1,1) - )



[Yomi's Normal]
00:34:002 - consider adding a note here to reflect the flow of the song. NC should start on 00:34:645 (2) - , reference: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1103805
00:36:788 (1) - remove NC here and...
00:38:074 (4) - ...add NC here
01:01:860 (5,1) - misplaced combo, start the combo on (5) instead of (1): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1103818
01:08:717 (5,1) - misplaced combo, start the combo on (5) instead of (1): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1103814
01:15:574 (4,1) - ^same, start combo on (4) instead
02:15:574 (3,4,1) - ^same, start combo on (3) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1103823
02:22:431 (4,1) - ^same, start combo on (4) instead

02:34:002 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - beatplacement not matching the song/wrong timings. The notes are 1/2 late and don't match the song (here: baseline). You need to shorten the spinner by 1/2 and move 02:36:360 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 1/2 back on the timeline (back to the red tick). You will need to add repeats to the sliders. Adjust spacing afterwards. Also you could either add another repeat to 02:40:645 (3) - (=lazy and not good) or map this with two seperate short sliders (=better): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1103862

or use this:

256,192,154002,12,0,155717,0:0:0:0:
144,260,156145,5,0,0:0:0:0:
212,148,156573,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,64,157002,2,0,L|368:24,2,65
236,172,157859,5,0,0:0:0:0:
280,296,158287,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,356,158716,2,0,L|472:360,2,65
340,244,159573,5,0,0:0:0:0:
448,172,160002,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,64,160431,2,0,L|308:16,1,65
276,72,160860,2,0,L|204:60,1,65

03:08:717 (4,1) - start the NC on (4) instead



[Gu's Hard]
♥



[Insane]
Hitsounds for drum rolls/streams are almost inaudible. Example:
00:05:502 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - You could use your custom NC1 base hitsounds for these like you do in the part before the last break or look at Gu's hitsounding for reference.

Most triplets outside of the KIAIs are fine even if they are almost silent.
Some would profit from additional hitsounding:
02:01:217 (9,10,11,12,13,14) -

Most triplets/streams in the KIAIs have clearly audible drums in the song and should therefore have corresponding hitsounds in the map:
01:01:002 (7,8,9,10,11,1) -
01:07:859 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) -
01:15:145 (9,10,11,12,13,1) -
02:14:931 (8,9,10,11,12,1) -
02:21:788 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) -
02:28:645 (8,9,10) -
02:29:288 (12,13,1) -
03:07:645 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) -

Suggestion for beat placement:
01:18:788 (1) - long slider feels weird with sliding over the actual downbeat AND the beginning of the new line for the vocals. Maybe try to split this one up into triplet + 1/2 slider: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1103710 (also you could start the NC on the shorter slider to match the previously used combo settings for vocal follow)




I have to pop for the mistimed notes in 'Normal'.

I hope you can fix the hitsounds for triplets/streams in Insane. Otherwise a very nice mapset

p3n wrote:

[Yomi's Normal]
00:34:002 - consider adding a note here to reflect the flow of the song. NC should start on 00:34:645 (2) - , reference: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1103805
00:36:788 (1) - remove NC here and...
00:38:074 (4) - ...add NC here
01:01:860 (5,1) - misplaced combo, start the combo on (5) instead of (1): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1103818
01:08:717 (5,1) - misplaced combo, start the combo on (5) instead of (1): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1103814
01:15:574 (4,1) - ^same, start combo on (4) instead
02:15:574 (3,4,1) - ^same, start combo on (3) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1103823
02:22:431 (4,1) - ^same, start combo on (4) instead

02:34:002 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - beatplacement not matching the song/wrong timings. The notes are 1/2 late and don't match the song (here: baseline). You need to shorten the spinner by 1/2 and move 02:36:360 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 1/2 back on the timeline (back to the red tick). You will need to add repeats to the sliders. Adjust spacing afterwards. Also you could either add another repeat to 02:40:645 (3) - (=lazy and not good) or map this with two seperate short sliders (=better): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1103862

or use this:

256,192,154002,12,0,155717,0:0:0:0:
144,260,156145,5,0,0:0:0:0:
212,148,156573,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,64,157002,2,0,L|368:24,2,65
236,172,157859,5,0,0:0:0:0:
280,296,158287,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,356,158716,2,0,L|472:360,2,65
340,244,159573,5,0,0:0:0:0:
448,172,160002,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,64,160431,2,0,L|308:16,1,65
276,72,160860,2,0,L|204:60,1,65

03:08:717 (4,1) - start the NC on (4) instead

1. Why don't you to put " yuzu soft character song" to tag ? as you know this name.
2. The letterbox is not necessary during break time imo. so you should consider removing it.

