-Bakari- wrote:
Sorry about the delay.
[General][Easy]
- Disable the widescreen support. It s for widescreen storyboards ONLY. There's no need to keep it if you have a video. fixed
- Disable letterboxes during breaks. They conflict with the video and it looks a bit strange. i didn't noticed this...
[Normal]
- 00:20:612 (1,1) - don't. Try to play this in osu!mania and you get an 1/4 pattern which is surely unplayable for the easiest diff. Remove the circle and start the spinner on 00:20:612 -
- 00:34:729 (1,2,3,3,4) - I'd consider improving your flow a bit. Sometimes it seems a little strange to me. Agree? Interested? See the box below!
uguuuu r right,fixedSometimes it's kinda hard to understand your flow. Here're some examples. You'll find some screenshots with a few pictures and I'll try to explain you why your flow bugs me!
Blue is how the flow actually goes, red is broken flow.
See? The cursor's moves are unnatural here, it may confuse some players.
Broken flow is something that makes players' moves unnatural and strange. It's not an unrankable thing, but it really feels kinda wrong to me. Anyway, just think about it. There's no need to re-arange/change anything if you don't want to!- 01:02:964 (1) - don't break your consistent rhythm like this. :< It will confuse and bug beginners, try to replace it with an 1/1 slider + repeat. So, your pattern will look like this. It still fits and it makes your rhythm more consistent. hmm... that'll cause remapping... i just want to keep the same part
Basically, it's a good diff. Everything is well-mapped and I quite like it. Your rhythm is a bit hard, but OD1 makes it playable. Everything is fine.[Hard]
- 00:04:474 (4,1,2,3) - see my suggestion about the flow on the [Easy] diff. Same thing happens here. Flow should be really simple on the easiier diffs! fixed
- 00:20:612 (1,1) - same as easy. Unplayaable i some special modes, so I'd recommend you to remove the circle and start the spinner on 00:20:612 - fixed
- 00:46:376 (2,3) - nazi - the blanket here isn't perfect. You can improve it if you feel like doing it. C'mon, show us what you can, make this pattern even better! example fixed
- 01:01:729 (5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - well, your rhythm here goes tricky. I'd consider reducing your OD by 1 tick. It'll help players and it'll make his part much more playable! i reserve it , will watch other's view after.
- 01:09:847 - don't you feel like placing a circle here? It'll fit with vocals and it sounds really fitting here, try it! ^
Good job![Insane]
- 00:03:646 (4,5) - sometimes your jumps make me sad. Sometimes they are too hard and don't really fit at all. Try to consider re-arraging your jumps. Some of them are totally off and it's the only thing that really NEEDS to be changed here. Everything else seems to be alright. :< maybe u r right, i'll consider this
- 00:20:612 (1,1) - same as for the other diffs. It doesn't really fits because the spinner follows nothing in music. i think this is just fine
I can't tell that the jumps are okay, so I don't really like this diff. Anything else seems to be fine, but you should really work on those jumps. :<You should work on jumps in the harder diffs, everything else is fine.
- 00:01:784 (3,4) - x2.5 jump here? Rally? C'mon, this is a soft part, there shouldn't be any hard jumps! Make it a little bit easier, this is the CALM part of the song! Seriously, it's the same as [Hard], you should make your jumps more fitting! i don't want to change this pattern
- 00:35:259 (2) - nazi - this sllider looks a bit strange here, try to move it a bit down to make it aligned with (1). So, you'll get something like this I reserve it
Same about hte jumps. They ruin the fun and it makes me sad. :<
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Best of luck!
thx for modding!