1. This diff has the amount of new combo many inconsistencies. But i agree new combos from your #3 kiai time.03:02:074 -
   
   new combo

   00:13:645 (1) - remove
   00:09:788 (4) - add
   00:41:502 (1,2) - please check 00:48:360 (1,1) -
   00:57:788 (1) - remove
   00:58:645 (2) - add
   01:01:645 (1) - remove
   01:02:074 (2) - add
   01:05:074 (1) - remove
   01:05:502 (2) - add
   01:11:074 (1) - remove
   01:12:360 (2) - add
   01:14:502 (1,2) - ^ again
   02:12:360 (4) - add
   02:18:788 (1,2) -
   02:28:217 (1,2) -
   I believe that you can check the remain part by yourself.
2. 00:20:074 (4) - i don't agree this slider repeats to easy diff. feels too hard for beginners. so please remake this pattern like this
   
   You should be able to apply my suggestion for the rest of the all part.
3. 00:53:502 (1,1) - I think the notes appear too early considering the level of this difficulty
4. 01:26:288 (3) - please put a new combo as you can see this slider.
5. 01:38:502 (1,2,3,4,5) - contiguous 5 notes feels too hard. so consider remaking some sliders.
6. 02:07:217 (1,1) - same as above.
7. 02:32:074 (1) - add a finish to the tail of the slider here to follow the crash cymbal in the music.
8. 02:48:360 (1,2,3,4) - please put all notes to center >.>
9. 03:14:074 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this part is a little boring imo, so i hope you remove it and remake another pattern.
10. 03:26:931 (3) - add a finish for the climax.

1. 00:55:002 (1) - it doesn't follow the music well. you should make 1/1 slider for beginners. many players would be able to prevent failure.
   
2. 01:27:788 - Try comparing this to the other diffs so please set break time like this
   
3. 01:59:502 (2,3) - i guess this pattern could confuse many players. so you should consider putting more spacing to (3)
4. 02:08:717 (1) - Same.
5. 02:34:002 (1) - this spinner would not fit well with this kind of music. so try to unify it here. 01:20:717 (1) - it looks better to me.
   
6. 02:41:288 (4) - missing a new combo.
7. 02:46:645 (1) - add a finish same as insane diff. and don't forget to turn the volume up around 35 ~ 40%
8. 03:13:431 (1) - same as above.
   

1. this diff has a lot of unsnapped green sections *-* you must check it.
2. 00:00:360 - This green line is not necessary.
3. 02:20:074 - ,02:20:931 - add a finish same as your previous part.01:05:502 -
4. 02:37:645 (3,1) - hmm... i dont agree this part. this is not easy to understand. so you should consider putting more spacing or remaking another pattern. If you follow my suggestions, it prevents the player from misreading. I believe that you can check the remain part by yourself.

1. 00:01:538 (4) - ,00:03:252 (4) - and 00:04:967 - add a whistle here to follow the guitar sound in the music. it would fit well with this kind of music.If you add it, you should be able to apply my suggestion for the rest of the part.
2. 00:44:717 (1) - hmm.. remove a finish from the head of thw slider since it follows nothing. so it is better to add it to the tail of the slider. you can follow the crash cymbal.
3. 00:53:502 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - How about increasing the spacing gradually ? It is a minor adjustment to increase the tension leading into the chorus. 1.6 > 1.8 > 2.0 so will be more interesting
4. 02:07:217 (1,2,3,4) - Same again. so you should consider reduce the spacing this part.
5. 00:56:074 (3) - I'm worry about off-screen. so i wish you move this slider up.
   
   img

   
6. 01:34:645 - how about using lower volume ? since the melody is calmer than previous part.
7. 02:00:574 (6) - flow suggestion: feels better to put more jump to the music. i recommend you to put thus note on the head of the slider. 01:59:931 (4) - , like this
   
   img

   
8. 02:34:217 (6) - missing a finish to the tail ? o.o
9. 02:46:645 - a bit nazi mod, feels too quiet this sound. so you should consider turning the volume up around 35 ~ 40%
   nice insane diff :3

alacat wrote:

Hi~ Nymph!

azusa~~

[General]

1. Why don't you to put " yuzu soft character song" to tag ? as you know this name.added
2. The letterbox is not necessary during break time imo. so you should consider removing it.Id like to keep this since it doens't have a storyboard

[Easy]

1. This diff has the amount of new combo many inconsistencies. But i agree new combos from your #3 kiai time.03:02:074 -
   
   new combo

   00:13:645 (1) - remove
   00:09:788 (4) - add
   00:41:502 (1,2) - please check 00:48:360 (1,1) -
   00:57:788 (1) - remove
   00:58:645 (2) - add
   01:01:645 (1) - remove
   01:02:074 (2) - add
   01:05:074 (1) - remove
   01:05:502 (2) - add
   01:11:074 (1) - remove
   01:12:360 (2) - add
   01:14:502 (1,2) - ^ again
   02:12:360 (4) - add
   02:18:788 (1,2) -
   02:28:217 (1,2) -
   I believe that you can check the remain part by yourself.
2. 00:20:074 (4) - i don't agree this slider repeats to easy diff. feels too hard for beginners. so please remake this pattern like this
   
   You should be able to apply my suggestion for the rest of the all part.
3. 00:53:502 (1,1) - I think the notes appear too early considering the level of this difficulty
4. 01:26:288 (3) - please put a new combo as you can see this slider.
5. 01:38:502 (1,2,3,4,5) - contiguous 5 notes feels too hard. so consider remaking some sliders.
6. 02:07:217 (1,1) - same as above.
7. 02:32:074 (1) - add a finish to the tail of the slider here to follow the crash cymbal in the music.
8. 02:48:360 (1,2,3,4) - please put all notes to center >.>
9. 03:14:074 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this part is a little boring imo, so i hope you remove it and remake another pattern.
10. 03:26:931 (3) - add a finish for the climax.

all fixed on easy diff.
[Normal]

1. 00:55:002 (1) - it doesn't follow the music well. you should make 1/1 slider for beginners. many players would be able to prevent failure.
   
2. 01:27:788 - Try comparing this to the other diffs so please set break time like this
   
3. 01:59:502 (2,3) - i guess this pattern could confuse many players. so you should consider putting more spacing to (3)
4. 02:08:717 (1) - Same.
5. 02:34:002 (1) - this spinner would not fit well with this kind of music. so try to unify it here. 01:20:717 (1) - it looks better to me.
   
6. 02:41:288 (4) - missing a new combo.
7. 02:46:645 (1) - add a finish same as insane diff. and don't forget to turn the volume up around 35 ~ 40%
8. 03:13:431 (1) - same as above.
   

all fixed except the volumn of that finish sound
[Hard]

1. this diff has a lot of unsnapped green sections *-* you must check it.
2. 00:00:360 - This green line is not necessary.
3. 02:20:074 - ,02:20:931 - add a finish same as your previous part.01:05:502 -
4. 02:37:645 (3,1) - hmm... i dont agree this part. this is not easy to understand. so you should consider putting more spacing or remaking another pattern. If you follow my suggestions, it prevents the player from misreading. I believe that you can check the remain part by yourself.

all fixed, but did the green sections really need checking? since they didn't hurt the diff at all o.o
[Insane]

1. 00:01:538 (4) - ,00:03:252 (4) - and 00:04:967 - add a whistle here to follow the guitar sound in the music. it would fit well with this kind of music.If you add it, you should be able to apply my suggestion for the rest of the part.
2. 00:44:717 (1) - hmm.. remove a finish from the head of thw slider since it follows nothing. so it is better to add it to the tail of the slider. you can follow the crash cymbal.
3. 00:53:502 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - How about increasing the spacing gradually ? It is a minor adjustment to increase the tension leading into the chorus. 1.6 > 1.8 > 2.0 so will be more interesting I did want to do what you said when I map it months ago, but finally I find the screen is not bit enough and I kinda enjoy the 2.00 spacing jump and don't want to reduce it
4. 02:07:217 (1,2,3,4) - Same again. so you should consider reduce the spacing this part.same as before
5. 00:56:074 (3) - I'm worry about off-screen. so i wish you move this slider up.
   
   img

   
6. 01:34:645 - how about using lower volume ? since the melody is calmer than previous part.
7. 02:00:574 (6) - flow suggestion: feels better to put more jump to the music. i recommend you to put thus note on the head of the slider. 01:59:931 (4) - , like this
   
   img

   
8. 02:34:217 (6) - missing a finish to the tail ? o.o
9. 02:46:645 - a bit nazi mod, feels too quiet this sound. so you should consider turning the volume up around 35 ~ 40% I think the current is fine
   nice insane diff :3

others all fixed.
hmm that's all.to tell the truth, the easy diff does need more works especially on difficulty stuff. I can recheck since other diffs are really nice. Let me know when you think you're ready.

wcx19911123 wrote:

[Ts8zs' Easy]
02:49:645 - 都没叠好，这里是故意的么0.0？改了

[Yomi's Normal]
00:55:002 (1) - this rhythm is really odd, why not to use a single slider without repeating?
02:08:717 (1) - ^ 1/1 slider+ circle is also a way
02:17:288 (4) - ^ 最後一個感覺還行 前兩個改了

[Insane]
01:26:288 (1,2,3) - 感觉可以更跳点0.0弄遠了點

edit: omg alacat you ninja'd me

1. 00:56:074 (1) - missing a new combo here, since this note follows a spinner.

1. 00:55:217 (1) - Same